1. Astral Oni (4,94 stars, 2109 notes)

Kin wrote:

bonsoir \o/

IRC mod

01:17 Kin: au passage
01:17 Kin: resnap bien tes notes D:
01:17 Kin: check AIMod avec ctrl + shift + a
01:18 Jinyan: urgh
01:19 Jinyan: je hais quand ça me fait ça lol
01:19 Kin: y a une technique sinon
01:19 Kin: va dans timing setup panel
01:19 Kin: coche "scale object to new timing"
01:19 Kin: et ok
01:19 Kin: après normalement, tout devrait etre bon
01:20 Jinyan: ça me bousira pas les 1/6?
01:20 Kin: si ça les bousille
01:20 Kin: je les verais
01:20 Kin: vu que j'ai fais ça aussi
01:20 Jinyan: ouai, pour ça que je fait manuellement mdr
01:20 Jinyan: bah vasy, tu me diras ou sont les 1/6
01:20 Jinyan: ou jvais les noté --', chui con mdr
01:22 Kin: tu resnap manuelement ou t'as fais la technique ?
01:22 Jinyan: jvais faire la technique
01:22 Kin: okay
01:22 Jinyan: jvais avant ça marquer ou ya les 1/6
01:25 Kin: 01:18:140 (164,165,166,167,168,169,170) - 01:45:307 (331,332,333,334) - 02:38:140 (696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705) - 03:02:640 (902,903,904,905) - 03:55:473 (1289,1290,1291,1292,1293,1294,1295,1296,1297,1298) - 05:08:805 (1737,1738,1739,1740,1741,1742,1743,1744,1745,1746) - 
01:25 Kin: ça devrait normalement être les seuls
01:25 Jinyan: pour?
01:25 Jinyan: resnap?
01:25 Kin: ouais
01:25 Kin: ce sont les seuls 1/6 de la map si j'ai bien check
01:26 Jinyan: oh merci oui
01:27 Kin: oublie pas de tout décoché dans song setup, design
01:28 Jinyan: et voila done
01:28 Jinyan: lets get down to business
01:28 Jinyan: hahaha
01:29 Kin: 00:58:807 (11) - change le en K plutot que k ?
01:29 Kin: 01:04:140 (43) - ^
01:29 Kin: les notes sont aussi fortes que les précédent D
01:29 Jinyan: j'ai mis les K a cause du gros bruit de batterie et connerie?
01:29 Jinyan: ,*
01:29 Jinyan: tu pense que ça passe pas?
01:30 Kin: en K j'pense que c'est mieux qu'un simple petit k
01:30 Kin: vu que la batterie est bien forte à ce moment la
01:30 Jinyan: ah pasqu'il est en k?
01:30 Jinyan: mdr
01:30 Kin: ouais
01:30 Jinyan: jpensais qu'il etais en K
01:30 Kin: lol
01:31 Jinyan: autant pour moi xD
01:31 Kin: bah il est en petit k xD
01:32 Jinyan: je vois
01:32 Jinyan: ok ok done xD
01:32 Kin: 01:28:640 (233) - change le en petit d plutot que grand D ? j'ai l'impression qu'en grand D, il enlève un feeling sur le K D d'avant qui est sur la guitare
01:33 Jinyan: ouai ta raison
01:33 Jinyan: en plus, y'a pas vraiment besoin de le mettre, pas un gros truc sur cette note la
01:33 Kin: t'as oublié de les mettre en grosse note ? 01:32:640 (254,255,256,257,258) - 
01:34 Jinyan: ça arrive ça arrive
01:34 Jinyan: et le truc, c'est que quand je play, je dit "faut que j'aille regler ce truc"
01:35 Jinyan: et hop, je zape
01:35 Kin: et hop, on oublie
01:35 Kin: xD
01:35 Kin: ça m'arrive souvent
01:35 Kin: 01:40:640 (300) - change le en d ? la voix descend un peu sur cette note
01:35 Jinyan: omg
01:36 Jinyan: c'est qu'en plus, t'arrive a cerné ce que je map
01:36 Jinyan: O_O
01:36 Jinyan: pas souvent que ça arrive ça sur mes map mdrrr
01:36 Jinyan: gg
01:36 Kin: 01:44:640 (326) - pareil que précédament à propos du finish et du K D sur la guitare
01:37 Kin: ma politique du modding, est : comprendre ce que le mapper voulait faire, et mentionné la ou il a oublié ce qu'il voulait, ou la ou il s'est raté
01:37 Kin: perso, je pense que dire sa propre opinion sur la map, ne fera qu'empirer la map
01:37 Jinyan: je te tire le chapeau sur cette stratégie
01:37 Jinyan: merci merci
01:37 Jinyan: pas tout le monde qui dit ça
01:38 Kin: on est peu à dire ça :D
01:38 Jinyan: beaucoup de moddeur font pas la différence entre opinion et proposition
01:38 Kin: mais les gens que je connais qui dissent ça, sont des très bon modder
01:38 Jinyan: enleve ça, j'aime pas
01:38 Jinyan: WTF
01:38 Jinyan: m'en branle que t'aime pas
01:38 Jinyan: mdr
01:38 Jinyan: apres si ono, tks, ou mmzz par exemple me disent ça
01:39 Jinyan: jle fait et me la ferme mdr
01:39 Kin: Ono, quand il moddait mes maps, il cernait toujours ce que je voulais faire
01:39 Kin: lol
