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Jessie J - Flashlight

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Topic Starter
ihewmatt
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 16, 2015 at 10:38:47 PM

Artist: Jessie J
Title: Flashlight
Source: Pitch Perfect 2
Tags: CutVersion MaterialMusic CrimmiSkye
BPM: 148
Filesize: 3550kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (0.87 stars, 41 notes)
  2. Crimmi's Flashlight (3.21 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Hard (2.72 stars, 188 notes)
  4. Normal (1.69 stars, 95 notes)
Download: Jessie J - Flashlight
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Crimmi's Flashlight - 100%
Hitsounds - 100%
Snaggletooth
Remove "(From Pitch Perfect 2)" and "(Cut Version)" from the title.

Remove MaterialMusic from source and add Pitch Perfect 2 as Source.
Add Cut version and Material Music to tags

For Easy, Normal and usually Hard difficulties: Distance Snap is a must. Lower your
hitsound-volume down to 40 if not 30% considering that this is a rather calm song.

Good luck anyways with this map.

No Kudosu
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

Snaggletooth wrote:

Remove "(From Pitch Perfect 2)" and "(Cut Version)" from the title.

Remove MaterialMusic from source and add Pitch Perfect 2 as Source.
Add Cut version and Material Music to tags

For Easy, Normal and usually Hard difficulties: Distance Snap is a must. Lower your
hitsound-volume down to 40 if not 30% considering that this is a rather calm song.

Good luck anyways with this map.

No Kudosu
KK. Thanks
Frey
IRC MOD

IRC MOD
2015-06-05 00:35 ihewmatt: Oh.. Frey it's Done :D
2015-06-05 00:35 Frey: wat.. too quick
2015-06-05 00:36 Frey: alright, I will mod it then
2015-06-05 00:36 ihewmatt: lol. thanks
2015-06-05 00:44 Frey: can I do an IRC mod?
2015-06-05 00:44 ihewmatt: Okay
2015-06-05 00:45 Frey: firstly, unify the title
2015-06-05 00:45 Frey: title of Hard is wrong
2015-06-05 00:46 ihewmatt: oh. i forgot to change it =.=
2015-06-05 00:47 Frey: also the offset
2015-06-05 00:47 ihewmatt: ok
2015-06-05 00:48 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight [Easy]]
2015-06-05 00:49 Frey: HP3 AR3 OD3
2015-06-05 00:50 ihewmatt: done
2015-06-05 00:52 Frey: I recommend you to use same DS in EASY
2015-06-05 00:53 ihewmatt: 1/4?
2015-06-05 00:53 Frey: mapping an EZ with Distance Snap on
2015-06-05 00:55 Frey: ds should be equal
2015-06-05 00:55 ihewmatt: Ok
2015-06-05 00:57 Frey: better not use different slider velocity in an Easy
2015-06-05 00:59 Frey: ;w;
2015-06-05 00:59 Frey: I think
2015-06-05 01:00 Frey: you should make a fading end for the mp3
2015-06-05 01:00 ihewmatt: Okay. :)
2015-06-05 01:00 ihewmatt: idk how :[
2015-06-05 01:00 Frey: nvm
2015-06-05 01:01 ihewmatt: ok
2015-06-05 01:01 Frey: it's rankable
2015-06-05 01:01 ihewmatt: Okay, ill just find way
2015-06-05 01:02 Frey: to be honest, you should recheck your Easy
2015-06-05 01:02 Frey: I don't it's qualified
2015-06-05 01:02 ihewmatt: Ok.
2015-06-05 01:04 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711922 Jessie J - Flashlight [Normal]]
2015-06-05 01:05 Frey: 00:19:651 (4) - move to x332 y88 to unify ds
2015-06-05 01:06 Frey: here is an unrankable issue
2015-06-05 01:07 Frey: soft-sliderslide2 and soft-sliderslide3 are unused
2015-06-05 01:07 Frey: delete them if you don't use them
2015-06-05 01:07 ihewmatt: yeah, that was im supposed to do :)
2015-06-05 01:08 Frey: 00:28:570 (4) - x200 y320 looks better
2015-06-05 01:10 Frey: 00:59:178 (1) - x324 y312
2015-06-05 01:10 Frey: 00:42:962 (1) - x332 y316
2015-06-05 01:13 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712043 Jessie J - Flashlight (From Pitch Perfect 2) [Cut Version] [Hard]]
2015-06-05 01:14 Frey: 00:42:151 (8,1) - stack is not good
2015-06-05 01:15 Frey: stack it then move 00:43:165 (2) to x220 y288
2015-06-05 01:17 Frey: 01:12:759 (1) - you can map something instead of a spinner
2015-06-05 01:17 ihewmatt: Okay.
2015-06-05 01:18 Frey: it's a Hard diff, you can map it free
2015-06-05 01:21 Frey: kay, I think I should stop here
2015-06-05 01:21 Frey: sorry for short mod
2015-06-05 01:22 ihewmatt: It's alright, but it helps
2015-06-05 01:22 Frey: >.< try and get more mods
2015-06-05 01:22 Frey: Good luck
2015-06-05 01:22 ihewmatt: Yup2
2015-06-05 01:22 ihewmatt: TY
2015-06-05 01:22 Frey: np
2015-06-05 01:25 Frey: as always, I advise you to spend time on looking at ranked maps in edit
2015-06-05 01:25 Frey: It would help you with your mapping skills
2015-06-05 01:26 ihewmatt: i did XP
2015-06-05 01:26 Frey: sometime you can imitate
2015-06-05 01:29 ihewmatt: done editing, phew. 'mind to cheack it again?
2015-06-05 01:30 Frey: sure
2015-06-05 01:30 ihewmatt: :)
2015-06-05 01:32 Frey: 00:49:448 remove whistle?
2015-06-05 01:33 Frey: 00:49:448 - remove whistle?
2015-06-05 01:33 ihewmatt: kk
2015-06-05 01:34 Frey: oops
2015-06-05 01:34 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711922 Jessie J - Flashlight [Normal]]
2015-06-05 01:34 Frey: didn't remind you
2015-06-05 01:35 ihewmatt: what. :#
2015-06-05 01:35 Frey: 01:02:219 (2) - remove finish? I don't hear drum sound in the music
2015-06-05 01:35 Frey: it is the same with Hard
2015-06-05 01:36 ihewmatt: :3 k
2015-06-05 01:36 Frey: But in Easy, you could stay it
2015-06-05 01:37 Frey: I mean 00:49:448
2015-06-05 01:37 ihewmatt: in Normal?
2015-06-05 01:37 Frey: yes, change it in Normal and Hard
2015-06-05 01:38 Frey: /np
2015-06-05 01:38 ihewmatt: the whistle?
2015-06-05 01:39 Frey: yes
2015-06-05 01:39 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight [Easy]]
2015-06-05 01:39 Frey: 01:02:219 (1) - remove whistle (sliderslide)
2015-06-05 01:40 ihewmatt: i think i should remove all whistles
2015-06-05 01:41 Frey: no need
2015-06-05 01:41 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712043 Jessie J - Flashlight [Hard]]
2015-06-05 01:41 Frey: 01:02:421 - remove whistle then use drum-hitfinish
2015-06-05 01:43 Frey: remaining things are fine

