[Easy]
First part:IRC log2015-06-09 16:28 Sero: timing sections: first 2 green timing sections (00:06:827 and 00:07:000) serve no purpose. Change your red section to the desired values (45% volume and soft custom 1) and delete those 2
2015-06-09 16:34 Sero: a great way to ensure your slider is properly blanketed (speaking of http://puu.sh/iiiK2/4352160e9f.jpg) is to do the following: after the combo 3 circle, put a hitcircle on top of the sliderstart (like this http://puu.sh/iiiR0/56ee24faa6.jpg) then select the combo 3 circle and look at the DS (http://puu.sh/iiiUq/65438aced2.jpg), make it consistent and you'll have a perfect blanket (http://puu.sh/iiiXM/4dd0e9f5bd.jpg), delete the combo 4 again...its only purpose was giving you the correct spacing
2015-06-09 16:34 Sero: was talking about 00:11:509 (2,3,4) - btw
2015-06-09 16:35 Sero: 00:13:243 (1,2,3) - at places like this, try to watch the visual spacing between objects, look at this: http://puu.sh/iij3t/28711b63d3.jpg. the actual DS is right, but because of the sliderpath it looks a bit unclean. it's fine though.
2015-06-09 16:38 Sero: 00:15:671 (5) - is strange because of the vocals. the vocals put emphasis on 00:16:017, but you are in the middle of the sliderpath there.
2015-06-09 16:40 Sero: because of this, 00:18:098 (1,2) - is kinda missing the first few sounds that you represent with these notes. possible fix: http://puu.sh/iijgb/c4b86f8ab3.jpg. (combo colors are not fixed yet) this will ensure all of the sounds are played (7, 8 , 1 , 2) and the slider follows the lyrics better.
2015-06-09 16:41 Sero: if you don't do this: 00:15:671 (5) - should be new combo. 00:18:098 (1) - remove combo. then 00:18:792 (3) - new combo again. (for consistency)
2015-06-09 16:43 Sero: forgot to mention here: 00:15:671 (5) - if you do it like this, you lose the big white tick. the white tick is the most important tick, and should have an active (!) hit object most of the time, that means either a hitcircle or a sliderstart
2015-06-09 16:48 Sero: 00:22:260 (2) - at this point, you lose a few strong beats, which is typical for an easy. what you can do, is use a short repeat slider with the repeat on a red tick (http://puu.sh/iijJQ/0c308db428.jpg). Yes, you shouldn't really use red ticks in normals, but this essentially plays like a 1/1 slider, so it fine and represents the music much better. what you did is ok though
Second part:
- 00:21:566 (1,2,1,2,3) - Just something I made real quick, dunno if it helps.
- 00:33:705 (2,3) - should be properly blanketed, using the same technique I talked about in the IRC log
- 00:35:092 (4) - feels off, because the big white tick is only passively played (sliderend). If you keep it, make 00:35:786 (5) - a new combo.
- 00:37:520 (1,1) - feel a bit weird, since there's no real change in the music
- if you keep the structure as mentioned in 00:35:092 (4) - , then: 00:37:520 (1) - remove combo. 00:39:254 (6) - apply combo. 00:39:948 (1) - remove combo. 00:41:335 (4) - apply combo. This should fit better/feel more consistent.
- 00:43:069 (4) - as mentioned before, don't think the white tick should only be a passive hitsound.
- 00:43:069 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/iinio/b46922fab9.jpg unclean because of the short distance between slidertrack and hitcircle.
- 00:44:110 (1,2) - just use 1 white sliderpoint, the curve will look much cleaner and it's much easier to blanket it.
- 00:49:659 (2,3,4,5,6) - the path looks a bit messy (http://puu.sh/iioU2/5b6994d5cd.jpg) maybe change it so it's more like a full curve?
- 00:54:168 I feel like something should be here, especially because of the vocals.
- 01:00:410 and 01:03:185: poor white ticks =( Both should be played imo.
- 01:02:838 (1,2) - could be blanketed better.
- 01:02:838 (1,3,4) - you could try to make the distance here: http://puu.sh/iipby/4cd53ccafc.jpg consistent. I know there's a 2 which is played first, but if the distance is consistent between objects that are not played in order as well, it will look neat.
- 01:05:266 (4) - and 01:06:653 (6) - : white tick. like before. I will not name any more big white ticks that bother me, you can essentially look at each one which is not stressed by a hitcircle or sliderstart.
- 01:06:306 (5,6) - blanket better! =) also, new combo.
- Combos should be: 01:06:306 (1) - , 01:08:387 (1) - , 01:11:855 (1) - , 01:14:630 (1) - , 01:17:058 (1) - , 01:19:832 (1) - , 01:22:260 (2) - , 01:26:769 (1) - for consistency (my opinion) The other ones in that section should be removed then of course.
- 01:16:364 (1,2) - see 00:18:098 (1,2) - above.
- 01:28:156 (1) - would let it end on 01:33:705 instead.