Minamotoya feat. 3L - Hagetsu · forum

Narcissu

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-07-16T01:10:27+00:00

隨便吐槽一下【【【

額……這歌詞故事版毫無存在感我覺得不用開故事版警告，我的ceui 也沒開。而且有必要帶上羅馬音麼……感覺像中文帶拼音

[Normal]

03:08:326 (5) - DS

03:16:386 (2) - 也是DS，這段降到1.1是可以的但是同一個顏色裏面不能改DS

[Hard]

OD +1 ? 你的noraml 和 insane 都沒和AR差2這麼多，另外Insane的OD建議降一點，二連節奏比較吃ACC

[Insnae]

01:08:102 (1,2,3,4) - ah …… 感覺你肯定是因為擠不下了甩旁邊去了，前面三個放下面擠一擠或者分兩個一組？

01:13:140 (4,5) - 這個實際上有堆疊效果不會疊在一起，這邊我覺得這樣好點↓↓↓

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sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2015-07-16T08:29:25+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
隨便吐槽一下【【【

額……這歌詞故事版毫無存在感我覺得不用開故事版警告，我的ceui 也沒開。而且有必要帶上羅馬音麼……感覺像中文帶拼音 sb不会→ →，反正开了懒得关了

[Normal]

03:08:326 (5) - DS √

03:16:386 (2) - 也是DS，這段降到1.1是可以的但是同一個顏色裏面不能改DS √

[Hard]

OD +1 ? 你的noraml 和 insane 都沒和AR差2這麼多，另外Insane的OD建議降一點，二連節奏比較吃ACC 三围都经过我（对pp）的精心测量

[Insnae]

01:08:102 (1,2,3,4) - ah …… 感覺你肯定是因為擠不下了甩旁邊去了，前面三個放下面擠一擠或者分兩個一組？确实是因为放不下了，不过这样顺flow挺好的

01:13:140 (4,5) - 這個實際上有堆疊效果不會疊在一起，這邊我覺得這樣好點↓↓↓ 有一点偏差不管了，我觉得你这个不好看

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thx

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-07-20T01:14:14+00:00

臥槽我很久以前就想開這個的。。。不知道你接不接in gd

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2015-07-20T01:19:53+00:00

Mackenzie wrote:
臥槽我很久以前就想開這個的。。。不知道你接不接in gd

泡我好不好

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-07-20T01:28:47+00:00

sodarose wrote:
Mackenzie wrote:
臥槽我很久以前就想開這個的。。。不知道你接不接in gd
泡我好不好

fuel

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2015-07-20T01:39:06+00:00

Mackenzie wrote:
fuel

好吧收吧

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-07-23T03:51:04+00:00

ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Torn Moon (sodarose) [Mackenzie's Lunatic].osu

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245,93,204893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,127,205117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,127,205229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,127,205341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,1,205565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,208,205789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,60,206013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,60,206125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,60,206237,6,0,P|112:117|129:189,1,135
142,201,206684,2,0,L|132:301,1,90
196,130,207132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,207356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,207468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,207580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,215,207804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,346,208028,5,0,0:0:0:0:
142,201,208252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,349,208475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,208699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,208811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,275,208923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,215,209147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,130,209371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,346,209595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,346,209707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,346,209819,6,0,L|317:337,1,135
334,332,210266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,201,210490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,237,210714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,69,210938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,69,211050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,69,211162,2,0,P|235:120|240:186,1,90
416,238,211610,6,0,L|507:234,1,90
314,237,212058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,337,212281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,144,212505,2,0,P|424:146|373:148,1,90
374,147,212841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,147,212953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,337,213177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,237,213401,6,0,P|277:180|312:64,1,180
416,238,214072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,307,214296,2,0,L|128:294,1,90
374,147,214744,2,0,P|328:153|256:159,1,90
280,156,215080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,154,215192,5,0,0:0:0:0:
270,153,215304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,339,215640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,215975,6,0,L|199:309,1,45
152,138,216199,2,0,L|132:189,1,45
184,43,216423,5,0,0:0:0:0:
174,43,216535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,35,216647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,27,216759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,27,216871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,35,216983,6,0,L|94:32,1,90
338,95,217431,2,0,P|291:106|248:123,1,90
205,238,217878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,138,218102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,233,218326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,340,218550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,340,218662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,340,218774,5,0,0:0:0:0:
249,166,218998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,303,219222,2,0,P|392:307|459:296,1,90
205,238,219669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,223,219893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,359,220117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,151,220341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,151,220453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,151,220565,6,0,L|328:266,1,90
210,26,221013,2,0,P|219:82|228:156,1,90
205,238,221460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,221684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,186,221908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,114,222132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,114,222244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,114,222356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
401,36,222580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,205,222804,2,0,P|309:255|307:326,1,90
312,76,223252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,186,223475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,114,223699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,223923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,224035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,224147,6,0,L|98:232,1,90
326,346,224595,2,0,P|277:352|230:360,1,90
414,248,225043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,369,225266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,255,225490,2,0,P|303:208|311:151,1,90
308,165,225826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,165,225938,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,2,226162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,148,226386,2,0,L|403:141,1,90
247,50,226834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,34,227058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,165,227281,2,0,P|312:211|317:264,1,90
316,255,227617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,255,227729,6,0,L|414:248,1,90
182,362,228177,2,0,P|140:355|82:325,1,90
245,215,228625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,360,228849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,274,229072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,116,229296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,116,229408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,116,229520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,255,229744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,97,229968,2,0,P|154:144|156:189,1,90
241,343,230416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,215,230640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,255,230863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,235,230974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,207,231086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,174,231198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,141,231311,6,0,B|66:149|66:149|136:145,1,90
287,67,231759,2,0,P|285:118|276:186,1,90
222,6,232207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,108,232431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,151,232655,2,0,P|190:198|196:247,1,90
352,328,233102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,233326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,233550,2,0,P|171:339|118:330,1,90
395,234,233998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,240,234222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,234446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234893,6,0,P|303:151|304:95,1,90
482,73,235341,2,0,P|482:117|481:162,1,90
352,328,235789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,146,236013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,255,236237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236684,5,0,0:0:0:0:
481,162,236908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,346,237132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,146,237356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,237580,2,0,P|302:334|254:324,1,90
395,234,238028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238475,6,0,P|303:147|304:192,1,90
191,360,238923,2,0,P|188:315|188:270,1,90
307,277,239371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,239595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,294,239819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240266,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,166,240490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,240714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,270,240938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,90,241162,2,0,P|220:49|209:-7,1,90
45,121,241610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,241834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,241946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,242058,6,0,L|344:167,1,90
108,322,242505,2,0,P|74:318|-9:311,1,90
188,270,242953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,377,243177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,226,243401,2,0,P|99:186|112:105,1,90
268,53,243849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,53,243960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,210,244184,6,0,L|264:204,1,45
105,136,244520,6,0,L|172:122,1,45
249,288,244856,6,0,L|204:297,1,45
411,222,245192,6,0,L|409:267,1,45
322,210,245416,2,0,L|326:135,1,45
393,106,245640,1,0,0:0:0:0:

PP瞬間爆炸
音效還沒上
另外你這個bg畫質感人，給你找了個1366的換上吧 http://puu.sh/j9rmk/40f1ddacdd.jpg

z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2015-08-02T07:16:38+00:00

机智的李师傅
m4m

Mackenzie's Lunatic

01:45:490 (6) - -6度
03:17:505 (2) - ctrl+g
最高难度这么下节奏，没问题吗
Insane
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5) - 开堆叠效果看
做的不错，sl建议拉到2，因为有些梗堆叠起来很难看
Normal
关掉gs一个个调整下间距

good luck

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-08-03T05:15:22+00:00

Sorry I am late. Here is my modding^^

Black is Personal comments

Bold Black is Highly recommended

Red is Unrankable

[General]

For BG resolution recommend is 1366x768 and 1024x768. So you can find accord size or use image editing software to solve this problem.
Sliderslide is not fit on this map. So suggest to mute it.
You need unified all difficulty's end time are the same.