:P GOOD LUCK
PurpleHawk
IRC Mod
19:54 ihewmatt: Hawk. Can u mod my bm?
19:58 PurpleHawk: Sure :)
19:58 *ihewmatt is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight]
19:58 ihewmatt: ty
20:01 PurpleHawk: Can I just mod it over chat?
20:01 ihewmatt: kk
20:02 PurpleHawk: Try not to hide notes under sliders like at
20:02 PurpleHawk: 00:24:921
20:02 PurpleHawk: I'm starting with Easy btw :P
20:03 ihewmatt: ik lol
20:03 PurpleHawk: and I wouldn't use as many 1/2 notes in an Easy, 00:24:921(2,3,4,5,1,2) is a bit too challenging for a beginner
20:04 ihewmatt: :3 :#
20:04 PurpleHawk: I think you're not allowed/supposed to have slider velocity changes in Easy difficulty? If you are allowed then I would lower 2.0x to 1.5x, it's a bit quick and the difference between 1x and 2x is quite large
20:05 PurpleHawk: 00:58:975(1,2) - bad overlap
20:06 PurpleHawk: 01:05:867 (1,2) - don't stack notes in Easy/Normal difficulty
20:07 PurpleHawk: 01:15:192 (1) - too short spinner for an Easy, I would delete it and don't have a spinner for Easy
20:07 PurpleHawk: Just ask if you have any questions btw :)
20:08 ihewmatt: kk
20:08 PurpleHawk: Normal:
20:08 PurpleHawk: 00:24:516 (1) - Same as in Easy, don't hide notes under sliders
20:09 PurpleHawk: 00:25:732 (3,4,5) - a tripplet like this is too hard for a Normal, try to replace it with a repeat slider
20:10 PurpleHawk: Same things regarding the SV aswell
20:10 PurpleHawk: 1.5x instead of 2x
20:11 PurpleHawk: Actually, I would maybe (if you want to do the work) increase the base SV a bit and maybe have 1.25x instead
20:11 PurpleHawk: and then the slow SV in the beginning is a bit quicker, it's maybe a bit too slow atm? I dunno, your choice
20:12 PurpleHawk: 00:42:962 (1,2,3,4) - I would change these sliders a bit, try to start (1) at the white tick that (1) currently ends on and then make it end where (2) starts now
20:13 PurpleHawk: then change (2) to a repeat slider that starts at where (2) ends now
20:13 PurpleHawk: and then the new (2) repeatslider should end where (3) ends
20:13 PurpleHawk: and then delete 3 of course
20:15 PurpleHawk: like so: http://gyazo.com/f95d343c0b023a32e5ae62158bf9c3e1
20:16 PurpleHawk: What instrument are you mapping in this song?
20:16 PurpleHawk: 01:15:192 - still too short for a Normal, it'll probably be fine in a Hard/Insane though
20:17 ihewmatt: Ok :0
20:17 PurpleHawk: but what instrument are you mapping? That's an important question :)
20:18 ihewmatt: lol idu
20:18 PurpleHawk: Try listening for the drums and only place notes when the drums hit
20:18 PurpleHawk: mapping to nothing/vocals is usually not a great idea :/
20:19 ihewmatt: yh. i did that.
20:26 PurpleHawk: Eh, this song is quite difficult to map :/ There's not really a good rhythm from the drums, it's so slow :P
20:26 PurpleHawk: but I made a difficulty called Rhythm to show the drums' rhythm during Kiaitime
20:27 PurpleHawk: I'll post it on the thread together with this chat :)
20:27 ihewmatt: Okay TY Hawk
20:27 PurpleHawk: The most important thing in my opinion is the rhythm and that needs to be good foundation, maybe mapping the vocals is the best option for this slow song, but generally I would recommend to try to map the drums if they are there
20:28 PurpleHawk: np :)

Rhythm example
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Jessie J - Flashlight (From Pitch Perfect 2).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39110
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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[Metadata]
Title:Flashlight
TitleUnicode:Flashlight
Artist:Jessie J
ArtistUnicode:Jessie J
Creator:ihewmatt
Version:Rhythm
Source:Pitch Perfect 2
Tags:Cut Version MaterialMusic
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:319889

[Difficulty]
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Kuki
IRC mod, helped with aesthetics, rhythm, and tips to fix mp3.

SPOILER
2015-06-05 17:03 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712043 Jessie J - Flashlight [Hard]]
2015-06-05 17:04 Kuki: 00:25:499 (5) - General rule is to never start sliders on blue ticks
2015-06-05 17:04 Kuki: nor streams
2015-06-05 17:05 Kuki: so make sure all of your sliders are on either white ticks (reccomended beats) or red ticks (reccomended for vocals)
2015-06-05 17:06 Kuki: they generally sound much better
2015-06-05 17:11 Kuki: even though they sound right on blue ticks
2015-06-05 17:11 Kuki: they are always better on reds or whites.
2015-06-05 17:12 Kuki: also the mp3 ends really suddenly
2015-06-05 17:12 Kuki: I suggest fading it out
2015-06-05 17:12 ihewmatt: idk how to fade it out :[
2015-06-05 17:12 Kuki: download audacity
2015-06-05 17:12 Kuki: and select the part you want to fade out
2015-06-05 17:12 ihewmatt: okay
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: and go into filters/effects > fade out
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: then save
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711922 Jessie J - Flashlight [Normal]]
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: 00:17:999 (2,3) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:13 ihewmatt: kk
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: 00:23:270 (5,1) - fix overlap
2015-06-05 17:13 Kuki: 00:32:999 (1,2) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:14 Kuki: 00:34:621 (3,4) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:14 Kuki: 00:36:243 (1,2) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:14 Kuki: 00:37:864 (3,4) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:15 Kuki: 00:44:756 (4) - ctrl + g, go into 1/8, make the slider repeat on a yellow tick, and fix blanket.
2015-06-05 17:15 Kuki: 00:46:783 (2,3,4) - fix symmetry and blanket
2015-06-05 17:16 Kuki: 00:49:418 (1) - blue tick slider, fix
2015-06-05 17:16 Kuki: 00:55:094 (3) - blue slider
2015-06-05 17:16 Kuki: 00:55:195 (3,1,3,4,1,3,4,3,5,6,7,1,1,1) - blue tick sliders, fix
2015-06-05 17:17 Kuki: 00:54:891 (2,3) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:17 Kuki: 01:00:364 (3,4) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:17 Kuki: 01:06:851 (1,2) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:17 Kuki: 01:12:324 (4,1,2) - fix blanket
2015-06-05 17:18 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight [Easy]]
2015-06-05 17:18 Kuki: 00:26:918 (1,2,3) - symmetry
2015-06-05 17:19 Kuki: 00:36:648 (4) - fix blanketr
2015-06-05 17:19 Kuki: 01:13:135 (6,1) - fix overlap
sodarose
From PM

[Hard]
00:12:932 (1) - Delete
00:13:540 (3,4) - Blanket
00:16:783 (1,2,3) - ^
00:23:270 (1) - To end in 00:24:080
00:25:094 (3,4,5) - Distance
00:28:135 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Your Typesetting is so Messy 00:34:621 (1,2,3,4,5,7) -
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - Try more Combination Instead of Straight line

