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Shinzo-
Hello Japan :v

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[General]
*Whats wrong with the Offset ? u can make it 816 since the note starts there and no SV in the begining -.-
*dont forget -LASU- in tags :v

[LASU]
00:02:008 (2008|3) - should be 00:01:909 - just like 00:02:405 (2405|5,2703|5) -
00:02:703 (2703|5) - why only this that in blue line ? i see no more 00:05:087 - here ?
00:10:551 - missing note
00:27:041 (27041|6,27041|2) - should just be 1 note since theres no bass
00:33:796 (33796|5) - ghost note
00:43:730 - please add note, its so akward
00:46:909 - here too x_x
00:57:438 (57438|5,57438|8,57637|4,57637|7,57836|3,57836|6) - try to make some balance, since this is the easiest diff
00:58:233 (58233|1,58233|7,58432|1,58432|7) - move to 1 and 9
01:05:783 (65783|1,65783|3) - MUST delete one of it for consisntecy and move to 5
01:06:379 (66379|6,66379|8,66776|7,67174|6,67174|8) - 01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - please this is normal why no its so heavy in the right ?
01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - just move this 6 column to left <_<
01:19:293 (79293|8,79889|8,80087|8) - see ? again and again its heavy in the right. u can move them to 5
01:21:478 (81478|6,81478|3) - delete one of it. no bass
01:22:670 - add note bass




[Hyper]
OK theres so many thing that harder than yoshi's diff. maybe cause of some missing and Inconsistent in yoshi's diff

00:03:995 - 3 note and the EX just 2 note haha :v
00:03:995 - what sound actually u follow ?
*piano ? 00:04:789 - 00:05:385 - then this is a missing note
*hithat ? 00:04:392 - 00:04:988 - 00:05:286 - 00:05:385 - 00:05:485 - 00:05:683 - then this is missing note too
00:15:419 (15419|3) - ghost note if follow the current note :v
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - missing note if follow the piano
00:42:935 (42935|5,43034|1,43134|6,43233|2,43332|7,43432|3,43531|8,43630|4) - this is even harder than EX
00:44:525 (44525|5,44525|3,44723|7,44723|1,44723|4) - ^
00:47:902 (47902|1,47902|6,47902|7) - shold delete one of it for consistency
00:48:101 (48101|2,48101|5) - ^
00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|1,58233|3,58432|1,58432|7,58432|5,58432|3,58630|4) - harder than EX
01:22:670 (82670|2,82720|4,82770|6,83068|3,83068|5,83266|4,83266|2) - akward =w= please follow all of those bass
01:23:465 (83465|7,83465|1,83465|3,83465|5,83664|7,83664|3,83664|1,83664|5) - 4 note and EX just 2 note ! hahahaha xD
01:26:246 (86246|5,86644|4,87041|5) - feels so akward, please add note for the hithat 01:26:445 - 01:26:842 - 01:27:240 - 01:27:637 - here
01:28:630 (88630|8,88630|6) - should delete one of it



