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Go Ichinose - Champion Daigo [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Milan-
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-offset is way too late try like 520 or so
-halved bpm makes more sense. By just listening to the drums you can say it is 141. If you want another reason, listen to when the music "reset", downbeat will always land on these resets or new rhythms which is the way you set bpms most of the time.

easy
-The overall sliders shapes are really discouraged for this level. They are way too inappropriate due to the lots of readabilities issues they have. Also, some of them modify the slider velocity like 00:02:235 (1) - or 00:03:937 (1) -
-Changing SV from 1.2 to 0.8 is not good for this level. You should really reconsider using a more subtle speed.
-00:49:894 (3,4,1) - you shouldn't be doing this kind of pattern with this low AR. It's hard for newbies to read it properly.
-00:58:511 (1,1) - slider's aproach circle appears too early before spinner finishes. I suggest you to remove the spinner because, in addition, it'd feel more natural if there were some rhythm there

normal
-00:09:043 (4) - the way this slider play is a bit too awkward for this speed. Track isn't clear enough and in addition you added a repeat to it. Same with similars like 00:15:852 (4) -
-01:00:958 - weird that you decided to ignore downbeat when you map it in like the whole map.
-00:29:469 (1,2,1) - i guess spacing should be more even visually like you did here 00:43:937 (5,6,1) - . Altho i dont agree with such big sv difference..

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context.
-when are u going to change your name?

insane
-00:06:915 (1,2,1) - vs 00:10:320 (1,2,1) - Try to be more constant here. The music is exactly the same.
-00:19:681 (1) - this should be 1/4. Music clearly has 3 beats from white to red. Here too 00:23:511 (3) - 00:46:915 (6) - 00:50:745 (3) - . There's no reason to use bad snapping on those spots. If you want to make a simple pattern just ignore the 1/4 sound and just map 1/2
-00:31:915 (4) - this note doesnt seem to be very important for what you're mapping here and it's kinda weird that you didnt map it on the first kiai either
-00:54:149 (5,7) - little overlap looks ugly ingame ;w;
-00:30:320 (1,2,3) - try this instead http://puu.sh/jyxGk/d62ffd15f5.jpg It covers that sound you're trying to map much better. same 00:57:979 (2,3) -
-00:17:554 (1,2,3) - why distance is so different even tho it has the same gap rhythmically

extra
-00:05:639 (1,1) - why distance suddenly became this small?
-00:14:149 (1) - red nodes contract way too much. It modifies the velocity of the slider. 00:03:937 (1) - this probably too.
-00:19:681 (1,2,3) - same as insane and all other instance including 00:28:618 (1,2,3) - , it has 3 beats from red to white... And even if you want to keep them, switching between 1/4 and 1/6 so fast and without a pattern that tells you it's going to happen, isn't the best tbh.
-00:23:298 - you mapped this part even on insane..
-00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is really annoying and doesn't have good flow either. Imagine hanzer doubles but way more spaced and with jerky movement. It's not really well done
-00:58:405 (1) - i'd move it to the other side, like x365y24. flow would be better that way
-01:00:958 - there's no reason to ignore this beat. Specially when you map 01:01:064 (3) - which is a derived sound from the downbeat.
-00:27:554 (7,1) - you lose so much momentum by using this small distance.
-00:42:554 (4,5,6,1) - movement is really awkward to follow. Going back and forth at this speed is really annoying
-00:43:724 (1,2,1) - distance doesnt represent the music at its higher expression. Jumps should lead towards the stronger beats
-The big concern i have with this diff and insane is the way they play. If you want to make something this fast, patterns and flow should be much better. Even small things like this 00:51:383 (6,7,1) - matters. In addition that spacing sometimes seems too random and not consistent at all. All these suggestions are from my point of view so feel free to say that i suck lmao.

irre
-just, why 1/6 sliders when the music is actually 1/4.
-00:09:043 (1,2,3) - these pattern could look better if you manually stack them, auto stack make them look not so neat

There are cool stuff here, but overall still need more work to me.. ;w;
reinaertdevos

Milan- wrote:

