Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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Koneko-
here's my suggesion.

02:15:391 ~ 02:17:202 - make LN?
02:54:991 - make LN?
00:01:455 - add?
00:03:705 - ^
00:06:255 - ^
00:07:155 - ^
00:07:305 - ^
00:08:505 - ^

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:09:091 (129091|2) - move 0
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:341 (131341|1,131491|3) - move 0, 0
02:12:241 (132241|0) - move 3
02:12:541 (132541|3) - move 0
02:13:591 (133591|2) - move 1
02:13:891 (133891|0) - move 2
00:37:530 (37530|1,37605|2) - move 2, 3?
00:38:430 (38430|3) - move 2?
01:26:955 - make one LN?
01:27:105 (87105|1,87255|2) - remove?
01:29:355 - make one LN?
01:29:655 (89655|1) - remove?
01:31:755 - make one LN?
01:31:905 (91905|2,92055|1) - remove?
01:34:155 - make one LN?
01:34:455 (94455|2) - remove?
01:26:955 ~ 01:34:455 - follow NM difficult mod style?
02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - i think this part overuse 1/4 note. try this style.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3382404
00:29:505 ~ 00:36:705 / 02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - same reason, recommend rearrange. (follow SC difficult.)
00:47:655 ~ 00:48:480 - it's really hard and unnecessary use 2 notes.

00:57:405 ~ 00:57:705 - make (01)(23) trills.
01:36:855 ~ 01:37:230 - make trills. other parts are trills.

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:08:941 (128941|3) - move 1
02:09:241 (129241|1) - move 3
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:191 (131191|2) - move 1
02:11:491 (131491|0) - move 2
02:13:591 (133591|0) - move 2
02:13:891 (133891|3) - move 1

/////////////////////////////////////////////////////
02:37:741 ~ 02:38:191 / 02:38:791 ~ 02:39:241 - if really want use jack, make this.
02:37:891 (157891|2) - move 1
02:38:941 (158941|1) - move 2
02:39:241 (159241|2) - move 1


shouldn't follow my mods. GL~
(i wonder correct write @_@)

i think some notes are make LN cuz some part too simple.
Hydria

I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.




No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
Topic Starter
puxtu

Hydria wrote:


I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.




No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
ok my bad, sorry pls don't eat me ;^)
XeoStyle
Helloooow !

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

My personal suggestions :

00:30:255 (30255|0) - move to 1 or 2

00:31:455 (31455|1) - move to 2 or 3

(kiai 1)

00:55:305 (55305|1,55455|2) - maybe better with 1 then 2

00:53:805 (53805|0) - move to 2

(endkiai 1)

01:25:005 (85005|1,85605|1) - move the 2 notes to 2 (or 3, but meh)

01:33:705 (93705|1,94005|2) - 2 then 1

01:37:305 I think from this part to the kiai there is too much "upper" patterns (going to 0 -> 3), feel free to change somes patterns or not. :)

(kiai 2)

01:56:505 (116505|2,116655|1) - 1 then 2

02:00:255 (120255|3) - move to 2

02:04:638 (124638|3,124638|2,125013|1,125013|0,125441|1,125441|2,125941|0,125941|1) - imo LN + simple note are a little bit too hard for beginners players, so maybe remove simple notes ?

(endkiai2)

02:35:791 (155791|3) - move to 2

(kiai3)

02:44:641 (164641|1) - move to 0

02:48:241 (168241|3) - move to 2

02:51:391 (171391|2) - move to 3

02:52:591 (172591|1) - move to 0

(endkiai 3)

03:01:591 (181591|1) - move to 0

03:05:791 (185791|0) - maybe to 1 ?

Gonna edit my post for the NM (and maybe more) when I have the time.
I PM you when it's ok ! ;)

Great song btw ^_^

edit:
LET DO DIS :

00:11:205 (11205|2) - move to 3

00:12:705 (12705|3) - move to 2

00:26:355 (26355|3) - move to 2

00:36:255 (36255|2) - move to 1

00:44:355 (44355|0,44505|2,44655|0,44805|2) - maybe change this pattern to 0303 (or another one ^^) because it's almost the same as the previous.

