Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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Cryolien
hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note?
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord?

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?

00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 -

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^


man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
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Topic Starter
puxtu

Cryolien wrote:

hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
[SC]things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note? n, vocal and audible bass sounds only
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord? nice idea

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?
00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?
well lol idk which notes you're talking about but I re-arranged some my patterns

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 - oh the 1/1 notes in kiai time? they're for the synth in the bg song and also because testplayers thinks my patterns on that part is quite underwhelming so I added more notes there

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore) ye lol that triplet is for cymbals just like in my nonsense map :^)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^

man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
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well thx m8!
JSELENABELIEBER
[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
Topic Starter
puxtu

Cparn wrote:

[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound are u deaf

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
the rest is applied
thank you!
Gexigamma
Hai pux, le stupid suggestion here.

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.
Nivrad00
My first 4k mod, here goes nothing

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before
00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?
00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)
01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)
03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends
[NM]
00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that
00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3
[HD]
00:29:430 - should add note here
00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up
[HD+]
01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going
01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

emmmmmmmm i got nothin for MX and SC ;n;

good luck with rank!
Topic Starter
puxtu

Gexigamma wrote:

Hai pux, le stupid suggestion here.

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.

Nivrad00 wrote:

My first 4k mod, here goes nothing

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before
00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?
00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)
01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)
03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends
[NM]
00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that
00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3
[HD]
00:29:430 - should add note here
00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up
[HD+]
01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going
01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

emmmmmmmm i got nothin for MX and SC ;n;

good luck with rank!
top kek all applied
thanks guys!
Rido
hi pux
[SC]
- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise
- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal
- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound
- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho
- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different
- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 -
- 02:27:541 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick
- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted
- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD
- 02:54:766 - add note for kick
- 02:54:916 - ^
- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

[MX]
- 00:36:630 - delete, no kick there. but it's still rankable, there is hi hat sound there, your choice
- 01:46:005 (106005|3,106005|2,106005|0,106155|0,106155|3) - the loudest sound has less notes, it's weird. rearrage plz
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick

[HD+]
- 02:17:641 - make it same column like you did in SC and MX
- 02:22:441 - ^
- 02:27:241 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note plz

u suk pux, so many copy paste and ctrl + h
but it's good map tehe, good luck
i can't mod ez diff lmao
Eternalie
Osu xup~
hope it will help~
collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[EZ]
00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 2
00:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn
00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal)
01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu )
01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 1
01:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal
02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )
02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 2
02:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )
02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 1
02:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum
02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu
03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD)
[NM]
00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound)
00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)
01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol )
01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~)
02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free
03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~


Desu~ Uxtu-P nya~ Good Luck~have a nice day ^^/
Topic Starter
puxtu

Rido wrote:

hi pux
[SC]
- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise pattern consitency
- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal yea utsu-p forgot to add cymbal there
- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound
- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho
- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different
- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 -
- 02:27:541 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick
- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted
- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD
- 02:54:766 - add note for kick
- 02:54:916 - ^
- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

[MX]
- 00:36:630 - delete, no kick there. but it's still rankable, there is hi hat sound there, your choice yea that's for hi hat
- 01:46:005 (106005|3,106005|2,106005|0,106155|0,106155|3) - the loudest sound has less notes, it's weird. rearrage plz triplet = with guitar, double = without guitar
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick

[HD+]
- 02:17:641 - make it same column like you did in SC and MX
- 02:22:441 - ^
- 02:27:241 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note plz
u suk pux, so many copy paste and ctrl + h
but it's good map tehe, good luck
i can't mod ez diff lmao

Eternalie wrote:

Osu xup~
hope it will help~
collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[EZ]
00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 2
00:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn
00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal)
01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu ) can't add anymore, it's too dense;w;
01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 1
01:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal
02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )
02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 2 the sr eter, the sr... ;w;
02:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )
02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 1
02:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum how about keep following the vocal ;w;
02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu
03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD) no vocal here ;w;
[NM]
00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound) vocal
00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)^
01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol ) lol nah
01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~) keep it how it is XD
02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free
03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~

