Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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NlHIL
why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
Rudalek
puxtu sent me here

01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..
00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange?
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange?

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) -
00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12]
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -
BilliumMoto
blargh

22:22 puxtu: sup dawg
22:22 BilliumMoto: not much lol, just seizing the rare opportunity to play
22:22 BilliumMoto: hows it been for you
22:22 puxtu: alive
22:23 puxtu: can you check my map :D
22:26 puxtu: nope
22:26 puxtu: ttb one
22:26 puxtu: n[
22:26 *puxtu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 *BilliumMoto is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 puxtu: nice
22:27 BilliumMoto: oh snap no more SHD?
22:27 puxtu: ye
22:28 puxtu: shd is retardly overmapped
22:28 puxtu: ppl dont really like it
22:28 BilliumMoto: knowing kami, not surprised at all lol
22:28 BilliumMoto: playing now
22:28 puxtu: lol
22:32 puxtu: :D:D:D:D
22:32 puxtu: mod plls
22:32 puxtu: ;w;
22:36 BilliumMoto: mind doing a quick irc mod right now?
22:36 puxtu: suree
22:36 puxtu: let's do it
22:36 BilliumMoto: aight here we go
22:36 BilliumMoto: only one thing really stuck out to me on this MX diff
22:37 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|3) - should be a note at the 1/4 after this
22:37 BilliumMoto: you also missed this in the SC diff
22:38 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|3) - happens again here
22:38 puxtu: lol thanks
22:38 puxtu: for pointing that out
22:38 puxtu: XD
22:39 BilliumMoto: npnp
22:39 BilliumMoto: there's probably other stuff to work on in the MX
22:39 BilliumMoto: i honestly suggest making some of the patterns slightly harder
22:39 BilliumMoto: but moving on to the SC
22:40 puxtu: ok
22:40 BilliumMoto: 00:01:305 (1305|3) - forgot a note after this one?
22:40 BilliumMoto: for the bass
22:40 BilliumMoto: i know you're trying to encompass the vocal and the bassline at the same time but it feels a little empty here
22:41 BilliumMoto: and throughout the intro
22:41 BilliumMoto: 00:07:005 (7005|3) - especially after this note
22:42 BilliumMoto: 00:18:255 (18255|1) - missed a note on the 1/4 after this one
22:42 puxtu: wait
22:43 puxtu: hold your horses
22:43 BilliumMoto: i would actually jack it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413895
22:43 BilliumMoto: lol aight
22:43 puxtu: about the intro
22:43 puxtu: i only follow the vocal
22:43 BilliumMoto: 00:01:155 (1155|1) - ?
22:44 BilliumMoto: 00:02:355 (2355|0,2505|3,2655|1) - no vocals here so i assumed you were also following the bass to some degree
22:44 puxtu: bcause the bass is inaudible
22:45 puxtu: ok i'll add
22:45 puxtu: lol
22:46 BilliumMoto: lol
22:46 puxtu: added the 1/4 btw
22:46 BilliumMoto: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: i like minijacks that make sense
22:46 puxtu: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: 00:19:905 (19905|3) - im pondering the stream starting here
22:46 BilliumMoto: this is really fun as it is and serves a very good purpose
22:47 BilliumMoto: but i cant help but feel maybe something like truplets on the 1/1 and 1/4 everywhere else would be more fitting
22:48 BilliumMoto: basically what you have in MX but add one note every 1/1
22:48 BilliumMoto: actually, don't do that
22:48 BilliumMoto: that would make the stream more boring
22:48 BilliumMoto: but if wnyone else points it out, you should change it
