1. Easy (1.43 stars, 99 notes)
2. Hard (3.21 stars, 227 notes)
3. Insane (4.48 stars, 301 notes)
4. Normal (2 stars, 155 notes)

Extra https://osu.ppy.sh/s/346793

by Kyubey
by Momochikun
by Momochikun
by Kyubey

by Kyubey
by HabiHolic
by HabiHolic
by Kyubey
Thanks Kyubey,Momochikun,HabiHolic

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

01:23:781 (2) Shouldnt this slider start here 01:23:601 and here 01:24:499 like 00:14:619 (2) ?
fixed
Really nice Easy

Normal

00:49:829 (5,6,7) 2 sliders instead? I think this can be a bit surprising for normal players.
fixed
Nice Normal

Hard

00:08:691 (4,5) I dont know why, but this plays really weird. Maybe you should put (5) like this

SPOILER

fixed

00:14:260 (2,3) Nazi suggest. Stack is not perfect
fixed
00:20:188 (3) I think this one should be a circle and a 1/2 slider should start here 00:20:367 and then a circle here 00:20:727 Fells better to paly and fits more with the music
it's fine to me i will consider that
01:25:936 (3,4,5,6) I think you can put something better there since the music suggests it. Like a little start pattern imo
fixed
Insane

Awesome Insane

I SAY YES

00:21:266 (5,8) Stach those two, otherwise it feels weird to play the jump.
it's fine and this Extra mapset


Really awesome map (I dont like the song and anime though) xD
Good luck with it, shouldnt take much mods lol
o/

SLMmix wrote:

Hi~ from request.



General

콤보 컬러가 매우 맛있어보이는군요메론 포도 딸기 바나나??
헐 들킴 ㅋㅅㅋ
Insane이랑 I SAY YES 를 제외하고 뉴콤주기가 좀 긴 것 같아요.
나중에 뱃리퀘때 한번 물어보겠습니다. (바꿧다 또 바꾸라하면 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ)

Easy

01:18:032 (2,3) - 블랭킷 조금 더 이쁘게 될 것 같아요

SPOILER

01:16:595 (1,2,3) - 각각 30도 씩독린 패턴이라 담요의도것은 아니라서 패스!

Normal

00:11:924 (2) - 00:11:745 여기로 이동?
리듬상으론 저게 맞다고 생각하니 그대로 두겠습니다.

Hard


00:04:739 (1,2,3) - 여기서는 보컬을 따르신 것 같은데 앞의 00:03:122 (4,5) - 얘네들 때문에 00:05:457 - 여기에 노트가 있어야 할 것 같아요 (허전한 느낌) 노트추가 혹은 00:05:278 (2) - 삭제하고 00:04:739 (1) - 를 반복슬라이더로?
보컬보단 드럼 따라갔어요 노트 지우고 들어보시면 쿵 쿵쿵 하는 소리 들리실겁니다.리듬주기도 완벽하게 일치합니다.
00:13:362 (1) - 여기 히트사운드?
잘들어있는?
00:58:811 (1) - 슬라이더 속도 늘려서 이렇게 바꾸는건 어떨까요?

SPOILER

끄앙 앵커가 슬라속도에 영향주면 언랭요소... 완전히 어울리는 그런게아니라면 보통 잘안써요
01:17:134 (2) - x88 y344가 보기 더좋은듯
DS가 흐트러집니다.
01:25:757 (2) - 왜 이것만 혼자 디스턴스가 1.9인거죠! 디스턴스가 갑자기 바뀐거 치고는 뒤에오는 패턴이 너무 단조로운 것 같은데 디스턴스 유지하실거면 이런패턴은 어떨까요

SPOILER

01:25:936 (3) - 여기음 강조시킬려고 점프사용했습니다. 대체적으로 2.0넘어간것도 많이사용한...


Insane

00:34:918 (1) - 노트삭제? 00:35:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - 얘네들에 비해 들리는소리가 너무 작아서 서클한개에 안 어울리는 것 같아요 아니면 00:34:559 (4) - 를 늘려서 반복슬라이더로 해도 괜찮을듯!
굳 괜찮네요 수정완료
01:12:284 (1) - 이거 ctrl + g 하면 더 재미잇을것 같아요
동선이 망해영...


