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-LASU-

Shinzo- wrote:

Hello Japan :v

MOD READY


Mod by Request

Requested byRuberusuScarlet


9K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9]

[General]
*Whats wrong with the Offset ? u can make it 816 since the note starts there and no SV in the begining -.-
*dont forget -LASU- in tags :v

[LASU]
00:02:008 (2008|3) - should be 00:01:909 - just like 00:02:405 (2405|5,2703|5) - ok
00:02:703 (2703|5) - why only this that in blue line ? i see no more 00:05:087 - here ? ^
00:10:551 - missing note add note 5
00:27:041 (27041|6,27041|2) - should just be 1 note since theres no bass no thanks
00:33:796 (33796|5) - ghost notenot ghost note
00:43:730 - please add note, its so akward ok
00:46:909 - here too x_x ^
00:57:438 (57438|5,57438|8,57637|4,57637|7,57836|3,57836|6) - try to make some balance, since this is the easiest diff change pattern
00:58:233 (58233|1,58233|7,58432|1,58432|7) - move to 1 and 9 ^
01:05:783 (65783|1,65783|3) - MUST delete one of it for consisntecy and move to 5 ^
01:06:379 (66379|6,66379|8,66776|7,67174|6,67174|8) - 01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - please this is normal why no its so heavy in the right ? ^
01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - just move this 6 column to left <_< ^
01:19:293 (79293|8,79889|8,80087|8) - see ? again and again its heavy in the right. u can move them to 5 ^
01:21:478 (81478|6,81478|3) - delete one of it. no bass no thanks
01:22:670 - add note bass ^

9K Hype !

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
mod thanks

Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

yoshilove wrote:

Shinzo- wrote:

Hello Japan :v

[yoshi]
00:01:164 - hear something here but nvm .... on purpose
00:03:001 - missing note no...hear please
00:06:279 (6279|7) - this is same with 00:06:379 (6379|3,6379|1,6577|4,6577|2) - color=#BF00FF]Drum sound>< hear please[/color]
00:06:776 (6776|3,6776|5,6776|8,6776|0) - whats make them 4 ? -.- ww nice change it~ 2~ 3~ 4 yey
and also... 00:06:975 (6975|1,6975|4,6975|7) - this is louder than that ^

00:07:372 (7372|4,7571|7,7770|5,7968|6) - should be 4 note for consistency no thanks :3
00:12:339 (12339|1,12538|2) - ctrl G ? for pitch aa okay change
00:15:915 (15915|1,15915|8,15915|3,15915|5) - should be same with 00:16:114 - no thanks :3
00:16:114 - what's make this same with 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|5,16313|3,16511|3,16511|1,16511|5) - this ? the sound is diffrent 00:16:114 - bass and 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|3,16313|5,16511|3,16511|5,16511|1) - bass & piano
so...00:16:313 - 00:16:511 - add note or 00:16:114 (16114|6,16114|4,16114|2) - delete one of this
sorry no thanks
00:17:505 - are u sure to just 1 note for bass ? 1note
00:21:478 - add note cymbal h okay add 1note
00:21:876 - missing note on purpose
00:27:637 - add note theres a bass now no thanks :3
00:28:432 (28432|0,28630|2,28829|4,29028|6,29226|8) - ctrl H for pitch no thanks :3
00:30:021 (30021|8,30220|6,30419|4,30617|2,30816|0) - make something like http://puu.sh/hZKSY/c9da6e87a9.png for variation and dont forget to Ctrl H for pitch this map is Keyboard map.
But AC controller, lower placement is 13579.
and looks^-^


00:32:803 - 00:33:001 - missing note cant u hear it ? >.<aa...on purpose~ there is no need to pick up all sound.
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - here too >.<
00:38:366 - this is even louder than 00:38:068 - then why 00:38:068 - its 2 note and 00:38:366 - just 1 note ?
13 and 79 = Snare
00:39:657 (39657|6,39657|8,39955|4) - ^ meeeoooow!!
00:38:763 - u even make 3 note for bass then why its just 1 ? also i hear bass there bass1 piano2 = 3 this place is not piano sound
00:42:736 (42736|3,42836|5,42935|3,43134|3,43332|6,43432|2,43531|4) - what sound actually u follow ? fix add bass note
piano ? 00:43:034 - 00:43:233 - then its was missing note keep
hithat and bass ? 00:43:432 (43432|2) - then this is ghost note. also 00:43:630 - 00:43:928 - missing note
piano

