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LEMiao feat. YooSanHyakurei - Kebbetu no Tabi - PV ver - [Os

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Manimani_old_1
Topic Starter
Manimani_old_1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月7日 at 2:42:58

Artist: LEMiao feat. YooSanHyakurei
Title: Kebbetu no Tabi - PV ver -
Source: 東方Project
Tags: 秘封活动记录 Yonder Voice Touhou
BPM: 155
Filesize: 7620kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.88 stars, 199 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.5 stars, 477 notes)
  3. Insane (4.33 stars, 301 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.04 stars, 366 notes)
  5. Normal (1.72 stars, 108 notes)
  6. Oni (3.45 stars, 408 notes)
Download: LEMiao feat. YooSanHyakurei - Kebbetu no Tabi - PV ver -
Download: LEMiao feat. YooSanHyakurei - Kebbetu no Tabi - PV ver - (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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M4M征集中
Thanks
Modders:
small_hins
z1085684963
Narcissu
Surono
Prophecy
Kyle Y
Alepat
Misure
-FireThunder-
Offset check:
- Yuuka Niya -
Last edited by Manimani_old_1 , edited 4 times in total.
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
CookieBite
Hi! 我是来自我的 Modding Queue.

第一个 >w<

请加hitsound!
不然不能rank


START MOD!

[Normal]

HP -1

00:06:437 (6) - 改成这样
photo

00:09:146 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

00:41:663 (2) - 改成这样
photo

00:44:372 (5) - NC

00:46:308 (4,5) - 改成这样
photo

00:53:663 (4,5,6) - 改成这样
photo 1
photo 2

00:56:759 (7) - NC , 00:57:146 (1) - 取消NC

01:04:501 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

[Hard]

AR = 6
CS = 4

00:06:824 (3) - 改成这样
photo

00:16:695 (4,5) - 移至红色滑条开端1

00:21:727 (4,5,6) - 直线stream

00:24:437 (7) - NC

00:49:404 (9) - NC

00:56:759 (1,2,3) - 改成这样
photo

01:00:050 (1,2) - 改成这样
photo

01:06:824 (2) - 改成这样
photo

01:33:146 (2) - 取消NC

[Insane]

AR = 8
OD = 7/8

有点overmapping的感觉...建议重作
如果重作的话就可以不用管下面

00:18:824 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 有点远 , 近点吧

00:20:372 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:308 (2,3) - ^

00:23:082 (5,6,7) - ^

00:24:824 (5,6) - 移至绿色滑条开端1

00:38:759 (6) - ^

00:40:114 (6,7,8) - 有点远 , 近点吧

01:11:469 (2,3) - ^

01:16:114 (2,3) - ^

01:22:308 (2,3) - ^

01:30:243 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

这张图您还要多费心机去制作~
希望这张图会被RANK!
Bye~

还有, 感谢您使用我的Modding Queue!
Last edited by CookieBite , edited 1 time in total.
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
[General]
meta错了，请抄我的 :o
音量100%太大了，改小点，另外两个也是
[Inner Oni]
00:04:501 (14) - 大红
00:06:050加个大红
00:21:437漏节奏
00:25:404别空着
00:51:727^
00:55:017^
00:56:566 (213) - 删
01:03:340kiai的节奏和前面差的好多，要不再在前面多塞点
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
no kd

General

  1. 出處，也就是source 應該填寫 “東方Project”，touhou 應該移到 tag裏面
  2. PV Ver 指沒有視頻……你可能需要找人確認一下標題
  3. BG 分辨率過低，推薦使用1366*768的大小……
  4. MP3碼率過低，要求至少128kbps，推薦192……記得重新測offest，還有視頻的offest
  5. 建議加入自定義顏色……
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
<(``) hi Hayah..

[Muzukashii]
00:23:856 (49) - k

[Oni]
nice.. @_@

[Inner Oni]
this, btw nice style mapping @w@

hueh, not helpful.. this already nice 5 me, sry :lol:
Manimani_old_1
Topic Starter
Manimani_old_1

small_hins wrote:

SPOILER
Hi! 我是来自我的 Modding Queue.

第一个 >w<

请加hitsound!
不然不能rank


START MOD!

