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Topic Starter
AxelHino

Prophecy wrote:

[★ Introduction]
➞ From Prophecy's Quick Check Modding Queue
➞ Thank you for your request >w< , Hope you have a great day :3

[★ General]
➞ Good!
[Futsuu]
➞ 00:07:771 - too hard at begin. Should be removed fine. removed another one too.

[Muzukashii]
● a little bit overuse 1/4 i'll consider it later. i was pretty lenient with the 1/4s because the oni is already very hard and i want to make a decent spread.

➞ 00:27:459 - add a d here.matching the vocals, so i think it's fine
➞ 00:28:865 - move to 00:28:959 ^
➞ 00:35:334 - add a d here. ^
➞ 00:36:740 - move to 00:36:834 since there's vocals here, i'll move it.
thanks for the mod~

also omg thank you Jerry for the stars! ;w;
[R]
Suggestion

[Oni]
00:22:959 - fill k ?
00:47:500 - k samain 01:53:959 -
00:48:333 (319,320,321) - ddk samain 01:54:792 -
00:49:667 (329,330) - geser 00:49:583 - || samain 01:56:125 -
02:10:292 - delete ?
Amburegul >_< , maaf yang muzu agak susah denger pitchnya
Topic Starter
AxelHino

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

[Oni]
00:22:959 - fill k ? no vocals there, so i'm not putting it
00:47:500 - k samain 01:53:959 - okay
00:48:333 (319,320,321) - ddk samain 01:54:792 - nice
00:49:667 (329,330) - geser 00:49:583 - || samain 01:56:125 - alright~
02:10:292 - delete ? there's a vocal there, and it sounds awkward when i delete it, so no


Amburegul >_< , maaf yang muzu agak susah denger pitchnya
really nice mod~
also made changes to the other diffs to match

thanks!
Alepat
From Mid & Friends Taiko Modding Queue

the beatmap looks very worked, let's see what I can do
[Kantan and Futsuu SV]
The SV is very high for this diffs, low slightly to 1.20

[Futsuu]
02:14:625 (1) - Add finish
02:15:292 (3) - remove finish (?)

[Oni]
00:08:334 (32) - change to don
00:14:334 (68) - ^^
00:42:740 (285) - change to kat
01:38:625 (71) - ^^
01:38:750 (72) - change to don
01:38:875 (73) - ^^
01:39:750 (80) - ^^
01:43:375 (105) - ^^
01:44:250 (110) - ^^

See you soon and good luck for your Beatmap, Alepat.
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Alepat wrote:

From Mid & Friends Taiko Modding Queue

the beatmap looks very worked, let's see what I can do
[Kantan and Futsuu SV]
The SV is very high for this diffs, low slightly to 1.20 ok

[Futsuu]
02:14:625 (1) - Add finish
02:15:292 (3) - remove finish (?) it doesn't really match the other diffs, and i don't see the point of making the first note a finish (no emphasis there)

[Oni]
00:08:334 (32) - change to don changed 00:06:834 (23) - into kat instead
00:14:334 (68) - ^^ same with 00:12:834 (59) -
00:42:740 (285) - change to kat changed 00:42:646 (284) - into d instead
01:38:625 (71) - ^^ ok
01:38:750 (72) - change to don ok
01:38:875 (73) - ^^ ok
01:39:750 (80) - ^^ i don't feel that kat emphasizes the pitch well enough
01:43:375 (105) - ^^ no pitch change there, so no
01:44:250 (110) - ^^ same as above

See you soon and good luck for your Beatmap, Alepat.
thanks for mod :3
newyams99
Kantan

Suggestions:
00:12:459 (21) - Change to d.
00:12:834 (22) - Change to k. I think these two hits sound better with the pitch of the instrumentals.

00:18:459 - Add a hit, doesn't matter what colour (I'd prefer k). It breaks the pattern of the previous few seconds.

00:30:834 (1) - All the spinners in this song seems out of place, and are a bit short. I'd change them to sliders, or put hits at both the end and the beginning of the spinner. If you feel that this slider is better than my options, feel free to ignore.

00:31:959 - Add a d.

00:48:167 (5) - Change to k. If you really want to keep it, ignore all of these.

00:53:500 (17) - Same Thing.

00:56:167 (23) - Change to d.

00:56:833 (24,25,26) - Remove finishers. The vocals are pretty quiet. Again, if you want to keep it, ignore all of these.

01:00:833 (32) - Change to k.

01:06:166 (44) - Change to k.

01:11:500 - In this section, I think you should change hits 53, 58, 62 and 65 to d.

01:17:166 - Put a hit here. It keeps the rhythm consistent in the section.

01:47:750 (6) - Change to d.

01:54:626 (15) - Change to k.

02:03:292 (34,35,36) - Remove finishers.

02:05:292 (38) - Change to k.

02:12:625 (5) - Same Thing.

02:15:958 (9) - Same Thing.

02:23:291 (5) - Same Thing.


Optional:
00:20:334 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - These unicolour patterns are a bit boring and can definitely be changed. For example make hits 33, 36, 43 and 45 into k's and hits 38 and 40 into d's. Might make it have a bit more variety for beginner players.

00:32:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,1,2) - Same thing.

01:01:500 (33,34) - I'd change either one of these two into a k. If you don't like it, don't worry about it.

02:07:959 (43,44) - Same Thing.

02:18:625 (14,15) - Same Thing.

Futsuu

Suggestions:
00:09:459 - Add a k then d after (at 00:09:646).

00:10:771 (24) - Remove. Doesn't fit the instrumentals very much.

00:15:459 - Add a k then d after (at 00:15:646).

00:16:771 (38) - Remove.

00:26:709 (20) - Change to d.

00:30:834 (1) - Again, all the spinners seem oddly placed. Maybe replace with a kdkd alternation every beat.

00:39:084 (18,19) - Change to d.

00:40:959 (23,24) - Change to k.

00:42:459 (28) - Same Thing.

00:48:167 (7) - Same Thing.

00:49:833 (12) - Same Thing.

00:53:500 (20) - Same Thing. It seems like you really like this rhythm in both the Kantan and the Futsuu; if you really want to keep it, ignore all of these (just reminding you).

00:54:500 - This rhythm is easier than the one in the Kantan. Maybe you just forgot to put the hit there?

00:56:833 (26,27,28) - Remove finishers, like in the Kantan. If you really want to keep these finishers, go ahead and ignore.

01:01:500 (39) - Change to k.

01:05:500 (51,52) - Change either one to k.

01:56:292 (30) - Change to k.

01:57:626 (33) - This hit was a k in the Kantan. Change to match it.

01:58:959 (36) - Same Thing.

02:00:625 (39) - Change to k.

02:07:958 (57) - Same Thing.

02:11:958 (69,70) - Change either one to k.

02:18:625 (13,14) - Same Thing.

02:22:625 (27,28) - Same Thing.

Optional:
00:25:584 (18) - Change to k, if you want to.

01:09:167 (63,64) - These pairs of dk's in the kiai times and the section after the first kiai time make the star rating of the map substantially harder so maybe change. It's not very important so do it if you want to. Personally, I wouldn't.

01:43:625 (3) - The placement is correct, but may be hard for a Futsuu. Move to 01:43:750.

I'll finish modding the Muzukashii and Oni by Wednesday (in Canada).
Topic Starter
AxelHino

newyams99 wrote:

Kantan

Suggestions:
00:12:459 (21) - Change to d.
00:12:834 (22) - Change to k. I think these two hits sound better with the pitch of the instrumentals. ok

00:18:459 - Add a hit, doesn't matter what colour (I'd prefer k). It breaks the pattern of the previous few seconds. ok

00:30:834 (1) - All the spinners in this song seems out of place, and are a bit short. I'd change them to sliders, or put hits at both the end and the beginning of the spinner. If you feel that this slider is better than my options, feel free to ignore. changed to slider

00:31:959 - Add a d.i extended the ^slider until this point

00:48:167 (5) - Change to k. If you really want to keep it, ignore all of these. i kinda want to keep it simple at first because there's a bpm change just before this

00:53:500 (17) - Same Thing. although the previous one is because of the bpm change, i just want the consistency

00:56:167 (23) - Change to d. ok

00:56:833 (24,25,26) - Remove finishers. The vocals are pretty quiet. Again, if you want to keep it, ignore all of these. ok

01:00:833 (32) - Change to k. ok

01:06:166 (44) - Change to k. ok

01:11:500 - In this section, I think you should change hits 53, 58, 62 and 65 to d. i want to keep it simple after the chorus, let's just say.... kind of like a break time?

01:17:166 - Put a hit here. It keeps the rhythm consistent in the section. ok

01:47:750 (6) - Change to d. ok

01:54:626 (15) - Change to k.

02:03:292 (34,35,36) - Remove finishers.

