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Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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puxtu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 September 2015 at 16:30:17

Artist: Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin
Title: Tokyo Teddy Bear
Tags: Vocaloid Neru Cover 鬱-P UtsuP 鏡音リン VOCALOUD SERIES 01 Breaking of the Emotion Mix TTB PXT
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3901kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1,48 stars, 656 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2,68 stars, 1542 notes)
  3. HD+ - 4Key (3,37 stars, 1726 notes)
  4. MX - 4Key (3,9 stars, 1907 notes)
  5. NM - 4Key (2,19 stars, 1158 notes)
  6. SC - 4Key (4,45 stars, 2268 notes)
  7. SHD - 4Key (5,06 stars, 2883 notes)
Download: Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Background Source
here's the original background. I don't like the colorful image so I re-colored it hehe
jhlee approves
he once FC'd the SHD with HR when the map is still in pending https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3486592 and then he fc'd again with HD on the first day when the map ranked lmao

Evening
irc rog :

16:17 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Neru - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Utsu-P cover) [PXT]]
16:17 puxtu: is it right?
16:17 puxtu: the tittle
16:17 puxtu: title
16:20 Z3nx: idk
16:21 puxtu: should it be
16:21 Z3nx: go find the album or something
16:21 puxtu: utsu-p - TTB (neru cover)
16:21 puxtu: or
16:21 Z3nx: go find the album
16:21 puxtu: neru - ttb (utsu-p mix)
16:22 puxtu: ok thanks for your help
16:23 puxtu: http://puu.sh/i5I4y/d2727f9e13.png
16:23 Z3nx: yea, you should copy directly
16:23 puxtu: b-but..
16:24 Z3nx: Utsup feat. Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Neru cover) ? _ ?
16:24 puxtu: not this? _ ?
16:24 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Neru - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Utsu-P cover) [PXT]]
16:24 Z3nx: or just google the album and stuff
16:24 puxtu: i already have the album
16:25 Z3nx: uhhhh
16:25 puxtu: okay okay!!!!
16:25 Z3nx: i'll check for you later
16:26 Z3nx: after i irc with eter
16:26 puxtu: no need
16:27 Z3nx: I'LL CHECK FOR YOU
16:58 puxtu: timing mod pls
16:58 *puxtu is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Neru - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Utsu-P mix) [PXT]] <osu!mania> |4K|
16:58 Z3nx: lol k
17:00 Z3nx: coo song
17:00 puxtu: coo
17:00 puxtu: see on the blue line
17:00 puxtu: the bpm is changing
17:00 Z3nx: what blue line
17:00 puxtu: bookmark thing
17:00 Z3nx: oh
17:01 puxtu: i really hate timing
17:01 Z3nx: yea i'll do this for you
17:01 puxtu: <33
17:05 Z3nx: ok uhh
17:05 Z3nx: 02:04:244 -
17:05 Z3nx: i think i'll write in 1 line
17:05 Z3nx: else imma spam
17:05 puxtu: uhh?
17:06 Z3nx: 02:04:244 - 180 | 02:04:577 - 160 | 02:04:952 - 140 | 02:05:380 - 120 | 02:05:880 - 200 | 02:17:744 - 200 | 02:37:094 - 200
17:07 Z3nx: uhh wait
17:07 Z3nx: 02:17:744 - lemme check this lol
17:07 puxtu: ugh
17:07 puxtu: can you gimme the timing code
17:07 puxtu: lmao
17:07 Z3nx: the last 2 timing points are not needed
17:07 Z3nx: aa ok
17:08 puxtu: wait
17:08 puxtu: how about my offset?
17:08 Z3nx: it's fine
17:08 puxtu: ok
17:08 Z3nx: though i would suggest to have it start on the first note
17:09 puxtu: oh
17:09 puxtu: ok
17:09 Z3nx: http://puu.sh/i5JG7/c6945ab780.txt
17:10 puxtu: ok nice
17:10 puxtu: thx man
17:10 Z3nx: np
17:10 Z3nx: love this song
17:10 Z3nx: the map looks fun 2
17:10 puxtu: yeah i love this song too
17:22 puxtu: oh you forgot to post that on thread
17:24 Z3nx: o
17:25 Z3nx: na it's ok
17:25 puxtu: post it
17:25 puxtu: that's not a suggestion
17:25 Z3nx: ok link
17:25 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/708663 Neru - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Utsu-P mix) [PXT]]
17:25 Z3nx: i'll checkfor metadata then get back 2 u
17:25 puxtu: nice
17:25 puxtu: you're the man
17:53 Z3nx: ok so
17:53 Z3nx: 鬱P feat. 鏡音リン - 東京テディベア
17:53 Z3nx: UtsuP feat. Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear
17:53 puxtu: lmao
17:54 puxtu: that's the metadata from the mp3 file right?
17:54 Z3nx: ye
17:54 Z3nx: i got it myself also
17:54 Z3nx: so
17:54 puxtu: i know
17:54 puxtu: but
17:54 puxtu: there's a but
17:55 Z3nx: wud
17:58 puxtu: yea yea
17:58 puxtu: i'll change it
17:58 Z3nx: o ok
YunoFanatic
Can i be ur tedi ber  ̄(工) ̄)
YunoFanatic
Wowowowow double post.
Topic Starter
puxtu