Good luck :)
CrystilonZ
Hello
Quick mod here

[Hard]
00:44:756 (5,6) - this is not 1/3; it's 3/4

[Normal]
00:53:270 (1) - creative, but unrankable

[Easy]
00:52:459 (1) - as same as normal


  • Quick Tips
  1. You'd better learn to blanket properly. It should be 'perfectly' blanketed, or as perfect as possible.
  2. Try to check weird overlapping. Open the view tab and uncheck "Hit animations" to see circles fade away slowly.
  3. All notes should be fairly perceivable. 00:30:162 (1,2,3) - in hard isn't very appreciable
  4. If it's close to each other enough, you may try stacking them, like 00:36:243 (5,7) - in hard
  5. Don't spam reverse arrows, especially in lower diffs, except it's 1/4 reverse. Each slider shouldn't have more that 2 reverse arrows, but 1 reverse arrow or none is preferred.
  6. You've used too much 1/2 in normal
  7. If you cut or edit the audio yourself, try to end by fading the audio away, cutting it like in this beatmap isn't very nice.
  8. In this case, you might want to add a silent sliderslide sound to the drum set's sound too.
Good luck ! :)
Arooma
Hello


Hard


  1. This map is hard to reading, Hope can fix
  2. 00:00:567 (2)
  3. 00:02:594 (5)
  4. 00:07:053 (2)
  5. 00:07:053 (2,3) - (2) Slider shape fix and Blanket
  6. 00:08:675 (5)
  7. 00:12:729 - Add circle
  8. 00:13:540 (3,4)
    Recommend
    http://puu.sh/ienB1/2afb44353c.jpg
  9. 00:15:162 (2,3) - ^
  10. 00:16:783 (1,2) - ^
  11. 00:18:405 (4,5) - ^
  12. 00:20:026 (1,2) - ^
  13. 00:21:648 (4,5) - ^
  14. 00:23:270 (1) - ^
  15. 00:28:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same distance
  16. 00:29:553 (7,8,9,1) - ^
  17. 00:30:162 (1,2)
  18. 00:32:797 (6,7,8)
  19. 00:43:337 (3)
  20. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - This must be fix. Beat and flow
  21. 01:07:053 (2)
    Propose
    http://puu.sh/ienYR/184dbdd640.jpg


Normal



  1. 00:15:162 (4)
    Propose
    http://puu.sh/ieo88/de6e4ab25c.jpg
  2. 00:17:594 (1) - This circle is different from a distance
  3. 00:38:675 (2) - ^
  4. 00:39:891 (6) - ^
  5. 00:44:756 (3) - ^
  6. 01:03:405 (1) - ^


Easy



  1. 00:23:675 (3) - This circle is different from a distance
  2. 00:24:891 (4) - ^
  3. 00:53:270 (1) - ^

That's it :)
My mod is hoping you can help
Good luck~
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

Arooma wrote:

Hello


Hard


  1. This map is hard to reading, Hope can fix
  2. 00:00:567 (2)
  3. 00:02:594 (5)
  4. 00:07:053 (2)
  5. 00:07:053 (2,3) - (2) Slider shape fix and Blanket
  6. 00:08:675 (5)
  7. 00:12:729 - Add circle
  8. 00:13:540 (3,4)
    Recommend
    http://puu.sh/ienB1/2afb44353c.jpg
  9. 00:15:162 (2,3) - ^
  10. 00:16:783 (1,2) - ^
  11. 00:18:405 (4,5) - ^
  12. 00:20:026 (1,2) - ^
  13. 00:21:648 (4,5) - ^
  14. 00:23:270 (1) - ^
  15. 00:28:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same distance
  16. 00:29:553 (7,8,9,1) - ^
  17. 00:30:162 (1,2)
  18. 00:32:797 (6,7,8)
  19. 00:43:337 (3)
  20. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - This must be fix. Beat and flow
  21. 01:07:053 (2)
    Propose
    http://puu.sh/ienYR/184dbdd640.jpg


Normal



  1. 00:15:162 (4)
    Propose
    http://puu.sh/ieo88/de6e4ab25c.jpg
  2. 00:17:594 (1) - This circle is different from a distance
  3. 00:38:675 (2) - ^
  4. 00:39:891 (6) - ^
  5. 00:44:756 (3) - ^
  6. 01:03:405 (1) - ^


Easy



  1. 00:23:675 (3) - This circle is different from a distance
  2. 00:24:891 (4) - ^
  3. 00:53:270 (1) - ^

That's it :)
My mod is hoping you can help
Good luck~
Thank You! :)
Crimmi
Umm, you have my name in the source, remove them. and add them to the tags in each difficulty.
No kd.
Topic Starter
ihewmatt
√Chk

Sorry. I accidentally tap *Give Kudosu :/. It was for Sky. :/ :|
Hiyori
Hey I'm here as requested :)

GENERAL:
Start Kai at - 00:39:080 end at - 01:05:432

===============================================

EASY:
00:01:783 (3,1) - awkward overlap. Fix this.
00:28:134 - add circle here.
00:29:756 (1,3) - this looks confusing for new players. try not to overlap
00:38:270 (7,2) - ^ same as above
00:45:567 (4) - maybe make this into a curve?
00:51:243 - this is a good downbeat but it is unmapped
00:52:864 - same here, really good downbeat but yet unmapped
as of above try doing this:

00:55:702 (2,2) - awkward overlap. try to fix
01:05:837 (1,2,2) - ^^ same as above

================================================

NORMAL:
00:13:134 (1) - awkward hitsound. I don't think this suits well with the song.
00:24:486 (4) - end tail here - 00:24:891
00:25:702 (1) - move to - 00:25:297
00:25:905 (2) - move to - 00:25:702
00:33:405 (2,3,4) - sudden change of timing. New players might find this hard to read.
00:38:878 (3) - ^ same as above
01:00:770 (5) - ^ same
01:07:459 (1,2,3) - new players wont be able to read this. try to change to a simple slider.

Hope this simple mod helps. Gioodluck with ur map :)
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

supremella wrote:

Hey I'm here as requested :)

GENERAL:
Start Kai at - 00:39:080 end at - 01:05:432

===============================================

EASY:
00:01:783 (3,1) - awkward overlap. Fix this.
00:28:134 - add circle here.
00:29:756 (1,3) - this looks confusing for new players. try not to overlap
00:38:270 (7,2) - ^ same as above
00:45:567 (4) - maybe make this into a curve?
00:51:243 - this is a good downbeat but it is unmapped
00:52:864 - same here, really good downbeat but yet unmapped
as of above try doing this:

00:55:702 (2,2) - awkward overlap. try to fix
01:05:837 (1,2,2) - ^^ same as above

================================================

NORMAL:
00:13:134 (1) - awkward hitsound. I don't think this suits well with the song.
00:24:486 (4) - end tail here - 00:24:891
00:25:702 (1) - move to - 00:25:297
00:25:905 (2) - move to - 00:25:702
00:33:405 (2,3,4) - sudden change of timing. New players might find this hard to read.
00:38:878 (3) - ^ same as above
01:00:770 (5) - ^ same
01:07:459 (1,2,3) - new players wont be able to read this. try to change to a simple slider.