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance - Did something else which makes more sense rhythm-wise
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context. - Because I'm retarded
-when are u going to change your name? - That remains a mystery
Thanks for modding!
I agree about the offset being too late. Something like 522 would work out a lot better. I definitely agree about the bpm, it should be halved (but I told baraatje already)


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Topic Starter
Bara-

Milan- wrote:

general
-offset is way too late try like 520 or so
-halved bpm makes more sense. By just listening to the drums you can say it is 141. If you want another reason, listen to when the music "reset", downbeat will always land on these resets or new rhythms which is the way you set bpms most of the time.
Fixed both
easy
-The overall sliders shapes are really discouraged for this level. They are way too inappropriate due to the lots of readabilities issues they have. Also, some of them modify the slider velocity like 00:02:235 (1) - or 00:03:937 (1) -
-Changing SV from 1.2 to 0.8 is not good for this level. You should really reconsider using a more subtle speed. I honestly think this is fine. I'll reconsider more (and redo) if more people say so though
-00:49:894 (3,4,1) - you shouldn't be doing this kind of pattern with this low AR. It's hard for newbies to read it properly.
-00:58:511 (1,1) - slider's aproach circle appears too early before spinner finishes. I suggest you to remove the spinner because, in addition, it'd feel more natural if there were some rhythm there Kept spinner, as I have it in all diffs, it feels better for me

normal
-00:09:043 (4) - the way this slider play is a bit too awkward for this speed. Track isn't clear enough and in addition you added a repeat to it. Same with similars like 00:15:852 (4) - O.o. I'm using them for god know how long and this is the firts time anyone says something about it. No change, I really like these sldiers
-01:00:958 - weird that you decided to ignore downbeat when you map it in like the whole map. It's probably the weakest sound in the whole part (due to incorrect BPM it's even worse
-00:29:469 (1,2,1) - i guess spacing should be more even visually like you did here 00:43:937 (5,6,1) - . Altho i dont agree with such big sv difference..

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context.
-when are u going to change your name?

insane
-00:06:915 (1,2,1) - vs 00:10:320 (1,2,1) - Try to be more constant here. The music is exactly the same.
-00:19:681 (1) - this should be 1/4. Music clearly has 3 beats from white to red. Here too 00:23:511 (3) - 00:46:915 (6) - 00:50:745 (3) - . There's no reason to use bad snapping on those spots. If you want to make a simple pattern just ignore the 1/4 sound and just map 1/2 MNope, the sounds are actually 3 notes snapped to 1/3-1/6
-00:31:915 (4) - this note doesnt seem to be very important for what you're mapping here and it's kinda weird that you didnt map it on the first kiai either
-00:54:149 (5,7) - little overlap looks ugly ingame ;w;
-00:30:320 (1,2,3) - try this instead http://puu.sh/jyxGk/d62ffd15f5.jpg It covers that sound you're trying to map much better. same 00:57:979 (2,3) -
-00:17:554 (1,2,3) - why distance is so different even tho it has the same gap rhythmically

extra
-00:05:639 (1,1) - why distance suddenly became this small? For more ffect on the sliders themselves
-00:14:149 (1) - red nodes contract way too much. It modifies the velocity of the slider. 00:03:937 (1) - this probably too. Such sliders are commonly used for strong "scratchy sounds"
-00:19:681 (1,2,3) - same as insane and all other instance including 00:28:618 (1,2,3) - , it has 3 beats from red to white... And even if you want to keep them, switching between 1/4 and 1/6 so fast and without a pattern that tells you it's going to happen, isn't the best tbh. It's fine
-00:23:298 - you mapped this part even on insane..
-00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is really annoying and doesn't have good flow either. Imagine hanzer doubles but way more spaced and with jerky movement. It's not really well done
-00:58:405 (1) - i'd move it to the other side, like x365y24. flow would be better that way
-01:00:958 - there's no reason to ignore this beat. Specially when you map 01:01:064 (3) - which is a derived sound from the downbeat. Not a strongbeat
-00:27:554 (7,1) - you lose so much momentum by using this small distance.
-00:42:554 (4,5,6,1) - movement is really awkward to follow. Going back and forth at this speed is really annoying
-00:43:724 (1,2,1) - distance doesnt represent the music at its higher expression. Jumps should lead towards the stronger beats
-The big concern i have with this diff and insane is the way they play. If you want to make something this fast, patterns and flow should be much better. Even small things like this 00:51:383 (6,7,1) - matters. In addition that spacing sometimes seems too random and not consistent at all. All these suggestions are from my point of view so feel free to say that i suck lmao.