[Normal]

HP -1

00:06:437 (6) - 改成这样
photo

00:09:146 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

00:41:663 (2) - 改成这样
photo

00:44:372 (5) - NC

00:46:308 (4,5) - 改成这样
photo

00:53:663 (4,5,6) - 改成这样
photo 1
photo 2

00:56:759 (7) - NC , 00:57:146 (1) - 取消NC

01:04:501 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

[Hard]

AR = 6
CS = 4

00:06:824 (3) - 改成这样
photo

00:16:695 (4,5) - 移至红色滑条开端1

00:21:727 (4,5,6) - 直线stream

00:24:437 (7) - NC

00:49:404 (9) - NC

00:56:759 (1,2,3) - 改成这样
photo

01:00:050 (1,2) - 改成这样
photo

01:06:824 (2) - 改成这样
photo

01:33:146 (2) - 取消NC

[Insane]

AR = 8
OD = 7/8

有点overmapping的感觉...建议重作
如果重作的话就可以不用管下面

00:18:824 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 有点远 , 近点吧

00:20:372 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:308 (2,3) - ^

00:23:082 (5,6,7) - ^

00:24:824 (5,6) - 移至绿色滑条开端1

00:38:759 (6) - ^

00:40:114 (6,7,8) - 有点远 , 近点吧

01:11:469 (2,3) - ^

01:16:114 (2,3) - ^

01:22:308 (2,3) - ^

01:30:243 (2,3) - blanket 可做好些

这张图您还要多费心机去制作~
希望这张图会被RANK!
Bye~

还有, 感谢您使用我的Modding Queue!
all fixed,thx

z1085684963 wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
meta错了，请抄我的 :o
音量100%太大了，改小点，另外两个也是
[Inner Oni]
00:04:501 (14) - 大红
00:06:050加个大红
00:21:437漏节奏
00:25:404别空着空着来表达这个地方和后面两个地方的音递增关系
00:51:727^这里主要跟vocal
00:55:017^^
00:56:566 (213) - 删直觉keep
01:03:340kiai的节奏和前面差的好多，要不再在前面多塞点已塞
blank= fixed

Surono wrote:

SPOILER
<(``) hi Hayah..

[Muzukashii]
00:23:856 (49) - k fixed

[Oni]
nice.. @_@

[Inner Oni]
this, btw nice style mapping @w@


hueh, not helpful.. this already nice 5 me, sry :lol:still thx
Narcissu的摸需要时间改先不reply了;w;
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
[★ Introduction]
➞ From Prophecy's Quick Check Modding Queue
➞ Thank you for your request >w< , Hope you have a great day :3

[★ General]
➞ Awesome Beatmap :D

[Muzukashii]
➞ 00:11:082 - Slider here?
➞ 00:30:243 - delete
➞ 01:31:211 - d
➞ 01:32:372 - d
➞ 01:33:146 - d

[Oni]
➞ 01:31:211 - d
➞ 01:32:372 - d
➞ 01:33:146 - d
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
RAMK????

It should be "rank"
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y
#modding queue
here is my modding, do not expect to much

[Gerenal]
SPOILER
I think offset should be +36ms (1441), better listen by yourself, as 36ms really not a small number


[NM]
SPOILER
I do not suggest too high AR, OD, as it is the easiest diff in your map
00:04:501 (4) - nc
00:05:663 (5) - 1 beat
00:06:437 (6) - reverse
00:07:634 (1) - normally, reverse 1 time only, seldom reverse twice
I suggest 2 beat slider at 00:07:598 - and circle at 00:08:759 -
00:13:792 (1,2) - keep constant ds please, (1.00)
00:19:985 (3) - nc
00:23:082 - missing notes, suggest reverse 00:22:695 (3) -
00:29:275 (1) - 2beat, without reverse
00:30:437 - missing notes
00:32:372 (4) - 2beat
00:33:921 (6) - it is not 1 beat but 1.5 beat sound, and del circle 7 at 00:35:082 -
00:38:566 (2) - blanket
00:39:340 (3) - ^
00:40:114 (4,1) - nc at 4 but not at 1
00:43:211 (4) - nc here
00:52:501 (3) - 00:54:050 (5) - nc
01:01:404 - missing note
01:04:501 (2) - 1beat or reverse
01:09:534 (1,3) - blanket
01:12:243 (4) - ds
01:12:630 (1) - end at 01:14:179 -
01:19:211 (5) - nc
01:26:179 - missing notes
01:30:824 - long slider
01:34:308 (1) - circle and start slider at 01:34:501 - end at 01:37:404 -