Hope this simple mod helps. Gioodluck with ur map :)
TY
Sky Trias
IRC Mod
12:02 ihewmatt: Hi Sky Trias, can u GD/MOD my bm?
12:02 Sky Trias: hi
12:02 Sky Trias: what map ? :)
12:02 *ihewmatt is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713111 Jessie J - Flashlight]
12:02 ihewmatt: :)
12:04 Sky Trias: let's see
12:05 *Sky Trias is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight [Easy]]
12:05 Sky Trias: i do quickly okie
12:05 Sky Trias: irc is ok?
12:07 Sky Trias: call me when you ready.
12:14 Sky Trias: call me when you ready.
12:21 ihewmatt: im ready :D
12:23 Sky Trias: okie
12:24 ihewmatt: Ty
12:24 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 -
12:24 Sky Trias: unused inherit green.. better remove
12:25 Sky Trias: uncheck widescreen support & letterbox during break.
12:26 Sky Trias: no SB , no break..
12:26 Sky Trias: Audio Lead-In +2000 ms.
12:27 Sky Trias: no need double tag 'Crimmi' better to remove.
12:28 Sky Trias: 00:16:783 (5,1) - swap new combo.
12:28 ihewmatt: Where can find Audio Lead-in?
12:28 Sky Trias: hey? still there? gonna leave then..
12:28 Sky Trias: ahh ..
12:29 Sky Trias: file-open .osu in notepad.
12:29 ihewmatt: Im here :#
12:29 Sky Trias: well then..
12:29 Sky Trias: you get the Audio Lead-In ?
12:29 ihewmatt: Yup, :)
12:29 Sky Trias: there's write '0' change to '2000'
12:30 Sky Trias: oke.. let's continue the mod. better you answer my mod.
12:30 ihewmatt: done
12:31 Sky Trias: okie.
12:31 ihewmatt: OkI
12:31 Sky Trias: 00:26:107 (7,1) - swap new combo.
12:32 Sky Trias: 00:29:756 (5) - new combo here.
12:32 Sky Trias: 00:31:378 (3) - better change to slider instead. till 00:31:783 -
12:33 ihewmatt: KK
12:33 Sky Trias: 00:39:080 - hmm.. check the preview point there.
12:34 Sky Trias: 00:50:432 (5) - new combo.
12:35 ihewmatt: k
12:35 Sky Trias: 00:17:189 (2,3) - try blanket there.
12:36 Sky Trias: 00:39:486 (1) - better 192|236
12:37 Sky Trias: then check DS over here : 00:39:891 (2,3) -
12:38 ihewmatt: done
12:39 Sky Trias: a sec
12:39 ihewmatt: ``k
12:40 Sky Trias: 00:43:135 (6) - [http://puu.sh/ifqLA/3493551004.jpg better than before] also move 00:43:945 (1) - 408|192 and 00:44:351 (2) - 368|92
12:40 Sky Trias: that's better than before.
12:42 Sky Trias: 00:56:918 (3,1) - swap NC
12:42 ihewmatt: Ok
12:42 Sky Trias: you done?
12:42 Sky Trias: ok
12:42 Sky Trias: 00:59:351 (2,3) - can blanket over here.
12:42 ihewmatt: Yup :)
12:43 Sky Trias: 00:59:756 (3) - move to 136|200
12:43 Sky Trias: 01:00:972 (4) - try to stack with 00:59:351 (2) -
12:44 Sky Trias: 01:01:378 (5) - 316|84
12:44 Sky Trias: 01:01:378 (5,1) - try blanket this
12:45 Sky Trias: um .. combo very random over here.
12:45 Sky Trias: let me to fix this.
12:45 Sky Trias: 01:00:972 (5) - combo
12:45 Sky Trias: 01:02:594 (1) - remove combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:05:837 (5) - combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:06:648 (1) - remove combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:09:891 (5) - combo
12:46 Sky Trias: done.
12:46 Sky Trias: call me when you done with all of that
12:46 ihewmatt: kk.
12:48 ihewmatt: Done
12:53 Sky Trias: 00:01:783 (3,4) - you can blanket over here
12:53 Sky Trias: let me make better slider
12:53 Sky Trias: a sec
12:54 Sky Trias: [http://puu.sh/ifror/ea1599bcb6.jpg here]
12:55 Sky Trias: 00:07:864 (2) - better move to 176|300
12:55 ihewmatt: k
12:56 Sky Trias: 00:09:486 (4) - i don't like this placement.
12:56 Sky Trias: 00:09:486 (4) - why not place on 456|232?
12:57 Sky Trias: it's better than before
12:57 ihewmatt: How 'bout this? http://puu.sh/ifrw6/89649b790b.jpg
12:57 Sky Trias: well then it's your choice~ ^^
12:58 Sky Trias: 00:23:270 (2,3) - can blanket this.
12:58 ihewmatt: What's the best placement for 00:09:486 (4) -
12:58 ihewmatt: Oh.. sorry,
12:58 Sky Trias: okie then~
12:59 Sky Trias: 00:24:891 (4,5,6,7) -
12:59 Sky Trias: hmm..
13:00 Sky Trias: [http://puu.sh/ifrEs/31310b8205.jpg maybe?]
13:01 Sky Trias: 00:34:621 (2,3) - blanket maybe?
13:01 Sky Trias: idk.
13:01 Sky Trias: wkwk iya no .. nanti coba diatur deh
13:01 Sky Trias: ahh sorry wrong tab
13:01 ihewmatt: LOL ok,
13:09 ihewmatt: so..
15:33 Sky Trias: a
15:33 Sky Trias: test
15:34 ihewmatt: ohh.. okay
15:34 Sky Trias: should i continue?
15:34 Sky Trias: i'm so sorry.. trouble in home.
15:34 ihewmatt: sure. it's okay
15:34 ihewmatt: :)
15:35 Sky Trias: what the last?
15:36 ihewmatt: i think . this 00:02:999 (4,1) - Blanket
15:36 Sky Trias: i need more time , it's ok?
15:36 ihewmatt: Okay.. :)
15:36 Sky Trias: well then
15:37 Sky Trias: gonna afk for a while. so sorry :(
15:37 ihewmatt: t's okay, take care
16:12 Sky Trias: ba k
16:12 Sky Trias: back*
16:12 Sky Trias: sorry ..
16:13 ihewmatt: `it's okay, as i said before. :)
16:13 Sky Trias: okie then~ :)
16:14 Sky Trias: 00:17:189 (1,2) - blanket?
16:14 Sky Trias: also 00:17:594 (2) - ctrl+G
16:16 Sky Trias: is this song cut version?
16:16 ihewmatt: yup
16:17 Sky Trias: add tag then :)
16:17 Sky Trias: cut version / short version is okay
16:17 Sky Trias: ahh already there :)
16:17 ihewmatt: yup. done already
16:17 Sky Trias: okie~
16:17 ihewmatt: haha yh
16:18 Sky Trias: 00:54:080 (2) - 84|140 better i think
16:19 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (2) - same slider like 01:07:053 (4) - will better i think
16:19 Sky Trias: 00:01:378 (2) - better not blanket with 00:00:162 (1) -
16:20 Sky Trias: but that
16:20 Sky Trias: but that's my advice , you can keep or reject :)
