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Krisom
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2,867 posts
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Krisom
Hola vivere x_X

General.-
Tendrás que cortar el mp3, el que estás usando ahora es demasiado largo D:
Haz que los Kiai Times sean iguales en todas las diffs, ahora están todos extraños :<
Además, te recomiendo que todas las dificultades tengan en mismo largo
Ve a Timing-> Resnap All notes

Normal.-
00:23:506 (1) - Apila esta nota bajo el final de (7)? (un truco, crea la nota en 00:23:110 bajo el final del slider y luego solo muevela hasta 00:23:506)
00:31:073 (1) - Los spinners son cosas muy difíciles para los novatos x_x, y uno tan corto los podría confundir. Te recomiendo que comienzes este spinner en 00:30:284.
01:33:695 (4) - Spacing? Está muy cerca de (3)
01:59:762 (1,2) - Estos dos sliders no están apilados como los demás. Es intencional? Si lo es, trata de des-apilarlos de otra manera, que ahorita se ven mal

Hard.-
00:56:383 (5) - Esta nota no está bien apilada bajo (4). Si no se puede apilar, sácala de ahí (junto con (6) y (7))
01:06:559 (3) - Spacing?
01:07:603 (5) - Spacing?
01:15:952 (2,3,4,5) - El spacing de estas notas está algo raro.
01:41:523 (3,4,5,6) - Estas notas no están bien apiladas.
Buen mapa!!

360 Insane.-
00:51:284 (2,3) - Mueve estas dos notas 1/4 mas adelante. Ahora suenan algo raro =x. Si haces esto, borra el (4) y haz al slider durar hasta 00:52:197.
01:20:649 (2) - El repeat arrow está tapado por el hit splash de 01:19:605 (8).
Muy buena!


Ok, si me conocen se habrán dado cuenta que no dije NADA sobre hitsounds, cosa que es muy rara.
Umm, el mapa en si está excelente, pero los hitsounds en todas las diff están medios, ehhh, nose, raros? Te propongo algo, arregla estas cosas y avísame por PM (o en #spanish si me ves conectado) si quieres que yo le ponga los hitsounds a todas las diff (incluyendo la de drack360, así que pídele permiso).

Por ahora dejo star, te la mereces!
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
All done~ :)
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
updated~ xd
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hola ~

Lo que esta en este color es importante

General;
- Te recomiendo cortar el mp3 hasta donde mapeas (para eso todas las diff tienes que ser igual de tiempo) Creo que el largo de 360 insane esta bien.

Normal;
- Esto sale como easy, y yo lo siento como easy :3
- 00:20:892 >> agrega un finish solo al ultimo
- 00:23:501 >> no pongas esto debajo de el slider anterior, se ve mal cuando juegas
- 01:34:197 >> ^
- 01:59:762 >> los sliders que estan sobre otros se ven mal cuando juegas...intentan moverlos o hacer sliders con otras formas

Hard;
- 01:32:371 >> haz un slider con bezier en vez de uno linear ??
- 02:03:675 >> hay un timing section casi junto a este punto que es para el kiai time, pero no esta justamente en el punto, el timing section para el kiai time tiene que estar justo en la nota
- 02:20:371 >> ^

360' Insane;
- Verifica que el kiai time empiece y termine en una nota ~

* Star ~ :3
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Make kiai time the same on all difficulties unless there is a break

Normal:
move 00:40:718 timing section 1/4 earlier
move 01:21:936 timing section 1/4 earlier
01:14:110 (8) - new combo
01:14:110 (8) - remove new combo
01:17:762 (2,3) - don't overlap these
01:20:110 (4) - ^
01:33:675 (4,5) - stack better
01:38:371 (3,4) - align
01:43:327 (1,2) - I wouldn't have these overlap each other
01:53:240 (1) - move slightly to the right so it is more centered
01:58:979 (5,1,2,3) - fix stacking (turn off grid snap if you have to)

Hard:
01:32:371 (10) - new combo
01:41:501 (3,4,5,6) - could be stacked slightly better

360' Insane:
00:40:72 timing section isn't needed
a lack of hitsounds in some places
looks good

*star*
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
To fix stacking, make the distance snap 0.0x and disable grid snap, then try moving it

[Normal]
00:49:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why did the spacing suddenly change?
01:34:197 (5) - not stacked properly
01:44:371 (2) - spacing?
01:59:762 (1,2,3) - stacking?

[Hard]
00:23:501 (2,3,4) - spacing?

[Insane]
01:20:631 (2) - whoa, I didn't see that repeat arrow, maybe move the slider so the repeat arrow doesn't get covered up by hitbursts?
01:39:675 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - uh, there are no hitsounds in this section or the section after it...
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Nice song.