01:39 Jinyan: mais t'es toujours le bienvenue pour des opinions ;)
01:39 Kin: 01:52:807 (371) - change le en k ? je sais pas comment dire, mais j'ai l'impression qu'il passe mieux
01:40 Jinyan: ouai, y'a un bruit de batterie qui demande un k
01:40 Jinyan: pour ça
01:41 Kin: 01:55:973 (390) - change le en simple d ? je dirais qu'il rend le grand K d'avant, et le grand K d'après moins expressif sur les notes bien strong
01:42 Jinyan: etrue
01:43 Kin: 02:12:140 (501) - change le en big D ? j'trouve que ça passe bien avec le vocal, et le fait que tu as utilisé un big K sur le vocal 1/1 avant
01:44 Jinyan: ok
01:45 Kin: 02:17:473 (542) - j'aurais tendance à plutot changer celui la en D. ça permettra de faire une différence sur ces notes la 02:16:807 (539,540,541) - qui sont certe forte, mais différente.
01:46 Jinyan: ici
01:46 Jinyan: j'ai mi en K surtout a cause du son de cloche
01:46 Jinyan: donc je sait pas trop :s
01:46 Jinyan: att je test
01:47 Jinyan: t'en pense quoi de le mettre en k seulement?
01:47 Kin: ça reste quand même une note vraiment forte
01:48 Kin: je dirais que la mettre en k serait un peu du gachis
01:48 Jinyan: hmm
01:48 Jinyan: ok bon je met en D alors
01:48 Kin: 02:21:140 (570,571,572) - utilise un kkd plutot pour mieux accentuer le vocal sur la 1ere note du triplet ?
01:49 Kin: 02:25:307 (600) - je dirais que changer celui la en d, permettrais de rendre le big K d'après plus accentué sur le vocal.
01:50 Jinyan: oki
01:50 Jinyan: c'est domage que les finishers sont pas accepté sur les triplet
01:50 Jinyan: j'en aurais tellement mis sur cette partie la xD
01:51 Kin: lol
01:51 Kin: 03:01:973 (897) - remove le finish, même raison que les autres, le K D guitare mentionné
01:52 Kin: 03:10:140 (942) - mes oreilles me laissent entendre un k içi
01:53 Kin: 03:20:807 (1004) - ^
01:53 Jinyan: pareil
01:54 Kin: 03:29:140 (1075,1076) - change les deux en big D ? la voix monte sur le triplet d'après
01:55 Kin: 03:43:807 (1196,1197,1198) - inverse le pattern en kkd pour rester sur le vocal ?
01:56 Jinyan: 03:44:307 (1200,1201,1202) -  tu pense pas que je devrais l'inverser lui aussi?
01:56 Kin: étant donné que le vocal est sur le red tick içi 03:44:307 - j'pense que c'est bon
01:57 Jinyan: 03:44:307 (1200) -  heu ici c'est un k
01:57 Jinyan: ah tu veut dire red tick oui, la bare
01:57 Kin: ouais
01:57 Jinyan: mais c'est bizare
01:57 Kin: vu que tu map k vocal vers cette endroit, j'pense que c'est bon
01:58 Jinyan: t'a rien dit sur la partie avec les finishers et triplet qui se suivent
01:58 Jinyan: c'est si bien fait que ça? mdr
01:58 Kin: bah, je comprends l'intention \o
01:58 Jinyan: xD
01:59 Kin: c'est vocal et big note strong drum
01:59 Jinyan: yup yup
01:59 Jinyan: bah si tu trouve que c'est bien ça m'arrange xD
02:00 Kin: 04:42:473 (1521,1522) - pareil que sur le pattern similaire que j'avais mentioné, change les en big D vu que la voix monte sur le triplet d'après
02:01 Jinyan: okii
02:01 Kin: 05:10:140 (3) - change le en K ? cette note est legerement plus accentué sur le drum
02:02 Jinyan: done
02:03 Kin: niveau pattern c'est tout ce que j'ai à dire \o
02:03 Kin: sinon, pourquoi ta SV est à 1,5 ?
02:03 Jinyan: ouai ça par contre, j'ai pas d'excuse mdr
02:03 Kin: les rankings criteria exige soit 1.4 soit 1.6
02:03 Jinyan: ou bien paske jme fesait chier a play sv 1.4 et HR
02:04 Jinyan: ça me paresser asser lent
02:04 Jinyan: jvais mettre a 1.4 et rajouté un peut sur les kiai
02:04 Jinyan: histoire de
02:04 Kin: avec le bpm, j'pense que 1,4 est le mieux
02:04 Jinyan: oh sinon, c'est oni ou inner tu pense?
02:04 Kin: Inner
02:04 Kin: et au passage
02:04 Kin: pas besoin de mettre ton pseudo dans le nom de la diff
02:05 Kin: juste Inner Oni devrait être bon
02:05 Jinyan: ouai jsait tkt mdr
02:05 Kin: tu peux toujours custom name la diff, si ça aucun rapport avec le pseudo (selon les rankings criteria)
02:05 Jinyan: vue que c'etais au début suposé etre une guest diff
02:05 Kin: ah
02:05 Kin: bah voila, c'est tout \o
02:05 Jinyan: astral inner?
02:05 Jinyan: nope, nul
02:06 Jinyan: bah mec, merci beaucoup pour ce super mod
02:06 Kin: de rien \o