I SAY YES

난이도가 어려워서 클리어도 못함..분하다 그래도 보이는것만 최대한 해봤습니다

00:06:894 (1,2,3) - 이거 3개 간격을 띄우시는게?
00:21:265 (5,8) - 스택?
개인적으로 저패턴들 맘에하는지라 우선 저렇게 두겠습니다. 후에 모딩이 들어온다면 고치겠습니다.




이 맵도 매우 괜찮네요 (특히 Insane난이도) 지적할게 별로 없는듯함..
Good Luck!

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M c:

Easy

00:10:487 (3) - ctrl+g this? current slider is fine I guess, ctrl+g'ing this feels a tad bit nicer/more interesting to play
thanks suggest but i think so it'fine
00:14:619 (2) - I guess this is my personal preference rather than somethin that actually needs fixing, but having this go along with the insturment in the background (not sure what it's called lol) would be neat c:
01:22:344 (1,2) - here same and that more fine to me
00:46:415 (5,1) - try forming a triangle here? some subtle symmetry here would look really nice I think c:
00:47:853 (1,2,3,4) - here already symmetry
00:50:727 (3,1) - why not have these two on the same axis? looks neater I think c:
that make boring i like this pattern
Normal

00:05:996 (3) - I personally think that making this a more distinct curve would look and play a tad bit nicer
i dont want that
00:09:589 (4) - not cathing the vocals on this feels kinda irritating to me
ok fixed
00:21:266 (6) - this sound on this is rather unique in the song so I'd personally try catching this :c not sure if adding a 1/2 on this would make the thing to 1/2 heavy though
ok fixed
00:37:793 (3,4,5) - why not make this a straight line?
flow better and straight line sometime make badflow
00:40:667 (3,1) - perhaps try getting rid of this overlap? you've been avoiding these very nicely thus far
it's fint to me
00:47:853 (1,2,3) - I kinda feel like this rythm is hard to predict..I was really expecting this to go along with the vocals instead (meaning everything would be 1/2 earlier)

00:50:727 (1,2,3) - ^
fixed
01:14:439 (2,5) - overlap :c I mean if you don't feel like getting rid of these that's totally cool too c:
fixed
Hard

00:08:332 (3) - leaving this empty for a 1/2 break feels very fitting to me, especially during this slow paced part
it's fine
00:21:804 (10,1) - this defintely supports a jump, but I kinda feel like 2.35 is a liiiiitttle to much
it's fine here is sound so strong
00:27:284 (7) - is there any sound on this blue tick? or are my ears just being retarded

00:29:709 (5,6) - ^didnt use a triplet here either
ok fixed
00:40:308 (4,5) - feels forced because the player has near to no speed going into this jump (moving into a straight line while playing the previous pattern) and then having to suddenly jump with no momentum feels kinda forced
it's fine jump followed vocal
00:51:266 (2) - mhmm try leaving a 1/2 break after this one too?
it's fine
01:01:505 (7,8,9,10,1) - probably not an issue but it kinda felt a little weird to have just one jump between 10 and 1 when the entire pattern felt realyl strong
here is Kiai time it's not bad
01:13:002 (8,9,10,1) - ^ this pattern is mapped to the same thing in the music (kinda) and yet this one is nice and easy to play while the one above feels rather intense and taxing. Dunno if this is an issue, just saying though o3o
^
Insane

00:10:487 (1,4) - any particular reason for not stacking those?
hlaf stack
00:18:212 (3,4,5,6,7) - I guess this isn't much of an issue, but I feel like this whole star pattern could be spaced out a tad bit more, especially considering how spaced out 00:35:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - are, which are mapped to the same sound
there is startline so i cant use big jumps
00:43:182 (4,1) - eeeeh this felt a little bit awkward while playing :c perhaps try making the angle between these two a little less sharp? (It's not really sharp right now so saying this is kinda weird I guess lol)
it's fine

What kinda stood out to me was that the part starting at 00:25:218 (1) - till 00:36:356 (1) - felt a lot jumpier and more taxing than the following parts, while the song actually felt slower/less intense
it's fine
00:58:451 (3,1) - stack is off by a little
ok fixed
I SAY YES