02:05:292 (38) - Change to k. consistency with the previous chorus, so no

02:12:625 (5) - Same Thing. ok

02:15:958 (9) - Same Thing. ok since there's a modulation

02:23:291 (5) - Same Thing. okay


Optional:
00:20:334 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - These unicolour patterns are a bit boring and can definitely be changed. For example make hits 33, 36, 43 and 45 into k's and hits 38 and 40 into d's. Might make it have a bit more variety for beginner players.i want to keep it simple around these parts (because the other parts are quite hard)

00:32:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,1,2) - Same thing. ^

01:01:500 (33,34) - I'd change either one of these two into a k. If you don't like it, don't worry about it. changed the first one

02:07:959 (43,44) - Same Thing. ^

02:18:625 (14,15) - Same Thing. ^

Futsuu

Suggestions:
00:09:459 - Add a k then d after (at 00:09:646). trying to give break times from those continuous 1 beat notes, so no

00:10:771 (24) - Remove. Doesn't fit the instrumentals very much. ok

00:15:459 - Add a k then d after (at 00:15:646). same as 00:09:459

00:16:771 (38) - Remove. okay

00:26:709 (20) - Change to d. i don't see the problem with a kat

00:30:834 (1) - Again, all the spinners seem oddly placed. Maybe replace with a kdkd alternation every beat. changed to slider

00:39:084 (18,19) - Change to d. ok

00:40:959 (23,24) - Change to k. ok

00:42:459 (28) - Same Thing. i kinda like the dons here, so no

00:48:167 (7) - Same Thing. ok

00:49:833 (12) - Same Thing. ok

00:53:500 (20) - Same Thing. It seems like you really like this rhythm in both the Kantan and the Futsuu; if you really want to keep it, ignore all of these (just reminding you). ok

00:54:500 - This rhythm is easier than the one in the Kantan. Maybe you just forgot to put the hit there? oh yeah lel

00:56:833 (26,27,28) - Remove finishers, like in the Kantan. If you really want to keep these finishers, go ahead and ignore. ok

01:01:500 (39) - Change to k. don't see the problem with don

01:05:500 (51,52) - Change either one to k. ok

01:56:292 (30) - Change to k. keeping it simple after the kkd

01:57:626 (33) - This hit was a k in the Kantan. Change to match it. ok

01:58:959 (36) - Same Thing. ok

02:00:625 (39) - Change to k. ok

02:07:958 (57) - Same Thing. i think a don fits just fine

02:11:958 (69,70) - Change either one to k. ok

02:18:625 (13,14) - Same Thing. keeping it simple with ddd

02:22:625 (27,28) - Same Thing. ok

Optional:
00:25:584 (18) - Change to k, if you want to. i want it to contrast with the kat after that, so no

01:09:167 (63,64) - These pairs of dk's in the kiai times and the section after the first kiai time make the star rating of the map substantially harder so maybe change. It's not very important so do it if you want to. Personally, I wouldn't. ehhhhhhh taiko's star rating is borked anyway :P

01:43:625 (3) - The placement is correct, but may be hard for a Futsuu. Move to 01:43:750. ok

I'll finish modding the Muzukashii and Oni by Wednesday (in Canada).
whew, that's a long mod~ Thank you :3
newyams99
Muzukashii
This difficulty was well polished, so I don't have too many different suggestions.

Suggestions:
00:49:833 (22) - Change to k.

00:56:833 (57,58,59) - Remove finishers.

00:58:833 (62,63,64) - Remove hit 63. I think there are enough triplets in the chorus without it.

01:00:167 (70,71,72,73) - Remove hit 71 for same reason as above (This one is optional). Change hits 70 to k and 73 to d. I think it sounds better. If you leave 71 it'll become a kdd and might be a bit challenging. This is very ignorable if you don't like it.

01:05:500 (101,102,103,104) - Same thing.

01:56:292 (13) - Change to k.

02:03:292 (48,49,50) - Remove finishers.

02:05:292 (53,54,55) - Same thing about the previous kiai time.

02:06:626 (61,62,63) - Same thing about the previous kiai time. In the second half of the second kiai time I think you can leave all the triplets; it should get harder somewhere.
Optional:
I know the song is like that, but I found the beginning rhythms rather difficult, but I can't think of a better way to fix that :?

00:24:271 (28,29) - I wonder why you didn't make these a pair of 1/4 dd's like you did with hits 20 and 21? There's other spots where this pair pattern rhythm isn't present (like hits 36/37), so it becomes inconsistent. I'm guessing you didn't want to make it too hard.

00:40:771 (43,44,45,46,47) - This contradicts the previous optional suggestion, now it's too hard XD Maybe remove hit 44 unless you think it's fine like that.

01:06:166 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - This rhythm can be made easier by moving hits 110 and 119 between hits 111/112 and 120/121, respectively. Then, delete hits 109 and 118. Either rhythm works though.

02:12:625 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - Same Thing. The next hits 1-7 are fine.

Oni
The streams were very well done.

Suggestions:
00:56:833 (384,385,386) - Remove finishers (again).

01:20:833 (1) - This spinner can be replaced by a stream, like you did with the rest of them. Keeping it like a spinner works too, though.

02:03:292 (262,263,264) - Remove finishers.

Optional:
01:48:250 (139,140,141,142,143) - Change hits 140 and 142 to d. Sounds better imo.

The harder difficulties were very well mapped. The Oni's pretty fun too. Good luck on rank! ;)
Oh and if you want to give me another kudosu you can, but not necessary. :P
Topic Starter
AxelHino

newyams99 wrote:

Muzukashii
This difficulty was well polished, so I don't have too many different suggestions.

Suggestions:
00:49:833 (22) - Change to k. ok

00:56:833 (57,58,59) - Remove finishers. ok

00:58:833 (62,63,64) - Remove hit 63. I think there are enough triplets in the chorus without it. ok

01:00:167 (70,71,72,73) - Remove hit 71 for same reason as above (This one is optional). Change hits 70 to k and 73 to d. I think it sounds better. If you leave 71 it'll become a kdd and might be a bit challenging. This is very ignorable if you don't like it. deleted 70

01:05:500 (101,102,103,104) - Same thing. deleted some

01:56:292 (13) - Change to k. ok

02:03:292 (48,49,50) - Remove finishers. ok

02:05:292 (53,54,55) - Same thing about the previous kiai time. ok

02:06:626 (61,62,63) - Same thing about the previous kiai time. In the second half of the second kiai time I think you can leave all the triplets; it should get harder somewhere. ok
Optional:
I know the song is like that, but I found the beginning rhythms rather difficult, but I can't think of a better way to fix that :? i'll think of it later...www

00:24:271 (28,29) - I wonder why you didn't make these a pair of 1/4 dd's like you did with hits 20 and 21? There's other spots where this pair pattern rhythm isn't present (like hits 36/37), so it becomes inconsistent. I'm guessing you didn't want to make it too hard. ahh right.... changed to 1/4

00:40:771 (43,44,45,46,47) - This contradicts the previous optional suggestion, now it's too hard XD Maybe remove hit 44 unless you think it's fine like that. ok~

01:06:166 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - This rhythm can be made easier by moving hits 110 and 119 between hits 111/112 and 120/121, respectively. Then, delete hits 109 and 118. Either rhythm works though. deleted some notes beforehand so...re-arranged the 1/4 cluster

02:12:625 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104) - Same Thing. The next hits 1-7 are fine. re-arranged too

Oni
The streams were very well done.

Suggestions:
00:56:833 (384,385,386) - Remove finishers (again). ok

01:20:833 (1) - This spinner can be replaced by a stream, like you did with the rest of them. Keeping it like a spinner works too, though. keeping it as a spinner

02:03:292 (262,263,264) - Remove finishers. ok

Optional:
01:48:250 (139,140,141,142,143) - Change hits 140 and 142 to d. Sounds better imo. i don't wanna make people rage too hard lol. keeping it.

The harder difficulties were very well mapped. The Oni's pretty fun too. Good luck on rank! ;)
Oh and if you want to give me another kudosu you can, but not necessary. :P
Thanks very much for the nice mod~
As much as i want to give another kudosu, it's not really that fair to others just because you put it in a seperate post :P Sorry
-FireThunder-
From Queue :3
kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~


[Timing]
Nothing~

[Kantan]
RECOMENDLY 1/1 Beat Snap Divisor
- 00:03:084 - k
- 00:03:834 - ^
* 00:04:584 - ^
- 00:22:584 - ^
- 00:25:584 - d
- 00:27:084 - k
- 00:28:584 - ^
- 00:30:084 - d
- 00:30:834 - Delete and add d.D
- 00:34:959 - k
* 00:36:459 - d
- 00:37:959 - ^
- 00:39:459 - ^
- 00:40:959 - ^
- 00:42:459 - d
- 00:43:209 - Delete and add d.D
- 00:49:500 - k
- 00:54:500 - 19 & 20 Ctrl + G (Swap)
- 00:56:167 - d
- 01:02:167 - Better delete :3
- 01:07:500 - k
- 01:08:833 - Better K for me :3
- 01:10:000 - Delete
- 01:10:333 - ^
- 01:10:667 - ^
- 01:12:337 - d
- 01:13:500 - ^
- 01:14:500 - ^
- 01:18:499 - ^
- 01:20:833 - Delete
* 01:48:250 - d
- 02:24:625 - k
- 02:25:958 - D
- 02:27:125 - Delete
- 02:27:458 - ^
- 02:27:792 - ^
- 02:29:792 - ^
- 02:30:125 - ^
- 02:30:459 - ^
* 02:35:959 - D


[Futsuu]
- 00:08:334 - d
- 00:18:084 - ^
* 00:19:771 - ^
- 00:41:334 - Better delete, no suits with melody
- 01:43:250 - d
* 02:33:292 - k
* 02:35:959 - D

[Muzukashii]
- 00:01:209 - k
- 00:02:896 - ^
- 00:03:271 - ^
- 00:04:209 - ^
- 00:04:584 - k k d
- 00:05:709 - k

00:06:834 - to 00:17:709- its too weird for me, i trying mod there as i can ;w;

- 00:07:021 - add d
- 00:07:865 - add d
- 00:08:146 - Delete
- 00:08:521 - add d
- 00:09:271 - add d
- 00:09:646 - Delete
- 00:10:021 - add d
- 00:10:865 - add d
- 00:11:146 - Delete
- 00:11:802 - add d
- 00:12:271 - add d

and same as that place .___.

