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your novice and advanced doesn't look appropriate to me. its my first time seeing advanced with 4++ star (after the newest ranking criteria changes)
novice is also not appropriate with 3+ stars. consider renaming your diffs to advanced and advanced+ or advanced and light exhaust.00:07:827 - oopsie you forgot this one, should be 3 notes just like previous note for this beat.
00:18:811 (18811|0,18811|1,18901|0,18901|1,18990|1,18990|0,19079|3,19079|2,19169|2,19169|3,19258|3,19258|2,19347|0,19347|1,19526|2,19526|3,19704|0,19704|1) - ctrl H, PR. 343434 then 121212 reflects the pitch of that sound more accurately
00:19:347 (19347|0,19347|1,19526|3,19526|2,19704|1,19704|0) - put all of this at 34, no reason to alternate, exact same pitch.
00:36:490 - add a note to 4, much more appropriate, phase ending emphasis.
since you follow PR on this phase, i'll point out some redundancy.
01:07:762 (67762|1,67829|3) - change this placement to 4 and 2, this reflects the pitch more accrurately
01:08:097 (68097|0) - move this to 3, and readjust that short notes
01:11:044 (71044|2,71177|3) - should be 4 3
01:11:445 (71445|2,71579|1,71713|0) - should be 1 3 2 2
01:12:383 (72383|1) - should be 3
01:14:258 (74258|1,74392|2,74526|3) - should be 4 3 4
01:14:927 (74927|0) - move to 2
01:15:195 (75195|1,75329|2,75463|3) - should be 3 2 1
the rest looks good00:02:472 (2472|2,2472|3) - move this to 2 3, its much neater and express PR much better. jack on 3 and 2 beautifully
00:03:410 (3410|2,3544|1,3677|0,3811|1) - i think its better to utilise 2 note here and also map the beat because this is the highest diff, and the beat is so loud that its unreasonable not to follow that imo. try this http://puu.sh/iRC3j/5913fcd7bd.jpg
00:04:146 (4146|2,4213|3,4213|1,4280|2,4280|0,4347|3,4347|1,4481|2,4481|0) - same reason, try this http://puu.sh/iRC5g/741142bbdc.jpg 00:04:146 -
00:04:615 (4615|0,4615|1) - unreasonable, only 1 pitch, no need to use 2 note. delete 1
00:04:749 (4749|3,4749|2) - very obvious emphasised beat, utilise 3 or 4 notes. no reason to only use 2
00:05:151 - same reason as above, try something like this. http://puu.sh/iRC9d/6bdd78926a.jpg
00:05:686 (5686|2) - LN not following anything, delete. this is LN abuse.
if you're following the other sound, it should have started at 00:05:552 - already -Yeah Sounds like... a... *.*.*.*.*? XD I don't know how to explain this lol
00:05:820 - consider mapping that 1/4 x 3 beat. very loud..
00:06:892 - add a note to 1 and 4 for emphasis, a phase change here, no reason not to add. very obvious emphasised beat.
00:07:427 - 00:07:695 - 00:07:829 - again, consider adding for the same reason aforementioned above.
00:08:097 - add a note to 2 and 3, or 3 only. obvious emphasis on beat, this is gravity, i think there is no reason not to map it when its very obvious and loud.
00:08:499 (8499|2,8566|1,8633|0) - like this here you did map the beat. at the moment you're mapping them randomly, please make it consistent across the whole phase. and also there is still a lot of space left so no reason not to add
00:09:035 - add a note to 2 and 3, same reason as above, emphasised beat.
00:09:302 - try this, i think it reflects the song much better and appropriate, taking into account of hand balance AND emphasis as well. http://puu.sh/iRCon/2744ffbad8.jpg
00:10:240 - use 3 notes here, phase change and emphasised beat, you need to signify that for better readability - It like hard -> harder -> hardest. Next part follow the three notes XD
00:14:526 - add a note to 2, sub-phase change, emphasised beat. - ^
00:16:936 - add a note to 1, different beat emphasis- ^
00:17:472 - add a note to 4, different beat emphasis as well- ^
00:17:874 - different beat emphasis, consider this. http://puu.sh/iRCyu/822e42a0fa.jpg - ^
00:18:276 (18276|0,18343|1,18410|2,18477|3) - optional but you can continue the 2 notes beat trill to here as well, so change it to 12 34 if you want.
00:19:883 - obvious beat emphasis, no reason not to use 3 here, so add 1 more
00:27:718 (27718|2,27718|3,27785|0,27785|1,27852|3,27852|2) - unreasonable to use 2, only faint pitched instrument, this is different with preceeding notes in which there is audible beat, only use 1 note here.
00:27:919 - use 3 or 4 notes here, phase change and emphasised beat. - it's same Effect sound
00:28:454 (28454|1,28454|2) - same with above, utilise 3 or 4 notes, phase change.
00:28:722 (28722|3,28722|0,28722|2) - since you use 3 here, no reason not to follow my suggestion above, current arrangement is very difficult to read and apparently ignoring the emphasise of the beat as well as signification of the phase change.
00:32:606 (32606|2,32606|0) - only faint notes, no reason to use 2 here, utilise 1 note only.
00:37:026 - need 1 more note, phase change with emphasised beat, no reason not to add.
00:50:151 - until 00:51:490 - , utilise 2 notes for every 4/4 beat (on that white lines) obvious emphasised beat, i think expressing it would be much more appropriate.
00:51:892 - phase change, emphasised beat, yet only 1 LN here, this is unreasonable. please add 2 or 3 notes more for the emphasis and better readability
00:51:490 (51490|3,51490|1,51624|3,51624|1) - utilising 3 notes here would be much more appropriate since this is GRAVITY, and also the emphasise of the beat justify 3 notes. - I'll consider it
00:52:160 - until 00:53:633 - , same reason as above.
