Keada wrote:

Eyyyy, Mutual mod because you asked me ;D

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  General

1. just my opinion but the ar could be 9.5 or 9.6 because its such high bpm and I found some parts hard to read because it was low ar xD but, only my opinion I think its fine
2. Personally I think the OD should be only 8 Only reduced to 8.3, kinda unsure of notelocking
3. Combo colours
   these would fit nice Done
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,0,0
   Combo2 : 254,220,101
   Combo3 : 249,163,85
   Combo4 : 100,0,0

4. The hitsound volume was kind of loud try setting it down xD it was alittle bit annoying to listen to with loud hitsounds Done
   And try sampleset Drum instead of Normal D: fits more with Drum depending on the song I think Normal/Soft is fine
5. http://puu.sh/ii7Lz/1933c86fd1.png uncheck these Done
   1. the map starts at once so it doesnt have time to enable countdown
   2. the map has no storyboard so letterbox during break shouldnt be on
   Thats enough on General

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  Blindness

  First off, I recommend using default skin while mapping, to see overlaps etc
  Needs a clean up id say ;-; because this map exists with very many overlaps, but im trying to not go to into them D: just a few changes

1. 00:02:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - could make it look like this instead http://puu.sh/ii81w/d3eda1dcfc.jpg + make a slider which starts 00:03:260 - and ends here 00:03:464 - I did something to make it look good in my opinion but dont know if you want to do the same xD http://puu.sh/ii82M/afc26c3e59.jpg Done
2. 00:07:351 (4) - would look better if you moved to x:248 y:160 Done
3. 00:08:578 (3) - could blanket with stream before, like this http://puu.sh/ii895/5ce6307138.jpg Done
4. 00:08:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - this patter could look like this insteadhttp://puu.sh/ii8eJ/4148ed504c.jpg , would look a bit nicer imo Done
5. 00:21:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - looks a bit messy ;-; can try some patterns here to make it look cooler Tried some symmetry
6. 00:33:396 (3,4) - could stack with 00:32:578 (5) - Done
7. 00:33:805 (6) - stack with 5 or it loses flow imo D: Done
8. 00:40:351 (9) - do here like you did previous like this http://puu.sh/ii8ns/021b5fa28d.jpg Done
9. 00:41:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - clean up star pattern D: Done
10. 00:53:578 (5) - stack with 00:52:760 (2) - Done
11. 01:01:214 (3,4) - ctrl+g for flow Done
12. 01:19:487 (2,3,4,5) - could make a nicer square here like this for example http://puu.sh/ii8B1/854efa66f5.jpg Done
13. 01:22:896 (4) - ctrl+g because it fits with a jump here Redid another way
14. 01:27:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this part but wouldnt it be cooler if you dide like this? http://puu.sh/ii8GB/189f24d8f0.jpg I think its fine
15. 01:29:442 (2) - could move a bit up to make it not overlap the note and instead get the slider to blanket this note instead 01:28:760 (7) - Done
16. 01:38:987 (1) - could stack with 01:38:714 (4) - Stacked with (3) instead
17. 02:04:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - could go like I told you earlier like this http://puu.sh/ii8QW/d305802015.jpg (im not a fan of stacked streams xD) Done
18. 02:17:033 (1) - could move down instead of upwards like you did in earlier 02:11:578 (1,1,1) - Made both stacked
19. 02:20:305 (1,1,1) - same here, try to be consistent ^
20. 02:27:805 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - stacked stream ;-; I think its fine
21. 02:34:896 (9) - try to end with a 1/2 slider Done
    Nothing more to say except, I think you should clean up the map, and make more patterns and try to make it look nicer (use default skin, it helps)

Good luck~