[yoshi]
00:01:164 - hear something here but nvm ....
00:03:001 - missing note
00:06:279 (6279|7) - this is same with 00:06:379 (6379|3,6379|1,6577|4,6577|2) -
00:06:776 (6776|3,6776|5,6776|8,6776|0) - whats make them 4 ? -.-
and also... 00:06:975 (6975|1,6975|4,6975|7) - this is louder than that ^
00:07:372 (7372|4,7571|7,7770|5,7968|6) - should be 4 note for consistency
00:12:339 (12339|1,12538|2) - ctrl G ? for pitch
00:15:915 (15915|1,15915|8,15915|3,15915|5) - should be same with 00:16:114 -
00:16:114 - what's make this same with 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|5,16313|3,16511|3,16511|1,16511|5) - this ? the sound is diffrent 00:16:114 - bass and 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|3,16313|5,16511|3,16511|5,16511|1) - bass & piano
so...00:16:313 - 00:16:511 - add note or 00:16:114 (16114|6,16114|4,16114|2) - delete one of this
00:17:505 - are u sure to just 1 note for bass ?
00:21:478 - add note cymbal
00:21:876 - missing note
00:27:637 - add note theres a bass now
00:28:432 (28432|0,28630|2,28829|4,29028|6,29226|8) - ctrl H for pitch
00:30:021 (30021|8,30220|6,30419|4,30617|2,30816|0) - make something like http://puu.sh/hZKSY/c9da6e87a9.png for variation and dont forget to Ctrl H for pitch
00:32:803 - 00:33:001 - missing note cant u hear it ? >.<
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - here too >.<
00:38:366 - this is even louder than 00:38:068 - then why 00:38:068 - its 2 note and 00:38:366 - just 1 note ?
00:39:657 (39657|6,39657|8,39955|4) - ^
00:38:763 - u even make 3 note for bass then why its just 1 ? also i hear bass there
00:42:736 (42736|3,42836|5,42935|3,43134|3,43332|6,43432|2,43531|4) - what sound actually u follow ?
piano ? 00:43:034 - 00:43:233 - then its was missing note
hithat and bass ? 00:43:432 (43432|2) - then this is ghost note. also 00:43:630 - 00:43:928 - missing note
00:44:525 (44525|4,44723|6,44723|2,45121|5,45121|1,45121|7,45121|3) - Inconsisten >< 00:44:525 (44525|4) - delete this or 00:44:922 - add note here
00:51:975 (51975|3,51975|5,51975|7) - 3 note and 00:51:081 - 1 note ? wow
00:57:836 - this should be same with 00:58:233 (58233|0,58233|2,58233|1,58432|5,58432|3,58432|4) -
00:58:233 - try something like http://puu.sh/hZLi0/f9b481a05b.png
01:23:117 (83117|4,83217|4,83316|4,83415|4) - yoshilove o/
too tired for the rest :p
try to more improve this diff, i cant mention all of that inconsisten, missing, and ghost note

9K Hype !

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Shinzo- wrote:

Hello Japan :v

MOD READY


Mod by Request

Requested byRuberusuScarlet


9K

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[General]
*Whats wrong with the Offset ? u can make it 816 since the note starts there and no SV in the begining -.- I'm going to change the later all of diff
*dont forget -LASU- in tags :v ok

[Hyper]
OK theres so many thing that harder than yoshi's diff. maybe cause of some missing and Inconsistent in yoshi's diff

00:03:995 - 3 note and the EX just 2 note haha :v
00:03:995 - what sound actually u follow ? follow : piano, cymbal and Bell = 3notes
*piano ? 00:04:789 - 00:05:385 - then this is a missing note fixed
*hithat ? 00:04:392 - 00:04:988 - 00:05:286 - 00:05:385 - 00:05:485 - 00:05:683 - then this is missing note too no change. no follow hihat
00:15:419 (15419|3) - ghost note if follow the current note :v no change. no ghost note
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - missing note if follow the piano
00:42:935 (42935|5,43034|1,43134|6,43233|2,43332|7,43432|3,43531|8,43630|4) - this is even harder than EX no change
00:44:525 (44525|5,44525|3,44723|7,44723|1,44723|4) - ^ no change
00:47:902 (47902|1,47902|6,47902|7) - shold delete one of it for consistency no delete. but, changed the placement of the note
00:48:101 (48101|2,48101|5) - ^ no change. follow bell and drum
00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|1,58233|3,58432|1,58432|7,58432|5,58432|3,58630|4) - harder than EX no change
01:22:670 (82670|2,82720|4,82770|6,83068|3,83068|5,83266|4,83266|2) - akward =w= please follow all of those bass fixed
01:23:465 (83465|7,83465|1,83465|3,83465|5,83664|7,83664|3,83664|1,83664|5) - 4 note and EX just 2 note ! hahahaha xD no change.
01:26:246 (86246|5,86644|4,87041|5) - feels so akward, please add note for the hithat 01:26:445 - 01:26:842 - 01:27:240 - 01:27:637 - here no change
01:28:630 (88630|8,88630|6) - should delete one of it no change

9K Hype !

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

Shinzo- wrote:

Hello Japan :v

MOD READY


Mod by Request

Requested byRuberusuScarlet


9K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9]

[General]
*Whats wrong with the Offset ? u can make it 816 since the note starts there and no SV in the begining -.-
*dont forget -LASU- in tags :v

