-General
Estoy seguro que el artísta debiera ser "supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus", en vista de que niconico usualmente va todo junto

-Keneazzy!
00:12:565 (4) - New combo, además agregale un Finish al inicio
01:07:837 (3,4,1) - Haz que (3) sea al new combo, y remueve el new combo de (1) (Dale enfasis al inicio del kiai time)
03:02:746 (1) - Esta forma es bastante extraña. Buscaban hacer simetría? debiera verse algo así entonces....
03:18:746 (1) - Me preocupa que en la dificultad más fácil haya una nota tan cerca del final de un spinner, pero bueh, va a approved, así que solo tnganlo en mente para futuros mapas.

-Kotomin-sane
00:16:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Que es este spacing y estos new combo?! El spacing entre (1)/(2) y (2)/(3) es distinto, aaaargH! Trata de hacerlo algo así porfavor x: (notese que todas las notas son un flip horizontal + vertical, y que las notas anteriores a este combo quedarían más arriba)
00:26:019 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:41:201 - Mueve esta timing section 1/4 mas adelante porfavor ~
01:12:565 (4) - New combo (terminan los saltos)
ARGHHHHH!!!! 03:30:746 - !!!!! HAY HITSOUNDS EN EL SB!!!! REMUEVELOS AHORAAAAAA!!!!!

Hmmm, Kotomin-sane y Keneazzy son de Kotomin y KenezzEdward, verdad? Por que está el SB con los nombres de los del collab en sus dificultades? Arregla eso.

EDIT:

Ok, voy a terminar el modpost, (pssst,me saltaré "Collab")

Normal-
00:21:292 (1,2,3,4) - Este patrón no calza con la música. Hazlo verse así
01:47:656 (1,2) - Por que el combo tan corto? remueve el new combo de (1) porfavor
Muy bien hecho, sin embargo tendremos que hablar respecto a los hitsounds tarde o temprano :/

Mion-
00:35:837 (1,1,1,1) - El spam de New Combos es innesecario, no hay spacing acelerado, cambios en el spacing ni saltos :v
00:47:474 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:24:383 (3,4,5,6,7) - Saltos inesteprados, agrega un new combo en (3), aunque en lo personal quitaría esos saltos totalmente fuera de lugar en relación a la música. Ah si, remueve el finish de 01:24:746 (5) - por favor.
01:26:746 (1,2,3) - Ojo con este stack, jugándolo se vé [urlhttp://i52.tinypic.com/30cyjk4.jpg]así[/url], por favor arreglalo haciendo un stack manual.
01:30:746 (3,4) - Acá cambia la velocidad, porfavor agrega un new combo.
01:54:019 - Rarísimo el lugar que escojiste para un Break :v
02:00:201 (1,1,1,1) - El spam de New Combos es innesecario, no hay spacing acelerado, cambios en el spacing ni saltos :v
02:17:837 (1) - remueve el new combo
02:25:837 (3) - remueve ambos finish porfavor
02:28:565 (1,1,1) - El spam de new combos es innecesario. Este es el lugar perfecto para un salto, así que si quieres mantenerlo, te recomiendo agregar un salto en estas tres notas.
03:02:746 (1,2) - Borra (2) y extiende el slider hasta la linea roja donde estaba (2)
03:07:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - Por favor no abuses del hitsound de finish, suena muy fuerte, en especial en una sección tán suave como esta en la música.
03:12:928 (4,1) - Cambia el new combo de (1) a (4) porfavor, de esta manera marcas el inicio del patrón de EtnaSliders.
04:23:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Que pasó con el spacing en estos patrones?
04:58:383 - El kiai time debiera empezar acá, no en 04:56:928 -
05:04:383 - Blegh un break en medio de un kiai time remuevelo aaaaaaargh (soy alergico a esos :<)


Aún te queda mucho por mejorar en el mapset en general, pero por favor pídele a quien haya hecho el SB que remueva los hitsounds del SB!!!

