Madotsuki@ - Ikanaide

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Darson
Hello from my queue! :)

General

  1. omg this sb lkasjdflasjdflksajfdlsakfdjasfldkasfdl
  2. Fucking awesome map and great song :D
HOS' Easy

  1. Couldn't find any issue :D
Normal

  1. 01:19:861 (4,5,6) - Maybe try some 1/2 sliders instead? It would probably sound better with the guitar strumming
  2. 01:50:960 (6) - Maybe move this to x:304 y:80 so it leads into 01:51:274 (1) better
  3. 02:01:013 - You could put a note here for the hihat beat but maybe it's fine how it is
Hard

  1. 00:10:437 (3) - Maybe move this to x:436 y:264 so it has consistent flow with 00:09:494 (1,2)
  2. 00:33:683 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this is Nazi but the spacing is a bit off mainly between 00:34:625 (4,5) they're a bit closer together than the others
Insane

  1. 00:34:311 (7,8) - I think this would flow better if you stacked these under 00:33:840 (4)
  2. 00:59:756 (1,2) - Any reason these aren't combo'd with 01:00:070 (1,2,3) ?
  3. 01:50:646 (5) - Maybe move this to x:348 y:60 ? Idk I think it flows better with a bigger gap between 01:50:489 (4,5)
  4. 03:04:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - jizz
Done!


Hopefully this mod helps, good luck :D
Topic Starter
sheela

Reclaimer wrote:

Hello from my queue! :)

General

  1. omg this sb lkasjdflasjdflksajfdlsakfdjasfldkasfdl ffgfsfasgshfh
  2. Fucking awesome map and great song :Dfucking yes
HOS' Easy

  1. Couldn't find any issue :D
Normal

  1. 01:19:861 (4,5,6) - Maybe try some 1/2 sliders instead? It would probably sound better with the guitar strumming Alright. I like it.
  2. 01:50:960 (6) - Maybe move this to x:304 y:80 so it leads into 01:51:274 (1) better Moved the circle.
  3. 02:01:013 - You could put a note here for the hihat beat but maybe it's fine how it is Yeah, it's fine how it is, because 02:00:070 (1,2,3) is mostly following the drums. Therefore having a note on where you want it makes the sound bad in my opinion, since it's following something else.
Hard

  1. 00:10:437 (3) - Maybe move this to x:436 y:264 so it has consistent flow with 00:09:494 (1,2) I did something on 00:09:494 (1,2) . There currently don't have a natural flow, so I moved (1) somewhere else.
  2. 00:33:683 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this is Nazi but the spacing is a bit off mainly between 00:34:625 (4,5) they're a bit closer together than the others Nice catch actually. Fixed the spacing.
Insane

  1. 00:34:311 (7,8) - I think this would flow better if you stacked these under 00:33:840 (4) Cool.
  2. 00:59:756 (1,2) - Any reason these aren't combo'd with 01:00:070 (1,2,3) ? It's actually because the pattern for the new combo: a new combo on each downbeat. But I removed it because it was ugly.
  3. 01:50:646 (5) - Maybe move this to x:348 y:60 ? Idk I think it flows better with a bigger gap between 01:50:489 (4,5) Yet, after 01:50:489 (4) the beat is not that loud, so large distance wouldn't fit. I've remapped the star pattern.
  4. 03:04:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - jizz pls
Done!


Hopefully this mod helps, good luck :D
Thank you for the mod, Reclaimer! It was pretty helpful!
Prismetical
Heya! :3

00:23:316 (1,2) - change it like that:
1 00:23:316 - to 00:24:259 -
2 00:24:573 - to 00:25:515 -

00:55:986 (1) - shape the slider, don't cut into other sliders
01:23:630 (1) - ^
01:26:144 (1) - ^
01:33:683 (1) - ^
01:38:709 (1) - ^
01:43:735 (1) - ^
01:53:788 (1) - ^
01:58:814 (1) - ^ like that: 02:51:589 (1) -
02:03:840 (1) - ^
02:59:128 (1) - ^
03:01:641 (1) - ^
03:06:981 - start the spinner here
00:16:405 (2) - ugly :3
02:57:871 (4) - ^
01:05:253 (5) - confusing jump, because before these jumps are stacked, like here: 01:07:767 (4) -
01:49:233 (2) - ^
01:09:023 - circle
01:14:049 - ^
01:50:489 - ^
02:08:081 - ^
02:48:290 - ^ (definitely place one there, that will be fun)
02:00:698 (3,1) - don't stack

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3
Topic Starter
sheela

Prismetical wrote:

Heya! :3

00:16:405 (2) - ugly :3 I made something.
02:57:871 (4) - ^ Alright.
01:05:253 (5) - confusing jump, because before these jumps are stacked, like here: 01:07:767 (4) - With the current short distance, it reads fine since everything is constant.
01:49:233 (2) - ^
01:09:023 - circle
01:14:049 - ^
01:50:489 - ^
02:08:081 - ^ I won't added more circles because honestly, it adds more to the difficulty, and I don't want that. It can cause trouble the spread of Easy and Normal.
02:48:290 - ^ (definitely place one there, that will be fun) But I'll add this circle since "it's fun" lol.
02:00:698 (3,1) - don't stack I'm going to consider this. It looks okay to me though.

