1. Maniatic Controller - 5Key (4.07 stars, 2966 notes)
2. Runa's Astral Oni (4.52 stars, 1807 notes)

OzzyOzrock wrote:

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: oh i forgot it, thanks :B
[Taikotaikotaiko]
00:21:764 (75,76,77,78,79) - kdkkd? lot of don
: fixed, good!
00:30:400 - add d
00:30:946 - ^ feels too empty
: fixed two
00:35:309 - add k
: keep, i don't like this beat :d
00:36:218 - add d, also too empty here ;w;
: fixed
00:40:855 (13) - k? to follow song
: nice~
01:27:855 (74) - move back to make kdddd?
: fixed, i like the original but it's clean and better lol
01:32:673 (107,108,109,110) - kkd k? (not doubles)
: fixed
01:39:037 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - d d k k d d k?
: fixed
01:40:127 (153) - k
: fixed
01:45:946 (196,199) - k?
: niceeee
02:14:855 (134,135,136,137) - (k dkd)?
: good beat, i changed as k ddk
02:43:037 (316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - doubles dont fit maybe ddd kdkkd?
: fixed
02:48:946 (358) - here double is fine, but move this one to make a stream
: 2-6 notes -> 9 stream (added one)
03:00:764 (437,438,439,440,441,442) - (kdkddk)? or change doubles ;w;
: fixed
03:01:582 (443) - k?
: fixed
03:12:855 (16) - k, or make this part d k d k d k d k d k d k
: keep, k k -> same sound with before k ds, and d k d k is not good i think :d
03:18:400 - add d
: keep, that's good but it breaks the after part sequence
03:44:855 - remove speed-ups (looks like 1/4)
: fixed

rest is ok! good luck!
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Thank you for your modding so much!
Your suggestions are almost cool~
Update and kudosu : maybe in today

Kaito-kun wrote:

You requested a mod, and since I have priority for 5K, I'll be the one modding it:

1|2|3|4|5

[General]
First of all, you don't need to add your name to the diff, since you are the creator, you can simply leave it as "5K MX", but since it's a marathon map, why don't you change diff names to a more appealing name? You will notice that most marathons have some appealing name, for example TOKIO FUNKA or World's End, Girl's Rondo. So even if you are bad at names, you should try to find a good name for the diff. A suggestion would be "Maniatic Controller" (forgot to say that you don't need to add the number of keys the diff is, if it's only one keymode on the beatmap), but I'm not that good with names, so you are free to decide on one.
Change OD and HP to 8
You need to add the name of the user who did a guest diff on your beatmap to the tags, according to the ranking criteria. So you need to add "Runa" to the tags.
Disable the "Letterbox during breaks" option, the "Enable Countdown" option and Enable the "Widescreen Support" option (CLICK HERE if you don't know what I mean)
Change Kiai Time to THIS