YunoFanatic wrote:

Can i be ur tedi ber  ̄(工) ̄)
daww ofcourse bby
Hellgert
i will mod your SHD only becuz this song will hard to mod

00:47:744 and 00:47:969 - remove
00:48:194 - add one note
02:06:930 - 02:10:680 - [1/2]put all note in the snap i give
02:54:330 (174330|2,174405|1) - remove
02:54:630 (174630|2,174705|3) - add one note

need take some time ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;;w;
Ciel
rawr I'm a Yoshi rawr new username needed rawr rawr rawr
Also stop getting muted :3

SHP9
00:15:044 - You can probably afford to add more notes as a buildup
00:19:844 - Note: for these dense jump/handstreams, I will be mostly useless in modding them. Other than counting notes, I won't be able to effectively evaluate playability (other than hard sugoi)
00:21:044 - Any reason you go for 2 notes here instead?
00:29:369 - You can afford to make this 2 notes, given the (seemingly) intended difficulty.
00:29:594 - Same pattern repeated in this section of the music as the previous?
00:34:244 - Nothing seems special enough here to warrant a 3rd note
Not sure if you care about difficulty ordering, but 00:39:194 - and 00:40:394 - seem harder than 00:41:594 - and 00:42:794 - . Likewise, 00:46:394 - is easier than the previous 2 instances.
00:47:594 - I definitely have some issues with this section (its playable, but other issues) The # of notes seem somewhat arbitrarily decided or something.
00:58:394 (58394|0,58544|0,58694|0) - You don't do this 3 notes in the same column when doing the 2->3->1 thing before or after this (in this section), so it feels a bit out of place while playing it.
01:27:044 - Notes don't seem to start here, especially when considering the scream (?. Sounds like someone lost their voice or something. Doesn't sound like Rin ;; (ok it kinda does))
01:29:369 - ^
01:31:769 - ^
01:34:169 - ^
01:37:994 - More of these patterns again (not necessarily a bad thing). I'm personally slightly against them, but that's just me (keyboard issues)
01:45:494 - I suggest making this SV 1.00x instead, or making 01:45:794 - 0.75x. These are the same musically, and should end up fairly similar to each other. (I'm for switching to 0.75x)
01:57:194 (117194|0,117344|0,117494|0) - See from above, though you probably copy pastaed (i think)
02:04:244 - Scroll speed makes me aaah. Currently, calling previous speed 1.00x, your actual scrolling speed goes 1.00x (entering this part) to 1.08x, 1.12x, 1.12x, 1.08x, which is just... weird. For a flat SV, you should be using 1.11(11111)x, 1.25x, 1.42(857142repeated)x, 1.66(666666)x for your green lines.
02:06:930 - Complete lack of PR when it is possible irks me, but might be intentional
02:15:330 - Not hold notes? D: (Considering you already have holds earlier in the song, which means your not against them)
02:37:680 - Is a vastly different pattern and far more difficulty than 02:38:730 - , for exactly the same sound in the music.
03:02:055 - wth is going on here???

