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let the star wars commence
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jonathanlfj wrote:

let the star wars commence
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Star for Frostmoune o3o
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lets see how Frost react
cuz the map still WIP and already have 68 stars
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Neither Kosaki or Haru.

Chitoge ftw!
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Frim4503 wrote:

lets see how Frost react
cuz the map still WIP and already have 68 stars
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good luck Frost :D
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Nice map!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

gogo Marika=<3
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Marika is the Best!


Really Good Map! <3
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where the fuck is the option for tsugumi
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chitoge
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no star but a hug
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xsrsbsns wrote:

shitogay
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Finally finished ^.^

Thanks for stars a lot! I appreciate all of you guys' stars~
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great job c:
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Hi! M4M request on your queue

  • Normal


    00:03:118 (1,2,3) - I would do something more symmetrical, because it's definetly not (http://puu.sh/iBPlR/320976e70d.jpg)
    00:08:802 (1) - I think this slider shouldn't start on a down beat. 00:09:276 - Is too strong for that, it starts a new rhythm
    00:11:013 (1,4) - Definetly not feels good, maybe if you make a slider blanket?
    00:13:539 (1) - Curve it a bit more to make the flow with 00:14:170 (2) - better?
    00:20:170 (3) - I would replace it for a circle at 00:20:170 - and another at 00:20:644 - with NC, I don't think start an slider at a down beat here is a good idea either
    00:27:434 (3,4) - Flow is bad, slider blanket it? (I love slider blanket :3)
    00:28:065 (4,4) - Not really an overlap but it looks a bit weird. What about http://puu.sh/iBPwz/dd5c3d3602.jpg I know you would have to fix all the DS, but I think it looks better
    00:42:592 (3) - Curve it a bit more to make the flow better with 00:43:539 (1) - ?
    00:49:539 (4) - http://puu.sh/iBPAn/cbd403b9ff.jpg ?
    00:51:592 (1) - Shouldn't it end at 00:52:065 - , and add a circle at 00:52:381 - ?
    00:52:697 (2,3) - Make blanket?
    01:14:170 (3,1) - Perfect slider blanket, it's off for sure
    01:21:276 (1) - This slider is a bit innapropriated for a 2015 beatmap lmfao
    01:33:118 (4,5) - Make blanket?
    01:45:118 (2,3) - they're not parallel for sure
    02:00:908 (3) - Same as 00:42:592 (3) -
    02:05:486 (3,1) - Perfect slider blanket, it's off for sure²
    02:07:855 (4) - Same as 00:49:539 (4) -
  1. Looks like from here on it's just the same pattern but flipped
    02:28:539 (1,2) - This is really odd, maybe: http://puu.sh/iBPQh/de3b63611b.jpg
    02:35:960 (1) - I think you should remove this as the break time has the same rhythm and it's not a spinner :p
    03:02:170 (2,3) - The flow here is really bad, Try: http://puu.sh/iBPUx/c06ac01666.jpg
    03:46:065 (2,1) - Perfect blanket
    04:04:697 (1,3) - Slider blanket?
    04:14:486 (3,1) - ^ ?

    Fycho's Hard



    00:26:328 (2,1) - Fix blanket?
    01:02:328 (5,1) - This overlap makes this beautiful beatmap don't look so beautiful '-'
    01:09:749 (4,1) - ^

    Sorry but this is all I could find :p

    Insane



    00:51:592 - It's a bit weird that you've ignored such strong rhythm
    01:23:170 (2) - Make like I said on Normal http://puu.sh/iBPAn/cbd403b9ff.jpg
    01:23:802 (3) - I would replace to 2 1/2 circles. I really don't like sliders on down beat :p
    04:02:486 (2,4) - This overlap was on purpose?

    Sorry but I can't find more than that, I loved your mapping style on Insane

    Extra



    00:12:749 (6,5) - Blanket is off
    01:37:223 (2) - Make it like 01:36:907 (1) - (Ctrl + Alt + R to rotate)
    03:16:381 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Was this really on purpose? There's nothing streaming on the rhythm, not even the guitar
    03:50:013 (3,2) - Fix blanket


I'll finish tomorrow, have to go sleep :> Sorry :p

Edit: finished :) Sorry for not that big mod, I know that you don't want a wall of mod but ..
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Greeting Frost. M4M from your queue.

General

  1. Disable widescreen support

Extra

  1. 00:06:434 (3,4,1,2) - I feel the transition between stack and jump is not that smooth. Suggest you position the stack to the middle of 1 and 2. For example like this:
    (maybe not a good example but urr... you might get what i mean)
  2. 00:32:960 (5,6) - Nice jump. But what about changing this into a triplet? It would be more interesting.
  3. 00:39:276 (4,5) - Suggest you ctrl+g to make an anti-jump, since the song is not corresponding to a stack here.
  4. 00:47:960 (5) - stack this with 3 to make an anti-jump as well. Same reason as the previous one.
  5. 00:56:013 (6) - NC
  6. 01:03:749 (5) - Move the next NC to this one since your pattern changed here. Also for the lyric, starting with "ラブ" is more reasonable than "めた". xD...
  7. 01:16:223 (4) - or 01:16:697 (5) - add NC
  8. 01:20:960 (4,5) - 4 (76,325), 5 (184,304). Would be neater and won't change your flow.
  9. 01:26:802 (2) - Move this away from 1, towards triplet. Then it would be similar to your previous pattern 01:24:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
  10. 01:30:986 (5) - NC
  11. 02:24:907 (7) - curve this?
  12. 03:07:855 (5) - NC?
  13. 00:40:381 (4,5) - Drum addition clap on 4 and drum finish on 5.
  14. 01:48:749 (1,2) - ^
  15. 02:29:013 (1,2,3) - Change the whistles into claps?
  16. 03:35:170 (1) - Drum addition clap on the turning point and drum addition finish on the tail.
Not sure about the usage of your NC (maybe just a division of different pattern? ).

