This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月11日 at 20:54:25

Artist: STEREOPONY
Title: Tsukiakari no Michishirube
Source: DARKER THAN BLACK -流星の双子-
Tags: dtb Ryuusei no Gemini opening tv size
BPM: 131
Filesize: 19478kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.3 stars, 75 notes)
2. Hard (2.75 stars, 194 notes)
3. Insane (3.45 stars, 264 notes)
4. Normal (1.88 stars, 131 notes)

Download: STEREOPONY - Tsukiakari no Michishirube
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old anime song -_-。
STEREOPONY

no SB (instead, add video)

Hi～
Support mod～
支援にならんかも(´・ω・｀)


知り合いに勧められてからまだダーカー見てません。面白いらしい、、
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kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Hi～
Support mod～
支援にならんかも(´・ω・｀)

[General]
※Tag追加：「tv」「size」
あ、忘れてた
[Easy]
fine.
[Normal]
00:38:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここのフレーズで２点気になりました。
（１）00:37:507 (4) - 同じようなリズムで00:39:339 (3,4) - に分けてる点。00:39:568で取りたい音があったのかな？って思ったけど音ないので分ける必要があるのかなと。
（２）00:38:881 (1,2,3) - ３連stack.00:37:049 (2,3,4) - こっちはやりやすかったので統一しませんか？
OK. 同じじゃつまんないかな～という心理がはたらいたと思います。

01:04:989 (5) - ２回リバース戸惑いｗ個人的にはこっちの方が良い気がしますが気に入らなければno changeで。

言われそうな気はしてたんだけど、配置してみて気に入ったのでこうしてます。結構指摘されるようなら変えるつもり
[Hard]
00:53:080 (6) - 位置変えしませんか？こんな感じ↓　00:52:393 (4,5) - の流れと次の00:53:767 (7,8,9) - への繋ぎが良い感じします。
good!

[Insane]
00:28:805 (5,6) - わざとなんだろうけど、やっぱ近すぎないですか？
あ、、、ここは迷いながら配置してたとこだ。思い切って変えました

00:32:469 (6) - ２circleでいきませんか？00:32:812 (7,1) - と同じような音と言いますか、、、こちらは２noteなんで合わせた方がやりやすかなと。気にならなければno changeで。
気に入ったよ<3

00:35:446 (3) - 単発のcircleにしませんか？00:35:560 - で音拾ってる感じでもなさげなので。変更なら00:33:843 (3) - の頭stackとか良さげです。
良さげ～
01:22:622 (2) - 次の01:22:851 (3) - への流れがやりにくいかもです。素直に下向きにしませんか？
flow的にやりやすさがあまり変わらないと思ったのでkeep


知り合いに勧められてからまだダーカー見てません。面白いらしい、、
実は私もアニメ見てない(爆
とある動画でこの歌にひとめぼれしました
ＧＬ

Thank you for modding!
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yo

Mod from my queue

[Insane]

1. 00:07:737 (9) - i suggest you add a little jump here to support the little emphasized vocal
2. 00:09:798 (4,5,1) - i suggest you use the same distance for all 3 notes. for looks and it also plays slightly better
3. 00:10:943 (2,3) - i'm not sure if this flowbreak is wanted or not but it plays a bit weird. how about you do something like this:
   SPOILER

   
   this way you get some nice back-and-forth motion while supporting the vocals. fits really good imo
4. 00:25:141 (5,6) - this plays weird because of the weird angle of your pattern. consider rotating around 15°
5. 00:37:507 (5) - how about adding a drum hitfinish on this slider's end?
6. 00:38:881 (3) - again a hitsounding issue. i suggest you add some hitsounding to support the start of the strong vocals. maybe a normal drum hitnormal or a whistle or something nice...
7. 00:41:171 - i don't think this sound should be on a sliderend. this sound is really strong and the vocal also so maybe you should change this into a circle.
8. 00:48:957 (6,7) - ctrl + g those two for flow? to get some star pattern. this one doesn't play intuitive
9. 01:05:446 (4,5) - because of the slider on the blue tick this plays weird. just use 3 circles instead. also the vocals are on the red tick so it also shouldn't be a sliderend.

[Hard]

1. 00:35:904 (5) - for flow reasons i suggest you put this slider a bit more to the right.
2. nothing else. nice diff

[Normal]

1. 01:04:989 (5) - i don't think you should put a double-repeating slider into a normal because they can confuse newer players. just use 2 1/2 sliders instead

[Easy]

1. this seems fine. i think you could improve some blankets but i dislike nazi-modding. so just go for it. nice map overall

I hope this helped a bit

Hard wrote:

yo

Mod from my queue

[Insane]

1. 00:07:737 (9) - i suggest you add a little jump here to support the little emphasized vocal
   I want to make consistent spacing at this part
2. 00:09:798 (4,5,1) - i suggest you use the same distance for all 3 notes. for looks and it also plays slightly better
   OK
3. 00:10:943 (2,3) - i'm not sure if this flowbreak is wanted or not but it plays a bit weird. how about you do something like this:
   SPOILER

   
   this way you get some nice back-and-forth motion while supporting the vocals. fits really good imo
   OK, I like it!
4. 00:25:141 (5,6) - this plays weird because of the weird angle of your pattern. consider rotating around 15°
   I intend stack pattern, and I dont like 15-rotating
5. 00:37:507 (5) - how about adding a drum hitfinish on this slider's end?
   I prefer custom-whistle
6. 00:38:881 (3) - again a hitsounding issue. i suggest you add some hitsounding to support the start of the strong vocals. maybe a normal drum hitnormal or a whistle or something nice...
   unneessary, imo. it's strange to follow vocal at only this place
7. 00:41:171 - i don't think this sound should be on a sliderend. this sound is really strong and the vocal also so maybe you should change this into a circle.
   reverse slider is suitable ,imo
8. 00:48:957 (6,7) - ctrl + g those two for flow? to get some star pattern. this one doesn't play intuitive
   break star is on purpose. flow is not bad, imo
9. 01:05:446 (4,5) - because of the slider on the blue tick this plays weird. just use 3 circles instead. also the vocals are on the red tick so it also shouldn't be a sliderend.
   I think no problem because the sound of this blue line is very strong