(kiai1)

00:51:555 (51555|3) - - move to 2

00:53:205 (53205|3) - maybe move to 2 because of the next pattern

01:04:455 (64455|2,64605|3,64755|0,64905|2,65055|1,65205|3) - change the whole pattern, it's almost the same as the previous :s

(endkiai1)

01:13:755 (73755|1) - move to 2

01:20:955 (80955|2) - pls I know you hate LNs, but this is a good example of good location to place one (The vocal is perfect and it's a big hole without it :/ )

01:25:755 (85755|0) - ^

01:27:255 maybe add one note at 0 here ? (because of the kick)

01:29:655 ^ at 0 ot 3

01:32:055 ^ with 01:32:205 (92205|0,92355|1,92505|2,92655|0,92805|1,92955|2) - double 0 1 2 is meh... hum maybe more like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394404

01:34:455 ^ at 1 or 3

01:38:655 (98655|3) - move to 2

(kiai2)

01:55:305 (115305|2) - move to 0

02:00:255 (120255|3) - maybe move to 2 ?

(endkiai2)

02:08:491 (128491|2,128941|1) - 1 then 2 (if you do this move 02:09:841 (129841|2) - to 1)

02:11:491 (131491|3) - move to 0

02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|1) - DO YOU SMELL THE GUD LN ? :lol:

02:29:041 (149041|3) - move to 2

02:33:691 (153691|0) - move to 3 (if you do this move 02:33:841 (153841|3) - to 2)

(kiai3)

02:50:041 (170041|3,170041|1,170191|2,170191|0) - wouldn't it be a little bit to hard to have this pattern for NM players ? Feel free to change it or not.
02:51:091 (171091|1) - ? I would've put this to 0, huuum.

(endkiai3)

That's it, GL bro c:
Topic Starter
puxtu
all mods applied except about the lns loll
thanks!
YunoFanatic
Pucboi ha
Harbyter
no kudo

[SC]

00:20:355 (20355|1) - col 4

00:20:430 (20430|2,20505|1) - ctrl h

00:20:580 (20580|2) - 1

00:21:705 (21705|2) - 4

00:21:780 (21780|3,21855|2,21930|1) - 1 col left

00:21:855 (21855|0) - 4

00:22:005 (22005|0) - 2

00:27:105 (27105|1) - 4

00:27:180 (27180|3) - 2

just those xd
Topic Starter
puxtu
ayy
NlHIL
why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
Rudalek
puxtu sent me here

01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..
00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange?
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange?

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) -
00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12]
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -
BilliumMoto
blargh