00:19:110 (1) - how about stacking this under 00:18:032 (2) - ? the jump feels a bit nicer to play imo
no that's make bad flow
00:20:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this whole pattern looks really neat, I just feel as though it should start on 2 instead of one, since the trumpet sounds start on this red tick
so i made big jumps
00:55:936 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - does the song really support this stream? I mean this might just be me disliking streams, but this kinda feels like an unneccessary spike in Difficulty when the song doesn't even feel all that powerful (00:56:296 (3) - is there a sound on this?)
it's fine to me
01:12:284 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - NC 'spam' here really neccessary? Didn't to it for the first part of your kiai either ;w;
reading more fine
Sorry, not really into modding/mapping Extra Diffs, so these suggestions might suck ;A;

Good luck o3o

DreaM117er wrote:

M4M request, catch me in game

[General]

1. Source: ゼロの使い魔 (move romanised source on tags↓)
   Fxied
2. Add "双月の騎士 Zero no Tsukaima" in Tags
   Fxied
3. Sound for all diff:
   try add finish on these point, more nice I think
   00:14:619 - 00:16:236 - 00:17:493 - 00:19:110 - 00:20:367 - 00:21:984 - 01:23:601 - 01:25:218 - 01:26:475 -
   Godd idea!! Fxied

[Easy]

• 
  00:23:601 - spinner start red line, sound start here, not blue line
  Fxied
  00:56:475 - add finish
  Fxied

[Normal]

• 
  00:12:643 (3) - I think end 00:13:182 - feel strange, maybe white line more better 00:13:002 -
  Fxied
  00:56:475 - add finish
  Fxied

[Hard]

• 
  00:11:744 (5,6) - I think this jump no sense, follow DS more better
  hmm it's fine to me
  00:17:314 - add circle??
  Fxied
  00:23:601 - I still think spinner start here more better in any difficulty
  Fxied
  00:34:918 (3) - my suggestion: I think del this circle more better (coz 00:34:918 - no sound here)
  i agree Fxied
  00:56:475 - add finish
  Fxied
  01:25:757 (2) - you can try del this circle
  it' fine

[Insane]

• 
  00:02:763 (4) - Ctrl+G more better
  flow not bad but this jump i followed vocal sound
  00:21:805 (6,1) - for Insane, this is too far. Get close more better
  Fxied
  00:23:601 - Spinner start 00:23:601 -
  Fxied
  00:31:685 (5,6) - It's very hard to play this, too far
  Fxied
  01:02:763 (3,4) - ^
  01:13:362 (5,1) - ^
  01:16:056 (4,5) - ^
  01:17:853 (5,1) - ^
  01:19:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - These jumps seems appear on Extra diff, get closer more like Insane diff
  here is KIAI time it's fine

[I SAY YES]

• 
  00:23:870 - add circle, put this more good for Extra
  hmm i dont want triple i will consider this
  00:34:918 - try del this circle, and let 00:35:098 (2,3,4,5,6) - jump more far
  it's fine
  00:24:859 - miss finish
  Fxied
  01:10:487 (3) - use 1/4 more better
  01:10:667 (4) - ^
  01:07:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - here is heart pattern
  01:10:847 (1,2) - Ctrl+G, get good rhythm
  hmm i dont want that
  01:25:757 (5) - try del this circle, same reason 00:34:918 -
  but that make bad flow

Nice map, sad for this anime
Star can give you

thanks star! and your mod!!

1. Nazi mod 00:04:739 (4) - blanket better with previous circle (3)
2. 00:53:601 (1) - move very slightly down so the ending of the slider matches the same y co-ord as the y co-ord of 00:56:475 (3) -

1. 00:34:200 (2) - Maybe make this a slider ending at 00:34:559?
2. 00:34:918 (3) - I feel as though this should start at 00:35:098 (3) - because that's where the whatever instrument that is starts
3. 01:14:439 (2) - i think this should be a slider (same length as 01:14:799 (3) - ) and 01:14:799 (3) - being a circle. Feels a bit weird/inconsistent

1. 00:08:152 (2) - I feel as though this clap should be at 00:08:332 (3) - instead
2. 00:09:589 (6) - ^ but at 00:09:769 (7) -
3. 00:27:373 (8) - I feel as though it should end at 00:27:553 and a circle at 00:27:733 (you did this later on in the diff but not here? ._.
4. 01:25:936 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think these should be evenly spaced (feels as though a jump should be here)