[LASU]
00:02:008 (2008|3) - should be 00:01:909 - just like 00:02:405 (2405|5,2703|5) - ok
00:02:703 (2703|5) - why only this that in blue line ? i see no more 00:05:087 - here ? ^
00:10:551 - missing note add note 5
00:27:041 (27041|6,27041|2) - should just be 1 note since theres no bass no thanks
00:33:796 (33796|5) - ghost notenot ghost note
00:43:730 - please add note, its so akward ok
00:46:909 - here too x_x ^
00:57:438 (57438|5,57438|8,57637|4,57637|7,57836|3,57836|6) - try to make some balance, since this is the easiest diff change pattern
00:58:233 (58233|1,58233|7,58432|1,58432|7) - move to 1 and 9 ^
01:05:783 (65783|1,65783|3) - MUST delete one of it for consisntecy and move to 5 ^
01:06:379 (66379|6,66379|8,66776|7,67174|6,67174|8) - 01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - please this is normal why no its so heavy in the right ? ^
01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - just move this 6 column to left <_< ^
01:19:293 (79293|8,79889|8,80087|8) - see ? again and again its heavy in the right. u can move them to 5 ^
01:21:478 (81478|6,81478|3) - delete one of it. no bass no thanks
01:22:670 - add note bass ^

9K Hype !

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
mod thanks

Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

yoshilove wrote:

Shinzo- wrote:

Hello Japan :v

[yoshi]
00:01:164 - hear something here but nvm .... on purpose
00:03:001 - missing note no...hear please
00:06:279 (6279|7) - this is same with 00:06:379 (6379|3,6379|1,6577|4,6577|2) - color=#BF00FF]Drum sound>< hear please[/color]
00:06:776 (6776|3,6776|5,6776|8,6776|0) - whats make them 4 ? -.- ww nice change it~ 2~ 3~ 4 yey
and also... 00:06:975 (6975|1,6975|4,6975|7) - this is louder than that ^

00:07:372 (7372|4,7571|7,7770|5,7968|6) - should be 4 note for consistency no thanks :3
00:12:339 (12339|1,12538|2) - ctrl G ? for pitch aa okay change
00:15:915 (15915|1,15915|8,15915|3,15915|5) - should be same with 00:16:114 - no thanks :3
00:16:114 - what's make this same with 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|5,16313|3,16511|3,16511|1,16511|5) - this ? the sound is diffrent 00:16:114 - bass and 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|3,16313|5,16511|3,16511|5,16511|1) - bass & piano
so...00:16:313 - 00:16:511 - add note or 00:16:114 (16114|6,16114|4,16114|2) - delete one of this
sorry no thanks
00:17:505 - are u sure to just 1 note for bass ? 1note
00:21:478 - add note cymbal h okay add 1note
00:21:876 - missing note on purpose
00:27:637 - add note theres a bass now no thanks :3
00:28:432 (28432|0,28630|2,28829|4,29028|6,29226|8) - ctrl H for pitch no thanks :3
00:30:021 (30021|8,30220|6,30419|4,30617|2,30816|0) - make something like http://puu.sh/hZKSY/c9da6e87a9.png for variation and dont forget to Ctrl H for pitch this map is Keyboard map.
But AC controller, lower placement is 13579.
and looks^-^


00:32:803 - 00:33:001 - missing note cant u hear it ? >.<aa...on purpose~ there is no need to pick up all sound.
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - here too >.<
00:38:366 - this is even louder than 00:38:068 - then why 00:38:068 - its 2 note and 00:38:366 - just 1 note ?
13 and 79 = Snare
00:39:657 (39657|6,39657|8,39955|4) - ^ meeeoooow!!
00:38:763 - u even make 3 note for bass then why its just 1 ? also i hear bass there bass1 piano2 = 3 this place is not piano sound
00:42:736 (42736|3,42836|5,42935|3,43134|3,43332|6,43432|2,43531|4) - what sound actually u follow ? fix add bass note
piano ? 00:43:034 - 00:43:233 - then its was missing note keep
hithat and bass ? 00:43:432 (43432|2) - then this is ghost note. also 00:43:630 - 00:43:928 - missing note
piano

00:44:525 (44525|4,44723|6,44723|2,45121|5,45121|1,45121|7,45121|3) - Inconsisten >< 00:44:525 (44525|4) - delete this or 00:44:922 - add note here many fix
00:51:975 (51975|3,51975|5,51975|7) - 3 note and 00:51:081 - 1 note ? wow aawwwwwww
00:57:836 - this should be same with 00:58:233 (58233|0,58233|2,58233|1,58432|5,58432|3,58432|4) - sorry no change
00:58:233 - try something like http://puu.sh/hZLi0/f9b481a05b.png ... Not pleasant
01:23:117 (83117|4,83217|4,83316|4,83415|4) - yoshilove o/ aaaa nice!! koreda!! arigatou www
too tired for the rest :p
try to more improve this diff, i cant mention all of that inconsisten, missing, and ghost note[/box]