irre
-just, why 1/6 sliders when the music is actually 1/4.
-00:09:043 (1,2,3) - these pattern could look better if you manually stack them, auto stack make them look not so neat

There are cool stuff here, but overall still need more work to me.. ;w;
TY
No reply means fixed w/o comment
Topic Starter
Bara-
To all next modders
Don't look to the Difficulty at the site
It seems incorrect
Champion Diff is harder then Irre's
Champion is 5.61, Irre's is 5.5 (as you can see in-game/Forum)
alienflybot


Mod Requested by Baraatje123

[ General]

  • AIMod
  1. Check AIMod through all the difficulties. Basically unsnapped objects in the intro. (I don't know whether it is intended or not)

    Background Image
  2. Resize to the resolution of 1366x768.
[MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Difficulty Settings
  1. Slider velocity of 3.60 is not a big deal, but some sliders are really too quick that requires dashing to catch the tails of the sliders. Some of the examples are listed below.
  2. Increase AR to 9? AR8.8 seems to be too slow for such kind of 'heavy' rain and the 3.60 slider velocity.

    Gameplay
  3. 00:01:480 (5) - Slider requires dashing to catch the tail which is not too recommended. Make it less inclined to the right.
  4. 00:02:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is basically fine but (4,5) is too static in movement, which the players can just stand to catch them. Therefore it is better to move (4) away from (5). In this case you can rotate this pattern a bit or rework the stream.
  5. 00:10:628 (9,1) - A bit hard to catch (1) as it is curved to (9). Better change the position of (1,2).
  6. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Quite inconsistent in the HDash patterning, since there are all HDashes in 00:05:629 (1,2,3) and 00:09:033 (1,2,3) etc.
  7. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - The movements here are quite intense as a Rain.
  8. 00:34:459 (6,1) - Too hard to catch (1)'s tail as the HDash at (6,1) might cause overshooting and the players have to dash in order to catch tail of (1). Maybe it is better to incline (1) less.
  9. 00:37:756 (7,1) - ^

Good luck ranking the mapset!
MBomb
;)

alienflybot wrote:



Mod Requested by Baraatje123

[ General]

  • AIMod
  1. Check AIMod through all the difficulties. Basically unsnapped objects in the intro. (I don't know whether it is intended or not)

    Background Image
  2. Resize to the resolution of 1366x768.
[MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Difficulty Settings
  1. Slider velocity of 3.60 is not a big deal, but some sliders are really too quick that requires dashing to catch the tails of the sliders. Some of the examples are listed below.
  2. Increase AR to 9? AR8.8 seems to be too slow for such kind of 'heavy' rain and the 3.60 slider velocity. - I feel the AR8.8 fits the song fine because of the moderately low bpm, and the low use of 1/8.

    Gameplay
  3. 00:01:480 (5) - Slider requires dashing to catch the tail which is not too recommended. Make it less inclined to the right. - Done.
  4. 00:02:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is basically fine but (4,5) is too static in movement, which the players can just stand to catch them. Therefore it is better to move (4) away from (5). In this case you can rotate this pattern a bit or rework the stream. - I feel this movement makes the curve more smooth. You can stand still for it, but keeping a fluent movement makes it easier to play imo, and so most players would do this instead.
  5. 00:10:628 (9,1) - A bit hard to catch (1) as it is curved to (9). Better change the position of (1,2). I ctrl+Hed 1 instead, this plays better in my opinion.
  6. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Quite inconsistent in the HDash patterning, since there are all HDashes in 00:05:629 (1,2,3) and 00:09:033 (1,2,3) etc. - Fixed.
  7. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - The movements here are quite intense as a Rain. -I think this is fine because you can just hold dash for the 8, 9, 1 pattern.
  8. 00:34:459 (6,1) - Too hard to catch (1)'s tail as the HDash at (6,1) might cause overshooting and the players have to dash in order to catch tail of (1). Maybe it is better to incline (1) less. - Done.
  9. 00:37:756 (7,1) - ^ - Done.