16:21 Sky Trias: or if you accept that , better to move 180|356
16:21 ihewmatt: which should i move
16:22 Sky Trias: i give you the code .. can check that
16:22 ihewmatt: ok
16:23 Sky Trias: done?
16:26 ihewmatt: wait :)
16:27 ihewmatt: done
16:31 Sky Trias: 00:13:945 (2) - looks like no blanket..
16:31 Sky Trias: fix that?
16:34 ihewmatt: done
16:34 Sky Trias: 00:17:594 (2) - are you ctrl+g this?
16:35 ihewmatt: k
16:36 Sky Trias: let's make this better
16:36 ihewmatt: Sure ,thanks
16:37 Sky Trias: 00:16:783 (5) - 248|292 and 00:17:189 (1) - 144|260
16:37 Sky Trias: you already fix the combo right?
16:37 ihewmatt: yh
16:39 Sky Trias: better?
16:39 Sky Trias: 00:20:432 (3) - stack with 00:18:810 (3) -
16:40 ihewmatt: this what i change.
16:40 ihewmatt: http://puu.sh/ifA38/a41dc11d2f.jpg
16:40 ihewmatt: is it ok?
16:40 Sky Trias: nice.. :)
16:40 Sky Trias: if not broke the DS it's okay
16:41 ihewmatt: And next. http://puu.sh/ifA38/a41dc11d2f.jpg
16:41 ihewmatt: TY
16:42 Sky Trias: btw .. you need hitsound ..
16:43 ihewmatt: Yeh
16:46 Sky Trias: let check normal then..
16:47 ihewmatt: Okay :)
16:49 Sky Trias: should i update?
16:50 ihewmatt: lol. yeah,
16:50 ihewmatt: X)
16:50 Sky Trias: you changing SV?
16:50 Sky Trias: ._.
16:51 ihewmatt: nope
16:51 Sky Trias: i think xD
16:51 Sky Trias: well nvm
16:51 Sky Trias: let's check..
16:51 Sky Trias: hmm slider..
16:51 ihewmatt: Okay hah
16:51 ihewmatt: a
16:52 Sky Trias: 00:01:783 (3) - -15 degree i think?
16:52 Sky Trias: put same place as before
16:54 ihewmatt: hmn. just continue. ill be back :)
16:54 Sky Trias: okie
16:54 Sky Trias: 00:03:405 (1) - better you make same slider like 00:02:594 (4) -
16:58 Sky Trias: 00:05:026 (3) - 15 degree then move to 272|36 better i think
16:59 Sky Trias: like [http://puu.sh/ifAU9/4d87a7f77d.jpg this] maybe..
16:59 ihewmatt: im back
16:59 Sky Trias: welcome~ :)
17:00 ihewmatt: what u mean by -15 degree
17:00 Sky Trias: about slider on first , better you make same of that..
17:00 Sky Trias: -15 degree yah..
17:00 Sky Trias: Ctrl+R
17:00 Sky Trias: you can see the rotating system
17:01 Sky Trias: sorry Ctrl+Shift+R
17:02 ihewmatt: DONE
17:02 Sky Trias: change '0' to '-15'
17:02 Sky Trias: you got it?
17:02 Sky Trias: nice~
17:02 ihewmatt: Yep :D
17:03 Sky Trias: the slider seem not good at all
17:05 ihewmatt: oh. kk , Im bad at it :[
17:06 Sky Trias: no problem :)
17:06 Sky Trias: you can improve , just need more training :)
17:07 Sky Trias: 00:12:526 - is that blue line ?
17:07 Sky Trias: why there?
17:07 ihewmatt: oh, yah. idk why it went there lol
17:07 Sky Trias: xD
17:08 Sky Trias: it's okay.. that's just bookmark
17:08 Sky Trias: you can leave there.
17:08 ihewmatt: lol, *removed
17:09 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 (1,2) - got better placement over here..
17:10 ihewmatt: ty :]
17:12 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 (1,2) - maybe
17:13 Sky Trias: http://puu.sh/ifBtZ/2fa83c3ecc.jpg
17:13 Sky Trias: sorry
17:13 ihewmatt: it's ok :]
17:13 Sky Trias: 00:18:405 (3) - maybe 72|80 better
17:14 Sky Trias: want that placement?
17:14 ihewmatt: k, as u said :)
17:15 Sky Trias: here : 00:13:134 (1) - 192|216 . 00:13:540 (2) - 88|184
17:15 Sky Trias: done?
17:17 ihewmatt: check
17:17 ihewmatt: :)
17:19 Sky Trias: welp .. can we do fast mod?
17:19 Sky Trias: my friend need help too
17:19 ihewmatt: Ok
17:19 Sky Trias: and i should mod on thread..
17:19 Sky Trias: okie then
17:20 Sky Trias: 00:20:026 (1,2,3) - got better placement
17:20 Sky Trias: feel free to reject
17:20 ihewmatt: Ok
17:21 Sky Trias: 00:20:026 (1) - 108|212 . 00:20:432 (2) - 124|320 . 00:20:837 (3) - 228|288
17:21 Sky Trias: 00:26:513 (1,2) - better to blanket this
17:22 Sky Trias: 00:31:378 (3,4) - you can blanket this
17:22 Sky Trias: 00:35:837 (3) - Ctrl+G
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:43:337 (3) - 84|264
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:44:553 (2,3) - better to straigthen..
17:23 Sky Trias: with 00:44:148 (1) -
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:46:378 (2,3) - more blanket?
17:24 Sky Trias: 00:47:594 - add not
17:24 Sky Trias: there's a beat.
17:24 Sky Trias: 00:53:270 (1,2) - more blanket
17:25 Sky Trias: 00:56:107 (1) - more curve i think
17:26 Sky Trias: 00:57:324 (3,4) - i prefer you make like [http://puu.sh/ifC3q/b1b4652185.jpg this]
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:00:567 - better add not over here.
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:04:013 (3,4) - blanket maybe
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:07:459 (1,3) - sorry this unrankable
17:28 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1,1) - you need 1,5 beat before add not / slider
17:28 Sky Trias: noo.. err , just 1 beat it's okay
17:29 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1) - soo short this spinner till 01:12:324 -
17:29 Sky Trias: ohh yeah , on easy. you need to added the kiai time ..
17:29 Sky Trias: there's no kiai ..
17:30 Sky Trias: just considering
17:30 Sky Trias: 01:14:756 (3) - better Ctrl+G this
17:32 Sky Trias: 00:55:702 (3,1) - swap new combo
17:33 Sky Trias: 00:56:918 (2) - new combo
17:36 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1) - short this slider
17:36 Sky Trias: i mean spinner
17:36 Sky Trias: till 01:12:324 -
17:36 Sky Trias: you done? better do quickly okie .. i'm gonna check my friend's map
17:37 Sky Trias: call me back ^^
17:39 ihewmatt: Ok :)
17:54 ihewmatt: Done :)
19:03 Sky Trias: hey
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