22:22 puxtu: sup dawg
22:22 BilliumMoto: not much lol, just seizing the rare opportunity to play
22:22 BilliumMoto: hows it been for you
22:22 puxtu: alive
22:23 puxtu: can you check my map :D
22:26 puxtu: nope
22:26 puxtu: ttb one
22:26 puxtu: n[
22:26 *puxtu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 *BilliumMoto is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 puxtu: nice
22:27 BilliumMoto: oh snap no more SHD?
22:27 puxtu: ye
22:28 puxtu: shd is retardly overmapped
22:28 puxtu: ppl dont really like it
22:28 BilliumMoto: knowing kami, not surprised at all lol
22:28 BilliumMoto: playing now
22:28 puxtu: lol
22:32 puxtu: :D:D:D:D
22:32 puxtu: mod plls
22:32 puxtu: ;w;
22:36 BilliumMoto: mind doing a quick irc mod right now?
22:36 puxtu: suree
22:36 puxtu: let's do it
22:36 BilliumMoto: aight here we go
22:36 BilliumMoto: only one thing really stuck out to me on this MX diff
22:37 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|3) - should be a note at the 1/4 after this
22:37 BilliumMoto: you also missed this in the SC diff
22:38 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|3) - happens again here
22:38 puxtu: lol thanks
22:38 puxtu: for pointing that out
22:38 puxtu: XD
22:39 BilliumMoto: npnp
22:39 BilliumMoto: there's probably other stuff to work on in the MX
22:39 BilliumMoto: i honestly suggest making some of the patterns slightly harder
22:39 BilliumMoto: but moving on to the SC
22:40 puxtu: ok
22:40 BilliumMoto: 00:01:305 (1305|3) - forgot a note after this one?
22:40 BilliumMoto: for the bass
22:40 BilliumMoto: i know you're trying to encompass the vocal and the bassline at the same time but it feels a little empty here
22:41 BilliumMoto: and throughout the intro
22:41 BilliumMoto: 00:07:005 (7005|3) - especially after this note
22:42 BilliumMoto: 00:18:255 (18255|1) - missed a note on the 1/4 after this one
22:42 puxtu: wait
22:43 puxtu: hold your horses
22:43 BilliumMoto: i would actually jack it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413895
22:43 BilliumMoto: lol aight
22:43 puxtu: about the intro
22:43 puxtu: i only follow the vocal
22:43 BilliumMoto: 00:01:155 (1155|1) - ?
22:44 BilliumMoto: 00:02:355 (2355|0,2505|3,2655|1) - no vocals here so i assumed you were also following the bass to some degree
22:44 puxtu: bcause the bass is inaudible
22:45 puxtu: ok i'll add
22:45 puxtu: lol
22:46 BilliumMoto: lol
22:46 puxtu: added the 1/4 btw
22:46 BilliumMoto: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: i like minijacks that make sense
22:46 puxtu: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: 00:19:905 (19905|3) - im pondering the stream starting here
22:46 BilliumMoto: this is really fun as it is and serves a very good purpose
22:47 BilliumMoto: but i cant help but feel maybe something like truplets on the 1/1 and 1/4 everywhere else would be more fitting
22:48 BilliumMoto: basically what you have in MX but add one note every 1/1
22:48 BilliumMoto: actually, don't do that
22:48 BilliumMoto: that would make the stream more boring
22:48 BilliumMoto: but if wnyone else points it out, you should change it
22:48 BilliumMoto: *anyone
22:48 puxtu: oh
22:49 puxtu: add a triplet every 1/1?
22:49 puxtu: that's sounds great
22:49 BilliumMoto: as in three notes at a time, yea
22:49 BilliumMoto: but that with the doubles on 1/2 might make it a bit too hard
22:51 BilliumMoto: 00:48:705 (48705|2) - the chorus here feels awfully underwhelming to play compared everything that came after it
22:51 puxtu: hmmm
22:51 puxtu: yea what should i do with that
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921my personal suggestion
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921
22:52 puxtu: oh lns
22:53 BilliumMoto: that should be enough to make it feel more climactic
22:54 BilliumMoto: oh yea, i noticed there are very very few LNs in this map
22:54 BilliumMoto: this should fix that lol
22:54 puxtu: hmmmmm
22:54 BilliumMoto: 01:07:680 (67680|1,67830|3) - im not hearing these in the music
22:54 puxtu: are you sure
22:54 puxtu: about the lns
22:54 puxtu: that's for guitar
22:54 BilliumMoto: there is that synth line in the background you could follow with the LNs
22:55 puxtu: ok then
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:31:830 (91830|2,91905|1,91905|0,91980|3) - there's nothing here really
22:56 puxtu: removed
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|0,94380|1) - these too
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:005 (94005|2) - and i would move this note to the 1/2 beat after it
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:45:405 (105405|0,105405|3,105405|1) - good SVs :D
22:57 puxtu: :D
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - just a reminder to do whatever you did to the other chorus to this chorus as well
22:58 puxtu: all done
22:58 puxtu: just need some lns on chorus
22:58 puxtu: ye lol
22:58 puxtu: ik that
22:58 BilliumMoto: lol ofc
22:58 BilliumMoto: i just always get the uncontrollable urge to remind people to do that tho
22:59 BilliumMoto: 02:15:391 (135391|3) - long LN here maybe?
22:59 puxtu: xD
22:59 puxtu: nah
22:59 puxtu: i'll give player some rest
22:59 BilliumMoto: fair enough
23:00 BilliumMoto: 02:18:091 (138091|2) - this part also feels a little underwhelming
23:00 BilliumMoto: considering the dude is screaming their lungs out here lol
23:00 BilliumMoto: maybe add doubles every time there is a kick?
23:00 BilliumMoto: a kick drum
23:00 puxtu: okay
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|0) - you missed a note here, but i already said this for the MX diff
23:01 BilliumMoto: please make it a jack too
23:01 BilliumMoto: i would love a jack here if you couldnt tell
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:31:366 (151366|1) - here too
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|0) - and here
23:02 BilliumMoto: and the rest of the map looks good to me
23:02 puxtu: fixed
23:02 puxtu: http://puu.sh/j5Dfj/293d29b9d5.png like this?
23:03 BilliumMoto: YES
23:03 BilliumMoto: that is perfect
23:03 puxtu: lol okay
23:04 puxtu: idk adding lns will be a good idea
23:04 BilliumMoto: 02:54:766 (174766|0,174916|2) - not hearing these
23:04 puxtu: but i'll try it
23:04 BilliumMoto: hey it's all up to you
23:04 puxtu: remove that 1/4s
23:05 BilliumMoto: and ofc add doubles where you need them in order to keep the intensity of the map right at the end
23:06 puxtu: roger that
23:07 BilliumMoto: welp anything else i see would just be pointless nitpicking of extraneous detail, so that's all lol
23:07 BilliumMoto: uhh
23:07 BilliumMoto: make sure your metadata is ok
23:07 BilliumMoto: everything is snapped
23:07 BilliumMoto: bg not nsfw
23:07 BilliumMoto: blahblah
Topic Starter
puxtu