Insane

  1. 00:37:855 (3) - Suggest you curve this to make a symmetry pattern.
  2. 00:39:117 (4,5) - Just my personal taste: 4 (353,245), and 5 (357,249) to make the flow nicer.
  3. 00:44:328 (4) - Curve this as well.
  4. 01:30:986 (5) - NC to help players to react this.
  5. 02:18:276 (2,3,4,1,2) - For these 3 sliders, the distance is much larger than the previous and even later patterns. I feel it's not reasonable.
  6. 03:04:855 (2,3) - For a more appropriate rhythm, swap the order of slider and circle to follow the vocal better.
  7. 03:17:960 (6) - Move the next NC to this one?
  8. 03:54:118 (6) - Slightly curve this more to fit the previous sliders.
  9. I don't chack hitsound again cuz I feel it's just a duplicate of Extra.

Fycho's Hard

  1. 00:04:223 (3,1) - 建议包起来,这样flow上会多一点点转折,可以更好的强调重音。
  2. 00:10:539 (1) - 建议把这个开口向左弯一下,这样既可以跟后面有vocal的滑条区分又能更美观。
  3. 00:32:802 (4,1) - 强迫症xD... 把4的尾巴压到1的正中间吧。
  4. 00:39:118 (3) - 这个滑条尾应该是clap吧。。(没有直接用Frost的音效?)
  5. 00:54:749 (1,2) - 同上,弄到正中间会更好看。
  6. 00:45:749 (4,1) - 试试这个?
  7. 01:09:749 (4) - 我觉得叠滑条中间比较好,因为下一个音就是重音了。
  8. 01:35:170 (1,2) - 同上,弄到正中间。后面的02:13:065 (1,2) - 02:29:486 (1,2) - 04:05:486 (1,2) - 也一样
  9. 01:51:592 (1) - 开口改成向左下?因为是重音,搞一点点曲折的flow会好些
  10. 02:57:907 (2) - 把弧度缩小一点,跟前后保持一致
  11. 02:58:697 (5) - NC
  12. 03:08:802 (1,3) - 搞成对称的?
  13. 03:13:855 (3) - NC一下?Hard里连着4个圈还有折叠可以弄一下。
  14. 03:43:539 (6) - NC分一下梗?
  15. 04:13:065 (1) - 我觉得这根滑条与前面物件的间距可以参考04:11:960 (1,2) - ,因为节奏并未减弱。

That's all my mod. Finally I finished it on the flight.......

Good luck my idol~
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omg
finally full spread :):D
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Sup frost, m4m from queue

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00:14:802 (4,5) - I think the rhythm sounds more flowed if these two were swapped, but if if you choose to follow this mod, I would suggest putting the old (5) circle at X:216 Y:164, and rearranging the slider to 172,244 to maintain distance spacing, as well as blanketing with 00:14:486 (3) -



00:35:644 (5) - is the whistle on the entire slider itself intentional? not on endpoints, but the whole slider

00:50:802 (5) - I would suggest making a slider at 68,268 instead of double clicks, because in my opinion, it may be difficult for beginners and catch them off guard

01:52:381 (3) - to maintain pattern similarity, may I suggest making this slider identical to 01:51:118 (2) - ?

02:09:118 (5,6) - Same as 00:50:802 (5), but this time slider head on 476,212

02:18:118 (1) - I would suggest shortening this slider to start at 02:18:276 instead, and add a circle 02:18:118 (1) - at the original starting point of slider (172,232) along with a whistle for circle



03:53:486 (5) - To make the number 5 more obvious to the player, may I suggest moving to (24,64) so that its less covered by the endpoint of the previous slider?

FYCHO'S HARD

00:20:328 (4) - In my opinion, I think a whistle at the head would sound better than a double clap, up to you though

01:02:170 (4) - I would suggest moving upwards to (192.304) to make a more steeper triangular pattern for 01:02:013 (3,4,5) - because its difficult to hit those notes if they were right horizontally next to each other

01:31:223 (5) - I think it may flow better if this was moved to (24,256) instead, making the notes be hit in the same direction

01:44:013 (1) - is the whistle on the whole slider intentional?

02:20:486 (4) - same as 01:02:170 (4), but this time, move the note to (344,312)

INSANE

00:48:434 (6) - in my opinion, it would be better if you used ctrl+g on this slider to make the flow easier for the next triangle pattern



Slider head is still at (328,312) but the centre slider dot should be at 268,376)

01:36:434 (1) - I would suggest moving the head of this slider to (172,276) so that 01:35:644 (2,3,4,1) - all form a square pattern

03:23:644 (3) - I would suggest moving to (256,258) to form a symmetrical pattern with 03:23:013 (1,2) -



Really good mapset, and good use of patterns! hope I helped
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I will get to all mods what fixed and whatnot when I'm home, now I'm in Australia so I can't fix everything without testing on my end :cry:
Thank you very much for modding ~
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