[ Rizen ] wrote:

Hello~

[Easy]

1. Nazi mod 00:04:739 (4) - blanket better with previous circle (3)
   Fixed
2. 00:53:601 (1) - move very slightly down so the ending of the slider matches the same y co-ord as the y co-ord of 00:56:475 (3) -

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:34:200 (2) - Maybe make this a slider ending at 00:34:559?
   Fixed
2. 00:34:918 (3) - I feel as though this should start at 00:35:098 (3) - because that's where the whatever instrument that is starts
   it's fine to me
3. 01:14:439 (2) - i think this should be a slider (same length as 01:14:799 (3) - ) and 01:14:799 (3) - being a circle. Feels a bit weird/inconsistent

Fixed
[Hard]

1. 00:08:152 (2) - I feel as though this clap should be at 00:08:332 (3) - instead
   Fixed
2. 00:09:589 (6) - ^ but at 00:09:769 (7) -
   Fixed
3. 00:27:373 (8) - I feel as though it should end at 00:27:553 and a circle at 00:27:733 (you did this later on in the diff but not here? ._.
   Fixed
4. 01:25:936 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think these should be evenly spaced (feels as though a jump should be here)
   Fixed

NB: I can't mod anything harder than hard (hard is already pushing it) because I do not have enough mapping knowledge about insanes and over

this (imo) is a very well made map. With this as a factor (and my modding newbieness), i can barely find anything wrong with it (can only give mostly suggestions). If this mod is useless, i am very sorry have a star

ddfgit wrote:

BPM offset is:
------------------
Easy/Normal: Beatsnap is 1/4

1. I say no. This map is just heavily overdone for the following things:
   1. Abuse of exaggerated jump sections and generally overspaced jumps throughout the whole map for what the song has only to offer.
   00:07:972 (2,3) -
   00:09:409 (2,3) -
   00:16:954 (4,5) -
   00:33:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Decrease the jumps in the first combo and make it more lenient to play (read: add sliders).
   00:47:853 - This whole calm section after this timestamp, especially 00:49:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This is as heavily spaced as the previous part, although the music is way more quiet.
   01:00:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overspaced
   01:03:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   01:07:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
   01:19:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^
   01:27:553 (2,1) - ^
   2. Heavy overmaps and/or nonsensical rhythm patterns that just don't complement the music:
   00:36:715 (2,3,4) - There's no valid reason for this triple to exist, it doesn't even emphasize a certain beat.
   00:39:139 (7) -
   00:41:745 (4,5,6,7,1) -
   00:55:936 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
   00:59:709 (2,3,4) -
   01:05:817 (4,5,6) -
   01:07:254 (4,5,6) - 01:18:751 (4,5,6) - These just feel so illogical, why would you 1/4 sliderspam on clear 1/2 beats? These just cause unnecessary tempo swings ;-;
   01:15:158 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
2. 00:20:547 (1) - This is overmapped, there is no beat in the song to cover this. Please delete.
3. 00:23:870 - You missed a beat here.
4. NC switches here: 00:02:763 (1,3) - 00:16:056 (1,3) -
5. Delete NCs here: 00:04:020 (1) - 00:12:643 (1) - 00:15:338 (1,1) - this is just NC spam 00:24:140 (1) - 01:24:320 (1,1) - NC spam again

Kazuya wrote:

Hello.

[Extra?]

00:06:356 (1) - This spacing bit missleading. I think move ato around x: 472, y: 104
00:16:236 (3) - Slider shape ugly. Use simple curved slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3222661
00:24:499 (1) - This slider extremely fast. Use slower slider. e_e
00:35:996 (7) - ^ Creeepy slider
01:06:535 (1) - Maybe this? (slider shape) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3222676
01:07:254 (4,5,6) - This 1/4 spacing is huge. Use bit lower.
01:18:032 (1) - Same as similar: 01:06:535 (1) -Remove white ticks
01:18:751 (4,5,6) - Same as 01:07:254 (4,5,6) - This song not slow
Thanks so many depends but i delete it.