1. from 01:18:807 - to 01:29:640 - with 02:52:140 - to 03:02:807 - I feel that these parts are similar and why you make differents patterns D: Try to avoid 01:20:557 (182,183) -
2. 01:32:140 (252,253) - Ctrl+G, and 01:32:640 (254,255,256,257,258,259) - make similar as 01:29:973 (242,243,244,245,246,247) - to keep consistency, and is more confortable while playing.
3. 01:35:557 (270,271) - Ctrl+G, It's a better way to add more emphasis to the next notes, and 01:35:473 (269,270,271,272,273,274) - Double triplet is boring.
4. from 01:38:973 - to 01:39:973 - I feel that you miss a lot of notes here? why you didn't make like 01:44:307 (324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - O.o?
5. delete: 03:16:640 - 03:16:307 - 03:15:140 - 03:14:807 - to keep previews patterns for a better consistency.
6. 04:31:890 (1444) - adjust this note.
7. 05:33:473 (195) - ^ tail of this slider is wrong, adjust please.

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ Sorry for delay D:

[Astral Oni]

1. from 01:18:807 - to 01:29:640 - with 02:52:140 - to 03:02:807 - I feel that these parts are similar and why you make differents patterns D: Try to avoid 01:20:557 (182,183) - no they aren't similar, actually I managed to map each part without copy/paste
2. 01:32:140 (252,253) - Ctrl+G, and 01:32:640 (254,255,256,257,258,259) - make similar as 01:29:973 (242,243,244,245,246,247) - to keep consistency, and is more confortable while playing. Ok
3. 01:35:557 (270,271) - Ctrl+G, It's a better way to add more emphasis to the next notes, and 01:35:473 (269,270,271,272,273,274) - Double triplet is boring. ok
4. from 01:38:973 - to 01:39:973 - I feel that you miss a lot of notes here? why you didn't make like 01:44:307 (324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - O.o? wanted to follow the voice, but I guess you're right fixed
5. delete: 03:16:640 - 03:16:307 - 03:15:140 - 03:14:807 - to keep previews patterns for a better consistency. ok
6. 04:31:890 (1444) - adjust this note. ok
7. 05:33:473 (195) - ^ tail of this slider is wrong, adjust please. Ok

Wow, you make an amazing map, Good Luck *-*/

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[general]
Please always keep hitsounds at normal. Audio feedback is important to the players and soft sounds hardly provide that.
About that, there's two part that I judged it's needs soft hitsounds, 00:06:807 - to 00:56:085 - and 04:23:473 - to 04:36:751 - , I personally don't use it, but I made an exeption because the music isn't loud, and I wanted for the players to know on what they are playing

[dog]
01:12:807 (116,122) - This would flow nicely with 'd' Ok
01:14:807 (132) - after kdk and kkk, a 'd' is greately advised. Ok
- You do this a bunch, I recommend looking through and fixing some. It really helps flow. check that too
01:19:473 (176,177,178,179,180) - for example, kkk d d should be fine for following vocals and keeping flow. Ok
01:35:807 (96,97,98) - and these would be better as 'ddd' or 'kkd' altogether! Made kdk ddk, sound a bit better
01:36:307 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - (k kkk ddk) there's usually nicer ways than kdk ok
That's enough about kdk. It's all up to you. I'll see what I can do about it

01:52:640 - Does the song have this many finishers? Either way it plays pretty awkward, but if you're sure it's fitting it's fine. Same for the other time it shows up.