Sky Trias wrote:

IRC Mod
12:02 ihewmatt: Hi Sky Trias, can u GD/MOD my bm?
12:02 Sky Trias: hi
12:02 Sky Trias: what map ? :)
12:02 *ihewmatt is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713111 Jessie J - Flashlight]
12:02 ihewmatt: :)
12:04 Sky Trias: let's see
12:05 *Sky Trias is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712042 Jessie J - Flashlight [Easy]]
12:05 Sky Trias: i do quickly okie
12:05 Sky Trias: irc is ok?
12:07 Sky Trias: call me when you ready.
12:14 Sky Trias: call me when you ready.
12:21 ihewmatt: im ready :D
12:23 Sky Trias: okie
12:24 ihewmatt: Ty
12:24 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 -
12:24 Sky Trias: unused inherit green.. better remove
12:25 Sky Trias: uncheck widescreen support & letterbox during break.
12:26 Sky Trias: no SB , no break..
12:26 Sky Trias: Audio Lead-In +2000 ms.
12:27 Sky Trias: no need double tag 'Crimmi' better to remove.
12:28 Sky Trias: 00:16:783 (5,1) - swap new combo.
12:28 ihewmatt: Where can find Audio Lead-in?
12:28 Sky Trias: hey? still there? gonna leave then..
12:28 Sky Trias: ahh ..
12:29 Sky Trias: file-open .osu in notepad.
12:29 ihewmatt: Im here :#
12:29 Sky Trias: well then..
12:29 Sky Trias: you get the Audio Lead-In ?
12:29 ihewmatt: Yup, :)
12:29 Sky Trias: there's write '0' change to '2000'
12:30 Sky Trias: oke.. let's continue the mod. better you answer my mod.
12:30 ihewmatt: done
12:31 Sky Trias: okie.
12:31 ihewmatt: OkI
12:31 Sky Trias: 00:26:107 (7,1) - swap new combo.
12:32 Sky Trias: 00:29:756 (5) - new combo here.
12:32 Sky Trias: 00:31:378 (3) - better change to slider instead. till 00:31:783 -
12:33 ihewmatt: KK
12:33 Sky Trias: 00:39:080 - hmm.. check the preview point there.
12:34 Sky Trias: 00:50:432 (5) - new combo.
12:35 ihewmatt: k
12:35 Sky Trias: 00:17:189 (2,3) - try blanket there.
12:36 Sky Trias: 00:39:486 (1) - better 192|236
12:37 Sky Trias: then check DS over here : 00:39:891 (2,3) -
12:38 ihewmatt: done
12:39 Sky Trias: a sec
12:39 ihewmatt: ``k
12:40 Sky Trias: 00:43:135 (6) - [http://puu.sh/ifqLA/3493551004.jpg better than before] also move 00:43:945 (1) - 408|192 and 00:44:351 (2) - 368|92
12:40 Sky Trias: that's better than before.
12:42 Sky Trias: 00:56:918 (3,1) - swap NC
12:42 ihewmatt: Ok
12:42 Sky Trias: you done?
12:42 Sky Trias: ok
12:42 Sky Trias: 00:59:351 (2,3) - can blanket over here.
12:42 ihewmatt: Yup :)
12:43 Sky Trias: 00:59:756 (3) - move to 136|200
12:43 Sky Trias: 01:00:972 (4) - try to stack with 00:59:351 (2) -
12:44 Sky Trias: 01:01:378 (5) - 316|84
12:44 Sky Trias: 01:01:378 (5,1) - try blanket this
12:45 Sky Trias: um .. combo very random over here.
12:45 Sky Trias: let me to fix this.
12:45 Sky Trias: 01:00:972 (5) - combo
12:45 Sky Trias: 01:02:594 (1) - remove combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:05:837 (5) - combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:06:648 (1) - remove combo
12:46 Sky Trias: 01:09:891 (5) - combo
12:46 Sky Trias: done.
12:46 Sky Trias: call me when you done with all of that
12:46 ihewmatt: kk.
12:48 ihewmatt: Done
12:53 Sky Trias: 00:01:783 (3,4) - you can blanket over here
12:53 Sky Trias: let me make better slider
12:53 Sky Trias: a sec
12:54 Sky Trias: [http://puu.sh/ifror/ea1599bcb6.jpg here]
12:55 Sky Trias: 00:07:864 (2) - better move to 176|300
12:55 ihewmatt: k
12:56 Sky Trias: 00:09:486 (4) - i don't like this placement.
12:56 Sky Trias: 00:09:486 (4) - why not place on 456|232?
12:57 Sky Trias: it's better than before
12:57 ihewmatt: How 'bout this? http://puu.sh/ifrw6/89649b790b.jpg
12:57 Sky Trias: well then it's your choice~ ^^
12:58 Sky Trias: 00:23:270 (2,3) - can blanket this.
12:58 ihewmatt: What's the best placement for 00:09:486 (4) -
12:58 ihewmatt: Oh.. sorry,
12:58 Sky Trias: okie then~
12:59 Sky Trias: 00:24:891 (4,5,6,7) -
12:59 Sky Trias: hmm..
13:00 Sky Trias: [http://puu.sh/ifrEs/31310b8205.jpg maybe?]
13:01 Sky Trias: 00:34:621 (2,3) - blanket maybe?
13:01 Sky Trias: idk.
13:01 Sky Trias: wkwk iya no .. nanti coba diatur deh
13:01 Sky Trias: ahh sorry wrong tab
13:01 ihewmatt: LOL ok,
13:09 ihewmatt: so..
15:33 Sky Trias: a
15:33 Sky Trias: test
15:34 ihewmatt: ohh.. okay
15:34 Sky Trias: should i continue?
15:34 Sky Trias: i'm so sorry.. trouble in home.
15:34 ihewmatt: sure. it's okay
15:34 ihewmatt: :)
15:35 Sky Trias: what the last?
15:36 ihewmatt: i think . this 00:02:999 (4,1) - Blanket
15:36 Sky Trias: i need more time , it's ok?
15:36 ihewmatt: Okay.. :)
15:36 Sky Trias: well then
15:37 Sky Trias: gonna afk for a while. so sorry :(
15:37 ihewmatt: t's okay, take care
16:12 Sky Trias: ba k
16:12 Sky Trias: back*
16:12 Sky Trias: sorry ..
16:13 ihewmatt: `it's okay, as i said before. :)
16:13 Sky Trias: okie then~ :)
16:14 Sky Trias: 00:17:189 (1,2) - blanket?
16:14 Sky Trias: also 00:17:594 (2) - ctrl+G
16:16 Sky Trias: is this song cut version?
16:16 ihewmatt: yup
16:17 Sky Trias: add tag then :)
16:17 Sky Trias: cut version / short version is okay
16:17 Sky Trias: ahh already there :)
16:17 ihewmatt: yup. done already
16:17 Sky Trias: okie~
16:17 ihewmatt: haha yh
16:18 Sky Trias: 00:54:080 (2) - 84|140 better i think
16:19 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (2) - same slider like 01:07:053 (4) - will better i think
16:19 Sky Trias: 00:01:378 (2) - better not blanket with 00:00:162 (1) -
16:20 Sky Trias: but that
16:20 Sky Trias: but that's my advice , you can keep or reject :)