* 01:22:750 - add pattern "d.k.d"
* 01:24:833 - add pattern "k.d.d.k.d"
* 02:35:958 - D

[Oni]
- 00:01:209 - k
- 00:02:896 - ^
- 00:03:271 - ^
- 00:04:209 - ^
- 00:04:584 - k.k.d
- 00:05:709 - k
- 00:18:834 - d
- 00:57:833 - add pattern "kkd"
* 01:22:750 - add pattern "d.k.d"
* 01:24:833 - add pattern "k.d.d.k.d"
* 02:35:958 - D

Mungkin banyak yang udah di fix

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :)
Topic Starter
AxelHino

-FireThunder- wrote:

From Queue :3
kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~


[Timing]
Nothing~

[Kantan]
RECOMENDLY 1/1 Beat Snap Divisor
- 00:03:084 - k refused because i'm following the percussions (don fits quite nicely)
- 00:03:834 - ^ same
* 00:04:584 - ^ same
- 00:22:584 - ^ keeping it simple with the pattern. monotonous notes in every 8 beats
- 00:25:584 - d same
- 00:27:084 - k same
- 00:28:584 - ^ same
- 00:30:084 - d same
- 00:30:834 - Delete and add d.D i think a slider fits quite nicely
- 00:34:959 - k
* 00:36:459 - d
- 00:37:959 - ^
- 00:39:459 - ^
- 00:40:959 - ^
- 00:42:459 - d
- 00:43:209 - Delete and add d.D all refused until this mod (for same reason as the previous part)
- 00:49:500 - k ok
- 00:54:500 - 19 & 20 Ctrl + G (Swap) ok
- 00:56:167 - d it's already a don? anyways, i changed it into a kat
- 01:02:167 - Better delete :3 um..no...sounds awkward
- 01:07:500 - k it's already a kat?
- 01:08:833 - Better K for me :3 ok
- 01:10:000 - Delete it fits the song, so why not? a little 1/2 wouldn't hurt THAT much
- 01:10:333 - ^ ^
- 01:10:667 - ^ ^
- 01:12:337 - d keeping it simple, so no
- 01:13:500 - ^
- 01:14:500 - ^
- 01:18:499 - ^ all refused until this mod
- 01:20:833 - Delete wouldn't it be awkward to just leave those jarring drum sounds unmapped? spinner feels fine
* 01:48:250 - d i don't see a reason why this should be a don
- 02:24:625 - k it's already a kat
- 02:25:958 - D feels better if it's a K
- 02:27:125 - Delete same as previous part
- 02:27:458 - ^
- 02:27:792 - ^
- 02:29:792 - ^
- 02:30:125 - ^
- 02:30:459 - ^ all refused until this mod
* 02:35:959 - D nothing to indicate a finish there


[Futsuu]
- 00:08:334 - d a higher pitch than the previous one, so no
- 00:18:084 - ^ consistency with previous part
* 00:19:771 - ^ i don't see a reason, and the pitch is the same
- 00:41:334 - Better delete, no suits with melody yeah, but wouldn't it sound awkward just to leave a kat there? and the pitch's lower too
- 01:43:250 - d same pitch
* 02:33:292 - k no indication there
* 02:35:959 - D no indication there

[Muzukashii]
- 00:01:209 - k
- 00:02:896 - ^
- 00:03:271 - ^
- 00:04:209 - ^
- 00:04:584 - k k d
- 00:05:709 - k all refused. same pitch and percussion. no reason to diversify

00:06:834 - to 00:17:709- its too weird for me, i trying mod there as i can ;w;

- 00:07:021 - add d
- 00:07:865 - add d
- 00:08:146 - Delete
- 00:08:521 - add d
- 00:09:271 - add d
- 00:09:646 - Delete
- 00:10:021 - add d
- 00:10:865 - add d
- 00:11:146 - Delete
- 00:11:802 - add d
- 00:12:271 - add d

and same as that place .___. remapped all to a much simpler pattern

* 01:22:750 - add pattern "d.k.d"
* 01:24:833 - add pattern "k.d.d.k.d" refused. rest times are important~
* 02:35:958 - D no indication

[Oni]
- 00:01:209 - k
- 00:02:896 - ^
- 00:03:271 - ^
- 00:04:209 - ^
- 00:04:584 - k.k.d
- 00:05:709 - k refused of the same reason as muzukashii
- 00:18:834 - d same percussion sound, so no
- 00:57:833 - add pattern "kkd" it removes the emphasis created by the D after it (and i don't think the vocals there need mapping), so no
* 01:22:750 - add pattern "d.k.d"
* 01:24:833 - add pattern "k.d.d.k.d"
* 02:35:958 - D refused (same reason as muzukashii)

Mungkin banyak yang udah di fix

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :)
Thanks~
OzzyOzrock
HELLO SIR
[General]
Change the volume in song setup to 80%. It's rather overwhelming!


[Oni]
I appreciate your pitching efforts! yeaaaah
00:12:459 (57) - d
00:18:459 (93) - d
00:28:865 (168) - k

Heyyyy I haven't seen an authentic feeling diff in a while.
However, BNs may ask you to make this an Inner Oni and make an easier diff due to long patterns and density. (unless you're really sneaky) But my Icicles map had about the same spread as yours and I was still asked to.
[Muzukashii]
Brilliantly done. You were right to deny most suggestions.

[Futsuu]
I hope this isn't accused as an 'easy muzu'.
While breaks are used often, the way still follow vocals with notes leads to long "streams" of 1/2.
It's probably fine but certain BNs are extremely picky at futsuus... honestly the way it's mapped here is healthy.

01:03:167 (46) - Finsher removal? Could prove... finger tying? For new players. Same for next chorus.
01:10:833 (70) - Same logic as the example above, though it's actually simpler here. It's probably fine.
01:28:500 (6) - Would recommend deleting this note. It still sounds fine and the player should be able to more easily 'catch' the upcoming BPM change.
01:33:000 (18) - Let's remove this..............
.........01:35:250 (24,25) - and make this a d d d?

Well done!
[Kantan]
Here it's more apparent, I'm sure you know about taiko mapping, but osu!'s taiko rules nowadays are more concerned with having be playable by monkeys. Put more clearly, a lot more breaks (the length equaling the distance between 00:18:834 (31,32) - )

It feels Futsuu-ish at times due to lack of breaks (Break size being the length I mentioned above, notice that there are hardly any!) in most parts.
I recommend re-looking at the map and adding some. It's a shame considering the apparent work put into modding this diff o_o

Keep in mind that these domestic animals playing kantan probably can't switch hands very easily and are barely learning to read notes. That's why it's more recommended to keep the same color for extended phrases. So even 5 note patterns can kill these kantan playing goldfish.


But the diffs that matter in the mapset are very solid. Well done.
Nishizumi
Hi o/ from my queue

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:03:084 - ga ada suara musik yang kamu ikutin di bagian sini, move ke 00:03:459 - ? buat samain kaya muzu sama oni, lebih pas kok imo
  2. 01:52:750 - isi slider/spinner ?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:02:116 - delete ? buat little break, lagipula suara vokalnya juga ga ada di situ
  2. 02:08:625 - same as above
  3. 02:19:292 - ^
[Oni]
  1. 00:20:615 - ganti ke d ? vokalnya rendah sama kaya 00:20:709 -
  2. 00:20:896 (129,130) - ctrl + g ? di bagian (130) jelas banget vokalnya tinggi
  3. 00:24:084 - delete atau move ke 00:24:459 - ? kamu ngikutin suara vokal kan ? ga ada suara vokalnya disitu dan terkesan maksain banget biar agak susah patternnya
  4. 00:24:459 - agak aneh dimaininnya di bagian ini kalo dibiarin kosong, add k ? buat ngikutin musiknya sama kaya bagian selanjutnya (00:24:646 (135,136,137,138,139) -)
  5. 00:34:209 (208,209,210,211) - nada vokalnya jelas banget beda beda, kddk ?
  6. 00:55:944 (376,377) - kamu ngikutin musik gitarnya kan ? ga ada suara gitar disini
  7. 00:56:611 (380,381) - ini juga sama kaya di atas
  8. 02:02:403 (254,255) - same as above
  9. 02:03:070 (260,261) - ^
Sorry for the poor mod, hopefully it would help you. good luck for ranked :)
Topic Starter
AxelHino

OzzyOzrock wrote:

HELLO SIR WELL HELLO TO YOU TOO FINE SIR
[General]
Change the volume in song setup to 80%. It's rather overwhelming! ok


[Oni]
I appreciate your pitching efforts! yeaaaah
00:12:459 (57) - d ok
00:18:459 (93) - d ok
00:28:865 (168) - k ok

Heyyyy I haven't seen an authentic feeling diff in a while.
However, BNs may ask you to make this an Inner Oni and make an easier diff due to long patterns and density. (unless you're really sneaky) But my Icicles map had about the same spread as yours and I was still asked to. thanks! i am a little worried about it too since BNs are pretty picky about spread and patterns and stuff, but i don't think it's not TOO overmapped to be an inner oni (it follows the vocals accordingly) so i hope it'll be fine as a rankable oni heheh
[Muzukashii]
Brilliantly done. You were right to deny most suggestions. thanks :3

[Futsuu]
I hope this isn't accused as an 'easy muzu'.
While breaks are used often, the way still follow vocals with notes leads to long "streams" of 1/2.
It's probably fine but certain BNs are extremely picky at futsuus... honestly the way it's mapped here is healthy. in accordance to the kantan, i'll have to remove some notes in here too ;w;

01:03:167 (46) - Finsher removal? Could prove... finger tying? For new players. Same for next chorus. good point there. applied.
01:10:833 (70) - Same logic as the example above, though it's actually simpler here. It's probably fine. it wont feel the same without the finisher. i'll leave it as it is
01:28:500 (6) - Would recommend deleting this note. It still sounds fine and the player should be able to more easily 'catch' the upcoming BPM change. nice suggestion. applied :D
01:33:000 (18) - Let's remove this..............
.........01:35:250 (24,25) - and make this a d d d? ok

Well done!
[Kantan]
Here it's more apparent, I'm sure you know about taiko mapping, but osu!'s taiko rules nowadays are more concerned with having be playable by monkeys. Put more clearly, a lot more breaks (the length equaling the distance between 00:18:834 (31,32) - )

It feels Futsuu-ish at times due to lack of breaks (Break size being the length I mentioned above, notice that there are hardly any!) in most parts.
I recommend re-looking at the map and adding some. It's a shame considering the apparent work put into modding this diff o_o

Keep in mind that these domestic animals playing kantan probably can't switch hands very easily and are barely learning to read notes. That's why it's more recommended to keep the same color for extended phrases. So even 5 note patterns can kill these kantan playing goldfish. hmm, i wanted the kantan to be a bit harder tahn usual since the oni is already quite hard, the kantan should fit accordingly to not create a wide difficulty spread. but then again, i don't think the BNs would like it anyway.I deleted some notes to create more break times, if that helps


But the diffs that matter in the mapset are very solid. Well done.
Thanks very much! :3

edit: oh wow it's a ENHI spread now
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi o/ from my queue