NlHIL wrote:

why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
high nlhil is high.

Rudalek wrote:

puxtu sent me here awang sent me to you

[EZ]01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..

[NM]00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
all ok

[HD]00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
all re-arranged


[HD+]01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right fixed
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange? re-arranged
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange? ok

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs ok
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) - cool

[MX]00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
all re-arranged

[SC]00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12] re-arranged
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -nah, my hammer is too solid
thx for mods!
you too bill :D
JamesHappy
le irc modo

2015-07-11 23:48 JamesHappy15: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736278 Disasterpeace - I Am Only a Man]
2015-07-11 23:48 JamesHappy15: i'll mod yours
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: oo-okay
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:48 puxtu: mod my ttb pls
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: D:
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-11 23:49 puxtu: D:
2015-07-11 23:49 JamesHappy15: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
2015-07-11 23:50 puxtu: nice
2015-07-11 23:51 JamesHappy15: owell i'll start tmrw
2015-07-11 23:54 puxtu: owell me too
2015-07-18 23:17 puxtu: hi hams
2015-07-18 23:17 puxtu: no you can't afk on me
2015-07-18 23:17 JamesHappy15: pls
2015-07-18 23:18 puxtu: can you check my map?
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: i was about to sleep
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: ;-;
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-18 23:18 JamesHappy15: dat bear thing
2015-07-18 23:18 puxtu: ye lol
2015-07-18 23:19 JamesHappy15: wait wat
2015-07-18 23:19 JamesHappy15: no SHD?
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/333311
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: ye
2015-07-18 23:19 puxtu: i removed that stupid diff
2015-07-18 23:23 JamesHappy15: i'll try checking tmrw
2015-07-19 17:18 JamesHappy15: oi
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: LD
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: :D
2015-07-19 17:19 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736927 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [EZ]]
2015-07-19 17:19 puxtu: :D
2015-07-19 17:19 JamesHappy15: :D:
2015-07-19 17:20 puxtu: :D:D
2015-07-19 17:20 JamesHappy15: :D:D:
2015-07-19 17:20 puxtu: :DD:D:D::D
2015-07-19 17:20 JamesHappy15: :::::::::::::::::::::DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
2015-07-19 17:21 puxtu: :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
2015-07-19 17:21 JamesHappy15: ok stop, wanna irc mod
2015-07-19 17:21 puxtu: lol k
2015-07-19 17:22 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736927 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [EZ]]
2015-07-19 17:22 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: hnn?
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: ahn?
2015-07-19 17:23 puxtu: ahh
2015-07-19 17:23 JamesHappy15: o some notes are following vocal?
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: owell
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: 00:17:505 (17505|0) -
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: no lel
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: my notes are following the flow
2015-07-19 17:24 JamesHappy15: might wanna add one here
2015-07-19 17:24 puxtu: added
2015-07-19 17:27 JamesHappy15: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - same
2015-07-19 17:27 puxtu: 00:18:555 - added here too
2015-07-19 17:27 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-19 17:27 puxtu: s
2015-07-19 17:28 JamesHappy15: s
2015-07-19 17:28 puxtu: u
2015-07-19 17:28 JamesHappy15: !
2015-07-19 17:29 JamesHappy15: 02:05:941 (125941|1) - +
2015-07-19 17:29 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:30 JamesHappy15: ;-;
2015-07-19 17:30 puxtu: ln only k
2015-07-19 17:30 JamesHappy15: oooooo
2015-07-19 17:31 JamesHappy15: 02:11:641 (131641|3,132241|0) - almost inaudible for me
2015-07-19 17:32 puxtu: o
2015-07-19 17:32 puxtu: k
