dosyeru wrote:

update
pls update before richard's mod comes (hope this isnt too late)

done

no kud

dosyeru wrote:

pls update before richard's mod comes (hope this isnt too late)

fast enough

Another
00:04:587 (4587|5) - 好像是没有的 不知道是不是我听错
00:10:283 (10283|4) - ghost note
00:15:220 (15220|6,15220|2) - 00:14:460 (14460|3,14460|6) - 00:14:745 (14745|7,14745|3) - 为啥是两个
00:15:979 (15979|2,16359|3) - 这些又是？
你红线的hithat到底取了没有?没有取得话这些note肯定就不该有 取了的话前面肯定漏写了
00:16:929 (16929|2,16929|7,16976|3,17024|4,17024|6,17118|5,17118|1,17213|6,17213|2,17308|0,17308|7,17308|5,17308|1) -
00:17:593 (17593|1,17593|5,17593|7,17688|2,17783|3,17878|6,17878|2,17973|5,17973|3,17973|7,18068|2,18068|6,18163|1,18163|5,18163|7) - 这两个地方我觉得排发比较奇怪
00:22:055 (22055|2) - 又来了..
00:23:194 (23194|7,23194|2,23289|5,23289|1,23384|3,23384|6,23384|0) - 这里也是排的有点难受
00:25:093 (25093|4,25093|6) - 两个?
00:25:188 (25188|2,25188|7) - 这里其实就应该啥都没有只有个盘子 BMS是有一个音就放一个note的 不是按照感觉放的
00:26:043 (26043|2,26043|7,26043|4) - 多了一个
00:26:232 (26232|2,26232|6,26327|5,26327|1,26422|7,26422|4) - 想写的话 这三个应该是三乱
这一段双乱排的有点...
00:27:182 (27182|7,27182|3) - 多放了一个啊
00:27:372 (27372|2,27372|4,27372|6) - 同上
00:28:131 (28131|1,28131|5) - ？？
00:28:321 (28321|7,28321|3,28321|5) - 应该只有一个啊
00:28:416 (28416|4) - 这里又少一个啊..你所有的旋律既然都是写两个为啥这就只有一个呢
00:28:511 (28511|1) - ？？
00:28:606 (28606|4) - 这也少一个啊..
这一段我先跳过去了 记住如果不论是什么style抓音都很重要 尤其bms 一个音就是一个note 固定的东西 你自己再检查一下这段...
00:34:017 - pattern上来说我建议你这一段跟前面对称一下 也搞个trill
00:36:391 (36391|2) - ？既然这里有那00:35:631 - 为啥没
00:37:055 - 排的有点难看;w; 这里既然听到的是旋律往下走 那note也可以往这个感觉去排
00:39:144 - 这个钢琴不要了?
00:52:055 (52055|6) - 对错了啊 蓝线
00:51:865 (51865|1) - 00:53:384 (53384|1) - 这里没音的啊 只有那个地鼓 仔细听
00:56:137 (56137|1) - ^
00:57:846 (57846|2,57846|5) - ghost note..
00:58:274 (58274|4) - ??
01:00:505 (60505|5) - ?
00:59:840 - 很卡手而且不好看...
01:00:600 - 怎么突然就不写了啊
01:01:359 (61359|1,61739|1,61929|1) - ？
这里按照音高排啊 你现在放的像开了random一样 这里明显的从高往低的楼梯啊
01:02:664 (62664|3) - unsnap?
01:03:827 (63827|7,63827|2) - 这种我后面就不赘述了...ghost note太多了
漏音也很多 比如01:05:631 - 01:05:821 - 这些都是modder没法帮你一个个检查过去的..做的时候就应该放慢下来听清楚...你可能要好好检查一下 我就先跳过这些了 整个kiai基本都是这个问题
顺带说一下01:39:397 (99397|6,99460|5,99524|4,99587|3,99650|4) - 这种尽量不要折返这一下 看起来有点蠢233