22:48 BilliumMoto: *anyone
22:48 puxtu: oh
22:49 puxtu: add a triplet every 1/1?
22:49 puxtu: that's sounds great
22:49 BilliumMoto: as in three notes at a time, yea
22:49 BilliumMoto: but that with the doubles on 1/2 might make it a bit too hard
22:51 BilliumMoto: 00:48:705 (48705|2) - the chorus here feels awfully underwhelming to play compared everything that came after it
22:51 puxtu: hmmm
22:51 puxtu: yea what should i do with that
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921my personal suggestion
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921
22:52 puxtu: oh lns
22:53 BilliumMoto: that should be enough to make it feel more climactic
22:54 BilliumMoto: oh yea, i noticed there are very very few LNs in this map
22:54 BilliumMoto: this should fix that lol
22:54 puxtu: hmmmmm
22:54 BilliumMoto: 01:07:680 (67680|1,67830|3) - im not hearing these in the music
22:54 puxtu: are you sure
22:54 puxtu: about the lns
22:54 puxtu: that's for guitar
22:54 BilliumMoto: there is that synth line in the background you could follow with the LNs
22:55 puxtu: ok then
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:31:830 (91830|2,91905|1,91905|0,91980|3) - there's nothing here really
22:56 puxtu: removed
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|0,94380|1) - these too
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:005 (94005|2) - and i would move this note to the 1/2 beat after it
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:45:405 (105405|0,105405|3,105405|1) - good SVs :D
22:57 puxtu: :D
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - just a reminder to do whatever you did to the other chorus to this chorus as well
22:58 puxtu: all done
22:58 puxtu: just need some lns on chorus
22:58 puxtu: ye lol
22:58 puxtu: ik that
22:58 BilliumMoto: lol ofc
22:58 BilliumMoto: i just always get the uncontrollable urge to remind people to do that tho
22:59 BilliumMoto: 02:15:391 (135391|3) - long LN here maybe?
22:59 puxtu: xD
22:59 puxtu: nah
22:59 puxtu: i'll give player some rest
22:59 BilliumMoto: fair enough
23:00 BilliumMoto: 02:18:091 (138091|2) - this part also feels a little underwhelming
23:00 BilliumMoto: considering the dude is screaming their lungs out here lol
23:00 BilliumMoto: maybe add doubles every time there is a kick?
23:00 BilliumMoto: a kick drum
23:00 puxtu: okay
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|0) - you missed a note here, but i already said this for the MX diff
23:01 BilliumMoto: please make it a jack too
23:01 BilliumMoto: i would love a jack here if you couldnt tell
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:31:366 (151366|1) - here too
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|0) - and here
23:02 BilliumMoto: and the rest of the map looks good to me
23:02 puxtu: fixed
23:02 puxtu: http://puu.sh/j5Dfj/293d29b9d5.png like this?
23:03 BilliumMoto: YES
23:03 BilliumMoto: that is perfect
23:03 puxtu: lol okay
23:04 puxtu: idk adding lns will be a good idea
23:04 BilliumMoto: 02:54:766 (174766|0,174916|2) - not hearing these
23:04 puxtu: but i'll try it
23:04 BilliumMoto: hey it's all up to you
23:04 puxtu: remove that 1/4s
23:05 BilliumMoto: and ofc add doubles where you need them in order to keep the intensity of the map right at the end
23:06 puxtu: roger that
23:07 BilliumMoto: welp anything else i see would just be pointless nitpicking of extraneous detail, so that's all lol
23:07 BilliumMoto: uhh
23:07 BilliumMoto: make sure your metadata is ok
23:07 BilliumMoto: everything is snapped
23:07 BilliumMoto: bg not nsfw
23:07 BilliumMoto: blahblah
Topic Starter
puxtu

