1. 00:06:233 (2,3) - Flows a bit poorly for me... Also why not emphasize 5 instead? Pitch is increasing a smaller jump from 00:07:091 (2,3) - and a larger jump from 00:08:376 (4,5) - would make more sense.
2. 00:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would be nice if you could keep your spacing consistent, because nothing really suggests a reduced spacing from the square into the triangle.
3. 00:25:091 (6) - NC. Start of new measure.
4. 00:26:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, since you used some perfectly constructed polygons earlier, how about making this a perfect star too? Would look a bit cleaner too.
5. 00:30:983 - Since you're following the vocals with that double earlier, shouldn't the circle be here? This is when the vocal stars. This applies to the entire section coming after here. Your notes are 1/4 too late if you're following the vocals for the double right before them its kind of strange to have a 3/4 gap and then switch to following the drum
6. 00:45:448 (5) - How about shortening this slider? Weird to see such a long slider in an Insane when there are other sounds you can map to... maybe map toe "woohoo" in the back? Jump potential there.
7. 00:48:876 (4,5) - ^Yea, make your rhythm choice a bit more consistent. This one is good.
8. 01:05:805 (7,8,9) - Emphasis here could be improved. You should emphasize the drumbeat on 9 since you mapped this jump sequence to the drums. 7>8 should be a smaller jump and 8>9 should be larger.

1. 00:09:019 (4,5) - Err, you sure about this? Doesn't really follow the drums too well. 00:09:233 - Is the strongest beat, but its not mapped to anything. The 2nd repeat slider begins on a blue tick :S.
   
   Why not just something simple like this

   
2. 00:46:305 (1,2) - Make them parallel? Looks nicer lol
3. 01:03:876 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? The triplet makes more sense beginning at 01:03:876 - . Most triplets begin on red-ticks anyways.
4. 01:11:376 (1,3) - Why not make them symmetrical.
5. 01:15:662 (3,4) - How about stacking these two instead, since they map the same note vocally. Pitch goes up on 5, not 4.

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Seems kind of odd to begin your Normal with such note density. How about making two of the circles into a 1/2 slider instead? This is the intro after all.
2. 00:04:947 (1) - Remove NC since you're NC"ing every 2 measures for this intro section.
3. 00:35:162 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row for a Normal imo ;P can you make some of them 1/2 sliders to reduce density?
4. 00:51:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Theyre not jumps, but you're still creating note density here for players .
5. 01:08:590 (3,4,5,6) - This is the largest number of circles you have in a row, In the Kiai section. It would be nice if you could reduce some of your other single-tap patterns that are non-Kiai so there is a bit less density. Right now your Normal is almost all 1/2 rhythm which is a concern.
6. 01:28:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is even denser and more difficult than Knotts' Hard. You really need to simplify your rhythm here.

1. 00:14:601 (1,1) - You can't do this on Easy. You need a full measure of break in between a Spinner and the next object on lower difficulties. That means, if you end your spinner on 00:16:100 - You can't have any objects until 00:17:815 - . In other words, you'll need to remove the spinner and map a slider here instead. Otherwise it violates ranking criteria unfortunately.
2. 00:28:529 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:38:386 (3,2,5) - Might want to use 1/1 sliders instead of 1/2 repeats. I've seen other Easy maps getting dq'ed because 1/2 sliders on Easy are considered questionable. Making these sliders (at least some of them) 1/1 wouldn't hurt anyways.
4. 00:59:386 (1) - Slider too.
5. 01:12:886 (1) - ^
6. 01:19:100 (2,3) - Don't switch to red ticks here ;c.
   
   How about a rhythm like this, so all clickable beats are still on the white tick

   
7. 01:26:600 (1) -
8. 01:28:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is also too dense for an Easy. Make this even simpler please, you're using 1/2 rhythm here with a bpm of 104, vs the 1/1 rhythm on the rest of your map with 140 bpm. In terms of 1/2 rhythm density, thats 104 bpm vs 70 bpm...This section is actually even more difficult than your Kiai section lol.

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:233 (2,3) - Flows a bit poorly for me... Also why not emphasize 5 instead? Pitch is increasing a smaller jump from 00:07:091 (2,3) - and a larger jump from 00:08:376 (4,5) - would make more sense. Increased distance between 4 and 5, left 2 and 3 as it is.
2. 00:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would be nice if you could keep your spacing consistent, because nothing really suggests a reduced spacing from the square into the triangle. Spacing is now consistent
3. 00:25:091 (6) - NC. Start of new measure. Added
4. 00:26:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, since you used some perfectly constructed polygons earlier, how about making this a perfect star too? Would look a bit cleaner too. I tried here >.<
5. 00:30:983 - Since you're following the vocals with that double earlier, shouldn't the circle be here? This is when the vocal stars. This applies to the entire section coming after here. Your notes are 1/4 too late if you're following the vocals for the double right before them its kind of strange to have a 3/4 gap and then switch to following the drum Added, no more 3/4 gaps
6. 00:45:448 (5) - How about shortening this slider? Weird to see such a long slider in an Insane when there are other sounds you can map to... maybe map toe "woohoo" in the back? Jump potential there. Shortened
7. 00:48:876 (4,5) - ^Yea, make your rhythm choice a bit more consistent. This one is good.
8. 01:05:805 (7,8,9) - Emphasis here could be improved. You should emphasize the drumbeat on 9 since you mapped this jump sequence to the drums. 7>8 should be a smaller jump and 8>9 should be larger.I think this is still fine, but I'll reconsider this

[Normal]

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Seems kind of odd to begin your Normal with such note density. How about making two of the circles into a 1/2 slider instead? This is the intro after all. reduced density
2. 00:04:947 (1) - Remove NC since you're NC"ing every 2 measures for this intro section. removed
3. 00:35:162 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row for a Normal imo ;P can you make some of them 1/2 sliders to reduce density? added sliders in place of some notes
4. 00:51:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Theyre not jumps, but you're still creating note density here for players . density reduced
5. 01:08:590 (3,4,5,6) - This is the largest number of circles you have in a row, In the Kiai section. It would be nice if you could reduce some of your other single-tap patterns that are non-Kiai so there is a bit less density. Right now your Normal is almost all 1/2 rhythm which is a concern. reduced
6. 01:28:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is even denser and more difficult than Knotts' Hard. You really need to simplify your rhythm here. simplified

[Easy]
ALL SPINNERS ARE REPLACED WITH SLIDERS

1. 00:14:601 (1,1) - You can't do this on Easy. You need a full measure of break in between a Spinner and the next object on lower difficulties. That means, if you end your spinner on 00:16:100 - You can't have any objects until 00:17:815 - . In other words, you'll need to remove the spinner and map a slider here instead. Otherwise it violates ranking criteria unfortunately.
2. 00:28:529 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:38:386 (3,2,5) - Might want to use 1/1 sliders instead of 1/2 repeats. I've seen other Easy maps getting dq'ed because 1/2 sliders on Easy are considered questionable. Making these sliders (at least some of them) 1/1 wouldn't hurt anyways.
4. 00:59:386 (1) - Slider too.
5. 01:12:886 (1) - ^
6. 01:19:100 (2,3) - Don't switch to red ticks here ;c. removed
   
   How about a rhythm like this, so all clickable beats are still on the white tick

   added
7. 01:26:600 (1) -
8. 01:28:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is also too dense for an Easy. Make this even simpler please, you're using 1/2 rhythm here with a bpm of 104, vs the 1/1 rhythm on the rest of your map with 140 bpm. In terms of 1/2 rhythm density, thats 104 bpm vs 70 bpm...This section is actually even more difficult than your Kiai section lol. adjusted

Main problems i'm seeing is that Normal is almost completely 1/2 rhythm, but Easy is exclusively 1/1 rhythm. You need to bridge this rhythm gap a bit. Easy is good, aside from the Spinners, but you could nerf Normal a bit, introduce more 1/1 rhythm, and simplify single-tapping rhythm like extended circle usage... Anything over 3 circles in a row that are spaced 1/2 apart is too dense on a Normal imo.