[Mackenzie's Lunatic]

Rhythm part :

00:03:065 - and 00:03:289 - Miss the beat, please don't miss it on the highest difficulty, so 00:02:953 (4,5) - change to this will be better.
SPOILER

00:04:744 (5,6) - 00:06:535 (3,4,5) - 00:10:117 (5,6,7) - 00:11:908 (5,6,7) - 00:17:281 (3,4,5) - 00:19:072 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:20:863 (4,5,6,7) - 00:22:655 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:24:446 (3,4,5) - 00:26:237 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:28:028 (3,4,5) - Use the same ways above to change it.

02:39:669 - to 02:52:207 - and 03:36:983 - to 04:03:625 - Also use the same ways to change it.

00:08:326 (3,4,5) - Here a bit different, but you can try this.
SPOILER

00:14:819 - Miss the beat, recommend to add a circle, also you can add a slider with 00:14:595 (1) -

00:29:147 - The same as above problem, recommend to add a circle, also you can add a slider with 00:28:923 (1) -

00:43:475 - ^

01:28:028 - You can reference other difficulty to add a objects to unified drain time.

03:21:535 (3,1,2) - Hard to read and also hard to play, 1 and 2 just change to 1/4 slider as well, also you can change to 1/4 reverse slider.

03:34:744 (4,5,1,2) - After the slider put a odd number stream is hard to play, you can change to 1/4 slider or 1/4 reverse slider.

04:05:752 - Here add a spinner to 04:11:013 - ?
Hitsound part :
00:51:535 (5,6,7) - 00:53:774 (8) - 00:55:117 (4,5,6) - Miss the whistle

01:48:849 (5,6,7) - 01:51:087 (8) - 01:52:431 (4,5,6) - ^

03:00:490 (5,6,7) - 03:02:729 (7) - 03:04:296 (5,6) - ^
Compose part :
00:05:192 (6) - This slider more curve then the flow will more smooth, so try this?
SPOILER

00:28:923 (1,2) - This two partition 1/1 beat, but spacing just 0.83x, too close on here. You need put them more far.

00:32:841 (2,3) - Here is no need to put so far, 3 can stack on 00:32:505 (1) -
SPOILER

00:48:177 (6) - Flow not smooth. You can try this, then the path of 00:47:953 (5,6,1) - will be better.
SPOILER

01:20:192 (5,1) - Blanket?

01:22:655 (1,3) - 01:44:819 (3,6) - 01:49:072 (6,1) - ^

[Insane]

Use OD7 will more fit on this difficulty.
Rhythm part :

00:03:514 (5,6) - Recommend to change to 1/1 slider because even number stream is hard to play. So try this.
SPOILER

00:05:305 (5,6) - 00:07:096 (5,6) - 00:10:677 (5,6) - 00:12:468 (5,6) - 00:17:841 (5,6) - 00:19:632 (5,6) - 00:21:423 (5,6) - 00:23:214 (5,6) - 00:25:005 (5,6) - 00:26:796 (5,6) - 00:28:587 (5,6) - Use the same ways above to change it.
02:39:669 - to 02:53:998 - Also use the same ways to change it.

00:58:811 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Even number stream too hard. So 6 7 8 9 change to 1/4 sliders?

01:26:237 - Slider tail are not clickable, also 01:26:013 - miss the beat, so i suggest change to this will more suitable.
SPOILER

01:56:125 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - and 03:22:095 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Use the same ways above to change it.
SPOILER

02:53:438 (3,4,5,6) - Even number stream too hard. I suggest change to 1/4 slider.

03:29:707 - Don't miss it, use the 1/4 slider with 03:29:595 (8) -

03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.
Hitsound part :
00:51:311 (4,5,6) - 00:54:446 (3) - 00:55:341 (6) - Miss the whistle

01:48:625 (4,5,6) - 03:00:266 (4,5,6) - ^
Compose part :
00:08:326 (2,1) - Stack not nice, it you care your map's appearance, then fix it.

00:50:863 (2,3,4) - This overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap, you can try this.
SPOILER

01:00:266 (3) - ctrl+G will make flow more smooth, then behind can try this.
SPOILER

01:02:505 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G will make flow more smooth.

01:20:416 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G then 01:20:192 (6,7) - blanket.
SPOILER

01:30:155 (2,5) - Blanket not nice.

01:48:177 (2,3,4) - The same reason, this overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap.

02:02:953 (6) - More curve will more attractive.
SPOILER

02:14:371 (7,1) - Flow not smooth, clockwise rotation 20 degree then put in situ. Then 02:15:266 (2) - put more far.
SPOILER

02:50:080 (5,1) - Blanket not nice.

02:59:819 (2,3,4) - The same reason, this overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap.

03:15:043 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G will make flow more smooth.

03:23:326 (2,3) - Flow not smooth, anticlockwise rotation 15 degree then put in situ.

[Hard]

Rhythm part :
00:47:729 (3) - Recommend to follow whistle hitsounds, so change to 3 circles or sliders will better.

01:45:043 (3) - to 02:56:684 (3) - Are same as above problem. Use the same ways to fix it.

01:25:789 (4) - The same problem with Insane difficulty reference as above.

03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.
Compose part :
02:59:371 (1,4) - Here use straight flow is not fit, I suggest more curve look like this.
SPOILER

03:07:766 (3,1) - Avoid overlap, change to this?
SPOILER

03:28:475 (2,6) - Too crowded, you can try this.
SPOILER

[Normal]

Rhythm part :
03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.
Compose part :
00:06:535 (2,3) - Here DS is 1.25x. In low difficulty, you need keep your DS in same setting and don't deviation more than +-0.05x.

00:13:699 (2,3) - 00:20:863 (2,3) - 00:25:341 (3,4) - 00:28:923 (3,4) - 00:56:684 (2,3) - ^

01:03:849 (2,3) - Here 1.34x

01:42:356 (1,2) - 01:52:655 (6,1) - 02:44:147 (2,3) - 02:49:520 (4,1) - 03:06:535 (3,4) - 03:32:953 (6,1) - ^

00:15:490 (4,1) - Low difficulty avoid inverse flow, so 00:16:386 (1) - ctrl+H then put in situ.
SPOILER

00:25:341 (3,4) - Blanket not nice.