Desu~ Uxtu-P nya~ Good Luck~have a nice day ^^/
the rest = ok
thanks!
spoonguy
general look at some diffs

1|2|3|4

[EZ]
Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.
I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?
I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other.
For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:
00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 -
00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 -
02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v
01:18:405 - add a note on 4
01:19:605 - ^ 3
01:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 1
01:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 3
01:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]
NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).
It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them
02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)
02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 1
03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]
00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.
01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets
01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before it
seems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]
not much in this diff
just remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:
00:39:255 -
01:36:855 -

[MX]
00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.
keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alright
wink

[SC]
alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs mods
i told i wouldn't really be able to find anything here
most of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everything
sorry for the lazy mod

good luck ranking this o/
Topic Starter
puxtu

Paulmrm wrote:

general look at some diffs

1|2|3|4

[EZ]
Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.
I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?
I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other.
For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:
00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 -
00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 -
02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v
01:18:405 - add a note on 4
01:19:605 - ^ 3
01:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 1
01:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 3
01:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]
NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).
It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them
02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)
02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 1
03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]
00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.
01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets
01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before it
seems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]
not much in this diff
just remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:
00:39:255 -
01:36:855 -

[MX]
00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.
keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alright
wink

[SC]
alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs mods
i told i wouldn't really be able to find anything here
most of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everything
sorry for the lazy mod

good luck ranking this o/
how2reply wall of cry mods.
all applied kek
thanks m8
Seiryuu
15:25 puxtu: how was your test
15:32 [-Seiryuu-]: what
15:32 [-Seiryuu-]: how did you know
15:34 puxtu: ;)
15:36 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/747621 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SHD]]
15:36 puxtu: now mod
15:40 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
15:41 puxtu: do you want to see it ranked or not?
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: probably
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm still studying so
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: could you give me a few days
15:45 puxtu: oh ok
15:45 [-Seiryuu-]: you know what
15:45 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm gonna do a quick one now
15:46 puxtu: lol dude nice
15:46 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:23:955 (23955|0,24030|1,24105|0,24180|1,24255|0,24330|1,24405|0,24480|1,24555|0) - this trill is pretty long
15:46 [-Seiryuu-]: maybe nerf it by changing hands halfway
15:47 puxtu: roger
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:26:805 (26805|0,26805|3,26805|1,26880|2,26955|0,26955|1,27030|3,27105|0,27105|1,27105|2,27180|3,27255|2,27255|1,27330|3,27405|2,27405|1,27405|0) - should focus a little more on the left here
15:47 puxtu: 00:24:255 (24255|0) - move this to 4?
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: seems pretty empty for the right
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: sure
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:26:805 (26805|0,26805|3,26805|1,26880|2,26955|0,26955|1,27030|3,27105|0,27105|1,27105|2,27180|3,27255|2,27255|1,27330|3,27405|2,27405|1,27405|0) - could you do a [12][34] or a [14][23] pattern here
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: this feels extremely weird to play tbh
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: i end up breaking on the chorus for some reason but aaklsfjasdf
15:49 puxtu: *mind blowing
15:49 puxtu: ss pls
15:49 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
15:49 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:07:455 (67455|3,67455|0,67530|2,67605|3,67605|1,67680|2,67680|0,67755|3,67755|1,67830|2,67830|0,67905|1,67905|3,67980|2,68055|0,68055|3,68130|1) - this focuses on the right a little too much
15:50 [-Seiryuu-]: it's difficult to transition from a full one hand trill to denser patterns
15:50 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:08:655 (68655|0,68730|1,68805|0,68880|1,68955|0,69030|1,69105|0,69180|1,69255|0) - like this
15:51 puxtu: ok
15:51 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:38:055 (98055|2,98055|0,98130|3,98130|1,98205|2,98205|0,98280|1,98280|3,98355|2,98355|0,98430|3,98430|1,98505|2,98505|0) - same thing as before
15:51 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:44:055 (104055|2,104055|0,104130|1,104130|3,104205|2,104205|0,104280|3,104280|1,104355|0,104355|2,104430|1,104430|3,104505|2,104505|0) -
15:52 puxtu: done
15:52 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:35:491 (155491|2,155566|1) - i think completing the [12][34] pattern here would be better
15:52 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:38:791 (158791|3,158791|1,158866|0,158866|2,158941|1,158941|3,159016|2,159016|0,159091|3,159091|1,159166|0,159166|2,159241|1,159241|3) - you know what my complaints are for here
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:56:941 (176941|3,176941|1,177016|2,177091|3,177091|1,177166|2,177241|1,177241|3,177316|2,177391|1,177391|3,177466|2,177541|1,177541|3) - lighten the one handed trills a little pls
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: maybe change it to simple jumptrills
15:53 puxtu: ss
15:53 puxtu: like what
15:53 puxtu: please
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: hehehehe
15:53 puxtu: O_o
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: ok ok just keep it then
15:54 puxtu: what's so funny
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm nerfing the map pretty hard
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: hue
15:54 puxtu: lol np
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: but at least it's better for players
15:55 puxtu: infact the sr is incrasing 0.01
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: wat
15:55 puxtu: yes
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: jumptrills increase sr by a lot
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: change the last part pux
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: :D
15:55 puxtu: it was 5.05
15:55 puxtu: now 5.06
15:55 puxtu: lol kek
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: ay
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: and that's it
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: 6min mod
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: just being a sei
15:57 puxtu: see? you don't need to wait for a few days
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: well
15:57 puxtu: i'll leave you forever in peace now
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: i gave up on tomorrow's test
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: so
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: there's the mod
Yellyfish
mmkay