Normal
00:17:762 (3) - Move down very slightly so that the end is in the center. Suggestion.
00:20:892 (7) - Yeah, if I may be a bitch, change this around so it doesn't overlap (6). And is prettier.
01:53:240 (1) - Center please
Map to the end.

Hard
1/6 and 1/8... Erm...
Map to the end. I can understand some mapper's justification for Easy, sometimes for Normal, but Hard?

360' Insane
Technically alright I suppose

Pretty good map. Here's a star to bump it to a round 40.
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
I think StoryBoard hitsounds might be very helpful for you.
Just check this link: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=34555.
Also to check others' .osu files to make sure that yours will be working properly.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
General;

Map all difficulties to the same point.

Normal;

00:40:718 (1) - Shouldn't be so soon after the spinner on a normal.
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
01:05:762 (1) - Shouldn't be so soon after the spinner on a normal.
01:14:110 (8) - New combo.
01:17:762 (1) - No new combo.
01:20:110 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:43:327 (1) - Shouldn't be so soon after the spinner on a normal.
01:53:240 (1,2) - Spacing.

Hard;

00:23:501 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Normal]
Rename to Easy?
00:23:501 (1) - Isn't alligned? Just direct your cursor on the slider and it will automatically stack.
00:38:110 - Start spinner from here.
00:43:849 (5) - It's a bit close.
01:34:197 (5) - Allign.
01:59:762 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
01:07:327 (4) - Allign.
Actually there were much more moments,so better check and allign everything you should.

[360's Insane]
01:54:805 (7) - 1 grid down?

Map is fine,but why all difficulties end in different time?
Good luck.
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
Thanks to all ^^

Updated
Extor
osu! Alumni
370 posts
Here since the beginning
Extor
Muy buen mapa. Ahi te va una estrella. =D
Antu Villegas
242 posts
Joined December 2009
Antu Villegas
Buena suerte :D
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*Mp3 quality doesn't sound that great (possibly due to shortening it?)
*Offset is ridiculously off. 580 is correct (until you get a better mp3, that is). Remember to resnap after changing the offset in all difficulties.
*Add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one).
*Remove the unnecessary .osb file from the folder.
*It doesn't matter if the guest difficulty has different kiai than the mapper's diffs, but you (vivere) should have the same kiai for Easy/Hard. Some places start on red ticks instead of white, so double check your kiai when you make Easy/Hard the same. (You'll also need to resnap all of the kiai sections to white ticks after you change the offset UNLESS you change mp3s again, in which case you can wait to fix the kiai).
*Except for kiai, inherited sections should always be placed early instead of directly on the tick.

[Easy]
*Could use more hitsounds (especially finishes). Beginning felt especially empty...
*Lower the drain 1-2 ticks.
00:20:928 (7) - How about vertically flipping this so it doesn't overlap the previous notes
00:40:754 (1,2,3) - too spread out/too difficult for an Easy.
00:45:711 (7,8,9) - ^
00:47:798 (1,2,3,4) - . . . This is supposed to be an _Easy_ difficulty .___.;
00:54:581 (1,2,3,4) - too spread out...
01:03:711 (1) - I'd extend this to the white tick.
01:19:363 (3,1,2,3,4) - too spread out
01:32:407 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:711 (4,5,1) - ^
01:35:015 (2,3,4) - ^
01:53:276 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:04:233 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:06:059 (4) - not snapped right
*More distance problems: I suggest going through the entire difficulty with distance snap on and make sure things are spaced correctly.

[Hard]
*A bit spammy with the claps...
*Raise the drain a little bit
01:32:407 (1) - A bit long/boring =/
02:00:711 (1) - extend to the white tick
02:29:537 (6) - the end of the slider isn't facing towards (7)
*Much better than Easy, but could still use a little bit of work.

[360' Insane]
*Rename to "360's Insane"?
*Volume could be a bit louder in spots (as well as more hitsounds besides claps)
*Except for the higher drain/OD, this didn't feel much more difficult than Hard...

The jump in difficulty from Easy to Hard is a bit high, so I'd like to see a Normal in this set as well. Not bad for one of your first maps. :p
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
;)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Insane]
0:15:153 (3,4,5) spacing of (3,4) different from (4,5)
0:42:284 (3,4,5) ^
0:58:197 (4,5) spacing

nice map, star
gyt
405 posts
Here since the beginning
gyt
I think, offset is wrong. 580 from Derekku is really better.

[Easy]

Hitsound is too random here, imho.