Nice map, Good luck~

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2015-08-03T06:53:26+00:00

z1085684963 wrote:
机智的李师傅机智的z1就这么水了2kd
m4m
Mackenzie's Lunatic
01:45:490 (6) - -6度
03:17:505 (2) - ctrl+g
最高难度这么下节奏，没问题吗
Insane
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5) - 开堆叠效果看往下拉了一点没事了
做的不错，sl建议拉到2，因为有些梗堆叠起来很难看不懂先不管
Normal
关掉gs一个个调整下间距好像没必要
good luck

thx

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2015-08-11T11:37:03+00:00

Kencho wrote:
Sorry I am late. Here is my modding^^
Black is Personal comments

Bold Black is Highly recommended

Red is Unrankable
[General]
For BG resolution recommend is 1366x768 and 1024x768. So you can find accord size or use image editing software to solve this problem.
√
Sliderslide is not fit on this map. So suggest to mute it.听不出问题

You need unified all difficulty's end time are the same.√

[Insane]
Use OD7 will more fit on this difficulty.原本我就是这样设的，等李师傅改摸的时候讨论下

Rhythm part :

00:03:514 (5,6) - Recommend to change to 1/1 slider because even number stream is hard to play. So try this.长懒改
SPOILER

00:05:305 (5,6) - 00:07:096 (5,6) - 00:10:677 (5,6) - 00:12:468 (5,6) - 00:17:841 (5,6) - 00:19:632 (5,6) - 00:21:423 (5,6) - 00:23:214 (5,6) - 00:25:005 (5,6) - 00:26:796 (5,6) - 00:28:587 (5,6) - Use the same ways above to change it.
02:39:669 - to 02:53:998 - Also use the same ways to change it.

00:58:811 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Even number stream too hard. So 6 7 8 9 change to 1/4 sliders? 不难，原本我是按最高难度做的，其他的一样

01:26:237 - Slider tail are not clickable, also 01:26:013 - miss the beat, so i suggest change to this will more suitable. 我觉得现在挺好
SPOILER

01:56:125 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - and 03:22:095 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Use the same ways above to change it.
SPOILER

02:53:438 (3,4,5,6) - Even number stream too hard. I suggest change to 1/4 slider.

03:29:707 - Don't miss it, use the 1/4 slider with 03:29:595 (8) - √

03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.
√
Hitsound part :
00:51:311 (4,5,6) - 00:54:446 (3) - 00:55:341 (6) - Miss the whistle

01:48:625 (4,5,6) - 03:00:266 (4,5,6) - ^ 不改，我就是打算这样

Compose part :
00:08:326 (2,1) - [b]Stack not nice, it you care your map's appearance, then fix it.

00:50:863 (2,3,4) - This overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap, you can try this.
SPOILER

01:00:266 (3) - ctrl+G will make flow more smooth, then behind can try this.
SPOILER

01:02:505 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G will make flow more smooth.

01:20:416 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G then 01:20:192 (6,7) - blanket.
SPOILER

01:30:155 (2,5) - Blanket not nice.

01:48:177 (2,3,4) - The same reason, this overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap.

02:02:953 (6) - More curve will more attractive.
SPOILER

02:14:371 (7,1) - Flow not smooth, clockwise rotation 20 degree then put in situ. Then 02:15:266 (2) - put more far.
SPOILER

02:50:080 (5,1) - Blanket not nice.

02:59:819 (2,3,4) - The same reason, this overlap not beautiful. I suggest don't overlap.

03:15:043 (7) - The same reason, ctrl+G will make flow more smooth.

03:23:326 (2,3) - Flow not smooth, anticlockwise rotation 15 degree then put in situ.
部分修了。今长滴鸡肠唔想睇啊

[Hard]
Rhythm part :
00:47:729 (3) - Recommend to follow whistle hitsounds, so change to 3 circles or sliders will better.x。理由没想好

01:45:043 (3) - to 02:56:684 (3) - Are same as above problem. Use the same ways to fix it.

01:25:789 (4) - The same problem with Insane difficulty reference as above.

03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.

Compose part :
02:59:371 (1,4) - Here use straight flow is not fit, I suggest more curve look like this. 没什么不好的
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03:07:766 (3,1) - Avoid overlap, change to this? 我很喜欢现在这样
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03:28:475 (2,6) - Too crowded, you can try this. √
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[Normal]
Rhythm part :
03:40:565 - to 04:05:640 - You need to finish it to make sure all difficulty's end time are the same. You can
reference Mackenzie's Lunatic to fix it.

Compose part :
00:06:535 (2,3) - Here DS is 1.25x. In low difficulty, you need keep your DS in same setting and don't deviation more than +-0.05x.

00:13:699 (2,3) - 00:20:863 (2,3) - 00:25:341 (3,4) - 00:28:923 (3,4) - 00:56:684 (2,3) - ^

01:03:849 (2,3) - Here 1.34x

01:42:356 (1,2) - 01:52:655 (6,1) - 02:44:147 (2,3) - 02:49:520 (4,1) - 03:06:535 (3,4) - 03:32:953 (6,1) - ^

00:15:490 (4,1) - Low difficulty avoid inverse flow, so 00:16:386 (1) - ctrl+H then put in situ. 没看懂，现在明显更顺手
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00:25:341 (3,4) - Blanket not nice.ALL fix
Nice map, Good luck~

thx

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Sakaue Nachi 2015-09-03T14:03:26+00:00

M4M, 神曲

[General]
这个标题不知道有没有错，已经有个rank的版本可以参考一下： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/187417

[Mackenzie's Lunatic]
整体感觉有很多可以二连的地方都1/2带过了有点偷懒，那些地方下点功夫感觉会挺好玩的，比如这里开始的一段03:36:983 (1) -
00:08:326 这里开始用一堆1/4滑条感觉会比较合适，类似的地方也是
00:37:766 可以补一个圈在滑条头那里感觉挺合适
其他看不出什么

[Insane]
00:09:222 (1) - 这个感觉方向向左点多几个红点好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3625486
00:17:281 (2,3,4,5) - 类似这种节奏可以改善下，把那个音补上会比较好感觉，可以改成这种类似 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3625510
00:44:483 (6) - 建议这里开始nc，现在实在太难分辨
01:01:162 (1,2) - ctrl+g
01:40:789 (2) - 这个删掉感受下，感觉会有趣点
02:55:341 (4) - 感觉这个太远了，相比你前面的，03:03:849 (5,6) - 类似这种距离就差不多了

[Hard]
00:55:341 (5,1) - blanket
其他没啥

[Normal]
00:07:431 (3) - 这个好像下了点，往上一点点
00:51:759 (4,5,1) - 01:06:087 (4,5,1) - 01:49:072 (4,5,1) - normal叠3个不合适啊。。。后面类似的我不说了
03:15:490 (1) - 这里开始怎么变成1.1x的间距了

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2015-09-10T16:08:59+00:00

m4m

[Normal]

00:56:684 (2) - 最后一个whistle去掉影响finish效果
01:53:998 (2) - ^
03:05:640 (2) - ^

[Hard]

00:03:513 - 这种音第一反应都是要点的用滑条尾压过去不太合适
00:12:692 (4) - 蓝线换成note好很多
00:15:826 (3) - ^
01:28:699 - wocao 为什么空下来后面也是
01:54:893 (1) - 开stack能看出来这个和上面离得太近了
02:53:438 (3) - 我很莫名蓝线有音红线没音你要打鼓也是拉到后面的蓝线为什么在红线停了

[Insane]

00:03:402 (4) - 和hard一样小哥你这串轨略严重啊要跟蓝线就别跟白线我建议重新斟酌一下节奏
00:12:692 (6) - 可以叠在后面那个note上标志一下蓝线起还好玩点
00:44:147 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ar8搞急停前面还半遮挡太闹心了
01:38:550 (6) - 还是开stack看看没坏处
01:41:460 (5,6) - 同上不过这个凑合还能接受