  • [SHD]
    HUGE improvement from the previous version of SHD, can't seem to find any noticeable errors. Patterns flow really well, and are nice to hit.

    Suggestions?
  1. 00:38:955 (38955|0,38955|2,38955|1,38955|3) - good stuff, love how you use webs and brackets for these guitar chugs
  2. 01:16:905 (76905|3,76905|0,76905|1,77055|0,77055|2,77055|3,77205|3,77205|1,77205|0,77355|0,77355|2,77355|3) - http://puu.sh/jhvfd/a2bcf0c65d.jpg this placement matches the music IMO
  3. 01:17:505 (77505|1) - Starting from this note, the chords are bit bland, since this is SHD, you can make that more exciting by adding a triple chord on every marimba sound eg. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - , 01:19:005 (79005|1) - , 01:20:205 (80205|2) - etc.
  • [SC]
    O.O the less dense version of SHD
    Jumpstreams patterns clear~

  1. 00:47:655 (47655|1) - lovely
  2. 00:57:705 (57705|0) - add 2
  3. 00:57:780 (57780|3) - add 3 (trill pattern galore \o/ )
  4. 01:55:005 (115005|2,115005|3) - same goes with here, see pic for suggestion http://puu.sh/jhwrA/764f97545d.jpg
  5. 02:45:841 (165841|3,165841|2) - ^
  6. 01:07:605 (67605|0,67680|1,67755|2,67830|3) - intentional? I dunno but it is different to what you used in the beginning
  • [MX]
    No obvious errors here, but there is a part that I dislike
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - you mapped vocals instead of the music, which makes it kind of bland.
    I suggest:
  2. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - place 1,2,3
  3. 01:18:105 (78105|2) - place 3
  4. 01:18:405 (78405|2) - place 3
  5. 01:18:555 (78555|1,78555|0,78855|3) - - leave it there (also gives a taste of the vocals if you want it there)
  6. 01:19:005 (79005|0) - place 1,2,4
  7. 01:19:305 (79305|2) - place 2
  8. 01:19:605 (79605|2) - place 2
    and so on... carrying on
  9. 02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|2,135391|3) - Long note here for emphasis?
  10. 02:47:041 (167041|0,167041|1,167041|3) - this part me gusta
  • [HD+]
    O.o the streamy version of MX
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|3) - same concept with MX, I absolutely dislike that you only mapped the vocals, try incorporating the marimbas in the background if you can
  2. 02:46:891 (166891|1) - this is similar to that lovely part in MX, makes me wonder if these patterns are suitable for HD difficulty