04:23:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) <-fue agregado aproposito de esta manera

resubida la diff

yo ya quite el sonido del SB y lo arregle, ahora solo falta uqe alguien lo saque del osb

yo dejare como :X

antes que nada ay que tener mi diff actualisada ya que si es mi diff que tiene los sonidos cuando la vuelvan a editar los sonidos quedaran pegados a el osb y no a mi diff ._. (problema del demonio -.-)

abrir supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

en donde dice

//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,17694,0,"normal-hitnormal.wav",70 <--contenido

quitar el contenido X:

y tada, asunto arreglado :V

Download: supercell feat. Nico Nico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Mion Night].osu

nice map

PD: cuando tenga tiempito le hago mod besos <3

vivere wrote:

:D nice map

PD: cuando tenga tiempito le hago mod besos <3

Okeey, Besos para ti tambien <3

Back~

Overall:
00:16:201 - something's wrong with SB lol

[Keneazzy!]
(yawn)

[Normal]
Looks okay.
Not too normal for people first hearing this song though lol.

[Mion Night]
Overall: Change combo colors please... It's almost invisible against the background. For example, 02:44:565 (4) and onward.

03:18:746 (1) - start new stack on white ticks if you can

[Collab]
04:00:565 - Speed up should appear earlier. (Though I'd still say such slider speed feels kinda out of place...)

[Kotomin-sane]
Plenty jumps and anti-jumps, but have some interesting patterns.


Significant improvement!

I wish you good luck on getting this approved.

Here's a star~

Nice ヾ(*´Q｀*)ﾉ

MMmmm...
bg-effect2.png, bg-effect3.png, bg-effect6.png y bg-effect.png deberian ser .jpg y ademas estar en 800x600, pero viendo que el SB casi no se mueve mmmm.... en realidad como que no importa mucho, solo haria que pierdan calidad aunque obviamente reducirian el peso total de la cancion. Supongo que habra que dejarlo a la decision de los MAT o BAT que moderen.

Y eso... quedo bastante bien el sb, algo de codigo extra en el .osb pero mejor no moverlo mucho para que no se dañe nada.

All Fixed @_@

mod because requested...... and im bored...

Normal
00:30:019 (1) - is this note supposed to be normal or soft? if normal, move timing section up. if soft, move timing section back
00:38:746 (1) - make slider more symmetrical
00:46:201 (5,6) - one grid to the left
00:50:383 (1,2,3,4) - make more symmetrical and the same
01:00:201 (5) - ^
02:16:201 (1,1) - did they really allow these sliders?
02:31:474 (5) - make symmetrical

also, add more hitsounds but not too much....

Collab
personally, the only problem i see so far is the double speed part with animask........ eh, your call

Kotomin-sane
heh, i dont like this diff at all........ your call again..... i wont mod it though



star.....

[Kotomiu]
0:11:474 (3,6,9) suggestion: (3,9) left 2 grids, (6) right 2 grids?
0:17:656 (5,1,1) uneven spacing, no need to use 2 new combo?
0:21:292 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
0:30:383 (3,4) (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 2+up 3 grids?
0:32:201 (4,5) down 1 grid
0:47:474 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
-break- SB: A bit strage for that XD either "Beatmap by Kotomi-chan" or "Kotomi-chan's beatmap", anyway it's only the suggestion XDDD
1:14:565 (2) left 1 +up 2 grids?
1:29:292 (10) left 1 grid
1:39:292 (4,5) place them in the reflection of (2,3)
1:42:565 (1,2) up+left 1 grid?
2:24:565 (1,2,1,2,3) strange.
2:38:019 (1) left 1 grid
2:47:656 (3) right 1 grid
3:01:292 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
3:11:110 (3,4,5) ^
3:33:110 (3) delete
5:00:928 (4) up 1 grid

[Collab]
0:45:837 (7) right 1 grid
0:52:565 (4) left 1 grid
1:59:656 (3) left 1 grid
3:30:383 (1,2,3) not so appropiate? white tick beat only lol
3:47:837 (5,6,1) uneven spacing, (1) remove finish

SB add thanks for playing? lol

star for nice song and map

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Same Background as this, did you know?
  The BGs you used for the SB are 1024*768 but you shouldn't go over 800*600 ç_ç (also, use jpgs if possible)
  Also, you should edit the scale value manually: 0.625 (for 1024*768 Backgrounds) or 0.8 (for 800*600 backgrounds). Open the .osb file and search for lines like " S,0,35837,,0.6211199" for the BG sprites and fix the last value like i said before.