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3
Thank you for the mod, Prismetical!
HootOwlStar

Prismetical wrote:

Heya! :3

Really sorry that I deleted the screenshots to make my replies neater.
00:23:316 (1,2) - change it like that: I'm actually following the pattern as of 00:28:342 (1,2) - and I think my current patterrn is quite fitting to the vocal as I mapped to it in this part.
1 00:23:316 - to 00:24:259 -
2 00:24:573 - to 00:25:515 -
00:55:986 (1) - shape the slider, don't cut into other sliders I made it intentionally since I think the pattern is quite great for me and I might even destroy the current flow if I follow this suggestion.
01:23:630 (1) - ^ I think it is fine as it is though.
01:26:144 (1) - ^ I did try apply some curvature to the slider but it doesn't turn out well.
01:33:683 (1) - ^ Tried making the slider flat instead of blanket.
01:38:709 (1) - ^ Quite a great idea.
01:43:735 (1) - ^ I think there's no problem.
01:53:788 (1) - ^ Not going to change the slider into wave.
01:58:814 (1) - ^ like that: 02:51:589 (1) - ^
02:03:840 (1) - ^ I like how it is though.
02:59:128 (1) - ^ ^
03:01:641 (1) - ^ You made me questionable about the design a little lol
03:06:981 - start the spinner here It was actually fine but I would follow this suggestion if more people state this issue.

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3
Wow, you did great efforts in modding my difficulty though haha. Thanks for the mod and the wishes! :3
@sheela901 below is my diff after update. Anyway it's when I copy the diff code that I found out that the mp3. file is besssst.mp3 though.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: besssst.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 82688,99966,101222
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ikanaide
TitleUnicode:いかないで
Artist:Madotsuki@
ArtistUnicode:窓付き@
Creator:sheela901
Version:HOS' Easy
Source:
Tags:kaai yuki 歌愛ユキ 想太 sohta eve don't go vocaloid utaite nico douga hootowlstar pandorawindy
BeatmapID:735762
BeatmapSetID:315799

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"blop.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,78804,79677
2,164249,165122
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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S,0,-557,191693,0.9
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C,0,164049,164363,225,225,225,89,114,120
F,0,191065,191693,1,0
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F,0,699,1013,1,0
S,0,699,1013,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",282,195
F,0,1013,1327,1,0
S,0,1013,1327,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",364,162
F,0,1327,1641,1,0
S,0,1327,1641,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",444,155
F,0,1641,1955,1,0
S,0,1641,1955,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",524,190
F,0,1955,2269,1,0
S,0,1955,2269,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",542,331
F,0,2583,2897,1,0
S,0,2583,2897,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",328,154
S,0,156510,156824,0.25,1
S,1,156824,157767,1,1.1
F,0,157452,157767,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",420,362
S,0,159023,159337,0.25,1
S,1,159337,160280,1,1.1
F,0,159966,160280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",120,326
S,0,161536,161850,0.25,1
S,1,161850,162793,1,1.1
F,0,162479,162793,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\intro\ez.png",320,240
S,0,18290,,0.2
C,0,18290,,155,200,100
P,0,18290,,A
F,0,18290,18604,0,1
MX,1,18290,18604,40,60
MY,1,18290,18604,344
F,0,23002,23316,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\intro\hos.png",320,240
S,0,18290,,0.2
C,0,18290,,255,100,200
P,0,18290,,A
F,0,18290,18604,0,1
MX,1,18290,18604,300,280
MY,1,18290,18604,364
F,0,23002,23316,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
699,314.13612565445,4,2,1,80,1,0
2740,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2897,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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61013,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78604,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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121327,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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190437,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
191065,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
191693,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 89,114,120
Combo3 : 172,41,20
Combo4 : 204,166,22

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Topic Starter
sheela
Updated your difficulty, HootOwlStar!
XinCrin
I really liked this beatmap. I hope you get it ranked soon! :D
Topic Starter
sheela

XinCrin wrote:

I really liked this beatmap. I hope you get it ranked soon! :D
Thank you! I'll get it ranked soon after I've found my nominator, hehe.
BigEarsMau
Hi there, sheela
I'm supposed to mod your map from my modding queue. Unfortunately, I can't mod your map because your map is too good. I barely find any mistakes in it
So here's a star from me instead

Good luck in being ranked
and sorry :(
Topic Starter
sheela

BigEarsMau wrote:

Hi there, sheela
I'm supposed to mod your map from my modding queue. Unfortunately, I can't mod your map because your map is too good. I barely find any mistakes in it
So here's a star from me instead

Good luck in being ranked
and sorry :(
Hey BigEarsMau! Haha, don't worry about that. Thank you for checking and giving a star!
pandorawindy
how s it going panda :oops:
Topic Starter
sheela

pandorawindy wrote:

how s it going panda :oops:
It's going slow because of my other map, haha. I hope I catch this nominator early lol.
Ipas
You can catch me early sheela! The stuff is going to start again! I'm happy for it~
Darson
How da fak is this not ranked yet :<
Ipas
Recheck!