[Insane]

00:45:876 (3) - Hmm. Move to: x: 40 y: 288?
it 's fine to me here is half stack
01:16:595 (1) - I think, curved slider better here.
ok fixed
01:18:032 (1) - Ugly slider shape. Use simple linear, or curved slider
no i want this silde
01:21:625 (4) - ^Same as. Slider shape is bit ugly.
^
[Hard]

00:34:200 (2) - Hmm. Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3222711
No! why?
01:20:008 (2) - I think, remove second white tick. D:
Fixed

[Normal]
00:09:769 (4,5,6) - I think, use 1/1 slider here: 00:09:769 (4) - Make it easier this part
Fixed
00:21:805 (7) - Remove circle. Bit hard. :/
Fixed
[Easy]

Ohh Good. :O

Good luck. Sorry, my mod is shit. T_T

Pho wrote:

Still going to mod this, but I wanted to post this first before you can think about pushing this set. I'm speaking specifically about your highest difficulty:

[I SAY YES]

1. I say no. This map is just heavily overdone for the following things:
   1. Abuse of exaggerated jump sections and generally overspaced jumps throughout the whole map for what the song has only to offer.
   00:07:972 (2,3) -
   00:09:409 (2,3) -
   00:16:954 (4,5) -
   00:33:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Decrease the jumps in the first combo and make it more lenient to play (read: add sliders).
   00:47:853 - This whole calm section after this timestamp, especially 00:49:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This is as heavily spaced as the previous part, although the music is way more quiet.
   01:00:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overspaced
   01:03:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   01:07:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
   01:19:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^
   01:27:553 (2,1) - ^
   2. Heavy overmaps and/or nonsensical rhythm patterns that just don't complement the music:
   00:36:715 (2,3,4) - There's no valid reason for this triple to exist, it doesn't even emphasize a certain beat.
   00:39:139 (7) -
   00:41:745 (4,5,6,7,1) -
   00:55:936 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
   00:59:709 (2,3,4) -
   01:05:817 (4,5,6) -
   01:07:254 (4,5,6) - 01:18:751 (4,5,6) - These just feel so illogical, why would you 1/4 sliderspam on clear 1/2 beats? These just cause unnecessary tempo swings ;-;
   01:15:158 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
2. 00:20:547 (1) - This is overmapped, there is no beat in the song to cover this. Please delete.
3. 00:23:870 - You missed a beat here.
4. NC switches here: 00:02:763 (1,3) - 00:16:056 (1,3) -
5. Delete NCs here: 00:04:020 (1) - 00:12:643 (1) - 00:15:338 (1,1) - this is just NC spam 00:24:140 (1) - 01:24:320 (1,1) - NC spam again

This difficulty needs a heavy overhaul, it's like you made this difficulty just for the sake of having a difficult map in the set. :/
And unless you can give me valid reasons for the points above, you should not expect this set to be pushed forward - at least by me. Sorry for the harsh criticism.

Will come back with the rest of the mod later~

Thanks pho

i lack the ability to fix everything so i'll just delete it. Thanks for your opinion.

1. Fine.

1. 00:04:739 (1,2,3) - This spacing isn't good to me. so I recommend that consider changing that 1/1 slider to two 1/2 sliders.
   
   
2. 00:08:152 (2,3) - Try to follow the vocal. Current rhythm feels incongruity.
   

1. 00:16:057 (7,8,1) - That notes haven't good flow. Try to put straight it beside to 1/4 slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:188 (3,4) - Rhythm suggestion. I want to follow the strong sound in 00:20:367 - here. so Try this one.
   
3. 00:58:811 (1) - Slider speed x0,50 is really hard to read. I suggest that use x0,75 at least.
   
4. 01:20:906 (5) - Add hitsound to slider repeat please. Insane diff have whistle in same place. but I thought that Drum clap would be fit the song..
5. 01:27:912 (4) - What do you think about make a jump in here? It would be good finish.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:37:793 (3,4,5) - Try to make a straight line, like a here 00:40:667 (3,4,5) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:47:853 (1,2) - This is Normal difficulty, so you can a bit change the spacing if It is easy to read. but in this case, It isn't acceptable. Please consistenet that spacing.
3. 00:51:086 (2,3) - ^ same above
4. 01:20:906 (4) - Same suggestion in Hard diff.

1. Fine. but that spacing, feels a bit too closer :<