Good luck ranking the mapset!
Thanks for the mod!

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Razor Sharp
From my Razor' Sharpened Mod Queue


MBomb's Heavy Rain

00:07:969 (2) - These are ok, but not for rain tho. The flow here is not the best either. Would suggest to change this.
00:17:118 (6,7,8) - Would suggest to move (9) closer to this (and remove hyper) as this can be a little hard for someone to read. This fits overdose better.
00:21:905 (4,5) - This hyper does not follow anything! Pleace change.
00:28:608 (1,2,3) - What about having the 1/8 straight? Makes a better flow, and looks nicer.
00:35:203 (2) - Same as the first one i mentioned.
00:44:352 (7,8,9,10) - Yeah, (10) should be closer to the 1/8's here.
00:46:905 (3) - Even tho this plays nice, i would suggest to straighten it more.
01:01:373 (6,7) - Moving (7) to around x32 would make this awesome for the ending. THink about it.

Not much, but the rain is very clean imo.
Good luck with ranking!
Razor Sharp
Doubleposted for some reason lol
MBomb

Razor Sharp wrote:

From my Razor' Sharpened Mod Queue


MBomb's Heavy Rain

00:07:969 (2) - These are ok, but not for rain tho. The flow here is not the best either. Would suggest to change this. - Didn't really change much, but I moved it a bit more to the left.
00:17:118 (6,7,8) - Would suggest to move (9) closer to this (and remove hyper) as this can be a little hard for someone to read. This fits overdose better. - I feel because you can still hit this by simply holding dash, it's fine.
00:21:905 (4,5) - This hyper does not follow anything! Pleace change. - HDash is for the very strong drum beat here, emphasised even more by the clap hitsound.
00:28:608 (1,2,3) - What about having the 1/8 straight? Makes a better flow, and looks nicer. - I think the curve movement here feels nicer to play.
00:35:203 (2) - Same as the first one i mentioned. - Same as then.
00:44:352 (7,8,9,10) - Yeah, (10) should be closer to the 1/8's here. - Done.
00:46:905 (3) - Even tho this plays nice, i would suggest to straighten it more. - I think I did... Either way it plays better.
01:01:373 (6,7) - Moving (7) to around x32 would make this awesome for the ending. THink about it. - Done, but increased the slant of 7 to make sure it flows quite well.

Not much, but the rain is very clean imo.
Good luck with ranking!
Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

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Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
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Absolute Zero
Requested on skypu.
It's really good! I only have a few comments. (sorry CtB modder)

MB's whatever
00:17:544 (1) - Move (1) further away from (9) to make more of a pronounced hyper?
00:28:767 (2,3) - Maybe don't add (3)?
00:47:650 (6) - Maybe make (6) flow better by moving it further right than (7)?
ohad1881
hi there!
m4m from your queue p/4475927#p4475927
[easy]
00:49:459 (2,3) - fix blanket
[normal]
00:00:522 (1) - unsnapped
00:19:246 (3) - nc?
[a mystery hard]
00:31:161 (1,2) - fix blanket
[insane]
00:08:927 (5) - 253 270?
00:57:118 (3,1) - unstacked
00:58:288 missed a beat here?
[irre's extra]
00:08:501 (4) - ctrl g?
00:21:693 missed a beat here?
00:23:076 (9) - nc here or 00:22:650 (8) - ?
00:24:139 (1) - remove nc?
00:31:054 the slider should end here mb?
00:51:373 (1) - remove nc?
[champion]
00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda overmapped :/ mb make the first square less spacey
00:35:735 (4,1) - unstacked
00:43:395 (1) - ctrl g?
gl!
MBomb

Absolute Zero wrote:

Requested on skypu.
It's really good! I only have a few comments. (sorry CtB modder)