02:10:473 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - kind of just pops out of nowhere as a pattern I knew it was weird
02:38:140 (530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538,539) -
fits much better imo Found something better but this one was good too

03:02:807 (737,738,739,740) - Confusing. Maybe lessen the drastic change in speed? Starting it at at least 03:02:973 should be ok made it like the first one
03:55:473 (1118,1119,1120,1121,1122,1123,1124,1125,1126,1127) - same as the other one :c Ok :c
05:00:640 (1499) - Probably shouldn't have a finish you're right
05:08:807 (the stream again) - Are you really hearing this? Still asking myself why I did this
05:33:473 (195) - No, haha. Sliders are meant for following stressed sounds in music, for fade-outs we use spinners IShame, wanted for some pain :p

Solid map. GL!

Shyguy wrote:

Hey there! I'm modding this because you had asked in a chat earlier. Keep in mind that this mod is just a series of opinions I had, so it's fine if you disregard anything.

Mod

00:11:473 (19) - k sounds more on pitch Ok

00:16:473 (37) - ^ this one sound less on pitch

01:16:973 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - To me as a player, the end of this stream felt weird to play. I tried to fix it up a little, and found something that felt better to play to me. changed into a different thing actually,



02:00:140 (426) - I felt that this section felt a bit unconnected from the song, I tried some pitch mapping. I still kept your little quintuplet stream in there though, I thought that'd be pretty cool to keep in. I think it doesn't need a k at the end of the little stream, I wanted to follow the drum, so puting the k were it really sounds like one



02:06:140 (465,467) - This don section in the stream felt a bit weird to play, so I recommend changing these two specific dons to kats. It feels better to play
and just sounds more interesting. Changed it into somethign a bit different from what you said, but still thank you for pointing this part out

02:50:807 (820) - There technically is nothing wrong with this stream, but I feel it was to the pitch mapped too literally. A random kkk in the middle of a bunch of dons just plays funky to me. I would recommend doing something like this: tried your pattern, and evne tho it's a cool one, it doesn't feel so right, I mean you clearly see that those kkk are especially for that sound, and I like to follow at best the drum, so I'll keep it like this, even if it's not so hard and complicated to do



03:17:473 (993) - If you take 02:00:140 (426) into consideration, don't forget to do it here! I didn't ^^'

Other Comments: I'm sorry that the mod was so short, but that's all that I could really spot on this map. Well done! The slowly silencing hitsounds on that spinner at the end is really awesome!

1. nothink.. but i check.. a notice slider velocity.. but slider is not problem.. lel... forget

1. 00:08:640 - add d? i hear some to hit
2. 01:45:807 (348) - k? voice pitch
3. 03:23:390 (1031) - k for stop sign ptich guitar XD
4. 03:58:807 (1312,1313) - change D and ...
5. 03:58:807 (1312,1313,1314,1315,1316,1317,1318,1319) - or make this ddkdkkdd or DDkdkdDD.. and next up to 04:04:973 (1341) - hmm X)

