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Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori

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Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
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Umi

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Good evening, Sir or Miss
Your mod as you requested.

Legends

| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Give me a strong reason to refuse this
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments or Attention. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy.

[Hanabi]
  1. 00:28:542 (3) - Move it to x:392 y:120 (The sharp point of 00:27:633 (1)) So you can make a shape there. fixed
  2. 00:33:770 (2) - A slider should overlap a circle because sometimes it'll be invisible on a normal type skin. I recommend you to move it x:284 y:240 i like the pattern
  3. 01:48:315 (3) - Try to make this blaketed by 01:48:542 (4) nop prefer the current way
  4. 02:13:997 (3) - (Nazi) Move it to x:320 y:216, it'll make a triangle at 02:13:088 (1,2) since 02:13:997 (3,4,5) looks like a triangle did something else
  5. 03:50:360 (1,3) - Try to make this one not overlapped by 03:50:360 (1). It's pretty hard to be read for some new AR9 Readers i don't think so
  6. 04:15:815 (1,2) - (Nazi) Oh, what the bloody hell is this?! You better make it like this, my friend! It's seriuosly annoying for any who tried this for the first time. You want to see more players raging? it's not that hard to read imo, but i'll kee this in my mind

Nice maps :D
ty for mod~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
xChippy
  1. 01:09:451 (1,2) - i feel this jump is a little hard because sandwitched by the circles of 1/4 rhythm fixed
  2. 01:32:179 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+G ( or 01:32:633 (4) - ) only right to left pattern is a little boring nah prefer it this way
  3. 02:49:451 (1,2,3) - why not make symmetric pattern about vertical line? Prefer to keep it like this so there is a jump to 3 which fit the music
  4. 03:10:361 (3,4,5) - hard to see. increase spacing seems fine tho
  5. 04:44:906 (1,2) - this overlapping is not good looking ^
  6. 04:50:360 (1,4) - stack correctly done
  7. 05:04:906 (1) - I prefer to keep 1/2 rhythm at this part Consistency reasons
  8. 05:27:633 (3,4,5,6,1) - I prefer to decrease spacing a little. around 1.5x~1.6x is better for this part, imo decreased a bit
really good song and cute skin~
and, nice mapping Umi, xChippy! xChumi <3
double star ~☆☆
~Good Luck~

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Good evening, Sir or Miss
Your mod as you requested.

Legends

| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Give me a strong reason to refuse this
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments or Attention. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy.

[Hanabi]

  • . I recommend you to move it x:284 y:240
  1. 00:57:861 (5,6,7,1) - Nice overlap :D
  2. 01:06:270 (3,6) - Try to use the same slider for these two. I can see these two sliders are diffrent intentionally different yeah
  3. 01:02:633 (2) - (Nazi) Move it to x:336 y:72, so the hea of it could be like in the middle of 01:03:088 (3,4) and the head of 01:03:542 (5) eeh moved it a bit away, wouldnt go for that small spacing
  4. 01:04:451 (2) - Why the DS is diffrent than 00:52:633 (4). Fix this! done
  5. 01:18:088 (3) - Move the 2nd achor point to x:300 y:136. It'll be more fit with the 01:16:724 (1) fixed my own way
  6. 01:44:679 (6) - Move it to x:136 y:196 so it'll blanketed by 01:43:997 (5) and it can be in the middle of 01:43:542 (4) and the head of 01:44:906 (1) doesnt fit musically referring to the emphasize
  7. 02:51:270 (1) - Spooning isn't prefect, move the 3rd anchor point to x:256 y:8 and the last anchor point to x:360 y:44 seems fine to me tho
  8. 05:09:451 (4) - Tweak this a bit little to the left (Precisely x:96 y:64) Since that isn't really placed well in the middle of 05:08:542 (1) aight

Nice maps :D
Thanks for modding~!
My part
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Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-

XCHUMI <3

[Skin]
It might be me, but the numbers are really hard to read on the lightblue, yellow and orange color

[General]
Add a Storyboard for the names for the collab, it's a nice extra touch
Why is kiai on at 03:46:724 (1,2,3) - these notes? The music is nearly silent, aren't you better of removing kiai here (for a new start after this)?

[Umi]
  1. 00:13:088 (1,2) - This doesn't play that nice, Ctrl G (2) and it'll play better
  2. 00:18:997 (2,3) - The stack feels a little weird, because in the previous parts, you Always use "jumps" and no stacks, Space them for consistency with the rest of this part
  3. 01:59:224 (2) - This slider feels weird, as it ends on a fairly strong sound. Please remove 1 reverse of it, and then add a circle at 01:59:679
  4. 02:15:588 (3) - Please make this either 2 sliders or 4 circles. Kicksliders like these is quite hard to notice, as the second reverse comes in pretty late
  5. 02:17:406 (3) - ^^
  6. 04:21:269 (1,4,5,6) - This overlap, compared to the others, is one of the only overlaps which is actually a little awkward to play. I think it's better when you stack these 3 circles under the end of (1)
[xChippy]
  1. 00:54:906 (1,2) - Please space them a little less, it totally doesn't look like it's 3/4, and this way it'll also look a little better, something like 232:240 or 200:200 feel good for (2)
  2. 00:55:815 (3,4) - ^^
  3. 01:28:088 (3,4,5,1) - I don't feel the flow here, I'd say you should ctrl G (3,5) so it'll feel better
  4. 03:10:361 (3,4,5) - The music doesn't imply any usgae of 1/4 here, it feels overdone. The music is really calm here, no drums or other sounds
  5. 03:31:156 (7,8) - Why is the distance on these 2 notes much lower compared to the previous notes?
  6. 05:16:497 (3) - This note feels really out of place, as there is no sound supporting it
  7. 05:20:133 (3) - ^^
Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
Sorry for the late reply, i was on holidays ^^

baraatje123 wrote:


XCHUMI <3

[Skin]
It might be me, but the numbers are really hard to read on the lightblue, yellow and orange color it's fine to me

[General]
Add a Storyboard for the names for the collab, it's a nice extra touch looking for a storyboarder atm~
Why is kiai on at 03:46:724 (1,2,3) - these notes? The music is nearly silent, aren't you better of removing kiai here (for a new start after this)? yup fixed

[Umi]
  1. 00:13:088 (1,2) - This doesn't play that nice, Ctrl G (2) and it'll play better it plays good imo
  2. 00:18:997 (2,3) - The stack feels a little weird, because in the previous parts, you Always use "jumps" and no stacks, Space them for consistency with the rest of this part fixed
  3. 01:59:224 (2) - This slider feels weird, as it ends on a fairly strong sound. Please remove 1 reverse of it, and then add a circle at 01:59:679 it doesn't feel weird to me
  4. 02:15:588 (3) - Please make this either 2 sliders or 4 circles. Kicksliders like these is quite hard to notice, as the second reverse comes in pretty late easy to read imo
  5. 02:17:406 (3) - ^ ^
  6. 04:21:269 (1,4,5,6) - This overlap, compared to the others, is one of the only overlaps which is actually a little awkward to play. I think it's better when you stack these 3 circles under the end of (1) i don't think so

Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!
thx for star and mod barraatje !
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy

baraatje123 wrote:


XCHUMI <3

[xChippy]
  1. 00:54:906 (1,2) - Please space them a little less, it totally doesn't look like it's 3/4, and this way it'll also look a little better, something like 232:240 or 200:200 feel good for (2) Reduced a bit tho tbh this wouldnt cause any reading difficulties
  2. 00:55:815 (3,4) - ^^ ^
  3. 01:28:088 (3,4,5,1) - I don't feel the flow here, I'd say you should ctrl G (3,5) so it'll feel better nah current is fine. Not aiming for a circular flow
  4. 03:10:361 (3,4,5) - The music doesn't imply any usgae of 1/4 here, it feels overdone. The music is really calm here, no drums or other sounds There is a small vocal tho, but oh well seems like it's not that major, removed it
  5. 03:31:156 (7,8) - Why is the distance on these 2 notes much lower compared to the previous notes? First one is to introduce the deacceleration last one is for the soft finish.
  6. 05:16:497 (3) - This note feels really out of place, as there is no sound supporting it I get where you're coming from but the pitch changes on those notes. Besides because of the similarity to the intro and more places people might think it would be out of place leaving it blank. As most of the players would have likely memorized the original melody which emphasized that beat more clearly.
  7. 05:20:133 (3) - ^^ ^
Great map!
Have a star, and the best of luck!
Thanks for modding!

Update pls *^*
My parts
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Kami Kun
Kami Kun
*Shoots more Stars*

Edit : I hope this will make me join in Senpai profile ;-;
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
Senpai noticed u =w=b
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Tu me déçois t'as pas encore réussi à la rank depuis tout ce temps.
Ah mais oui, c'est pas tv size !!!
/me runs far away
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
Tu peux participer au rank si ça te chante ahah :p

#umireconvertion #yeuxdoux #taspaslechoix
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Placeholder, maybe...
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Hello there, sorry for delay.

Hanabi



  • General
    - Unrankable issues :
  1. 01:38:542 - There are 2 green timing point at the same time, please remove one.
  2. 03:32:179 - Those timing points are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, please fix it.

    - Questions, suggestions :
  3. Did you forget to enable these settings, or it is just intentional ? => http://puu.sh/j8WEd/d8a1fd3656.png
  4. I don't really know a lot about storyboarding, but what is Thumbs.db in storyboard file ?

