Hi.
First of all, I would like to know the reason making such difficulties as "+" . It doesnt make sense at all well atleast for me. If you would wanted to have many difficulties you could have tried mapping another key mode which is a great thing to do. So back to what was i saying, I can feel that you just added and made the layer heavier to the + diffs. Which would be fine if the mapset was like > Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,Another,Black Another. ( Also note that Another and Insane has the definite almost alike meaning so i suggest to you that you make some crazy thingo diff name for that diff OR you would like to rename that insane diff to Another and make the current Another > Black Another, Which would totally make sense)
- Delete Ryu/with star from the tags as Ryu* would be fine.
[Another]
00:00:429 (429|3,429|2,429|0) - Starting from here and where ever it will end, YOURE DOUBLES IN WHITE LINES are annoying, it doesnt suit the sound well nor it maps the sound well. If youre thinking its for difficulty spikes and it should be allowed since its the hardest diff. You could have mapped that 1/4 vocal/beat that was happening to gain some diff spike rather than placing doubles such out of nowhere, where it doesnt fit very much. A single note would have been fine AT ALL.
00:01:057 (1057|3,1214|2,1371|0) - Oh kami sama, youre ignoring things such as this where this is supposed to be mapped in beatmania songs and such as seiryu itslef? and after ignoring such thing youre gonna map a vocal 00:01:685 (1685|0,1842|1,1999|2,2156|3,2313|0,2470|1) - which is ugh, nonsense.
00:03:570 (3570|3,3570|0,3727|2,3884|0,3884|1) - ugh, ^
00:04:983 (4983|3) - move to 2nd instead to have that hand balance in such unexpected minijack.
00:06:711 (6711|3,6711|0,6868|2,7025|3,7025|1,7182|0,7339|1,7339|3,7497|2,7654|3,7654|0,7811|1) - you could have mapped this section with 1/2 doubles.
00:10:010 (10010|3) - move to 2ns same reason.
00:10:638 (10638|1,10795|2,10952|1) - with youre pattern here you could ctrl h to avoid that minijack youre having there.
00:12:994 (12994|3,12994|2,12994|0,13072|1,13151|2,13151|3,13230|1,13308|2,13308|0,13308|3,13387|1,13465|2,13465|0,13544|3,13622|0,13622|2,13622|1,13701|3,13779|2,13858|1,13936|0,13936|2,13936|3,14015|1,14093|3,14172|2,14250|0,14250|1,14250|3,14329|2,14408|0,14408|3,14486|1,14565|3,14565|2,14565|0,14643|1,14722|3,14722|0,14800|2,14879|3,14879|0,14879|1,14957|2,15036|3,15036|0,15114|1,15193|3,15193|0,15193|2,15271|1,15350|0,15350|3,15428|2,15507|3,15507|0,15507|1,15586|2,15664|0,15664|3,15743|1,15821|3,15821|2,15821|0,15900|1,15978|0,15978|2,16057|3,16135|0,16135|2,16135|1,16214|3,16292|0,16292|1,16371|2,16449|1,16449|3,16449|0) - youre synth sucks in this section. that doubles in red lines is nasty try to avoid such nonsense thing.
00:16:449 (16449|3,16449|1,16449|0,16528|2,16607|1,16685|0,16764|2,16764|3,16842|1,16842|0,16921|2,16921|3,16999|1,17078|0,17078|2,17078|3,17156|1,17235|2,17313|1,17392|3,17392|0,17392|2,17470|1,17549|3,17627|2,17706|1,17706|0,17706|3,17785|2,17863|1,17942|2,18020|3,18020|0,18020|1) - What is happening here? youre 1/2 doubles? SUDDENLY IS GONE? talk about inconsistent between similar sound that has an exact beats and such.
00:25:324 (25324|2,25402|0,25481|1) - delete these and add a double in 00:25:402 (25402|0) - basically what you were doing is starting in here 00:25:559 (25559|2,25559|0,25559|3) - if youre even listening.
