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Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-10-29T16:11:01+00:00

Updated!

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-10-29T20:14:28+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
[ Magic Girl's ADVANCED]

Gameplay
00:13:120 (4,1) - Better avoid having such anti-flowing dash, as (4) is quite high in movement, that players have to move right so they can fully catch the fruits. Either remove the dash by moving (1) to x:240, or rework this part that the dash can be easier. - Fixed.

Good luck!

Thanks for modding.

Magic Girl's thing that keeps getting renamed

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2015-10-30T03:27:25+00:00

Razor Sharp wrote:
Will change BG to something sweet Satellite gave me
Will also RENAME all diffs to SDVX diff spread. Which will be my MAIN diff spread from now on!

Note that I suggested it because the song appears in SDVX. Using it in other mapsets unrelated to SDVX is stupid.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-10-30T06:17:37+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Razor Sharp wrote:
Will change BG to something sweet Satellite gave me
Will also RENAME all diffs to SDVX diff spread. Which will be my MAIN diff spread from now on!
Note that I suggested it because the song appears in SDVX. Using it in other mapsets unrelated to SDVX is stupid.

Nameing stuff thats not fram touhou with touhou diff names is also stupid but people dont seem to care.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-10-30T21:01:21+00:00

Updated!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-11-02T12:40:22+00:00

Sorry I didn't have time to get to this before, but better late than never (:

General Comments:

Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: Isn't the GRAVITY diff name just Gravity Wars' specific name for the INFINITE diff? I.e. the two should be equivalent, meaning it's potentially confusing to have INFINITE and GRAVITY diffs in the same set, and of different actual difficulties. Most ranked Gravity Wars sets I've seen use the naming BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, GRAVITY, so I'd recommend this. Also, why do INFINITE and GRAVITY have different combo colours to the other three diffs? Make these consistent please
Metadata: No issues
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: soft hitfinishes and soft-hitclap-2 are so much louder than the other hitsounds that it becomes difficult to hear anything else but them. I didn't even realise the soft jingles and drum sounds were even there until into the timing menu. Currently, this is providing less than ideal feedback for the player, so I'd advise increasing the volume of the other hitsounds slightly so they're more noticeable, and thus, compliment the song better
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Moekufi's NOVICE

00:13:508 (5,1,2) - Since these notes are really prominent, more spacing would be welcome
00:26:379 (6,7) - These notes are wrongly snapped - please snap (6) to the blue tick at 00:26:379 and (7) to the blue tick at 00:26:572 - remembering to shorten the slider to snap the tail to the white tick at 00:27:056 as in the other diffs
00:27:443 (1,2) - This pattern feels really weird to play as it doesn't fit the music very well. Currently, you end the slider on a 1/2 tick and have a circle on the next red tick, both mapping weaker vocal beats and ignoring the much more prominent vocal notes on the white ticks. Something like this would represent the rhythm much better and play more intuitively:
01:08:088 (2,3,1,2) - What's the purpose of these 1/2 sliders? They don't seem to be mapping any particular held sound that I can hear, since the held vocal is between 01:07:701 (1,2) - I recommend changing 01:07:701 (1,2,3,1) into 1/1 slider + 2 circles, and doing the same to 01:09:250 (2,3,4,5)
01:16:217 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 beat note/spinner distance is unacceptable in a Cup difficulty at this BPM and AR, as newer players find it difficult to react to the spinner and differentiate between note and spinner objects. Please remove (4), and since there's only a very weak sound here, also consider removing (2). If this feels too repetitive, (1,3) could be combined into a 1/1 slider for the held vocal sound

Magic Girl's ADVANCED

00:04:798 (2) - I'd avoid introducing such a strong dash this early on, and in such a quiet section of the song, selecting all previous notes and dragging to x-112 or 128 feels much better
00:20:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wowowow this combo is way too long for a Salad, remember that slider tails and repeats count as fruits the stack up on the plate too! NC (5) please
00:25:895 (5,1) - Swap NC to emphasise the downbeat on (5), and also since (5) is a part of the 00:26:282 (1,2) synth/guitar rhythm
00:34:411 (3,4) - Strong dash leading into strong antiflow feels weird here, since this is a very calm section of the song. A simpler pattern would be welcome here anyway, such as 00:34:411 (3,4) as a 1/2 slider or two circles with 00:34:991 as a circle as well for added emphasis
00:41:379 (3) - NC here as well please, since 00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5) stacks pretty high at the moment, and it will make this combo consistent in length with the surrounding ones
00:48:346 (1) - Why is this NC'ed all on it's own? It doesn't seem that important a note or difficult a pattern to me... Consider swapping with 00:47:185 (4)
00:49:120 (1,2,3,4) - Back to back dash isn't really recommended for a Salad at this BPM as it's a pretty sizeable difficulty spike - consider simplifying this by creating dashes to 00:49:120 (1,3,1) only
00:53:766 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 earlier please, a 1/2 beat recovery isn't a great deal at this BPM, and since 00:55:314 (1) is off to the left, it will be easy (and frustrating) for a newer player to get spinner baited here
00:56:862 (4) - NC here as well please, combo length, consistency and all that good stuff
00:59:959 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:49:120 (1,2,3,4)
01:03:830 (4,1) - These can feel a little uncomfortable to play, as the current spacing is close to requiring dash, and may leave newer players in two minds about how to play them. Consider moving 01:03:056 (3,1) to x-224 to make this easier to read as I feel dash would fit nicely here
01:07:701 (1,2,3) - Since the tail of (1) is a pretty prominent vocal note, I feel it would be better to remove the repeat, shift (2,3) back 1/2 and add a circle where (3) currently ends, as this allows you to make a jump (and welcome NC) for the strong vocal note at 01:09:250 which is currently underemphasised by being mapped to the low-movement slider tail
01:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is just horizontal left/right 1/2 sliders repeatedly, which feels a little plain to play. For variety here you could try angling some of the sliders slightly, or creating a dash to 01:18:540 (1) perhaps
01:27:164 (3) - Whilst this is a strong vocal sound, it's in a very calm section of the song. I guess you don't want to use dash here, so I would reduce the spacing to this a tiny bit, as it feels a little uncomfortable for newer players right now