[Hard]

1. 00:35:904 (5) - for flow reasons i suggest you put this slider a bit more to the right.
   hm, your suggetion is nice, but I prefer down-up pattern at this part
2. nothing else. nice diff

[Normal]

1. 01:04:989 (5) - i don't think you should put a double-repeating slider into a normal because they can confuse newer players. just use 2 1/2 sliders instead
   oh, I like it, sorry. but if others indicate the same, I'll consider it

[Easy]

1. this seems fine. i think you could improve some blankets but i dislike nazi-modding. so just go for it. nice map overall
   fix several blankets

I hope this helped a bit

Thank you for modding!
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Hi there M4M from my queue!

[Insane]
00:07:737 (9) - NC should start here, not at 00:08:653 (1).
00:17:355 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - The big jumps here doesn't seem to make sense for me, consider reducing the distance from ~2.0x to ~1.6x or ~1.7x
00:43:003 (3,4,5,6) - For this one reduce the distance to 1.8x. Drums are being emphasized here so make the jumps not too big.
01:21:018 (2,3,4) - I think consistent spacing would be better here since nothing from the song is really being emphasized.
01:22:851 (3,4) - it would be better if the distance between these two notes was shortened. I think 1.8x will do fine.

[Hard]
Nothing to say here, this one's good.

[Normal]
I would suggest reducing the slider veolcity to 1.3x.
00:40:713 (1,2) - Replacing these two with a slider would be better in my opinion. The slider fits better with vocals.
Otherwise everything else should be fine here.

[Easy]
00:43:003 (3) - Make this slider point exactly towards (1). This is just for the looks.
Other than that this difficulty is well mapped.

I hope my mod helps and good luck!

M4M

KuroSenpai112 wrote:

Hi there M4M from my queue!

[Insane]
00:07:737 (9) - NC should start here, not at 00:08:653 (1).
considering the range of bar, that's is good
00:17:355 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - The big jumps here doesn't seem to make sense for me, consider reducing the distance from ~2.0x to ~1.6x or ~1.7x
OK, decrease spacing of 5~6. but keep about 1-2-3 jump
00:43:003 (3,4,5,6) - For this one reduce the distance to 1.8x. Drums are being emphasized here so make the jumps not too big.
ok
01:21:018 (2,3,4) - I think consistent spacing would be better here since nothing from the song is really being emphasized.
your opinion is nice. but considering flow and vocal, it don't mind too much
01:22:851 (3,4) - it would be better if the distance between these two notes was shortened. I think 1.8x will do fine.
u~m keep. but I reconsider if ohters indicate the same

[Hard]
Nothing to say here, this one's good.

[Normal]
I would suggest reducing the slider veolcity to 1.3x.
1.4x is no problem for playing, imo
00:40:713 (1,2) - Replacing these two with a slider would be better in my opinion. The slider fits better with vocals.
circle x3 fits with vocal very much in my opinion
Otherwise everything else should be fine here.

[Easy]
00:43:003 (3) - Make this slider point exactly towards (1). This is just for the looks.
not good shape, I think
Other than that this difficulty is well mapped.

I hope my mod helps and good luck!

Thank you for modding!
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-Tochi wrote:

M4M

• 
  

  General

1. turn off Widescreen Support since there's no SB, so it's useless.

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:02:928 (4) - Curve the last sliderpoint more down for better flow like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   I intend to make 4 and 5 toward circle-6
2. 00:06:592 (5,6) - It doesn't feel so good when the stack start on a red line, i suggest to stack it under 00:06:363 (4) -
   considering vocal follow, it's good
3. 00:06:821 (6) - NC.
   ok
4. 00:10:256 - Why no kiai time to 00:21:935 - ?
   you know that's chorus part, but I think emphasizing by kiai is unnecessary at this part
   00:10:256 (1,2,3) - Bad flow, move 00:10:943 (2) - to x:56 y:80
   on purpose because emphasizing large sound
5. 00:11:172 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Why is the spacing suddenly so little? Adjust the slider like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   ok, adjust a little
6. 00:12:775 (2) - Move this to x:8 y:104 for better flow.
   considering the flow from 1 to 4, this place is better
7. 00:17:355 (5) - Move to x:16 y:312 for better flow.
   ok
8. 00:17:584 (6,7,1,2,3) - This is a bad flow, either make this 00:17:584 (6,7,1) - into a reverse slider or DS the triplet like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   And move this circle 00:18:042 (9) - to the middle like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   u~m, I feel stack pattern is better
9. 00:18:271 (10) - This one too, move it to the center from each sides. ?
10. 00:18:042 (9,1) - Stack together. ?
11. 00:21:019 (7) - NC.
    unnecessary
12. 00:23:080 (6) - Move to x:232 y:264 for better DS, and flow.
    ok
13. 00:24:912 (4) - Stack on 00:25:599 (1) 's sliderhead.
    keep
14. 00:34:301 (4) - Move to x:408 y:356 for a fluent flow.
    ok
15. Ctrl+G these: 00:34:988 (1) - 00:35:217 (2) - and move 00:35:446 (3) - to x:252 y:208, looks better right?
    in this case, up-down pattern is fine than only considering flow, i think
16. 00:36:591 (1) - Way too close to 00:35:904 (5) - Either stack 00:36:591 (1) - under 00:35:904 (5) 's slidertail, or move it to x:464 y:104
    increase spacing
17. 00:43:003 (3,4,5,6) - Too random spacing, please do Ctrl+Shift+S while selecting all these 00:43:003 (3,4,5,6) - and do like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    ok~
18. 00:43:919 (1) - Adjust and move it like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    I prefer upward pattern
19. 00:56:744 (1) - Stack on 00:55:370 (2) 's head.
    I intend symmetric pattern
20. 01:03:614 (4) - Move to x:456 y:208
    too large spacing? ok i agree
21. 01:08:881 (5,1) - Avoid this overlap.
    ok
22. 01:15:293 (2) - Move down to x:0 y:208
    I highly intend to make jump at this part
23. 01:22:622 (2) - Ctrl+G.
    on purpose
24. 01:24:339 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:24:339 - and add a circle here 01:24:225 - that stacks under 01:23:767 (1) -
    I prefer not to add a not at 01:24:225-

