Tokyo Karan Koron - Spice · forum

Beomsan

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Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2015-08-22T17:56:38+00:00

가나요

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-22T19:49:57+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
가나요

ㄴ 한번 터질듯ㅋㅅㅋ

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-23T19:38:49+00:00

Hello Taeyang!

First, I have to pop the bubble due to following reasons:

Okay, the first part of the video is showing mostly near-nudity content, and slightly suggestive in my opinion (the pink-haired girl posing and the girl blushing with a weird face expression). This is not suitable for the community, as they are younger people also playing the game. You'll need to remove this out of the beatmap.
The metadata for the title is wrong. Therefore, the (TV Size) should be removed:
1. Title: スパイス
2. Romanised Title: Spice
http://avex.jp/tokyokarankoron_spice/
http://shokugekinosoma.com/music/ed/ed.html

Second, here's my mod!

General

The timing appears to be little early. I think +13 for the offset and everything should be accurate.
This is optional so you don't have to do. soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav have both silences in after the last noise. Removing them while keeping the length of the file higher or equal to 100ms could save tiny amounts of filesize.

Easy

00:58:239 (2) - Very nazi, but the tail's hitborder is a little too close to the following hitcircle. It was kind of obvious to me, so move this to bottom-right by little pixels (using Ctrl + Arrow Keys).

Skidayo's Normal

01:01:470 (2) - To be honest, I would move this somewhere like x:171 y:145 in order to get the consistent distance. You can move 01:01:931 (3) to x:71 y:134 to get the blanket pattern.

Hard

00:01:931 to 00:07:470 - You could at least add more objects in this part, compared to Insane. Hard has way less density than Insane for this part which could be a problem. You can try this rhythm:
SPOILER
00:52:239 (1,2) - I explain something in the Insane section of the mod. The sliderslide is enabled, yet it's noisy for the current part of the music and doesn't feel fitting when you follow the vocals alone in my opinion. I would silence the slides.
01:25:008 (1,2) - For each kicksliders, how about you add a repeat? Currently, it sounds unnatural, since you strictly follow the drums. Adding a repeat will hit the snare on the red ticks, and it feels more complete to me.

guineaQ's Insane

00:12:546 (4,1) - I think this should get a bigger spacing than 00:11:854 (3,4) because of the loud beat on the downbeat 00:13:008 .
00:20:393 (1) - How about you move this closer to the previous circle, like x:369 y:183? It's to get a better readability like 00:16:470 (5,1) due to the 3/4 rhythm before.
00:52:239 (1,2) - I'd remove the slider slide sound to those slider. It gets noisy and I personally think it fits when you follow the vocals.
01:00:200 (3) - Remove this hitcircle? I couldn't hear any beat in the music in this tick.

Good map you got here! Call me back whenever everything is updated.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-08-24T19:35:06+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

guineaQ's Insane
00:12:546 (4,1) - I think this should get a bigger spacing than 00:11:854 (3,4) because of the loud beat on the downbeat 00:13:008 .
00:20:393 (1) - How about you move this closer to the previous circle, like x:369 y:183? It's to get a better readability like 00:16:470 (5,1) due to the 3/4 rhythm before.
00:52:239 (1,2) - I'd remove the slider slide sound to those slider. It gets noisy and I personally think it fits when you follow the vocals.
01:00:200 (3) - Remove this hitcircle? I couldn't hear any beat in the music in this tick.
Good map you got here! Call me back whenever everything is updated.

fixed everything except that for the 2nd point I didn't move it THAT close

fasdfasdfasdf I was worried about the vid too

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Spice.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53508
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Spice (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:スパイス (TV Size)
Artist:Tokyo Karan Koron
ArtistUnicode:東京カランコロン
Creator:Taeyang
Version:guineaQ's Insane
Source:食戟のソーマ
Tags:shokugeki no soma 1st Ending food wars guineaQ Skidayo
BeatmapID:707460
BeatmapSetID:317592

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.2
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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24085,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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88239,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


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Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-26T15:21:46+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Taeyang!

First, I have to pop the bubble due to following reasons:
Okay, the first part of the video is showing mostly near-nudity content, and slightly suggestive in my opinion (the pink-haired girl posing and the girl blushing with a weird face expression). This is not suitable for the community, as they are younger people also playing the game. You'll need to remove this out of the beatmap.
Fixed
The metadata for the title is wrong. Therefore, the (TV Size) should be removed:
Title: スパイス
Romanised Title: Spice
http://avex.jp/tokyokarankoron_spice/
http://shokugekinosoma.com/music/ed/ed.html
Fixed

Second, here's my mod!
General
The timing appears to be little early. I think +13 for the offset and everything should be accurate.
+13 so mush so i did +9
This is optional so you don't have to do. soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav have both silences in after the last noise. Removing them while keeping the length of the file higher or equal to 100ms could save tiny amounts of filesize.
i agree but it's not unrankable also i removed 'vid' so file size it's fine to me

Easy
00:58:239 (2) - Very nazi, but the tail's hitborder is a little too close to the following hitcircle. It was kind of obvious to me, so move this to bottom-right by little pixels (using Ctrl + Arrow Keys).
fixed

Skidayo's Normal
01:01:470 (2) - To be honest, I would move this somewhere like x:171 y:145 in order to get the consistent distance. You can move 01:01:931 (3) to x:71 y:134 to get the blanket pattern.
fixed

Hard
00:01:931 to 00:07:470 - You could at least add more objects in this part, compared to Insane. Hard has way less density than Insane for this part which could be a problem. You can try this rhythm:
SPOILER
here is intro part so i dont want make hardly
00:52:239 (1,2) - I explain something in the Insane section of the mod. The sliderslide is enabled, yet it's noisy for the current part of the music and doesn't feel fitting when you follow the vocals alone in my opinion. I would silence the slides.
fixed
01:25:008 (1,2) - For each kicksliders, how about you add a repeat? Currently, it sounds unnatural, since you strictly follow the drums. Adding a repeat will hit the snare on the red ticks, and it feels more complete to me.
fixed

Thanks~!

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2015-08-27T10:20:55+00:00

BG

이것도 그렇게 화질이 좋은건 아닌데, 지금껀 너무 상태가 안좋아보여서 이거 써보시는거 추천

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-27T16:42:38+00:00

Enon wrote:
BG

이것도 그렇게 화질이 좋은건 아닌데, 지금껀 너무 상태가 안좋아보여서 이거 써보시는거 추천

오 ㄳㄳ요~!
쿧오스 드센
Thanks to enon for nice BG

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-27T18:48:20+00:00

So,

The mapper has change the background image to what Enon provided.
In Hard, he decided to map more the intro part, as it was empty to me. Looks nice.

The only thing you'll have to do is to snap an inherited point on 00:24:094 in Skidayo's Normal. After that, I should be able to bubble your beatmap!

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-27T18:57:28+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
So,
The mapper has change the background image to what Enon provided.
In Hard, he decided to map more the intro part, as it was empty to me. Looks nice.
The only thing you'll have to do is to snap an inherited point on 00:24:094 in Skidayo's Normal. After that, I should be able to bubble your beatmap!

ok fixed~!

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-27T18:59:25+00:00

The mapset looks pretty good to me! Here's my rebubble!

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-27T19:26:53+00:00

As said in-game, I'll qualify when I can
With that I mean, when my 24 hrs cooldown is over which is approx 23 hours after this post
This is mostly to the other bn