Murumuru's EXHAUST
This diff is really lacking in hitsounding, some sections are pretty intensely mapped but offer little to no feedback to the player. I'll point out a few places I feel you should work on in my mod, but it will be best for you to go through this on your own and apply hitsounds consistently with the other diffs

00:07:314 (1) - I'd avoid a jump of this size right at the start of the song; to help ease the player into the diff, try reducing this a tiny bit
00:14:862 (4,1) - Similar to the above, making your first hdash lead into a strong antiflow pattern is really mean. A smoother flow to begin with would be much more appropriate here
00:24:346 (1,2,3,4) - Missing some hitsounds here, this is an important buildup section and it's really underemphasised right now. Clap on the head of (1,3) would be nice as a minimum
00:33:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The only hitsound here is on the head of (6) - I'd add whistles to the heads of (1,4) as well for the prominent vocal notes
00:39:830 (1) - You have a huge jump to this note but no hitsound to compliment it ;w;
00:42:927 (2) - Another strong vocal note with no emphasis
00:44:475 (6) - NC here please, at 16 objects this combo is way too long
00:45:637 (8,1) - Hdash here would be nice, since you sued one on a similar pattern at 00:38:282 (4,1)
00:50:669 (5) - Same as 00:44:475 (6)
00:51:830 (7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the following prominent guitar sound also have no hitsounding to compliment them
00:52:120 (10,1) - I know you can't use 1/4 hdash at this BPM on Platter, but slightly more of a jump would be welcome here for the strong guitar sound
00:55:217 (7,1) - ^
00:55:314 (1) - This is the start of the kiai, a relly prominent note, and yet you only gave it a soft whistle, one of the quietest hitsounds... Something bolder here would compliment the emphasis given by the kiai fountain
00:58:217 (7,1) - Why no hdash here, this vocal note is really strong?
00:59:959 (6) - Same as 00:44:475 (6)
01:07:508 (8,1) - Hdash here please to be consistent with your previous patterns 01:01:314 (9,1) - 01:04:217 (5,1) -
01:07:701 (1,2) - Clap on the head of (1) or (2) would create a nice pattern here
01:09:250 (1,2) - ^
01:16:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is really intense, building up to the climax of the song and it has literally no hitsound emphasis D: Something on 01:16:991 (1,2,3,7) please
01:18:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A bit more patterning on this stream would be nice, try adding a small wiggle or two to make it more interesting to play and fitting for the climax of the song
01:30:664 (6,7) - Why a jump here? There's nothing special about either of them to my ear. You could maybe justify a jump to 01:31:164 (1) for the downbeat, but due to the calm nature of the music, removing the jump and opting for a simpler pattern would be welcome
01:33:585 (4,5,6,7) - These should be 3 notes snapped to 1/8 as in the GRAVITY diff

Nely's INFINITE

00:11:379 (4) - Reduce the spacing here please, antiflow after a strong hyper doesn't really fit here considering this is still a calm section of music
00:25:895 (1) - Strong hyper into antiflow is excessive here, consider Ctrl+G here please
00:26:379 (3,4) - This hyper is pretty strong, and it's really easy to overshoot and droplet miss here. Consider reducing the strength of this, and/or increasing the curve on 00:26:572 (4)
00:35:185 (4) - NC here for consistency please since this is twice the length of all your other combos
00:36:733 (1) - This jump is so uncomfortable, move to x-180 please
00:39:346 (5,1,2) - Why use a 1/4 slider hyperchain pattern here when the music is so calm? There's nothing to support this, so please move (1) to x-280
00:39:830 - On a different note, I feel the pattern complexity is higher here than in the kiai, with numerous back-to-back dashes and awkward hyper jumps such as 00:40:411 (4,5,6,7,1) and 00:46:024 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - in the interest of spread balance, it would be a good idea to simplify some of these patterns slightly
00:41:766 (3,4) - Reduce the spacing to the triplet please, it's kind of uncomfortable to catch at the moment
00:45:927 (9,1) - This hyper is way too strong to be combined with the strong antiflow, please weaken it or remove the antiflow element by making (1) face to the left instead
00:51:153 (2,3) - Very easy to overshoot the big slider tick on (3) due to the strength of the hyper here, please consider weakening it
00:53:766 (4) - Ugh timing jump after a hyper pattern, so annoying to catch this so please reduce the distance or make this a hyper as well
01:16:217 (2) - Is the normal whistle on the slider head here intentional? It sounds really out of place to me
01:20:184 - Why no spinner here as in the other diffs? The pause is quite awkward without anything here, so if you don't want to add a spinner, make this a break, since playing with HR drains a sizeable amount of your HP here and leads into a very low note-density pattern which is difficult to recover HP in
01:29:164 (5) - NC here please, this is a calm section and it would be nice to emphasise the 1/1 pause and antijump
01:33:592 (1,2,3) - Same as in the Platter, these should be 3 notes snapped to 1/8 as in the GRAVITY diff

GRAVITY

00:13:314 (4,1) - Really strong hyper leading into strong antiflow is so annoying to play as it's too easy to droplet/tick miss. Please weaken the 00:12:733 (1,2,3,4,1) hyper pattern slightly and make a smoother flow into 00:13:508 (1) to make this less uncomfortable
00:16:217 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Woo boy this even more annoying, are you some kind of robot? These snaps are so uncomfortable to play and really kill the flow for me, plus I can't hear any sounds on the blue ticks besides 00:16:508 (6) to even justify those circles being mapped. It would be better to remove 00:16:895 (2,4) and move 00:16:991 (3) to x-464 but if you insist on keeping them, a pattern like you used at 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5) is much more fitting
00:35:185 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/2 slider pattern doesn't follow the music that well, since the vocals are held, and the background piano only has strong notes at 00:35:766 and 00:35:185 (1,4) - Making 00:35:185 (1,2,3) into two 1/1 sliders with a 1/2 space between them would fit better here
00:38:282 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is overpatterned, the music is so calm here there's absolutely no justification for a 1/4 slider and triplet stream pattern. At best you could justify hypers to 00:38:282 (1,3,1,7) though I still feel this is tenuous. A less intense pattern would fit the music much better here
00:42:927 (1,2,3,4) - Why do have an obsession with inflicting pain on others... This pattern is so awkward to play and really doesn't fit the song well at all in my opinion. The vocals are smooth, not snappy, and the drum beats you;re mapping are so faint, so a more straightforward flow would be welcome here
00:52:604 (3,4,5) - Compared to 00:49:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this is actually a calmer part of the buildup, focussing on the guitar and fairly weak drum sounds, so the use of strong hypers and antfilow here is quite unfitting in my opinion. Regular dashes would work better here
01:31:164 (1) - Since the song is so calm here, this being a hyper feels really weird. x-256 feels much more natural to me