00:44:525 (44525|4,44723|6,44723|2,45121|5,45121|1,45121|7,45121|3) - Inconsisten >< 00:44:525 (44525|4) - delete this or 00:44:922 - add note here many fix
00:51:975 (51975|3,51975|5,51975|7) - 3 note and 00:51:081 - 1 note ? wow aawwwwwww
00:57:836 - this should be same with 00:58:233 (58233|0,58233|2,58233|1,58432|5,58432|3,58432|4) - sorry no change
00:58:233 - try something like http://puu.sh/hZLi0/f9b481a05b.png ... Not pleasant
01:23:117 (83117|4,83217|4,83316|4,83415|4) - yoshilove o/ aaaa nice!! koreda!! arigatou www
too tired for the rest :p
try to more improve this diff, i cant mention all of that inconsisten, missing, and ghost note[/box]

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
you can watch 9K map (Pop'n, PMS, Toy musical etc...) yey lol
thank you modding!!!

http://puu.sh/i10Gl.zip
Aste-
HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

M4M MOD

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, File inside your Folder, Comfortable Balance

[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

Setting = OK

Diff Spread = hmm... gap between normal <->Hyper are a bit wider than Hyper <-> EX, Consider to Reduce Hyper a bit to make it nicer

Timing = OK

other things = No problem Found

[MOD]

Format = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

wew.. 9K Hype~

[Normal]

00:07:173 (7173|7) - putting it there are a bit hard to press.. how about move it to 5?

00:10:153 (10153|2,10153|0) - Hard to press.. Move 00:10:153 (10153|2) - to 5

and then 00:10:551 (10551|4,10749|5,10948|6) - Make it 3-6-5 or 3-7-5 to balance it

01:25:054 (85054|8,85054|6,85054|4) - whoa.. 3 note for 1 hand? that's not very nice... make it 2-5-8

00:26:842 (26842|8) - Move it to 8.. more pressable or 00:26:842 (26842|4,26842|8) - Move it to 6 - 9

and then 00:27:041 (27041|2,27041|6) - move it to 1 - 4

00:27:438 (27438|2,27438|0) - move to 2-4 to avoid jack
and then 00:27:637 (27637|5,27637|3) - move to 3 - 7

00:41:941 (41941|1,42339|3) - Ctrl + G. make 00:41:941 (41941|0,41941|1) - same as 00:41:147 (41147|5,41147|8) - more readable.. and avioding jack from moving that

00:43:332 (43332|4,43531|3) - Move 1 Column to Right, don't break the Stair

00:48:100 (48100|3,48299|2) - Ctrl G. Consistency

if that makes it hard to press.. 00:48:100 (48100|2) - move it to 7



[Hyper]

00:16:710 (16710|7) - move it to 7. it's ok if Jacked.. cuz it's more pressable.. really

00:38:961 (38961|7) - Move it to 9.. better Flow for me

00:56:445 (56445|0,56445|4,56445|2,56445|6,56743|7,56743|3,56743|1,56743|5,57041|8,57041|2,57041|6,57041|4) - i think triple Chord Fine here.. no need for 4 Chord..
and you use 3 here 01:09:160 (69160|6,69160|4,69160|1,69458|7,69458|5,69458|2,69756|6,69756|8,69756|3) -
01:09:955 (69955|5,69955|2,69955|0,70253|6,70253|3,70253|1,70551|4,70551|7,70551|2) -

01:25:054 (85054|2,85054|6,85054|5,85054|4,85054|3) - make it 1-3-5-7-9.. hi impact here.. more suitable like that

01:25:650 (85650|3) - i hear a high impact here.. not add another note and Reduce this 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - ? cuz 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - are lower than 01:25:650 (85650|3) - and feel soo weird if you do this in this part


MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Pharos21 wrote:

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

M4M MOD

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, File inside your Folder, Comfortable Balance