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:03:084 - ga ada suara musik yang kamu ikutin di bagian sini, move ke 00:03:459 - ? buat samain kaya muzu sama oni, lebih pas kok imo ok sip :3
  2. 01:52:750 - isi slider/spinner ? rest time, so no
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:02:116 - delete ? buat little break, lagipula suara vokalnya juga ga ada di situ ada sih vokalnya tapi agak pelan. deleted the note after it
  2. 02:08:625 - same as above
  3. 02:19:292 - ^ same
[Oni]
  1. 00:20:615 - ganti ke d ? vokalnya rendah sama kaya 00:20:709 - it does sound better. applied
  2. 00:20:896 (129,130) - ctrl + g ? di bagian (130) jelas banget vokalnya tinggi ok
  3. 00:24:084 - delete atau move ke 00:24:459 - ? kamu ngikutin suara vokal kan ? ga ada suara vokalnya disitu dan terkesan maksain banget biar agak susah patternnya moved
  4. 00:24:459 - agak aneh dimaininnya di bagian ini kalo dibiarin kosong, add k ? buat ngikutin musiknya sama kaya bagian selanjutnya (00:24:646 (135,136,137,138,139) -) udah di-move
  5. 00:34:209 (208,209,210,211) - nada vokalnya jelas banget beda beda, kddk ? rasanya sama aja deh pitchnya.
  6. 00:55:944 (376,377) - kamu ngikutin musik gitarnya kan ? ga ada suara gitar disini nice point
  7. 00:56:611 (380,381) - ini juga sama kaya di atas same
  8. 02:02:403 (254,255) - same as above same
  9. 02:03:070 (260,261) - ^ same
Sorry for the poor mod, hopefully it would help you. good luck for ranked :)
Thanks for the mod~
Quizmaegi
Topic Starter
AxelHino
Yes I know Taiko no Tatsujin has the official authentic taiko notecharts for it (It's not like i don't play it). But since we can't rank authentics anymore, i had to make an alternate notechart for it :P
-Sh1n1-


[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[General]

  1. Looks Fine
[Kantan]

  1. 00:32:334 (1) - delete this note, you have to save a rest here, newbie need a rest after your slider 00:30:834 (3) -
  2. 00:15:834 - change to k
  3. 00:12:834 - change to d
  4. 00:09:834 - change to k
  5. 00:56:166 - you miss a k here?
  6. 02:02:625 - same as above
    Nice diff

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:24:084 (12,13,14) - sounds weird, try this: move 00:24:459 (14) - to 00:25:209 - and delete 00:24:271 (13) -
  2. 00:38:146 (14) - move to 00:37:584 - and delete 00:36:834 (11) -
  3. 00:42:646 - you miss a note here to keep consistency with 00:40:959 (21,22,23) -

[Muzukashii]

  1. from 00:20:334 - to 00:31:959 - and from 00:32:709 - to 00:44:334 - have the same sound and rhythm but there are parts that have diferent patterns like: 00:32:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with 00:20:334 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - , 00:35:709 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - with 00:23:334 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - ..... etc
  2. 01:04:583 (93) - delete, it's not necessary and follow voice better
  3. 02:11:042 (84) - same as above, consistency
  4. 02:21:708 (36) - same here
  5. 01:56:459 (14) - delete for consistency with 01:57:959 (22,23,24,25) -
  6. 02:22:958 (43) - change to k to make a mirrored pattern like 02:05:292 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) -
  7. 02:12:292 (91) - same as above
  8. 01:05:833 (100) - same here
  9. 02:15:792 (4) - delete, consistency with 02:04:959 (52,53,54,55,56,57) -

[Oni]

Someone asked about the name of this Oni? because at first impresion this Oni is like Inner Oni imo.

  1. 00:25:584 (140,141) - What do you think about deleting these notes? follow voice better imo
  2. 02:11:042 (311) - delete, it's not necessary.
  3. 02:11:709 (317) - move to 02:11:542 -
  4. 02:16:375 (357) - delete to add more emphasis on vocal part 02:16:458 (358,359,360) -
  5. 02:21:042 (393) - remove this note to make a better flow.
  6. 02:22:375 (405) - move to 02:22:208 - sounds better imo.
  7. 01:03:833 (425,426,427,428,429) - and 01:04:500 (431,432,433,434,435) - sounds weird, try this please: 01:04:583 (432) - delete this and 01:03:917 (426) - move to 01:03:750 -
  8. 01:05:583 (441) - delete, 01:05:500 (440) - high pitch
  9. 02:12:042 (320) - same as above
  10. 02:17:375 (366) - same here
Nice mapset, GL
Topic Starter
AxelHino

-Sh1n1- wrote:



[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[General]

  1. Looks Fine
[Kantan]

  1. 00:32:334 (1) - delete this note, you have to save a rest here, newbie need a rest after your slider 00:30:834 (3) - ok
  2. 00:15:834 - change to k ok
  3. 00:12:834 - change to d ok
  4. 00:09:834 - change to k k
  5. 00:56:166 - you miss a k here? wanted to make a rest but turned out awkward. okay
  6. 02:02:625 - same as above ^
    Nice diff

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:24:084 (12,13,14) - sounds weird, try this: move 00:24:459 (14) - to 00:25:209 - and delete 00:24:271 (13) - niiiice
  2. 00:38:146 (14) - move to 00:37:584 - and delete 00:36:834 (11) - nice
  3. 00:42:646 - you miss a note here to keep consistency with 00:40:959 (21,22,23) - added a don

[Muzukashii]

  1. from 00:20:334 - to 00:31:959 - and from 00:32:709 - to 00:44:334 - have the same sound and rhythm but there are parts that have diferent patterns like: 00:32:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with 00:20:334 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - , 00:35:709 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - with 00:23:334 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - ..... etc i think the melody and rhythm is distinct enough to grant a pattern change.
  2. 01:04:583 (93) - delete, it's not necessary and follow voice better ok
  3. 02:11:042 (84) - same as above, consistency ok
  4. 02:21:708 (36) - same here ok
  5. 01:56:459 (14) - delete for consistency with 01:57:959 (22,23,24,25) - there's the vocals, so i'm mapping to that.
  6. 02:22:958 (43) - change to k to make a mirrored pattern like 02:05:292 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - ok
  7. 02:12:292 (91) - same as above ok
  8. 01:05:833 (100) - same here ok
  9. 02:15:792 (4) - delete, consistency with 02:04:959 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - there's that modulation in the pitch so i'm trying to make the section a tiny bit harder than the usual patterns in the chorus

[Oni]

Someone asked about the name of this Oni? because at first impresion this Oni is like Inner Oni imo. yeah, well, i just hope the spread is approved by the BNs. maybe i'll have someone testplay it to check...

  1. 00:25:584 (140,141) - What do you think about deleting these notes? follow voice better imo deleted 141 since leaving a space like that will sound awkward
  2. 02:11:042 (311) - delete, it's not necessary. ok
  3. 02:11:709 (317) - move to 02:11:542 - i like the flow of d k d k d k on every 1/2 beat, so let's just leave it there
  4. 02:16:375 (357) - delete to add more emphasis on vocal part 02:16:458 (358,359,360) - ok
  5. 02:21:042 (393) - remove this note to make a better flow. ok
  6. 02:22:375 (405) - move to 02:22:208 - sounds better imo. same as 02:11:709 (317)
  7. 01:03:833 (425,426,427,428,429) - and 01:04:500 (431,432,433,434,435) - sounds weird, try this please: 01:04:583 (432) - delete this and 01:03:917 (426) - move to 01:03:750 - ok
  8. 01:05:583 (441) - delete, 01:05:500 (440) - high pitch ok
  9. 02:12:042 (320) - same as above ok
  10. 02:17:375 (366) - same here ok
Nice mapset, GL
Nice mod~ thanks!
infr4
From queue

[General]

01:26:166 - How about make it break time
there's just only K or u want to keep, add spin there

- hitsound louder than mp3, need to fix

[Kantan]

kiai time - D D KD is hard to beginners, remove finish

d d ddd k k kkk was nice pattern :v

[Oni]

overdo streams i think

:v

nice done notes. gl with rank
Topic Starter
AxelHino

infr4 wrote:

From queue

[General]

01:26:166 - How about make it break time
there's just only K or u want to keep, add spin there i think it's fine as it is

- hitsound louder than mp3, need to fix isn't the hitsounds supposed to be that way? as long it's not too jarring. this one's fine by me

[Kantan]

kiai time - D D KD is hard to beginners, remove finish alright

d d ddd k k kkk was nice pattern :v

[Oni]

overdo streams i think overdone good streams that is :D

:v

nice done notes. gl with rank
thanks
Ploenar
Hi, AxelHino.

[General]
  1. There seems to be a slight gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii. (I may be mistaken)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:42:459 (24,25,26) - It would be fit more the music that changing to k k d.
  2. 00:49:167 (9,11) - Swap these?
  3. 00:57:500 (28) - k?
  4. 01:20:333 - Add k for consistency.
  5. 01:43:750 (3) - Move to 01:43:625 because the sound is there.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:38:521 (31) - How about changing to d?
[Oni]
  1. It would be better to reduce OD by 1 because there is a bit many streams.
I'm so sorry to mod poorly (orz)
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Ploenar wrote:

Hi, AxelHino.