SPOILER
00:15:153 (1) - add finish at the start
00:30:284 (1) - delete clap
00:38:110 (1) - end spinner at 00:40:197
00:43:849 (5) - add clap at the start
00:45:675 (7) - add clap at the middle
01:03:675 (1) - end spinner at 01:05:240 + delete whistle and clap
01:14:110 (1) - replace finish to clap at the start
01:19:327 (3) - delete clap (double hitsound is bad)
01:20:110 (1) - delete finish at the start and add clap at the middle
01:21:936 (4) - delete clap
01:32:892 (3) - delete clap at the middle
01:38:631 (4) - delete finish
02:10:197 (1) - delete clap at the middle + add claps at start and end
02:11:240 (3) - replace clap to finish at the end
02:15:675 (2) - make spacing larger (distance snap)
02:30:805 (1) - make spacing larger
02:34:979 (8) - add finish at the end

[Hard]

Too much claps, but hitsound is better here

SPOILER
00:15:153 (1) - replace clap to finish
00:32:110 (1) - delete clap
00:49:327 (4) - delete clap
00:53:014 (9) - delete clap
01:04:458 (2) - replace clap to finish at the end (double click)
01:11:762 (1,2) - delete claps on blue lines
01:12:805 (3) - add finish at the end
01:13:849 (1,4,8) - add finish at the end
01:19:588 (8), 01:20:631 (4) - delete claps on blue lines
01:20:631 (4) - add claps at start and end
01:21:544 (8) - add clap
01:21:936 (11) - replace clap to finish
01:30:544 (2) - delete clap
01:32:371 (1) - add finish at the middle
02:00:740 (1) - start spinner at red line (02:00:805) + add finish
02:10:718 (4,6) - add clap
02:10:849 (5) - delete clap
02:11:240 (7) - replace clap to finish at the end
02:14:892 (7) - delete clap
02:16:979 (5) - delete clap
02:28:458 (1,2) - delete clap
02:31:066 (3,4) - delete clap

[360' Insane]

So, this one doesn't have many hitsounds :)

01:56:371 (2) - delete clap at the middle

Nice song and map, but hitsound needs some work. Star!
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
I was really pleasantly surprised by your post in my queue ;)

But,you forgot that I've already modded it :o
Anyway,good luck again.
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
star :)
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

SadKangaroo wrote:

I was really pleasantly surprised by your post in my queue ;)

But,you forgot that I've already modded it :o
Anyway,good luck again.
You're right! >.<
Flute
68 posts
Joined December 2009
Flute
star~~
second_wave
194 posts
Joined May 2009
second_wave
Beautiful, star^^
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey...Mod4Mod just as you stated in my queue : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14425 =3

- Delete osb file & fully submit

[Easy]
Check spacing...Some parts seem off.
Some notes with Whistle + Clap sound horrible...I'd consider choosing just one hitsound...or make one hit sound begin and a different one end or so...
02:06:023 (4) - remove repeat...i think it sounds better without repeat
02:13:849 (4) - ^


[Hard]
I dont like how Easy and Hard have both the same slider velocity...I'd consider reducing it on Easy and remapping a little...
Seems fine.

[360's Insane]
Seems fine...But could use more hitsounds at the beginning and end of the song...

~STAR
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Amo esta cancion <333

Star~
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

FPRC16 wrote:

Amo esta cancion <333

Star~

Gracias <3
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this.
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
[Easy+]
01:00:545 (3) - Lazy map?
01:03:675 - Add finish?
Lots of spacing problems with the 1/2 beats. Too far apart.

[Hard]

Some more inconsistent spacing.


[Darck360's Insane]
Make it the same timing.

Overall: My ears!!! These hitsounds don't fit well. Plus the spacing. I don't wanna star this yet....but Darck360's diff is good enough.

.....A very sad, Star.
niqoo_old
14 posts
Joined February 2010
niqoo_old
[b]Ee :D re piola el mapa :D

Ojala te la rankeen :D Nos vemos 8-) [/b]
Guzzzzm4n
177 posts
Joined October 2008
Guzzzzm4n

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections. Fixed
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this. Fixed
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Hitsounds Agregados & Corregido el Offset ;)

Download: Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo (vivere) [darck360's Insane].osu
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this.
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Thanks Kri, all Fixed~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy+]
01:00:545 (3) - Lazy map? No.
01:03:675 - Add finish? mmm... ok
Lots of spacing problems with the 1/2 beats. Too far apart.

[Hard]

Some more inconsistent spacing.


[Darck360's Insane]
Make it the same timing.

Overall: My ears!!! These hitsounds don't fit well. Plus the spacing. I don't wanna star this yet....but Darck360's diff is good enough.