MB's whatever
00:17:544 (1) - Move (1) further away from (9) to make more of a pronounced hyper? - Done.
00:28:767 (2,3) - Maybe don't add (3)? - There is a note here.
00:47:650 (6) - Maybe make (6) flow better by moving it further right than (7)? - Leftwards movement here feels more natural to me.
Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 111 Champion Steven.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63511
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:740055
BeatmapSetID:319636

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:3.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Bara-

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
m4m from your queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4475927#p4475927
[easy]
00:49:459 (2,3) - fix blanket
[normal]
00:00:522 (1) - unsnapped
00:19:246 (3) - nc? no, breaks NC pattern
[a mystery hard]
00:31:161 (1,2) - fix blanket I checked it and this is already a perfect blanket O.o
[insane]
00:08:927 (5) - 253 270?
00:57:118 (3,1) - unstacked I prefer stack
00:58:288 missed a beat here?
Kinda remapped Insane, to make it much better
[irre's extra]
00:08:501 (4) - ctrl g?
00:21:693 missed a beat here?
00:23:076 (9) - nc here or 00:22:650 (8) - ?
00:24:139 (1) - remove nc?
00:31:054 the slider should end here mb?
00:51:373 (1) - remove nc?
[champion]
00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda overmapped :/ mb make the first square less spacey Nop
00:35:735 (4,1) - unstacked Why?
00:43:395 (1) - ctrl g? Doesn't flow well
gl!
Thanks!!
Buffed both Insane (added more 1/4 sliders, too bad SR doesn't change a ccording to that)
Also buffed Champion for more consistency in 2 2nd part, and "removed" undermapping, as they quiet part lacked a lot of 1/4 notes
Also update MBomb's diff and updated with newerMetadata (Gamu, ty)
-Space-
hey m4m c:

[General]

AiMod:
  • Fix these within AiMod

Folder:
  • Picture
  1. Dimensions: Good
  2. Conflict with combos: Nope c:
  3. Conflict with SB: N/A
  • Audio
  1. Bitrate: 187kbps. Good
  2. Amplification: Fine
  3. Conflict with hitsounds: None


BPM & Offset:
  1. Fine


[Easy]

00:03:927 (1) - Moving the red anchor here would create for a more consistent slider in terms of when the slider turns#


00:04:778 (4) - I would make these a 3/4 slider for the fact there is an audiable beat heard on the blue tick

00:05:629 (1) - Moving the last two anchors to these points would make the slider mirror correctly

x:216 y:256
and
x:248 y:292

00:08:182 (2) - ^^

00:09:033 (1) - Moving the two last anchors to these points for the same reason as mentioned above

x:52 y:228
and
x:72 y:264

00:11:586 (2) - ^^


00:14:990 (2) - ^

00:27:756 (1) - You could have a spinner here, the music sort of emphasised something along the lines of a spinner, rather than a single plain slider

00:51:586 (1) - I think this slider would better follow the music and would also play nicer in terms of flowing


00:53:288 (3) - ^, I would use the same slider here because the music doesn't really permit and significant change in regards to a slider

[Normal]

Your SV is a little high in some places, giving that it's a normal it may be harder for new players to keep up, I recommend lowering it to a more newbie friendly speed.

00:01:480 (4) - Have this as the same slider type as previous, it would play nice and give your map better aesthetics as well as following the pattern of the music more

00:02:863 - Why have you missed out such an emphasised beat, map this out please.

00:13:288 (5) - I would curve this the other way round so the borders of the slider blanket the previous one

00:14:990 (3) - Make this the same as slider 4 for better consistency

00:31:161 (1) - Would this note play better with the blanket you've done for better consistency


00:52:437 (2,2) - These are inconsistenct, you didn't use them before, and the music played exactly the same. I recommend adding these in the previous part.