MAKE IT NOT HP9 SO I CAN PASS IT TYVM
GSculerlor-
Are you going to ranked this map or you want to be graved?
I like this song
Topic Starter
puxtu

Hellgert wrote:

i will mod your SHD only becuz this song will hard to mod

00:47:744 and 00:47:969 - remove
00:48:194 - add one note
02:06:930 - 02:10:680 - [1/2]put all note in the snap i give
02:54:330 (174330|2,174405|1) - remove
02:54:630 (174630|2,174705|3) - add one note

need take some time ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;;w;
all applied kek, need more mod kek

Yoshiap wrote:

rawr I'm a Yoshi rawr new username needed rawr rawr rawr
Also stop getting muted :3 there's no brake on tuned out train

[SHP9]00:15:044 - You can probably afford to add more notes as a buildup added there and added to all same sections
00:19:844 - Note: for these dense jump/handstreams, I will be mostly useless in modding them. Other than counting notes, I won't be able to effectively evaluate playability (other than hard sugoi) i just want to see the world burns :3
00:21:044 - Any reason you go for 2 notes here instead? ayy my bad, fixed
00:29:369 - You can afford to make this 2 notes, given the (seemingly) intended difficulty. oh ok
00:29:594 - Same pattern repeated in this section of the music as the previous? well yea lol, I'll re-arrange them a lil bit
00:34:244 - Nothing seems special enough here to warrant a 3rd note actually there's a cymbal but it's too weak, ok deleted
Not sure if you care about difficulty ordering, but 00:39:194 - and 00:40:394 - seem harder than 00:41:594 - and 00:42:794 - . Likewise, 00:46:394 - is easier than the previous 2 instances. re-arranged them all
00:47:594 - I definitely have some issues with this section (its playable, but other issues) The # of notes seem somewhat arbitrarily decided or something. it was intended
00:58:394 (58394|0,58544|0,58694|0) - You don't do this 3 notes in the same column when doing the 2->3->1 thing before or after this (in this section), so it feels a bit out of place while playing it. lol okay
01:27:044 - Notes don't seem to start here, especially when considering the scream (?. Sounds like someone lost their voice or something. Doesn't sound like Rin ;; (ok it kinda does)) welp i just following the drum kick
01:29:369 - ^
01:31:769 - ^
01:34:169 - ^
01:37:994 - More of these patterns again (not necessarily a bad thing). I'm personally slightly against them, but that's just me (keyboard issues) yea lol
01:45:494 - I suggest making this SV 1.00x instead, or making 01:45:794 - 0.75x. These are the same musically, and should end up fairly similar to each other. (I'm for switching to 0.75x) nah, dat sv is super ez
01:57:194 (117194|0,117344|0,117494|0) - See from above, though you probably copy pastaed (i think) fixed
02:04:244 - Scroll speed makes me aaah. Currently, calling previous speed 1.00x, your actual scrolling speed goes 1.00x (entering this part) to 1.08x, 1.12x, 1.12x, 1.08x, which is just... weird. For a flat SV, you should be using 1.11(11111)x, 1.25x, 1.42(857142repeated)x, 1.66(666666)x for your green lines.
02:06:930 - Complete lack of PR when it is possible irks me, but might be intentional idk how2pr
02:15:330 - Not hold notes? D: (Considering you already have holds earlier in the song, which means your not against them) holds are cancer
02:37:680 - Is a vastly different pattern and far more difficulty than 02:38:730 - , for exactly the same sound in the music. fixed
03:02:055 - wth is going on here??? ok fixed lmao

MAKE IT NOT HP9 SO I CAN PASS IT TYVM is 8.7 fine for you? rip. i forgot to change the HP
thanks for mods!

Pra-GSculerlor wrote:

Are you going to ranked this map or you want to be graved?
I like this song
graveyard? lmao don't be ridiculous, all my pending maps are for rank!
IamBaum
Hi There
irc log
19:03 puxtu: hello baum
19:03 puxtu: can you help with a timing
19:03 puxtu: timing problem
19:04 IamBaum: hihi puxtu, maybe, if there aren't too many timing points, i might try it now :)
19:04 *puxtu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [SC]]
19:04 puxtu: great
19:04 puxtu: it's just about offset
19:04 puxtu: XD
19:04 IamBaum: Ahh that song ^^
19:04 IamBaum: Alright
19:04 IamBaum: oh so many diffs ^^
19:05 IamBaum: ok, which should i check?
19:05 puxtu: ^^
19:05 puxtu: D:
19:05 puxtu: the timing
19:05 puxtu: lol
19:05 IamBaum: i mean
19:05 puxtu: please ^^
19:05 IamBaum: which timing points, all of them or is there a specific opne
19:05 IamBaum: ^1
19:05 puxtu: offset?
19:06 IamBaum: Ahh nvm ok then i will check all offsets ^^
19:06 puxtu: XDD
19:10 puxtu: the SHD looks horrible right? XD
19:11 IamBaum: uhmm dunno atm tbh, i'm taking a look at the NM atm ^^
19:11 puxtu: ^^
19:28 IamBaum: http://puu.sh/iVpxB.png Hmm this sounds about right to me :)
19:28 puxtu: :D
19:29 puxtu: thanks baum
19:29 IamBaum: although the first 8 seconds are really hard... ^^
19:29 IamBaum: But starting around 8 secs, it sounds right in time for me
19:29 IamBaum: u are welcome
19:29 puxtu: XD
19:29 puxtu: thank you very much!
19:29 puxtu: ^^
19:30 IamBaum: Ahh np, i hope it will also sound right to you ^^
19:30 puxtu: it's perfect now :D
19:31 IamBaum: Glad to hear that it was useful :)
Good luck with the map o/
Topic Starter
puxtu
changed the mp3 and thank you baum for new offset ^^
NlHIL
EZ
00:38:055 - add note
01:19:605 - ^
01:56:805 - ^
02:02:655 - delete note
02:02:805 - add note
02:03:251 - ^
02:42:841 - ^
02:45:087 - delete note
02:45:241 - add note
02:53:491 - delete note
02:53:641 - add note
NM
02:54:391 - add or 02:54:691 - delete
Topic Starter
puxtu
thanks for mods! 80% applied
Lunatic Raccoon
Nice song www kudosu shot :^)
YunoFanatic
u dum asshat
SpectorDG
Yo. (MOD Req for PM)
HD
00:38:280 (38280|3) - Move 3
00:38:355 (38355|0) - Move 2
00:38:505 (38505|2) - Move 3

00:41:730 (41730|3) - Move 3
00:41:880 (41880|2) - Move 2
00:42:030 (42030|3) - Move 3

00:42:255 (42255|2) - Move 4
00:47:205 (47205|1) - Move 1
00:47:355 (47355|0) - Move 2

01:25:755 (85755|0,86505|1,86505|2) - Focus in Mid add LN (Ups noise)
01:46:155 (106155|3,106155|0) - Merge

02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0,137341|1,137341|2) - Again, Focus in Mid and add LN
03:06:316 (186316|3) - Move 3
03:06:391 (186391|0) - Move 2
03:06:466 (186466|2) - Move 1 (Listen, it's ok trust me)

HD MOD END. #Vocaloid Awful Guitar XD <3 I love this
Goodluck ~ :)
Kamikaze
the fuck I forced you to do you dipshit
Topic Starter
puxtu
fuck off u scrub
Kamikaze
suck my dick
Topic Starter
puxtu
No u
Koneko-
here's my suggesion.

All difficult General
02:15:391 ~ 02:17:202 - make LN?
02:54:991 - make LN?

NM, HD, HD+, SC, MX, General
00:01:455 - add?
00:03:705 - ^
00:06:255 - ^
00:07:155 - ^
00:07:305 - ^
00:08:505 - ^

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:09:091 (129091|2) - move 0
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:341 (131341|1,131491|3) - move 0, 0
02:12:241 (132241|0) - move 3
02:12:541 (132541|3) - move 0
02:13:591 (133591|2) - move 1
02:13:891 (133891|0) - move 2

NM
00:37:530 (37530|1,37605|2) - move 2, 3?
00:38:430 (38430|3) - move 2?
01:26:955 - make one LN?
01:27:105 (87105|1,87255|2) - remove?
01:29:355 - make one LN?
01:29:655 (89655|1) - remove?
01:31:755 - make one LN?
01:31:905 (91905|2,92055|1) - remove?
01:34:155 - make one LN?
01:34:455 (94455|2) - remove?

HD, HD+, MX, SC
01:26:955 ~ 01:34:455 - follow NM difficult mod style?