2015-07-19 17:32 JamesHappy15: 02:12:841 (132841|2,133441|1) -
2015-07-19 17:33 JamesHappy15: 02:14:041 (134041|0,134641|3,135241|2) -
2015-07-19 17:33 puxtu: already deleted
2015-07-19 17:33 puxtu: next mod pls
2015-07-19 17:33 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-19 17:34 JamesHappy15: 02:38:641 (158641|1) - why not add ln for drum roll
2015-07-19 17:36 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:36 JamesHappy15: ok done, next diff
2015-07-19 17:36 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [NM]]
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 add?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [NM]]
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: oops
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 -
2015-07-19 17:38 JamesHappy15: missing?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: n
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: ur brain missing?
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: yes
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: jk m8
2015-07-19 17:38 puxtu: w
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: uwot m8
2015-07-19 17:39 puxtu: ACTION hides
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: wanna fite m8 irl
2015-07-19 17:39 puxtu: sure i rekt yo face m8
2015-07-19 17:39 JamesHappy15: i fk ur mom m8
2015-07-19 17:40 puxtu: no ur mom sux ma dix
2015-07-19 17:41 JamesHappy15: brb cr
2015-07-19 17:41 JamesHappy15: 5 min
2015-07-19 17:41 puxtu: k
2015-07-19 17:48 puxtu: welp gtg
2015-07-19 17:48 puxtu: post the rest on the thread
2015-07-19 18:01 JamesHappy15: ok back, that was longer than i expected, demn mom
2015-07-19 18:02 JamesHappy15: oh ok
2015-07-19 18:03 puxtu: demn
2015-07-19 18:03 JamesHappy15: i'm too lazy to post
2015-07-19 18:04 puxtu: lol
2015-07-19 18:07 JamesHappy15: so continue to irc or nah (if nah, expected 5 days for the post)
2015-07-19 18:08 puxtu: nah
2015-07-19 18:08 puxtu: lol
2015-07-19 18:08 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-19 18:09 JamesHappy15: 2lazy2mod anyway
2015-07-20 21:45 puxtu: james i love you
2015-07-20 21:45 JamesHappy15: ACTION seen
2015-07-20 21:45 puxtu: let's irc :)
2015-07-20 21:46 puxtu: irc sex
2015-07-20 21:46 puxtu: i mean mod
2015-07-20 21:46 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 21:48 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736928 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD]]
2015-07-20 21:49 JamesHappy15: 00:07:305 add or i kill you
2015-07-20 21:49 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-20 21:49 JamesHappy15: heh
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: sorry m8
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: vocal only
2015-07-20 21:50 puxtu: that bass is inaudible
2015-07-20 21:50 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 21:50 JamesHappy15: ACTION kills puxtu
2015-07-20 21:51 puxtu: <3
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: o ded
2015-07-20 21:54 puxtu: nice link
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255-
2015-07-20 21:54 JamesHappy15: wat
2015-07-20 21:54 puxtu: nice link [2]
2015-07-20 21:55 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255 (39255|3,39330|2,39405|1,39480|0,39555|2,39630|1) -
2015-07-20 21:55 JamesHappy15: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415534 pls]
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: wait
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: is that HD diff
2015-07-20 21:56 JamesHappy15: why NM
2015-07-20 21:56 puxtu: ha?
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: nah
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: i skip NM
2015-07-20 21:57 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: so HD
2015-07-20 21:57 JamesHappy15: NM is good i think
2015-07-20 21:58 puxtu: that's good to hear
2015-07-20 22:01 JamesHappy15: 00:43:455 (43455|3) - barely audible
2015-07-20 22:03 puxtu: are you deaf
2015-07-20 22:03 JamesHappy15: ye
2015-07-20 22:04 JamesHappy15: 00:45:855 (45855|3) - following vocal?
2015-07-20 22:04 JamesHappy15: slightly late
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: are you ok
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: D:
2015-07-20 22:05 puxtu: no it's not late
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: no it's late
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: try hear in 25%
2015-07-20 22:05 JamesHappy15: or just ignore it
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: i followed the guitar song