[General]
  1. There seems to be a slight gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii. (I may be mistaken) nerf-ed the muzukashii
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:42:459 (24,25,26) - It would be fit more the music that changing to k k d.ok
  2. 00:49:167 (9,11) - Swap these? ok
  3. 00:57:500 (28) - k? ok
  4. 01:20:333 - Add k for consistency. ok
  5. 01:43:750 (3) - Move to 01:43:625 because the sound is there. ok
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:38:521 (31) - How about changing to d? ok
[Oni]
  1. It would be better to reduce OD by 1 because there is a bit many streams. nahh, seems fine
I'm so sorry to mod poorly (orz) no you didn't, you did fine~
Thanks for the mod~
I think i need to add another diff to this set to make it rankable ._.
Topic Starter
AxelHino
Added new Oni diff (and named the previous Oni into Inner Oni)

Please redownload.
Kankri
from modding queue \o/

[General]

Everything looks good :D


[Kantan]

00:32:709 (4) - D

00:34:209 (5) - k

00:40:209 (14) - ^

00:57:500 (20) - K

01:05:167 (33) - k

02:03:959 (3) - K

02:11:959 (17) - k

(kat too stronk)


[Futsuu]

01:08:501 (57) - d

01:52:250 (20) - K

02:25:625 (14) - d



[Muzukashii]

01:08:334 (101) - k

01:44:125 (8) - d



[Oni]

00:12:271 (50) - d

00:49:083 (24) - ^

01:08:167 (149,150) - kk

01:41:000 (79) - k

01:44:250 (9) - D

01:58:709 (32) - k

02:00:875 (47) - d

02:13:292 (125) - k

02:14:542 (136) - ^

02:22:208 (186) - d

02:23:958 (199) - k

02:25:292 (6,7) - kk

02:35:070 (33) - d


[Inner Oni]

00:55:000 (369) - d

00:56:389 (377) - ^

01:32:875 (37) - k



This song sounds really nice and cute! I hope this song gets ranked! :)
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Kasha wrote:

from modding queue \o/

[General]

Everything looks good :D


[Kantan]

00:32:709 (4) - D nothing to emphasize a finish here

00:34:209 (5) - k i want to do an all don pattern

00:40:209 (14) - ^ same

00:57:500 (20) - K there isn't really a point in using finishers there

01:05:167 (33) - k okay

02:03:959 (3) - K same as 2 mods above

02:11:959 (17) - k okay

(kat too stronk)


[Futsuu]

01:08:501 (57) - d don't see a point

01:52:250 (20) - K don't see a point

02:25:625 (14) - d don't see a point



[Muzukashii]

01:08:334 (101) - k don't see a point

01:44:125 (8) - d same pitch an percussion sound. no changes here



[Oni]

00:12:271 (50) - d ok

00:49:083 (24) - ^ sounds weird...

01:08:167 (149,150) - kk same pitch...i don't see why this should be a kat

01:41:000 (79) - k don't really see a point

01:44:250 (9) - D the bpm's a tad too fast to put a finisher there

01:58:709 (32) - k ok

02:00:875 (47) - d same as the similar mod above

02:13:292 (125) - k same as the similar mod above

02:14:542 (136) - ^ ok

02:22:208 (186) - d same as the similar mod above

02:23:958 (199) - k same as the similar mod above

02:25:292 (6,7) - kk same as the similar mod above

02:35:070 (33) - d i'll keep it as a kat for consistency


[Inner Oni]

00:55:000 (369) - d pitch goes up and down for this one, so no

00:56:389 (377) - ^ don't really see a point

01:32:875 (37) - k i want to keep the triples in the section monotonous...so no



This song sounds really nice and cute! I hope this song gets ranked! :)
Thanks for the mod~!
shionelove
[Muzukashii]
00:08:334 (28,29,30,31,32) - dkdkk
00:14:334 (48,49,50,51,52) - ^
01:12:666 - add d
01:15:333 - ^
01:18:166 (135,136,137) - ^
[Oni]
00:07:677 (28,29,30) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3304432
00:09:271 (36,37) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3304433
00:10:771 (44,45) - ^^
00:11:896 (49) - move to 00:11:802
same things for next same sounds
00:26:052 (46,47) - dkd
[Inner Oni]
00:03:834 (12) - add some k for 1/4 guitar?

good luck
Senritsu
maaf ya telat orzz

[General]
  1. Judulnya seharusnya Ai×Ai Whistle, karena romanization dari 愛×愛ホイッスル, LOVE×LOVE Whistle cuma jadi bahasa inggrisnya aja.
  2. Ada beberapa tempat di mana sebenernya finish bisa diadd, tapi ngga. contoh : 00:06:834 prefer this to be given a finish though, karena musiknya berubah di sana, jadi finishnya bisa dibuat sebagai penandanya aja sih, gw paham kenapa ngga pake finish di sini but again, try considering it~ ga cuma itu btw~
[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:834 (3) - nggak berniat dipanjangin sekalian sampe 00:31:959? lebih ngepas sama vokalnya dan jarak dari slider ini ke not berikutnya lumayan besar btw jadi nggak terlalu masalah
  2. 00:54:500 (14) - nggak enakan dipindah di 00:55:166 biar patternnya sama kaya 00:47:500 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ?
  3. 02:00:959 (22) - pindah ke 02:00:959 same reason as above
  4. 02:14:625 (1) - imo nggak usah dikasih finish karena yang perlu diemphasize itu cuma 02:15:292 (2) - , dan drum di sana lebih kuat .w.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:209 (2,4) - rem buat jaga spreadnya >v>
  2. 00:32:334 (1) - imo bisa diremove buat kasih jarak antara slider + not selanjutnya, nggak cuma itu buat emphasize 00:32:709 (2) - di drumnya yang lebih kuat suaranya daripada 00:32:334 (1) -
  3. 00:37:771 imo mending add note di sini karena ada 1/4nya di muzukashii, dan patternnya ini terlalu mirip sama kantan, sedangkan beda jauh sama muzukashii
  4. 01:04:500 01:04:333 kasih not bisa, biar ngga terkesan terlalu padet di muzukashii
  5. 01:38:000 (23) - bisa diremove buat kasih break + spread biar kantan ke futsuu ngga terlalu padat
  6. 02:09:126 (55,56) - swap, lalu remove 02:09:126 (55) - buat kasih break + ^ + ngga mirip" banget sama muzukashii
  7. 02:13:458 (66) - 02:18:292 (78) - ^
  8. 02:10:292 add note buat spreadnya
  9. Gw pribadi D D DK ngerasa susah buat Futsuu, kalo gw sih saranin pake d d dK, lebih gampang dan simpel.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:521 (7,18) - bisa diilangin buat jaga spread dari futsuu ke muzu dan muzu ke oni ovo
  2. 00:22:771 (17) - nggak mending diremove aja kah? dd 1/4 itu lumayan susah setelah 1/4 triplet itu lumayan susah ditangkep imo (atleast for me ;vv;)
    apply buat yang lain yaa
  3. 00:32:334 (1) - sama kea futsuu
  4. 00:41:709 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - nggak saranin ini sih, karena di Futsuu bagian ini 00:41:709 (24,25) - kosong, jadii..
  5. 01:01:583 (69) - remove alasan spread w (di futsuu kosong)
  6. 01:03:500 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - spread. /cries/ ok lets move on. dont do anything here
  7. 01:35:875 (35) - 01:43:875 (6) - 01:45:000 (10,15) - 01:48:375 (22) - 01:49:000 (24) - 01:50:000 (28) - 01:55:542 (9) - 02:00:875 (31) - 02:08:042 (58) - 02:10:459 (68) - 02:18:708 (101) - 02:21:458 (113) - remove for spread
  8. Alasan buat spread
    1. Not di satu part di Muzukashii jauh lebih banyak dari Futsuu, sedangkan di Oni mirip sama Muzu
    2. Beberapa bagian di Futsuu kosong, tapi di Muzu terisi sama 1/4
  9. So yeah
[Oni]
  1. waini
  2. 00:22:396 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - spread. di Muzukashii part ini kosong banget loh coba dibuat jadi kkd k aja, lalu note 00:22:115 (18) - didelete buat breaks
  3. 00:25:396 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - .w.
  4. aa ini.. isinya kebanyakan sama sih kalo gw sebutin semua pasti full ntar ._. intinya sebisa mungkin patternnya pake triplets / maksimal sebisa mungkin 5plets, karena di muzukashii tripletnya lumayan banyak. ada juga beberapa pattern yang menurutku terlalu panjang kaya 00:58:333 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - , sedangkan di muzukashii break 1/2nya lumayan banyak, jadi harus ada jarak paling nggak di sini 1/2 juga, satu duapun nggak masalah sih
  5. ada lagi beberapa part ex 01:03:500 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - lebih susah dari inner oni wkwk coba diganti aja, atau dituker lalu hapus beberapa not gitu dan 01:07:500 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - hampir sama sadisnya sama kaya inner oni ;v;
  6. 01:13:500 (173) - notnya dobel lol
  7. 01:28:750 ~ 01:52:750 sebisa mungkin tripletnya berdiri sendiri / ada breaknya, kalo 01:29:000 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - bikin jantung kaget sumpah, karena ini di awal bpm change lalu ada triplet dibuntutin sama 1/2 lol 01:38:000 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - kaya gini gapapa imo, tapi mending 01:41:562 (83) - diremove karena di inner nggak ada tripletnya
  8. 01:52:750 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,1) - lagi sama kaya di atas, mending playernya dibuat terbiasa dulu sama bpm changenya. toh di muzu kan ini spinner, jadi 1/2 aja nggak apa
  9. 02:10:626 (104,105,106,107,108) - lebih susah dari inner oninya
  10. 02:33:625 (26,27,28,32,33,34) - gw paham maksud not" ini, tapi menurut gw apa nggak lebih rapi kalo ini cuma ada di inner oni, jadi KFMO itu bagian ini kembar, tapi di bagian diff ekstra ini part dibikin beda sendiri, terserah sih~
[Inner Oni]
  1. Masalah yang berhubungan sama Oni udah gw tulis di atas, jadi silahkan dicek beberapa partnya. Ntar kalo ada lagi gw post di sini, tapi kalo nggak berarti gw yang kelewatan /lalu terbang/
  2. 00:03:646 mentioned by shione~
  3. 00:26:709 (149) - kalo gw sih lebih enak dan lebih ngeflow ini dibikin d imo
  4. 00:44:240 coba add note di sini, vokalnya kedengeran di 1/4
  5. AxelHino confirmed evil mapper :>
whee \ /
again sorry for late~
Topic Starter
AxelHino

shionelove wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:08:334 (28,29,30,31,32) - dkdkk alright
00:14:334 (48,49,50,51,52) - ^ alright
01:12:666 - add d alright
01:15:333 - ^ alright
01:18:166 (135,136,137) - ^ alright
[Oni]
00:07:677 (28,29,30) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3304432 ok~
00:09:271 (36,37) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3304433 ok~
00:10:771 (44,45) - ^^ ok~
00:11:896 (49) - move to 00:11:802 ok~
same things for next same sounds nice job on these parts~
00:26:052 (46,47) - dkd ok
[Inner Oni]
00:03:834 (12) - add some k for 1/4 guitar? i'm focusing the drums on this part, so no.

