Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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Sc4v4ng3r


Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them?
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other.
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops).
  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each.
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD.

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each. no change. 00:57:835 - is big sound than 00:57:438 -
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^ ^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^ no change. 01:11:345 - is big sound than 01:10:749 -
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here. delete one note
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD. 01:29:623 (89623|1) - delete. but, does not change to LN
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That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them? no thanks
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other. okay change pattern
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7 no thanks
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5. ^
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). no LN style(pop'n)

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...

GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
mod thanks
-LASU-
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schwarzvgrune
just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
it's Pop'n music style. not 8+1K style.
Pop'n music styleは159のような押し方があまり存在しない、そしてLNが少ないor全くないというスタイルです。
(Pop'n musicにはLN自体ないですが私の譜面では一箇所だけLNを入れています)
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement...
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<"
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose?
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo
00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above?
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 -


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well?


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no?


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_<

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 -

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 -
00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 -
00:08:763 - same here >w<b
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_<
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w;
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w;
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 -

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 -

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 -
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w;

01:05:981 - also here

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis no change. 00:17:107 - から拍線2本感覚で置いてるのは曲の中にあるclap soundに合わせてあるためです。ここではclap soundを含んだ場合double noteにしています
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above ^
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above? ^
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration fixed

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 - fixed


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well? lol add note


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no? fixed


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_< ok, fixed

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 - fixed

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration 階段とは違う形に変更しました

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 - double noteになっているのはcymbal soundがないためです


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide

wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue

wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue

tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)
mod thanks ~
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

yoshilove wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 - yeyyy Add www /me baka
00:08:763 - same here >w<b hai !! wasureteta....
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_< okay :3
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w; aaa ok fix~
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w; It is deliberately ~ but fixed
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well ^

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 - Add ~

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 - sukoshi difficult ww, but EX diff~ add!!

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 - sorry no thanks~ 2+finish
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w; ok~ add

01:05:981 - also here sorry no thanks~

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis cymbal hear 3 2 2 3~ fix

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo ok fix~

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;
ok... remove~
thanks~~!! arigato :)
optimized for pop'n style
remove 1 5 9 and 1 4 6 9 etc~~

http://puu.sh/iqQkW.zip
-LASU-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~ Hi-(^ω^)
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo nice changed
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement... ok
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<" ^
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose? ok
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)change repattern
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo add double note 5,8
mod thanks ~ (^ω^)b
MEGAtive

Hi~ Mod here~

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[yoshilove's EX]
00:13:531 to 00:15:915 - Suggest to cover the kick as well, since 00:10:352 to 00:13:531 you cover them.
00:24:259 - Add note on either 4 or 7 for snare, since those column aren't filled yet. See 00:25:054 for reference.
00:38:763 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here because 00:38:961 are using 3 notes with same sound.
00:56:743 - 00:57:041 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here for the big impulse sound. See 00:56:445

This mapset's already look beautiful, just need some consistencies between the instruments. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet


yoshilove wrote:

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi~ Mod here~

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[yoshilove's EX]
00:13:531 to 00:15:915 - Suggest to cover the kick as well, since 00:10:352 to 00:13:531 you cover them.
sorry no change><

00:24:259 - Add note on either 4 or 7 for snare, since those column aren't filled yet. See 00:25:054 for reference.
00:25:054 = snare and guitar~ :3 00:24:259 = snare only~

00:38:763 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here because 00:38:961 are using 3 notes with same sound.
1. bass only~ 2. bass + strong piano

00:56:743 - 00:57:041 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here for the big impulse sound. See 00:56:445
Add 1 note~ thanks!!

This mapset's already look beautiful, just need some consistencies between the instruments. Good Luck~
がんばるにゃ~ฅ*•ω•*ฅ
http://puu.sh/iyief.zip
Crono
Favourite cause 9k,

Have a star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚

Edit: To avoid double posting.

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From my queue~
Not sure if I can help, the whole set looks really good imo. Your hyper diff makes me want a Pop'n controller c:

Scrub modding~~

0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8

-LASU-'s Normal

From 00:33:001 to 00:41:743 column 4 looks is empty. Perhaps you could move at least 1 or 2 notes to fill here? or if you like perhaps you could add a note to 00:35:981 (35981|5) and 00:36:180 (36180|4) since your sticking to piano here. I'm guessing your going for a mirror kind of feel here, so perhaps this is unnecessary.