00:30:350 (30350|2,30428|0,30507|1) - ugh please ^
00:49:120 (49120|0,49120|2,49120|3,49277|1,49277|0,49434|0,49434|3,49434|2,49591|1,49591|0,49748|3,49748|2,49748|0,49905|1,49905|0) - try to avoid such monotonous pattern that doesnt suit well with the sound itself mapping. inshort be creative in youre pattern.
Try to be consistent on what you were doing, if you map this beat with this notes try to map the same thing with the same sound itself, also try to do something tricky and creative in youre [ 3,2,3,2,4,3,2,3,2,4 ] chords happpening at the middle part, try to do something more creative imo playing it is like playing copy paste from the first section where it is mapped.
second, i havent seen a nice neat burst pattern. would have try to gain some more new pattern as it is like monotonous repeating and repeating.
[Insane]
ugh same thing with that red line doubles. feels like you just dumped bunch of notes in youre another while having insane as a referrence.
00:01:685 (1685|2,1685|3,1842|0,1842|1,1999|3,1999|2,2156|1,2156|0,2313|2,2313|3,2470|1,2470|0,2627|3,2627|2,2785|1,2785|0,2942|2,2942|3) - this pattern cannot be having only TWO changing patterns, the vocal itself youre following has THREE different changes i wouldt perhaps map it as a jack.
00:06:711 (6711|3,6711|2) - ^ ugh same thing.
00:12:994 (12994|3,12994|0,12994|1) - you mapped in here until 00:14:172 (14172|2) - with no red line chord happening and then it will suddenly pop out from nowhere in 00:14:250 (14250|0,14250|3) - as i can see youve done that ( 1/2 chord mapping with stream in another ) so as you were saying in the pool in the thread which is easier and which is harder, you could do a difference by just having a 1/1 chord and then a stream in the INSANE DIFF while only another has that 1/2 chords with 1/4 stream mapping. ( NOTE THAT EVEN IF YOURE FOLLOWING THE VOCAL FOR THE RED TICKS, I STILL WOULDNT SSUGGEST IT )
01:01:999 (61999|2) - if you could listen closely it isnt ending in 01:03:256 (63256|3) - the sound goes on and on and on, and by just stopping it because you have new wowow pattern upcoming is just disgusting.
01:12:994 (72994|0,72994|1) - from here and out of nowhere where it will end, you just did the same thing with your another which is really dissapointing it doesnt have the difference between the another and insane. you could have tried [ 3,1,3,1,3,1,3,1 ] chord pattern instead having that [ 3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2 ] which ANOTHER has.
01:16:921 (76921|3,77078|3,77235|3,77392|3) - might want to avoid this such kind of things in such a nowhere sound which doesnt suit at all.
01:23:360 (83360|0,83360|3,83360|2) - from here and where ever it will end, WOAH THERE MATE STOP WHAT YOU WERE DOING. YOU BARELY OVERRIDED YOURE ANOTHER DIFF BY JUST WHAT YOURE DOING HERE, do some nasty shit but LN + THAT NOTE CHORD it is waaaaaaaay totally harder than that full chord youre having in ANOTHER.
01:24:617 (84617|3,84774|3,84931|3,85088|3,85245|3) - as what i said.
01:32:942 (92942|2) - oh really not mapping that 1/4 sound ok.
Same problem with another
[Hard]
00:01:685 (1685|0,1842|1,1999|2,2156|3,2313|0,2470|1,2627|2,2785|3) - i wouldnt totally prefer that stair ln pattern TRUST ME IT DOESNT REALLY FIT. the vocal itself is changing why bother having repeated thing?
00:06:711 (6711|0) - um ^
00:32:470 (32470|0) - ugh a single note is way too much weak for this kind of beat.
00:37:182 (37182|3,37339|2,37497|1,37654|0,37811|3,37968|2) - for this ln pattern, i would totally do remove 00:37:811 (37811|3,37968|2) - from the pattern itself instead why not continue that stair pattern? there's clearly no such thing in the sound that is changing to suddenly break the stair pattern. as it doesnt show any new sound or something crazy.
would definitely try some new patterns for you 2 noted chords in the abit middle part.
gl for rank. Need more maps from peenoy.