1. Nightmare (5.32 stars, 1317 notes)

1. 考虑custom color
2. 考虑加"Touhou Project" "Komeiji Satori"(没有下划线) 进tag

1. 00:29:132 (2) - 考虑到这里有个加速的slider, 可以不用stack 这样也避免了00:29:304 (3,4) - 的stack迷惑节奏 建议128|336
2. 00:50:732 (1,2) - 为什么两个重音反而stack? o.o (后面很多也是)
3. 01:08:218 (6,1,2,3,4) - 感觉比较卡手 考虑一下这样的排列? *http://puu.sh/hXg4b/5ed066fcd6.jpg
4. 01:22:790 (2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉节奏有点迷惑人 考虑连着前面的1这样放? *http://puu.sh/hXgaz/6c90f31a62.jpg
5. 01:33:590 (2,3,4,5) - 这里以及后面所有类似的节奏,都不建议把01:34:104 (4,5) - stack, 因为这里的鼓声给人的感觉是很跳跃的 加上你2 3 4都用了大跳, 这里不stack并且摆比较远一点可以更符合鼓的跳跃感 并且不会让人感觉到很突然的停下来 (类似的地方: 01:44:218 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:49:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
6. 01:40:104 (1,2,3,4) - ;w;..直到进了editor我才能看懂这里的节奏.. 考虑这种 *http://puu.sh/hXgil/30e659c0b4.jpg
7. 02:38:732 (6) - NC? 因为02:45:590 (1,2) - 这里你NC了
8. 02:48:161 (5) - 02:50:904 (4) - 02:53:647 (4) - 02:56:390 (4) - 02:59:132 (7) - 03:01:875 (5) - 03:04:618 (4) - 03:07:361 (6) - NC 因为你前面一部分(1分多钟的地方)所有的有这个音效的note都有NC..
9. 03:22:961 (1,1,1,1) - 怎么好像每个之间的距离没统一(
10. 03:54:504 (1,2,3) - 好激烈的滑条 这里放这么进感觉好没激情
    
11. 后面没什么了 不过从04:50:732开始到最后感觉比前面的段落明显的难了一点 不知道是不是错觉?

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

如果你觉得我就是0rank新人，那恭喜你的观点完全正确。
没错，我就是1年都没有rank的新人。

ctpsky wrote:

[ Abhor ] wrote:

4anke wrote:

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[*]02:06:847 - 这明明有音，不喜欢强行二连，要二连的话就跟02:12:161 (1,2,1,2) - 一样系统的一组组下 ;w;真的不行吗？我觉得这里二连相对更好突出一些，下面的也一样…… 其他的都改了……

Regraz wrote:

letterbox during breaks用不用关啊 好像不用？
00:54:761 这个太弱了 不建议三连 应该没问题
01:34:275 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 突然用小间距感觉不太好 后面这段真是场读图风暴 不会很难读啊……
04:25:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉flow太弯了，平滑一点会好打一些。 没太明白要怎么平滑……

1. 柑橘前面音效有点乱...可以用心下下音效

1. 00:10:961 (1,2,1,2) - 这几个音量逐渐降低怎样
2. 00:21:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
3. 00:28:790 (1) - 为什么这一段是1.0x?前后都是0.75x啊;而且这之前的音效可以小声点儿，变化一下
4. 00:45:247 (1) - 这里开始的一段跳我自己摆了一下,看看如何(个人意见)
   
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5. 00:50:732 (1) - ^ ,自己摆了一下
   
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6. 01:05:304 (2,3) - 交换一下变成跳?
7. 01:33:590 (2,3,4,5,1) - 有点儿挤不是吗?这样呢...
   