Thats from me #_#
Good Luck all ;););)
you can watch 9K map (Pop'n, PMS, Toy musical etc...) yey lol
thank you modding!!!

http://puu.sh/i10Gl.zip
Aste-
HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

M4M MOD

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, File inside your Folder, Comfortable Balance

[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

Setting = OK

Diff Spread = hmm... gap between normal <->Hyper are a bit wider than Hyper <-> EX, Consider to Reduce Hyper a bit to make it nicer

Timing = OK

other things = No problem Found

[MOD]

Format = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

wew.. 9K Hype~

[Normal]

00:07:173 (7173|7) - putting it there are a bit hard to press.. how about move it to 5?

00:10:153 (10153|2,10153|0) - Hard to press.. Move 00:10:153 (10153|2) - to 5

and then 00:10:551 (10551|4,10749|5,10948|6) - Make it 3-6-5 or 3-7-5 to balance it

01:25:054 (85054|8,85054|6,85054|4) - whoa.. 3 note for 1 hand? that's not very nice... make it 2-5-8

00:26:842 (26842|8) - Move it to 8.. more pressable or 00:26:842 (26842|4,26842|8) - Move it to 6 - 9

and then 00:27:041 (27041|2,27041|6) - move it to 1 - 4

00:27:438 (27438|2,27438|0) - move to 2-4 to avoid jack
and then 00:27:637 (27637|5,27637|3) - move to 3 - 7

00:41:941 (41941|1,42339|3) - Ctrl + G. make 00:41:941 (41941|0,41941|1) - same as 00:41:147 (41147|5,41147|8) - more readable.. and avioding jack from moving that

00:43:332 (43332|4,43531|3) - Move 1 Column to Right, don't break the Stair

00:48:100 (48100|3,48299|2) - Ctrl G. Consistency

if that makes it hard to press.. 00:48:100 (48100|2) - move it to 7



[Hyper]

00:16:710 (16710|7) - move it to 7. it's ok if Jacked.. cuz it's more pressable.. really

00:38:961 (38961|7) - Move it to 9.. better Flow for me

00:56:445 (56445|0,56445|4,56445|2,56445|6,56743|7,56743|3,56743|1,56743|5,57041|8,57041|2,57041|6,57041|4) - i think triple Chord Fine here.. no need for 4 Chord..
and you use 3 here 01:09:160 (69160|6,69160|4,69160|1,69458|7,69458|5,69458|2,69756|6,69756|8,69756|3) -
01:09:955 (69955|5,69955|2,69955|0,70253|6,70253|3,70253|1,70551|4,70551|7,70551|2) -

01:25:054 (85054|2,85054|6,85054|5,85054|4,85054|3) - make it 1-3-5-7-9.. hi impact here.. more suitable like that

01:25:650 (85650|3) - i hear a high impact here.. not add another note and Reduce this 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - ? cuz 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - are lower than 01:25:650 (85650|3) - and feel soo weird if you do this in this part


MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Pharos21 wrote:

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

M4M MOD

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, File inside your Folder, Comfortable Balance

[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

Setting = OK

Diff Spread = hmm... gap between normal <->Hyper are a bit wider than Hyper <-> EX, Consider to Reduce Hyper a bit to make it nicer

Timing = OK

other things = No problem Found

[MOD]

Format = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

wew.. 9K Hype~

[Hyper]

00:16:710 (16710|7) - move it to 7. it's ok if Jacked.. cuz it's more pressable.. really no change

00:38:961 (38961|7) - Move it to 9.. better Flow for me no change

00:56:445 (56445|0,56445|4,56445|2,56445|6,56743|7,56743|3,56743|1,56743|5,57041|8,57041|2,57041|6,57041|4) - i think triple Chord Fine here.. no need for 4 Chord..
and you use 3 here 01:09:160 (69160|6,69160|4,69160|1,69458|7,69458|5,69458|2,69756|6,69756|8,69756|3) -
01:09:955 (69955|5,69955|2,69955|0,70253|6,70253|3,70253|1,70551|4,70551|7,70551|2) -
hmm…ok, delete 00:56:445 (56445|6,56743|7,57041|8) -

01:25:054 (85054|2,85054|6,85054|5,85054|4,85054|3) - make it 1-3-5-7-9.. hi impact here.. more suitable like that this is made to think the feelings of the people that use the Pop'n Music controller. 1 3 5 7 9… It will be difficult to push very