Good luck!Thanks!

monstrata wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:09:019 (4,5) - Err, you sure about this? Doesn't really follow the drums too well. 00:09:233 - Is the strongest beat, but its not mapped to anything. The 2nd repeat slider begins on a blue tick :S. true, changed
   
   Why not just something simple like this

   
2. 00:46:305 (1,2) - Make them parallel? Looks nicer lol I sometimes like to make stuff unparallel, its more of a preference thing to me
3. 01:03:876 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? The triplet makes more sense beginning at 01:03:876 - . Most triplets begin on red-ticks anyways. sure
4. 01:11:376 (1,3) - Why not make them symmetrical. fixed
5. 01:15:662 (3,4) - How about stacking these two instead, since they map the same note vocally. Pitch goes up on 5, not 4. done

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Chaoslitz wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I don't suggest you to overlap two slider end together which may affect readability Ehh I'm becoming fond of these sliders in my hards. I've done it before and it didn't seem to cause any problems
2. 00:25:090 (1,2) - Same as above, and some more in this diff ^
3. 01:12:876 (1,2) - Try reverse in timeline, I would recommend you to use a slider head at downbeat 01:13:090 to emphasis more this beat instead of using a slider end imo the red tick is more significant here
4. 01:17:805 (5,6) - Add a note between to have a triplet as you did it in the first kiai tme 01:04:090 (5,6,7) for a consistence in this diff I removed the first triplet to keep it consistent
5. 01:28:529 - [b]Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead I don't think 1/3 fits here unless it's timed wrong
6. Nice diff thanks c:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Knott's Hard

1. 00:45:876 (1) - I am aware that this place has vocals climaxing, but I don't think there should be a new combo... Just my opinion. I did this to emphasize the jump and make it easier to read, i'll change if more people bring it up
2. 00:49:305 (1) - ^^ ^

Misure wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better? I think it's fine how it is
01:12:233 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this Increased by 0.2x DS

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Knotts wrote:

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I don't suggest you to overlap two slider end together which may affect readability Ehh I'm becoming fond of these sliders in my hards. I've done it before and it didn't seem to cause any problems
2. 00:25:090 (1,2) - Same as above, and some more in this diff ^
3. 01:12:876 (1,2) - Try reverse in timeline, I would recommend you to use a slider head at downbeat 01:13:090 to emphasis more this beat instead of using a slider end imo the red tick is more significant here
4. 01:17:805 (5,6) - Add a note between to have a triplet as you did it in the first kiai tme 01:04:090 (5,6,7) for a consistence in this diff I removed the first triplet to keep it consistent
5. 01:28:529 - [b]Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead I don't think 1/3 fits here unless it's timed wrong
6. Nice diff thanks c:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Knott's Hard

1. 00:45:876 (1) - I am aware that this place has vocals climaxing, but I don't think there should be a new combo... Just my opinion. I did this to emphasize the jump and make it easier to read, i'll change if more people bring it up
2. 00:49:305 (1) - ^^ ^

Misure wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better? I think it's fine how it is
01:12:233 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this Increased by 0.2x DS

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Thanks for the mods!

Knotts' Hard

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Chaoslitz wrote:

the second red tick is actually not need but it is using first bpm with 1/3
as i explained in my mod General

Chaoslitz wrote:

Random mod (or I should say M4M?), I am here because of Afilia Saga x)

SPOILER

[General]

1. Combo Colours: Missing combo colours in Normal, Kontts' Hard and Insane Added
2. Diff name: I guess Kontts' Hard should be Kontts's Hard?
3. Tags: Add tags which is related to the music, add "Knotts" also since he is the mapper of the guest diff Added tags
4. AIMOD issues: (Captured from Easy diff)
   
5. Unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide2.wav, please remove it removed
6. Over usage of spinners in Normal diff: Generally 6 spinners in a tv size/short music map is too much, and it came out many unrankable issues about recovery time after spinners, may consider remove some Reduced to only 3 spinners now. Insane has the most with 5.
7. Unused timing points: Most of the green lines in the last part of music is not used, better to remove it Removed
8. Unsnapped object in Easy diff: Now it's snapped
   
9. Unnecessary inherited point: The inherited point is not needed in 01:27:965, the rhythm in the music actualy is 1/3 starting from 01:28:541 till the end, for example you can try to listen the last part of music 01:33:734, the spinner ends with a delay with the current bpm. you can map it using different beat snap rather than adding new points when multi-bpm is not necessary. Move the spinner to the correct timing and don't forget to fix the last timing points as well

Fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:100 - Vocal here is quite strong in my opinion, so I would suggest to place either slider head or note instead of slider end to emphasis this beat
   Slider head added.
   
2. 00:41:386 (5) - A 1/1 slider will be enough in an Easy diff as it requires more simplified rhythm, however in my opinion it is acceptable to use in chorus which is the kiai part, generally kiai parts need a denser rhythm so it is suitable to use a reversed 1/2 slider, so it is fine to keep sliders like 01:01:957 (2) or 01:15:672 (2) and some more Keeping this repeater since follows the vocals very well.
   
   
3. 00:55:957 (5) - Same as above Decided to remove the 1/1 repeater and put in a 1/2 slider instead
   
   
4. 01:04:529 (1,3) - nazi, but they are stacked which looks untidy in the map
   
   
5. 01:19:100 (2) - To have a better consistense in this diff, I suggest you to change 01:19:100 (2) to two 1/1 slider like 01:05:386 (2,3) since they have similar vocal Done.
   
   
6. 01:28:529 - As i mentioned the inherited point is not needed in 01:27:965, this part should be in 1/3 instead, but it is an Easy diff, I would suggest to follow white ticks here to map instead of 1/3 which is difficult for beginners either predict the rhythm or hit correctly, you can try two sliders start at 01:28:529 and 01:30:243 as follow Removed inherit point.
   

[Normal]

1. Due to a slow bpm of the music, I don't suggest you to use 1.4x for distance snap since it is too high, those overlapping is untidy when it comes to a large spacing, 0.8-0.9x will suit Using a 0.8-0.9 DS will make the notes too close together. No change.
   