NlHIL wrote:

why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
high nlhil is high.

Rudalek wrote:

puxtu sent me here awang sent me to you

[EZ]01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..

[NM]00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
all ok

[HD]00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
all re-arranged


[HD+]01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right fixed
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange? re-arranged
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange? ok

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs ok
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) - cool

[MX]00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
all re-arranged

[SC]00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12] re-arranged
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -nah, my hammer is too solid
thx for mods!
you too bill :D
JamesHappy
le irc modo

2015-07-11 23:48 JamesHappy15: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736278 Disasterpeace - I Am Only a Man]
2015-07-11 23:48 JamesHappy15: i'll mod yours
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: oo-okay
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: mod my ttb pls
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: D:
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-11 23:49 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
2015-07-11 23:50 puxtu: nice
2015-07-11 23:51 JamesHappy15: owell i'll start tmrw
2015-07-11 23:54 puxtu: owell me too
2015-07-18 23:17 puxtu: hi hams
2015-07-18 23:17 puxtu: no you can't afk on me
2015-07-18 23:17 JamesHappy15: pls
2015-07-18 23:18 puxtu: can you check my map?
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: i was about to sleep
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: ;-;
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: dat bear thing
2015-07-18 23:18 puxtu: ye lol
2015-07-18 23:19 JamesHappy15: wait wat
2015-07-18 23:19 JamesHappy15: no SHD?
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/333311
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: ye
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: i removed that stupid diff
2015-07-18 23:23 JamesHappy15: i'll try checking tmrw
2015-07-19 17:18 JamesHappy15: oi
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: LD
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: :D
2015-07-19 17:19 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736927 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [EZ]]
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: :D
2015-07-19 17:19 JamesHappy15: :D:
2015-07-19 17:20 puxtu: :D:D
2015-07-19 17:20 JamesHappy15: :D:D:
2015-07-19 17:20 puxtu: :DD:D:D::D
2015-07-19 17:20 JamesHappy15: :::::::::::::::::::::DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
2015-07-19 17:21 puxtu: :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
2015-07-19 17:21 JamesHappy15: ok stop, wanna irc mod
2015-07-19 17:21 puxtu: lol k
2015-07-19 17:22 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736927 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [EZ]]
2015-07-19 17:22 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: hnn?
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: ahn?
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: ahh
2015-07-19 17:23 JamesHappy15: o some notes are following vocal?
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: owell
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: 00:17:505 (17505|0) -
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: no lel
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: my notes are following the flow
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: might wanna add one here
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: added
2015-07-19 17:27 JamesHappy15: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - same
2015-07-19 17:27 puxtu: 00:18:555 - added here too
2015-07-19 17:27 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-19 17:27 puxtu: s
2015-07-19 17:28 JamesHappy15: s
2015-07-19 17:28 puxtu: u
2015-07-19 17:28 JamesHappy15: !
2015-07-19 17:29 JamesHappy15: 02:05:941 (125941|1) - +
2015-07-19 17:29 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:30 JamesHappy15: ;-;
2015-07-19 17:30 puxtu: ln only k
2015-07-19 17:30 JamesHappy15: oooooo
2015-07-19 17:31 JamesHappy15: 02:11:641 (131641|3,132241|0) - almost inaudible for me
2015-07-19 17:32 puxtu: o
2015-07-19 17:32 puxtu: k
2015-07-19 17:32 JamesHappy15: 02:12:841 (132841|2,133441|1) -