    otherwise, gj
  • [HD]
  1. 00:43:155 (43155|0,43230|1,43305|0,43305|2) - gluey pattern is gluey, doesn't flow as well as your previous patterns, try staircasing this like the notes previously?
  2. 01:17:805 (77805|1) - ok you love your vocals ._.
  3. 02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|0) - intentional non-LNs? I'm confuzzled now
  • [NM]
    Great choice of instruments to map, perfect for normal diff.
  1. 01:26:655 (86655|0) - remove this note to prevent LN catastrophe
  2. 01:55:005 (115005|3) - for this part, I think this pattern will fit the music more, it looks kinda weird, play around with it http://puu.sh/jhyYN/417b43da2a.jpg
  3. 02:15:391 (135391|1,135391|0) - ok.
  4. 02:56:941 (176941|0) - same as first suggestion
  • [EZ]
    Like when vocals come in handy of EZ diff patterns :D
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|3) - C'mon this is a perfect place to emphasise the marimbas, double chord the marimba sounds. Tbh I cannot follow the notes you placed in this section
  2. 02:11:791 (131791|2,131791|0) - beautiful.



Here's some duct tape to fix your broken heart. <3
Topic Starter
puxtu

-X Y Z- wrote:

mmkay pls be gentle senpai <3

  • [SHD]
    HUGE improvement from the previous version of SHD, can't seem to find any noticeable errors. Patterns flow really well, and are nice to hit. <3

    Suggestions?
  1. 00:38:955 (38955|0,38955|2,38955|1,38955|3) - good stuff, love how you use webs and brackets for these guitar chugs <3
  2. 01:16:905 (76905|3,76905|0,76905|1,77055|0,77055|2,77055|3,77205|3,77205|1,77205|0,77355|0,77355|2,77355|3) - http://puu.sh/jhvfd/a2bcf0c65d.jpg this placement matches the music IMO </3 are you kidding me? single note for dat legit guitar sound?
  3. 01:17:505 (77505|1) - Starting from this note, the chords are bit bland, since this is SHD, you can make that more exciting by adding a triple chord on every marimba sound eg. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - , 01:19:005 (79005|1) - , 01:20:205 (80205|2) - etc. <3
  • [SC]
    O.O the less dense version of SHD
    Jumpstreams patterns clear~ <3

  1. 00:47:655 (47655|1) - lovely <3
  2. 00:57:705 (57705|0) - add 2 <3
  3. 00:57:780 (57780|3) - add 3 (trill pattern galore \o/ ) <3
  4. 01:55:005 (115005|2,115005|3) - same goes with here, see pic for suggestion http://puu.sh/jhwrA/764f97545d.jpg <3
  5. 02:45:841 (165841|3,165841|2) - ^ <3
  6. 01:07:605 (67605|0,67680|1,67755|2,67830|3) - intentional? I dunno but it is different to what you used in the beginning</3 If you listen carefully at this part there are some little drum sounds so if combined with that guitar sound, a stairs pattern will be fit
  • [MX]
    No obvious errors here, but there is a part that I dislike <3
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - you mapped vocals instead of the music, which makes it kind of bland. </3 I think I'll keep layering that vocal sound because that sound is more dominant than the others sound. and this is on calm part so I'm not sure for having that much density
    I suggest:
  2. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - place 1,2,3
  3. 01:18:105 (78105|2) - place 3
  4. 01:18:405 (78405|2) - place 3
  5. 01:18:555 (78555|1,78555|0,78855|3) - - leave it there (also gives a taste of the vocals if you want it there)
  6. 01:19:005 (79005|0) - place 1,2,4
  7. 01:19:305 (79305|2) - place 2
  8. 01:19:605 (79605|2) - place 2
    and so on... carrying on
  9. 02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|2,135391|3) - Long note here for emphasis? ok maybe just 1 ln is not a problem
  10. 02:47:041 (167041|0,167041|1,167041|3) - this part me gusta XD? don't you like the hammers lol
  • [HD+]
    O.o the streamy version of MX
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|3) - same concept with MX, I absolutely dislike that you only mapped the vocals, try incorporating the marimbas in the background if you can </3 vocals is love
  2. 02:46:891 (166891|1) - this is similar to that lovely part in MX, makes me wonder if these patterns are suitable for HD difficulty yeah it's fit for 3.38* diff