01:25:650 (85650|3) - i hear a high impact here.. not add another note and Reduce this 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - ? cuz 01:25:451 (85451|1,85451|4) - are lower than 01:25:650 (85650|3) - and feel soo weird if you do this in this part changed the pattern


MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

Pharos21 wrote:

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

[Normal]

00:07:173 (7173|7) - putting it there are a bit hard to press.. how about move it to 5? no thanks

00:10:153 (10153|2,10153|0) - Hard to press.. Move 00:10:153 (10153|2) - to 5 ^

and then 00:10:551 (10551|4,10749|5,10948|6) - Make it 3-6-5 or 3-7-5 to balance it ^

01:25:054 (85054|8,85054|6,85054|4) - whoa.. 3 note for 1 hand? that's not very nice... make it 2-5-8 no thanks (2+5+8 pattern pop'n controller hard to press)

00:26:842 (26842|8) - Move it to 8.. more pressable or 00:26:842 (26842|4,26842|8) - Move it to 6 - 9 no thanks

and then 00:27:041 (27041|2,27041|6) - move it to 1 - 4 ^

00:27:438 (27438|2,27438|0) - move to 2-4 to avoid jack ^
and then 00:27:637 (27637|5,27637|3) - move to 3 - 7

00:41:941 (41941|1,42339|3) - Ctrl + G. make 00:41:941 (41941|0,41941|1) - same as 00:41:147 (41147|5,41147|8) - more readable.. and avioding jack from moving that ^

00:43:332 (43332|4,43531|3) - Move 1 Column to Right, don't break the Stair ^

00:48:100 (48100|3,48299|2) - Ctrl G. Consistency ok

if that makes it hard to press.. 00:48:100 (48100|2) - move it to 7 no thanks

MO Done

That's all i can do.. cuz MX are out of my Reach ehehe~

GL
mod thanks
Aste-
geh.. you're not telling me that this is a pop'n style... orz
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

Pharos21 wrote:

geh.. you're not telling me that this is a pop'n style... orz
oh…sorry…
Sc4v4ng3r


Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them?
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other.
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops).
  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each.
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here.
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD.

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:57:835 (57835|8,57835|3,57835|2,57835|6) - Doesn't need 4 notes each. no change. 00:57:835 - is big sound than 00:57:438 -
  2. 00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|3,58233|1,58431|1,58431|7,58431|5,58431|3) - ^^ ^
  3. 01:11:345 (71345|8,71345|0,71345|2,71345|6) - ^^ no change. 01:11:345 - is big sound than 01:10:749 -
  4. 01:25:054 (85054|4,85054|3,85054|2,85054|6,85054|5) - I think 5 notes is way too much... It is not like there are loud instruments here. delete one note
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|7,89623|1,89623|3,89623|5) - Just a suggestion, but these could be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). You may also remove 1 note just like my reasons above.
    Honestly speaking, I don't think there should be 4 notes at 1 time point for Hyper/HD. 01:29:623 (89623|1) - delete. but, does not change to LN
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That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...
GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!mod thanks ~ ><)/
-LASU-

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Hi there~ I am 100% positive that I won't be able to clear a single 9K map until I die You may not give me kudos, as this is my first time modding 9K, and I suck at higher keys :/

Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


  1. 00:29:226 (29226|1,30815|0) - I don't really hear any instruments fitting these 2 notes. Maybe remove them? no thanks
  2. 00:54:061 (54061|8,54359|5,54657|3) - My opinion, but I think these notes should be closer to each other. okay change pattern
  3. 01:04:392 - I think there could be a circle at column @7 no thanks
  4. 01:20:087 (80087|4) - I think this note should be moved to either column @3 or @5. ^
  5. 01:29:623 (89623|1,89623|5) - Can be hold notes till 01:32:405 (where the electric guitar stops). no LN style(pop'n)

That is all for me. Sorry if this didn't help you out much :/ Don't give me kudos if that was the case...

GL! 1st 9K ranked mapset hype!
mod thanks
-LASU-
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schwarzvgrune
just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

just to be sure, this is not 8k+1k mode right? a real 4k 1k 4k mode?
i'll mod after i know this. sorry i cant help much if it's 8k+1k
it's Pop'n music style. not 8+1K style.
Pop'n music styleは159のような押し方があまり存在しない、そしてLNが少ないor全くないというスタイルです。
(Pop'n musicにはLN自体ないですが私の譜面では一箇所だけLNを入れています)
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement...
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<"
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose?
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo
00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above?
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 -


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well?