差不多就这样吧 gd没啥好摸的

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2016-01-24T08:03:12+00:00

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249,288,244856,6,0,L|204:297,1,45
411,222,245192,6,8,L|409:267,1,45
322,210,245416,2,8,L|326:135,1,45
393,106,245640,1,8,0:0:0:0:

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2016-02-05T10:59:12+00:00

1. Title Unicode change to "破月"
2. tags added "Comiket80" and change in tags "minamotoya" to "minamotrance"

no kudosu

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2016-03-05T13:47:41+00:00

M4M ~~本来有点懒摸了，突然发现你已经摸了~~
[General]
SB的歌词有点问题，得重做一下。你是搜的百度吧，汉字全部转成简体了。找日文歌词可以考虑去雅虎Japan。

歌词

一度手にしたはずの
偽物のような現実を
追いかけていく旅の
果てに求める夢がある

昨日より今日の自分は
前に進めてるかなって
分からないけど今はただ
答えが見つかると信じて

今は何もかわらなくても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
君の想いを力に変えて

闇に包まれたこの世界を
照らす一筋の光となれ
星一つ無い空に舞う
破れた月のように

手を伸ばせば届くような
偽物で出来た現実を
振り払うように僕は
ただひたすらに走り続けた

今日よりも明日（あす）の自分が
前に進んでるように
苦しいけれど今はただ
信じて現在（いま）生きてくよ

もしも僕が力尽きても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
僕の願いを流れと変えて

時が淀んだこの世界を
壊す一筋の導となれ
波一つ無い海照らす
破れた月のように

昨日より今日の自分は
何か変われているから
分からないけど今はただ
拓ける未来を信じて

今は何も変わらなくても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
僕の決意を刃に変えて

闇に閉ざされたこの世界を
救う一筋の剣となれ
星一つ無い空に舞う
破れた月のように

[Mackenzie's Lunatic]
03:15:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这部分感觉挺不规律的。有时三连有时单点加滑条有时折返，打的时候感觉怪怪的

[Insane]
00:23:102 (4) - 删掉
00:40:453 (4,5) - 删掉单点，滑条挪远
00:44:147 (5,1) - 这个太容易读错了。不过也看的出来你是故意这么放的，自己考虑吧。主要这个梗不是全图经常会见到，所以突然出现个不好读的挺突兀的
01:41:460 (5,1) - ^
02:04:744 (4) - 按照前面的节奏应该是3/4
复制粘贴大法好

[Hard]
00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard里好像有点丧病0 0

[Normal]
00:09:222 (1) - 有点高，碰到血条了

美丽

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-03-06T11:14:09+00:00

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
M4M ~~本来有点懒摸了，突然发现你已经摸了~~
[General]
SB的歌词有点问题，得重做一下。你是搜的百度吧，汉字全部转成简体了。找日文歌词可以考虑去雅虎Japan。
歌词
一度手にしたはずの
偽物のような現実を
追いかけていく旅の
果てに求める夢がある

昨日より今日の自分は
前に進めてるかなって
分からないけど今はただ
答えが見つかると信じて

今は何もかわらなくても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
君の想いを力に変えて

闇に包まれたこの世界を
照らす一筋の光となれ
星一つ無い空に舞う
破れた月のように

手を伸ばせば届くような
偽物で出来た現実を
振り払うように僕は
ただひたすらに走り続けた

今日よりも明日（あす）の自分が
前に進んでるように
苦しいけれど今はただ
信じて現在（いま）生きてくよ

もしも僕が力尽きても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
僕の願いを流れと変えて

時が淀んだこの世界を
壊す一筋の導となれ
波一つ無い海照らす
破れた月のように

昨日より今日の自分は
何か変われているから
分からないけど今はただ
拓ける未来を信じて

今は何も変わらなくても
月の灯り満ち欠ける様に
僕の決意を刃に変えて

闇に閉ざされたこの世界を
救う一筋の剣となれ
星一つ無い空に舞う
破れた月のように
sb我问下作者意见。~~毕竟是失踪人口~~
[Mackenzie's Lunatic]
03:15:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这部分感觉挺不规律的。有时三连有时单点加滑条有时折返，打的时候感觉怪怪的

[Insane]
00:23:102 (4) - 删掉好
00:40:453 (4,5) - 删掉单点，滑条挪远好
00:44:147 (5,1) - 这个太容易读错了。不过也看的出来你是故意这么放的，自己考虑吧。主要这个梗不是全图经常会见到，所以突然出现个不好读的挺突兀的
01:41:460 (5,1) - ^ 前两个kiai都是这样
02:04:744 (4) - 按照前面的节奏应该是3/4 不会改
复制粘贴大法好

[Hard]
00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard里好像有点丧病0 0 蓝线起不好处理

[Normal]
00:09:222 (1) - 有点高，碰到血条了我这看没有，edit里看离出界还有点距离

美丽

美丽

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2016-03-08T10:35:16+00:00

M4M
[Storyborad]
糍粑提供的歌词应该没什么问题了顺便最好不要带假名注音
然后我觉得进副歌那一下闪太弱了加强一点

[Lunatic]
前奏、间奏、尾段感觉可以map出很多二连还有很多比较复杂的节奏作为最高难度我觉得不应该把这么明显的节奏放掉显得太简单跟insane的星数也没拉开
00:14:147 (5) - 我觉得没有理由这个位置比前面的连打高出那么一点
01:18:065 (3,4) - 这应该算是没叠好吧……？
03:01:946 (3,4) - ↑

[Insane]
00:29:371 (3) - 这个slider调头的角度我觉得太过了别几乎全部都压回到slider身上
01:16:386 (5) - 突然用circle结尾导致01:16:610 顿一下不爽换成slider
01:34:744 (7) - ↑
02:13:699 (5) - ↑
03:11:013 (4) - ↑ 不过这里由于相对较弱就换一个摆法可以在03:11:237 补一个circle然后把03:11:460 (5,6) 换成slider

别的没什么好说的了 GL

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-03-08T13:51:15+00:00

m4m~

[General]

Letterbox關掉吧，你應該知道那是什麼

[N]

01:04:744 (3) - 尾巴彎的很沒必要啊
02:48:625 (3) - 這個危險啊，箭頭遮擋
03:53:102 (3) - ^

感覺沒什麼問題，很標準

[H]

00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 現在這一串在Hard裡是無法接受的，連打過多又是偶數連，玩死人嗎??
00:23:550 (1) - 往上彎吧，別貼到滑條00:22:990 (3) - ，這個也是03:58:475 (1) -
00:44:483 (5,1) - 我覺得這個space沒有增加到這麼大的意義在，Hard要的是容易讀，但又不至於太難，逆這樣放已經分不出這裡是不是1/4...後面所有的地方我就不提了
01:14:595 (3,4) - 為什麼不用3/4了??
03:50:752 (3) - 這個折點沒意義啊

請記住這是Hard，你在map Hard

[I]

00:44:147 (5,1) - 這個有點太坑了，建議不是1/1的長距離不要這樣疊，01:41:460 (5,1) -
01:43:252 (4,5) - 不太懂這裡為什麼變space，前面也有一個，我覺得正常擺就好了
02:10:117 (3,4) - 這個還是3/4比較帶感，強烈建議改掉。前面也有一個一樣的地方我漏掉了
02:10:901 - circle??
02:39:669 (1) - 複製的太嚴重了，怎麼都沒動過啊

主要是外觀感覺不太好讀圖，這我無能為力

[L]