   
2. 00:12:233 (1,2,3) - Don't map objects in blue tick when this is a easier diff, it makes player difficult to hit it properly, a reverse slider reversed in the blue tick will help which provide same rhythm and it is far more easy to play with Removed, replaced with slider instead
   
   
3. 00:14:590 (1,1) - Recovery time after spinner is not enough, which is unrankable, at least 2 beat of recovery time is required, you can remove 00:16:519 (1) to resolve it Spinner removed, reduced to 3 for entire map.
   
   
4. 00:28:519 (1,1) - Same as above
   
   
5. 01:07:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try a more circular flow rather then a zigzag flow like this, as the current patterns involves many turns which beginners may not react well I made a more simpler flow instead.
   
   
6. 01:12:876 (1,1) - As mentioned about recovery time after spinners
   
   
7. 01:24:233 (1,2) - Same as 00:12:233 (1,2,3), a reverse slider will suit a lot more Added
   
   
8. 01:26:590 (1,1) - Recovery time after spinner as well
   
   
9. 01:28:529 - Follow white ticks here to map instead of 1/3 as well in normal diff, but it is better to map a harder pattern than the one in easy diff

[Insane]

1. 00:07:733 (3) - The distance from 00:07:091 (2) is large compare to others in the inro, the intro of the music is soft, which doesn't need a jump between 00:07:091 (2,3), try to decrease the distance between it Decreased.
   
2. 00:13:090 - A downbeat here which is not suitable to use slider end to represent, I suggest you to shorten 00:12:662 (2) to 00:12:876 and then add a note at 00:13:090 to emphasis the beat more Done.
   
   
3. 00:27:662 (5) - NC here as what you did in 00:13:948 (1) Done.
   
   
4. 00:30:662 (2,3,4,5) - I dont suggest you to make two double patterns here since it is the only place you did, try to follow other parts like 00:31:948 (1,2,3) or 00:37:091 (1,2,3,4) or else in order to keep a constant pattern in this diff Fixed.
   
   
5. 00:32:162 (2) - Try a curve slider instead, it looks weird to have red anchor when the slider is short Slider now curved
   
   
6. 00:40:519 (1,2) - 00:41:269 (4,5) - It is not good to have a sharp turn of jump which point in the opposite direction when the music isn't that strong, the spacing here is quite large when it compared to other patterns, try to decrease it a bit Decreased.
   
   
7. 00:50:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Flow in this jump not really works well, especially in 00:51:233 (3,4,5), here is the only place you used a curved flow in this jump, while others are having zigzag movement, may consider to edit to build up a more constant flow instead so that it can be more playable Changed to a more consistent pattern
   
   
8. 01:01:733 (2,6) - nazi, but this two is overlapping which lack aesthetics Decided to change 1, stacked 2 and 6 together.
   
   
9. 01:25:091 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Flow can be improved as well, objects are moving right in 01:25:091 (4,5), so it is better to keep this flow in the next object with a right placement also, I would suggest you to place 01:25:947 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) on the right hand side curved on right side too to provide a smoother flow The flow here was intended to be like that, no change.
   
   
10. 01:28:529 - Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead Removed inherited point, keeping this as 1/4
    
    
11. Generally this diff is fine, but it needs more attention to aesthetics in my opinion

Good luck!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~

General

1. Uncheck widescreen support for Easy and Normal. Done
2. Uncheck letterbox during breaks in Easy, Normal and Insane. Done
3. Look at the AIMod in Easy:
   
   
4. Uninherited timing points (BPM changing lines;red lines) are in conflict with other difficulties for easy. Set the second red line/uninherited timing point's offset to 87963.
5. I cannot really help you with snapping 01:27:672 (7)... Managed to snap this
6. Add in tags for the difficulties you haven't, they must be constant on all difficulties.
7. Set the audio preview time the same like Normal, Hard and Insane. This MUST be the same throughout all difficulties. To solve this, go to File>Open .osu in Notepad>find for PreviewTime>Change the value to 61090.
   
8. There is colours ONLY FOR EASY. Colours should be constant throughout, so add in the same colours like Easy.

Easy

1. 00:32:386 (1) - Remove NC Done
2. 00:34:100 (3) - Then add NC. These are for consistency ^
3. 00:39:243 (1) - Remove NC, ^
4. 00:40:529 (6) - Add NC, ^
5. 00:42:243 (1) - Remove NC, ^
6. 00:43:957 (6) - Then add NC. These makes the combos arranged more nicer. Done
7. 00:47:386 (1) - Rotate this by 28 degrees using selection centre Rotated
8. 00:48:672 (2) - Then move this to x=208 y=232. These will make the flow look nicer. done.
9. 00:54:243 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend you to put bunch of circles in succession. Try to use at least one 1/1 slider. Removed 2 and , replaced with slider.
10. 01:07:100 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - These are moving in a circle, and going in circle is very boring. Try to use other various patterns. No longer a circular flow.
11. 01:21:243 (1) - Remove NC then, Done
12. 01:21:672 (2) - Add a NC here. Likewise, this is also for consistency. Done
13. 01:26:815 (5) - Add a NC here. Combo should not be this long in Easy. Done
14. 01:27:672 (3) - This note is not snapped... Although I rly don't know how to snap this note... Sorry. Already snapped!
15. 01:28:541 (1,2,3) - These notes are off-beat. You can try this : I'm gonna have to leave this as it is. Other modders requested to avoid red ticks on easy.

Added one more 1/1 slider to match the instrument in the background.

Normal

1. Try to improve flow by adding in various shapes of sliders.
2. Distance spacing of 1.5x is Really big. Tone it down to 1.1x. Done
3. Doing this will make your pattern distorted, but instead try to use much more blankets. It's not that easy to create blankets with a 1.1x DS
4. 00:12:233 (1,2,3) - The beats are in the perfect spot, but why not use a slider instead? Slider is much more appropriate to express this beat.
5. 00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - About flow, I was meaning something like this. It is bad to place 4 circles in a row, and in circle especially. Use two 1/2 sliders.
6. 00:28:090 (5) - This should be rotated -28 degrees clockwise, using selection centre. This will match the previous notes' flow. Done.
7. To generalize normal, you are using too much of 1/2 sliders. Consider using at least a few more 1/1 sliders, like what you did in easy.
8. 00:46:090 (6) - Add NC for consistency. Done.
9. 00:49:519 (6) - ^^ Done.
10. In the kiai time, since you are using lots of circles and 1/2 sliders, combos naturally become longer. Add some more 1/1 sliders here, if I would give an example : Added more 1/1 sliders within kiai
11. 01:01:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I made into something like this (was following the vocals here)
    
    
12. 01:07:733 (1) - Unnecessary note. Removed.
13. Try to change the patterns in the kiai time to something similar like above. It can greatly reduce combos.
14. 01:35:425 - Why is there a green line/inherited timing point here?