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no?


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_<

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 -

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 -
00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 -
00:08:763 - same here >w<b
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_<
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w;
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w;
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 -

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 -

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 -
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w;

01:05:981 - also here

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)?i trust you of course for metadata so i don't check >_<
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


00:17:703 - add a note here? suits better with an extra piano emphasis no change. 00:17:107 - から拍線2本感覚で置いてるのは曲の中にあるclap soundに合わせてあるためです。ここではclap soundを含んだ場合double noteにしています
00:18:498 (18498|5,18895|4) - ^ same as above ^
00:24:061 (24061|2,24458|1,24855|1,25253|3) - how about using 2 as well for same reason above? ^
atm i know that you're following the beat with 2 notes and the rest with 1,
but using 2 as well imo wiould be better in terms of layering, no?

00:25:650 (25650|7,25749|6,25849|5,25948|4,26047|3,26147|2) - wrong placing, ctrl H and drag 1x to left. PR consideration fixed

00:36:577 - use 2 notes here just like 00:35:782 - fixed


00:36:776 - 00:36:974 - why not express this piano here as well? lol add note


00:39:955 (39955|2,40153|5) - same with 00:38:365 (38365|3,38365|7,38564|2,38564|6) - no? fixed


00:50:385 (50385|7,50385|4) - 2 here
00:51:974 (51974|7,51974|2,51974|5) - yet 3 here?
same emphasis, make it consistent >_< ok, fixed

00:58:630 (58630|4) - i think this starts at 00:58:431 - fixed

01:01:610 (61610|5,61710|6,61809|7,61908|8,62405|5,62504|6,62604|7,62703|8) - reverse the stairs, PR consideration 階段とは違う形に変更しました

01:17:504 - use 3 here, same exact emphasis with 01:17:703 - double noteになっているのはcymbal soundがないためです


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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mod thanks ~
Topic Starter
RuberusuScarlet

yoshilove wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

00:03:994 - use 4 notes here, same emphasis with 00:07:173 - yeyyy Add www /me baka
00:08:763 - same here >w<b hai !! wasureteta....
00:22:272 (22272|7,22272|2,22670|5,22670|3) - same emphasis with 00:21:478 - so make it consistent please >_< okay :3
00:23:067 - 3 notes enough here, doesn't make any sense to use 4 since earlier 4 has more emphasis ;w; aaa ok fix~
00:33:001 - audible piano sound, why omitted here ;w; It is deliberately ~ but fixed
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - these here as well ^

00:51:676 - 00:52:272 - use 4 notes here, clear different emphasis with 00:51:974 - Add ~

00:56:445 - use 3 or 2 notes here.... very loud beat. yet you use 3 here 00:53:266 - sukoshi difficult ww, but EX diff~ add!!

01:00:815 - use 3, same emphasis with 00:59:623 - sorry no thanks~ 2+finish
01:02:802 - 3 here.... emphasis on beat ;w; ok~ add

01:05:981 - also here sorry no thanks~

01:17:504 (77504|6,77504|8,77703|5,77703|3) - this should have 3 notes just like 01:17:107 - same exact emphasis cymbal hear 3 2 2 3~ fix

01:25:849 - 01:26:643 - utilising 2 notes here would make more sense imo ok fix~

01:21:279 (81279|8,81378|7,81478|6,81577|5,81676|4,81776|3,81875|2) - i cannot see which sound you're representing here ;w;
ok... remove~
thanks~~!! arigato :)
optimized for pop'n style
remove 1 5 9 and 1 4 6 9 etc~~

http://puu.sh/iqQkW.zip
-LASU-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~ Hi-(^ω^)
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo nice changed
http://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png
00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement... ok
00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<" ^
00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose? ok
01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo :)change repattern
01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo add double note 5,8
mod thanks ~ (^ω^)b
MEGAtive

Hi~ Mod here~

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

Column
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[yoshilove's EX]
00:13:531 to 00:15:915 - Suggest to cover the kick as well, since 00:10:352 to 00:13:531 you cover them.
00:24:259 - Add note on either 4 or 7 for snare, since those column aren't filled yet. See 00:25:054 for reference.
00:38:763 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here because 00:38:961 are using 3 notes with same sound.
00:56:743 - 00:57:041 - Suggest to add 2 more notes here for the big impulse sound. See 00:56:445

This mapset's already look beautiful, just need some consistencies between the instruments. Good Luck~
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