[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

Setting = OK

Diff Spread = hmm... gap between normal <->Hyper are a bit wider than Hyper <-> EX, Consider to Reduce Hyper a bit to make it nicer

Timing = OK

other things = No problem Found

[MOD]

Format = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

wew.. 9K Hype~

[Hyper]

00:16:710 (16710|7) - move it to 7. it's ok if Jacked.. cuz it's more pressable.. really no change

00:38:961 (38961|7) - Move it to 9.. better Flow for me no change

00:56:445 (56445|0,56445|4,56445|2,56445|6,56743|7,56743|3,56743|1,56743|5,57041|8,57041|2,57041|6,57041|4) - i think triple Chord Fine here.. no need for 4 Chord..
and you use 3 here 01:09:160 (69160|6,69160|4,69160|1,69458|7,69458|5,69458|2,69756|6,69756|8,69756|3) -
01:09:955 (69955|5,69955|2,69955|0,70253|6,70253|3,70253|1,70551|4,70551|7,70551|2) -
hmm…ok, delete 00:56:445 (56445|6,56743|7,57041|8) -

01:25:054 (85054|2,85054|6,85054|5,85054|4,85054|3) - make it 1-3-5-7-9.. hi impact here.. more suitable like that this is made to think the feelings of the people that use the Pop'n Music controller. 1 3 5 7 9… It will be difficult to push very

01:25:650 (85650|3) - i hear a high impact here.. not add another note and Reduce this 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - ? cuz 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - are lower than 01:25:650 (85650|3) - and feel soo weird if you do this in this part changed the pattern


MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

Pharos21 wrote:

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

[Normal]

00:07:173 (7173|7) - putting it there are a bit hard to press.. how about move it to 5? no thanks

00:10:153 (10153|2,10153|0) - Hard to press.. Move 00:10:153 (10153|2) - to 5 ^

and then 00:10:551 (10551|4,10749|5,10948|6) - Make it 3-6-5 or 3-7-5 to balance it ^

01:25:054 (85054|8,85054|6,85054|4) - whoa.. 3 note for 1 hand? that's not very nice... make it 2-5-8 no thanks (2+5+8 pattern pop'n controller hard to press)

00:26:842 (26842|8) - Move it to 8.. more pressable or 00:26:842 (26842|4,26842|8) - Move it to 6 - 9 no thanks

and then 00:27:041 (27041|2,27041|6) - move it to 1 - 4 ^

00:27:438 (27438|2,27438|0) - move to 2-4 to avoid jack ^
and then 00:27:637 (27637|5,27637|3) - move to 3 - 7

00:41:941 (41941|1,42339|3) - Ctrl + G. make 00:41:941 (41941|0,41941|1) - same as 00:41:147 (41147|5,41147|8) - more readable.. and avioding jack from moving that ^

00:43:332 (43332|4,43531|3) - Move 1 Column to Right, don't break the Stair ^

00:48:100 (48100|3,48299|2) - Ctrl G. Consistency ok

if that makes it hard to press.. 00:48:100 (48100|2) - move it to 7 no thanks

MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
mod thanks
Aste-
geh.. you're not telling me that this is a pop'n style... orz
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Pharos21 wrote:

geh.. you're not telling me that this is a pop'n style... orz
oh…sorry…
Sc4v4ng3r


Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them?
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other.
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops).
  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each.
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD.

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each. no change. 00:57:835 - is big sound than 00:57:438 -
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^ ^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^ no change. 01:11:345 - is big sound than 01:10:749 -
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here. delete one note
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD. 01:29:623 (89623|1) - delete. but, does not change to LN
[/notice:1337]

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them? no thanks
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other. okay change pattern
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7 no thanks
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5. ^
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). no LN style(pop'n)

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...

GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
mod thanks
-LASU-
二重投稿すいません
schwarzvgrune
just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
it's Pop'n music style. not 8+1K style.
Pop'n music styleは159のような押し方があまり存在しない、そしてLNが少ないor全くないというスタイルです。
(Pop'n musicにはLN自体ないですが私の譜面では一箇所だけLNを入れています)
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement...
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<"
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose?
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo
00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above?
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 -


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well?


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no?


