1. Easy (1.56 stars, 108 notes)
2. Hard (2.95 stars, 226 notes)
3. Insane (4.13 stars, 317 notes)
4. Normal (1.99 stars, 152 notes)

jloughman14 wrote:

Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!

Hard

00:17:950 (5) - Fix the spacing on this. e-eto already consistent in my eyes..
00:40:537 (1,2) - Make these sliders also? I wanna 1/1 in here because seems too much sliders from before
01:13:985 (2) - Move the tail of this slider stack on the top of 01:12:950 (3) for a nice looking blanket. suree
01:25:881 - You could start the spinner here. nah, i want the finish sound can be heard in here

Insane

00:24:502 (7) - Curve this slider so its not hitting 00:25:019 (8) it's on purpose, i like how it "paused" in here when the notes looked like that XD
00:40:537 (4) - Move to x:253 y:146 and see how you like it. yeah
01:15:364 (2) - Curve it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3201428 ok
01:25:881 - Spinner could start here. same as before hueuhe

Really awesome mapping, sorry if it seems too subjective. Good luck on the rankings!

1. 00:05:364 (4,5,6) - how about you make the distance for all 3 notes the same? because you suddenly changed direction the motion will be faster here so the player will expect somehow similarity
2. 00:08:468 - I think this note should be tapped because the vocals start anew here and are really strong. maybe change this into 2 circles. also to emphasize the little "break" before
3. 00:10:019 (1) - i think the flow would be better if you ctrl + g this. so the motion becomes circular
4. 00:11:571 (1) - how about you add a hitfinish here? it sounds better
5. 00:14:330 - ^
6. 00:18:123 (7) - why this jump? i don't think it fits the music very good. well a little jump would be okay because of the trumpets but not something this big
7. 00:23:640 (4) - move this one a bit down to prepare for the slider afterwards. so you get better flow. like this:
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:46:571 (3) - i would ctrl + g this for flow reasons
9. 00:53:295 (3,4) - this 1/1 gap seems to much like a 1/2 gap and could be too difficult to read. not sure about this, though but i would recommend to change it
10. 01:15:709 (3,1) - ^
11. 01:20:364 (1) - again i would recommend to use ctrl + g to get circular flow.

1. 00:22:088 (3) - this long repeating slider could be a bit too difficult to read and it's also not easy to know when it will end. maybe change this into something easier
2. 00:27:778 (5) - again. because you first just use a normal repeating one and then suddenly it got 5 repeats. this could confuse the player
3. nice Hard, though.

1. 00:41:916 (1) - solely for looks i would put this one a bit up.
2. I don't have stuff I would change. Everything would be nitpicking or nazi-modding and i'm not into this so ok

1. 00:58:468 (2) - to fit the vocals like before I suggest you change this into a 1/1 repeating slider
2. again like normal... improve some blankets i guess

Hard wrote:

Hello there. Mod from my queue

[Insane]

1. 00:05:364 (4,5,6) - how about you make the distance for all 3 notes the same? because you suddenly changed direction the motion will be faster here so the player will expect somehow similarity
2. 00:08:468 - I think this note should be tapped because the vocals start anew here and are really strong. maybe change this into 2 circles. also to emphasize the little "break" before
3. 00:10:019 (1) - i think the flow would be better if you ctrl + g this. so the motion becomes circular
4. 00:11:571 (1) - how about you add a hitfinish here? it sounds better nnah i think it's not fit
5. 00:14:330 - ^ ^
6. 00:18:123 (7) - why this jump? i don't think it fits the music very good. well a little jump would be okay because of the trumpets but not something this big
7. 00:23:640 (4) - move this one a bit down to prepare for the slider afterwards. so you get better flow. like this: but i feel comfortable when it's to up :''v
8. 00:46:571 (3) - i would ctrl + g this for flow reasons
9. 00:53:295 (3,4) - this 1/1 gap seems to much like a 1/2 gap and could be too difficult to read. not sure about this, though but i would recommend to change it umm i like how note placed near when paused thing and i guess people still can predicted it lol
10. 01:15:709 (3,1) - ^ ^
11. 01:20:364 (1) - again i would recommend to use ctrl + g to get circular flow. nah for this one huehehe

[Hard]

1. 00:22:088 (3) - this long repeating slider could be a bit too difficult to read and it's also not easy to know when it will end. maybe change this into something easier
2. 00:27:778 (5) - again. because you first just use a normal repeating one and then suddenly it got 5 repeats. this could confuse the player
3. nice Hard, though. thanks o3o

[Normal]

1. 00:41:916 (1) - solely for looks i would put this one a bit up.
2. I don't have stuff I would change. Everything would be nitpicking or nazi-modding and i'm not into this so ok

[Easy]

1. 00:58:468 (2) - to fit the vocals like before I suggest you change this into a 1/1 repeating slider
2. again like normal... improve some blankets i guess u know me so well :''v

hope this mod helped a bit

KuroSenpai112 wrote:

Hi there from queue! Sorry for the wait!