[Nyong's 5K MX]
00:03:582 (3582|3,3582|2) - Why is this a double, when it's the same sound as the ones before it? Delete one note.
00:08:309 (8309|2,8309|1,8309|0,8673|1,8673|0,8673|4,9037|0,9037|3,9037|4,9400|4,9400|3,9400|2) - Why are these chords, when vocal sound is the exact same as the double notes? Make these into double notes.
00:14:127 (14127|3,14127|0,14127|1,14491|4,14491|1,14491|2,14855|1,14855|3,14855|4,15218|3,15218|2,15218|0) - ^^^
00:19:946 (19946|3,19946|1,19946|0,20309|1,20309|4,20309|2,20673|4,20673|3,20673|0,21037|2,21037|1,21037|3) - ^^^
00:21:400 (21400|2,21400|1,21400|0,21764|3,21764|4,21764|2,22127|2,22127|1,22127|0,22491|3,22491|4,22491|2,22855|3,22855|2,22855|1) - ^^^
00:25:764 (25764|3,25764|2,25764|0,26127|0,26127|4,26127|2,26491|4,26491|2,26491|1,26855|4,26855|3,26855|0) - ^^^
00:09:582 (9582|2) - Why is this only one note, while it has the same intensity as the others before it? Make it a double.
00:15:400 (15400|2) - ^^^
00:15:946 (15946|4,15946|2,15946|0) - Why chords in here, when intensity of the vocals doesn't increase? Make them doubles
00:16:673 (16673|4,16673|2,16673|0) - ^^^
00:17:400 (17400|1,17400|3,17400|4) - ^^^
00:18:127 (18127|1,18127|3,18127|0) - ^^^
00:23:582 (23582|2,23582|1,23582|3) - ^^^
From 00:27:218 - onwards, the music intensifies, making chords.......you can say, "valid" (also, you completely mapped with chords after that point). So why is 00:30:491 (30491|1,30491|4) - a double? You are mapping the exact same vocal strength, so make this a chord too
00:31:218 (31218|0,31218|3) - ^^^
00:31:582 (31582|4,31582|2,31582|1,31582|0,31946|2,31946|3,31946|0,31946|4,32309|1,32309|2,32309|3,32309|0,32673|0,32673|3,32673|1,32673|4) - Why are these notes 4-note chords, if intensity doesn't increases at that point. Make them into 3-notes chords
00:32:855 (32855|3,32855|1) - Why is this a double, when vocal strength is same as the chords? Make it into a chord
00:39:582 (39582|0,39582|2,39582|3) - Make this into a double, has the same strength as the ones before it
00:40:309 (40309|1,40309|2,40309|4) - ^^^
00:41:400 (41400|3,41400|0,41400|2) - ^^^
00:47:218 (47218|3,47218|0,47218|2) - ^^^
In here 00:47:582 -, make something like THIS
From 01:02:127 - to 01:13:400 -, I seriously don't understand what you are mapping, because when I relate the notes to the vocals or the background music, none of them fits. Overall, that section feels like it was made randomly. Please consider re-mapping that section.
In here 01:22:491 -, make it like THIS
In here 01:24:127 -, make it like THIS
01:26:491 (86491|1,86491|2,86491|3) - Make it into a double
01:28:855 (88855|2) - Move it to column 2 and add a note here 01:28:855 (88855|3) -
01:32:309 (92309|0,92309|2,92309|4) - Make it a double
01:38:127 (98127|1,98127|3,98127|2) - ^^^
01:40:673 (100673|3,100673|1,100673|2) - ^^^
01:41:400 (101400|1,101400|2,101400|3,101582|0,101582|1,101582|2,101764|3,101764|4,101764|2,101946|0,101946|2,101946|1,102127|3,102127|2,102127|1,102309|4,102309|2,102309|3,102491|2,102491|0,102491|1) - Why are these notes 3-note chords, when you mapped the exact same vocals with 4-note chords before this one? You either go back (to 01:29:764 -) and make those 3-note chords, or you make this into 4-note chords.
01:44:673 (104673|3) - Move to column 3
01:45:037 (105037|1) - Move to column 4
01:45:400 (105400|3,105582|2) - Ctrl+ G (the last 3 suggestion are to avoid unnecessary jacks)
01:49:218 (109218|2) - Delete this note, ghost note
01:49:946 (109946|1) - ^^^
01:57:037 (117037|2,117037|0,117037|4) - Make this into a double
In here 02:17:764 -, change it to THIS
02:19:309 (139309|0) - Add note here
02:19:673 (139673|4) - ^^^
02:20:037 (140037|0) - ^^^
02:20:400 (140400|4) - ^^^
In here 02:20:673 -, change pattern to THIS ONE
02:23:673 (143673|0,143764|1) - Where this this notes came from? Delete them
02:24:400 (144400|4,144491|3) - ^^^

I'll be blunt, I don't really get your mapping style. I see lots of ghost notes, some chords are simply there for the sake of increasing note density, etc. I want you to check my mod (I only modded up until 2:30), and do a check to your map, mainly considering if the pattern fit the song, and to look out for ghost notes and/or overchorded section (I found lots of them, but I went with it). After you check my mod, and do a personal check to the map, PM me, and I'll even re-mod it if you'll like. Be wary that I'm not saying map is shit, just that it needs some refining work to make it good.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Nyong-san
NM as requested from ★☭ Верный osu!mania Queue ★☭

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)
[Maniatic Controller]
00:30:855 (30855|2) move to 4, row balance
: fixed
00:36:673 (36673|4) move to 4, same reason
: fixed
00:38:855 add note, high pitch sound
: fixed
00:39:037 add note for consistency
: fixed
00:44:673 add note
: fixed
00:50:491 add note, check 00:51:946 - 00:53:400
: fixed
00:52:309 add note, snare
: fixed
00:52:673 kick
: fixed
00:55:218 snare
: fixed
00:55:582 kick
: fixed
00:55:946 snare
: fixed
00:56:309 add note, consistency
: fixed
00:58:127 snare
: fixed
00:58:491 kick
: fixed
01:01:037 snare
: fixed
01:06:309 (66309|2,66309|4,66309|3,66673|1,66673|2,66673|0) suggest to remove Normal note, well is okay if LN for following vocal
: fixed cool!
01:07:582 add 3 note consistency
: fixed
01:11:946 same reason & check 01:06:127
: fixed
01:13:218 - 01:13:400 - 01:13:582 - you can add 3 note (jack) for snare sounds
: fixed nice~!
01:13:764 add note, high pitch sounds
: fixed
01:25:400 add note, kiai part must attractive pattern
: fixed
01:40:309 snare
: fixed
02:41:037 add note, kiai
: fixed
03:15:946 cimbal
03:21:764 ^
03:27:582 ^
: i don't know how to fix that part ;w;
04:17:400 snare T_T
: fixed