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_<

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 -

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 -
00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 -
00:08:763 - same here >w<b
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_<
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w;
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w;
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 -

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 -

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 -
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w;

01:05:981 - also here

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
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00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis no change. 00:17:107 - から拍線2本感覚で置いてるのは曲の中にあるclap soundに合わせてあるためです。ここではclap soundを含んだ場合double noteにしています
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above ^
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above? ^
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration fixed

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 - fixed


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well? lol add note


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no? fixed


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_< ok, fixed

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 - fixed

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration 階段とは違う形に変更しました

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 - double noteになっているのはcymbal soundがないためです


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Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

yoshilove wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 - yeyyy Add www /me baka
00:08:763 - same here >w<b hai !! wasureteta....
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_< okay :3
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w; aaa ok fix~
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w; It is deliberately ~ but fixed
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well ^

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 - Add ~

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 - sukoshi difficult ww, but EX diff~ add!!

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 - sorry no thanks~ 2+finish
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w; ok~ add

01:05:981 - also here sorry no thanks~

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis cymbal hear 3 2 2 3~ fix

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo ok fix~

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;
ok... remove~
thanks~~!! arigato :)
optimized for pop'n style
remove 1 5 9 and 1 4 6 9 etc~~

http://puu.sh/iqQkW.zip
-LASU-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~ Hi-(^ω^)
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo nice changed
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement... ok
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<" ^
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose? ok
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)change repattern
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo add double note 5,8
mod thanks ~ (^ω^)b
MEGAtive

Hi~ Mod here~

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[yoshilove's EX]
00:13:531 to 00:15:915 - Suggest to cover the kick as well, since 00:10:352 to 00:13:531 you cover them.
00:24:259 - Add note on either 4 or 7 for snare, since those column aren't filled yet. See 00:25:054 for reference.
00:38:763 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here because 00:38:961 are using 3 notes with same sound.
00:56:743 - 00:57:041 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here for the big impulse sound. See 00:56:445

This mapset's already look beautiful, just need some consistencies between the instruments. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet


yoshilove wrote:

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi~ Mod here~

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[yoshilove's EX]
00:13:531 to 00:15:915 - Suggest to cover the kick as well, since 00:10:352 to 00:13:531 you cover them.
sorry no change><

00:24:259 - Add note on either 4 or 7 for snare, since those column aren't filled yet. See 00:25:054 for reference.
00:25:054 = snare and guitar~ :3 00:24:259 = snare only~

00:38:763 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here because 00:38:961 are using 3 notes with same sound.
1. bass only~ 2. bass + strong piano

00:56:743 - 00:57:041 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here for the big impulse sound. See 00:56:445
Add 1 note~ thanks!!

This mapset's already look beautiful, just need some consistencies between the instruments. Good Luck~
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Edit: To avoid double posting.

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From my queue~
Not sure if I can help, the whole set looks really good imo. Your hyper diff makes me want a Pop'n controller c:

Scrub modding~~

0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8

-LASU-'s Normal

From 00:33:001 to 00:41:743 column 4 looks is empty. Perhaps you could move at least 1 or 2 notes to fill here? or if you like perhaps you could add a note to 00:35:981 (35981|5) and 00:36:180 (36180|4) since your sticking to piano here. I'm guessing your going for a mirror kind of feel here, so perhaps this is unnecessary.

01:03:597 (63597|8) - move to 1 for hand balance?
Hyper

00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3) - sound here is dominant to right ear but played with left hand. Not really a problem here but perhaps a ctrl + h of 00:46:809 (46809|2,46908|3,47206|5) + move 00:46:710 (46710|6) to 7 would fit it better? of course 00:46:710 (46710|6) - sound is on left ear so if you consider audio location...well this kinda changes the following consistency of left to right stairs as well.

told ya lol
yoshilove's Ex

My only issue with this is that 01:01:610 (61610|0,61710|1,61809|2,61908|3,62008|1,62107|2,62206|3,62306|4,62405|2,62504|3,62604|4,62703|5,62802|6) - could follow pitch better somehow. After the first 4 stairs it sounds more to the right, returning to the center. May have to rearrange the notes here if you apply this.
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