Some more mods across the set would be a bonus, but right now my main issues are the lack of hitsounds on the EXHAUST and some patterns on the GRAVITY diffs, though from the responses to previous mods it doesn't look like you intend to change your mind on the second point :/

I'll keep an eye on things, but this is all for now.
Good luck!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-11-03T11:17:52+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:

Sorry I didn't have time to get to this before, but better late than never (:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Murumuru's EXHAUST
This diff is really lacking in hitsounding , some sections are pretty intensely mapped but offer little to no feedback to the player (I already realized back then, the hitsound entirely different than other map :p). I'll point out a few places I feel you should work on in my mod, but it will be best for you to go through this on your own and apply hitsounds consistently with the other diffs

00:14:862 (4,1) - Similar to the above, making your first hdash lead into a strong antiflow pattern is really mean. A smoother flow to begin with would be much more appropriate here *I can`t agree because it fits how it flows*
00:51:830 (7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the following prominent guitar sound also have no hitsounding to compliment them *not sure why I can`t follow this?*
00:58:217 (7,1) - Why no hdash here, this vocal note is really strong? *Its fine.*[/b]
I'll keep an eye on things, but this is all for now.
Good luck!

All the notes that unstated are fixed, Thanks for modding

And some little self-mod and using GRAVITY as Hitsounding referrence a while.

Murumuru's EXHAUST

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Tokufi

117 posts

Joined July 2013

Tokufi 2015-11-04T03:37:48+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Moekufi's NOVICE
00:13:508 (5,1,2) - Since these notes are really prominent, more spacing would be welcome Spaced notes a bit more!
00:26:379 (6,7) - These notes are wrongly snapped - please snap (6) to the blue tick at 00:26:379 and (7) to the blue tick at 00:26:572 - remembering to shorten the slider to snap the tail to the white tick at 00:27:056 as in the other diffs Fixed!
00:27:443 (1,2) - This pattern feels really weird to play as it doesn't fit the music very well. Currently, you end the slider on a 1/2 tick and have a circle on the next red tick, both mapping weaker vocal beats and ignoring the much more prominent vocal notes on the white ticks. Something like this would represent the rhythm much better and play more intuitively:

Hmm.. I am following the piano, and all the other patterns after that you didn't really say it was wierd and they are the same/similar.. I will keep it
01:08:088 (2,3,1,2) - What's the purpose of these 1/2 sliders? They don't seem to be mapping any particular held sound that I can hear, since the held vocal is between 01:07:701 (1,2) - I recommend changing 01:07:701 (1,2,3,1) into 1/1 slider + 2 circles, and doing the same to 01:09:250 (2,3,4,5) Fixed!
01:16:217 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 beat note/spinner distance is unacceptable in a Cup difficulty at this BPM and AR, as newer players find it difficult to react to the spinner and differentiate between note and spinner objects. Please remove (4), and since there's only a very weak sound here, also consider removing (2). If this feels too repetitive, (1,3) could be combined into a 1/1 slider for the held vocal sound Fixed!

Good luck!

UPDATE

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Title:Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Moekufi's NOVICE
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-11-04T15:10:34+00:00

R.e. 00:27:443 (1,2) in

Moekufi's NOVICE

I didn't mention the following patterns because they're all exactly the same lol - what I suggested there applies to the rest too. If you want to keep it, it's not the end of the world - I just believe it's a poor rhythm choice here when the vocals are far more prominent.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-07T12:55:47+00:00

Xinely laptop still broken i think. I apply.

JBHyperion wrote:

Sorry I didn't have time to get to this before, but better late than never (:

General Comments:
Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: Isn't the GRAVITY diff name just Gravity Wars' specific name for the INFINITE diff? I.e. the two should be equivalent, meaning it's potentially confusing to have INFINITE and GRAVITY diffs in the same set, and of different actual difficulties. Most ranked Gravity Wars sets I've seen use the naming BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, GRAVITY, so I'd recommend this. Also, why do INFINITE and GRAVITY have different combo colours to the other three diffs? Make these consistent please
Metadata: No issues
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: soft hitfinishes and soft-hitclap-2 are so much louder than the other hitsounds that it becomes difficult to hear anything else but them. I didn't even realise the soft jingles and drum sounds were even there until into the timing menu. Currently, this is providing less than ideal feedback for the player, so I'd advise increasing the volume of the other hitsounds slightly so they're more noticeable, and thus, compliment the song better
AImod: No issues
Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Nely's INFINITE
00:11:379 (4) - Reduce the spacing here please, antiflow after a strong hyper doesn't really fit here considering this is still a calm section of music - Fixed!
00:25:895 (1) - Strong hyper into antiflow is excessive here, consider Ctrl+G here please - Fixed!
00:26:379 (3,4) - This hyper is pretty strong, and it's really easy to overshoot and droplet miss here. Consider reducing the strength of this, and/or increasing the curve on 00:26:572 (4) - Curve bigger!
00:35:185 (4) - NC here for consistency please since this is twice the length of all your other combos - Fixed!
00:36:733 (1) - This jump is so uncomfortable, move to x-180 please - Fixed!
00:39:346 (5,1,2) - Why use a 1/4 slider hyperchain pattern here when the music is so calm? There's nothing to support this, so please move (1) to x-280 - Fixed it another way!
00:39:830 - On a different note, I feel the pattern complexity is higher here than in the kiai, with numerous back-to-back dashes and awkward hyper jumps such as 00:40:411 (4,5,6,7,1) and 00:46:024 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - in the interest of spread balance, it would be a good idea to simplify some of these patterns slightly - Fixed!
00:41:766 (3,4) - Reduce the spacing to the triplet please, it's kind of uncomfortable to catch at the moment - Fixed!
00:45:927 (9,1) - This hyper is way too strong to be combined with the strong antiflow, please weaken it or remove the antiflow element by making (1) face to the left instead - Curved the slider here isteand!
00:51:153 (2,3) - Very easy to overshoot the big slider tick on (3) due to the strength of the hyper here, please consider weakening it - Fixed!
00:53:766 (4) - Ugh timing jump after a hyper pattern, so annoying to catch this so please reduce the distance or make this a hyper as well - Fixed!
01:16:217 (2) - Is the normal whistle on the slider head here intentional? It sounds really out of place to me - Fixed!
01:20:184 - Why no spinner here as in the other diffs? The pause is quite awkward without anything here, so if you don't want to add a spinner, make this a break, since playing with HR drains a sizeable amount of your HP here and leads into a very low note-density pattern which is difficult to recover HP in - Fixed!
01:29:164 (5) - NC here please, this is a calm section and it would be nice to emphasise the 1/1 pause and antijump - Fixed!
01:33:592 (1,2,3) - Same as in the Platter, these should be 3 notes snapped to 1/8 as in the GRAVITY diff - Fixed!
GRAVITY
00:13:314 (4,1) - Really strong hyper leading into strong antiflow is so annoying to play as it's too easy to droplet/tick miss. Please weaken the 00:12:733 (1,2,3,4,1) hyper pattern slightly and make a smoother flow into 00:13:508 (1) to make this less uncomfortable - Should be alright now!
00:16:217 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Woo boy this even more annoying, are you some kind of robot? These snaps are so uncomfortable to play and really kill the flow for me, plus I can't hear any sounds on the blue ticks besides 00:16:508 (6) to even justify those circles being mapped. It would be better to remove 00:16:895 (2,4) and move 00:16:991 (3) to x-464 but if you insist on keeping them, a pattern like you used at 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5) is much more fitting - Ok ok, i change the pattern!
00:35:185 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/2 slider pattern doesn't follow the music that well, since the vocals are held, and the background piano only has strong notes at 00:35:766 and 00:35:185 (1,4) - Making 00:35:185 (1,2,3) into two 1/1 sliders with a 1/2 space between them would fit better here - Actually not. The feedback these gives compliments the flow here. And also, the song fits it.
00:38:282 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is overpatterned, the music is so calm here there's absolutely no justification for a 1/4 slider and triplet stream pattern. At best you could justify hypers to 00:38:282 (1,3,1,7) though I still feel this is tenuous. A less intense pattern would fit the music much better here - It should be better now.
00:42:927 (1,2,3,4) - Why do have an obsession with inflicting pain on others... This pattern is so awkward to play and really doesn't fit the song well at all in my opinion. The vocals are smooth, not snappy, and the drum beats you;re mapping are so faint, so a more straightforward flow would be welcome here - I love giving people pain (#sadist) But yeah, changed!
00:52:604 (3,4,5) - Compared to 00:49:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this is actually a calmer part of the buildup, focussing on the guitar and fairly weak drum sounds, so the use of strong hypers and antfilow here is quite unfitting in my opinion. Regular dashes would work better here - Fixed!
01:31:164 (1) - Since the song is so calm here, this being a hyper feels really weird. x-256 feels much more natural to me - Fixed!
Some more mods across the set would be a bonus, but right now my main issues are the lack of hitsounds on the EXHAUST and some patterns on the GRAVITY diffs, though from the responses to previous mods it doesn't look like you intend to change your mind on the second point :/

I'll keep an eye on things, but this is all for now.
Good luck!

Thanks for mod! All but MG diff updated!

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-11-07T13:42:20+00:00

You asked for some help with the hitsounds, so try these.

Summary:

Increased volume of soft-hitclap, soft-hitwhistle and soft-hitwhistle2 slightly
New soft-hitclap2 without the small delay at the start that was in the previous version
Cut and faded soft-hitfinish and soft-hitfinish2 slightly to reduce interference with other hitsounds (and save a tiny bit of file space)

I suggest keeping a copy of your old hitsounds before copying the new ones in, in case you're unsatisfied with the new ones or you'd like me to make any further adjustments.

Hope this helped!
(Obviously no kds c:)

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-07T13:45:05+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
You asked for some help with the hitsounds, so try these.

Summary:
Increased volume of soft-hitclap, soft-hitwhistle and soft-hitwhistle2 slightly
New soft-hitclap2 without the small delay at the start that was in the previous version
Cut and faded soft-hitfinish and soft-hitfinish2 slightly to reduce interference with other hitsounds (and save a tiny bit of file space)
I suggest keeping a copy of your old hitsounds before copying the new ones in, in case you're unsatisfied with the new ones or you'd like me to make any further adjustments.

Hope this helped!
(Obviously no kds c:)

Updated!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-11-08T08:34:14+00:00

changed a bit
00:39:346 (5,1,2) - i prefer keep mine before, the music is calm yeah but at least it's increasing from 00:38:282 - so i prefer to give a bit more spacing and jump at this time

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Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-08T13:44:56+00:00

Updated!

Also updated all diffs with same Combo Colors

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-11-11T02:44:49+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:

Magic Girl's ADVANCED
00:04:798 (2) - I'd avoid introducing such a strong dash this early on, and in such a quiet section of the song, selecting all previous notes and dragging to x-112 or 128 feels much better - Fixed
00:20:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wowowow this combo is way too long for a Salad, remember that slider tails and repeats count as fruits the stack up on the plate too! NC (5) please - Fixed
00:25:895 (5,1) - Swap NC to emphasise the downbeat on (5), and also since (5) is a part of the 00:26:282 (1,2) synth/guitar rhythm - Fixed
00:34:411 (3,4) - Strong dash leading into strong antiflow feels weird here, since this is a very calm section of the song. A simpler pattern would be welcome here anyway, such as 00:34:411 (3,4) as a 1/2 slider or two circles with 00:34:991 as a circle as well for added emphasis - Personally I'd rather keep the slider since I like to follow to the small pause in the vocals with a slider, tilted it up instead to make it easier since everyone keeps complaining about the difficulty.
00:41:379 (3) - NC here as well please, since 00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5) stacks pretty high at the moment, and it will make this combo consistent in length with the surrounding ones - Fixed
00:48:346 (1) - Why is this NC'ed all on it's own? It doesn't seem that important a note or difficult a pattern to me... Consider swapping with 00:47:185 (4) - Fixed
00:49:120 (1,2,3,4) - Back to back dash isn't really recommended for a Salad at this BPM as it's a pretty sizeable difficulty spike - consider simplifying this by creating dashes to 00:49:120 (1,3,1) only - How do you propose I do that exactly? I tried is all I'm gonna say.
00:53:766 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 earlier please, a 1/2 beat recovery isn't a great deal at this BPM, and since 00:55:314 (1) is off to the left, it will be easy (and frustrating) for a newer player to get spinner baited here - Fixed
00:56:862 (4) - NC here as well please, combo length, consistency and all that good stuff - Fixed
00:59:959 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:49:120 (1,2,3,4) - Same response, this one I didn't try.
01:03:830 (4,1) - These can feel a little uncomfortable to play, as the current spacing is close to requiring dash, and may leave newer players in two minds about how to play them. Consider moving 01:03:056 (3,1) to x-224 to make this easier to read as I feel dash would fit nicely here - Fixed
01:07:701 (1,2,3) - Since the tail of (1) is a pretty prominent vocal note, I feel it would be better to remove the repeat, shift (2,3) back 1/2 and add a circle where (3) currently ends, as this allows you to make a jump (and welcome NC) for the strong vocal note at 01:09:250 which is currently underemphasised by being mapped to the low-movement slider tail - Fixed
01:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is just horizontal left/right 1/2 sliders repeatedly, which feels a little plain to play. For variety here you could try angling some of the sliders slightly, or creating a dash to 01:18:540 (1) perhaps - Fixed (or tried to)
01:27:164 (3) - Whilst this is a strong vocal sound, it's in a very calm section of the song. I guess you don't want to use dash here, so I would reduce the spacing to this a tiny bit, as it feels a little uncomfortable for newer players right now - Fixed

I'll keep an eye on things, but this is all for now.
Good luck!

Thanks for modding, apologies (nopunintended) if this apply felt salty and whatnot. I'm also sorry for the amount of time it took to do this. Haven't been having the best of time recently.

Update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
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Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Magic Girl's ADVANCED
Source:東方Project
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Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-11T18:50:57+00:00

Updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,576 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2015-11-14T04:43:23+00:00

A recheck hmm.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

Difficulty Naming

Though it is fine to keep SDVX naming, however, for a clearer recognize, it is better to have the default naming, such as Cup, Salad, Platter etc.

[

Moekufi's NOVICE]

Timeline

00:01:121 (1) - In my opinion this should end at 00:01:895 as the sound is at there but not at red tick. Right now you are trying to have a special rhythm, but it doesn't go as good as the suggested one, also it doesn't hurt to end at white tick. If you decided to go as suggested, please curve the slider as well.
00:02:669 (3) - ^
01:08:282 (2,3,1,2) - It is fine to have such rhythm, but it feels awkward and inconsistent at the Kiai Time, as most of the Kiai Time parts are with only 1/1 timeline, which is quite inconsistent if you include sudden 1/2 patterns. Either remove the pattern or just add 1/2 patterns in various patterns to fix the consistency.

New Combos
00:11:185 (4) - This should be a NC to emphasize the sound at the tail of 00:09:637 (3) - Which feels more complete. Therefore you may remove the NC at 00:11:959 (1)
00:15:056 (2) - Better have a NC here instead of 00:14:669 (1) to fit the stanza rhythm.
00:18:540 (1) - Remove the NC as it is going in line with the previous pattern 00:17:766 (1,2,3)
00:30:540 (5) - You may NC this instead of 00:32:088 (1) so the rhythm is much clearer, NC'ing every 2 stanza.
00:34:991 (1) - Same as above, therefore removing NC here helps. If you decided to do so, add a NC at 00:37:120 (4) too.
00:49:895 (1) - Feels particularly weird here with a sudden NC, since 00:49:120 - 00:50:669 - is in the same stanza if you listen carefully, therefore I suggest removing the NC at 00:49:895 (1)
00:58:798 (3) - It feels like a NC suits here to fit the stanza while shortening the combo. (Since this is an easy diff, combo shouldn't be stacked)
01:14:669 (1) - Maybe removing the NC here will do, since you didn't add NC at 01:16:217 (3) - It would be nice to follow the NC rhythm by NC'ing past every 4 white ticks.
01:28:664 (1,2) - Remove the NC here and place the NC at 01:29:164 (2) as 01:29:164 (2) is with whistle, which can be emphasized like you did at 01:27:164 (1)
01:30:664 (1,2) - ^

Hitsounds
00:32:862 (4,5) - I would suggest adding Whistle at (4) instead of (5), it feels slightly better.
01:16:217 (3) - Better remove the Clap at the tail of this slider, it breaks the hitsound rhythm in my opinion.
01:30:164 (3) - This should be consistent with 01:28:164 (2) in the hitsound patterning, maybe you should decide on whether adding Whistles at this two notes, or only with Claps.

[

Magic Girl's ADVANCED]

Gameplay

00:15:830 (1,2) - The jump between the two sliders here should be less-distant, so that the jump at 00:16:217 (2,3) won't be too hard.
00:17:379 (4,5) - In my opinion the gap is a little bit big, that players might dash here. To maintain a good dashing rhythm, I suggest moving (4) closer to (5), say x:272, where the gap can be smaller and help players to catch the jump at 00:17:572 (5,1)
00:24:346 (1,2) - Probably it is just careless stuff, I deem that it is difficult for Salad players to catch (2), as (1,2) are parallel in movements, which can be hard for them to decelerate and get to the left, plus it needs dashing to full combo here. Therefore it would be nice to Ctrl+G (2) or just remap the part at 00:24:346 - 00:25:508 to lower the difficulty.
00:25:508 (4,1) - The jump here is also big, where it would be nicer if you lower the distance while keeping the dash.
00:34:024 (2,3,4) - It is a no to have dash-holding part in a Salad, such as this part, where players have to hold their dash button to catch (3) and (4). Please lower the distance of (2,3) to fit the difficulty.
00:46:798 (3,1) - It is fine here, but the dash can be difficult for players to get it, since (3) swipes them away from (1). Try changing the pattern here, that can maintain the dash here as well.
01:08:862 (3,1) - Poof, that's unrankable to include a hyperdash in Salad.
01:23:164 - 01:32:817 - This part totally lacks dashes, which is way too plain as the ending in my opinion though it is a kind of soft part. What about adding dash at 01:26:914 (2,3) and 01:30:164 (3,1) - which do not hurt much having them?