2015-07-19 17:33 JamesHappy15: 02:14:041 (134041|0,134641|3,135241|2) -
2015-07-19 17:33 puxtu: already deleted
2015-07-19 17:33 puxtu: next mod pls
2015-07-19 17:33 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-19 17:34 JamesHappy15: 02:38:641 (158641|1) - why not add ln for drum roll
2015-07-19 17:36 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:36 JamesHappy15: ok done, next diff
2015-07-19 17:36 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [NM]]
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 add?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [NM]]
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: oops
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 -
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: missing?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: ur brain missing?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: yes
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: jk m8
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: w
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: uwot m8
2015-07-19 17:39 puxtu: ACTION hides
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: wanna fite m8 irl
2015-07-19 17:39 puxtu: sure i rekt yo face m8
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: i fk ur mom m8
2015-07-19 17:40 puxtu: no ur mom sux ma dix
2015-07-19 17:41 JamesHappy15: brb cr
2015-07-19 17:41 JamesHappy15: 5 min
2015-07-19 17:41 puxtu: k
2015-07-19 17:48 puxtu: welp gtg
2015-07-19 17:48 puxtu: post the rest on the thread
2015-07-19 18:01 JamesHappy15: ok back, that was longer than i expected, demn mom
2015-07-19 18:02 JamesHappy15: oh ok
2015-07-19 18:03 puxtu: demn
2015-07-19 18:03 JamesHappy15: i'm too lazy to post
2015-07-19 18:04 puxtu: lol
2015-07-19 18:07 JamesHappy15: so continue to irc or nah (if nah, expected 5 days for the post)
2015-07-19 18:08 puxtu: nah
2015-07-19 18:08 puxtu: lol
2015-07-19 18:08 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-19 18:09 JamesHappy15: 2lazy2mod anyway
2015-07-20 21:45 puxtu: james i love you
2015-07-20 21:45 JamesHappy15: ACTION seen
2015-07-20 21:45 puxtu: let's irc :)
2015-07-20 21:46 puxtu: irc sex
2015-07-20 21:46 puxtu: i mean mod
2015-07-20 21:46 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 21:48 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736928 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD]]
2015-07-20 21:49 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 add or i kill you
2015-07-20 21:49 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-20 21:49 JamesHappy15: heh
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: sorry m8
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: vocal only
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: that bass is inaudible
2015-07-20 21:50 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 21:50 JamesHappy15: ACTION kills puxtu
2015-07-20 21:51 puxtu: <3
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: o ded
2015-07-20 21:54 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255-
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: wat
2015-07-20 21:54 puxtu: nice link [2]
2015-07-20 21:55 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255 (39255|3,39330|2,39405|1,39480|0,39555|2,39630|1) -
2015-07-20 21:55 JamesHappy15: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415534 pls]
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: wait
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: is that HD diff
2015-07-20 21:56 JamesHappy15: why NM
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: ha?
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: nah
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: i skip NM
2015-07-20 21:57 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: so HD
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: NM is good i think
2015-07-20 21:58 puxtu: that's good to hear
2015-07-20 22:01 JamesHappy15: 00:43:455 (43455|3) - barely audible
2015-07-20 22:03 puxtu: are you deaf
2015-07-20 22:03 JamesHappy15: ye
2015-07-20 22:04 JamesHappy15: 00:45:855 (45855|3) - following vocal?
2015-07-20 22:04 JamesHappy15: slightly late
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: are you ok
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: D:
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: no it's not late
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: no it's late
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: try hear in 25%
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: or just ignore it
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: i followed the guitar song