    otherwise, gj <3
  • [HD]
  1. 00:43:155 (43155|0,43230|1,43305|0,43305|2) - gluey pattern is gluey, doesn't flow as well as your previous patterns, try staircasing this like the notes previously? lol k re-arranged a lil bit
  2. 01:17:805 (77805|1) - ok you love your vocals ._. <3
  3. 02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|0) - intentional non-LNs? I'm confuzzled now i'm not usagi lol, ok added just 1 ln
  • [NM]
    Great choice of instruments to map, perfect for normal diff. <3
  1. 01:26:655 (86655|0) - remove this note to prevent LN catastrophe <3 lmao ok
  2. 01:55:005 (115005|3) - for this part, I think this pattern will fit the music more, it looks kinda weird, play around with it http://puu.sh/jhyYN/417b43da2a.jpg <3
  3. 02:15:391 (135391|1,135391|0) - ok. ok XD
  4. 02:56:941 (176941|0) - same as first suggestion <3
  • [EZ]
    Like when vocals come in handy of EZ diff patterns :D<3 finally you understand :D
  1. 01:17:805 (77805|3) - C'mon this is a perfect place to emphasise the marimbas, double chord the marimba sounds. Tbh I cannot follow the notes you placed in this section <3 lol ok only in ez
  2. 02:11:791 (131791|2,131791|0) - beautiful. <3 like you



Here's some duct tape to fix your broken heart. <3 dawww <333
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NlHIL
wow SHD came back!