SC
02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - i think this part overuse 1/4 note. try this style.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3382404

SHD
00:29:505 ~ 00:36:705 / 02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - same reason, recommend rearrange. (follow SC difficult.)
00:47:655 ~ 00:48:480 - it's really hard and unnecessary use 2 notes.

00:57:405 ~ 00:57:705 - make (01)(23) trills.
01:36:855 ~ 01:37:230 - make trills. other parts are trills.

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:08:941 (128941|3) - move 1
02:09:241 (129241|1) - move 3
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:191 (131191|2) - move 1
02:11:491 (131491|0) - move 2
02:13:591 (133591|0) - move 2
02:13:891 (133891|3) - move 1

/////////////////////////////////////////////////////
02:37:741 ~ 02:38:191 / 02:38:791 ~ 02:39:241 - if really want use jack, make this.
02:37:891 (157891|2) - move 1
02:38:941 (158941|1) - move 2
02:39:241 (159241|2) - move 1


shouldn't follow my mods. GL~
(i wonder correct write @_@)

i think some notes are make LN cuz some part too simple.
Hydria

I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

SC
00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.


MX


No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
Topic Starter
puxtu

Hydria wrote:


I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

SC
00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.


MX


No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
ok my bad, sorry pls don't eat me ;^)
XeoStyle
Helloooow !

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

My personal suggestions :

EZ
00:30:255 (30255|0) - move to 1 or 2

00:31:455 (31455|1) - move to 2 or 3

(kiai 1)

00:55:305 (55305|1,55455|2) - maybe better with 1 then 2

00:53:805 (53805|0) - move to 2

(endkiai 1)

01:25:005 (85005|1,85605|1) - move the 2 notes to 2 (or 3, but meh)

01:33:705 (93705|1,94005|2) - 2 then 1

01:37:305 I think from this part to the kiai there is too much "upper" patterns (going to 0 -> 3), feel free to change somes patterns or not. :)

(kiai 2)

01:56:505 (116505|2,116655|1) - 1 then 2

02:00:255 (120255|3) - move to 2

02:04:638 (124638|3,124638|2,125013|1,125013|0,125441|1,125441|2,125941|0,125941|1) - imo LN + simple note are a little bit too hard for beginners players, so maybe remove simple notes ?

(endkiai2)

02:35:791 (155791|3) - move to 2

(kiai3)

02:44:641 (164641|1) - move to 0

02:48:241 (168241|3) - move to 2

02:51:391 (171391|2) - move to 3

02:52:591 (172591|1) - move to 0

(endkiai 3)

03:01:591 (181591|1) - move to 0

03:05:791 (185791|0) - maybe to 1 ?

Gonna edit my post for the NM (and maybe more) when I have the time.
I PM you when it's ok ! ;)

Great song btw ^_^

edit:
LET DO DIS :

NM
00:11:205 (11205|2) - move to 3

00:12:705 (12705|3) - move to 2

00:26:355 (26355|3) - move to 2

00:36:255 (36255|2) - move to 1

00:44:355 (44355|0,44505|2,44655|0,44805|2) - maybe change this pattern to 0303 (or another one ^^) because it's almost the same as the previous.

(kiai1)

00:51:555 (51555|3) - - move to 2

00:53:205 (53205|3) - maybe move to 2 because of the next pattern

01:04:455 (64455|2,64605|3,64755|0,64905|2,65055|1,65205|3) - change the whole pattern, it's almost the same as the previous :s

(endkiai1)

01:13:755 (73755|1) - move to 2

01:20:955 (80955|2) - pls I know you hate LNs, but this is a good example of good location to place one (The vocal is perfect and it's a big hole without it :/ )

01:25:755 (85755|0) - ^

01:27:255 maybe add one note at 0 here ? (because of the kick)

01:29:655 ^ at 0 ot 3

01:32:055 ^ with 01:32:205 (92205|0,92355|1,92505|2,92655|0,92805|1,92955|2) - double 0 1 2 is meh... hum maybe more like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394404

01:34:455 ^ at 1 or 3

01:38:655 (98655|3) - move to 2

(kiai2)

01:55:305 (115305|2) - move to 0

02:00:255 (120255|3) - maybe move to 2 ?