[HD]
SPOILER
00:01:017 (1) - If you want to use this slider, please set your offset to 4 beat before
00:01:404 (2) - nc
00:02:953 (4) - circle and 1 beat slider, nc at 00:02:953 -
00:04:501 (6) - nc
00:19:598 (4,5) - ds...
00:22:114 (1,2) - better blanket
00:29:275 (3) - nc
00:34:501 (4) - ds
00:34:695 (5) - blanket
00:36:050 (6) - circle
00:36:437 (7,8) - move to 00:36:243 - and circle at 00:37:017 - (nc and cancel nc here 00:37:404 (1) - )
00:40:114 (4,1) - nc at slider 4
00:43:211 (6) - nc
00:44:566 (1,2,3) - slider better start at white tick
00:46:308 (5) - nc should be here
00:50:953 (1) - blanket
01:04:888 - missing note and nc
01:12:437 - missing note
01:14:953 - missing slider
01:16:888 (4) - reverse
01:21:340 - missing circle
01:21:921 (4) - nc
01:34:308 (1) - circle and spinner can be start at 01:34:404 - ended 01:37:404 -
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

Prophecy wrote:

RAMK????

It should be "rank"
rank :)
Manimani_old_1
Topic Starter
Manimani_old_1

Prophecy wrote:

SPOILER
[★ Introduction]
➞ From Prophecy's Quick Check Modding Queue
➞ Thank you for your request >w< , Hope you have a great day :3

[★ General]
➞ Awesome Beatmap :D

[Muzukashii]
➞ 00:11:082 - Slider here?
➞ 00:30:243 - delete keep for here is a d in background beat
➞ 01:31:211 - dnope...
➞ 01:32:372 - d
➞ 01:33:146 - d

[Oni]
➞ 01:31:211 - d^
➞ 01:32:372 - d
➞ 01:33:146 - d

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue
here is my modding, do not expect to much

[Gerenal]
SPOILER
I think offset should be +36ms (1441), better listen by yourself, as 36ms really not a small numbernot changed


[NM]
SPOILER
I do not suggest too high AR, OD, as it is the easiest diff in your mapchanged to AR4 OD4
00:04:501 (4) - nc
00:05:663 (5) - 1 beat keep to follow vocal
00:06:437 (6) - reverse
00:07:634 (1) - normally, reverse 1 time only, seldom reverse twice
I suggest 2 beat slider at 00:07:598 - and circle at 00:08:759 -
00:13:792 (1,2) - keep constant ds please, (1.00)
00:19:985 (3) - nc
00:23:082 - missing notes, suggest reverse 00:22:695 (3) -
00:29:275 (1) - 2beat, without reverse
00:30:437 - missing notes
00:32:372 (4) - 2beat
00:33:921 (6) - it is not 1 beat but 1.5 beat sound, and del circle 7 at 00:35:082 -
00:38:566 (2) - blanket
00:39:340 (3) - ^
00:40:114 (4,1) - nc at 4 but not at 1
00:43:211 (4) - nc here
00:52:501 (3) - 00:54:050 (5) - nc
01:01:404 - missing notekeep to tell difference between hard and insane?
01:04:501 (2) - 1beat or reverse
01:09:534 (1,3) - blanket remaped
01:12:243 (4) - ds^
01:12:630 (1) - end at 01:14:179 -
01:19:211 (5) - nc
01:26:179 - missing notes^
01:30:824 - long slider
01:34:308 (1) - circle and start slider at 01:34:501 - end at 01:37:404 -keep

[HD]
SPOILER
00:01:017 (1) - If you want to use this slider, please set your offset to 4 beat before
00:01:404 (2) - nc
00:02:953 (4) - circle and 1 beat slider, nc at 00:02:953 -
00:04:501 (6) - nc
00:19:598 (4,5) - ds...
00:22:114 (1,2) - better blanket
00:29:275 (3) - nc
00:34:501 (4) - ds
00:34:695 (5) - blanket
00:36:050 (6) - circle
00:36:437 (7,8) - move to 00:36:243 - and circle at 00:37:017 - (nc and cancel nc here 00:37:404 (1) - )
00:40:114 (4,1) - nc at slider 4
00:43:211 (6) - nc
00:44:566 (1,2,3) - slider better start at white tick
00:46:308 (5) - nc should be here
00:50:953 (1) - blanket
01:04:888 - missing note and nc
01:12:437 - missing note
01:14:953 - missing slider
01:16:888 (4) - reverse
01:21:340 - missing circle
01:21:921 (4) - nc
01:34:308 (1) - circle and spinner can be start at 01:34:404 - ended 01:37:404 -
sorry I leave a while and I forget which I haven't apply in hard;w;

thx a lot >w<

Prophecy wrote:

RAMK????