16:21 Sky Trias: or if you accept that , better to move 180|356
16:21 ihewmatt: which should i move
16:22 Sky Trias: i give you the code .. can check that
16:22 ihewmatt: ok
16:23 Sky Trias: done?
16:26 ihewmatt: wait :)
16:27 ihewmatt: done
16:31 Sky Trias: 00:13:945 (2) - looks like no blanket..
16:31 Sky Trias: fix that?
16:34 ihewmatt: done
16:34 Sky Trias: 00:17:594 (2) - are you ctrl+g this?
16:35 ihewmatt: k
16:36 Sky Trias: let's make this better
16:36 ihewmatt: Sure ,thanks
16:37 Sky Trias: 00:16:783 (5) - 248|292 and 00:17:189 (1) - 144|260
16:37 Sky Trias: you already fix the combo right?
16:37 ihewmatt: yh
16:39 Sky Trias: better?
16:39 Sky Trias: 00:20:432 (3) - stack with 00:18:810 (3) -
16:40 ihewmatt: this what i change.
16:40 ihewmatt: http://puu.sh/ifA38/a41dc11d2f.jpg
16:40 ihewmatt: is it ok?
16:40 Sky Trias: nice.. :)
16:40 Sky Trias: if not broke the DS it's okay
16:41 ihewmatt: And next. http://puu.sh/ifA38/a41dc11d2f.jpg
16:41 ihewmatt: TY
16:42 Sky Trias: btw .. you need hitsound ..
16:43 ihewmatt: Yeh
16:46 Sky Trias: let check normal then..
16:47 ihewmatt: Okay :)
16:49 Sky Trias: should i update?
16:50 ihewmatt: lol. yeah,
16:50 ihewmatt: X)
16:50 Sky Trias: you changing SV?
16:50 Sky Trias: ._.
16:51 ihewmatt: nope
16:51 Sky Trias: i think xD
16:51 Sky Trias: well nvm
16:51 Sky Trias: let's check..
16:51 Sky Trias: hmm slider..
16:51 ihewmatt: Okay hah
16:51 ihewmatt: a
16:52 Sky Trias: 00:01:783 (3) - -15 degree i think?
16:52 Sky Trias: put same place as before
16:54 ihewmatt: hmn. just continue. ill be back :)
16:54 Sky Trias: okie
16:54 Sky Trias: 00:03:405 (1) - better you make same slider like 00:02:594 (4) -
16:58 Sky Trias: 00:05:026 (3) - 15 degree then move to 272|36 better i think
16:59 Sky Trias: like [http://puu.sh/ifAU9/4d87a7f77d.jpg this] maybe..
16:59 ihewmatt: im back
16:59 Sky Trias: welcome~ :)
17:00 ihewmatt: what u mean by -15 degree
17:00 Sky Trias: about slider on first , better you make same of that..
17:00 Sky Trias: -15 degree yah..
17:00 Sky Trias: Ctrl+R
17:00 Sky Trias: you can see the rotating system
17:01 Sky Trias: sorry Ctrl+Shift+R
17:02 ihewmatt: DONE
17:02 Sky Trias: change '0' to '-15'
17:02 Sky Trias: you got it?
17:02 Sky Trias: nice~
17:02 ihewmatt: Yep :D
17:03 Sky Trias: the slider seem not good at all
17:05 ihewmatt: oh. kk , Im bad at it :[
17:06 Sky Trias: no problem :)
17:06 Sky Trias: you can improve , just need more training :)
17:07 Sky Trias: 00:12:526 - is that blue line ?
17:07 Sky Trias: why there?
17:07 ihewmatt: oh, yah. idk why it went there lol
17:07 Sky Trias: xD
17:08 Sky Trias: it's okay.. that's just bookmark
17:08 Sky Trias: you can leave there.
17:08 ihewmatt: lol, *removed
17:09 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 (1,2) - got better placement over here..
17:10 ihewmatt: ty :]
17:12 Sky Trias: 00:13:134 (1,2) - maybe
17:13 Sky Trias: http://puu.sh/ifBtZ/2fa83c3ecc.jpg
17:13 Sky Trias: sorry
17:13 ihewmatt: it's ok :]
17:13 Sky Trias: 00:18:405 (3) - maybe 72|80 better
17:14 Sky Trias: want that placement?
17:14 ihewmatt: k, as u said :)
17:15 Sky Trias: here : 00:13:134 (1) - 192|216 . 00:13:540 (2) - 88|184
17:15 Sky Trias: done?
17:17 ihewmatt: check
17:17 ihewmatt: :)
17:19 Sky Trias: welp .. can we do fast mod?
17:19 Sky Trias: my friend need help too
17:19 ihewmatt: Ok
17:19 Sky Trias: and i should mod on thread..
17:19 Sky Trias: okie then
17:20 Sky Trias: 00:20:026 (1,2,3) - got better placement
17:20 Sky Trias: feel free to reject
17:20 ihewmatt: Ok
17:21 Sky Trias: 00:20:026 (1) - 108|212 . 00:20:432 (2) - 124|320 . 00:20:837 (3) - 228|288
17:21 Sky Trias: 00:26:513 (1,2) - better to blanket this
17:22 Sky Trias: 00:31:378 (3,4) - you can blanket this
17:22 Sky Trias: 00:35:837 (3) - Ctrl+G
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:43:337 (3) - 84|264
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:44:553 (2,3) - better to straigthen..
17:23 Sky Trias: with 00:44:148 (1) -
17:23 Sky Trias: 00:46:378 (2,3) - more blanket?
17:24 Sky Trias: 00:47:594 - add not
17:24 Sky Trias: there's a beat.
17:24 Sky Trias: 00:53:270 (1,2) - more blanket
17:25 Sky Trias: 00:56:107 (1) - more curve i think
17:26 Sky Trias: 00:57:324 (3,4) - i prefer you make like [http://puu.sh/ifC3q/b1b4652185.jpg this]
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:00:567 - better add not over here.
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:04:013 (3,4) - blanket maybe
17:27 Sky Trias: 01:07:459 (1,3) - sorry this unrankable
17:28 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1,1) - you need 1,5 beat before add not / slider
17:28 Sky Trias: noo.. err , just 1 beat it's okay
17:29 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1) - soo short this spinner till 01:12:324 -
17:29 Sky Trias: ohh yeah , on easy. you need to added the kiai time ..
17:29 Sky Trias: there's no kiai ..
17:30 Sky Trias: just considering
17:30 Sky Trias: 01:14:756 (3) - better Ctrl+G this
17:32 Sky Trias: 00:55:702 (3,1) - swap new combo
17:33 Sky Trias: 00:56:918 (2) - new combo
17:36 Sky Trias: 01:10:297 (1) - short this slider
17:36 Sky Trias: i mean spinner
17:36 Sky Trias: till 01:12:324 -
17:36 Sky Trias: you done? better do quickly okie .. i'm gonna check my friend's map
17:37 Sky Trias: call me back ^^
17:39 ihewmatt: Ok :)
17:54 ihewmatt: Done :)
19:03 Sky Trias: hey
Good Luck! :D
Thanks a lot
Akitoshi
I'm no good but here we go...