- Normal:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:47:110 (4,5,6) - really hard to read, because of the approach circles getting crowded.
  02:22:928 (6,7) - move both a bit to the right.
  03:12:383 - add a beat here?
  03:15:110 (1) - move to the centre of the playfield?

- Collab:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  05:28:207 (1) - inb4 someone says to remake the whole timing to inherit this. I'd just use a 0.25 section manually (tuning down the volume a lot because of slideticks), but i dunno how will people react to this:
  

  328207,-400,4,1,1,40,0,0

  instead of
  

  328207,1454.54545454545,4,1,1,40,1,0

  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:42:746 (2,3) - easily mistaken for a 1/2 spacing.

- Kotomin-sane:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:17:655 (5,1,1) - make these 1,2,3 instead; 00:18:383 (2) - new combo.
  01:29:292 (10) - move one square to the left
  04:05:837 (4) - ^

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16).osb

Super change ftw

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (FPRC16) [Kotomin-sane].osu

Nyan

All Fixed ~(=w=~)

Kotomin-sane
02:43:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are you want to make the volume of these timing section increase gradually? looks like you miss one timing section and make the volume increased better.
04:54:928 (4,5) - hmm...

collab:
00:42:565 (1,2) - should it placed horizontally?
00:43:474 (4,5) - Spacing?
00:53:292 (1) - silence the spinner end sounds better.
01:34:565 (1) - add a note?
05:28:207 (1) - I guess APP maps should follow the ranking criteria too.

abalee wrote:

collab:
00:42:565 (1,2) - should it placed horizontally? Fixed
00:43:474 (4,5) - Spacing? Fixed
00:53:292 (1) - silence the spinner end sounds better. Fixed
01:34:565 (1) - add a note? Fixed
05:28:207 (1) - I guess APP maps should follow the ranking criteria too. Fixed @_@

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Sorry more.

Collab:
03:31:110 (4) - (yes it is just me think)decrease the volume or use increasing volume sounds better.

feel free not to give KD to this post BTW.

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can't pick up all the problems at one time!!!!

00:45:837 (7,8) - Spacing?
05:28:201 (1) - silence the end?
05:32:660 (1) - isn't snapped.

abalee wrote:

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can't pick up all the problems at one time!!!! <--- Sorry D:!

00:45:837 (7,8) - Spacing?
05:28:201 (1) - silence the end?
05:32:660 (1) - isn't snapped.

Fixed (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Hahaha, I'm back..... With some kudosu stars and a free mod!!

Fun fact: I finished watching the anime just now.....

[Collab]

1. I was disappointed at the of hitsound action.... Try adding some.
2. 00:46:201 (You) (8,9) - place the (9) farther away
3. 03:01:837 (Vicho-kun) (4,5) - father away from the end of the other slider
4. 04:00:565 (animask)- hahaha, i still hate the double time, just a comment, doesn't matter
5. 05:11:656 (H-boy) - I don't favor the clutter of notes here

Haha, great job collecting all of the mappers!! Good luck with getting this ranked errr, approved!

Two kd stars!!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

[Collab]

1. I was disappointed at the of hitsound action.... Try adding some.
2. 00:46:201 (You) (8,9) - place the (9) farther away Fixed
3. 03:01:837 (Vicho-kun) (4,5) - father away from the end of the other slider Eh...The minute 03:01:837 beuchi-chan that this mapping ... But, it is understood
4. 04:00:565 (animask)- hahaha, i still hate the double time, just a comment, doesn't matter :/
5. 05:11:656 (H-boy) - I don't favor the clutter of notes here

Thanks (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

El taiko.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Trying to make a good taiko diff].osu

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Collab].osu

cambios cambios algunos cambios

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Alguien elimine este post...