1. Artist 妖精帝國
2. Remove yousei teikoku from tags, instead add PAX VESANIA (album name)

1. 00:38:973 (11,12,13,14,15) - what's this stream for? :/
2. 00:43:307 (31) - shouldnt the finish placed here though 00:43:473 (32) - feels better for the rhythm
3. 01:08:973 idk here feels weird since the vocal is playing, but no note. another reason is this part which is similar to the next, has a break here, yet the other part is really crowded. cutting the pattern here is awkward i think
4. 01:09:723 (89) - d for the rhythm?
5. 02:17:473 (555) - i think it's way better as d since the vocal is kinda heavy there, and for the rhythm also
6. 02:51:473 (830) - change to k, which can be played better + consistency pattern with the dons
7. 03:02:640 (915,916,917,918) - ? D: kdk is more than enough
8. 03:13:473 (975) - change to D, you can hear the drum be kdD
9. 03:17:473 (995,996,997,998,999) - same. what's this for? :\
10. 03:22:807 (1025,1026,1027,1028,1029,1030,1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037) - can be changed to this. pattern might be hard, but still playable and it's fun to be played. follows the drum too
11. 03:39:973 (1174,1175) - they can be swapped and finish can be removed for following the rhythm and flows better
12. 04:43:140 (1533,1534,1535,1536,1537,1538,1539,1540,1541) - i tried changing this to ddkdkkkkd and i think it follows the vocal better. try adding a note here 04:43:890 for following the drum. + swap this 04:44:140 (1543,1544) - though, i thought smth was strange and this and move 04:44:223 (1545) - to 04:44:307 for the break + following the vocal and music. i think it's strange to have a duplet here :/
13. 04:53:307 (1619) - same w/ 03:39:973 (1174,1175) -
14. Delete all green line on the spinner. It's useless since taiko player will always finish them before it finishes itself

Surono wrote:

dam son... i here `L_` hi Jinyan, sry late *myconectionhuehue.jepegejpg

[General]

1. nothink.. but i check.. a notice slider velocity.. but slider is not problem.. lel... forget

[Semfrul Oni]

1. 00:08:640 - add d? i hear some to hit No sound here
2. 01:45:807 (348) - k? voice pitch didn't follow the voice for this part
3. 03:23:390 (1031) - k for stop sign ptich guitar XD Ok
4. 03:58:807 (1312,1313) - change D and ... I feel like a small pitch on the first note, so I'll just left it like that for now
5. 03:58:807 (1312,1313,1314,1315,1316,1317,1318,1319) - or make this ddkdkkdd or DDkdkdDD.. and next up to 04:04:973 (1341) - hmm X) It doesn't follow really well what I want to do, so I'll just leave it like this

dem nice voice pitch pattern.. aaa forjet, hope helpful~ lel XD

Senritsu wrote:

hello im sorry for the lateness orzorz
sorry for saying nonsense though, i felt dizzy

[General]

1. Artist 妖精帝國
2. Remove yousei teikoku from tags, instead add PAX VESANIA (album name)

[Oni]

1. 00:38:973 (11,12,13,14,15) - what's this stream for? :/ Now that you mention it, I'm a bit confused, I felt like there's a drum stream at this part so I put it, maybe it's just ddd d, or not at all, but it sounds cool I guess, no?
2. 00:43:307 (31) - shouldnt the finish placed here though 00:43:473 (32) - feels better for the rhythm you're right, and I changed all the Finishers too cause they weren't really well placed
3. 01:08:973 idk here feels weird since the vocal is playing, but no note. another reason is this part which is similar to the next, has a break here, yet the other part is really crowded. cutting the pattern here is awkward i think added two d
4. 01:09:723 (89) - d for the rhythm? the voice stop approximatly here 01:09:807 (90) - so I'll leave it
5. 02:17:473 (555) - i think it's way better as d since the vocal is kinda heavy there, and for the rhythm also ok
6. 02:51:473 (830) - change to k, which can be played better + consistency pattern with the dons starting from 02:50:807 (823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836,837,838,839) - I wanted to follow the drum, even tho for the playability, it's kinda weird, well, lets just say it some challenge
7. 03:02:640 (915,916,917,918) - ? D: kdk is more than enough Can't deny it, ok ^^'
8. 03:13:473 (975) - change to D, you can hear the drum be kdD ok
9. 03:17:473 (995,996,997,998,999) - same. what's this for? :\ but, it's sound so cool >_<
10. 03:22:807 (1025,1026,1027,1028,1029,1030,1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037) - can be changed to this. pattern might be hard, but still playable and it's fun to be played. follows the drum too
11. 03:39:973 (1174,1175) - they can be swapped and finish can be removed for following the rhythm and flows better removed the finish and left it to d and the fir k after changed it to d
12. 04:43:140 (1533,1534,1535,1536,1537,1538,1539,1540,1541) - i tried changing this to ddkdkkkkd and i think it follows the vocal better. try adding a note here 04:43:890 for following the drum. + swap this 04:44:140 (1543,1544) - though, i thought smth was strange and this and move 04:44:223 (1545) - to 04:44:307 for the break + following the vocal and music. i think it's strange to have a duplet here :/ for the stream, ok, the rest, ok :p
13. 04:53:307 (1619) - same w/ 03:39:973 (1174,1175) - same as I said ^
14. Delete all green line on the spinner. It's useless since taiko player will always finish them before it finishes itself hmmmm duno, it still kinda cool :p

thats all from me
goodluck~
sorry again ;_;