Insane

1. I see distance spacing is .5x... Maybe change it to 1.4x or 1.5x? It doesn't really go overboard in parts where the slider velocity is increased anyway. For the insane I just ignored using any DS. But, I'll set it to 1.5x anyways.
2. Pattern wise and playing wise, this diff is relatively good for me Thanks, although I have some room for improvement as always!
3. 00:26:805 (1) - Remove NC,
4. 00:27:662 (5) - Then add NC. Players can be alerted there is a stream incoming.
5. 00:36:876 (7) - I don't think overlapping this on the slider before this is a good choice to do... No longer overlapped.
6. 00:53:376 (5,6,7,8) - Jump is overdone here, make the spacing same like (1,2,3,4) Decreased from 2.00x to 1.69x
7. 01:04:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Combo is getting too long. Either add NC at (8) or (9). Done.
8. 01:19:733 (8) - Add NC here, as the combo is getting long again. Done.
9. 01:23:162 (8) - Add NC, yet again the combo is getting long. Done.
10. 01:25:947 (6) - NC to alert players that a stream is coming. Done.
11. 01:28:511 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between (2) and (3) is not same like others. You should ctrl+g 01:29:089 (3,4). And also, after that you should make the spacing between (2) and (3) equal again. Fixed
12. 01:35:425 - Same case like Normal, why is there a inherited timing point/green line here?

That will be all for me. You will need to work hard GL!

trammiexo wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.

Easy

00:05:386 (5) - Maybe bend it to give more variety.
Added http://i.imgur.com/yafEg9S.png
00:22:529 (7) - ^ Same as above, you also have it bend at 00:21:243 (5). It would make the flow more clean instead of choppy in my thought Made it symmetrical
00:28:529 (1) - The flow is good but I would probably make this slide bend the in the opposite direction. Combo 6 and 1 looks as if they were parallel to each other or close to parallel. It doesn't seem fitting with this type of shaping. Flipped
01:25:100 (3,4) - These are definitely almost touching each other. The distance snapping is fine but I'd make it a bit spaced from each other. made these seperated by a little bit.
01:27:672 (7,1) - ^ same as above but in this case, I suggest to remove the timing point as well. The ending BPM does not match the main song's. No change for now.
01:28:541 (1,2,3) - for these last sliders, I would make a long hybrid or a fun shape. It is easy after all ^^ Sliders are curved now

Another thing I saw in this difficulty were NC problems, but I'm pretty sure that the modder above me has already got to it so I don't want to be repetitive.

Normal

The notes are quite close to each other. If possible, I would change the distance snap to 1.0 or 1.10, or something that allows decent spacing for the notes
00:12:233 (1,2,3) - At first glance, this would seem like whole notes or at least notes that are in equal beats, but since there's a whole, half, and another different beat, I wouldn't use just circles to map this part of the song Added a slider here
01:01:733 - Something could work nicely here Another modder mentioned this, already changed!
01:09:447 (7,8) - it's very tricky to stack a circle right under a slider. I actually missed seeing this until I realized something was there xD. It's more acceptable if you stacked it on top of a slider, but move the circle somewhere else that is not on the slider, or change up the pattern. and this type of placement would be appropriate for later difficulties Note moved out
01:11:376 (4,5) - ^Same as above ^
01:15:447 - same as 01:01:733 (but it's your choice) Done!
01:20:590 (7,8) - same as 01:09:447 Fixed
01:27:936 - timing point isn't necessarily needed, so please adjust the objects that follow after if you remove it.

Insane

00:04:090 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
00:04:947 (5) - Stack this on top of 00:03:876 (2) Makes it look clean and it's only the beginning of insane, so it should be fine
And like all the other diffs, remove the timing point(red) and adjust the rest of the objects following after Fixed

If you do plan to change the distance snapping for your Normal, you can call me back to check it again , other than that, this mapset was nice but needs some working. best of luck to you!

Misure wrote:

hihi~
M4M from your queue >.<
[General]

First,try to make:
Easy:below 1.5 1.46
Normal:1.5~2.25 2.15
Hard:2.25~3.75 2.93
Insane:above 3.75 3.66
That will be better than now.

Besides,you'd better keep a fixed distance snap in E/N diff,seems like a rule
[Easy]

First,I think lower the sound volume in Easy diff is unnecessary,or at least make volume after lowered 50%
00:19:529 (2,3,4,5) - I think this is better Another modder has already mentioned this.

Image

00:34:100 - better like this Fixed

00:37:100 - ^ fixed

01:21:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - better Another modder has mentioned this.

Image

01:24:672 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^

Image

01:28:541 (1,2,3) - curve them all and consider the right place
btw,this is my 3 pc scores <3 nice!

Image

The first two pc I missed at the last two sliders,and I think it's not my fault
there must be something wrong,maybe the diatance,just fix that~
And you need some blanket I think when playing

[Normal]

Increase the distance,it's a little hard now,a 140BPM songs shouldn't be so difficult like this
And don't put objects in such crowded time interval,because it's a NORMAL diff.
Because the points above,I can't understand you Normal any longer,sorry ;_;
[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better?
01:12:233 (3) - ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this

Image

[Insane]

00:03:876 (2,5) - not stack? stacked
00:07:733 (3) - move to (296,160) to avoid crowded It was supposed to be like this
00:08:376 (4) - this stack is unnecessary,maybe (248,336)or around is OK Did something different
00:08:591 (5) - ends at 00:09:019 - and add a note after that Fixed
00:09:662 (1) - move to here is better surely,in my opinion(considering about flow) I think this is already fine

Image

and have to move other objects after that
00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - awkward position really...before that you'd better change 00:24:662 (5) - to two notes
and then consider position changing The flow here was intended to be like this
00:27:662 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rotate appropriately,flow to bottom more Done.
00:46:733 (9) - to (240,336) 00:46:948 (10) - to (288,168) 00:47:162 (11) - (400,280) I think this is fine
00:52:519 (1,2,3,4) - change to two sliders I don't think this matters
01:14:376 - kiai ends here? I ended it here so the particles of the KIAI activate again for the 2nd part.
01:21:019 (12,2) - not stack? I think this is fine
01:28:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think terrible here...I prefer: another modder has mentioned this.
01:28:511 (1) - (48,96) 01:28:800 (2) - (152,224) 01:29:089 (3) - (376,144)
01:29:378 (4) - (264,264) 01:29:666 (1) - (64,304) 01:29:954 (2) - (168,104)
01:30:243 (3) - (152,224) 01:30:820 (4) - (240,168) 01:31:397 (5) - (264,264)
The last green line is useless,delete it.

Above,I think the mainlly problem in your Insane is dull flow and abuse of stack
(My map also has the two problem so I can feel that in your map,though I can deal with that well for now )
But try to overcome~ For example,add some jumps


Although I'm new in mapping now,I do hope my mod help ~
Good luck to you

1. do the following. official site http://www.compileheart.com/neptune/pp/sound.html
   

   Title:NEXT STAGE! 
   TitleUnicode:NEXT STAGE! 
   Artist:アフィリア・サーガ
   ArtistUnicode:Afilia Saga
   Source:神次元アイドル ネプテューヌPP

2. tags suggetion:
   kamijigen idol neptune
   opening
   compile heart

1. recheck AI-mod. many, many, errors!
2. remove "afilia saga" from tags
3. why is combocolor inconsistent among diffs? not good ,imo
4. add finish at several big white line. It sound good~ . at least, I recommend to add finish at the following
   00:16:529
   00:30:243
   01:01:100
   01:14:815

1. almost 1/1 rhythm. that's boring, imo. I suggest to add several long slider patterns or short break for example
2. 00:35:386 (4,1) - avoid overlapping
3. 00:50:815 (1,3) - ^
4. 01:28:529 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest not to use 1/3 rhythm. instead, how about this?
   