00:13:699 (1,2,3,4) - 這個違規，就算是連打也不能完全遮擋走向

其他不看了，沒問題

有點水啊

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2016-03-08T15:00:52+00:00

来水个
[Insane]
00:10:453 (3,4) - 往右点，现在flow不是很顺
00:23:550 (1) - 弯的角度不太好
00:34:072 (4) - 试试这个，现在有点挤https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4681947
00:43:475 (2) - 这个位置应该比00:43:028 (5) - 更靠上一点
00:44:147 (5,1) - 拉开一点吧遮挡比较难看
00:49:520 (4) - 不叠上吗
00:50:863 (2,4) - 对称一点？现在不太好看
01:05:416 (4,5) - 换成个短slider如何
01:41:460 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - 复制的有点明显（后面不看惹（

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3) - 再顺时针转一点？
00:34:072 (4,1) - 不建议两个重复的
01:56:684 (1) - 碰到了
03:22:095 (3) - ^
03:57:916 (3,4,1) - 有点远而且不太好看

其他俩没什么问题，就是李师傅的复制粘贴有点明显了

mcdmt

34 posts

Joined December 2015

mcdmt 2016-03-19T13:42:25+00:00

Normal
04:05:640 (1) - 换成转盘+finish很好
03:23:550 (2) - 往下弯
03:35:416 (1) - 转盘尾巴设在在大白线那

Hard
02:56:684 (3) -

00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8) - 某萌新:

把连打换成slider比较好
00:13:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 某萌新:

↑
01:05:528 (3,4) - 放在下面不容易读图啊-.-
Insane
00:29:371 (3,4) - ↑，但是内个slider有一点看不清
02:58:475 (3) - ctrl+h一下然后拖过去更流畅
03:08:326 (1) - 0.75x更好
Lunatic
00:15:490 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -

连打分开一点吧，落在一起不好读图

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2016-03-27T11:03:23+00:00

哇，艘大肉丝，送你个水摸QWQ
[ Insane ]
00:43:699 (3,5) - 这两个本身叠在一起，短滑读图难度就高了很多，后面一串连打我觉得拖开更好，打了几次这里都不大舒服
01:02:953 (1) - 这里来个ctrl+g感觉更符合，这里有一个重音而且人声也是提高音调了，跳起来更舒服
01:40:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 个人看法这一块角落跳单点有点多，刚好NC地方有个重音，不如就不要全部堆在角落这块跳？

09kami

828 posts

Joined August 2010

09kami 2016-04-28T08:23:16+00:00

09kami wrote:
[Mackenzie's Lunatic]

00:14:819 (2) - 这个是漏音吗？还是故意缺的故意缺的话我建议1那个要加个重音音效把这里盖过去

01:11:013 (3) - 这个重音比前面01:10:789 (2) - 要响啊 ....不过看了下前面是个滑条所以放远点也没啥好说的

02:09:110 (5,1) - 这个最好偏移点比较好读拉到x:320 y:64的位置

02:16:274 (7,1) - 同样可以偏移点

03:47:617 (7,1) - 同上

03:01:610 (2,3,4) - 没叠好

03:46:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个地方可以稍微改下调成五角星

03:49:072 (5,6,2,3) - 这个角度有点不友好

[Insane]

00:12:692 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 虽然BPM很低但3.6的难度出现16个连打不合适吧

00:44:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里还是不要做这种比较好直接用一个弧度比较好看

01:41:796 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 同上

00:46:386 (5) - 这种的话最好是叠起来或者拉远点总之不要碰到（我纠正下你这里可以叠起来但最好和后面几个地方叠的距离差不多比如01:15:938 (3,4) - 01:14:595 (3,4,5) -

01:00:714 (4) - 同上

01:02:953 (1,2,3,4) - 这个做的有点偷懒应该是糊的把角度不好看也不是很流畅

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-05-13T11:43:05+00:00

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
M4M, 神曲

[General]
这个标题不知道有没有错，已经有个rank的版本可以参考一下： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/187417

[Mackenzie's Lunatic]
整体感觉有很多可以二连的地方都1/2带过了有点偷懒，那些地方下点功夫感觉会挺好玩的，比如这里开始的一段03:36:983 (1) -
00:08:326 这里开始用一堆1/4滑条感觉会比较合适，类似的地方也是
00:37:766 可以补一个圈在滑条头那里感觉挺合适
其他看不出什么

[Insane]
00:09:222 (1) - 这个感觉方向向左点多几个红点好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3625486
00:17:281 (2,3,4,5) - 类似这种节奏可以改善下，把那个音补上会比较好感觉，可以改成这种类似 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3625510
00:44:483 (6) - 建议这里开始nc，现在实在太难分辨
01:01:162 (1,2) - ctrl+g
01:40:789 (2) - 这个删掉感受下，感觉会有趣点感觉怪怪的
02:55:341 (4) - 感觉这个太远了，相比你前面的，03:03:849 (5,6) - 类似这种距离就差不多了我前面就是这样的

[Hard]
00:55:341 (5,1) - blanket
其他没啥

[Normal]
00:07:431 (3) - 这个好像下了点，往上一点点
00:51:759 (4,5,1) - 01:06:087 (4,5,1) - 01:49:072 (4,5,1) - normal叠3个不合适啊。。。后面类似的我不说了
03:15:490 (1) - 这里开始怎么变成1.1x的间距了

quote=["imoutosan"]m4m

[Normal]

00:56:684 (2) - 最后一个whistle去掉影响finish效果
01:53:998 (2) - ^
03:05:640 (2) - ^

[Hard]

00:03:513 - 这种音第一反应都是要点的用滑条尾压过去不太合适怕作难
00:12:692 (4) - 蓝线换成note好很多
00:15:826 (3) - ^
01:28:699 - wocao 为什么空下来后面也是
01:54:893 (1) - 开stack能看出来这个和上面离得太近了
02:53:438 (3) - 我很莫名蓝线有音红线没音你要打鼓也是拉到后面的蓝线为什么在红线停了

[Insane]

00:03:402 (4) - 和hard一样小哥你这串轨略严重啊要跟蓝线就别跟白线我建议重新斟酌一下节奏
00:12:692 (6) - 可以叠在后面那个note上标志一下蓝线起还好玩点
00:44:147 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ar8搞急停前面还半遮挡太闹心了
01:38:550 (6) - 还是开stack看看没坏处
01:41:460 (5,6) - 同上不过这个凑合还能接受

差不多就这样吧 gd没啥好摸的[/quote]

all fix

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-05-13T12:07:57+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
M4M
[Storyborad]
糍粑提供的歌词应该没什么问题了顺便最好不要带假名注音
然后我觉得进副歌那一下闪太弱了加强一点

[Lunatic]
前奏、间奏、尾段感觉可以map出很多二连还有很多比较复杂的节奏作为最高难度我觉得不应该把这么明显的节奏放掉显得太简单跟insane的星数也没拉开
00:14:147 (5) - 我觉得没有理由这个位置比前面的连打高出那么一点
01:18:065 (3,4) - 这应该算是没叠好吧……？
03:01:946 (3,4) - ↑

[Insane]
00:29:371 (3) - 这个slider调头的角度我觉得太过了别几乎全部都压回到slider身上我觉得过得去
01:16:386 (5) - 突然用circle结尾导致01:16:610 顿一下不爽换成slider
01:34:744 (7) - ↑
02:13:699 (5) - ↑
03:11:013 (4) - ↑ 不过这里由于相对较弱就换一个摆法可以在03:11:237 补一个circle然后把03:11:460 (5,6) 换成slider fix'