(endkiai2)

02:08:491 (128491|2,128941|1) - 1 then 2 (if you do this move 02:09:841 (129841|2) - to 1)

02:11:491 (131491|3) - move to 0

02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|1) - DO YOU SMELL THE GUD LN ? :lol:

02:29:041 (149041|3) - move to 2

02:33:691 (153691|0) - move to 3 (if you do this move 02:33:841 (153841|3) - to 2)

(kiai3)

02:50:041 (170041|3,170041|1,170191|2,170191|0) - wouldn't it be a little bit to hard to have this pattern for NM players ? Feel free to change it or not.
02:51:091 (171091|1) - ? I would've put this to 0, huuum.

(endkiai3)

That's it, GL bro c:
Topic Starter
puxtu
all mods applied except about the lns loll
thanks!
YunoFanatic
Pucboi ha
Harbyter
no kudo

SPOILER
[SC]

00:20:355 (20355|1) - col 4

00:20:430 (20430|2,20505|1) - ctrl h

00:20:580 (20580|2) - 1

00:21:705 (21705|2) - 4

00:21:780 (21780|3,21855|2,21930|1) - 1 col left

00:21:855 (21855|0) - 4

00:22:005 (22005|0) - 2

00:27:105 (27105|1) - 4

00:27:180 (27180|3) - 2

just those xd
Topic Starter
puxtu
ayy
NlHIL
why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
sidew
puxtu sent me here

EZ
01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..

NM
00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4

HD
00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^


HD+
01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange?
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange?

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) -

MX
00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?

SC
00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12]
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -
BilliumMoto
blargh