[Easy]
*CS2 is pretty huge, consider to set CS3.
*AR = 3?
00:15:567 (4) - not symmetrical with 00:13:945 (2) -
00:21:243 (4) - this tail had stacking with 00:20:026 (1) -
00:33:405 (1,2,3) - I think it's too hard pattern for newbs.
00:36:243 (4) - or 00:36:648 (5) - New combo
00:44:756 (3,4) - add some curve in slider to avoid linear pattern, and also can get better flow with 00:46:783 (5) -
01:09:891 (3) - New Combo

[Normal]
*HP Drain = 4
*Big Changes of Slider Velocity in this diff is not good imo (x1 to x1.5)
00:44:148 (1,2,3) - Linear pattern, and I don't really recommended with 00:44:756 (3) - nowadays..
00:46:986 (3) - Stack with 00:45:972 (1) -
00:49:216 (1,2) - this one is pretty hard for newbs
00:57:324 (3,4) - ^ because two or more reverse is really confusing imo.
01:09:080 (4) - New combo for the whole echo of the song
01:10:702 (1) - spinner should be the last of your song


[Hard]
*OD = 5~6 (7 is for insane)
00:00:263 (1) - It isn't late? (Timing is not right)
00:25:499 (3) - I recommend map here like 00:28:134 (1,2,3,4) -
01:03:405 (1) - timing is not right

That's all for me, Goodluck.
BoberOfDarkness
Hello

General
The hitsounds are too loud

Easy
00:31:378 (3) - maybe try this for slider http://puu.sh/ijs4e/ce1c23864d.jpg
00:48:405 (2) - sounds better 1/1 reverse slider

Normal
Finish hitsounds sound way to loud
00:41:310 (3) - move end of slider to x:364 y:48

That is all from me
Good luck!
UltraRik
[Flashlight]
00:15:162 (5) - Way too close to previous slider
00:21:040 (6) - Don't stack - constant break
00:34:216 (3,4,5,6) - direct towards the next object
00:44:553 (2,3,4) - I see you tried making this triple to be a curve... it just looks bad imo
00:53:472 (5,6) - Oh no no, you can't space a pause like that so similarly to previous notes. It would only work with a NC, but better fix spacing

Make AR 7.5 or 8 and lower the OD to 6.

[Hard]
(better just DS the entire diff)
00:05:026 (4,5,1,2) - What's with the shifty spacing?
00:13:540 (4) - straighten a little
00:14:756 (1) - too close
00:19:620 (3) - ^
00:34:216 (1) - ^ !!!!!
00:39:486 (4) - ^
00:50:432 (3) - ^
00:57:121 (3) - This jump is ABSURD for a hard difficulty

Set your OD and HP to 5.

[Normal]

00:58:134 (4) - DS says this needs to be closer
00:59:351 (3) - This and some other blankets are off. Make perfect

Personal prefrence: HP & OD 4

[Easy]

00:13:945 (2,4) - These sliders should be symetric if they flow the same like that
00:19:216 (5) - Avoid overlaps in easy
00:20:026 (1) - ^

Check your easy and normal if i forgot to mention some overlaps and bad slider shapes.


Overall a fine looking mapset, hope I helped. Good luck! ^^
niconico1
Hi, from pm.

[Easy]
*Change slider velocity to 1
00:47:189 (1,2) - make it a slider?
00:58:945 - slider to 00:59:351 -

[Normal]
00:25:702 (1,2,3) - imo a slider is better for this
00:33:405 (2,3,4) - ^
00:38:878 (3) - try to avoid SV changes like this. 00:38:675 (2,3) - ^
00:38:878 - if you want to increase the SV try 1.25 or 1.15.
00:44:756 (3) - try something like this, because its too tricky
00:49:216 (1) - ^
00:50:432 (2) - ^
00:57:324 (3) - ^
01:13:540 - add a note

[Hard]
00:25:499 (3) - try something like this
00:44:553 - add a note
00:53:067 - ^
00:57:729 (1) - try something like this
00:59:553 - add a note
00:59:655 (1) - move the slider to white
01:05:634 - add a note

[Crimmi's Flashlight]
*idk what to say to this diff so... yeah...

Thats all I can do for this.
Good luck :)
First mod btw :P
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

niconico1 wrote:

Hi, from pm.

[Easy]
*Change slider velocity to 1
00:47:189 (1,2) - make it a slider?
00:58:945 - slider to 00:59:351 -

[Normal]
00:25:702 (1,2,3) - imo a slider is better for this
00:33:405 (2,3,4) - ^
00:38:878 (3) - try to avoid SV changes like this. 00:38:675 (2,3) - ^
00:38:878 - if you want to increase the SV try 1.25 or 1.15.
00:44:756 (3) - try something like this, because its too tricky
00:49:216 (1) - ^
00:50:432 (2) - ^
00:57:324 (3) - ^
01:13:540 - add a note

[Hard]
00:25:499 (3) - try something like this
00:44:553 - add a note
00:53:067 - ^
00:57:729 (1) - try something like this
00:59:553 - add a note
00:59:655 (1) - move the slider to white
01:05:634 - add a note

[Crimmi's Flashlight]
*idk what to say to this diff so... yeah...

Thats all I can do for this.
Good luck :)
First mod btw :P
Thanks
Syine
Hi.
This is my first modding ._. I just wrote the things that I felt.
And I'm not really good at English! T.T


Easy

  1. 00:13:540 (1) - I think this note will be confused for players because this note is next of spinner and located on center. I recommend this one to move somewhere
  2. 00:26:918 (2,3,2) - Whistle sound on these sliders is little bit awkward. Remove hitsound or add whistle on 00:31:378 (3)
  3. 01:13:945 (1) - How about
    I made start point of spinner fits piano rhythm

Normal

  1. 00:50:432 (2) - Too many reverse arrows. How about remove one on this point? It doesn't fit vocal rhythm.

Hard

  • Totally, the distance between some notes is not regular. It is difficult to read.
  1. 00:12:729 (1,2,3) - Distance of these notes are too long. It could be confused 1/1.
  2. 00:18:810 (2,3) - Distance is short about 1/1.
  3. 00:28:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't say certainly about this part, but some of players would make complaint because its distance is short.

    I recommend you to consider about this part seriously.
    Below points is for my subjectivity.
  4. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 00:38:472 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
  8. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
  9. 01:00:770 (3) ^
  10. 01:00:972 (3) - How about change to 01:00:770 (3) ?

Crimmi's Flashlight

  1. 01:00:770 (3) - too short distance.
  2. 00:06:648 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:12:729 (6) - ^
  4. 00:53:472 (5,6) - Why don't you make this note further from previous one?
    There are some obscure parts, but I just think they're individuality of your mapping style.


I wish my mod could help you.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
ihewmatt

Syine wrote:

Hi.
This is my first modding ._. I just wrote the things that I felt.
And I'm not really good at English! T.T


Easy

  1. 00:13:540 (1) - I think this note will be confused for players because this note is next of spinner and located on center. I recommend this one to move somewhere
  2. 00:26:918 (2,3,2) - Whistle sound on these sliders is little bit awkward. Remove hitsound or add whistle on 00:31:378 (3)
  3. 01:13:945 (1) - How about
    I made start point of spinner fits piano rhythm

Normal

  1. 00:50:432 (2) - Too many reverse arrows. How about remove one on this point? It doesn't fit vocal rhythm.

Hard

  • Totally, the distance between some notes is not regular. It is difficult to read.
  1. 00:12:729 (1,2,3) - Distance of these notes are too long. It could be confused 1/1.
  2. 00:18:810 (2,3) - Distance is short about 1/1.
  3. 00:28:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't say certainly about this part, but some of players would make complaint because its distance is short.

    I recommend you to consider about this part seriously.
    Below points is for my subjectivity.
  4. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 00:38:472 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
  8. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
  9. 01:00:770 (3) ^
  10. 01:00:972 (3) - How about change to 01:00:770 (3) ?

Crimmi's Flashlight

  1. 01:00:770 (3) - too short distance.
  2. 00:06:648 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:12:729 (6) - ^
  4. 00:53:472 (5,6) - Why don't you make this note further from previous one?
    There are some obscure parts, but I just think they're individuality of your mapping style.


I wish my mod could help you.
Good luck!
Thanks.. :3 I change those suggest of urs which are important for me, or kinda need to change. :D TY
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