1. very close notes... very hard to see...
   I recommend to decrease circles or mapping by use of widely play-field or increase DS
2. for normal diff, you should make consistent spacing. you should fix the spacing in 00:53:376 ~ 01:00:662-
3. 01:28:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - because of 1/3 rhythm, you should consider "3 sequence" for example...
   
   (you may remove NC at 01:29:376- 01:31:090- )

1. 00:08:591 (5,6) - this short spacing is confusing
2. 00:13:090 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer to make consistent DS
3. 00:57:019 (1,2) - swap NC
4. 01:10:519 (1) - whyt not end at 01:10:840- ?
5. 01:28:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same as normal. hmm,,, for example...
   

1. 00:46:090 (2,1) - I prefer not to stack. a little confusing
2. 00:49:519 (2,1) - ^

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Some Ctrl+Shift+A errorsAll fixed

Insane

1. 00:02:805 (1) - Move the 2nd anchor point more to the centre to improve the curve Done.
2. 00:04:305 (4) - Improve blanket I tried here.
3. 00:07:091 (2,3) - Fix this blanket Done.
4. 00:08:591 (5) - I'd position this towards the right side, rather than cramping everything to the left Decided to move 3 and 4 as well with this.
5. 00:09:233 (6) - For a finish, I wouldn't have this so close Did something different here
6. 01:14:376 Shouldn't Kiai end here instead (may apply to more difficulties) Done.
7. 01:28:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - There should be better indication to say these are 1/6 (like NC them all, or change some to sliders to make it easier) added more NCs

Normal

1. Consistent distance spacing problems (eg. 00:02:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) Fixed
2. 00:20:162 (2) - Stacks are generally not a good idea for Normals Replaced with repeater
3. 00:39:662 (4) - ^ No longer stacked
4. 00:43:733 (4) - ^^
5. 00:50:376 (3,4) - ^ (won't mention anymore)
6. While I'm at it, there should also be a lot more 1/1 gaps to help newer players. The majority of this map is 1/2. Consider this.
7. 00:54:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Distance spacing Fixed.

Easy

1. 00:06:243 (1) - Distance spacing issue Fixed
2. 00:12:672 (2) - Improve blanket I tried here >.<
3. 00:37:100 (1) - Maybe move this so it doesn't overlap with 00:35:386 (4) - Done
4. 00:47:386 (1) - Improve blanket I tried here >.<
5. 01:00:243 (3) - ^ Done.

Nice. ^_^ Thanks!

RandomEffect wrote:

M4M, from your queue~

[metadata]

1. do the following. official site http://www.compileheart.com/neptune/pp/sound.html
   

   Title:NEXT STAGE! 
   TitleUnicode:NEXT STAGE! 
   Artist:アフィリア・サーガ
   ArtistUnicode:Afilia Saga
   Source:神次元アイドル ネプテューヌPP

   Thanks alot for this!
2. tags suggetion:
   kamijigen idol neptune
   opening
   compile heart

[General]

1. recheck AI-mod. many, many, errors! All errors gone!
2. remove "afilia saga" from tags Done
3. why is combocolor inconsistent among diffs? not good ,imo Now it's consistent
4. add finish at several big white line. It sound good~ . at least, I recommend to add finish at the following
   00:16:529
   00:30:243
   01:01:100
   01:14:815

[Easy]

1. almost 1/1 rhythm. that's boring, imo. I suggest to add several long slider patterns or short break for example
2. 00:35:386 (4,1) - avoid overlapping Another modder has mentioned this.
3. 00:50:815 (1,3) - ^ Done.
4. 01:28:529 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest not to use 1/3 rhythm. instead, how about this? Good idea, changed.
   

[Normal]

1. very close notes... very hard to see...
   I recommend to decrease circles or mapping by use of widely play-field or increase DS I have received numerous requests to have a DS at 1.1x In return I have increased the amount of 1/1 sliders throughout the map.
2. for normal diff, you should make consistent spacing. you should fix the spacing in 00:53:376 ~ 01:00:662- Fixed
3. 01:28:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - because of 1/3 rhythm, you should consider "3 sequence" for example...
   
   (you may remove NC at 01:29:376- 01:31:090- )

[Insane]

1. 00:08:591 (5,6) - this short spacing is confusing Fixed
2. 00:13:090 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer to make consistent DS I think this is fine since the song is escalating.
3. 00:57:019 (1,2) - swap NC done.
4. 01:10:519 (1) - whyt not end at 01:10:840- ? Fixed.
5. 01:28:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same as normal. hmm,,, for example... Only added a slider for the intro to this part.
   

~Good Luck~ Thanks!

DahplA wrote:

Knotts' Hard

1. OD can go a bit higher Right now the OD lowers by 2 every difficulty. I'll raise it to 6 if more people believe I should.
2. 00:02:805 (1,2) - ...really? What's the reasoning behind this
3. 00:25:090 (1,2) - I don't mind if you keep them, just make sure the spacings are consistent (first one is more stacked than this one) They are different because the SVs are different/*:m:1337]

RandomEffect wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:46:090 (2,1) - I prefer not to stack. a little confusing I did it to make it play easier after the jump
2. 00:49:519 (2,1) - ^ ^

Knotts wrote:

Thanks for the mods, no changes.

[-Deemo-] wrote:

I've already modding before buuuut I'm applying for m4m since you changed the rules lol

[Easy]

00:03:662 (2) - Blanket to the end of 1? (need to move notes a little if you do) Blanketed
00:05:376 (3) - Make it so the end of this blankets the next note ^

[Normal]
Maybe increase the DS for the notes to be 1.2 so the notes look less clumped up, and you'll have more options on where to place the other notes to make blankets and etc. Increased DS to 1.2x. THIS IS FINALIZED.

00:06:233 (1) - Make this a curved slider because of the other sliders in this section (I'm not counting the small sliders because they are small) are all curved but this one, blanket into 2 Done.
00:10:733 (3) - I think it kinda looks weird to go from a curved small slider to just a plain straight one, consider making this curved as well Curved
00:13:947 (4,1,2) - All of these notes clumped up together doesn't look very pleasing to the eye Now it's not
01:00:233 (3) - Kinda looks awkward where it is right now, since it follows the 1,2,3 string. Maybe try to make it so it doesn't like go to 3 as "harshly", make it kinda curved Fixed.

Curved

[Insane]
00:36:233 (5) - Make the end blanket into 6, make 6 slightly curvier Only made 6 more curved

Something like this?