D‘s Extra
00:08:289 (8289|4,9429|7,9618|5,9808|4,10948|7,11137|5) - if you want you can just make every single one of them double notes. That's perfectly legit for #extra
00:12:941 (12941|4,13511|2) - those are kinda unnecessary imo
00:14:555 (14555|3) - delete?
00:14:840 (14840|4) - ^
00:16:359 (16359|3) - ^same idea and if you do so you may want to change the pattern a little bit, but those are minor things anyway
00:20:631 (20631|4,20916|2) - ^
00:22:055 (22055|5,22435|5) - ^
00:25:948 (25948|4,26043|5) - exchange columns
00:32:688 (32688|6) - add a note
00:33:827 - I would say two notes at column 2 and 6 are enough...or maybe 3, but 4(same as 00:33:637 (33637|7,33637|1,33637|3,33637|5) - ) is kinda overkill for me
00:37:625 (37625|5,37720|4) - delete?
00:41:612 - a optional sp key for the backgroup 1/4 streams, depend on you
00:55:853 (55853|6) - add a note
00:57:372 (57372|4) - I can't really hear this one
00:59:081 (59081|3,59081|1,59270|2) - should be here 00:59:175 -
01:08:764 (68764|3) - move to 01:08:574 (68574|3) - ? same as 00:33:827 -
if you are not following piano(and I suppose you are not) then 01:25:093 (85093|6) - shoule be at 01:24:903 (84903|6) -
01:38:005 - add a sp for crash
01:38:194 - ^
01:38:954 - ^
01:40:758 (100758|3) - should be double notes?
01:45:600 (105600|7) - add a note
I like this diff a lot!

GLHF~

ty for mods.
will apply on weekend

richardfeder wrote:

D‘s Extra
00:08:289 (8289|4,9429|7,9618|5,9808|4,10948|7,11137|5) - if you want you can just make every single one of them double notes. That's perfectly legit for #extra will try this next map
00:12:941 (12941|4,13511|2) - those are kinda unnecessary imo 12941|4 removed
00:14:555 (14555|3) - delete?
00:14:840 (14840|4) - ^
00:16:359 (16359|3) - ^same idea and if you do so you may want to change the pattern a little bit, but those are minor things anyway
00:21:675 (21675|6) - removed one note from this point instead
00:20:631 (20631|4,20916|2) - ^
00:22:055 (22055|5,22435|5) - ^
^^
00:25:948 (25948|4,26043|5) - exchange columns
00:26:043 (26043|5) - moved this to 3
00:37:625 (37625|5,37720|4) - delete?
00:37:150 (37150|6) - removed a note
00:37:720 (37720|6) - ^
00:55:853 (55853|6) - add a note, hm keep for a while
01:08:764 (68764|3) - move to 01:08:574 (68574|3) - ? same as 00:33:827 -
if you are not following piano(and I suppose you are not) then 01:25:093 (85093|6) - shoule be at 01:24:903 (84903|6) -
01:45:600 (105600|7) - add a note　keep this for a while
I like this diff a lot! ty

GLHF~

thank you for mods
update

richardfeder wrote:

Another
00:04:587 (4587|5) - 好像是没有的 不知道是不是我听错 已删~
00:10:283 (10283|4) - ghost note
00:15:220 (15220|6,15220|2) - 00:14:460 (14460|3,14460|6) - 00:14:745 (14745|7,14745|3) - 为啥是两

个
00:15:979 (15979|2,16359|3) - 这些又是？
你红线的hithat到底取了没有?没有取得话这些note肯定就不该有 取了的话前面肯定漏写了

以上都进行删除和位置调整~
00:16:929 (16929|2,16929|7,16976|3,17024|4,17024|6,17118|5,17118|1,17213|6,17213|2,17308|0,17308|

7,17308|5,17308|1) -
00:17:593 (17593|1,17593|5,17593|7,17688|2,17783|3,17878|6,17878|2,17973|5,17973|3,17973|7,18068|

2,18068|6,18163|1,18163|5,18163|7) - 这两个地方我觉得排发比较奇怪 全改了,但感觉

还是会爆炸> >
00:22:055 (22055|2) - 又来了.. 这里有音的
00:23:194 (23194|7,23194|2,23289|5,23289|1,23384|3,23384|6,23384|0) - 这里也是排的有点难受