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: D:
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: *sound
2015-07-20 22:07 JamesHappy15: oh god i must be tired
2015-07-20 22:07 puxtu: :D
2015-07-20 22:08 JamesHappy15: [http://puu.sh/j63Uv/398c178c9c.png send halp]
2015-07-20 22:11 puxtu: dude pls
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: wow i'm such a slowpoke
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: 02:15:391-
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: inb5 nice link
2015-07-20 22:19 JamesHappy15: add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 22:19 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: same
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: you need to put - in the end
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391-
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: like 02:39:391 -
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: that
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: with a space
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391 -
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: gj
2015-07-20 22:21 puxtu: good boy
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: 02:46:591 -
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: cymbals
2015-07-20 22:22 JamesHappy15: ok done
2015-07-20 22:22 JamesHappy15: for hd
2015-07-20 22:23 puxtu: hype
2015-07-20 22:23 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-07-20 22:23 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-07-20 22:25 JamesHappy15: 00:10:305 (10305|0,10305|3) - why 2 notes when 00:10:605 (10605|1,10905|0,11205|1) - only one?
2015-07-20 22:25 JamesHappy15: all white ticks
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: up to 00:17:205
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: 00:17:205 -
2015-07-20 22:26 puxtu: my mistake
2015-07-20 22:26 puxtu: fixed
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: gj
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: 00:17:205 (17205|0,17205|3) - one pls
2015-07-20 22:27 JamesHappy15: 00:18:555 (18555|0) - add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:27 puxtu: k removed
2015-07-20 22:28 puxtu: double chord isn't enough? D:
2015-07-20 22:29 JamesHappy15: n
2015-07-20 22:31 JamesHappy15: from 00:19:905 - to 00:28:305 -
2015-07-20 22:32 JamesHappy15: intended? only one note on the white tick except the cymbal part
2015-07-20 22:32 puxtu: hmm?
2015-07-20 22:32 puxtu: what do you mean
2015-07-20 22:33 JamesHappy15: like this one 00:19:905 (19905|3,19905|0) -
2015-07-20 22:34 puxtu: oh
2015-07-20 22:34 puxtu: it's doubled because there's a cymbal there
2015-07-20 22:34 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 22:35 JamesHappy15: 00:36:705 (36705|1) - add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:36 JamesHappy15: 00:48:555 (48555|1) - ^ or not
2015-07-20 22:37 puxtu: `ye
2015-07-20 22:39 JamesHappy15: 00:58:155 (58155|2) - tishh
2015-07-20 22:39 puxtu: welp i think double is enough
2015-07-20 22:39 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 22:40 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-20 22:40 JamesHappy15: k
2015-07-20 22:41 JamesHappy15: 01:26:955 (86955|2) - pls +
2015-07-20 22:41 puxtu: i'll + it in mx
2015-07-20 22:41 JamesHappy15: ookk
2015-07-20 22:41 puxtu: :)
2015-07-20 22:42 JamesHappy15: 01:31:755 (91755|3) - tishh
2015-07-20 22:42 JamesHappy15: 01:36:555 (96555|0) - ^
2015-07-20 22:42 puxtu: err lol
2015-07-20 22:44 JamesHappy15: 01:36:855 (96855|2,96930|0,97005|3,97080|1,97155|3,97230|0,97305|3,97305|2) -
2015-07-20 22:44 puxtu: hm?
2015-07-20 22:44 JamesHappy15: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415784 pls]
2015-07-20 22:47 JamesHappy15: if you do that do this also 01:38:055 (98055|3,98130|2,98205|0,98280|1,98355|3,98430|2,98505|1,98505|0) -
2015-07-20 22:47 JamesHappy15: in reverse
2015-07-20 22:48 puxtu: ok
2015-07-20 22:48 JamesHappy15: 01:46:155 - missing one?
2015-07-20 22:49 puxtu: nope
2015-07-20 22:49 puxtu: the triplet has guitar on it
2015-07-20 22:49 JamesHappy15: 01:55:755 (115755|1) - +
2015-07-20 22:51 puxtu: remember me to add it on mx
2015-07-20 22:52 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 22:55 JamesHappy15: 02:54:991 (174991|0) - +
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: 02:56:941 (176941|3,176941|0,177016|2,177091|1,177166|2,177241|1,177316|0,177391|3,177466|2,177541|3,177541|1,177691|2,177691|0) -
2015-07-20 22:57 puxtu: hey
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415842 just a suggestion]
2015-07-20 22:57 puxtu: i thought you were ded