[Insane]
00:01:226 (3) - Why not make this a curved slider blanketing the (1)? cuz i tired to see blanket
00:06:399 (2) - Blanket can be improved I... wil trying :''
00:30:450 (1,2,3) - It would be far better if these notes were placed like this: nahh I feel the current is more better to be clicked
00:36:399 (3) - Rearrange this slider like this for better flow sure

[Hard]
Nothing here, this one is well done.

[Normal]
00:50:192 (1) - Create a blanket over (6) I tried to make this looks matched with (2,3)
Other than that this is well mapped

[Easy]
Nothing here

Good luck!

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XiMerx wrote:

hello Yasora
and is this a yaoi song why every anime with many boys called yaoi

[Insane]
00:11:571 (1,2,4) - You realise these slider actually supports the instrument behind, but 00:11:916 (3) - 's end is complete silent. I think a circle for this should be fine. feels weird when clicking since it's in middle all-1/4-sliders
00:14:674 (3) - ^ same
00:16:226 (3,1) - Make blanket neater...? I amm tryinngg
00:27:692 (4) - Drumming starts here... previously it's piano slide. Don't know what you trying to follow lol the piano sounds fast to me so it fit when streams start here :v
00:28:468 (2,3,5,6) - Bro are you trying to blanket these, please tell me no no
00:33:295 (1) - Don't you think this is weird to put here, just stack with 00:33:640 (2) i try to give some different feels when pausing stuff here
00:34:330 (5) - Woah bro why did you put it so far xddd no really too far i guess, it's still feels good '-')
00:46:571 (3) - Grab this code into .osu to perfect blanket (Note: I did not manually edit) 1 grid up in the middle is fine right...

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00:47:088 (4) - The slider start not following vocal... I think a circle then a slider would be nice it gonna be "something missing" when gameplay if i do this
00:53:985 (5) - Have consistent DS at least... if someone mention this again, i will change..
01:02:950 (2) - Move second slider point to 128,136 and third slider point to 184,132 to perfect blanket with 01:01:743 (3) - ok
01:13:985 (2) - Move second slider point to 256,104 and third slider point to 304,128 to perfect blanket with 01:12:778 (4) - done
01:19:157 (1,2) - Make them parallel? (If you're lazy this is the code for (2)) thanks but no hueuhue

237,263,79674,2,0,B|251:203|251:203|310:233|368:187,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:20:364 (1) - Were you trying to blanket with 01:19:674 (2) - , because it doesn't look too good improve it.. maybe..
01:22:433 (4) - Move second slider point to 200,56 and third point to 104,72 to perfect blanket done

1. 00:01:226 (3) - remove clap
2. 00:01:743 (1,2) - ^ for tail
3. 00:04:502 (3) - add clap for tail
4. 00:05:364 (4) - remove clap
5. 00:05:881 (1) - ^ for tail
6. 00:07:433 (3) - ^ for tail
7. 00:26:743 (3) - ^ for tail
8. 00:57:088 (1) - ^ for the end one
9. 00:58:468 (2) - ^ for the end one
10. 01:01:226 (3) - ^ for the end one
11. 01:02:605 (1) - drag this one to 01:02:433 - and the end one should be at 01:03:295
12. 01:03:985 (2) - drag this one to 01:03:812 -
13. 01:06:743 (3) - remove clap for tail
14. 01:07:950 - perfect time to set the end for kiai
15. 01:08:123 (1) - drag this one to 01:07:950 -
16. 01:12:261 (3) - remove clap for tail
17. 01:13:640 (1) - drag this one to 01:13:468 - + remove clap at tail
18. 01:15:019 (2) - drag this one to 01:14:847 -

1. 00:01:916 (3) - remove clap for end
2. 00:05:364 (4) - remove clap
3. 00:26:916 (4) - the tail needs to remove clap
4. 00:53:640 (6) - remove clap
5. 01:00:537 (2) - ^
6. 01:25:192 (2) - add clap

1. 00:00:881 (2) - add clap for tail
2. 00:02:261 (2) - ^
3. 00:03:812 (3) - add clap
4. 00:05:192 (3) - ^
5. 00:05:364 (4) - the second and the last one needs to remove clap
6. 00:30:019 (5) - remove clap
7. 00:38:985 (6) - ^
8. 01:14:330 (3) - remove clap for head
9. 01:20:019 (3) - remove clap for tail
10. 01:20:364 (1) - finish?