[A Mystery's Hard]

00:22:650 (5) - I believe this will play better with the previous sliders you've had, and I think it looks better aswell


00:46:480 (1) - I would strongly recommend a blanket here, you've blanketed so much things before and it just feels wrong without one now XD

[Insane]

00:01:480 (3) - Remove the extra white anchor on the curve, it's unneeded and makes it play funny

00:11:586 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor to these co-ords to make a better flow in the curve

x:416 y:232

00:14:990 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor two grid spaces down (on tiny) for the same reasons above

00:38:820 (4) - (same anchor location as above)

x:508 y:200

00:42:224 (4) - This curve doesn't really play well in terms of blanketing, try using these anchors

X:112 Y:148
X:60 Y:188
X:48 Y:260
X:124 Y:312

[Irre's Extra]

Your map makes me laugh in a good way, I like it c: It sounds cool

[Champion]

00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Considering I can FC all of the previous parts, when it comes to this I instantly fail. I believe it is due to the high difficulty jump 2 square jumps present one after the other, emphasised by the fact they place on 1/4 divisor

00:35:416 (3) - make this a circular flow with the next slider

00:56:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^

Nice map, good luck on rank
Topic Starter
Bara-

[ Space ] wrote:

hey m4m c:

[General]

AiMod:
  • Fix these within AiMod

Folder:
  • Picture
  1. Dimensions: Good
  2. Conflict with combos: Nope c:
  3. Conflict with SB: N/A
  • Audio
  1. Bitrate: 187kbps. Good
  2. Amplification: Fine
  3. Conflict with hitsounds: None


BPM & Offset:
  1. Fine


[Easy]

00:03:927 (1) - Moving the red anchor here would create for a more consistent slider in terms of when the slider turns#


00:04:778 (4) - I would make these a 3/4 slider for the fact there is an audiable beat heard on the blue tick Would be too hard for easy. Denied for all similar things as well

00:05:629 (1) - Moving the last two anchors to these points would make the slider mirror correctly

x:216 y:256
and
x:248 y:292

00:08:182 (2) - ^^

00:09:033 (1) - Moving the two last anchors to these points for the same reason as mentioned above

x:52 y:228
and
x:72 y:264

00:11:586 (2) - ^^


00:14:990 (2) - ^

00:27:756 (1) - You could have a spinner here, the music sort of emphasised something along the lines of a spinner, rather than a single plain slider

00:51:586 (1) - I think this slider would better follow the music and would also play nicer in terms of flowing


00:53:288 (3) - ^, I would use the same slider here because the music doesn't really permit and significant change in regards to a slider

[Normal]

Your SV is a little high in some places, giving that it's a normal it may be harder for new players to keep up, I recommend lowering it to a more newbie friendly speed. I like 1.60SV for normals (Your Lavender Town map has it too :P)

00:01:480 (4) - Have this as the same slider type as previous, it would play nice and give your map better aesthetics as well as following the pattern of the music more

00:02:863 - Why have you missed out such an emphasised beat, map this out please.

00:13:288 (5) - I would curve this the other way round so the borders of the slider blanket the previous one

00:14:990 (3) - Make this the same as slider 4 for better consistency

00:31:161 (1) - Would this note play better with the blanket you've done for better consistency I don't really think that looks great, keeping current


00:52:437 (2,2) - These are inconsistenct, you didn't use them before, and the music played exactly the same. I recommend adding these in the previous part.

[A Mystery's Hard]

00:22:650 (5) - I believe this will play better with the previous sliders you've had, and I think it looks better aswell


00:46:480 (1) - I would strongly recommend a blanket here, you've blanketed so much things before and it just feels wrong without one now XD

[Insane]

00:01:480 (3) - Remove the extra white anchor on the curve, it's unneeded and makes it play funny

00:11:586 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor to these co-ords to make a better flow in the curve

x:416 y:232

00:14:990 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor two grid spaces down (on tiny) for the same reasons above

00:38:820 (4) - (same anchor location as above)

x:508 y:200

00:42:224 (4) - This curve doesn't really play well in terms of blanketing, try using these anchors

X:112 Y:148
X:60 Y:188
X:48 Y:260
X:124 Y:312

[Irre's Extra]

Your map makes me laugh in a good way, I like it c: It sounds cool

[Champion]

00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Considering I can FC all of the previous parts, when it comes to this I instantly fail. I believe it is due to the high difficulty jump 2 square jumps present one after the other, emphasised by the fact they place on 1/4 divisor Toned down a little (same for below)

00:35:416 (3) - make this a circular flow with the next slider It already does O.o

00:56:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^

Nice map, good luck on rank
Thanks!!
No reply means fixed
Irreversible
helped the champion diff, can show the log if interested
reinaertdevos
well uhm didn't really fix anything as the sliders look fine as they are so
Tyrell
Random Rain Mod!