同改
00:25:093 (25093|4,25093|6) - 两个? 没必要了。。
00:25:188 (25188|2,25188|7) - 这里其实就应该啥都没有只有个盘子 BMS是有一个音就放一个note的 不是按

照感觉放的 嗯
00:26:043 (26043|2,26043|7,26043|4) - 多了一个
00:26:232 (26232|2,26232|6,26327|5,26327|1,26422|7,26422|4) - 想写的话 这三个应该是三乱

我选择非人性
这一段双乱排的有点...
00:27:182 (27182|7,27182|3) - 多放了一个啊
00:27:372 (27372|2,27372|4,27372|6) - 同上
00:28:131 (28131|1,28131|5) - ？？
00:28:321 (28321|7,28321|3,28321|5) - 应该只有一个啊
00:28:416 (28416|4) - 这里又少一个啊..你所有的旋律既然都是写两个为啥这就只有一个呢
00:28:511 (28511|1) - ？？
00:28:606 (28606|4) - 这也少一个啊..
这一段我先跳过去了 记住如果不论是什么style抓音都很重要 尤其bms 一个音就是一个note 固定的东西 你自

己再检查一下这段...
00:34:017 - pattern上来说我建议你这一段跟前面对称一下 也搞个trill
00:36:391 (36391|2) - ？既然这里有那00:35:631 - 为啥没 改掉了
00:37:055 - 排的有点难看;w; 这里既然听到的是旋律往下走 那note也可以往这个感觉去排

当初我摆得好蠢
00:39:144 - 这个钢琴不要了? 我想我还是抓回去了
00:52:055 (52055|6) - 对错了啊 蓝线
00:51:865 (51865|1) - 00:53:384 (53384|1) - 这里没音的啊 只有那个地鼓 仔细听
00:56:137 (56137|1) - ^
00:57:846 (57846|2,57846|5) - ghost note..
00:58:274 (58274|4) - ??
01:00:505 (60505|5) - ?
00:59:840 - 很卡手而且不好看... 上面全re
01:00:600 - 怎么突然就不写了啊 打得时候基本基本听不清了
01:01:359 (61359|1,61739|1,61929|1) - ？
这里按照音高排啊 你现在放的像开了random一样 这里明显的从高往低的楼梯啊 这里音比

较乱 所以摆的比较开比较乱一些
01:02:664 (62664|3) - unsnap? 当初可能耳机问题 我摆成那样
01:03:827 (63827|7,63827|2) - 这种我后面就不赘述了...ghost note太多了
漏音也很多 比如01:05:631 - 01:05:821 - 这些都是modder没法帮你一个个检查过去的..做的时候就应该放慢

下来听清楚...你可能要好好检查一下 我就先跳过这些了 整个kiai基本都是这个问题 都进行二次调整
顺带说一下01:39:397 (99397|6,99460|5,99524|4,99587|3,99650|4) - 这种尽量不要折返这一下 看起来有点
蠢233 确实好蠢;w; rerere
GLHF~

再次谢谢pc哥~

dosyeru wrote:

update

done~

It's time to bubble.

Spy wrote:

It's time to bubble.

wow thanks~

接下来就是放置play 入土为安

I feel like someone's going yolo
Anyway I'm extremaly happy to see this getting close to qualify! I hope to see it ranked soon

Rebubble

S1234567
[Normal]
00:01:739 (1739|7,1834|1,1929|7,2024|1,2118|5) - i prefer 35353
00:15:979 (15979|3,16169|5,16359|7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3621380 at least you should fix rhythm
00:21:960 (21960|6,22055|2) - ^
00:24:903 (24903|0,25188|0,25473|0,25758|0,26043|0) - 35 or 17 i think
00:28:131 (28131|2,28321|5,28511|7) - ^^
00:35:726 (35726|3,35821|6,36011|3,36106|6,36486|2,36581|5,36770|2,36865|5) - 2525 3636 for pitch
00:39:144 (39144|1,39713|2) - move 75
00:58:321 (58321|2,58321|7) - delete one
01:07:245 (67245|5,67340|6,67435|7) - 765
01:09:713 - add 1
01:18:827 - add bass and melody sound
01:20:536 (80536|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3621415
01:21:960 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3621422
maybe from 01:27:182 (87182|2) - you copied,you should fix same point if you fix them
01:43:701 (103701|7,103796|6,103891|5) - 567
01:44:650 (104650|5,104650|2,104935|3,104935|6,105220|7,105220|4) - 47 36 25
01:51:865 (111865|1,112055|1) - 4