00:45:448 (5) - Just a personal opinion, to me the curve seems to harsh, maybe a different slider shape? (00:55:090 (3) - isn't as harsh of a curve(turn)? whatever it is)
00:54:233 (1,2) - Blanket Rather than blanket I altered the slider shape.
00:55:948 (5,6,7) - Bad flow from 5 to 6 Changed.
01:10:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks awkward The pattern here was intended to be like that
01:21:662 (4,5) - Could be smoother Changed.

[]

So yeah those are just some of my opinions/suggestions .3.

1. 00:05:376 (3) - Slider symmmetry.
2. 00:21:233 (5,7) - Symmetry.
3. 00:45:233 (3) - Would look better with symmetry, same as 00:05:376 (3).
4. 01:27:233 (2,3,1) - Fix spacing.

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing.
2. 00:24:233 (3) - Slider symmetry.
3. 00:26:805 (1,2,3) - Spacing is just off, fix.
4. 00:43:090 (2,3,1) - Fix spacing.
5. 00:44:805 (2,3,4) - Spacing is just off, fix.
6. 00:46:519 (3,4,1) - Fix spacing.
7. 00:48:233 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing.
8. 00:59:376 (1,2,3) - Spacing is just off, fix.
9. 01:07:947 (1) - Slider symmetry, this is slightly off.
10. 01:24:233 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing.

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very visually appealing, consider changing it to something more like this
2. 01:12:019 (2) - Why not blanket this?
3. 01:14:805 (1,2) - Overlap agian, very unnatractive. Consider revising similarly to the first suggestion.

1. 00:20:805 (5,1) - This overlap is unnatractive, would look nicer if you stacked the sliderend under 00:20:805 (5) - ?
2. 00:37:841 (4) - This note starts on a blue tick, it flows better, sounds nicer, and looks better in editor if you do this and continue patterns you set before.
3. 00:40:519 (1,4) - Fix this stack
4. 00:50:376 (9,2) - This overlap looks unnatractive, move the pattern slightly to fix.

Kuki wrote:

Easy

1. 00:05:376 (3) - Slider symmmetry. Fixed.
2. 00:21:233 (5,7) - Symmetry. Fixed
3. 00:45:233 (3) - Would look better with symmetry, same as 00:05:376 (3). Fixed.
4. 01:27:233 (2,3,1) - Fix spacing. Fixed.

Normal

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing. Fixed.
2. 00:24:233 (3) - Slider symmetry. Fixed.
3. 00:26:805 (1,2,3) - Spacing is just off, fix. It's consistent here at 1.2x.
4. 00:43:090 (2,3,1) - Fix spacing. Done.
5. 00:44:805 (2,3,4) - Spacing is just off, fix. It's consistent here.
6. 00:46:519 (3,4,1) - Fix spacing. Fixed.
7. 00:48:233 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing. Fixed.
8. 00:59:376 (1,2,3) - Spacing is just off, fix. Fixed.
9. 01:07:947 (1) - Slider symmetry, this is slightly off. Fixed.
10. 01:24:233 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing.Fixed.

Insane

1. 00:20:805 (5,1) - This overlap is unnatractive, would look nicer if you stacked the sliderend under 00:20:805 (5) - ? I've done something different instead.
2. 00:37:841 (4) - This note starts on a blue tick, it flows better, sounds nicer, and looks better in editor if you do this and continue patterns you set before. Done!
3. 00:40:519 (1,4) - Fix this stack This is actually already stacked.
4. 00:50:376 (9,2) - This overlap looks unnatractive, move the pattern slightly to fix. Fixed!

Mapset looks good, good luck with rank!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

[Knott's Hard]
00:19:519 (6) - ctrl + h then put it back in it's place, it doesn't really flow well the way it is I think it flows great imo
01:08:590 (2) - Blanket on 1 Not necessary
01:11:376 (1,3) - Aesthetically, it looks pretty sharp, might want to smooth it a little It's how I intended it to look

Kuki wrote:

Knott's Hard

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very visually appealing, consider changing it to something more like this It's fine in my eyes
2. 01:12:019 (2) - Why not blanket this? For symmetry and better flow
3. 01:14:805 (1,2) - Overlap agian, very unnatractive. Consider revising similarly to the first suggestion. ^

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LixRei wrote:

Hey there. Modding as requested.

Normal font - Regular suggestion
Italic - Recommendation
Black - Unrankeable

[Overview]

1. No apparent issue overall. Still... if this is the opening of a game, there should be some video somewhere, or not? If there's some video, I'd suggest adding it merely because it would be cool (it's okay if you don't want to, though).

Adding this soon, I want to deal with all the notes and stuff first!

[Easy]

1. Well, this diff should be acceptable, but it's a bit monotonous. I'll try to make a mod to help you in giving the diff a bit more of variation, since it's quite boring as it is (considering almost everything is 1/1 rhythm). You don't have to change things if you don't agree.
2. 00:07:090 (2,3) - This rhythm is okay, but it's pretty hard to tell what you're mapping (vocal or beats), making it sightly difficult for beginners. I think a rhythm like this is more attached to the beats and it's a bit easier to play and understand.
3. 00:12:233 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure this'll work, considering the strong, loud beat is on 00:12:555 - and you're actually making players click on 00:12:662 (2) - which is not as loud. Players might get confused and click that (2) earlier than what they should. Consider turning 00:12:233 (1) - into a 1/1 slider, delete 00:12:662 (2) - and add a 2/1 slider on 00:13:090 - to avoid confusion and to follow vocals. Also, consider marking whatever you put on 00:13:090 - with a New Combo (NC) to keep the consistency on NC markers. Your timeline should look like this if you apply what I've said (I added 00:10:948 (3) - on the screenshot for reference!).
4. 00:14:590 - Raise the volume of the green timing section here. I feel like I'm hitting ghost notes since 30% volume is too low for this song... .-.
5. 00:18:233 (1) - Remove the NC here. Y'know, for consistency.
6. 00:19:519 (2) - or, if you applied what I said above, 00:19:519 (5) - I suggest you to turn this into two circles, or a circle and a slider (or whatever you want) to make the strong downbeat 00:19:947 - clickeable (I recommend some 2/1 slider for a variation in rhythm, though), since strong beats shouldn't be ignored. If you apply this suggestion, make sure to mark whatever you put on 00:19:947 - with a NC (yeah, consistency...). If you decide to not apply, add a NC on 00:20:376 (3) - for some consistency, at the very least.
7. 00:26:805 (5,1) - You should swap the NCs here (in other words, mark 5 with NC, remove NC on 00:28:519 (1) - ). Why? 'Cause consistency. You apply the NC mark every two downbeats (big white ticks), so it's recommended you keep that pattern to balance the HP drain (applies into every NC suggestion until/from now).
8. 00:28:305 - Raise volume please. ;w; I feel like I'm hitting ghost notes again...
9. 00:32:805 (5) - Uh... Consider removing a reverse from this slider and place something on 00:33:662 - to make the strong note clickeable. Stronger notes should always be clickeable, since that makes the game interesting (I'd say it's actually the key for a rhythm game!). You can then arrange the notes as you wish. Remember to add a NC on whatever you add, if you do! (and remove the one on 00:34:090 (1) - )
10. 00:55:947 (4) - You can make this a 3/2 slider to create a small variation in the rhythm and make beatmap a bit more interesting (since adding variations on the rhythm is quite difficult .-.).
11. 00:59:376 (1) - Remove NC here, y'know why.
12. 01:05:376 (2) - You can make this a 3/2 slider to follow vocals, if you want to. It adds variation, as well as making the map more fun.
13. 01:10:519 (6,1) - Swap NCs.
14. 01:12:876 - I feel like I'm hitting ghost notes again...
15. 01:14:162 - I'm pretty sure you don't need this green timing section here. I mean, you only use it to manipulate volume, just like 01:14:376 - does. So, there's not meaning to it. Green sections that aren't needed should be erased.
16. 01:24:233 (1,3) - Swap NCs please. For every misplaced NC, a sweet grill cries. ;w; LOL
17. 01:25:947 (4) - (or 01:25:947 (2) - if you changed NC above) - I actually suggest you extend this until 01:26:590 - to follow vocals and to make some rhythm variety. Erasing 01:26:805 (1) - is necessary if you do, but since it isn't some loud circle, there shouldn't be much issue (except for polarity, but that shouldn't be that much of an issue).
18. 01:26:376 - Uh... raise section volume please? c:
19. Okay, that should be it. It's a plain monotonous diff, but well, it's hard to give it some variety for an Easy. It's quite good rhythmically, in fact. I just feel like your patterns are actually random sometimes, but I don't think that's a great issue on easier diffs...