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: D:
2015-07-20 22:06 puxtu: *sound
2015-07-20 22:07 JamesHappy15: oh god i must be tired
2015-07-20 22:07 puxtu: :D
2015-07-20 22:08 JamesHappy15: [http://puu.sh/j63Uv/398c178c9c.png send halp]
2015-07-20 22:11 puxtu: dude pls
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: wow i'm such a slowpoke
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: 02:15:391-
2015-07-20 22:18 JamesHappy15: inb5 nice link
2015-07-20 22:19 JamesHappy15: add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 22:19 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 22:19 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: same
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: you need to put - in the end
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391-
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: like 02:39:391 -
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: that
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: with a space
2015-07-20 22:20 JamesHappy15: 02:39:391 -
2015-07-20 22:20 puxtu: gj
2015-07-20 22:21 puxtu: good boy
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: 02:46:591 -
2015-07-20 22:21 JamesHappy15: cymbals
2015-07-20 22:22 JamesHappy15: ok done
2015-07-20 22:22 JamesHappy15: for hd
2015-07-20 22:23 puxtu: hype
2015-07-20 22:23 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-07-20 22:23 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736929 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [HD+]]
2015-07-20 22:25 JamesHappy15: 00:10:305 (10305|0,10305|3) - why 2 notes when 00:10:605 (10605|1,10905|0,11205|1) - only one?
2015-07-20 22:25 JamesHappy15: all white ticks
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: up to 00:17:205
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: 00:17:205 -
2015-07-20 22:26 puxtu: my mistake
2015-07-20 22:26 puxtu: fixed
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: gj
2015-07-20 22:26 JamesHappy15: 00:17:205 (17205|0,17205|3) - one pls
2015-07-20 22:27 JamesHappy15: 00:18:555 (18555|0) - add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:27 puxtu: k removed
2015-07-20 22:28 puxtu: double chord isn't enough? D:
2015-07-20 22:29 JamesHappy15: n
2015-07-20 22:31 JamesHappy15: from 00:19:905 - to 00:28:305 -
2015-07-20 22:32 JamesHappy15: intended? only one note on the white tick except the cymbal part
2015-07-20 22:32 puxtu: hmm?
2015-07-20 22:32 puxtu: what do you mean
2015-07-20 22:33 JamesHappy15: like this one 00:19:905 (19905|3,19905|0) -
2015-07-20 22:34 puxtu: oh
2015-07-20 22:34 puxtu: it's doubled because there's a cymbal there
2015-07-20 22:34 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 22:35 JamesHappy15: 00:36:705 (36705|1) - add one for cymbals
2015-07-20 22:36 JamesHappy15: 00:48:555 (48555|1) - ^ or not
2015-07-20 22:37 puxtu: `ye
2015-07-20 22:39 JamesHappy15: 00:58:155 (58155|2) - tishh
2015-07-20 22:39 puxtu: welp i think double is enough
2015-07-20 22:39 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 22:40 JamesHappy15: o
2015-07-20 22:40 JamesHappy15: k
2015-07-20 22:41 JamesHappy15: 01:26:955 (86955|2) - pls +
2015-07-20 22:41 puxtu: i'll + it in mx
2015-07-20 22:41 JamesHappy15: ookk
2015-07-20 22:41 puxtu: :)
2015-07-20 22:42 JamesHappy15: 01:31:755 (91755|3) - tishh
2015-07-20 22:42 JamesHappy15: 01:36:555 (96555|0) - ^
2015-07-20 22:42 puxtu: err lol
2015-07-20 22:44 JamesHappy15: 01:36:855 (96855|2,96930|0,97005|3,97080|1,97155|3,97230|0,97305|3,97305|2) -
2015-07-20 22:44 puxtu: hm?
2015-07-20 22:44 JamesHappy15: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415784 pls]
2015-07-20 22:47 JamesHappy15: if you do that do this also 01:38:055 (98055|3,98130|2,98205|0,98280|1,98355|3,98430|2,98505|1,98505|0) -
2015-07-20 22:47 JamesHappy15: in reverse
2015-07-20 22:48 puxtu: ok
2015-07-20 22:48 JamesHappy15: 01:46:155 - missing one?
2015-07-20 22:49 puxtu: nope
2015-07-20 22:49 puxtu: the triplet has guitar on it
2015-07-20 22:49 JamesHappy15: 01:55:755 (115755|1) - +
2015-07-20 22:51 puxtu: remember me to add it on mx
2015-07-20 22:52 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-07-20 22:55 JamesHappy15: 02:54:991 (174991|0) - +
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: 02:56:941 (176941|3,176941|0,177016|2,177091|1,177166|2,177241|1,177316|0,177391|3,177466|2,177541|3,177541|1,177691|2,177691|0) -
2015-07-20 22:57 puxtu: hey