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  Hard

1. 00:18:500 (6,7,1) - Make this triplet like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   keeping stack correctly, sorry
2. 00:20:103 (1) - Ctrl+G.
   I like mine
3. 00:28:805 (8) - Maybe move to x:376 y:112 so it's easier to read it?
   ok ,I agree
4. 01:12:316 (6,7,8) - Stack properly.
   oh, I mistaked...
5. 01:16:438 (9) - Ctrl+G, it can confused the new players since it goes the opposite direction
   keep

• 
  

  Feedback

  
  I think you should work a lot more on you slider-shapes, flow, and placement.
  ok, I'll try!
  Good luck o/

Thank you for modding!
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Hi!
M4M from my queue

[Easy]

1. 00:02:241 (2,1) - It's better to not change polarity on easy diffs (go from white to red lines, 3/2 gaps etc.) If you want to map red lines better use repeats or change the polarity with sliders. Example of this: http://puu.sh/iehQ7/15c9021396.jpg
2. 00:19:645 (1,1) - The spinner is a little bit too close to the next note. There is something like a rule to have a full measurement of rest after a spinner on easies, but this song is pretty slow so it may not be applied here.
3. 01:09:568 (1,2) - ctrl+g the rhythm? You start with slider almost every downbeat so to keep consistency.
   
   Really nice easy, try to fix the numerous polarity issues, those tend to confuse newbies.

[Normal]

1. 00:17:813 (4) - Make this lead to the next slider, the flow on easier diffs should be more straightforward. Ctrl+h solves this http://puu.sh/ieibt/9aa46edbf6.jpg
2. 00:57:431 (6) - You normally skip the sound here 00:57:431 (6) - , so it feels weird if you suddenly put a note here. Consider removing the repeat and moving the slider forward on the timeline.
3. 01:12:087 (5) - ^
   
   Nice

[Hard]

1. 00:04:989 (1) - Put it a little higher, it's out of the grid by quite a lot.
2. 00:11:973 (3) - Feels strange since you tap on the blue tick, it doesn't work that well. I suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/ig7YW/17e5cc0571.jpg To emphasize the white tick where the stream starts.
3. 00:20:103 (1,2) - This doesn't play too well. It would be better if it was a simple stream with circles. Like this but with better placement :p http://puu.sh/ig8bs/8986113d79.jpg
4. 00:25:141 (8,1) - The transition here plays weird, i see what you where trying to do but it doesn't work that well when playing. ctrl+j the slider and reposition it like this or something: http://puu.sh/ig8p1/76ad3456da.jpg
5. 00:34:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays strange, try something a bit more simple for a hard and make this 00:35:675 (4,5) - into a jump for emphasis. I would do something like this http://puu.sh/ig8IA/e54ab932fa.jpg
6. 01:00:637 (5,6) - Ctrl+g the rhythm, 01:01:095 - this beat needs to be clickable, it's to strong for it not to be... please D:
7. 01:14:835 - Make this clickable, same reason as above.
8. 01:15:293 (6,7) - Same as 01:00:637 (5,6) -
   
   Not bad, flow can improve.

[Insane]

1. Ar 8.5 for the jumps?
2. 00:01:325 (1,2) - Would be nice if the slider led directly to the circle. Like this: http://puu.sh/ig9bd/d7e8bb4795.jpg
3. 00:17:813 (1,2,3,4) - These long jumps are a bit sudden, try making them shorter maybe?
4. 00:23:767 (1,2,3) - Make them parallel, like here: http://puu.sh/ig9A0/d203753926.jpg
5. 00:45:751 (1) - Make this shorter to the red tick? To make it follow the guitar since there is nothing on the blue tick.
6. 00:48:957 (6,7) - It would flow better with ctrl+g, it makes the jumps the same size.
7. 00:50:102 (1,2,3) - Put this circles in a curved way, it would flow better to the next slider. Bad example: http://puu.sh/ig9Wo/e4c1c2bf09.jpg
8. 00:52:393 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? it would make it more simple but the way you have them right now is a bit confusing.
9. 01:00:637 (2,3) - Same thing as hard, i really think this should change.
10. 01:05:446 (4,5) - Would work better as a triple.
11. 01:14:721 (1) - Same as hard, emphasize that finish.
12. 01:15:293 (2,3) - You know :p
13. 01:23:767 (1) - I don't get why the slowdown, nothing on the music calls for it.
    
    Same comment as hard.

That's all, good luck!

Atsuro wrote:

Hi!
M4M from my queue

[Easy]

1. 00:02:241 (2,1) - It's better to not change polarity on easy diffs (go from white to red lines, 3/2 gaps etc.) If you want to map red lines better use repeats or change the polarity with sliders. Example of this: http://puu.sh/iehQ7/15c9021396.jpg
   in this part, vocal following is highly suitable. I want to do it very much, sorry
2. 00:19:645 (1,1) - The spinner is a little bit too close to the next note. There is something like a rule to have a full measurement of rest after a spinner on easies, but this song is pretty slow so it may not be applied here.
   I think it's no problem since low bpm song as you say. but if many other modders indicate the same, I'll reconsider
3. 01:09:568 (1,2) - ctrl+g the rhythm? You start with slider almost every downbeat so to keep consistency.
   mmm, keep. this pattern fits vocal, imo
   Really nice easy, try to fix the numerous polarity issues, those tend to confuse newbies.