New Combos
00:05:766 (3) - You may NC here to have the same NC rhythm as the previous ones.
00:08:862 (3) - Similar to above, instead you can NC here to fit the later ones.
00:15:056 (3) - Why not having a NC here? It begins a new stanza. If you decided to go as suggested, remove the NC at 00:15:830 (1) and NC at 00:16:604 (3) as well.
00:20:669 (1) - Shouldn't NC here as the stanza is still going on, instead, NC at 00:21:250 (2) will do.
00:28:798 (3) - NC here? It will be consistent with the later rhythms.
01:03:056 (3) - ^
01:25:164 (4) - NC here instead of 01:26:164 (1) to go in line with the rhythms.
01:27:164 (3) - NC with the same reason above.
01:28:664 (1,2) - NC at (2) instead of (1), same reason as above.

Hitsounds
00:03:250 (2) - Feels weird to have a Whistle here, it doesn't go consistent with 00:01:701 (2)
00:06:153 (4) - Maybe remove the Whistle here? It feels less stacked with Whistles in this part.
00:06:927 (6) - ^
00:28:798 (3,4,5) - It is so stacked with the Whistles in my opinion, how about only keeping the Whistle at the tail of 00:29:379 (4) which feels less complex.
00:30:346 (1) - Please remove the Whistle at the tail, it is so stacked when you have consecutive Whistles going on here.
01:27:164 - 01:30:664 - The Whistles are way too much here, which I find them didn't fit the gradual slowing rhythm in the audio. Maybe you should hitsound this part similarly as 01:23:164 - 01:27:164 in the hitsound patterning.

[

Murumuru's EXHAUST]

Gameplay

00:39:830 (1) - Since the hyperdash at 00:38:282 (4,1) may force players to go left and stick to the wall, it would be nice if you rotate 00:39:830 (1) for 180 degree and place at the same spot, which can decrease the difficulty here.
00:52:120 (6,1) - The gap is a bit large in my opinion, what about lowering the gap here while keeping a dash? Try moving 00:51:927 (4) to x:448, 00:52:024 (5) to x:408 and 00:52:120 (6) to x:368.
00:55:217 (7,1) - This gap is large as well, that can be lowered by increase the slope of 00:54:830 (3,4,5,6,7) like the above.
01:19:894 (4,5) - Add a dash here? Otherwise it would be so awkward that this is less intense than the jumps at 01:18:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

New Combos
00:17:572 (1) - What about removing the NC here and NC at 00:18:153 (3) instead? It fits the audio more in my opinion.
00:42:346 (1,2) - ^
00:57:056 (4) - NC here to go with the same rhythm as the later ones.
01:06:153 (6) - You may NC this and remove the NC at 01:06:927 (1) as the stanza is more fit with such amendment.
01:12:346 (5) - NC in my opinion. This would feel better in the rhythm.
01:25:164 (3) - ^
01:32:477 (1) - Better remove the NC with the reason above.

Hitsounds
00:29:766 (6) - Feels awkward that Whistle is not going at the head but the tail. For me adding Whistle at the head would fit the rhythm much better.

[

Nely's INFINITE]

Gameplay

00:15:830 (3,4) - Better remove the NC here to fit the consistency with 00:22:024 (3,4)
00:56:088 (3,4) - Maybe turn this into a pattern like 00:57:637 (3,4,5) to have a consistency in the Kiai Time.
01:08:475 (3) - ^

New Combos
00:02:669 (4) - NC here to fit the rhythm here (NC'ing every 4 white ticks).
00:12:733 (5) - Better NC here instead of 00:13:120 (1) since it is weird to NC suddenly at the middle.
00:14:766 (1) - ^, instead remove the NC here.
00:38:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - The NC pattern is weird, what about NC'ing at 00:39:056 (2) only?
00:53:766 (4) - NC here instead of 00:54:540 (1) to emphasize the Finish at (4).
01:19:701 (1) - Remove the NC here to fit the rhythm.
01:25:164 (3) - ^

[

GRAVITY]

Gameplay

00:11:572 (4,1) - Try to add a hyperdash here to fit the rhythm.
00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern should go consistent as 00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - therefore decide on whether using 3/4 sliders or 1/2 sliders + circles.

Good luck!

-AFB

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-14T04:50:19+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
A recheck hmm.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

Difficulty Naming
Though it is fine to keep SDVX naming, however, for a clearer recognize, it is better to have the default naming, such as Cup, Salad, Platter etc. - Ok! Will change it back! (hardest diff get cutsom tho)

[ GRAVITY]

Gameplay
00:11:572 (4,1) - Try to add a hyperdash here to fit the rhythm. - Fixed!
00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern should go consistent as 00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - therefore decide on whether using 3/4 sliders or 1/2 sliders + circles. - Should be ok now!

Good luck!

-AFB

THanks for the mod!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-11-14T09:18:20+00:00

applied rhythms, but for nc i mostly keep mine in case for avoiding much fruits, and some of them are i NC'ed a bit late because of new patterns so NC'ing a note before new patterns look quite weird for me

thanks afb ~

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-11-15T18:58:46+00:00

Took all the Ayyfbmao suggestion, thanks for modding

Somehow, Osu email notification didn`t show up, sorry about late RS >_<"

Murumuru's Platter

osu file format v14

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Title:Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Murumuru's Platter
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Tokufi

117 posts

Joined July 2013

Tokufi 2015-11-17T01:03:33+00:00

Fixed all Afbmoe mods ~

UPDATE

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Moekufi's Cup
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-11-21T06:19:58+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
A recheck hmm.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Magic Girl's ADVANCED]