00:54:035 - same reason as above, please recheck the whole phase.
00:54:369 - should be a note here, the stream is continuous and consistent.
00:56:512 - ^^^^^'
00:58:655 - ^^^^^^
01:06:490 - adding a note to 3 would be suitable to emphasise the end of the phase as well.
01:07:561 - from here onward i shall take into account PR. because this is GRAVITY, and also there is not a lot of notes, there is NO REASON not to consider PR .
01:07:561 (67561|2,67829|1,68097|0) - wrong arrangement
01:08:097 (68097|0) - move to 3
01:08:901 (68901|1,69035|2) - same pitch, jack it and move it to 4.
01:10:240 (70240|0) - move this to 2
01:10:508 (70508|1,70575|2) - move this to 1 and 2
01:10:642 (70642|3) - move this to 3
01:10:910 (70910|2) - move to 2
01:11:044 (71044|1,71177|0) - move to 4 and 3.
01:11:445 (71445|1) - move to 1
01:11:579 (71579|2,71713|3) - move to 4 and 3
01:11:847 (71847|2) - move to 2
01:11:847 (71847|1,71847|0,72115|0,72115|1) - only 1 pitch exist here, no reason to use 2, delete 1 note. and adjust accordingly - I follow the SDVX effect. You know XD
01:12:383 (72383|1) - move to 3
01:13:186 (73186|2,73320|2) - move to 4
01:14:392 (74392|0,74526|1) - move to 2 and 4, that LN has the same pitch with 01:14:258 (74258|3) -
01:14:794 (74794|3,74927|2) - move to 3 and 2
01:15:195 (75195|0,75329|1,75463|2) - move to 3 2 1
01:17:606 (77606|3,77606|0) - inconsistent, add another note, you did that 01:16:669 (76669|1,76669|3,76669|0) -
01:18:410 (78410|3,78544|2,78677|1,78811|3) - same reason as in the beginning, no reason not to map the beat as well, this is GRAVITY.
01:18:945 (78945|2) - no audible loud pitch here, only a continuation of the BG sustained pitch that is VERY FAINT, delete.
01:19:079 (79079|0,79146|1,79213|2,79280|3,79347|1,79414|2,79481|1,79548|2,79615|0,79615|1,79749|1,79749|0) - see my note at the beginning of the song, this is exactly the same with the same issue.
01:22:829 - add a note, 2 note is appropriate here. currently its inconsistent with earlier pattern
01:23:097 (83097|1,83365|1,83633|1,83901|1) - should have 2 notes here, emphasised beat for every 4/4. keep it consistent.
01:24:169 (84169|1,84169|0,84235|3,84235|2,84302|1,84302|0,84369|2,84369|3,84436|1,84436|0,84503|2,84503|3,84570|1,84570|0,84637|2,84637|3,84704|1,84704|0) - same, no reason to suddenly change to beat trill 12 34, keep the arrangement from before for consistency, there is no change or shift in beat emphasis, only that 4/4 white line where you need to utilise 2 notes. -It's for player's playable. need hard -> harder
01:24:704 - utilise 3 or 4 ntoes here, end of phase with emphasised beat
01:25:240 - should have 3 notes here, rearrange.
01:25:307 - stream should start at 2 because you need to use 3 notes for consistency for the earlier notes.
01:39:302 (99302|3,99302|0) - 1 note is enough, 2 is unreasonable, only faint melody here. no need to use 2
01:51:356 (111356|1,111356|3,111423|0,111423|2,111490|3,111490|1) - pattern is unsuitable. should be 2 1 2 (note counts) instead of 2 2 2. the middle does not have emphasised loud beat. so revamp the whole section. current arrangement even though its balanced, does not reflect the actual song in a decent manner and thus rearranging would be extremely recommended. - But It's almost same pitch ;w;
01:52:695 (112695|1,112695|3,112762|2,112762|0,112829|3,112829|1,112963|3,112963|2,113030|0,113030|1,113097|3,113097|2) - except for these ones in which case 2 2 2 would be the appropriate one, please be careful with how you map them.
please recheck your diffs carefully, at the moment you're ignoring the emphasis of the phase change and certain beat, making it extremely difficult to read the map and play it for the first couple of times.
furthermore, in my opinion your gravity is problematic because you spike the difficulty until 5. something star due to your ending here 01:54:035 -
thus it is much better if you raise the overall diffs by adding some more notes whenever possible. the beat is loud, this song is very heavy on beat as well, overmapping in my opinion, is non-existent in this type of song, 5.5 star is still reasonable to be mapped for this song.
your current arrangement of gravity is, in my opinion, overmapped. you add more notes to part which do not need a lot of notes, yet you do not utilise enough notes on part where you actually can justify the usage of 2 or 3 or even 4 notes chord. please consider this carefully
of course because the BPM is very high, please make sure not to make 1/4 jack because eventhough the beat justifies it i think it will be extremely difficult to press.
in this instance you need to actually readjust. but current arrangement of your map, no. you need to change several aspects especially those that i have mentioned above.
try to observe ichi's diff for example, he utilises emphasise appropriately, you can analyse how he map higher diffs. - Yeah. It really need improve. and I didn't fix this from first made. Maybe... I made it February and I upload it May. So It need more improve and self modding. Thanks again for your suggest and modding this ;w; Actually. I want to make it delay for improve. XD Thanks
overall the map (gravity diffs) needs a lot of improvements however it is very good for a first try! good luck
Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
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