I'm happy XD
Topic Starter
puxtu
so I'll just drop it here
jhlee's score with HR is just.... you won't understand how insane is that
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3486592
http://puu.sh/jp50b/60ac09b5df.osr
- [ S o r a ] -
Hehe~
here. some suggestion by me :3
[MX]
00:00:705 (705|3) - Ok first. Move this to column 2 or 3?
Hmm... I guess. Double-notes arrange not be a good idea while the bass guitar is playing or you just following vocals?
00:39:330 (39330|3) - Move to 2. stair is nice :3
00:47:355 - Missing a note? not the same as last one.
00:48:405 - Is this better?. I think
00:53:355 - Strong beat here. suggest to add one more note. and this too >> 00:55:755
00:58:155 - 01:02:955 - ^^^
01:17:805 ~ 01:25:755 - Hmm. how about change some notes that on vocals to "Long notes"?
these would be absolutely perfect patterns xD and remember long notes for excellent looks.
01:26:955 - Strong beat. ough... for reason >> 01:31:755 (91755|3,91755|0,91755|2)
01:29:355 - 01:34:155 - ^^^
01:44:955 - Missing one for cymbal sound.
01:46:155 - Add one more note? sound louder.
01:50:955 - 01:55:755 - 02:00:555 - 02:04:155 - ^^^
02:05:941 (125941|2) - This should end by short note. as the guitar chords lol
02:39:391 - Add one more note.
02:41:791 - 02:46:591 - ^^^
02:47:041 ~ 02:50:041 - whoaa.. Why triple-notes for just these snares. I guess double-notes are more pretty good.
Triple-notes for strong sounds as Cymbals or any SFX.
02:51:391 - Wanna add one?
02:54:991 - ^ and 02:54:991 (174991|0) - Change to long notes til here 02:56:941 then X >> 02:56:941 (176941|0) - Delete...
Jinjin
2015-08-13 16:50 iJinjin: so let's do quick :v
2015-08-13 16:50 puxtu: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463279 Neru feat. IA - Enmei Chiryou [4K HD]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2015-08-13 16:50 puxtu: look at my new sb
2015-08-13 16:50 puxtu: its fucking awesome
2015-08-13 16:50 iJinjin: can't dl songs atm ;w;
2015-08-13 16:50 puxtu: ;w;
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: also i got 930k on the infected mushroom song 7k
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: pp map
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: :v
2015-08-13 16:51 puxtu: you wat
2015-08-13 16:51 puxtu: really?
2015-08-13 16:51 puxtu: wow
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: but replay didnt save cuz game crashed right after
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: ;______;
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: i cri
2015-08-13 16:51 puxtu: rip
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: it was only 11 misses
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: ;_;
2015-08-13 16:51 puxtu: ok lets ttb
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: yah]
2015-08-13 16:51 iJinjin: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/747621 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SHD]]
2015-08-13 16:52 iJinjin: hentai diff first
2015-08-13 16:52 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/747621 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SHD]]
2015-08-13 16:52 puxtu: alright
2015-08-13 16:52 iJinjin: gib supporter pls
2015-08-13 16:52 iJinjin: ACTION runs
2015-08-13 16:52 puxtu: hentai's fist
2015-08-13 16:52 puxtu: you wat
2015-08-13 16:52 iJinjin: <3
2015-08-13 16:52 iJinjin: 00:19:905 - this jumpstream is nice, i like :v
2015-08-13 16:52 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 16:53 iJinjin: 00:34:305 (34305|1,34305|3,34305|0) - shouldn't this be 2 note chord?
2015-08-13 16:53 iJinjin: cuz everywhere else, the chord progression goes like 2 - 3 notes
2015-08-13 16:53 puxtu: its for cymbals
2015-08-13 16:54 iJinjin: ;w; okie u dumdum
2015-08-13 16:54 puxtu: but lol i removed it
2015-08-13 16:54 iJinjin: 00:46:455 (46455|0,46455|1,46530|2,46530|3,46605|1,46605|0,46680|2,46680|3,46755|1,46755|0,46830|3,46830|2,46905|1,46905|0) - this part, maybe change to a pattern like [24][13][24][13]
2015-08-13 16:54 iJinjin: cuz you have every other double note trill pattern here
2015-08-13 16:54 iJinjin: except that one
2015-08-13 16:54 puxtu: jin, make my shd exceed 5.25 pls ;w;
2015-08-13 16:54 iJinjin: ;w;
2015-08-13 16:55 iJinjin: 00:47:655 -
2015-08-13 16:56 puxtu: ok done
2015-08-13 16:56 iJinjin: omg so lagygyagyagygy
2015-08-13 16:56 iJinjin: laggy
2015-08-13 16:56 puxtu: rip
2015-08-13 16:56 iJinjin: what's the sr on shd again?
2015-08-13 16:56 iJinjin: atm?
2015-08-13 16:56 puxtu: 5.06
2015-08-13 16:56 iJinjin: lel
2015-08-13 16:57 puxtu: wanna add more spike?
2015-08-13 16:57 iJinjin: dunno where :/
2015-08-13 16:57 iJinjin: looking for places too
2015-08-13 16:59 puxtu: at the drums rolls
2015-08-13 16:59 iJinjin: mmmm
2015-08-13 16:59 iJinjin: but how ;-;
2015-08-13 16:59 iJinjin: it's already double notes
2015-08-13 17:00 puxtu: wanna add triplet? :D
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: then it will be cancer ;V
2015-08-13 17:00 puxtu: but that will looks really retarded
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: kek
2015-08-13 17:00 puxtu: ye
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: current is fine
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: i just playtested the whole thing
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: looks beautiful
2015-08-13 17:00 puxtu: so 5.06 is the max huh? :C