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [KuriWPFAVIEOJGASOF].osu

The taikoh
btw yo te dije al lado de verdi y como que me dijiste que si, lo hice pero me di cuenta que touche esta en ese lugar, no hay problema cierto?

Dios, Rankeen esto.

iMercurial wrote:

Dios, Rankeen esto.

Esto va para Approved, es imposible que lo rankeen.
Aun esta WIP por que el Taiko collab aun no esta terminado.

This is all of my stuff.
Add the timing points and hit objects, blah blah.
I hope I didnt fuck something up.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Sorry for double posting. -_-
Here's the .osu or whatever.
Just plug this one in.

Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

Aqui ta! :3
Download: supercell ft. NicoNico Chorus - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (Fenya) [Taiko Collab].osu

PD: Creo que tienes 2 .osb.. Em.. No se si es porque el Taiko tendra su SB o algo por el estilo pero de todas formas te aviso xD

Hola hice un taiko BG DFHGJSDFHGSDFJKGS



Espero que le guste a la señorita Fen :3 Dame pancito por 2 semanas <3 45j432j52

pick up from #modreqs

[Collab]

• 
  So many notes that isn't snap o.o resnap all notes please
  APP rate +1
  00:47:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do something else? I'm so boring
  03:08:746 (x) - add note here?
  03:21:474 (1,2,3,4) - 2 grid up & let it symmetric
  03:51:474 (7) - new combo
  03:57:292 (7) - ^
  05:28:201 (5) - ^

hi~ Banana here, from my queue

collab

00:18:383 - try half beat?
00:30:746 (5) - use half beat slider, there are too much small breaks
00:32:746 (1) - emm, confusing spacing
01:10:565 - add note
01:14:565 - add note?
02:00:201 (1) - repeat too much, seems not very good
02:41:110 - add note
02:54:565 - add note?
02:58:201 - add a half beat slider
03:59:292 - i didn't see the "speed up" waring at the frist time, make it just above the notes?
05:28:201 - i just wonder why not use a spin

Fen, cambie la fuente del BG y hice unos detallitos con la posición, espero que este te guste más :3

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

pick up from #modreqs

[Collab]

• 
  So many notes that isn't snap o.o resnap all notes please
  APP rate +1
  00:47:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do something else? I'm so boring ~
  03:08:746 (x) - add note here? Nou :T
  03:21:474 (1,2,3,4) - 2 grid up & let it symmetric Nop
  03:51:474 (7) - new combo Fixed
  03:57:292 (7) - ^ Fixed
  05:28:201 (5) - ^ Fixed

Banana wrote:

hi~ Banana here, from my queue

collab

00:18:383 - try half beat?
00:30:746 (5) - use half beat slider, there are too much small breaks Nop
00:32:746 (1) - emm, confusing spacing Fixed
01:10:565 - add note Fixed
01:14:565 - add note? Fixed
02:00:201 (1) - repeat too much, seems not very good T:
02:41:110 - add note
02:54:565 - add note?
02:58:201 - add a half beat slider Nop
03:59:292 - i didn't see the "speed up" waring at the frist time, make it just above the notes? Sorry, but... I see it good. D:
05:28:201 - i just wonder why not use a spin

Fixed, Thanks (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

General:

1. Tienes 2 BPM's en la diff ''Collab''. 1 en 00:09:636 y otro en 00:09:656. Elimina el Primero. El del 00:09:636 xD
2. Tienes 4 BPM's en la diff ''Taiko'' LOLWTF Ademas el offset es 9656 no 9636. Elimina 3 y cambia 1
3. En las 2 Diff tienes ''AudioLeadIn: 1004'' Cambialo a 1000. [En el Notepad de los .osu - Obviously]

Taiko Collab
Hay un Objeto snapped.
Hace falta un SB Para Esta diff. TOUCHE! solo cambia eso de Various Mappers a los Nombres de los Mappers. SOLO ESE ESPACIO. y hazlo SB. Asi te evitaras crear 4 BG's.