[Hyper]
00:17:878 (17878|5) - add 1
00:37:055 (37055|7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3625114
01:06:675 - add plz
01:12:751 - ^
01:18:827 - ^
01:43:131 - ^
01:51:865 (111865|2,112055|2) - move 4

[Another]
00:17:213 (17213|7,17308|5) - move to 5 1
00:17:973 (17973|7) - add S
[EXTRA]
change diff name D's Black Another?lol
00:12:751 (12751|6,12751|2,12846|2,12846|6,13036|7,13036|3) - 25 36 47
00:16:929 (16929|3,16929|1,17024|3,17024|1,17118|1,17118|3,17213|3,17213|1,17308|3,17308|1) - 序盤にしてこの5縦連はちょっと合わない気がします
小デニムを駆使したパターンに変更するといいかもしれません。参考として　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638616
00:23:036 (23036|2,23068|4,23131|6,23163|4) - 1/8なので・・・
00:41:612 (41612|0) - delete
01:39:381 (99381|3,99429|5,99476|2,99524|4,99571|6,99618|3,99666|5) - 1/6

end

shionelove wrote:

S1234567
[EXTRA]
change diff name D's Black Another?lol　
00:12:751 (12751|6,12751|2,12846|2,12846|6,13036|7,13036|3) - 25 36 47　少しアレンジしました
00:16:929 (16929|3,16929|1,17024|3,17024|1,17118|1,17118|3,17213|3,17213|1,17308|3,17308|1) - 序盤にしてこの5縦連はちょっと合わない気がします
小デニムを駆使したパターンに変更するといいかもしれません。参考として　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638616　こちらも
00:23:036 (23036|2,23068|4,23131|6,23163|4) - 1/8なので・・・applied
00:41:612 (41612|0) - delete ^
01:39:381 (99381|3,99429|5,99476|2,99524|4,99571|6,99618|3,99666|5) - 1/6 ^

end

ty
update

updated

i have to win this "pushing qualify button reaction test"lol

edit:WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!

shionelove wrote:

i have to win this "pushing qualify button reaction test"lol

edit:WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!

(っ’ヮ’c)ﾜｱ thanks!

yaaay congratz

I LOVE YOUR 8K MAP SO BAD PLEASE!

grats pocket & dosyeru, this map is really enjoyable & great

Elementaires wrote:

yaaay congratz

ExUsagi wrote:

I LOVE YOUR 8K MAP SO BAD PLEASE!

grats pocket & dosyeru, this map is really enjoyable & great

thanks XD

DIAO

DIO
congrats

Hello!

We have found some potential issues that we feel are important enough to address before continuing:


If you disagree with these suggestions, please reply to this thread justifying why so we can discuss alternatives.

Otherwise, please reply to this thread when these issues are resolved.

Thanks for working with us towards higher quality beatmaps, we hope to see your beatmap ranked soon!

###C

mod-n-run things, some additional small suggestion from me.. modding 8K is fun

S / 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7
[Normal]
00:22:055 (22055|3) - this note doesn't seems synced with the synth.. move it to 00:21:960 -
00:23:005 (23005|1,23100|6,23194|2,23289|4) - (optionally) make 1 3 5 7 pattern
00:28:131 (28131|1) - same like above, this note doesn't sync with the synth.. move it to 00:28:036 -
00:37:150 (37150|3,37245|7,37340|5,37435|2,37530|4,37625|6,37720|1,37815|4,37910|7) - i don't know, with common sense.. for me this 1/4 Long stream is just too much for Normal-Level player.. implying there's no EZ diff too
01:02:118 (62118|2,62213|2,62403|2) - ^ consider to not using jack.. 158 bpm tho

wow

[Hyper]
01:51:391 (111391|6) - to 2, and 01:51:486 (111486|3,111486|1) - to 5 7, optional
nice hyper..