Gameplay
00:15:830 (1,2) - The jump between the two sliders here should be less-distant, so that the jump at 00:16:217 (2,3) won't be too hard. - Fixed
00:17:379 (4,5) - In my opinion the gap is a little bit big, that players might dash here. To maintain a good dashing rhythm, I suggest moving (4) closer to (5), say x:272, where the gap can be smaller and help players to catch the jump at 00:17:572 (5,1) - Fixed
00:24:346 (1,2) - Probably it is just careless stuff, I deem that it is difficult for Salad players to catch (2), as (1,2) are parallel in movements, which can be hard for them to decelerate and get to the left, plus it needs dashing to full combo here. Therefore it would be nice to Ctrl+G (2) or just remap the part at 00:24:346 - 00:25:508 to lower the difficulty. - Fixed
00:25:508 (4,1) - The jump here is also big, where it would be nicer if you lower the distance while keeping the dash. - Fixed
00:34:024 (2,3,4) - It is a no to have dash-holding part in a Salad, such as this part, where players have to hold their dash button to catch (3) and (4). Please lower the distance of (2,3) to fit the difficulty. - Fixed
00:46:798 (3,1) - It is fine here, but the dash can be difficult for players to get it, since (3) swipes them away from (1). Try changing the pattern here, that can maintain the dash here as well. - Fixed (or tried to ;w;)
01:08:862 (3,1) - Poof, that's unrankable to include a hyperdash in Salad. - Brb kms I'm an idiot for not checking that (fixed)
01:23:164 - 01:32:817 - This part totally lacks dashes, which is way too plain as the ending in my opinion though it is a kind of soft part. What about adding dash at 01:26:914 (2,3) and 01:30:164 (3,1) - which do not hurt much having them? - Fixed

New Combos
00:05:766 (3) - You may NC here to have the same NC rhythm as the previous ones. - Fixed
00:08:862 (3) - Similar to above, instead you can NC here to fit the later ones. - Fixed
00:15:056 (3) - Why not having a NC here? It begins a new stanza. If you decided to go as suggested, remove the NC at 00:15:830 (1) and NC at 00:16:604 (3) as well. - Fixed
00:20:669 (1) - Shouldn't NC here as the stanza is still going on, instead, NC at 00:21:250 (2) will do. - Fixed
00:28:798 (3) - NC here? It will be consistent with the later rhythms. - Fixed
01:03:056 (3) - ^ - ^
01:25:164 (4) - NC here instead of 01:26:164 (1) to go in line with the rhythms. - Fixed
01:27:164 (3) - NC with the same reason above. - Fixed
01:28:664 (1,2) - NC at (2) instead of (1), same reason as above. - Fixed

Hitsounds
00:03:250 (2) - Feels weird to have a Whistle here, it doesn't go consistent with 00:01:701 (2) - Fixed
00:06:153 (4) - Maybe remove the Whistle here? It feels less stacked with Whistles in this part. - Fixed
00:06:927 (6) - ^ - Fixed
00:28:798 (3,4,5) - It is so stacked with the Whistles in my opinion, how about only keeping the Whistle at the tail of 00:29:379 (4) which feels less complex. - Fixed
00:30:346 (1) - Please remove the Whistle at the tail, it is so stacked when you have consecutive Whistles going on here. - Fixed
01:27:164 - 01:30:664 - The Whistles are way too much here, which I find them didn't fit the gradual slowing rhythm in the audio. Maybe you should hitsound this part similarly as 01:23:164 - 01:27:164 in the hitsound patterning. - Fixed

Good luck!

-AFB

Thanks for modding. I am so sorry for the delay I'm really busy recently orz ;w;

Magic Girl's Salad

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
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Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Magic Girl's Salad
Source:東方Project
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Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-11-21T18:30:36+00:00

All updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,576 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2015-12-14T02:36:43+00:00

It is now fine to me-

Bubbled!

Good luck!

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-14T03:43:43+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
It is now fine to me-

Bubbled!

Good luck!

om here we go bois!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-12-14T05:10:25+00:00

Here we go

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-15T11:15:48+00:00

Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Magic Girl's Salad

00:06:927 (4,1) - Consider increasing the spacing a bit here, I really feel this calls for dash considering the emphasis you're putting on the head of (1). Consider moving it to x-168, then to avoid a weird spacing to 00:08:088 (2) you could move 00:08:088 (2,1,2,1) to x-240
01:23:164 (1,2,3,1) - Don't you think this many whistles sounds a bit excessive? I think you could remove the ones on the tails of each, keeping them on the heads for the strong vocal sounds

Murumuru's Platter

01:17:862 (4,5,6,7) - This 1/4 stream would look a bit neater if you curved it leading into the slider imo, the current (6,7) transition is noticeable bigger than the previous ones but not big enough that it requires playing any differently, e.g. with dash, so it just comes off as a bit random to me. Try moving (4) to [432,284], then (5) and (6) both (separately) to x-456 to give a smoother effect that looks a bit cleaner
01:19:314 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of this repetition; though it does fit the song, it seems a bit anticlimactic given the great variation you had earlier. If you'd like to keep it, I recommend increasing the distance to and from this pair to provide a little more of a "building-up" feel. Try moving these to x-112

Nely's Rain

00:29:959 (3,1) - Eeek this jump is pretty annoying since it's really close to hdash. If there's supposed to be a hdash here, move (1) to x-412 - otherwise make the jump more comfortable by moving to x-372, consistent with 00:27:056 (5,1)
00:52:217 (1,2) - This spacing feels a bit awkward - due to the SV and placement of (2), you have to dash to reach the end (which is unexpected), followed by a return hdash. I can see this catching players off guard, so a solution might be to (1) a little to the right, say x-152?
01:26:664 - You mapped the soft piano sound at 01:24:664 (2) but not here which seems a bit odd. I'd consider dropping a 1/2 slider in at about x-240, facing left to bridge the gap

Grief

00:14:862 (8,1) - Strong hdash into a near vertical slider really kills the flow and will create so many annoying misses. I suggest moving the slider start back to x-128 and making it more horizontal to create a slightly less harsh movement
00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Don't these seem a little exaggerated to you? The music is intense, sure, but not enough to justify a snappy motion like this. Reducing the hyper strengths a bit would play better and be more fitting to the music
00:52:798 (4,5) - Is this really strong enough for an antiflowing reverse hyper pattern? Seems unnecessary to me, moving 00:53:185 (5,6) to x-96 would play and fit better imo
01:05:572 (4) - Move this to x-64 please, both to be consistent with 01:04:991 (2) and avoid an annoying pixel jump into hyper combination
01:08:475 (4) - Flip this, the antiflow is unnecessary and will just lead to annoying droplet misses

Call me back.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-15T14:59:26+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Grief
00:14:862 (8,1) - Strong hdash into a near vertical slider really kills the flow and will create so many annoying misses. I suggest moving the slider start back to x-128 and making it more horizontal to create a slightly less harsh movement - Fixed!
00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Don't these seem a little exaggerated to you? The music is intense, sure, but not enough to justify a snappy motion like this. Reducing the hyper strengths a bit would play better and be more fitting to the music - Fixed!
00:52:798 (4,5) - Is this really strong enough for an antiflowing reverse hyper pattern? Seems unnecessary to me, moving 00:53:185 (5,6) to x-96 would play and fit better imo - Fixed!
01:05:572 (4) - Move this to x-64 please, both to be consistent with 01:04:991 (2) and avoid an annoying pixel jump into hyper combination - Fixed!
01:08:475 (4) - Flip this, the antiflow is unnecessary and will just lead to annoying droplet misses - Fixed!
Call me back.