Followed all suggestions here.

[Normal]

1. Okay, first thing of all: You have both a red timing section and a green timing section at the very start (00:02:805 - ). While this isn't really bad if you change the Slider Velocity, it's quite wrong right now, considering you don't use that green line for anything. You need to remove that green line.
   
2. I tried to mod this to the best of my skill, but while doing so I found myself thinking how to deal with lots and lots of 1/2 beats. Certainly, a Normal can be used to teach players how to play notes 1/2 a beat apart, but when that turns to simple 1/2 spamming starting from 00:30:233 - it becomes so bothersome to deal with it. You might think: Yeah, there are some pauses, like the one between 00:37:090 (5,1) - , but a pause like that isn't really enough imo, especially after such a long pattern like 00:32:805 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - .
   
   What I try to say is: You need to reduce the note density of this diff (in other words, make less 1/2 note patterns). You can use some, but you can't abuse of it, since that creates a big difficulty gap between your Easy (that barely has any 1/2 usage at all) and this diff, making it unrankeable. Patterns are too hard to read for an average Normal-diff player atm since the note density is really big. Since reducing note density is quite hard as your diff is right now, I suggest you to remap and think again how to map the song without abusing of the 1/2 patterns.
   
   I also mention it because, as you most likely noticed already, most of your map is practically put "crumpled together", with lots of overlapping patterns; heavely restricting the freedom of you as mapper to create sweet patterns, and the freedom of players to move around and enjoy the map. So, I don't mention this merely because of the heavy note density, but also due to the lack of aesthetics that attract players and helps them to enjoy the map. So, I ask of you to deeply consider this, please.

Significantly reduced the density throughout the map. 172 notes -> 149 notes

[Insane]

1. Well... this one is quite different. In here, I've actually noticed the note density is relatively low if you compare it to Hard, making it actually a bit easier. In here, you actually need to make diff a bit harder. It's technically alright if you leave it as it is, but players will really complain if they face an easier Insane than what the Hard is (no, Star Rating doesn't really count here, but actual difficulty while playing does). You might try and use some of the same rhythms Knotts uses on his diff as well to increase the density a bit. An example: 00:05:376 (7) - instead of adding a reverse to this slider, you can actually create a double, since there's a note on 00:05:697 - . You could do something like this, but you can arrange notes in whatever way you want.
2. Another little example: 00:11:162 (5) - You could make this a 1/1 beat slider and move it to 00:11:376 - . After that, you can place circles on 00:11:162 - and 00:11:269 - to make a triple. Here's how it'd look like in the timeline.
3. 00:14:591 (7) - I actually wonder why this doesn't has a hitsound, it it's a strong beat. You might wanna add a whistle or a finish.
4. 00:28:412 - Add a circle here. There's a clearly audiable beat.
5. 00:30:876 - If you want to, you could actually add a circle here to make a stream. For this one I wanted to emphasize vocals more, no change.
6. 01:12:876 (1) - Hey, hey. Are you sure you need a spinner here? You're missing your chance to make a stream starting on 01:13:947 - . I suggest you to remove the spinner and actually map the beats on that part.
7. 01:30:233 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this part to make it a bit easier to predict and to play. As it is right now, it's a bit too confusing, even for an Insane. Just remove a reverse from every slider, move 'em 1/3 beat back and add another 1/3 slider with two reverses on 01:31:519 - . In the end, your timeline should look like this.
8. Yeah, I actually liked the diff. It could be a bit more challenging, though. It felt too easy to play for an Insane.

Overall, all of your diffs are rhythmically good. They just have some little issue, that variates from diff to diff.
If anything, I'm only concerned about the high note density on Normal, and I really hope you consider what I've said.
I hope I wasn't too rough on you... ;w; And if you have any doubt from my mod, you can PM me. :3

Good luck.

LucaSA4 wrote:

Hello , you are the next from my modding queue!

Easy

00:14:590 - The melody is stronger here, shouldn't the slider start here? This slider was supposed to cover part of the vocals. Also, I want to avoid putting notes on red ticks for this difficulty.
00:32:805 (5) - Make this slider look like 00:31:519 (3) - ? Done...I think
00:16:519 (1) - Make it look like 00:05:376 (3) - ? I think there is no need for change here.
00:36:233 (4) - Make it look like 00:35:376 (3) - ? Done.
01:08:376 (2) - Make it look like 01:07:090 (3) - ? Done.
01:30:233 (2) - Make it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260746 ? Done.

I couldn't find any fault in your beatmap, but some points I would change to make it more astherical

Normal

00:06:233 (1) - Make it like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260767 Done.
00:08:590 (4) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260770 I think the current placements are fine.
00:10:733 (3) - Add whistle at the end of the slider? Done.
00:13:947 (3) - What do you think of making a spinner like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260774 ? I decided to not include a spinner here because I want to minimize the amount for the beginner players. Also I dont want to overuse them either.
00:29:805 - Don't you need more recovery time? Decided to remove the spinner and put in notes.
00:37:519 (1) - Curve this slider a bit more? Done.
01:15:662 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't feel good, try to perfect it, I know it's hard because you have to follow the DS. A suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260784 Did something a little different here
01:19:733 (4) - Make it look like 01:20:590 (6) - Done.
01:23:162 (4) - Curve this properly please D:Done.

Insane

00:13:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What if you do like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260794 I think this is fine for now, no change.
00:27:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What if you do like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3260795 I think the current pattern is better since it resembles a shooting star.
00:46:305 (7) - NC? I don't think I need a NC here, there is no major change in vocals.
01:00:233 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stack it? Stacked.