[Normal]

1. 00:17:813 (4) - Make this lead to the next slider, the flow on easier diffs should be more straightforward. Ctrl+h solves this http://puu.sh/ieibt/9aa46edbf6.jpg
   OK, fix
2. 00:57:431 (6) - You normally skip the sound here 00:57:431 (6) - , so it feels weird if you suddenly put a note here. Consider removing the repeat and moving the slider forward on the timeline.
   I want to follow vocal
3. 01:12:087 (5) - ^
   ^
   Nice

[Hard]

1. 00:04:989 (1) - Put it a little higher, it's out of the grid by quite a lot.
   OK
2. 00:11:973 (3) - Feels strange since you tap on the blue tick, it doesn't work that well. I suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/ig7YW/17e5cc0571.jpg To emphasize the white tick where the stream starts.
   OK
3. 00:20:103 (1,2) - This doesn't play too well. It would be better if it was a simple stream with circles. Like this but with better placement :p http://puu.sh/ig8bs/8986113d79.jpg
   I don't want to make stream for hard-diff as possible
4. 00:25:141 (8,1) - The transition here plays weird, i see what you where trying to do but it doesn't work that well when playing. ctrl+j the slider and reposition it like this or something: http://puu.sh/ig8p1/76ad3456da.jpg
   not bad flow, imo
5. 00:34:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays strange, try something a bit more simple for a hard and make this 00:35:675 (4,5) - into a jump for emphasis. I would do something like this http://puu.sh/ig8IA/e54ab932fa.jpg
   i don't like 1~4 flow, sorry
6. 01:00:637 (5,6) - Ctrl+g the rhythm, 01:01:095 - this beat needs to be clickable, it's to strong for it not to be... please D:
   I think it's suitable considering drum sound. keep
7. 01:14:835 - Make this clickable, same reason as above.
   ^
8. 01:15:293 (6,7) - Same as 01:00:637 (5,6) -
   ^
   Not bad, flow can improve.

[Insane]

1. Ar 8.5 for the jumps?
   keep. let me think...
2. 00:01:325 (1,2) - Would be nice if the slider led directly to the circle. Like this: http://puu.sh/ig9bd/d7e8bb4795.jpg
   ok, your really right!
3. 00:17:813 (1,2,3,4) - These long jumps are a bit sudden, try making them shorter maybe?
   let me keep
4. 00:23:767 (1,2,3) - Make them parallel, like here: http://puu.sh/ig9A0/d203753926.jpg
   i want to keep a good flow
5. 00:45:751 (1) - Make this shorter to the red tick? To make it follow the guitar since there is nothing on the blue tick.
   fit to vocal, imo
6. 00:48:957 (6,7) - It would flow better with ctrl+g, it makes the jumps the same size.
   i don't intend to make star pattern, sorry
7. 00:50:102 (1,2,3) - Put this circles in a curved way, it would flow better to the next slider. Bad example: http://puu.sh/ig9Wo/e4c1c2bf09.jpg
   I intend to straight pattern
8. 00:52:393 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? it would make it more simple but the way you have them right now is a bit confusing.
   although inconsistent spacing, flow is not bad
9. 01:00:637 (2,3) - Same thing as hard, i really think this should change.
   same as hard
10. 01:05:446 (4,5) - Would work better as a triple.
    keep. but your idea is also good.
11. 01:14:721 (1) - Same as hard, emphasize that finish.
    i don't want to make stream at this part
12. 01:15:293 (2,3) - You know :p
    same as hard
13. 01:23:767 (1) - I don't get why the slowdown, nothing on the music calls for it.
    there is fading atmosphere
    Same comment as hard.

That's all, good luck!

Thank you for modding!
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Backstep wrote:

Hi M4M from Terra's Modding Queue

General
- Fine for me~

Easy

00:01:325 (1) - Remake slider like this? http://puu.sh/iooHQ/0ac15334ae.jpg
keep, sorry. I like this pattern
00:14:149 (3) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle to follow vocal?
fine!
00:17:813 (3) - Same above owo
fine!
00:28:347 (3) - End slider add finish together whistle?
k
00:40:255 (4) - Add finish too?
k

Normal

00:13:233 (2) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle to follow vocal?
in normal, hard, insane, keep about the whistle suggetion in this part
00:14:149 (4) - Start & end slider use addition soft-whistle to follow vocal like above reason.
^
00:16:897 (2,4,5) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle same reason.
^
00:29:263 (1) - Start slider you forget finish here.
? already added
00:36:591 (1) - Finish here pls ;w;
your right!
00:40:026 (4) - End slider add finish too xD
ok
00:58:576 (1) - Start slider you forget finish here.
unnecessary, imo

Hard

00:06:592 (3) - Change this slider a little curve like this? http://puu.sh/iopx0/3c822b3baf.jpg
good~
00:13:233 (2,4,7,8) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle to follow vocal?
keep
00:16:897 (3,5,1) - Same above.
^
00:29:263 (1) - Start slider add finish pls.
? already added
00:36:591 (1) - Finish here.
00:40:255 (1) - Start slider add finish here.
ok
00:42:316 (2) - About this note... First you use select all note choose addition Normal + Whistle all slider then click at end slider to remove addition Normal + Whistle you will get awesome fitting this song imo :3
interesting suggestion~ ok, i'll try it!
00:58:576 (1) - Start slider add finish here.
unnecessary

Insane

00:13:233 (3) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle to follow vocal?
keep
00:14:149 (1) - Whistle here same reason above.
^
00:15:065 (6,7) - Start slider use addition soft-whistle same above reason :3
^
00:16:897 (4,1,6) - Like above suggestion.
^
00:29:263 (1) - Start slider add finish.
? already added
00:36:591 (1) - Finish here?
ok
00:42:316 (2) - Like Hard diff suggestion imo :3
XD
00:50:789 (4) - Move this note to cover 00:49:415 (8) - then change direction end slider to your next note :3
i like my pattern, sorry
00:58:576 (1) - Start slider add finish.
unnecessary
01:05:446 (4,5) - Use ctrl+g pattern look be better imo.
i want to beat clapx2. so keep my pattern

I don't force your notes arrangement much, I think most of this fine for me :3

Good luck!