Thank you for the mod! Will poke ya when all diffs updated!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-12-15T15:17:48+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:
Murumuru's Platter
01:17:862 (4,5,6,7) - This 1/4 stream would look a bit neater if you curved it leading into the slider imo, the current (6,7) transition is noticeable bigger than the previous ones but not big enough that it requires playing any differently, e.g. with dash, so it just comes off as a bit random to me. Try moving (4) to [432,284], then (5) and (6) both (separately) to x-456 to give a smoother effect that looks a bit cleaner
01:19:314 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of this repetition; though it does fit the song, it seems a bit anticlimactic given the great variation you had earlier. If you'd like to keep it, I recommend increasing the distance to and from this pair to provide a little more of a "building-up" feel. Try moving these to x-112
Call me back.

Done all fixed

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Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-12-16T04:19:30+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Magic Girl's Salad
00:06:927 (4,1) - Consider increasing the spacing a bit here, I really feel this calls for dash considering the emphasis you're putting on the head of (1). Consider moving it to x-168, then to avoid a weird spacing to 00:08:088 (2) you could move 00:08:088 (2,1,2,1) to x-240 - Fixed
01:23:164 (1,2,3,1) - Don't you think this many whistles sounds a bit excessive? I think you could remove the ones on the tails of each, keeping them on the heads for the strong vocal sounds - Fixed

Thanks for modding.

Magic Girl's Salad

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-12-17T00:29:18+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Nely's Rain
00:29:959 (3,1) - Eeek this jump is pretty annoying since it's really close to hdash. If there's supposed to be a hdash here, move (1) to x-412 - otherwise make the jump more comfortable by moving to x-372, consistent with 00:27:056 (5,1)
00:52:217 (1,2) - This spacing feels a bit awkward - due to the SV and placement of (2), you have to dash to reach the end (which is unexpected), followed by a return hdash. I can see this catching players off guard, so a solution might be to (1) a little to the right, say x-152?
01:26:664 - You mapped the soft piano sound at 01:24:664 (2) but not here which seems a bit odd. I'd consider dropping a 1/2 slider in at about x-240, facing left to bridge the gap almost cant hear piano unless in 01:26:914 - so i would like to keep what i've mapped now
Call me back.

thanks jbh ~

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Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T01:23:21+00:00

ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-12-17T01:26:48+00:00

Razor Sharp wrote:
ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH

It's getting a bit late to do a proper check tonight, so I'll take a (hopefully) last look at this tomorrow.

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T11:00:31+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Razor Sharp wrote:
ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH
It's getting a bit late to do a proper check tonight, so I'll take a (hopefully) last look at this tomorrow.

you told me

OMG ITS NEW SAY

/pokes JBH

:^)

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-12-17T14:46:36+00:00

this guy >.>

Salad

00:28:024 (2) - Whistle on the repeat (or tail if you prefer) please, the vocal is relatively strong here and there's not enough feedback for the sound at the moment
00:32:088 (1) - ^ On the tail

Platter

00:05:766 (2,4) - Whistle/Whistle or Whistle/Clap on the heads, respectively please, there needs to be more feedback for the vocals here
00:28:798 (4) - 00:30:540 (2) - Whistle on the head
00:34:411 (3) - ^

Grief

00:39:443 (7) - Possible NC here? It's a pretty tricky section and note density is high, missing here results in a high change of failure
00:39:637 (10,11,12) - Increasing distance is good for that building up feeling, but this feels a little too excessive. The music hasn't changed in intensity much, yet you're using almost double the spacing between this triplet and the previous one. Suggest reducing the jump here a bit, try moving the triplet to around x-340 if you're going to keep the \ \ inversion, or x-362 (and then Ctrl+G the triplet) for a repeat of the \ / pattern

Last time (I hope).

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T14:50:46+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
this guy >.>

Salad
00:28:024 (2) - Whistle on the repeat (or tail if you prefer) please, the vocal is relatively strong here and there's not enough feedback for the sound at the moment - Fixed!
00:32:088 (1) - ^ On the tail - Fixed!
Platter
00:05:766 (2,4) - Whistle/Whistle or Whistle/Clap on the heads, respectively please, there needs to be more feedback for the vocals here - Fixed!
00:28:798 (4) - 00:30:540 (2) - Whistle on the head - Fixed!
00:34:411 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
Grief
00:39:443 (7) - Possible NC here? It's a pretty tricky section and note density is high, missing here results in a high change of failure - Fixed!
00:39:637 (10,11,12) - Increasing distance is good for that building up feeling, but this feels a little too excessive. The music hasn't changed in intensity much, yet you're using almost double the spacing between this triplet and the previous one. Suggest reducing the jump here a bit, try moving the triplet to around x-340 if you're going to keep the \ \ inversion, or x-362 (and then Ctrl+G the triplet) for a repeat of the \ / pattern - Fixed!
Last time (I hope).

Applying the HS for the GD's as its not major stuff i guess

All updated!

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JBHyperion 2015-12-17T15:03:10+00:00

Update #7657345 - Also fixed some unneeded and unsnapped green lines k.

Good grief ayyy lmao, picky old me is finally happy with this map. An approval flame would suit Mokou better tbh, but I can only give you a heart so get over it (^:

Requalified~

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T15:07:21+00:00

thank you babe <3

Sunkiss

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Sunkiss 2015-12-17T16:05:35+00:00

Ahhhhh congrats razor!

Moeruattack

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Moeruattack 2015-12-17T16:36:20+00:00

\:D/

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