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415842 just a suggestion]
2015-07-20 22:57 puxtu: i thought you were ded
2015-07-20 22:57 JamesHappy15: n
2015-07-20 22:58 JamesHappy15: u r
2015-07-20 22:58 puxtu: n u
2015-07-20 22:58 JamesHappy15: n u
2015-07-20 22:58 puxtu: n u
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: n u
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: ok stop
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: 03:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2,186691|3) - 2 is enough
2015-07-20 22:59 JamesHappy15: and done
2015-07-20 23:00 puxtu: ok
2015-07-20 23:00 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-07-20 23:01 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [MX]]
2015-07-20 23:03 JamesHappy15: 00:36:705 (36705|2) - +
2015-07-20 23:04 JamesHappy15: 00:37:155 (37155|1) - ^
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: lmao
2015-07-20 23:06 JamesHappy15: 하하
2015-07-20 23:06 puxtu: 555
2015-07-20 23:07 JamesHappy15: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2015-07-20 23:07 JamesHappy15: 00:40:155 (40155|2) - you know what to do
2015-07-20 23:08 JamesHappy15: 00:43:755 (43755|2) -
2015-07-20 23:08 puxtu: wkwkwkw
2015-07-20 23:09 JamesHappy15: demn cymbals
2015-07-20 23:09 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: ok fk cymbals
2015-07-20 23:10 puxtu: do you think i should add triplets in the chorus too?
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: hmmm
2015-07-20 23:10 JamesHappy15: why not
2015-07-20 23:11 puxtu: ye why not
2015-07-20 23:11 JamesHappy15: ADD MOAR
2015-07-20 23:11 puxtu: ok all added
2015-07-20 23:11 JamesHappy15: nice
2015-07-20 23:13 JamesHappy15: 00:57:705 (57705|2,57705|3) - one pls
2015-07-20 23:13 JamesHappy15: not too loud
2015-07-20 23:14 JamesHappy15: if you applied it, do the same on SC
2015-07-20 23:15 puxtu: lol k
2015-07-20 23:16 puxtu: hd+ has the same pattern too
2015-07-20 23:16 JamesHappy15: just do it
2015-07-20 23:16 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-07-20 23:16 puxtu: yesterday you said tomorrow
2015-07-20 23:17 JamesHappy15: tmrw....oh
2015-07-20 23:19 puxtu: ok all done
2015-07-20 23:21 JamesHappy15: 02:35:266 - i heard some
2015-07-20 23:21 puxtu: no i don't hear anything
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 23:22 puxtu: a
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: on 25%
2015-07-20 23:22 JamesHappy15: i swear
2015-07-20 23:23 JamesHappy15: i heard some
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: k then
2015-07-20 23:23 puxtu: added
2015-07-20 23:24 JamesHappy15: 02:38:791 (158791|1,158866|2,158941|0,158941|3,159016|1,159091|2,159166|1,159241|0,159241|3) - do trills or nope
2015-07-20 23:24 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:25 JamesHappy15: wait im not done yet
2015-07-20 23:25 JamesHappy15: >:C
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: trills like what
2015-07-20 23:25 puxtu: gimme an example
2015-07-20 23:26 JamesHappy15: like the ss recently
2015-07-20 23:27 puxtu: 2lazy4u
2015-07-20 23:27 JamesHappy15: ye
2015-07-20 23:27 JamesHappy15: owait
2015-07-20 23:28 JamesHappy15: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3415995
2015-07-20 23:30 puxtu: k
2015-07-20 23:31 JamesHappy15: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:31 JamesHappy15: finally
2015-07-20 23:32 JamesHappy15: im so done
2015-07-20 23:32 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:33 puxtu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
2015-07-20 23:34 puxtu: are you there
2015-07-20 23:34 JamesHappy15: my eyes
2015-07-20 23:34 JamesHappy15: damn
2015-07-20 23:35 puxtu: lol
2015-07-20 23:36 puxtu: just give up ;)
2015-07-20 23:36 JamesHappy15: a
2015-07-20 23:37 JamesHappy15: 00:39:255 (39255|3,39255|1,39330|2,39405|1,39405|3,39480|0,39555|3,39555|1,39630|2) -
2015-07-20 23:37 JamesHappy15: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3416030
2015-07-20 23:37 puxtu: what's up with that
2015-07-20 23:37 puxtu: oh ok
2015-07-20 23:38 JamesHappy15: ok you win
2015-07-20 23:38 JamesHappy15: i give up
2015-07-20 23:39 JamesHappy15: im so fking done
2015-07-20 23:39 puxtu: lol yay
2015-07-20 23:39 JamesHappy15: gotta post this now
2015-07-20 23:40 puxtu: oka
2015-07-20 23:40 puxtu: y
Topic Starter
puxtu
9 days of irc mods was real
JamesHappy
wkwkwkwkwk
Cryolien
hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note?
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord?