Thank you for modding!
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Sorry it took me a while but I am here as requested through Modding Queue

[Insane]

[Hard]

That's probably most I can do, I hope I could of been assistance to you

Kocari wrote:

Sorry it took me a while but I am here as requested through Modding Queue

[Insane]

1. You can turn off countdown as it is not recommended
   ? already removed
2. 00:02:012 - Add a note here for emphasis to the guitar and it doesn't leave space where space is not meant to be left. A note would sound significantly better so that it doesn't just play with the vocals but the sound of the instruments as well
   sorry, i want to follow vocal since game starting
3. 00:06:592 (5) - How about this rhythm so you can slur the vocals more and then switch back over to the instruments http://puu.sh/ipP9b/69f85d8518.jpg
   at this part, i intend to follow back music. so i want to start the slider from white line
4. 00:09:569 (3,4,5) - How about this flow, the one you have now, was just regular playing, I suggest to emphasize and move the notes around so the player has a sense of more flow and combinations to hit. This is probably simplest one to use http://puu.sh/ipPf9/beb26577c6.jpg or this to be fancy http://puu.sh/ipPjl/f02d101021.jpg
   nice! I like your triangle pattern~
   I wouldn't say anything is wrong with this difficulty, but I do believe it needs more aesthetics, as of now it's just a repeat of long sliders some curves and notes, I believe if you added more variety and patterns to this difficulty is will get even more interesting.
   hmm, I consider

[Hard]

• Mostly aesthetics but can move things around to make neater

1. 00:07:508 (5) - Like this area the notes don't really flow, something like this or fix some areas that each note clearly dialates to each other makes things really clean http://puu.sh/ipPDE/a1d1dbc279.jpg
   ok, fix!
2. 00:10:027 (3,1) - Weird where that 1 is placed and that it isn't blanketed also SV is changed which creates spacing problems and inconsistency with the way you mapped with .8 so far. I would suggest to keep it all the same until you get to the pick parts of the songs that shows that it progresses to go faster
   adjust the spacing. but SV 0.8x is no change
3. 00:20:103 (1,2,3,4) - This is awkward looking would look like something from an extra, test out different patterns and see what works for you http://puu.sh/ipPUe/1062b612dc.jpg
   mmm, your pattern is boring, imo
4. 00:24:912 (7) - Such a far jump for a hard
   it is allowed, imo
5. 00:27:431 (4,5,6) - These as well
   ^
6. 00:43:003 (3,4,5,6) - Same
   ^
7. 00:47:583 (1,2) - No need for this, as the music is representing 1/1 sliders but instead you changed it here
   i hear blue line'srhythm
8. 00:59:721 (3,4) - Pretty far gap because of 1/2 sliders
   considering flow and emphasizeing, i think no problem
   That's probably it but as far as I can tell, same as insane, but this time the DS is inconsistent, some parts of the song the spacing was far and some were too close. Make them similar to accordance with how you change SV so the map itself doesn't change during the process
   consider, too. but i want to keep SV changing

That's probably most I can do, I hope I could of been assistance to you

Thank you for modding!
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Hello! Mod from Chaos's modding team


Nice song and mapset

Good luck with Ranking

hello , sorry for delay , from my mod queue

nadapan wrote:

Hello! Mod from Chaos's modding team

[Easy]

1. 00:45:751 (1) - remove NC
   ok
   
2. 00:10:714 (4) - note is too low
3. 00:15:981 (1) - ^
4. 00:55:828 (2) - note is too low
5. 01:09:110 (4,1) - ^
6. Nice Mapping style and hitsounding. You have 1 problem that is you are putting the notes outside this "screen" which makes it hard to reach the notes (even though they're close)
   in demo play, its no problem leave aside edit screen

[Normal]

1. Put cirlce size on 3. 3.5 is too small for Normal
   i don't think so since there is easy-diff
2. 00:32:927 (1,2,3) - Symmetry is off
   fix
3. 00:55:370 (2,4) - the way they overlap is not beautiful ;_;
   i like this arrow pattern. sorry, keep
4. 00:57:431 (6) - blanket
   fix
   
5. 00:07:508 (4,5) - It's too high up
6. 00:10:256 (3) - note is too low
7. 00:29:263 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:38:881 (1,2,3) - too low
9. 00:46:438 (5) - ^
10. 00:59:492 (2) - note is too low
11. 01:05:904 (1) - ^
12. A lot of notes were "out of screen again" You used some more nice patterns in Normal
    same as easy

[Hard]

1. 00:20:103 (1,2) - this is too hard for Hard make it like this
   a little boring. sorry, no change
2. 00:59:721 (3,4) - the distance between those two notes are too hard for Hard
   several modders indicated the same. ok, fix
3. There were some patterns that were nice in this diff. Some other was abit too hard for Hard

Nice song and mapset

Good luck with Ranking

Thank you for modding!
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Chocox wrote:

hello , sorry for delay , from my mod queue

General
Untick for all difficulties

untick this

oh... ok i understand. i forgot the system

all else seems ok
sorry if my examples are bad

Easy
Just warning , avoid placing note outside grid , it often leads to slider/note outside map and cannot be qualified.
for example : 00:25:141 (3) - this slider almost touch HP bar , I'm not sure if you noticed but it's good if you did

img

in demo play field with normal skin, it's no problem
00:43:003 (3) - for head , remove Whistle and add Clap , you do this for all difficulties already I don't see why easy should be different
i mistaked, thank you!