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: don't need to touch shd anymore ;V
2015-08-13 17:00 iJinjin: yuh ;-;
2015-08-13 17:00 puxtu: ;w;
2015-08-13 17:01 iJinjin: unless
2015-08-13 17:01 puxtu: hm?
2015-08-13 17:02 iJinjin: http://puu.sh/jzPNF/74be4a5f96.jpg you can do something like this
2015-08-13 17:02 iJinjin: but ehh
2015-08-13 17:02 iJinjin: won't play well for those that don't like noodles
2015-08-13 17:02 puxtu: what in the world is that
2015-08-13 17:03 iJinjin: 00:19:905 -
2015-08-13 17:03 iJinjin: i added the lns for emphasis on the electric guitar
2015-08-13 17:03 iJinjin: but yeah it doesn't play so well
2015-08-13 17:03 iJinjin: just leave as is :v
2015-08-13 17:03 puxtu: fok lns
2015-08-13 17:03 iJinjin: kek
2015-08-13 17:03 puxtu: :V
2015-08-13 17:04 iJinjin: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-08-13 17:04 puxtu: :CD
2015-08-13 17:04 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:04 iJinjin: for every diff you owe me +1 month of supporter :D
2015-08-13 17:04 iJinjin: <3
2015-08-13 17:04 iJinjin: jk
2015-08-13 17:05 puxtu: lmao
2015-08-13 17:07 iJinjin: i noticed that
2015-08-13 17:07 iJinjin: almost all of your maps are vocaloid songs :v
2015-08-13 17:08 puxtu: :V
2015-08-13 17:08 puxtu: well i just like this rocks song
2015-08-13 17:08 puxtu: not all vocaloid :V
2015-08-13 17:08 iJinjin: heh
2015-08-13 17:08 iJinjin: okay nothing to point out on sc
2015-08-13 17:08 iJinjin: it's all good
2015-08-13 17:09 iJinjin: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-08-13 17:09 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:11 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-08-13 17:11 iJinjin: 01:46:155 (106155|0,106155|3) - shouldn't this be 3 note chord too
2015-08-13 17:11 iJinjin: ?_?
2015-08-13 17:11 puxtu: well
2015-08-13 17:11 puxtu: there's only a cymbal :D
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: ;w; but it sounds very loud
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: it's like
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: the same as last note + cymbal
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: :v
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: so technically should be 4 notes :VV:V:V:V:V:
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: but i like 3 :3
2015-08-13 17:12 puxtu: orly
2015-08-13 17:12 iJinjin: :3 :3 :3
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: ok then
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: added
2015-08-13 17:13 iJinjin: <3
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: 00:48:555 (48555|0,48555|1) - should i add triplet here too?
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: same sound
2015-08-13 17:13 iJinjin: 02:37:441 (157441|1,157441|0,157441|3) - it's also kinda like this you know>
2015-08-13 17:13 iJinjin: nahh you don't have to there
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: yea
2015-08-13 17:13 iJinjin: for the sake of playability
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: i just noticed that
2015-08-13 17:13 iJinjin: also since this is MX
2015-08-13 17:13 puxtu: ye
2015-08-13 17:14 puxtu: 00:48:555 (48555|1,48555|0) - how about this
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: and your SC / SHD already has the triple note minijack
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: yeh just don't add the minijack
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: :v
2015-08-13 17:14 puxtu: wot
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: 02:46:591 - but add one here
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: okay i mean
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: whenever you have that sound
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: but before that there is a 1/4 roll
2015-08-13 17:14 iJinjin: don't add a note
2015-08-13 17:15 iJinjin: but if you have that sound
2015-08-13 17:15 iJinjin: and there isn't a 1/4 roll / note just before that
2015-08-13 17:15 puxtu: oo
2015-08-13 17:15 puxtu: right
2015-08-13 17:15 iJinjin: then add the note
2015-08-13 17:15 iJinjin: :v
2015-08-13 17:15 puxtu: :V ok got it
2015-08-13 17:15 iJinjin: 02:54:991 (174991|0,174991|3) - think you can add one note here too? for the emphasis of ending
2015-08-13 17:16 iJinjin: other than that looks goof for mx
2015-08-13 17:16 iJinjin: o/
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: ok
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:16 iJinjin: :D
2015-08-13 17:16 iJinjin: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:16 puxtu: :D
2015-08-13 17:16 iJinjin: 00:10:305 - honestly for this section
2015-08-13 17:17 iJinjin: i think you can add one note for each of the drums xP
2015-08-13 17:17 iJinjin: but your chice
2015-08-13 17:17 iJinjin: choice
2015-08-13 17:17 iJinjin: lol
2015-08-13 17:17 puxtu: hmm
2015-08-13 17:17 puxtu: hmmmmmmmm
2015-08-13 17:17 puxtu: you touch my tralala
2015-08-13 17:18 iJinjin: brb
2015-08-13 17:18 iJinjin: my parents are back ;w;
2015-08-13 17:18 iJinjin: rip
2015-08-13 17:18 puxtu: rip
2015-08-13 17:18 iJinjin: nvmd wanna end the irc now?
2015-08-13 17:18 iJinjin: xp
2015-08-13 17:19 iJinjin: i think i have to go :c
2015-08-13 17:19 iJinjin: yeah i have to go
2015-08-13 17:19 iJinjin: parents are calling
2015-08-13 17:19 iJinjin: cyaaa
2015-08-13 17:19 iJinjin: o/
2015-08-13 17:19 puxtu: lol
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