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: n
2015-07-20 22:58 JamesHappy15: u r
2015-07-20 22:58 puxtu: n u
2015-07-20 22:58 JamesHappy15: n u
2015-07-20 22:58 puxtu: n u
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: n u
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: ok stop
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: 03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2,186691|3) - 2 is enough
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: and done
2015-07-20 23:00 puxtu: ok
2015-07-20 23:00 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-07-20 23:01 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-07-20 23:03 JamesHappy15: 00:36:705 (36705|2) - +
2015-07-20 23:04 JamesHappy15: 00:37:155 (37155|1) - ^
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: lmao
2015-07-20 23:06 JamesHappy15: 하하
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: 555
2015-07-20 23:07 JamesHappy15: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2015-07-20 23:07 JamesHappy15: 00:40:155 (40155|2) - you know what to do
2015-07-20 23:08 JamesHappy15: 00:43:755 (43755|2) -
2015-07-20 23:08 puxtu: wkwkwkw
2015-07-20 23:09 JamesHappy15: demn cymbals
2015-07-20 23:09 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: ok fk cymbals
2015-07-20 23:10 puxtu: do you think i should add triplets in the chorus too?
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: hmmm
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: why not
2015-07-20 23:11 puxtu: ye why not
2015-07-20 23:11 JamesHappy15: ADD MOAR
2015-07-20 23:11 puxtu: ok all added
2015-07-20 23:11 JamesHappy15: nice
2015-07-20 23:13 JamesHappy15: 00:57:705 (57705|2,57705|3) - one pls
2015-07-20 23:13 JamesHappy15: not too loud
2015-07-20 23:14 JamesHappy15: if you applied it, do the same on SC
2015-07-20 23:15 puxtu: lol k
2015-07-20 23:16 puxtu: hd+ has the same pattern too
2015-07-20 23:16 JamesHappy15: just do it
2015-07-20 23:16 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-07-20 23:16 puxtu: yesterday you said tomorrow
2015-07-20 23:17 JamesHappy15: tmrw....oh
2015-07-20 23:19 puxtu: ok all done
2015-07-20 23:21 JamesHappy15: 02:35:266 - i heard some
2015-07-20 23:21 puxtu: no i don't hear anything
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 23:22 puxtu: a
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: on 25%
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: i swear
2015-07-20 23:23 JamesHappy15: i heard some
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: k then
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:24 JamesHappy15: 02:38:791 (158791|1,158866|2,158941|0,158941|3,159016|1,159091|2,159166|1,159241|0,159241|3) - do trills or nope
2015-07-20 23:24 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:25 JamesHappy15: wait im not done yet
2015-07-20 23:25 JamesHappy15: >:C
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: trills like what
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: gimme an example
2015-07-20 23:26 JamesHappy15: like the ss recently
2015-07-20 23:27 puxtu: 2lazy4u
2015-07-20 23:27 JamesHappy15: ye
2015-07-20 23:27 JamesHappy15: owait
2015-07-20 23:28 JamesHappy15: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415995
2015-07-20 23:30 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 23:31 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:31 JamesHappy15: finally
2015-07-20 23:32 JamesHappy15: im so done
2015-07-20 23:32 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:33 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:34 puxtu: are you there
2015-07-20 23:34 JamesHappy15: my eyes
2015-07-20 23:34 JamesHappy15: damn
2015-07-20 23:35 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:36 puxtu: just give up ;)
2015-07-20 23:36 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 23:37 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255 (39255|3,39255|1,39330|2,39405|1,39405|3,39480|0,39555|3,39555|1,39630|2) -
2015-07-20 23:37 JamesHappy15: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3416030
2015-07-20 23:37 puxtu: what's up with that
2015-07-20 23:37 puxtu: oh ok
2015-07-20 23:38 JamesHappy15: ok you win
2015-07-20 23:38 JamesHappy15: i give up
2015-07-20 23:39 JamesHappy15: im so fking done
2015-07-20 23:39 puxtu: lol yay
2015-07-20 23:39 JamesHappy15: gotta post this now
2015-07-20 23:40 puxtu: oka
2015-07-20 23:40 puxtu: y
Topic Starter
puxtu
9 days of irc mods was real
JamesHappy
wkwkwkwkwk
Cryolien
hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note?
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord?