别的没什么好说的了 GL

DreaM117er wrote:
m4m~

[General]
Letterbox關掉吧，你應該知道那是什麼
其实不知道
[N]

01:04:744 (3) - 尾巴彎的很沒必要啊好看就留着了
02:48:625 (3) - 這個危險啊，箭頭遮擋箭头可以读就没问题
03:53:102 (3) - ^
感覺沒什麼問題，很標準
[H]

00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 現在這一串在Hard裡是無法接受的，連打過多又是偶數連，玩死人嗎??
00:23:550 (1) - 往上彎吧，別貼到滑條00:22:990 (3) - ，這個也是03:58:475 (1) -
00:44:483 (5,1) - 我覺得這個space沒有增加到這麼大的意義在，Hard要的是容易讀，但又不至於太難，逆這樣放已經分不出這裡是不是1/4...後面所有的地方我就不提了
01:14:595 (3,4) - 為什麼不用3/4了??
03:50:752 (3) - 這個折點沒意義啊
請記住這是Hard，你在map Hard
[I]

00:44:147 (5,1) - 這個有點太坑了，建議不是1/1的長距離不要這樣疊，01:41:460 (5,1) -
01:43:252 (4,5) - 不太懂這裡為什麼變space，前面也有一個，我覺得正常擺就好了我想突出重音而已，在kiai里比较爽
02:10:117 (3,4) - 這個還是3/4比較帶感，強烈建議改掉。前面也有一個一樣的地方我漏掉了我认为不是很好
02:10:901 - circle??
02:39:669 (1) - 複製的太嚴重了，怎麼都沒動過啊是根本没动过orz
主要是外觀感覺不太好讀圖，這我無能為力
[L]

00:13:699 (1,2,3,4) - 這個違規，就算是連打也不能完全遮擋走向
其他不看了，沒問題

有點水啊

Wing My Way wrote:
来水个
[Insane]
00:10:453 (3,4) - 往右点，现在flow不是很顺
00:23:550 (1) - 弯的角度不太好这个是想包住前面的
00:34:072 (4) - 试试这个，现在有点挤https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4681947 感觉有点乱

00:43:475 (2) - 这个位置应该比00:43:028 (5) - 更靠上一点
00:44:147 (5,1) - 拉开一点吧遮挡比较难看
00:49:520 (4) - 不叠上吗不
00:50:863 (2,4) - 对称一点？现在不太好看这里对称不好看
01:05:416 (4,5) - 换成个短slider如何不好
01:41:460 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - 复制的有点明显（后面不看惹（

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3) - 再顺时针转一点？
00:34:072 (4,1) - 不建议两个重复的为什么啊
01:56:684 (1) - 碰到了就是要碰到
03:22:095 (3) - ^
03:57:916 (3,4,1) - 有点远而且不太好看这个和前面一样啊

其他俩没什么问题，就是李师傅的复制粘贴有点明显了很明显我的在整段复制啊

DMTfarc wrote:
Normal
04:05:640 (1) - 换成转盘+finish很好低难度对转盘是有要求的

03:23:550 (2) - 往下弯对称
03:35:416 (1) - 转盘尾巴设在在大白线那
Hard
02:56:684 (3) - 不好看
00:12:692 (4,5,6,7,8) - 某萌新:
把连打换成slider比较好
00:13:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 某萌新:
↑
01:05:528 (3,4) - 放在下面不容易读图啊-.-
Insane
00:29:371 (3,4) - ↑，但是内个slider有一点看不清我觉得挺容易看的，满大街的摆法
02:58:475 (3) - ctrl+h一下然后拖过去更流畅现在也挺流畅的
03:08:326 (1) - 0.75x更好跟前面等距啊
Lunatic
00:15:490 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
连打分开一点吧，落在一起不好读图

[ Abhor ] wrote:
哇，艘大肉丝，送你个水摸QWQ 挖，啊巴赫姐姐
[ Insane ]
00:43:699 (3,5) - 这两个本身叠在一起，短滑读图难度就高了很多，后面一串连打我觉得拖开更好，打了几次这里都不大舒服
01:02:953 (1) - 这里来个ctrl+g感觉更符合，这里有一个重音而且人声也是提高音调了，跳起来更舒服
01:40:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 个人看法这一块角落跳单点有点多，刚好NC地方有个重音，不如就不要全部堆在角落这块跳？不知所措.jpg

[quote="09kami"]
[Mackenzie's Lunatic]

00:14:819 (2) - 这个是漏音吗？还是故意缺的故意缺的话我建议1那个要加个重音音效把这里盖过去

01:11:013 (3) - 这个重音比前面01:10:789 (2) - 要响啊 ....不过看了下前面是个滑条所以放远点也没啥好说的

02:09:110 (5,1) - 这个最好偏移点比较好读拉到x:320 y:64的位置

02:16:274 (7,1) - 同样可以偏移点

03:47:617 (7,1) - 同上

03:01:610 (2,3,4) - 没叠好

03:46:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个地方可以稍微改下调成五角星

03:49:072 (5,6,2,3) - 这个角度有点不友好

[Insane]

00:12:692 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 虽然BPM很低但3.6的难度出现16个连打不合适吧都是I了没什么

00:44:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里还是不要做这种比较好直接用一个弧度比较好看

01:41:796 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 同上

00:46:386 (5) - 这种的话最好是叠起来或者拉远点总之不要碰到（我纠正下你这里可以叠起来但最好和后面几个地方叠的距离差不多比如01:15:938 (3,4) - 01:14:595 (3,4,5) - 我觉得碰到不一定差

01:00:714 (4) - 同上

01:02:953 (1,2,3,4) - 这个做的有点偷懒应该是糊的把角度不好看也不是很流畅还可以啦~[quote]

谢谢各位

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-05-13T15:27:11+00:00

Normal
Nice

Hard
Nice

Insane
·00:02:953 (2,3,4) - 这里我用None打的时候没太明显问题，但用DT打就感觉有点难掌控节奏了（原因是按第一次在白线，按第2次是在蓝线，按第3次是下一个蓝线，白-蓝-蓝，节奏距离不均匀）尤其第一次打的时候。我建议换成这样。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144180 （白蓝-蓝-蓝）→白接前面的白，过度蓝节奏又可以均匀打下去。
·00:04:745 (2,3,4,5) - 这里同上，另外3连打中间的白线可以不放，跟他的主节奏就行。（后面还有几处相同的）
·00:12:692 (6,1,2) - 这里的开头是蓝线，然后就是很长的连打，个人认为可以在白线开始先放两组回连打滑条（ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144272），再放连打，既可以缩短长连打，又能更好的掌握节奏感。
·01:16:274 (4) - 建议删掉短滑条，放一个圈圈在蓝线，放一条白线到红线线的滑条。
·01:33:737 - 这个蓝线没必要放圈圈。
·01:35:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里的节奏建议重做一下，感觉打不出人声的感觉。你试试这种节奏能不能表达出来。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144594
·02:40:565 - 和第一点一样。
·03:41:460 - 和第一点一样。

Lunatic
·00:14:819 - 这里加一个圈圈。
·00:15:602 (2,1) - 这两个用一个滑条连接好点？后面的也是，我DT打这里没有感觉。
·03:35:080 (5,1,2) - 这种红线结尾后3连打真的没见过，或者可以删了白线和蓝线的圈圈，放一个短滑条。
·03:35:640 (7) - 这个圈圈建议放在下一个短滑条上，因为短滑条是放在蓝线上的，这样起手打短滑条也会容易点。
·评价：这个难度kiai部分切指有点难。