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8. 02:29:475 (1) - blanket
9. 02:33:247 (5) - 有点难看，往上移一点吧
10. 03:07:018 (4,5) - 可以交换一下，不喜欢单纯绕圈的跳
11. 03:19:990 (1,2,1) - 这种梗玩着难受，不如摆三角
12. 03:25:475 (1,2,1) - ^
13. 04:50:047 - 这里还是30%左右的小音量比较好吧

• 00:02:047 (3) - 根据音乐，挪到212,148或者34放个小跳

1. 00:02:218 (4,1,2) - 比较坑，可以保持一致的ds，在00:03:590 (1,2,3) - 再进行ds变动
2. 01:22:275 (1,1,2,3) - 同上
3. 00:29:647 (4) - 可以试下去掉一个圈改折返
4. 01:59:304 (1,2) - 底音auto下finish，因为这段kiai后边用了三段听起来不错，前边最好保持一致
5. 02:27:932 (8) - 去掉，然后前后最好拉开距离
6. 02:33:247 (5,6,7,1) - 改法同上，节奏上可以跟随音乐跳过红线下二连，类似的不再提
7. 02:44:561 (1,2) - 这个地方前后分配不太合理，容易掉，建议拉近些
8. 美丽

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1. looks fine

1. 00:24:504 (5,1) - place like this ? so it would make flow here 00:23:990 (3,4,5,1,2) - a bit nice imo
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2. 00:45:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't know why you use so much circles on not so intense part like this well it play a bit pretty awkward here imo so I suggest you to convert some circles to sliders here , a lots of circles on not intense part like this is not really good
3. 00:56:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
4. 01:23:047 - add circle here ? so rhythm here will play a bit better 01:22:790 (2,3,1) -
5. 01:40:104 (1) - why 1/8 slider here I can't hear any 1/8 thing here , only 1/2 slider would be enough now
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6. 01:42:332 (1,2,3) - uhh why spacing is a bit inconsistent with 01:31:361 (1,2,3) - ,01:36:847 (1,2,3) - spacing should be all same here imo since the sound of beat is quite similiar
7. 01:51:075 (1,2,3) - why using high spacing on beat that not sound emphasized ? it play pretty awkward here imo , spacing should be a bit lower to make sense with music here imo
8. 01:53:647 (7,1) - maybe you can give some angle here a bit so flow here would be a bit better , current one feel a bit awkward imo , try move 01:53:818 (1) - to around x320 y212
9. 02:06:932 - add circle here ? that would make rhythm here 02:06:675 (4,5,6) - play a bit better imo
10. 02:12:675 (3) - nc for sv change ?
11. 02:13:361 (3,4) - sound overmapped on 1/4 :C
12. 02:16:104 (3,4) - ^
13. 02:18:161 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8 is pretty overmapped here a 1/4 stream should be enough now here
14. 02:23:647 (1) - this should snap to 1/4 , I can't hear 1/8 beat
15. 02:30:847 (1) - place this at around x316 y280 ? current one transition and flow is a bit awkward here 02:30:675 (5,1) - imo
16. 03:01:790 - add circle here ? that would make rhythm here 03:01:532 (3,4,1) - play a bit better imo
17. 03:33:590 (5,1) - why low spacing on emphasis beat here it make the flow here 03:33:590 (5,1) - a bit awkward imo , would make sense if you increase spacing here a bit , try move (1) to around x220 y332?
18. 03:38:390 (2) - that finish on sliderend tho it make rhythm here play a bit weird imo , maybe you can try this rhythm ?
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19. 03:42:504 (2,3,4) - this rhythm might play better imo
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20. 03:53:132 - sv is pretty high here and not really fit the song here imo sv multiplier 1.5x should be enough now imo
21. 03:58:275 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8 is pretty overmapped here a 1/4 stream should be enough now here
22. 04:21:075 (3,4,5) - flow here is a bit awkward imo , you can move (4) to around x244 y164 that would make flow here a bit better imo
23. 05:09:761 (5,1) - can increase spacing here , current one feel a bit weird to play imo , try move 05:09:932 (1) - to around x428 y116
24. 05:10:790 (5,6) - this rhythm sound better imo
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25. 05:23:990 (2,3) - transition is a bit awkward here , try move to around x16 y256 so it would transition here better imo
26. 05:37:361 - you can add circle here though then start spinner here 05:37:447 - instead