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?

00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 -

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^

man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
><
Topic Starter
puxtu

Cryolien wrote:

hi puxtu
(((disclaimer! i may or may not have ideas what i'm doing)))

lets do this
1|2|3|4
[SC]things
00:07:155 - 00:07:305 - 00:07:455 - add note? n, vocal and audible bass sounds only
02:37:441 - make it a 4 note chord? nice idea

00:09:255 - move to 4?
00:10:005 - move to 1?
02:08:791 - move to 4?
02:09:091 - move to 1?
02:11:191 - move to 3?
02:11:491 - move to 2?
02:13:741 - move to 1?
02:14:041 - move to 3?
00:36:630 - remove?
03:04:666 - remove?
well lol idk which notes you're talking about but I re-arranged some my patterns

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 - oh the 1/1 notes in kiai time? they're for the synth in the bg song and also because testplayers thinks my patterns on that part is quite underwhelming so I added more notes there

00:49:755 - 00:50:955 - 00:52:155 - 00:54:555 - 00:55:755 - 00:56:955 - 00:59:355 - 01:00:555 - 01:01:755 - 01:04:155 - 01:05:355 - 01:06:555 - these doesn't sound like a strong beat for it to be 3 note chord (but again, it might be your own preference or mapping over something i can't hear, so once again, may follow or ignore) ye lol that triplet is for cymbals just like in my nonsense map :^)
01:47:355 - 01:48:555 - 01:49:755 - 01:52:155 - 01:53:355 - 01:54:555 - 01:56:955 - 01:58:155 - 01:59:355 - 02:01:755 - 02:02:955 - ^
02:40:591 - 02:42:991 - 02:44:191 - 02:45:391 - 02:52:591 - 02:53:791 - ^

man, this was tough, sorry if this isn't helpful enough or if you feel like most of these are not much use
><
well thx m8!
JSELENABELIEBER
[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
Topic Starter
puxtu

Cparn wrote:

[SC]
00:31:080 (31080|2) - move to 2

00:30:105 (30105|0) - move to 3

00:31:680 (31680|2) - move to 3

00:32:655 (32655|2) - add note here

00:41:205 (41205|1) - here too

00:41:655 (41655|2) - move to 1

00:44:205 (44205|1) - delete, no sound are u deaf

01:45:405 (105405|1,105705|2,106005|1) - ctrl+h this would be much better

01:47:805 (107805|2,108105|2) - move to 2,1

02:22:141 (142141|3,142291|3,142441|3,142591|3) - I like this hammers :^)

02:39:166 (159166|2,159391|2,159541|3) - move 1 column to the right

02:47:191 (167191|3) - move to 2

02:54:991 (174991|3) - soft-finish here


glhf, great map
the rest is applied
thank you!
Gexigamma
Hai pux, le stupid suggestion here.

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.
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