i think this is better, vary the pattern? since this is not a song where you should take particular attention to PR all of the time, varying the pattern would be better imo
nice changedhttp://puu.sh/iqER1/01a05ff125.png00:27:438 (27438|0,27438|7,27438|2,27637|3,27637|5) - reverse the placement...
ok00:27:637 - should be 3 here instead of two.... end note emphasis >_<"
^00:28:431 (28431|8,28630|6,28829|5,29027|3,29226|1,30021|7,30219|5,30418|4,30617|2,30815|0) - ctrl H, PR... you make it backward on purpose?
ok01:12:736 (72736|3,72736|6,73133|5,73531|3,73531|6,73928|5,74325|3,74325|6) - care to vary the pattern? a lot of placing for 9k varying the placement would be better esp for newbie imo
change repattern01:17:703 - add 2 note here? better layering imo
add double note 5,8