[General]
*Whats wrong with the Offset ? u can make it 816 since the note starts there and no SV in the begining -.-
*dont forget -LASU- in tags :v
[LASU]
00:02:008 (2008|3) - should be 00:01:909 - just like 00:02:405 (2405|5,2703|5) -
00:02:703 (2703|5) - why only this that in blue line ? i see no more 00:05:087 - here ?
00:10:551 - missing note
00:27:041 (27041|6,27041|2) - should just be 1 note since theres no bass
00:33:796 (33796|5) - ghost note
00:43:730 - please add note, its so akward
00:46:909 - here too x_x
00:57:438 (57438|5,57438|8,57637|4,57637|7,57836|3,57836|6) - try to make some balance, since this is the easiest diff
00:58:233 (58233|1,58233|7,58432|1,58432|7) - move to 1 and 9
01:05:783 (65783|1,65783|3) - MUST delete one of it for consisntecy and move to 5
01:06:379 (66379|6,66379|8,66776|7,67174|6,67174|8) - 01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - please this is normal why no its so heavy in the right ?
01:07:968 (67968|6,67968|8,68366|7,68763|6,68763|8) - just move this 6 column to left <_<
01:19:293 (79293|8,79889|8,80087|8) - see ? again and again its heavy in the right. u can move them to 5
01:21:478 (81478|6,81478|3) - delete one of it. no bass
01:22:670 - add note bass
[Hyper]
OK theres so many thing that harder than yoshi's diff. maybe cause of some missing and Inconsistent in yoshi's diff00:03:995 - 3 note and the EX just 2 note haha :v
00:03:995 - what sound actually u follow ?
*piano ? 00:04:789 - 00:05:385 - then this is a missing note
*hithat ? 00:04:392 - 00:04:988 - 00:05:286 - 00:05:385 - 00:05:485 - 00:05:683 - then this is missing note too
00:15:419 (15419|3) - ghost note if follow the current note :v
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - missing note if follow the piano
00:42:935 (42935|5,43034|1,43134|6,43233|2,43332|7,43432|3,43531|8,43630|4) - this is even harder than EX
00:44:525 (44525|5,44525|3,44723|7,44723|1,44723|4) - ^
00:47:902 (47902|1,47902|6,47902|7) - shold delete one of it for consistency
00:48:101 (48101|2,48101|5) - ^
00:58:233 (58233|7,58233|5,58233|1,58233|3,58432|1,58432|7,58432|5,58432|3,58630|4) - harder than EX
01:22:670 (82670|2,82720|4,82770|6,83068|3,83068|5,83266|4,83266|2) - akward =w= please follow all of those bass
01:23:465 (83465|7,83465|1,83465|3,83465|5,83664|7,83664|3,83664|1,83664|5) - 4 note and EX just 2 note ! hahahaha xD
01:26:246 (86246|5,86644|4,87041|5) - feels so akward, please add note for the hithat 01:26:445 - 01:26:842 - 01:27:240 - 01:27:637 - here
01:28:630 (88630|8,88630|6) - should delete one of it
[yoshi]
00:01:164 - hear something here but nvm ....
00:03:001 - missing note
00:06:279 (6279|7) - this is same with 00:06:379 (6379|3,6379|1,6577|4,6577|2) -
00:06:776 (6776|3,6776|5,6776|8,6776|0) - whats make them 4 ? -.-
and also... 00:06:975 (6975|1,6975|4,6975|7) - this is louder than that ^
00:07:372 (7372|4,7571|7,7770|5,7968|6) - should be 4 note for consistency
00:12:339 (12339|1,12538|2) - ctrl G ? for pitch
00:15:915 (15915|1,15915|8,15915|3,15915|5) - should be same with 00:16:114 -
00:16:114 - what's make this same with 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|5,16313|3,16511|3,16511|1,16511|5) - this ? the sound is diffrent 00:16:114 - bass and 00:16:313 (16313|1,16313|3,16313|5,16511|3,16511|5,16511|1) - bass & piano
so...00:16:313 - 00:16:511 - add note or 00:16:114 (16114|6,16114|4,16114|2) - delete one of this
00:17:505 - are u sure to just 1 note for bass ?
00:21:478 - add note cymbal
00:21:876 - missing note
00:27:637 - add note theres a bass now
00:28:432 (28432|0,28630|2,28829|4,29028|6,29226|8) - ctrl H for pitch
00:30:021 (30021|8,30220|6,30419|4,30617|2,30816|0) - make something like
http://puu.sh/hZKSY/c9da6e87a9.png for variation and dont forget to Ctrl H for pitch
00:32:803 - 00:33:001 - missing note cant u hear it ? >.<
00:35:981 - 00:36:180 - here too >.<
00:38:366 - this is even louder than 00:38:068 - then why 00:38:068 - its 2 note and 00:38:366 - just 1 note ?
00:39:657 (39657|6,39657|8,39955|4) - ^
00:38:763 - u even make 3 note for bass then why its just 1 ? also i hear bass there
00:42:736 (42736|3,42836|5,42935|3,43134|3,43332|6,43432|2,43531|4) - what sound actually u follow ?
piano ? 00:43:034 - 00:43:233 - then its was missing note
hithat and bass ? 00:43:432 (43432|2) - then this is ghost note. also 00:43:630 - 00:43:928 - missing note
00:44:525 (44525|4,44723|6,44723|2,45121|5,45121|1,45121|7,45121|3) - Inconsisten >< 00:44:525 (44525|4) - delete this or 00:44:922 - add note here
00:51:975 (51975|3,51975|5,51975|7) - 3 note and 00:51:081 - 1 note ? wow
00:57:836 - this should be same with 00:58:233 (58233|0,58233|2,58233|1,58432|5,58432|3,58432|4) -
00:58:233 - try something like
http://puu.sh/hZLi0/f9b481a05b.png01:23:117 (83117|4,83217|4,83316|4,83415|4) - yoshilove o/
too tired for the rest :p
try to more improve this diff, i cant mention all of that inconsisten, missing, and ghost note