good luck

Senritsu wrote:

maaf ya telat orzz

[General]
  1. Judulnya seharusnya Ai×Ai Whistle, karena romanization dari 愛×愛ホイッスル, LOVE×LOVE Whistle cuma jadi bahasa inggrisnya aja. Tapi yha di lyricnya walaupun tulisannya 愛×愛ホイッスル tetep aja dibaca LovexLove (it's there at the end of the chorus). Jadi ya romanization lagunya pake Love x Love. Idk about the spacing though.
  2. Ada beberapa tempat di mana sebenernya finish bisa diadd, tapi ngga. contoh : 00:06:834 prefer this to be given a finish though, karena musiknya berubah di sana, jadi finishnya bisa dibuat sebagai penandanya aja sih, gw paham kenapa ngga pake finish di sini but again, try considering it~ ga cuma itu btw~ hm, sebenarnya saya suka ngasih finisher kalo di lagunya memang kerasa ada stong emphasis di percussionnya/rhythm.kalo di bagian yang di contoh gak banyak perbedaan antara bagian sebelumnya, percussion wise. so there's my reason.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:834 (3) - nggak berniat dipanjangin sekalian sampe 00:31:959? lebih ngepas sama vokalnya dan jarak dari slider ini ke not berikutnya lumayan besar btw jadi nggak terlalu masalah emang udah sampe 00:31:959 slidernya? unless i didn't get what you meant orz
  2. 00:54:500 (14) - nggak enakan dipindah di 00:55:166 biar patternnya sama kaya 00:47:500 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ? okeh~
  3. 02:00:959 (22) - pindah ke 02:00:959 same reason as above okay
  4. 02:14:625 (1) - imo nggak usah dikasih finish karena yang perlu diemphasize itu cuma 02:15:292 (2) - , dan drum di sana lebih kuat .w.okay~ (changed the note to kat too)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:209 (2,4) - rem buat jaga spreadnya >v> alright w
  2. 00:32:334 (1) - imo bisa diremove buat kasih jarak antara slider + not selanjutnya, nggak cuma itu buat emphasize 00:32:709 (2) - di drumnya yang lebih kuat suaranya daripada 00:32:334 (1) - okay
  3. 00:37:771 imo mending add note di sini karena ada 1/4nya di muzukashii, dan patternnya ini terlalu mirip sama kantan, sedangkan beda jauh sama muzukashii whoops. okay added~
  4. 01:04:500 01:04:333 kasih not bisa, biar ngga terkesan terlalu padet di muzukashii added dons~
  5. 01:38:000 (23) - bisa diremove buat kasih break + spread biar kantan ke futsuu ngga terlalu padat okay
  6. 02:09:126 (55,56) - swap, lalu remove 02:09:126 (55) - buat kasih break + ^ + ngga mirip" banget sama muzukashii okay
  7. 02:13:458 (66) - 02:18:292 (78) - ^ ok
  8. 02:10:292 add note buat spreadnya ok
  9. Gw pribadi D D DK ngerasa susah buat Futsuu, kalo gw sih saranin pake d d dK, lebih gampang dan simpel.ok then
I suck at making futsuu -> muzukashii spread orz

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:521 (7,18) - bisa diilangin buat jaga spread dari futsuu ke muzu dan muzu ke oni ovo ok
  2. 00:22:771 (17) - nggak mending diremove aja kah? dd 1/4 itu lumayan susah setelah 1/4 triplet itu lumayan susah ditangkep imo (atleast for me ;vv;) kay then
    apply buat yang lain yaa
  3. 00:32:334 (1) - sama kea futsuu i think it's fine for muzukashii
  4. 00:41:709 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - nggak saranin ini sih, karena di Futsuu bagian ini 00:41:709 (24,25) - kosong, jadii.. changed
  5. 01:01:583 (69) - remove alasan spread w (di futsuu kosong) ok
  6. 01:03:500 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - spread. /cries/ ok lets move on. dont do anything here yeahhhhh...... i deleted one note w
  7. 01:35:875 (35) - 01:43:875 (6) - 01:45:000 (10,15) - 01:48:375 (22) - 01:49:000 (24) - 01:50:000 (28) - 01:55:542 (9) - 02:00:875 (31) - 02:08:042 (58) - 02:10:459 (68) - 02:18:708 (101) - 02:21:458 (113) - remove for spread alllrighty
  8. Alasan buat spread
    1. Not di satu part di Muzukashii jauh lebih banyak dari Futsuu, sedangkan di Oni mirip sama Muzu
    2. Beberapa bagian di Futsuu kosong, tapi di Muzu terisi sama 1/4
  9. So yeah
AxelHino awful in spreads confirmed

[Oni]
  1. waini ngeeeeeehhhh
  2. 00:22:396 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - spread. di Muzukashii part ini kosong banget loh coba dibuat jadi kkd k aja, lalu note 00:22:115 (18) - didelete buat breaks okay
  3. 00:25:396 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - .w. =w=
  4. aa ini.. isinya kebanyakan sama sih kalo gw sebutin semua pasti full ntar ._. intinya sebisa mungkin patternnya pake triplets / maksimal sebisa mungkin 5plets, karena di muzukashii tripletnya lumayan banyak. ada juga beberapa pattern yang menurutku terlalu panjang kaya 00:58:333 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - , sedangkan di muzukashii break 1/2nya lumayan banyak, jadi harus ada jarak paling nggak di sini 1/2 juga, satu duapun nggak masalah sih deleted to look a bit like muzukashii's patterns
  5. ada lagi beberapa part ex 01:03:500 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - lebih susah dari inner oni wkwk coba diganti aja, atau dituker lalu hapus beberapa not gitu dan 01:07:500 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - hampir sama sadisnya sama kaya inner oni ;v; how could i not see that =w=
  6. 01:13:500 (173) - notnya dobel lol derp
  7. 01:28:750 ~ 01:52:750 sebisa mungkin tripletnya berdiri sendiri / ada breaknya, kalo 01:29:000 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - bikin jantung kaget sumpah, karena ini di awal bpm change lalu ada triplet dibuntutin sama 1/2 lol 01:38:000 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - kaya gini gapapa imo, tapi mending 01:41:562 (83) - diremove karena di inner nggak ada tripletnya okaaaayy~
  8. 01:52:750 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,1) - lagi sama kaya di atas, mending playernya dibuat terbiasa dulu sama bpm changenya. toh di muzu kan ini spinner, jadi 1/2 aja nggak apa mm-hm
  9. 02:10:626 (104,105,106,107,108) - lebih susah dari inner oninya alright
  10. 02:33:625 (26,27,28,32,33,34) - gw paham maksud not" ini, tapi menurut gw apa nggak lebih rapi kalo ini cuma ada di inner oni, jadi KFMO itu bagian ini kembar, tapi di bagian diff ekstra ini part dibikin beda sendiri, terserah sih~ okay
[Inner Oni]
  1. Masalah yang berhubungan sama Oni udah gw tulis di atas, jadi silahkan dicek beberapa partnya. Ntar kalo ada lagi gw post di sini, tapi kalo nggak berarti gw yang kelewatan /lalu terbang/ alright :P
  2. 00:03:646 mentioned by shione~ focusing on the percussion
  3. 00:26:709 (149) - kalo gw sih lebih enak dan lebih ngeflow ini dibikin d imo feels nice
  4. 00:44:240 coba add note di sini, vokalnya kedengeran di 1/4 nice ears
  5. AxelHino confirmed evil mapper :> w
whee \ /
again sorry for late~
Thanks for the mods~

I'm so bad at spreads =w=
Surono
(`L_` )

[Onnir iner]
  1. 00:03:646 - bagian kek gini bisa jadi triplet kan? kalau pake kat ntar ketinggian.. gimana don? blah
  2. 00:19:021 - bagian kek gini juga bisakah jadi stream? ddk gitu.. emm kalau denied alesannya don XD
  3. 01:26:166 (2) - ini ga ganti slider?
  4. 01:27:500 (3) - ini bisa dibuat stream kdddkdddkblabla, ya ntar bingungnyg pas voice pitch ini 01:28:750 (7) -
    jadi ya dibuat kdddkdddkdddk D gimana?
  5. 01:51:750 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - kkk ddd
  6. 01:52:250 (171,172,173) - kdk *snap 1/3
  7. dah gini adja
[Onir]
  1. 01:26:166 (2) - slider aja?
  2. 01:28:750 (5) - finish?
  3. aa.. dah bgs.. saya ga bisa ngapa2in ww `_J`
[Muzukasih]
  1. aa gada
segini doang.... maafkan `L_`
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Surono wrote:

(`L_` )

[Onnir iner]
  1. 00:03:646 - bagian kek gini bisa jadi triplet kan? kalau pake kat ntar ketinggian.. gimana don? blah saya fokusnya ke suara tepuk tangannya (?) itu loh, jadi ya...w
  2. 00:19:021 - bagian kek gini juga bisakah jadi stream? ddk gitu.. emm kalau denied alesannya don XD focusing on the clap (?) sounds, so...denided
  3. 01:26:166 (2) - ini ga ganti slider? fokus ke impact suaranya, bukan length. sorry, denied
  4. 01:27:500 (3) - ini bisa dibuat stream kdddkdddkblabla, ya ntar bingungnyg pas voice pitch ini 01:28:750 (7) -
    jadi ya dibuat kdddkdddkdddk D gimana? itu bagian bpm change, takutnya agak terlalu susah (walaupun ini inner oni, but ehhh)
  5. 01:51:750 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - kkk ddd i think it feels fine
  6. 01:52:250 (171,172,173) - kdk *snap 1/3 i don't see a reason to do that...?
  7. dah gini adja
[Onir]
  1. 01:26:166 (2) - slider aja? like inner oni
  2. 01:28:750 (5) - finish? hmm.... that sounds nice
  3. aa.. dah bgs.. saya ga bisa ngapa2in ww `_J`
[Muzukasih]
  1. aa gada
segini doang.... maafkan `L_`
thanks~
Surono
cedihc.jepege.wajfbkn,awf kura.... lupakan whatiamtyping.3gp