00:19:884 (6) - This slider going the opposite direction just feels awkward although i know you're going for anti-flow, would consider changing this.
00:30:310 (1) - Feel like this would flow better facing the left. Feels weird as it is now
00:57:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I just find this part impossible to really read without replaying multiple times. I feel as if it's just too much wiggles going on. I would go for a simpler curve pattern into the hyper at the end.

Overall this is a good map and a fun one but I feel the overall slider droplets need to be arced differently as well. I am not good with sliders so I can't make many suggestions but good luck with ranking this rain.

That's it :)
MBomb

Tyrell wrote:

Random Rain Mod!

00:19:884 (6) - This slider going the opposite direction just feels awkward although i know you're going for anti-flow, would consider changing this. - Moved it a bit closer, still antiflow though.
00:30:310 (1) - Feel like this would flow better facing the left. Feels weird as it is now - Feels fine to me.
00:57:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I just find this part impossible to really read without replaying multiple times. I feel as if it's just too much wiggles going on. I would go for a simpler curve pattern into the hyper at the end. - This is fine, in my opinion, a bit difficult, but that's what I was aiming for, for the end of the map.

Overall this is a good map and a fun one but I feel the overall slider droplets need to be arced differently as well. I am not good with sliders so I can't make many suggestions but good luck with ranking this rain.

That's it :)
Thanks for the mod!

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88,192,34139,2,0,L|8:152,2,90,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,34459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,34565,6,0,L|16:24,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,35203,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,35416,2,0,P|384:176|480:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,36054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36267,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,36905,1,14,0:0:0:0:
320,192,37118,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,37331,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37544,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,192,37756,2,0,L|207:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,37969,6,0,L|48:64,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,38608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38820,2,0,P|496:144|368:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,39246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,39352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,39671,6,0,L|504:80,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39990,2,0,L|176:80,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,40310,2,0,L|504:80,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,40735,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40948,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41161,2,0,L|112:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,41373,6,0,B|368:168|368:168|128:32,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,42012,2,0,L|80:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42225,2,0,L|496:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,42650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,42863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,43076,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,192,43395,1,6,0:0:0:0:
96,192,43501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43714,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,44033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,44139,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,44405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44565,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44778,6,0,B|496:64,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,45416,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,45735,2,0,L|16:128,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,46267,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,46480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46693,2,0,L|128:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46905,2,0,L|248:168,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47118,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,47331,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,47756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,47969,2,0,L|448:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,48182,6,0,L|168:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48820,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49033,2,0,L|384:152,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,49352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,49459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,49671,2,0,L|360:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,49884,6,0,L|16:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,50310,2,0,L|240:152,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50735,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,192,50788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,50842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50948,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,51161,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,51373,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,51586,6,0,L|480:104,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,52012,2,0,L|480:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,52225,2,0,L|144:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,52544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,52650,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,52863,2,0,L|64:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,53076,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,53288,6,0,L|32:104,1,270,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,53714,2,0,L|32:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,53927,2,0,L|368:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,54246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54352,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,54565,2,0,L|448:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54778,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,54990,5,14,0:0:0:0:
16,192,55203,2,0,L|96:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55416,2,0,L|256:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55629,2,0,L|256:152,2,90,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,55948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,56001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,56161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,56267,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56480,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56693,6,0,L|112:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,192,56905,2,0,L|111:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57118,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57331,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57544,6,0,L|272:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57756,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,57863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,57969,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,58076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58182,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58395,6,0,P|480:96|328:72,1,360,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,59033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,59246,2,0,L|256:40,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60097,6,0,L|0:128,2,90,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60416,2,0,L|320:128,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60735,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60948,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,61161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,192,61373,2,0,L|400:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,61586,2,0,L|304:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61799,12,0,63501,0:0:0:0:
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