GL~

Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-05-17T03:47:22+00:00

m4m

[Alex Li]
？？？？节奏下错了吧
00:02:953 (4,5) - 明显是xx xx--你却下成了x-- x--
节奏后面就不说了，都是类似这种二连的
排列很强，毕竟是李师傅

[I]
00:46:386 (5) - 叠的话建议叠多一些，这种只压了一点点的感觉不好看
01:00:714 (4) - ^
我建议这种统一一下间距，比如00:53:102 (3,4) -
可以没啥特别想说的了。。

低难度不大会看就不看了
水摸射个星好了~~都这么多sp了可以飞了啊~~

gl

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2016-05-27T13:48:52+00:00

@vert 李师傅不一定是跟的这条轨啊……

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2016-05-27T15:12:04+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
@vert 李师傅不一定是跟的这条轨啊……

亲妹妹

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-05-27T15:28:14+00:00

Mackenzie wrote:
Hakurei Yoru wrote:
@vert 李师傅不一定是跟的这条轨啊……
亲妹妹

woc失踪人口

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2016-06-07T23:31:13+00:00

強迫症mod沒有改
關於節奏，我適當的忽略的鋼琴音，所以不要算進去了

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168,97,229968,2,0,P|154:144|156:189,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,343,230416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,215,230640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,255,230863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
55,235,230974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,207,231086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,174,231198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,141,231311,6,0,B|66:149|66:149|136:145,1,90,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,67,231759,2,0,P|285:118|276:186,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,6,232207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,108,232431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,151,232655,2,0,P|190:198|196:247,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,233102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,233326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,233550,2,0,P|171:339|118:330,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,234,233998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,240,234222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,234446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,234893,6,0,P|303:151|304:95,1,90
482,73,235341,2,0,P|482:117|481:162,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,235789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,146,236013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,255,236237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,236684,5,0,0:0:0:0:
481,162,236908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,346,237132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,146,237356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,237580,2,0,P|302:334|254:324,1,90
395,234,238028,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,238475,6,0,P|303:147|304:192,1,90
191,360,238923,2,0,P|188:315|188:270,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,277,239371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,239595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,294,239819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,191,240266,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,166,240490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,102,240714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,270,240938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,90,241162,2,0,P|220:49|209:-7,1,90
45,121,241610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
219,176,241834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,241946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,176,242058,6,0,L|344:167,1,90
108,322,242505,2,0,P|74:318|-9:311,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,270,242953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,377,243177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,226,243401,2,0,P|99:186|112:105,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,53,243849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,53,243960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,210,244184,6,0,L|264:204,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,136,244520,6,0,L|172:122,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,288,244856,6,0,L|204:297,1,45
411,222,245192,6,8,L|409:267,1,45
322,210,245416,2,8,L|326:135,1,45
393,106,245640,1,8,0:0:0:0:

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-07-26T10:58:43+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
Normal
Nice

Hard
Nice

Insane
·00:02:953 (2,3,4) - 这里我用None打的时候没太明显问题，但用DT打就感觉有点难掌控节奏了（原因是按第一次在白线，按第2次是在蓝线，按第3次是下一个蓝线，白-蓝-蓝，节奏距离不均匀）尤其第一次打的时候。我建议换成这样。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144180 （白蓝-蓝-蓝）→白接前面的白，过度蓝节奏又可以均匀打下去。我把这个节奏用在hard上了
·00:04:745 (2,3,4,5) - 这里同上，另外3连打中间的白线可以不放，跟他的主节奏就行。（后面还有几处相同的）主节奏就是这样
·00:12:692 (6,1,2) - 这里的开头是蓝线，然后就是很长的连打，个人认为可以在白线开始先放两组回连打滑条（ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144272），再放连打，既可以缩短长连打，又能更好的掌握节奏感。我觉得一样
·01:16:274 (4) - 建议删掉短滑条，放一个圈圈在蓝线，放一条白线到红线线的滑条。
·01:33:737 - 这个蓝线没必要放圈圈。？
·01:35:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里的节奏建议重做一下，感觉打不出人声的感觉。你试试这种节奏能不能表达出来。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5144594 我觉得一样
·02:40:565 - 和第一点一样。
·03:41:460 - 和第一点一样。

Lunatic
·00:14:819 - 这里加一个圈圈。
·00:15:602 (2,1) - 这两个用一个滑条连接好点？后面的也是，我DT打这里没有感觉。
·03:35:080 (5,1,2) - 这种红线结尾后3连打真的没见过，或者可以删了白线和蓝线的圈圈，放一个短滑条。
·03:35:640 (7) - 这个圈圈建议放在下一个短滑条上，因为短滑条是放在蓝线上的，这样起手打短滑条也会容易点。
·评价：这个难度kiai部分切指有点难。

GL~

Vert wrote:
m4m

[I]
00:46:386 (5) - 叠的话建议叠多一些，这种只压了一点点的感觉不好看我觉得无所谓
01:00:714 (4) - ^
我建议这种统一一下间距，比如00:53:102 (3,4) - 是统一的
可以没啥特别想说的了。。

低难度不大会看就不看了
水摸射个星好了~~都这么多sp了可以飞了啊~~

gl

Thx~

_Yiiiii

464 posts

Joined February 2015

_Yiiiii 2016-08-04T14:29:06+00:00

歌好好听~
[General]
00:59:371 - 这里开始的那个kiai应该在01:28:028 - 结束吧？

[Lunatic]
00:13:699 (1,4) - 既然2,3逆flow了那这两个也逆向吧。
00:19:072 (4,6) - Ctrl+G一下舒服一些。
00:28:475 (5,1,2) - 5的尾和1的间距与1到2的间距差不多，可是时间间距1:2，还是注意一下吧，2往上往右一些吧。
01:02:505 (8,9,10,1,2) - 这里把8往上一点点，9,10,1,2一起往下，1Ctrl+G之后9、10和2跟着换一下位置感觉更舒服一点。
02:41:684 (2,3) - 迷之大间距，改小点吧，理由同第三条，02:49:744 (5,6) - 同。
03:29:147 (7,8) - Ctrl+G如何？
03:43:252 (4) - 如果让我下这个圈我更喜欢260,180的位置。

[Insane]
00:06:536 (2,3) - 间距再大一点吧，控制时间间距与位置间距的关系，后面的这个排列也稍微改一下吧。
01:37:431 (3,5) - blanket
02:10:117 (3,5) - 干脆弄成平行的呗。
03:11:013 (4,5) - 叠一下吧。
03:23:998 (5) - 再往左一点更美观。
看完了一脸懵逼，这么下节奏给新人打真的好么？~~很好很好~~

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3,1) - 说实话，这么擦个边挺别扭的，考虑改改吧。
01:11:460 (3,1) - blanket，其实就现在这样也还好看。

[Normal]
01:04:744 (3) - 忽然冒出来个这个形状的滑条让图显得有点不整齐，撸直了或者用三点弯滑条吧。
剩下就没什么了

四个diff都很整洁，打起来很顺手，祝你好运。

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Binguo 2016-08-12T13:44:01+00:00

[Normal]
00:25:341 (3) - 左向上感觉不好看横放怎样？
01:04:744 (3) - 不好看
02:21:311 (6,1) - 总觉得这样的组合出现在这个难度里面有点不好
04:02:953 (2,3) - 似曾相识不换一换吗