`L_` lupakan kata2 di atas.. mod bagian akhir cuma kurang mikir.. and blah bernafas doeloe `L_J`. *nih lempar buah bintangnya *eh ya Blimbing nah..... permintaan goamen.sz
streeteelf
From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

[General]

  1. IMO nothing
[Kantan]

  1. 00:24:084 - add d?
  2. 00:27:084 - add k? - both feels empty for me.
  3. 00:39:459 (13) - I suggest k
  4. 00:40:959 (15,1) - If you do ^, Ctrl+G
  5. 00:46:833 (3,5) - k
  6. 00:57:166 (19) - d
  7. 01:10:667 (40,41) - Too high BPM to use 1/2 in Kantan, delete d (first circle of these 2)
  8. 01:52:750 - add k?
  9. 01:59:959 (20) - k?
  10. 02:03:625 (2) - d
  11. 02:05:292 (5,8) - k
  12. 02:17:292 (6) - k
  13. 02:19:292 (9) - k
  14. 02:27:792 (9) - delete, like I said, too high BPM to use 1/2 in Kantan
  15. 02:30:458 (14) - ^
  16. 02:35:292 (4,5,6) - maybe k better?
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:18:834 (1) - d
  2. 00:19:959 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:27:084 (15) - d or 00:27:834 (16) - d, depends on ya
  4. 00:40:584 (42) - d or 00:40:959 (43) - d
  5. 00:42:459 (47) - d
  6. 00:47:500 (6) - k
  7. 00:49:333 (10) - d
  8. 00:56:833 (26,27,28) - Suggest 3 D (big dons)
  9. 00:58:833 (30) - k
  10. 01:04:500 (45) - k
  11. 01:05:166 (47) - d
  12. 01:07:500 (55,59) - d
  13. 01:37:750 (22,23,24,25) - Ctrl+G
  14. 01:58:625 (31,32,33) - k_d_k + 01:59:959 (34) - d
  15. 02:13:626 (67) - d
  16. 02:24:625 (11,15) - d
  17. 02:28:625 (1) - d
Nice song, nice mapset, but I'm not able to mod all diffs. :P But... Good luck~ :3
Topic Starter
AxelHino

streeteelf wrote:

From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

[General]

  1. IMO nothing
[Kantan]

  1. 00:24:084 - add d? the idea here is to put 4 beat breaks, so no
  2. 00:27:084 - add k? - both feels empty for me. ^
  3. 00:39:459 (13) - I suggest k ok
  4. 00:40:959 (15,1) - If you do ^, Ctrl+G ok
  5. 00:46:833 (3,5) - k i don't see a reason
  6. 00:57:166 (19) - d pitch's actually going up, mate. and there's nothing to indicate a don there anyway so...yeah
  7. 01:10:667 (40,41) - Too high BPM to use 1/2 in Kantan, delete d (first circle of these 2) what's so hard about hitting a don followed by a kat? i think it's fine
  8. 01:52:750 - add k? ok
  9. 01:59:959 (20) - k? don't see a reason
  10. 02:03:625 (2) - d same as the similar mod above
  11. 02:05:292 (5,8) - k trying to make it simple
  12. 02:17:292 (6) - k made the previous note into don
  13. 02:19:292 (9) - k i don't see a reason
  14. 02:27:792 (9) - delete, like I said, too high BPM to use 1/2 in Kantan like above
  15. 02:30:458 (14) - ^ ^
  16. 02:35:292 (4,5,6) - maybe k better? no change there to indicate
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:18:834 (1) - d don't see a reason
  2. 00:19:959 (3,4) - Ctrl+G a don on the first beat gives a much better emphasis
  3. 00:27:084 (15) - d or 00:27:834 (16) - d, depends on ya you didn't give me a reason why i should change either of them. i think they're both fine as it is, so no
  4. 00:40:584 (42) - d or 00:40:959 (43) - d pitch's the same
  5. 00:42:459 (47) - d pitch's descending, so no
  6. 00:47:500 (6) - k ok
  7. 00:49:333 (10) - d i just like the d k k notes, so no
  8. 00:56:833 (26,27,28) - Suggest 3 D (big dons) i don't see a reason to emphasize it
  9. 00:58:833 (30) - k keeping it simple
  10. 01:04:500 (45) - k i think it's fine
  11. 01:05:166 (47) - d the pitch's drastically different from the first one
  12. 01:07:500 (55,59) - d don't see a reason
  13. 01:37:750 (22,23,24,25) - Ctrl+G ok
  14. 01:58:625 (31,32,33) - k_d_k + 01:59:959 (34) - d i think it sounds fine
  15. 02:13:626 (67) - d same pitch
  16. 02:24:625 (11,15) - d i don't think it's necessary
  17. 02:28:625 (1) - d the pitch is really high, so no
Nice song, nice mapset, but I'm not able to mod all diffs. :P But... Good luck~ :3
thanks!

and thanks too Surono w
Volta
Hi, from my queue. Ini pesananya~

Inner Oni
00:03:646 - aku denger sesuatu disini. aku rasa suara yang sejenis. jadikan 00:03:834 (12) - ini triplet? dan supaya membedakan dengan Oni juga

00:21:271 (109,110) - gimana kalo kamu tuker ini? terdengar lebih pas dan agar sepola dengan 00:22:677 (120,121) -
00:22:490 - dan aku mendengar suara disini. tambah d?

00:24:646 (135,136) - saya percaya suaranya turun-naik disini. tukar?
00:25:209 (138) - pindah ke 00:25:115 - agar menyesuaikan vokalnya?

00:28:865 (167) - ganti d, karena pitchnya sama dengan 00:29:052 (168)
00:30:459 - ini dihapus aja. ada drumnya sih, tapi mending kamu ikutin vokalnya aja, terus
00:29:240 - 00:30:365 - ini lebih baik diubah menjadi seperti ini
it's more suited, trust me

00:30:834 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - and trust me, it's better kkddkkddk

00:33:646 (205) - opinion: gimana kalo kdd aja?

00:42:646 (283) - ganti jadi k
00:44:240 - tambah d karena aku denger suara vokal disini. kamu juga melakukannya di oni.

00:44:709 (295) - ganti jadi spinner yang berakhir di 00:45:834 - bisa jadi intro yang baik buat perubahan BPM nya, Dan ada tukang parkir yang niup peluit disana. kasian kalo diabaikan.

ahhh the 180 BPM just feels good..

00:56:833 (379,380,381) - kasih finisher kekencengan ga?

01:00:166 (398,399,400,401) - ganti jadi ddk d. mengalir lebih baik menurut saya.
02:06:626 (264,265,266,267) - ^
01:05:667 (439) - kkd lebih baik imo

01:05:667 (439) - ini juga mending ganti jadi spinner. suara peluitnya kentara banget. akhiri di 01:27:166

01:37:625 (59,60) - tukar? ngikutin vokal
01:39:500 (73) - ganti jadi d
01:41:250 (86,87,88,89) - ganti jadi kkdk, lalu
01:41:875 (90,91,92) - ini kkk, andd magically terasa lebih enak

02:03:291 (245,246,247) - finisher

02:10:542 (294) - ganti jadi d?
02:11:959 (305,306,307,308) - d kkd mungkin lebih baik.

Oni
i'm kind of not a fan of this oni. terlalu banyak duplets di oni rasanya tidak baik untuk kesehatan. ehh...oni player maksudnya. belum teruji secara ilmiah sih cuman pas masih cupu dulu rasanaya susah banget mukul duplet. jadi mungkin kebanyakan mod ini bersifat opini.

Ganti OD jadi 5? Rasanya 6 terlalu kejam untuk lagu yang banyak perubahan beat seperti ini.

00:20:990 (10) - gimana kalo ganti jadi d dan pindah ke 00:20:896 lalu
00:21:084 (11) - jadi k karena suaranya turun-naik
00:21:646 (14,15,16) - ddk
00:22:396 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - lalu bukannya ini ddkkdd ya? :?: :?: :?

ubah juga yang di 00:23:896 dst. tapi bebas deh. sesuai keinginan mapper aja. gak mau terlalu memaksa. tapi coba bandingin aja.

00:44:709 (1) - spinner? tukang parkir things
00:56:832 (63,64,65) - finisher?
01:26:166 (2) - spinner

01:29:750 (12) - ganti jadi k lalu
01:30:500 - tambah d
01:30:875 (17) - dan pindah ini ke 01:31:125
01:31:750 (23) - d

01:33:000 (27,29) - ganti jadi k

01:37:500 - tambah d
01:37:750 (48) - ganti jadi k
01:40:500 (63) - hapus? somehow agak gak pas ada not disini padhal ada orang nyanyi

01:46:750 (20,21,22,23,24) - kdkdd
01:50:750 (44,45,46,47,48) - ^

02:03:292 (116,117,118) - finish

Sisanya ntar siang ya.

edit: ni lanjutannya

Muzukashii
00:22:209 (15) - ganti jadi k? pitchnya sama
00:24:834 (23) - ganti jadi k karena suara naik-turun-naik
00:28:584 (38,39,40) - kkd lebih pas menurutku
00:30:459 (47) - ganti jadi k agar...apa ya aku cuma bosen liat d disitu sih.

00:34:584 (11) - k
00:37:209 (19) - ^

tukang parkir sini diabaikan juga gapapa ternyata.

01:44:000 (6) - pindahan ke 01:43:875 - terdengar lebih baik


01:54:292 (2,3,4) - gimana kalo kdk? kemudian
01:54:959 (5) - ini ganti jadi k lalu
01:55:792 (10,11) - ini ditukar. feels better

01:59:792 (25,26) - kdk
02:01:125 (32,33) - tuker

Futsuu
00:30:834 (23) - kenapa bukan spinner? kayak disini 00:43:209 (1) -

00:52:833 (18) - ganti jadi k karena disini pitchnya naik, beda dengan 00:51:500 (15)

01:03:833 (44,45) - ganti jadi k?