22:22 puxtu: sup dawg
22:22 BilliumMoto: not much lol, just seizing the rare opportunity to play
22:22 BilliumMoto: hows it been for you
22:22 puxtu: alive
22:23 puxtu: can you check my map :D
22:26 puxtu: nope
22:26 puxtu: ttb one
22:26 puxtu: n[
22:26 *puxtu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 *BilliumMoto is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 puxtu: nice
22:27 BilliumMoto: oh snap no more SHD?
22:27 puxtu: ye
22:28 puxtu: shd is retardly overmapped
22:28 puxtu: ppl dont really like it
22:28 BilliumMoto: knowing kami, not surprised at all lol
22:28 BilliumMoto: playing now
22:28 puxtu: lol
22:32 puxtu: :D:D:D:D
22:32 puxtu: mod plls
22:32 puxtu: ;w;
22:36 BilliumMoto: mind doing a quick irc mod right now?
22:36 puxtu: suree
22:36 puxtu: let's do it
22:36 BilliumMoto: aight here we go
22:36 BilliumMoto: only one thing really stuck out to me on this MX diff
22:37 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|3) - should be a note at the 1/4 after this
22:37 BilliumMoto: you also missed this in the SC diff
22:38 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|3) - happens again here
22:38 puxtu: lol thanks
22:38 puxtu: for pointing that out
22:38 puxtu: XD
22:39 BilliumMoto: npnp
22:39 BilliumMoto: there's probably other stuff to work on in the MX
22:39 BilliumMoto: i honestly suggest making some of the patterns slightly harder
22:39 BilliumMoto: but moving on to the SC
22:40 puxtu: ok
22:40 BilliumMoto: 00:01:305 (1305|3) - forgot a note after this one?
22:40 BilliumMoto: for the bass
22:40 BilliumMoto: i know you're trying to encompass the vocal and the bassline at the same time but it feels a little empty here
22:41 BilliumMoto: and throughout the intro
22:41 BilliumMoto: 00:07:005 (7005|3) - especially after this note
22:42 BilliumMoto: 00:18:255 (18255|1) - missed a note on the 1/4 after this one
22:42 puxtu: wait
22:43 puxtu: hold your horses
22:43 BilliumMoto: i would actually jack it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413895
22:43 BilliumMoto: lol aight
22:43 puxtu: about the intro
22:43 puxtu: i only follow the vocal
22:43 BilliumMoto: 00:01:155 (1155|1) - ?
22:44 BilliumMoto: 00:02:355 (2355|0,2505|3,2655|1) - no vocals here so i assumed you were also following the bass to some degree
22:44 puxtu: bcause the bass is inaudible
22:45 puxtu: ok i'll add
22:45 puxtu: lol
22:46 BilliumMoto: lol
22:46 puxtu: added the 1/4 btw
22:46 BilliumMoto: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: i like minijacks that make sense
22:46 puxtu: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: 00:19:905 (19905|3) - im pondering the stream starting here
22:46 BilliumMoto: this is really fun as it is and serves a very good purpose
22:47 BilliumMoto: but i cant help but feel maybe something like truplets on the 1/1 and 1/4 everywhere else would be more fitting
22:48 BilliumMoto: basically what you have in MX but add one note every 1/1
22:48 BilliumMoto: actually, don't do that
22:48 BilliumMoto: that would make the stream more boring
22:48 BilliumMoto: but if wnyone else points it out, you should change it
22:48 BilliumMoto: *anyone
22:48 puxtu: oh
22:49 puxtu: add a triplet every 1/1?
22:49 puxtu: that's sounds great
22:49 BilliumMoto: as in three notes at a time, yea
22:49 BilliumMoto: but that with the doubles on 1/2 might make it a bit too hard
22:51 BilliumMoto: 00:48:705 (48705|2) - the chorus here feels awfully underwhelming to play compared everything that came after it
22:51 puxtu: hmmm
22:51 puxtu: yea what should i do with that
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921my personal suggestion
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921
22:52 puxtu: oh lns
22:53 BilliumMoto: that should be enough to make it feel more climactic
22:54 BilliumMoto: oh yea, i noticed there are very very few LNs in this map
22:54 BilliumMoto: this should fix that lol
22:54 puxtu: hmmmmm
22:54 BilliumMoto: 01:07:680 (67680|1,67830|3) - im not hearing these in the music
22:54 puxtu: are you sure
22:54 puxtu: about the lns
22:54 puxtu: that's for guitar
22:54 BilliumMoto: there is that synth line in the background you could follow with the LNs
22:55 puxtu: ok then
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:31:830 (91830|2,91905|1,91905|0,91980|3) - there's nothing here really
22:56 puxtu: removed
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|0,94380|1) - these too
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:005 (94005|2) - and i would move this note to the 1/2 beat after it
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:45:405 (105405|0,105405|3,105405|1) - good SVs :D
22:57 puxtu: :D
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - just a reminder to do whatever you did to the other chorus to this chorus as well
22:58 puxtu: all done
22:58 puxtu: just need some lns on chorus
22:58 puxtu: ye lol
22:58 puxtu: ik that
22:58 BilliumMoto: lol ofc
22:58 BilliumMoto: i just always get the uncontrollable urge to remind people to do that tho
22:59 BilliumMoto: 02:15:391 (135391|3) - long LN here maybe?
22:59 puxtu: xD
22:59 puxtu: nah
22:59 puxtu: i'll give player some rest
22:59 BilliumMoto: fair enough
23:00 BilliumMoto: 02:18:091 (138091|2) - this part also feels a little underwhelming
23:00 BilliumMoto: considering the dude is screaming their lungs out here lol
23:00 BilliumMoto: maybe add doubles every time there is a kick?
23:00 BilliumMoto: a kick drum
23:00 puxtu: okay
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|0) - you missed a note here, but i already said this for the MX diff
23:01 BilliumMoto: please make it a jack too
23:01 BilliumMoto: i would love a jack here if you couldnt tell
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:31:366 (151366|1) - here too
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|0) - and here
23:02 BilliumMoto: and the rest of the map looks good to me
23:02 puxtu: fixed
23:02 puxtu: http://puu.sh/j5Dfj/293d29b9d5.png like this?
23:03 BilliumMoto: YES
23:03 BilliumMoto: that is perfect
23:03 puxtu: lol okay
23:04 puxtu: idk adding lns will be a good idea
23:04 BilliumMoto: 02:54:766 (174766|0,174916|2) - not hearing these
23:04 puxtu: but i'll try it
23:04 BilliumMoto: hey it's all up to you
23:04 puxtu: remove that 1/4s
23:05 BilliumMoto: and ofc add doubles where you need them in order to keep the intensity of the map right at the end
23:06 puxtu: roger that
23:07 BilliumMoto: welp anything else i see would just be pointless nitpicking of extraneous detail, so that's all lol
23:07 BilliumMoto: uhh
23:07 BilliumMoto: make sure your metadata is ok
23:07 BilliumMoto: everything is snapped
23:07 BilliumMoto: bg not nsfw
23:07 BilliumMoto: blahblah
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