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3) - 这个不要和后面贴起来啦
03:20:416 (3) - ↑

[insane]
02:39:669 (1) - 这一小段直接复制了？建议改改
03:24:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个看上去有些乱

抱歉拖了几天最近有些忙摸完我又要跑路了

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-08-24T11:07:00+00:00

_Yiiiii wrote:
歌好好听~
[General]
00:59:371 - 这里开始的那个kiai应该在01:28:028 - 结束吧？

[Lunatic]
00:13:699 (1,4) - 既然2,3逆flow了那这两个也逆向吧。
00:19:072 (4,6) - Ctrl+G一下舒服一些。
00:28:475 (5,1,2) - 5的尾和1的间距与1到2的间距差不多，可是时间间距1:2，还是注意一下吧，2往上往右一些吧。
01:02:505 (8,9,10,1,2) - 这里把8往上一点点，9,10,1,2一起往下，1Ctrl+G之后9、10和2跟着换一下位置感觉更舒服一点。
02:41:684 (2,3) - 迷之大间距，改小点吧，理由同第三条，02:49:744 (5,6) - 同。
03:29:147 (7,8) - Ctrl+G如何？
03:43:252 (4) - 如果让我下这个圈我更喜欢260,180的位置。

[Insane]
00:06:536 (2,3) - 间距再大一点吧，控制时间间距与位置间距的关系，后面的这个排列也稍微改一下吧。
01:37:431 (3,5) - blanket 是blanket的
02:10:117 (3,5) - 干脆弄成平行的呗。差不多
03:11:013 (4,5) - 叠一下吧。不好读
03:23:998 (5) - 再往左一点更美观。
看完了一脸懵逼，这么下节奏给新人打真的好么？~~很好很好~~

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3,1) - 说实话，这么擦个边挺别扭的，考虑改改吧。
01:11:460 (3,1) - blanket，其实就现在这样也还好看。

[Normal]
01:04:744 (3) - 忽然冒出来个这个形状的滑条让图显得有点不整齐，撸直了或者用三点弯滑条吧。
剩下就没什么了

四个diff都很整洁，打起来很顺手，祝你好运。

remap一部分，不详细回了
谢谢

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-08-24T11:09:33+00:00

Binguo wrote:
[Normal]
00:25:341 (3) - 左向上感觉不好看横放怎样？现在顺flow
01:04:744 (3) - 不好看
02:21:311 (6,1) - 总觉得这样的组合出现在这个难度里面有点不好能读清楚
04:02:953 (2,3) - 似曾相识不换一换吗

[Hard]
00:22:990 (3) - 这个不要和后面贴起来啦
03:20:416 (3) - ↑

[insane]
02:39:669 (1) - 这一小段直接复制了？建议改改
03:24:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个看上去有些乱

抱歉拖了几天最近有些忙摸完我又要跑路了

谢谢

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-09-19T15:05:06+00:00

as request

好像这曲子我在哪听过..

[General]
kiai的位置是不是有点不对...

[Normal]
没细看

[Hard]
01:02:058 (4) - 感觉用1/2滑条填上比较好，副歌里不需要这样的停顿

[Insane]
00:04:744 (2) - 这附近我可能就这样塞满了...似乎挺不错的样子
http://puu.sh/rgD7r/1b88dcb24e.jpg

02:07:431 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的音乐..好像不太支持这样的三角梗

不愧是soda，好厉害

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

sodarose 2016-09-23T16:28:23+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
as request

好像这曲子我在哪听过..

[General]
kiai的位置是不是有点不对...

[Normal]
没细看

[Hard]
01:02:058 (4) - 感觉用1/2滑条填上比较好，副歌里不需要这样的停顿好

[Insane]
00:04:744 (2) - 这附近我可能就这样塞满了...似乎挺不错的样子不塞爆
http://puu.sh/rgD7r/1b88dcb24e.jpg

02:07:431 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的音乐..好像不太支持这样的三角梗为什么呢

不愧是soda，好厉害

谢谢
每月一铲

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-10-19T13:53:41+00:00

[Normal]

nm作为最低难度时最好是不变sv的
00:06:535 (2,3) - 这样把折返箭头放到那个方向，还被挡住一小部分，本身不好看，低难度箭头也尽量完全摆开 00:13:699 (2,3) - 后面大约还有
01:08:326 (4,5,6,7,1) - 感觉好随手
02:07:431 (1,3) - 离这么近不好看．1头、3头跟2可以摆成正三角形会更好

[Hard]

00:04:745 (2,3,4) - 这节奏对于hard来说并不合适，尤其这是一个简单hard（因为normal也很简单，所以也必须是简单hard），要么就选一条轨跟好，要么选择一个比较好打的摆法，比如http://b1.loli.io/images/A0X8.jpg．而且00:03:401 - 00:06:983 - 两处你都没有跟，只有00:05:192 - 跟了，也不合适
00:30:155 (3) - 这种滑条把第一个蓝线音单拆成一个note，然后00:30:266 - 再开始折返滑条会舒服得多．后面还有好多
00:34:072 (4,1) - 这两个重音结尾打着挺不舒服的
00:44:483 (5,1) - 这ds好不舒服，这样的擦边．后同
01:08:102 (1,2,3) - 1是强行忽略鼓点跟的人声，很特别的一个强调人声，那2和3为了统一，就应该是人声clickable，vocal做滑条尾才好．后面kiai里也是
01:50:416 (4,5) - 视觉ds不对，不好看
02:00:266 (1,3) - ^ 其实跟2一起摆个正三角形就很好
后面没看完，问题大概都跟前面说的差不多．反正前奏、间奏、尾声这几段节奏有点几把，有一些在hard里不合适，或者换种摆法会更顺．包括04:05:080 (3) - 这种，把04:05:080 - 和04:05:640 - 都单拆出来回更好．

[Insane]

00:04:745 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是以这里为例，蓝线起的三连简直是谜之节奏，这里想赛爆的话有很多种方法，主跟乐器的话可以http://b1.loli.io/images/9xdm.jpg，主跟鼓点的打起来最舒服的下法可以http://b1.loli.io/images/X2Bw.jpg，我觉得都会好些．当然也可以简单地只跟乐器无视鼓点．另外这里也是同样有跟00:03:401 - 等不一致的情况．还是前奏间奏尾声很多地方都可以再考虑一下，不一个个说了
overlap不能说无规律，但是感觉效果并不好……比如02:19:744 (4,2,4) - ，我摸图能很容易看出来这里是个正三角形，但打图直接打过去基本会觉得这overlap不好看．而且就是你overlap的重叠部分大小基本全都不一致，我觉得如果你想搞这么多overlap，这些细节是必须得注意的，否则看上去感觉有点乱．

这种bpm的1/4spam，不同轨音位置还经常不一样的，如何把节奏下得舒服，可以看下lily这张图：https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1039435 kiai部分，主难度和hard都可以参考一下．
然后overlap如何做得好看，可以看下https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878311的主难度和https://osu.ppy.sh/b/402624的insane，反正就是overlap的地方尽量同一方向，同样ds，就算不想弄那么细，至少规律要让人一眼能看出来，才会显得比较整洁．

GL~

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-11-21T09:32:42+00:00

↑其实上面列的那张图的节奏下法，最初是受到 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/420229 这个collab里soda的下法的启发的..虽然有点不同吧

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