01:44:000 (4) - pindah ke 01:44:125 - better rhytm

Kantan
00:30:834 (3) - spinner
00:40:584 - tambah d karena rasanya monoton banget.

00:43:209 (1) - putaran ini buat lebih lama, berhenti di 00:44:334 -

okeh itu sudah semua. semoga membantu :D
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Flying Pan wrote:

Hi, from my queue. Ini pesananya~

Inner Oni
00:03:646 - aku denger sesuatu disini. aku rasa suara yang sejenis. jadikan 00:03:834 (12) - ini triplet? dan supaya membedakan dengan Oni juga focusing on the percussions, so no

00:21:271 (109,110) - gimana kalo kamu tuker ini? terdengar lebih pas dan agar sepola dengan 00:22:677 (120,121) - i think it's good as it is :?
00:22:490 - dan aku mendengar suara disini. tambah d? ok

00:24:646 (135,136) - saya percaya suaranya turun-naik disini. tukar? ok
00:25:209 (138) - pindah ke 00:25:115 - agar menyesuaikan vokalnya? don't think it'll work

00:28:865 (167) - ganti d, karena pitchnya sama dengan 00:29:052 (168) ok
00:30:459 - ini dihapus aja. ada drumnya sih, tapi mending kamu ikutin vokalnya aja, terus i think there's actually a vocal part there, just not too audible (and besides, ending it there feels awkward)
00:29:240 - 00:30:365 - ini lebih baik diubah menjadi seperti ini
it's more suited, trust me alright~

00:30:834 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192) - and trust me, it's better kkddkkddk ok

00:33:646 (205) - opinion: gimana kalo kdd aja? ok

00:42:646 (283) - ganti jadi k ok
00:44:240 - tambah d karena aku denger suara vokal disini. kamu juga melakukannya di oni. ok

00:44:709 (295) - ganti jadi spinner yang berakhir di 00:45:834 - bisa jadi intro yang baik buat perubahan BPM nya, Dan ada tukang parkir yang niup peluit disana. kasian kalo diabaikan. lol sorry, but i want to make that part a break time

ahhh the 180 BPM just feels good..

00:56:833 (379,380,381) - kasih finisher kekencengan ga? that was actually the original state of the notes before being modded lol

01:00:166 (398,399,400,401) - ganti jadi ddk d. mengalir lebih baik menurut saya. ok
02:06:626 (264,265,266,267) - ^ ok
01:05:667 (439) - kkd lebih baik imo ok

01:05:667 (439) - ini juga mending ganti jadi spinner. suara peluitnya kentara banget. akhiri di 01:27:166 i assume you meant 01:26:166 (2) - lol. sorry but like the reason above, break time

01:37:625 (59,60) - tukar? ngikutin vokal ok
01:39:500 (73) - ganti jadi d ok
01:41:250 (86,87,88,89) - ganti jadi kkdk, lalu ok
01:41:875 (90,91,92) - ini kkk, andd magically terasa lebih enak ok~

02:03:291 (245,246,247) - finisher same as above reasons

02:10:542 (294) - ganti jadi d? ok
02:11:959 (305,306,307,308) - d kkd mungkin lebih baik. ok

Oni
i'm kind of not a fan of this oni. terlalu banyak duplets di oni rasanya tidak baik untuk kesehatan. ehh...oni player maksudnya. belum teruji secara ilmiah sih cuman pas masih cupu dulu rasanaya susah banget mukul duplet. jadi mungkin kebanyakan mod ini bersifat opini. kalo gak sekarang latihan dupletnya, kapan lagi? if you can't do duplets then play the muzukashii

Ganti OD jadi 5? Rasanya 6 terlalu kejam untuk lagu yang banyak perubahan beat seperti ini. i think it's fine

00:20:990 (10) - gimana kalo ganti jadi d dan pindah ke 00:20:896 lalu ok
00:21:084 (11) - jadi k karena suaranya turun-naik ok
00:21:646 (14,15,16) - ddk ok
00:22:396 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - lalu bukannya ini ddkkdd ya? :?: :?: :? oh alright

ubah juga yang di 00:23:896 dst. tapi bebas deh. sesuai keinginan mapper aja. gak mau terlalu memaksa. tapi coba bandingin aja. changed some notes

00:44:709 (1) - spinner? tukang parkir things declined with the same reasons as inner
00:56:832 (63,64,65) - finisher? same as inner
01:26:166 (2) - spinner same

01:29:750 (12) - ganti jadi k lalu i think it's nice to have a don there, rhythm feels better
01:30:500 - tambah d ok
01:30:875 (17) - dan pindah ini ke 01:31:125 ok
01:31:750 (23) - d ok

01:33:000 (27,29) - ganti jadi k i think it's fine

01:37:500 - tambah d ok
01:37:750 (48) - ganti jadi k like 01:29:750 (12) -
01:40:500 (63) - hapus? somehow agak gak pas ada not disini padhal ada orang nyanyi emang notnya ada karena vokalnya

01:46:750 (20,21,22,23,24) - kdkdd ok
01:50:750 (44,45,46,47,48) - ^ ok

02:03:292 (116,117,118) - finish declined like above

Sisanya ntar siang ya.

edit: ni lanjutannya

Muzukashii
00:22:209 (15) - ganti jadi k? pitchnya sama ok
00:24:834 (23) - ganti jadi k karena suara naik-turun-naik takutnya agak terlalu susah
00:28:584 (38,39,40) - kkd lebih pas menurutku ok
00:30:459 (47) - ganti jadi k agar...apa ya aku cuma bosen liat d disitu sih. lol, well i'm not aiming to make it too hard or anything so i put a don there to make it simple

00:34:584 (11) - k ok
00:37:209 (19) - ^ declined because i think it's a tad too complicated

tukang parkir sini diabaikan juga gapapa ternyata.

01:44:000 (6) - pindahan ke 01:43:875 - terdengar lebih baik alright


01:54:292 (2,3,4) - gimana kalo kdk? kemudian i think it's fine
01:54:959 (5) - ini ganti jadi k lalu making it simple
01:55:792 (10,11) - ini ditukar. feels better this one i agree

01:59:792 (25,26) - kdk same as above
02:01:125 (32,33) - tuker ok

Futsuu
00:30:834 (23) - kenapa bukan spinner? kayak disini 00:43:209 (1) - ok changed

00:52:833 (18) - ganti jadi k karena disini pitchnya naik, beda dengan 00:51:500 (15) ok

01:03:833 (44,45) - ganti jadi k? making it simple

01:44:000 (4) - pindah ke 01:44:125 - better rhytm i think it's fine

Kantan
00:30:834 (3) - spinner ok
00:40:584 - tambah d karena rasanya monoton banget. ok

00:43:209 (1) - putaran ini buat lebih lama, berhenti di 00:44:334 - mau bikin waktu preparation antara berakhirnya spinner sama not setelahnya sih. sorry

okeh itu sudah semua. semoga membantu :D
thanks for the mod~ :3
Surono
astaga flying pan kren ~_~ aih kupingnya ga curekan ww
Nyan
[General]

01:26:166 (2) - can be converted to slider note.

[Kantan]

01:10:000 (38,39,40,41) - Change this. Even Yuugen no Ran did't use this pattern on kantan. d d dd or k k kk barely fits on kantan.
02:27:125 (7,8,9,10) - same as above, d d dd or k k kk
02:29:792 (12,13,14,15) - same as above

[Futsuu]

You can add a note on 02:32:292 - , 02:33:625 - , 02:34:958 -
Futsuu is fine

[Muzukashii]

also fine

[Oni]

00:57:500 (65) - can add Finish
02:03:958 (118) - can add Finish

You can add three 1/3 dons on 02:32:292 - , 02:33:625 - , 02:34:958 -

Wow. Even oni is so fine!

[Inner Oni]

00:55:500 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - suggestion below

00:57:500 (383) - can add Finish

01:08:833 (470) - can add Finish

01:20:833 (1) - you can convert this to normal notes.
01:27:500 (3,4,5,6) - you can also add some notes here to make drum stream.

02:01:959 (237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - same as above, and this is just a suggestion
02:03:958 (247) - can add Finish
02:06:959 (267) - can be don

02:25:958 (419) - can add Finish
02:28:625 (427) - can add Finish

The only thing you need to change is kantan d d dk thing. Good map!
Topic Starter
AxelHino

Nyan wrote:

[General]

01:26:166 (2) - can be converted to slider note. nahh, i like to emphasize the impact of the whistle rather than the length

[Kantan]

01:10:000 (38,39,40,41) - Change this. Even Yuugen no Ran did't use this pattern on kantan. oh? lol d d dd or k k kk barely fits on kantan. changed to d
02:27:125 (7,8,9,10) - same as above, d d dd or k k kk ^
02:29:792 (12,13,14,15) - same as above ^

[Futsuu]

You can add a note on 02:32:292 - , 02:33:625 - , 02:34:958 - nahh, i think simplicity is enough
Futsuu is fine

[Muzukashii]

also fine thanks~

[Oni]

00:57:500 (65) - can add Finish i actually had the note a finisher before somebody pointed out that i doesn't really emphasize anything.
02:03:958 (118) - can add Finish ^

You can add three 1/3 dons on 02:32:292 - , 02:33:625 - , 02:34:958 - added only one note each

Wow. Even oni is so fine!

[Inner Oni]

00:55:500 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - suggestion below ok~

00:57:500 (383) - can add Finish same as oni

01:08:833 (470) - can add Finish ok

01:20:833 (1) - you can convert this to normal notes. i kinda like the spinner on this one, so no
01:27:500 (3,4,5,6) - you can also add some notes here to make drum stream. since there's a bpm change ahead i kinda don't like putting a stream there

02:01:959 (237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - same as above, and this is just a suggestion ok
02:03:958 (247) - can add Finish same as above
02:06:959 (267) - can be don i like the kat sound better

02:25:958 (419) - can add Finish ok
02:28:625 (427) - can add Finish ok

The only thing you need to change is kantan d d dk thing. Good map!
thanks for the mod!
Coro
sorry axel, our mapping styles are too similar =w=;
i can't find anything really out of place for me =w=;

good luck for rank, it's pretty good~
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