    ____________________________________



    Umi
  5. 00:03:088 (3) - it could be better if you don't overlap this circle here, it will be more fluid to play and it will be easier to read as well.
  6. 00:17:861 (4,5) - There is less distance between both compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . And you did the other way round for previous pattern to emphasize the last downbeat you can hear on this tick for example 00:18:088 -. Is that intentional ? imo, you should keep consistency and use a higer distance between 00:17:861 (4,5) - compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - .
  7. 01:57:398 (2,3,4,5) - This looks a little weird to play because the spacing is different and the motion is circular. It could be difficult to handle if you play it with doubletime. It could be better if you make a perfect diamond with a consistent spacing to make this pattern smoother and more comfortable to play.
  8. 04:29:451 (3,4,5,6) - It looks more logical if you make a perfect square instead, because it looks like the pattern you created and it will be more comfortable to play a perfect "Z" pattern.


    xChippy
  9. 01:02:171 (1,2) - Here you used a 3/4 slider, but i don't really think it is a good idea because you skip the vocal which is more important here 01:02:398 -. And there is no important sound on the blue tick you followed with this 3/4 slider, not like 00:59:443 (3) - which sounds fine, or 01:03:989 (1) - .
  10. 03:35:815 (1,2,4,5) - It could be better for reading if you make them consistent, i mean the circle after the 3/4 slider which is overlapped or completely stacked because it could be trapping for players.

I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~
xChippy
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xChippy

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello there, sorry for delay.

Hanabi



  • xChippy
  1. 01:02:171 (1,2) - Here you used a 3/4 slider, but i don't really think it is a good idea because you skip the vocal which is more important here 01:02:398 -. And there is no important sound on the blue tick you followed with this 3/4 slider, not like 00:59:443 (3) - which sounds fine, or 01:03:989 (1) - . fixed
  2. 03:35:815 (1,2,4,5) - It could be better for reading if you make them consistent, i mean the circle after the 3/4 slider which is overlapped or completely stacked because it could be trapping for players. Not muh part ouo

I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~
Thanks CB~
Only the first part
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Umi
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Umi

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello there, sorry for delay. COUCOU CB

Hanabi



  • General
    - Unrankable issues :
  1. 01:38:542 - There are 2 green timing point at the same time, please remove one. Deleted
  2. 03:32:179 - Those timing points are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, please fix it. fixed

    - Questions, suggestions :
  3. Did you forget to enable these settings, or it is just intentional ? => http://puu.sh/j8WEd/d8a1fd3656.png intentionnal
  4. I don't really know a lot about storyboarding, but what is Thumbs.db in storyboard file ? nope deleted

    ____________________________________



    Umi
  5. 00:03:088 (3) - it could be better if you don't overlap this circle here, it will be more fluid to play and it will be easier to read as well. stacked with previous slider
  6. 00:17:861 (4,5) - There is less distance between both compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . And you did the other way round for previous pattern to emphasize the last downbeat you can hear on this tick for example 00:18:088 -. Is that intentional ? imo, you should keep consistency and use a higer distance between 00:17:861 (4,5) - compared to 00:17:633 (3,4) - . I did something else too
  7. 01:57:398 (2,3,4,5) - This looks a little weird to play because the spacing is different and the motion is circular. It could be difficult to handle if you play it with doubletime. It could be better if you make a perfect diamond with a consistent spacing to make this pattern smoother and more comfortable to play.ok fixed
  8. 04:29:451 (3,4,5,6) - It looks more logical if you make a perfect square instead, because it looks like the pattern you created and it will be more comfortable to play a perfect "Z" pattern. I kinda like the current pattern


I guess it could be ready to be pushed forward after I got all answers.
Call me back ~
Updated, Thx CB! ;)
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Good Luck, Bubbled #1.
Satellite
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Satellite
hi umi chippy chan :3

[General]
  1. Source must be changed "あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。"
[Hanabi]
  1. all suggestion
  2. 00:17:861 (4,5) - Ctrl + G more better flow imo.
  3. 03:31:270 (8) - and 05:22:633 (4) - missing distance snap?
that's all call me back :3
Umi
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Umi

Satellite wrote:

hi umi chippy chan :3 Oh, hi satellite-san! :3

[General]
  1. Source must be changed "あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。" changed
[Hanabi]
  1. all suggestion
  2. 00:17:861 (4,5) - Ctrl + G more better flow imo. fixed
that's all call me back :3
Thx ;) waiting xchippy reply ~
xChippy
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xChippy
First one is intentional, fixed the other one

Thanks Satellite-san :D
Umi
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Umi
updated ;)
Satellite
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Satellite
#2
tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
*★,°*:.☆\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* 。
Luna-
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Luna-
Congrats!! <3
Mint
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Mint
congrats !!
Umi
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Umi
oh, thx Tuha! ☆( ﾟДﾟ)b

and thx guys! ~
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Pour une fois c'est pas du TV size, haha
Gratz Umi
Ipas
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Ipas
Gratz Umi and xChumi >w<
iyasine
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iyasine
Chumi \o/
Wafu
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Joined June 2011
Wafu
Hey, lighting.png is missing, you have to skin all skinnable parts of skin set as long as this rule still applies, I guess.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned
Lanturn
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Lanturn
If this does get DQ'd, then you should definitely turn on widescreen support as the BG is 16:9 anyways.

Otherwise, congrats! awesome map :D
Umi
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Umi
if it does get DQ, i'll for sure. Anyways thx guys =w=b
PatZar
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PatZar
hanabii
XinCrin
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XinCrin
16:9 BG , 4:3 SB . Umi you've forgot to enable the widescreen support /late
Anyways congrats!
Umi
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Umi
Yeah I know... w/e still an awesome song !!
Neil Watts
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holy shit Umi I love you
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