.....A very sad, Star.
Thank for u mod~
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
Updated 8-) ~
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Hi ~~

darck360's Insane :

00:30:284 (3) - Add a clap
00:31:066 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
01:26:110 (1) - Silence the spinner ;<
02:10:458 (3) - Add a clap
02:11:240 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
02:18:802 (3) - Add a clap
02:19:588 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
02:35:501 (3) - Add a clap
02:36:545 (7) - ^


Hard :

Approach rate +1

00:52:979 (9) - Delete the finish
01:13:849 (1) - Wtf slider
01:16:979 (4) - ^
01:37:849 (1) - Remove the new combo
01:40:458 (1) - ^
01:40:718 (6) - New combo where
01:42:805 (5) - Delete the note
01:43:588 (1) - The spinner begins in 01:42:805 and finish in 01:46:979 ~
02:18:545 (1) - Silence the spinner :3
02:28:979 (4,5,6,7,8) - Wtf


Fugly :

00:20:892 (7) - Wtf, please edit the slider o-o
01:05:762 (1,2,3,4) - Delete the clap at the beginning of the slider
01:55:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Very hard for a easy
02:10:197 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:849 (4) - ^


That is all ~
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Insane:
Realmente no vi nada que no sea rankeable en el map (daria pena si lo tuviera con estos +60 priority >_>). Pero te puedo sugerir lo siguiente:

00:21:936 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
00:22:458 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
00:22:979 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
Y así, igual para todos los demás

00:51:284 (2) - Mueve esto, de tal forma que empieze a partir de 00:51:545, y acortalo de tal forma que termine en 00:52:197 (aunque lo ideal es que termine en 00:51:936, pero es tu decision). Además, agrégale un nuevo circle en 00:51:414. Así fluye mejor con sus vocales...

Además, puedo observar que en algunas partes se nota que los diseños tienen un buen acabado, mientras que otras partes no... Me gustaría que todo el map fuera consistente con eso (más que todo son los diseños de tus sliders lo que no me gustan) . Ejemplo de ello:

00:16:197 (7,8,9) - Acabados feos. De hecho, haz esto. Borra estos 3 sliders. Luego copia el siguiente codigo:

192,288,16197,2,0,B|262:252|264:162|187:131,1,200,0|8
127,210,16979,2,0,B|57:174|55:84|132:53,1,200
192,133,17762,2,0,B|400:133,2,200,8|0|8

Abre tu archivo .osu (con tu block de notas), y pegas ese codigo justo despues de donde dice [HitObjects]. Si te gusta, quedatelo, si no te gusta, solo dale update. (Lo que hice fue darle un acabado mas bonito, sólo darte un ejemplo de lo que puedes hacer en los demás >_>)

Además, he de resaltar que son detalles como estos que hace que un map se vea mucho mejor. Por lo que realmente les aconsejo que les den buenos acabados. Y ojo, con esto no quiero decir que simetria perfecta = bonito >_>

Hard:

00:50:631 (2,3,4,5) - Suena horrible. Simplemente no fluye bien con la canción. Aconsejo que trates de seguir a los vocales :x
Umm... supongo que debería de decir lo mismo sobre los acabados.. pero ya este caso es algo diferente...

Además: No me gusta que tus kiai times sean algo inconsistentes:
00:21:545 - Hay un pequeño break de kiai al igual que alrededor de 01:11:501, pero mas o menos en 02:09:936 me esperaba ese pequeño break también

Normal:

01:20:110 (1,2) - Lol, yo que generalmente no modeo spacing, pero, usa distance snap 1.0x aqui.
02:28:718 - Kiai? Además, recomendaría que usaras los mismos kiai times que usaste en las otras dificultades para que sean consistentes.

Umm supongo que eso es todo.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
I've modded it already,my star is under DC's one.

Good luck again.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah

Krisom wrote:

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Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

AHHAHAHAHA XD DIOS MIO MUERO DE RISA DISCULPEN
FAIIIL
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

IceBeam wrote:

I've modded it already,my star is under DC's one.

Good luck again.
e.e
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Krisom wrote:

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Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

soyah wrote:

Krisom wrote:

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Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

AHHAHAHAHA XD DIOS MIO MUERO DE RISA DISCULPEN
FAIIIL
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena

Krisom wrote:

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Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Best post 2010
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Hey (:

Bueno iba a revisar el mapa , pero creo que ya tuvo suficiente modding. Lo único que no se ve muy bien es el wallpaper, porque las letras que agregaste no combinan bien con el fondo original, intenté mejorar eso.

Úsalo si te gusta:



Por cierto, volvi a descargar el mapa y el archivo "approachcircle.png" no se encuentra ahí, debes hacer un full submission.
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