[Another]
00:43:131 (43131|3) - to 1, like how Hyper do
01:14:555 (74555|4) - to 1, hyper has jack while another dont

[D's Another]
last kiai ends at 01:49:967 -
impressive diff..
00:18:732 - add some at 1, has same kick bass, but only layered with 1 note.. ==a
00:26:707 (26707|2,26992|2) - 00:27:467 (27467|3,27656|2,27846|3) - i expecting these spots to be empty.. feels like ghost notes when i play those..
same with the last kiai too, 01:27:277 (87277|2,87277|4) - these spots on each stanzas almost doesn't have sound to layer, YET its fun to play lol.. optional though

thank you guys for suggestions.

Starry- wrote:

D's EXTRA: 00:40:046 (40046|2,40069|4,40093|7) - (doesn't sound like a grace here), replaced them on the beat
00:41:588 (41588|1,41660|3,41707|5) - (Another diff seems more correct here) changed

ExUsagi wrote:

[D's Another]
last kiai ends at 01:49:967 - changed
00:18:732 - add some at 1, has same kick bass, but only layered with 1 note.. ==a added
00:26:707 (26707|2,26992|2) - 00:27:467 (27467|3,27656|2,27846|3) - i expecting these spots to be empty.. feels like ghost notes when i play those..
same with the last kiai too, 01:27:277 (87277|2,87277|4) - these spots on each stanzas almost doesn't have sound to layer, YET its fun to play lol.. optional though thx but keep them

update
http://puu.sh/k9k5p.zip

It kinda bugs me that Dosyeru's diff is the all caps while rest of the diffs isn't, mind changing EXTRA to Extra?

ok updated

thank everyone

weee hype, bring this to qualify again pls.. have some stars o/

看了看也没什么要改的 直接泡了

加油 -w-

check snap things,fixed confirmed

ExUsagi wrote:

weee hype, bring this to qualify again pls.. have some stars o/

thank your support XD

Bruce wrote:

看了看也没什么要改的 直接泡了

哇 谢谢小星姐

paperlens wrote:

加油 -w-

谢谢支持

shionelove wrote:

check snap things,fixed confirmed

saikou! o( >﹏<。)┛
ありがとうございます

aaaa re-hype! good luck on qualification

Re-grz

Disqualified. The snapping inconsistencies still remain at 00:44:650 - on Hyper compared to the rest of the difficulties. (Hyper at 00:44:713 (44713|6) - should be on 1/8 at 00:44:698).

Everything else seems fine.

Why you cant check them well in first disqualification but disqualify it in last day again.
I'm very disappointed, bye


谢谢各位朋友的支持
I am sry,dosyeru

no no no no no don't give up D: i was about to re-check this again to make sure there's nothing left...
sorry because last time i didn't check the notes consistency (because i thought everything was covered in 1st dq as well but no)
QQ don't give up

pocket-Gao wrote:

Why you cant check them well in first disqualification but disqualify it in last day again.
I'm very disappointed, bye


谢谢各位朋友的支持
I am sry,dosyeru

Did happened to me before
Good luck for re-qualication!

Mh...
1. It's a QAT's job to check for issues in a beatmap and disqualify it if there are any present within the beatmap. We do not check every single instance of said issue and state it in our post - that's your job and the BN's job. It is also your job and the BN's job to make sure there are no issues within the beatmap anyways before qualification; don't try to blame me.
2. You can hardly say I didn't mention anything in my previous post. Perhaps I should've mentioned it a bit more clearly, but I certainly mentioned the exact same time-stamp, and I mentioned the fact that there is snapping inconsistencies.
3. This definitely wasn't a last day disqualification. Judging from the 20~30 maps I've had to check this week, your map would've been ranked in another 4-5 days.
4. It'd be a shame for such a good mapset to be permanently unranked because the creator doesn't want to move a single note in a difficulty. You may say you are "tired" but realistically that is all you need to do - the rest is fine. You can call me for a rebubble if you must.

Really no need to give up when you're so close to ranking this. This is a good mapset and it'll honestly be a shame.

I am sorry

QQ are you going to fix them?

what...
no
come back ;w;

woc..发生了什么

oh c'mon, you only need to move the note -> update -> call BN to rebubble / requalify
very simple, please don't give up yet
i'm very love this map