Mostly your pattern followed vocal than instrument sounds
well.... following vocal is okay, but remember that mania map is prefer for instrument. So i suggest to re-pattern some part
Nice Song
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

newyams99 wrote:

I love this song. Sing it with my friend sometimes xD

Runa's Astral Oni

First of all, where do you get astral from? I'm pretty sure this song has nothing to do about space or anything of that sort. I'm guessing it's like a trademark difficulty name, kind of like how OnosakiHito calls all his taiko difficulties that are above 5.5 stars 'Taikosaki'. If it's just some random word, I think you should remove it. Honestly, it doesn't matter

Warning you, lots of things regarding spinners.

Suggestions:

00:37:946 - Add a k here. It still matches the instrumentals.
: keep, i think original is soft.

00:25:764 (102) - I don't really like these finishers here, since the singing doesn't sound anymore emphasized than before. Remove finisher 102, 104, 106, and 108.
: keep, if remove them, it's something lack

00:37:946 - Add a k here. It still matches the instrumentals. Same thing at 00:43:764.
: same as first one

00:45:582 - You could add a hit here, rather than making it a four hit pattern.
: keep, i think 4 hit is rhythmical and good TT

01:02:127 (7) - Again, I don't think these finishers are necessary anywhere in this section. Especially the K's, they're too loud imo. I also just don't like rhythms where it's alternating finishers and non-finishers when I play. Always messes me up x.x Well, you decide.
: um i think about it.. but if no finishers there, it will be bored. I consider to change as a new beat

01:07:037 - Add a k here. Same thing at 01:12:855.
: ^^^

01:25:764 - I feel like this is an empty space that should be filled with a hit of either colour. Probably a d. Same thing at 01:31:582 and at 01:37:400. You could even put a finisher on it like you did at 01:43:218 (177), but that's where she says WOO!, so maybe not.
: keep, i filled there on next kiais. i think it is not awkward and i want to reduce some beat on first kiai than 2nd,3rd kiai.

01:53:037 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remove all finishers. Removing the finisher on hit 3 is more optional.
: fixed, i chose finishers because d K d K is good although they are not big sound,remove and add 3 beat there is better i see

01:54:309 - Add a d. Adding one at 01:55:400 and 02:01:218 would be good too, but optional.
: i don't like first timing but 2,3 are good~

01:59:400 - Add a k. Same thing at 02:05:218. This second addition could be a d too.
: ^^^

02:21:673 - I think you could make one more ddk triplet here by adding a hit.
: fixed

02:28:491 - Add a k.
: ^^^

02:33:764 - Add a hit, your choice of colour.
: fixed, k

02:58:855 (426) - Add a finisher on this hit, to put emphasis on the WOO! like you did in the last chorus.
: fixed, i forgot it lol

03:18:855 (59) - Remove finisher on this hit. It sounds out of place. Same thing at 03:21:764 (2), and at 03:24:673 (24).
Optional:
: fixed

00:04:309 (2) - It sounds perfectly fine, but you could change every other hit (2,4,6,...) can be change to a k. I think it'll just make a bit more variety at the start. Completely up to you.
: keep, i think these sounds are not really well fit to kat hitsounds

00:56:127 (31) - This finisher is questionable, but if you like it, just keep.
: pretty big local sounds there (?)

01:25:037 (56) - I'm probably just bad, but the first time I played the song, I missed the next hit after this. I found it hard to notice that it's just a 1/2 hit. Maybe reduce the slider velocity, or just make it the same as 01:24:491 (55).
: i think SV is cool, but hard to see next note is not good. but i don't want to remove it.

03:00:491 (437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) - Maybe you're trying to add variety, but I think you're trying to hard to make it different in this section. Change by moving hit 439 to connect with the 1/4 pair to make a triplet and a 5-hit rhythm.
: keep, yes but i don't want go normal rhythm every time, and i think it doesn't have problem..

03:27:582 (46) - I don't think a kiai time is really fitting, but it's your choice.
: it's not really fit i think either but no kiai on there is (..)

03:29:764 (64) - Remove finisher. It's optional. Same thing at hit 66, 68, 86, 88, 90, and so on.
: okay.

The second kiai time was very well made, I have no complaints.

Great song, great map. Good luck on rank!
: thanks~ i'm happy to hear that
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Thanks a lot on your hard mod~
And sorry for many dinies, but i understand your opinion and if other says same thing, i'll re-consider highly.