[General]
  1. I feel the timing is too slow . It should be -19 according to "Timing Analyzer"


[HOS' Easy]
  1. 00:32:112 (2) - This one almost touch the HP bar . Would be nice to have it lowered down regarding to custom skin HP bar that might has touched by


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:988 (3,4) - It's a bit nonsense with two circle here . There's nothing too strong and nothing too low here, so it fits better with one 1/2 slider instead
  2. 01:59:894 (3) - Not really clear what this circle is supposed for, so I think it's better to remove it
  3. 03:00:679 - Are you sure going with this skipped beat? Just my thought, that I think it's really important to be filled since you aren't focused on drum anymore, and in fact this beat isn't drum only

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Continue later . I want to go somewhere . Stay tune!
Topic Starter
sheela
@Ipas: Thank you again! I have applied everything for my part with the timing.

@HootOwlStar: I didn't change for the timing for your difficulty though, to not "ruin" anything. So you have to do it, unless you want me do shift everything!
Topic Starter
sheela
Updated HootOwlStar's difficulty!
Mint
Hi Sheela, from my queue!

:idea: General


* SB/FB.png: 完全に また今度 夜が んでいく -> 完全に また今度 夜がんでいく ( http://piapro.jp/t/YDng )
* Add to the tags 'souta' ?

HOS' Easy


* 02:03:193 (4,1) - 02:58:480 (4,1) - Just a minor thing, but the overlap with the slider end destroys the beauty of this difficulty. Consider doing something like this? http://puu.sh/lVyCK/f20242b414.jpg
* 02:16:386 (1,2) - Minor, but DS. Rest is looking great!

Normal


* 00:01:936 (3,4) - 00:34:606 (5,6) - 00:42:774 (3,1) - 02:06:020 (5,1) - DS, some are minor, some look much better when fixed.
* 00:15:444 (6) - Add a clap?
* 00:42:774 (3,1) - Every other stack in this difficulty is 1/2, so stacking this as 1/1 doesn't make sense to me and could cause confusion. Would just be consistent with 00:42:774 (3,1) - and space them out.

Hard


* 01:37:119 (3,4) - Why is this jump so large??? Please don't do this, you don't even have this in the KIAI.
* 03:06:805 (1) - Only in this diff, the spinner is extended to the red tick. Probably a mistake you want to get rid of.

Insane


* 00:34:135 (6,7,8,1) - Was a bit confused here. (6,7) has such a large jump while the downbeat has such little space. It's a bit awkward when playing, especially because this is in one straight line.
* 01:16:700 (3) - Clap pattern has changed to every 1/1 tick here, consider adding one here then?
* 01:45:287 (3,4) - Since you always have spacing in between when the double claps come, why did you stack these? Makes more sense if you stacked (1,2) instead and spaced out (3,4) instead. That way you can also keep that straight line.
* 01:51:570 (2) - Not sure if a 1/1 slider is the best here, the clap on the red tick is completely ignored now, while you never do that in this difficulty.
* 02:13:088 (4) - Kinda offbeat here, consider changing to something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwxe/ec3d8ab5a8.jpg . This goes on quite a bit in the last KIAI, but to me it just plays so weird.
* 02:36:491 (1,2,3,4) - Try ctrl+g'ing some stuff here? Currently you keep spacing between each set of sliders, while at 02:37:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are jumps at every single one of them. Prehaps something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwL0/da9d7a39f0.jpg
* 02:58:481 (3,4,5) - Weird angle when playing.. could easily be fixed by moving (3) a bit upwards. http://puu.sh/lVwV4/91de8877c8.jpg

Many random DS shifting moments, like 00:55:496 (4,5,6) - 01:05:077 (2,3) - etc. when your usual spacing is smaller than that (like 01:06:020 (1,2) - ). Maybe it's just me, but this bothered me a bit. Good job otherwise.

Waah, this song & utaite are awesome! Really thanks for showing me this, I'm hooked lol.
Good map & SB work, call me back!
Topic Starter
sheela
@appleeaterx: Thank you very much of the mod! Everything has been applied, and I fixed some DS shifts, so some might be left out unchanged because I think the distance suits with the beats.

EDIT: I applied the suggestions on HOS' Easy!
Mint
Looks good to me!
Bubbled!
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