Collab

Astom:
00:11:474 (x) - Add a Note.
00:12:201 (x) - ^ Tip
00:29:531 (TP) - No se si sera de tu parte del collab o el De Fenya. Pero 0% Es unRankeable.

Fenya:
00:30:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - Asimetrico. Mueve el (3) un grid hacia la Izquierda. [x:216|y:56 Grid lvl: 3] El (4) un grid hacia la Izquierda. [x:264|y:120 Grid lvl: 3] El (5) un grid hacia la Izquierda. [x:312|y:56 Grid lvl: 3]. O si quieres cambiale la forma.
00:33:656 (5,6) - Muevelos 1 Grid a la Izquierda.
00:34:565 (9,10) - ^
00:43:656 - Mueve el Segundo Slider Point 1 grid hacia abajo.
00:46:928 - Puedes moverlo 1 Grid arriba o Moverlo a [x:376|y:328 Grid lvl: 3] Para que no sea ''Tan recto''
00:49:656 (1,2,3) - Muevelos 1 Grid a La Izquieda.

Nerv_Mario:
01:29:292 (7,8) - Muevelos 1 Grid a la Derecha.
01:30:746 - Este slider se veria mejor Aqui.

Ignacio:
01:45:474 (1,2,3,4,1) - Ugly. Intenta Esto . Si te afecta el Orden de Tu Distance Snap mueve el Circle del 01:46:928 hacia [x:448|y:288 Grid lvl: 3]

Myon-Nya:
02:08:928 - Ugly Slider. Fix this
02:10:019 - Lo mismo.
02:12:928 - ^ ... Argh Olvidalo. Todos los slider Tienen Sliders points Innecesarios. Unmodeable For me.
Srry About that :/

Vicho-Kun:
02:54:746 . Mueve este Slider a [x:128|y:328 Grid lvl: 3]

Beuchi-chan: Yay BAT
03:02:746 (x) - Oh Dear... No se si no esta completado o simplemente quisiste ponerle un Break. De todas formas deberias Mapear esa parte.
03:10:019 - Pon esta nota En el mismo lugar de 03:08:383 (4)
03:10:383 - Puedes hacer este Slider mas Lindo c:
03:11:110 (2,3,4,5) - Para que siga El Pattern Subelo 2 Grids.
03:12:383 (6,7) - Si cambiaste el slider del 03:10:383 Ya sabes que hacer.
03:20:019 (x) Add a Note. En el centro Obviously.

Kotomi-chan:
03:49:837 - Mueve el 2do Slider Point a [x:112|y:120 Grid lvl: 3]
03:50:746 - Mueve esta nota a [x:200|y:64 Grid lvl: 3]
03:51:110 - ^ a [x:288|y:72 Grid lvl: 3]
03:51:474 - Mueve este Slider a [x:376|y:80 Grid lvl: 3]

Animask:
... Solo le pusiste 2,00 De SV Para que tu parte sea la mas Dificil. Unmodeable For me.
TIP: Remap.

Lissette: Yay MAT
04:31:474 - Fix This Slider. TIP = [Slider Points = 1)x:192|y:72 / 2)x:256|y:16 / 3)x:320|y:72 Grid lvl: 3]
04:32:201 - If you Fix the Slider of ''04:31:474'' You know you do.
04:32:928 - ^

TTTTTTTTTTTT: sadsafw XD
05:18:746 / 05:19:474 / 05:20:201 / 05:21:292 / 05:22:383 / 05:23:110 / 05:24:201 - I hate this Type of Sliders.. ._.
05:25:292 - Move this note to [x:160|y:160 Grid lvl: 3]
05:27:292 - Move 1 Grid to the left
05:28:201 - Erase THis Slider and put a Spinner. & Erase the spinner of ''05:32:565''. The spiner has to last until to 05:35:837.

Opinion:

1. Not a ''Wonderful'' , ''Awesome'' , ''Marvelous'' Collab. Many Different Types of mapping. In the general are Great.