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?

00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 -

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^

man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
><
Topic Starter
puxtu

Cryolien wrote:

hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
[SC]things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note? n, vocal and audible bass sounds only
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord? nice idea

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?
00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?
well lol idk which notes you're talking about but I re-arranged some my patterns

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 - oh the 1/1 notes in kiai time? they're for the synth in the bg song and also because testplayers thinks my patterns on that part is quite underwhelming so I added more notes there

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore) ye lol that triplet is for cymbals just like in my nonsense map :^)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^

man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
><
well thx m8!
JSELENABELIEBER
[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
Topic Starter
puxtu

Cparn wrote:

[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound are u deaf

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
the rest is applied
thank you!
Gexigamma
Hai pux, le stupid suggestion here.

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.
Nivrad00
My first 4k mod, here goes nothing

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before
00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?
00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)
01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)
03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends
[NM]
00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that
00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3
[HD]
00:29:430 - should add note here
00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up
[HD+]
01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going
01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

emmmmmmmm i got nothin for MX and SC ;n;

good luck with rank!
Topic Starter
puxtu

Gexigamma wrote:

Hai pux, le stupid suggestion here.

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.

Nivrad00 wrote:

My first 4k mod, here goes nothing

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before
00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?
00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)
01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)
03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends
[NM]
00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that
00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3
[HD]
00:29:430 - should add note here
00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up
[HD+]
01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going
01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

emmmmmmmm i got nothin for MX and SC ;n;

good luck with rank!
top kek all applied
thanks guys!
Rido
hi pux
[SC]
- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise
- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal
- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound
- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho
- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different
- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 -
- 02:27:541 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick
- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted
- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD
- 02:54:766 - add note for kick
- 02:54:916 - ^
- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

[MX]
- 00:36:630 - delete, no kick there. but it's still rankable, there is hi hat sound there, your choice
- 01:46:005 (106005|3,106005|2,106005|0,106155|0,106155|3) - the loudest sound has less notes, it's weird. rearrage plz
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick

[HD+]
- 02:17:641 - make it same column like you did in SC and MX
- 02:22:441 - ^
- 02:27:241 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note plz
u suk pux, so many copy paste and ctrl + h
but it's good map tehe, good luck
i can't mod ez diff lmao
Eternalie
Osu xup~
hope it will help~
collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4

[EZ]
00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 2
00:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn
00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal)
01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu )
01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 1
01:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal
02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )
02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 2
02:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )
02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 1
02:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum
02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu
03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD)
[NM]
00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound)
00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)
01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol )
01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~)
02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free
03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~

Desu~ Uxtu-P nya~ Good Luck~have a nice day ^^/
Topic Starter
puxtu

Rido wrote:

hi pux
[SC]
- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise pattern consitency
- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal yea utsu-p forgot to add cymbal there
- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound
- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho
- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different
- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 -
- 02:27:541 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick
- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted
- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD
- 02:54:766 - add note for kick
- 02:54:916 - ^
- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

[MX]
- 00:36:630 - delete, no kick there. but it's still rankable, there is hi hat sound there, your choice yea that's for hi hat
- 01:46:005 (106005|3,106005|2,106005|0,106155|0,106155|3) - the loudest sound has less notes, it's weird. rearrage plz triplet = with guitar, double = without guitar
- 02:26:791 - add note for kick

[HD+]
- 02:17:641 - make it same column like you did in SC and MX
- 02:22:441 - ^
- 02:27:241 - ^
- 02:26:791 - add note plz
u suk pux, so many copy paste and ctrl + h
but it's good map tehe, good luck
i can't mod ez diff lmao

Eternalie wrote:

Osu xup~
hope it will help~
collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[EZ]
00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 2
00:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn
00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal)
01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu ) can't add anymore, it's too dense;w;
01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 1
01:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal
02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )
02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 2 the sr eter, the sr... ;w;
02:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )
02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 1
02:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum how about keep following the vocal ;w;
02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu
03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD) no vocal here ;w;
[NM]
00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound) vocal
00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)^
01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol ) lol nah
01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~) keep it how it is XD
02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free
03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~

Desu~ Uxtu-P nya~ Good Luck~have a nice day ^^/
the rest = ok
thanks!
spoonguy
general look at some diffs

1|2|3|4

[EZ]
Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.
I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?
I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other.
For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:
00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 -
00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 -
02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v
01:18:405 - add a note on 4
01:19:605 - ^ 3
01:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 1
01:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 3
01:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]
NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).
It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them
02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)
02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 1
03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]
00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.
01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets
01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before it
seems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]
not much in this diff
just remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:
00:39:255 -
01:36:855 -

[MX]
00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.
keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alright
wink

[SC]
alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs mods
i told i wouldn't really be able to find anything here
most of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everything
sorry for the lazy mod

good luck ranking this o/
Topic Starter
puxtu

Paulmrm wrote:

general look at some diffs

1|2|3|4

[EZ]
Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.
I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?
I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other.
For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:
00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 -
00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 -
02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v
01:18:405 - add a note on 4
01:19:605 - ^ 3
01:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 1
01:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 3
01:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]
NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).
It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them
02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)
02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 1
03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]
00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.
01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets
01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before it
seems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]
not much in this diff
just remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:
00:39:255 -
01:36:855 -

[MX]
00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.
keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alright
wink