1. Try to make sliders a bit better, some are really odd , like: 01:25:091 (4) Altered this one - 00:55:090 (3) -

That's it Thanks for the mod!

LucaSA4 wrote:

Knotts' Hard

1. Isn't it Knott's Hard? ^^ It works either way and I've been using "Knotts' Hard" for all of my GDs

Can't really find any problem

Knotts wrote:

LucaSA4 wrote:

Knotts' Hard

1. Isn't it Knott's Hard? ^^ It works either way and I've been using "Knotts' Hard" for all of my GDs

Can't really find any problem

ReeChelly wrote:

from queue~
[Insane]
00:20:805 (5) - move up and right 2px to make straight line with 00:20:376 (3,4) ? Moved and aligned

00:54:233 (1) - You should increase the distance here, I find it quite awkward to play. The song only starts to slow down at 00:54:448 (2)(Maybe try stacking it with 2?). Also you should move the NC here to 2, that's where the new verse starts. Stacked 1 onto 2, adjusted some placements.

00:55:947 (5) - blanket around 4?? Done.

good luck! Thanks!

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I personally thinks that end-to-end overlap seems like crashing-together sliders. imo Separating them improves the note placement design more + a great way to practice small jumps for intermediate ones. Same goes to 00:08:590 (3,6) - , 00:25:090 (1,2) - , 00:33:876 (2,5) - , 00:37:947 (4,5) - and 01:14:805 (1,2)
2. 00:18:983 (3,4) - 00:18:983 (3) should be removed as there is no rhythm in music for double finger tapping, causing it not natural to do so + music part is similar to 00:25:090 (1,2,3,4) + it is the only dft for no-vocal part so ya. If applied, stack 00:19:090 (4) with 00:19:305 (5)
3. 01:23:483 (2) - Should be removed as there is no visible music note for dft
   ya great map tho

1. 00:05:376 (7) - imo making the slider flat is better
2. 00:06:233 (1,2) - Making them as symmetry is neater and helps improving the design of map
3. 00:07:091 (2,3) - Fix imperfect blanket
4. 00:09:447 (1) - No NC
5. 00:09:662 (3) - NC
6. 00:11:376 (9) - ^
7. 00:12:233 (1) - No NC
8. 00:13:090 (3) - NC
9. 00:26:805 (5) - ^
10. 00:20:162 (2,3,4) - Fix into equilateral triangle better tbh
11. 00:20:805 (5,6,7) - ^
12. 00:42:233 (1,2,3) - Fix blankets
13. 01:02:805 (7) - NC
    Might need to tidy your combos more

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi

[Insane]

1. 00:05:376 (7) - imo making the slider flat is better I like a curved one better, no change.
2. 00:06:233 (1,2) - Making them as symmetry is neater and helps improving the design of map Made this slider symmetrical.
3. 00:07:091 (2,3) - Fix imperfect blanket Done.
4. 00:09:447 (1) - No NC Removed.
5. 00:09:662 (3) - NC Added.
6. 00:11:376 (9) - ^
7. 00:12:233 (1) - No NC Vocals start here, no change
8. 00:13:090 (3) - NC No change because of previous
9. 00:26:805 (5) - ^ Done.
10. 00:20:162 (2,3,4) - Fix into equilateral triangle better tbh Did something different
11. 00:20:805 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
12. 00:42:233 (1,2,3) - Fix blankets Done, I think
13. 01:02:805 (7) - NC
    Might need to tidy your combos more

Good luck in ranking

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I personally thinks that end-to-end overlap seems like crashing-together sliders. imo Separating them improves the note placement design more + a great way to practice small jumps for intermediate ones. Same goes to 00:08:590 (3,6) - , 00:25:090 (1,2) - , 00:33:876 (2,5) - , 00:37:947 (4,5) - and 01:14:805 (1,2) I like it this way
2. 00:18:983 (3,4) - 00:18:983 (3) should be removed as there is no rhythm in music for double finger tapping, causing it not natural to do so + music part is similar to 00:25:090 (1,2,3,4) + it is the only dft for no-vocal part so ya. If applied, stack 00:19:090 (4) with 00:19:305 (5) I added 1/4 to the similar part instead
3. 01:23:483 (2) - Should be removed as there is no visible music note for dft I can hear it, listen at 25% if you need to
   ya great map tho

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261,350,90233,6,0,L|178:324,1,60.666664815267,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,306,90805,2,0,L|46:323,1,60.666664815267,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,250,91376,2,0,L|33:173,1,60.666664815267,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,124,91947,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92055,12,2,93662,0:0:0:0:

1. I would suggest making the normal 2.0-2.1 stars for better flow.
2. Folder: Good
3. AiMod: Good
4. Timing: Great

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[ Space ] wrote:

Hey from my queue

[General]

1. I would suggest making the normal 2.0-2.1 stars for better flow. I'm going to keep the current star rating as it is
2. Folder: Good
3. AiMod: Good
4. Timing: Great

[Easy]

00:02:805 (1,2) - The blanket isn't done properly, make it like this instead: Done.

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00:06:233 (1) - Again, this blankets poorly with your previous slider, try this for better effect: Done.

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00:08:162 (3) - ^ Done.

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00:14:376 (4) - I believe this starts prematurely. I would start it on the next red tick, and put a note where this used to be. For example: I did something different here. I want to avoid having to put in 1/2 single taps for easy

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00:47:376 (1) - This slider messed up, and the anchors are different, remake it like this instead: Done.

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00:52:519 (3) - Why not try this arrangement for better flow and a nicer transitional look to the next slider: Good idea, changed.

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00:59:376 (4) - NC because of a change in music? Forgot about this! Changed.

[Normal]

00:07:733 (3,4) - I don't really like the look of this, I think it would look and flow nicer if you were to make slider 4 the same as slider 3 Both are now identical sliders.

00:12:233 (1,2,3) - ^ I just think the flow gets destroyed when you use different sliders all the time, also make sure they blanket eachother nicely I've done something different here

00:17:376 (3,1) - ^ x.x ^

00:29:805 (3,1) - Why not blanket this, it would also improve the flow of this part too. Blanketed

01:03:662 (5) - I would let this blanket the slider before like so Done.

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01:17:376 (5) - ^ Done.

01:21:662 (1,2) - Same reason for slider consistency, it improved flow and looks a lot. Also move it to (X:192 Y:208) for an increased flow Did something different

01:23:162 (4) - (if you agree with above) blanket the slider like so: Did something different

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[Insane]

00:05:376 (7,9) - Same slider = better flow Done.

00:07:733 (3) - I would place the note at (X:168 Y:104) and put the anchors like this: Done.

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00:24:233 (4,5,1) - The flow isn't great and looks to me as if these notes are placed completely randomly, I would change this to flow with eachother more. These were actually supposed to be placed like this. No change.

00:46:090 (6) - NC because it is getting a bit long and the vocals change here Done.

00:49:519 (5) - ^ ^

00:55:090 (3) - This slider anchors are also weird, I would remake it for a consistent curve with the slider. Done,

Cute map. Love to see it ranked Thanks!