Normal
Sorry but blanket here lacks quality , can improve~
fix some
00:09:569 (2,3) - Slider placement is bad imo , maybe try blanket

Before

After

your suggetion is also good~ but i want symmetric slider. it's suitable for this part, imo
The others are just ok-ok

Hard
NC every white tick better imo
i don't think so, especially hard, insane

Insane
00:03:615 (5) - Since white thick is slider , I suggest NC this
unnecessary, imo
00:29:950 (3,4) - I suggest remove slider and adding hit circles instead
i prefer mine
00:50:102 (1,2,3,4) - This flow is meh , I suggest changing it

bad example here , can try this and tweak it abit , up to you

if you decide to change to my example click this

So basically . 00:50:560 (3,4) is stacked to 00:49:186 (7)
00:50:331 (2) overlap 00:51:705 (2) (is that even the right word ><)

keep it. but intersting suggetion~

My General Thoughts
This mapset is decent , with more mods I'm sure it will be better Good luck to yuuu ~

Thank you for modding!
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EDIT: -_-

from my queue...

[General]

1. Check you AiMod (it's about the Countdown)

[Hitsounds]

1. not pretty sure whether this one fits for this map or not, but try this 2 below
2. soft-hitclap2
3. normal-hitclap

[Hard]

1. 01:01:782 (8,9) - i'd prefer this one into a slider with a reverse
2. 01:16:438 (9) - ctrl + G / 01:16:438 (9,10) - ^ (2 options)
3. 00:02:928 (4) - try to make it perfect blanket for 00:03:615 (5) -
4. 00:38:881 (1,2) - i'd prefer slider

[Insane]

1. 00:24:225 (3) - remove slider whistle
2. 01:23:767 (1) - slider tail should be at the white tick

GL!

EDIT: god, i hate double post -_-

-Hakurei- wrote:

from my queue...

[General]

1. Check you AiMod (it's about the Countdown)
   just fixed

[Hitsounds]

1. not pretty sure whether this one fits for this map or not, but try this 2 below
2. soft-hitclap2
3. normal-hitclap
   i like mine, sorry...

[Hard]

1. 01:01:782 (8,9) - i'd prefer this one into a slider with a reverse
   if do it, flow comes to be not good. so, keep
2. 01:16:438 (9) - ctrl + G / 01:16:438 (9,10) - ^ (2 options)
   ^
3. 00:02:928 (4) - try to make it perfect blanket for 00:03:615 (5) -
   u~m, unnecessary, imo
4. 00:38:881 (1,2) - i'd prefer slider
   i prefer triplet for following vocal

[Insane]

1. 00:24:225 (3) - remove slider whistle
   i mistaked... thanks!
2. 01:23:767 (1) - slider tail should be at the white tick
   no big sound at this white tick. so, i want to do that

GL!

Thank you for modding!
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Yo, M4M, thank you for the mod before :3
BUMP~

Let's start~
I don't know why but the song seems nostalgic >.< (I've never watched Darker than Black xD)
Instant like xD I might map the full version anytime soon xD

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

Nice song (and map)
Good luck~^^

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo, M4M, thank you for the mod before :3
BUMP~

Let's start~
I don't know why but the song seems nostalgic >.< (I've never watched Darker than Black xD)
Instant like xD I might map the full version anytime soon xD

[Easy]

1. 00:02:241 (2) - I think the slider kink (the red anchor) is too near to the slider's end, it don't look that good. I think you tried to support the tick eh? Maybe removing the anchor after the red one will make it look better. http://puu.sh/iGIU6/bf7f421649.jpg BTW, I don't like the flow from (1), maybe like this http://puu.sh/iGIWy/3485bc99e3.jpg
   sorry, i like my way
2. 00:09:111 there's a pretty big vocal sound here... Maybe you should add a note
   considering back music, i want to keep
3. 00:28:347 (3) - This don't look good with (2)... Maybe http://puu.sh/iGJcF/97b8ca673d.jpg or to keep the flow http://puu.sh/iGJfV/14265ff4e4.jpg
   keep. i prefer my way
4. 00:34:301 Ignoring the drum? .-.
   yes, i intend to follow vocal
5. 00:34:759 (2,3) - Like this? look better? http://puu.sh/iGJjg/986f46eac6.jpg
   nice!
6. 00:59:492 (3,4,5) - Make the symmetry better. http://puu.sh/iGJmq/b2e04a5bed.jpg This is good too btw http://puu.sh/iGJob/26dc7b0efe.jpg
   keep. next flow becomes not good, imo
7. 01:16:896 (1,2) - This don't look that good .-. personally I prefer like this http://puu.sh/iGJrB/de0301fae5.jpg
   i want to keep good flow and stack pattern
8. 01:16:896 (1,2) - Furthermore, I like this rhythm better : http://puu.sh/iGJw1/c7759aded1.jpg it covers up the vocal better imo.
   u~m, i prefer 4/1 rhythm
9. Nice Easy ^^

[Normal]