1. 00:01:226 (3) - remove the clap at head and set the clap at tail
2. 00:02:605 (3) - ^
3. 00:03:123 (1) - remove clap for head
4. 00:03:812 (3) - add clap
5. 00:05:537 (5) - remove clap
6. 00:36:226 (2) - remove clap
7. 00:38:985 (2) - ^
8. 00:40:364 (3,1,3) - ^
9. On KIAI part, I don't even hear any clap sounds (hand clap)

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hi, Yasora I'm modding your map from my queue. You have mapped a ver nice song... Are you a experienced mapper or whay? o.o I don't have such as bad comments of this map. What I'm gonna point at are only suggestions because everything is blanket and clean. Good job!

Hard

New Combos

1. 00:47:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) As you're following a (1,2,3,4) NC'ing pattern, I'd suggest to put NC here 00:49:157 (5) or here 00:48:985 (4). sure

Spacing

1. 00:52:605 (4,1)As you have everything so blanket in this song. What about putting these two slider like this: uhn wanna keep it hehe
   

Normal

Slider shapes

1. 00:18:295 (4,1) You can use the shape of the slider (4) to the (1) to make a symmetric pattern here. i don't want it same XD

Easy

Perfect for me. \(o.o)/

UndeadCapulet wrote:

From my queue:

General

Fix the kiai so it toggles off at 01:07:950. ok

01:13:468 (1) - Toggle kiai on here? You could even just flash it if you wanted, but ending it at 01:18:640 would make the most sense imo, this whole section is arguably more powerful than where you actually have kiai right now. feels not fit for me :<

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Insane

I'm going to separate out the NC modding from everything else, to tidy up the mod.

NC mod

00:08:468 (4,1) - Swap k
00:21:054 (8,1) - Swap to keep it consistent with how you NC on the held trumpet notes (like 00:19:674 (1) - ). You could leave 00:21:916 (1) - NC'd if you want, I suppose. i know but it more tidy this way.. not fan of giving only one nc for one slider :''
00:39:847 (1) - Remove for consistency with previous vocal measures better keep it since it too jumpy imo

Aside from that:
00:11:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - Your rhythm choice right now is kinda missing the point; the instrumental is skipping the blue tick at 00:12:002 for a reason. Use one of these rhythms to map this part better: but it feel something missing if no note in there when gameplayo ;-;

SPOILER

Same thing applies to 00:14:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
00:28:640 (3) - Skipping the white tick here feels really bad, maybe make this a 1/2 repeated slider if you really want a vocal hold here? The best rhythm would be circle on red tick and the 1/2 slider on white tick imo. um,, i think the sound same w/ 00:29:330 (5) - and following vocal "reaa-re" and I like the current pattern //slapped

There's a lot of singletap before your kiai, but then at 00:56:399 (1,2,3) - you add in a 1/2 slider and two more 1/2 circles, which lessens the distinction between the kiai and the buildup singletap before the kiai; the kiai toggle feels really weak right now. Either change 00:56:399 (1) - into 2 1/2 circles so the singletap buildup is consistent until you reach the kiai, or use a rhythm along the lines of one of these:

SPOILER

Any of these rhythms will make your kiai feel more powerful.
(I probably didn't explain why the kiai toggle feels weak very well, sorry about that >.< it definitely needs fixing though)
I'm a bit confused about this one @.@ but I believe the current rhythm is fine too and i don't want the map get messy >~<

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Hard

01:02:433 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/ijVgU/622a2764ae.jpg Fix this overlap. only a bit, not really disturbing imo :'(

uhh nice diff i have nothing to say .-. thanks..

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Normal

00:14:330 (1,2) - Make the rhythm consistent with 00:11:571 (1,2) - . ok
00:20:709 (3,1) - This rhythm is a better solution fixed but a bit different
00:48:123 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/ijWnr/d8133e0990.jpg
Decide on whether you're going to be following vocals or instrumental for the kiai, and stick with it. 01:02:433 (1,2,3,4) - plays terribly because of the switching, as well as many other sections of the kiai. I following both lol but for me it's not that bad when play
01:24:674 (1,2,3) - These would look nicer if they were 3 120 degree rotations of each other. Something like this (don't forget to have the last one blanket the center of the spinner). nice

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Easy

00:53:985 (2) - Spacing error fixed

That's all from me, good luck!

1. The offset is not bad, but check the offset of 540, it feels a bit on spot to me, imo.