01:03:597 (63597|8) - move to 1 for hand balance?
Hyper

00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3) - sound here is dominant to right ear but played with left hand. Not really a problem here but perhaps a ctrl + h of 00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3,47206|5) + move 00:46:710 (46710|6) to 7 would fit it better? of course 00:46:710 (46710|6) - sound is on left ear so if you consider audio location...well this kinda changes the following consistency of left to right stairs as well.

told ya lol
yoshilove's Ex

My only issue with this is that 01:01:610 (61610|0,61710|1,61809|2,61908|3,62008|1,62107|2,62206|3,62306|4,62405|2,62504|3,62604|4,62703|5,62802|6) - could follow pitch better somehow. After the first 4 stairs it sounds more to the right, returning to the center. May have to rearrange the notes here if you apply this.
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧✧✧

Can't wait to see this ranked xD
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet


yoshilove wrote:

Crono wrote:

yoshilove's Ex

My only issue with this is that 01:01:610 (61610|0,61710|1,61809|2,61908|3,62008|1,62107|2,62206|3,62306|4,62405|2,62504|3,62604|4,62703|5,62802|6) - could follow pitch better somehow. After the first 4 stairs it sounds more to the right, returning to the center. May have to rearrange the notes here if you apply this.
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧✧✧

Can't wait to see this ranked xD
Okay Fix!!

http://puu.sh/iSZWe.zip
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Crono wrote:

Favourite cause 9k,

Have a star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚

Edit: To avoid double posting.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------
From my queue~
Not sure if I can help, the whole set looks really good imo. Your hyper diff makes me want a Pop'n controller c:

Scrub modding~~

0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8

Hyper

00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3) - sound here is dominant to right ear but played with left hand. Not really a problem here but perhaps a ctrl + h of 00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3,47206|5) + move 00:46:710 (46710|6) to 7 would fit it better? of course 00:46:710 (46710|6) - sound is on left ear so if you consider audio location...well this kinda changes the following consistency of left to right stairs as well. fixed

told ya lol
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧✧✧

Can't wait to see this ranked xD
mod and star thanks ~
-LASU-

Crono wrote:

-LASU-'s Normal

From 00:33:001 to 00:41:743 column 4 looks is empty. Perhaps you could move at least 1 or 2 notes to fill here? or if you like perhaps you could add a note to 00:35:981 (35981|5) and 00:36:180 (36180|4) since your sticking to piano here. I'm guessing your going for a mirror kind of feel here, so perhaps this is unnecessary. fixed

01:03:597 (63597|8) - move to 1 for hand balance? move

Can't wait to see this ranked xD
mod thanks
Satoshi Kazuki
M4M
well im not good in mod 9k mapset

00:27:835 - remove this inherited point...totally useless
00:37:372 - ^
00:06:180 - add note?
00:06:577 - ^
00:09:359 (9359|3,9359|1) - move one col to the right -->
00:27:637 - add or replace one note with LN? - 00:28:233 - end here
00:35:981 - add note? piano
00:36:776 - ^
01:22:670 - LN? - 01:23:465 - end here
01:29:623 (89623|5,89623|1) - replace with LN...that was suitable for ending/outro
01:27:339 - add note?
01:29:623 - replace with LN
00:21:875 - why empty?? there has a beat
00:58:630 - LN? - 00:59:623 - end here
01:18:696 (78696|4,78994|4,79292|4,79690|4,80087|4,80286|4) - too much note in one column...aslo the beat wasnt same to make a jack
01:29:623 - replace with LN

Good Luck
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M
well im not good in mod 9k mapset

00:27:835 - remove this inherited point...totally useless no, used Audio volume change
00:37:372 - ^ ^
01:27:339 - add note?
01:29:623 - replace with LN
sorry, all no change

Good Luck
mod thanks
Satoshi Kazuki

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M
well im not good in mod 9k mapset

00:27:835 - remove this inherited point...totally useless no, used Audio volume change
00:37:372 - ^ ^
01:27:339 - add note?
01:29:623 - replace with LN
sorry, all no change

Good Luck
mod thanks
wow :v rejected
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet


yoshilove wrote:

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M
well im not good in mod 9k mapset
00:21:875 - why empty?? there has a beat n~~ ok! add!
00:58:630 - LN? - 00:59:623 - end here no LN map~ but Add vocal notes
01:18:696 (78696|4,78994|4,79292|4,79690|4,80087|4,80286|4) - too much note in one column...aslo the beat wasnt same to make a jack
jack notes = bass
01:29:623 - replace with LN no LN map~ nothanks ~~
Good Luck
thank you modding :)
http://puu.sh/iWkxH.zip
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