1. Woah, I think CS 3.5 is pretty small for Normal .-. Use CS 3 it'll make a better diff spread (you can use CS 3.5 for Hard)
   no problem, imo
2. 00:09:569 (2,3) - This kind of shape don't look good if you don't blanket them... I understand blanketing would cause overlap... So maybe change it like this http://puu.sh/iGJVM/59e5a482b0.jpg
   ok, i agree with you~
3. 00:14:149 (4) - This don't flow that nicely from the previous note... Like this would work better http://puu.sh/iGJYJ/e0f2879618.jpg
   considering next note, i want to keep it
4. 00:19:760 (1) - Maybe don't put the spinner at blue tick for Normal, just yet. Start it at red tick instead.
   k
5. 00:28:347 (4) - The flow to the next note is pretty bad... Like this? http://puu.sh/iGK3E/8c6a1ef01f.jpg
   i intend to make symmetric slider as 3
6. 00:36:591 Woah, you change SV? is that actually allowed on Normal? o-o
   no problem since my mapset has easy, imo
7. 00:47:583 (1,2) - Blanket?
   if make blanket, the flow comes to be bad...
8. 00:55:370 (2,4) - Maybe you tried to make slider bow, but it caused poor overlap instead >.< You have to change (4)'s shape
   keep. i don't have anotehr good idea
9. 01:04:989 (5) - I think you should avoid this on Normal. Using a single slider like you did before work nicely.
   ok, i follow many modders :3
10. 01:11:858 (4,1) - I think the stack is kinda confusing... I'd rather have this http://puu.sh/iGKeZ/48cff3eee8.jpg
    i think not so

[Hard]

1. As I said before, you could use CS 3.5 for better diff spread
   keep
2. 00:03:615 (4,5) - I think if you ctrl+g these two, it'll fit the vocal better. I mean so the "koe" part don't get mixed with "wo" (I hope I heard the lyrics correctly xD)
   you're right! fix~
3. 00:15:523 (8,1) - Blanket? or use an elbow slider http://puu.sh/iGKrH/8abcd8675e.jpg kinda like that
   oh, intersting! i'll use it<3
4. 00:20:103 (1) - Maybe ctrl+g? I don't really like this kind of 1/4 jump (I used it too, lol irony at it best xD)
   you also think so? umm, ok fix
5. 00:23:996 (6) - Again, the slider kink is too near to the end... Maybe move it a bit?
   on purpose
6. 00:27:660 (5,6) - Would flow better if you ctrl+g imo
   i intend up-down pattern
7. 00:34:530 (4,2,4) - This is an intentional overlap right?
   yes
8. 00:51:705 (2,3,4) - This rhythm : http://puu.sh/iGKIQ/aec3cddb24.jpg I think it'll cover the vocal better.
   i agree
9. 01:01:782 (8,9) - Honestly, I prefer stream than these xD On gameplay, but I think it's alright on mapping.
   i want to avoid stream in hard, sorry...
10. Somehow, I like you Normal more xD

[Insane]

1. OD 7? for light Insane like this, I think OD 8 is too high
   keep
2. 00:10:256 (1,3) - Make these two identical would look better I think.
   on purpose, sorry
3. 00:37:393 add a note here? the "i" of "osanai" fall there...
   "i" is a weak pronunciation
4. 00:42:316 (2) - I think this slider is kinda out of place... o-o
   folow guitar sound
5. 01:08:881 (5,1) - Blanket?
   i want to keep current flow
6. 01:23:767 (1) - End this at white tick and let the spinner start at blue tick.
   ok
7. Not bad, but kinda overmapped in my standard xD

Nice song (and map)
Good luck~^^

Thank you for modding!
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update!

Hello! Came from my queue!

[Easy]

1. 00:11:172 (5) - I think you could replace this with copy of 00:09:569 (3) - Ctrl+H.
2. 00:25:141 (3,1) - Blanket would be improved.
3. 00:47:583 (1) - You can end spinner also at 00:49:644 - , try this.
4. 01:14:148 (2,3) - Blanket would be improved.
5. 01:24:225 (1) - You can end spinner also at 01:28:690 -, try this.

[Normal]

1. 00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - I think you shouldn't put four clickable things in so less time. I suggest to replace (1,2) with slider.
2. 00:43:919 (1,2) - Blanket would be improved a bit.
3. 00:49:186 - You could fill this empty place, by replacing 00:48:957 (4) - with 1/2 slider.
4. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[Hard]

1. 00:09:569 (2,1) - Blanket would be improved a bit.
2. 00:17:813 (5,6,7,1) - This jump might be too big... Maybe make it smaller?
3. 01:18:728 (5) - Blanket would be improved.
4. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[Insane]

1. 01:18:499 (5,1) - improve blanket
2. 00:28:805 (5) - move bit left I meant right so it's not out of field.
3. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[]
Lol this is all what I found. really good mapset!
good luck!

smsh150 wrote:

Hello! Came from my queue!

[Easy]

1. 00:11:172 (5) - I think you could replace this with copy of 00:09:569 (3) - Ctrl+H.
   re-adjust
2. 00:25:141 (3,1) - Blanket would be improved.
   re-adjust
3. 00:47:583 (1) - You can end spinner also at 00:49:644 - , try this.
   keep. i prefer mine
4. 01:14:148 (2,3) - Blanket would be improved.
   re-adjust
5. 01:24:225 (1) - You can end spinner also at 01:28:690 -, try this.
   i prefer mine. but, your suggetion is also good

[Normal]

1. 00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - I think you shouldn't put four clickable things in so less time. I suggest to replace (1,2) with slider.
   since there is easy-diff, that's allowd, imo
2. 00:43:919 (1,2) - Blanket would be improved a bit.
   keep
3. 00:49:186 - You could fill this empty place, by replacing 00:48:957 (4) - with 1/2 slider.
   in the current pattern, i like the rhythm of circle x3, enpty, slider
4. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[Hard]

1. 00:09:569 (2,1) - Blanket would be improved a bit.
   re-adjust
2. 00:17:813 (5,6,7,1) - This jump might be too big... Maybe make it smaller?
   ok, fix~
3. 01:18:728 (5) - Blanket would be improved.
   unnecessary
4. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[Insane]

1. 01:18:499 (5,1) - improve blanket
   re-adjust
2. 00:28:805 (5) - move bit left I meant right so it's not out of field.
   i think no problem, out of field?
3. 01:24:225 (1) - same as in Easy diff ^

[]
Lol this is all what I found. really good mapset!
good luck!