[SC]
alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs mods
i told i wouldn't really be able to find anything here
most of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everything
sorry for the lazy mod

good luck ranking this o/
how2reply wall of cry mods.
all applied kek
thanks m8
Seiryuu
15:25 puxtu: how was your test
15:32 [-Seiryuu-]: what
15:32 [-Seiryuu-]: how did you know
15:34 puxtu: ;)
15:36 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/747621 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SHD]]
15:36 puxtu: now mod
15:40 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
15:41 puxtu: do you want to see it ranked or not?
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: probably
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm still studying so
15:43 [-Seiryuu-]: could you give me a few days
15:45 puxtu: oh ok
15:45 [-Seiryuu-]: you know what
15:45 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm gonna do a quick one now
15:46 puxtu: lol dude nice
15:46 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:23:955 (23955|0,24030|1,24105|0,24180|1,24255|0,24330|1,24405|0,24480|1,24555|0) - this trill is pretty long
15:46 [-Seiryuu-]: maybe nerf it by changing hands halfway
15:47 puxtu: roger
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:26:805 (26805|0,26805|3,26805|1,26880|2,26955|0,26955|1,27030|3,27105|0,27105|1,27105|2,27180|3,27255|2,27255|1,27330|3,27405|2,27405|1,27405|0) - should focus a little more on the left here
15:47 puxtu: 00:24:255 (24255|0) - move this to 4?
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: seems pretty empty for the right
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
15:47 [-Seiryuu-]: sure
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:26:805 (26805|0,26805|3,26805|1,26880|2,26955|0,26955|1,27030|3,27105|0,27105|1,27105|2,27180|3,27255|2,27255|1,27330|3,27405|2,27405|1,27405|0) - could you do a [12][34] or a [14][23] pattern here
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: this feels extremely weird to play tbh
15:48 [-Seiryuu-]: i end up breaking on the chorus for some reason but aaklsfjasdf
15:49 puxtu: *mind blowing
15:49 puxtu: ss pls
15:49 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
15:49 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:07:455 (67455|3,67455|0,67530|2,67605|3,67605|1,67680|2,67680|0,67755|3,67755|1,67830|2,67830|0,67905|1,67905|3,67980|2,68055|0,68055|3,68130|1) - this focuses on the right a little too much
15:50 [-Seiryuu-]: it's difficult to transition from a full one hand trill to denser patterns
15:50 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:08:655 (68655|0,68730|1,68805|0,68880|1,68955|0,69030|1,69105|0,69180|1,69255|0) - like this
15:51 puxtu: ok
15:51 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:38:055 (98055|2,98055|0,98130|3,98130|1,98205|2,98205|0,98280|1,98280|3,98355|2,98355|0,98430|3,98430|1,98505|2,98505|0) - same thing as before
15:51 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:44:055 (104055|2,104055|0,104130|1,104130|3,104205|2,104205|0,104280|3,104280|1,104355|0,104355|2,104430|1,104430|3,104505|2,104505|0) -
15:52 puxtu: done
15:52 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:35:491 (155491|2,155566|1) - i think completing the [12][34] pattern here would be better
15:52 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:38:791 (158791|3,158791|1,158866|0,158866|2,158941|1,158941|3,159016|2,159016|0,159091|3,159091|1,159166|0,159166|2,159241|1,159241|3) - you know what my complaints are for here
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:56:941 (176941|3,176941|1,177016|2,177091|3,177091|1,177166|2,177241|1,177241|3,177316|2,177391|1,177391|3,177466|2,177541|1,177541|3) - lighten the one handed trills a little pls
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: maybe change it to simple jumptrills
15:53 puxtu: ss
15:53 puxtu: like what
15:53 puxtu: please
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: hehehehe
15:53 puxtu: O_o
15:53 [-Seiryuu-]: ok ok just keep it then
15:54 puxtu: what's so funny
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm nerfing the map pretty hard
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: hue
15:54 puxtu: lol np
15:54 [-Seiryuu-]: but at least it's better for players
15:55 puxtu: infact the sr is incrasing 0.01
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: wat
15:55 puxtu: yes
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: jumptrills increase sr by a lot
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: change the last part pux
15:55 [-Seiryuu-]: :D
15:55 puxtu: it was 5.05
15:55 puxtu: now 5.06
15:55 puxtu: lol kek
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: ay
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: and that's it
15:56 [-Seiryuu-]: 6min mod
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: just being a sei
15:57 puxtu: see? you don't need to wait for a few days
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: well
15:57 puxtu: i'll leave you forever in peace now
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: i gave up on tomorrow's test
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: so
15:57 [-Seiryuu-]: there's the mod
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