Thank you for modding!
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hai hai queue ticket

[General]
NAISU SONGGUU

[easy]
00:01:325 (1) - this would flow a lot better if you blanketed this (unless it's by choice lol)
00:19:645 (1,1) - I think in easy more spinner recovery time is needed for this part

[Normal]
personally prefer CS3 Normals o3o
00:18:729 (5) - how about making this angled upwards so it doesnt get too close to the border haha (it overlaps the progress bar thing) http://puu.sh/iSqSB/913564fd00.jpg
00:36:591 (1) - dont overlap this, your 1/2s up to this point havent overlapped, and since its the beginning of the sv slow players will be confused
00:37:049 (2,3,4) - isnt great flow
00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - u shouldnt space them out so much, it's really hard to play lol. also i highly recommend mapping 00:41:858 - to be consistent with the vocals
00:47:583 (1) - curve it more to blanket lol
00:48:499 (2,3,4) - same as before, its really hard ;w;
00:56:515 (4) - this sliderend is covered up by the last one, strongly recommend you fix this

[hard]
00:20:103 (1,2) - change to repeat slider please, kicksliders are hard for hard diff ;w;
00:27:431 (4) - use less spacing because it looks like 1/1
00:28:347 (7) - put this farther away because the previous jumps make this look like 1/2 ;w;
00:28:347 (7,8,9) - bad flow :c
00:34:530 (4,1) - ^
00:42:316 (2) - remove sliderwhistle? doesnt fit imo
00:43:003 (3) - and flow
00:47:927 (2) - the guitars are on a constant 1/2 so this extended slider feels really off
00:54:912 (1) - finish
00:58:576 (1) - ^
00:59:721 (3) - change to circles o3o
01:04:072 (5) - a bit far ><
01:16:438 (9,10) - suggest reverse

[Insane]
00:03:615 (5,6,7) - doesnt really flow, try this? http://puu.sh/iSrpf/c05b9ba0ec.jpg
00:14:836 (4,5,6) - stacking the sliderend might be a little tricky :s
00:17:813 (1,2,3,4) - jumps so big??
00:21:019 (7) - no need for the change in direction imo
00:24:912 (4,5,6) - really troll pattern lol, change pls ;w;
00:29:950 (3) - why the kickslider?
00:34:988 (1,2) - ^ theres nothing on blue tick here
00:42:316 (2) - yeah doesnt fit imo
00:50:560 (3,4) - this flow isnt great ;w;

hmm, the structure seems to be lacking in the insane/hard diff right now...
if you fix the stuff i mentioned above (especially flow) and get a few more mods i can recheck this (:

Good luck and have fun until then!

Gaia wrote:

hai hai queue ticket

[General]
NAISU SONGGUU <3

[easy]
00:01:325 (1) - this would flow a lot better if you blanketed this (unless it's by choice lol)
i got the same indication before. so, ok fix
00:19:645 (1,1) - I think in easy more spinner recovery time is needed for this part
you think so? ok, delete spinner and add break

[Normal]
personally prefer CS3 Normals o3o
keep. if CS3, it becomes too close spacing and not good looking
00:18:729 (5) - how about making this angled upwards so it doesnt get too close to the border haha (it overlaps the progress bar thing) http://puu.sh/iSqSB/913564fd00.jpg
fix
00:36:591 (1) - dont overlap this, your 1/2s up to this point havent overlapped, and since its the beginning of the sv slow players will be confused
increase spacing
00:37:049 (2,3,4) - isnt great flow
00:40:713 (1,2,3,4) - u shouldnt space them out so much, it's really hard to play lol. also i highly recommend mapping 00:41:858 - to be consistent with the vocals
u~m, keep. i feel not too difficult for normal. if i get the same indication from others, i'll use 1/1 slider
00:47:583 (1) - curve it more to blanket lol
at this pattern, blanketting is not good flow, imo
00:48:499 (2,3,4) - same as before, its really hard ;w;
same as before
00:56:515 (4) - this sliderend is covered up by the last one, strongly recommend you fix this
remap

[hard]
00:20:103 (1,2) - change to repeat slider please, kicksliders are hard for hard diff ;w;
fix
00:27:431 (4) - use less spacing because it looks like 1/1
fix
00:28:347 (7) - put this farther away because the previous jumps make this look like 1/2 ;w;
00:28:347 (7,8,9) - bad flow :c
remap
00:34:530 (4,1) - ^
remap
00:42:316 (2) - remove sliderwhistle? doesnt fit imo
k
00:43:003 (3) - and flow
remap
00:47:927 (2) - the guitars are on a constant 1/2 so this extended slider feels really off
ok, i use 1/2 slider x3
00:54:912 (1) - finish
00:58:576 (1) - ^
ok, increase cymbal sound
00:59:721 (3) - change to circles o3o
fix
01:04:072 (5) - a bit far ><
avoid jump, add stack
01:16:438 (9,10) - suggest reverse
reverse x2 is confusing. so keep
[Insane]
00:03:615 (5,6,7) - doesnt really flow, try this? http://puu.sh/iSrpf/c05b9ba0ec.jpg
considering your idea, and remap
00:14:836 (4,5,6) - stacking the sliderend might be a little tricky :s
avoid stack
00:17:813 (1,2,3,4) - jumps so big??
decrease
00:21:019 (7) - no need for the change in direction imo
i want to keep white line rhythm. keep
00:24:912 (4,5,6) - really troll pattern lol, change pls ;w;
fix to the other stack pattern
00:29:950 (3) - why the kickslider?
following vocal
00:34:988 (1,2) - ^ theres nothing on blue tick here
you think it's unnecessary? ok, remap
00:42:316 (2) - yeah doesnt fit imo
delete
00:50:560 (3,4) - this flow isnt great ;w;
remap

hmm, the structure seems to be lacking in the insane/hard diff right now...
if you fix the stuff i mentioned above (especially flow) and get a few more mods i can recheck this (:
ok~ do my best!
Good luck and have fun until then!

Thank you for modding!
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