It should be "rank"
lol
Alepat
161 posts
Joined October 2011
Alepat
Hi! from Mid&Friends Taiko Modding Queue

Legend
(?) = suggestion
^^ = same as above
[Muzukashii]
00:06:824 (21) - remove finish, maintain note
00:47:082 (138) - d
00:47:275 (139) - k
01:08:759 (33) - remove finish, maintain note (?)
01:21:147 (25) - k

[Oni]
btw, nice diff

[Inner Oni]
00:04:501 (14) - remove finish, maintain note
00:06:050 (19) - ^^
00:06:243 (20) - k
01:06:243 (29) - d
01:06:534 (32) - delete
01:34:211 (87,88,89) - delete
01:34:308 - Add Spinner to 01:37:404 -
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
Dora爷爷来M4M厚不厚啊
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/308077
好,摸图水平不高望见谅

[General]

Normal要全程固定DS，不然做出来没法玩
Insane可以改成Lunatic，毕竟touhou
几个变速绿线没什么意义，反而觉得不明所以
[Normal]

01:34:308 (1) - 这个转圈圈的flow...我觉得有点纠结
00:23:275 (1,2,3) - 二次折返尽量少用，像这样就有点难读
00:25:792 - 这点不能漏
00:34:695 (4,1) - ？？？
00:55:598 - 空拍差评
01:27:727 (2) - 放个滑条
[Hard]

00:04:501 (5,6,1) - 初见这个距离相当容易读错，改改吧
00:24:437 (1,2) - 不好看
00:29:275 -

00:37:985 (2) - 向后移动两个4分拍
00:40:114 (1) - ctrl+G
01:00:630 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段怎么和Insane一样？
01:09:146 - 和01:09:340 - 不要空，放note或者滑条
01:21:534 - note
01:26:566 - 转盘结束点 然后
01:27:146 - 和01:27:340 - 放滑条或者note
01:34:308 (1) - 这个音效没问题？
[Insane]

AR8.5差不多吧
00:02:953 (1,2) - 这个distance不对啊，隔着个1分拍，怎么能和前面一样
00:04:501 (4,5) - ^
00:07:211 (5) - ctrl+G或者 怎么样，直接顺到00:07:598 (1) - 感觉flow不太好
00:08:566 - 加个note (24,232)左右的位置
00:10:308 (6) - (180,56)
00:13:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为何变距
00:15:340 (1,2) - 这两个距离应该近
00:16:501 (5,6) - 这两个距离应该远，从节奏上来看
00:17:469 (2) - 朝下弯
00:19:792 (7,1) - 拉开距离
00:27:727 (2,3) - 这个stack感觉不好
00:37:211 - 加note
00:38:759 (6,7,1) - 不带这么摆的吧...难读而且不好看
00:40:114 (6,7) - 来近距离
00:49:792 (1) - 折返
01:02:566 - 这样好点（6是短滑条）
http://puu.sh/id1K0/1bec567f11.jpg
至少5那点要拉滑条
01:09:146 - 拉个这样的滑条
Image
01:11:469 (2,3) - 不应该跳吧这里
01:15:727 (1) - 这个头的音效，打起来感觉不明显...
01:15:727 (1,2) - 要么重叠一部分，要么拉开距离，现在这样有点尴尬
01:17:275 (7,8) - 拉开距离
01:31:598 - 转盘从这开始


总体感觉距离控制方面还是有些问题，打起来很不顺，可能需要大改
嗯，祝好运啦 :)
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
-FireThunder-
From Queue :3
kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing :3


[Timing]
Nice to follow the singer, but try following the piano too :3
I see ur maps love following the singer

[Muzukashii]
- 00:21:340 - d
- 00:57:340 - add d
- 01:02:372 - ^
- 01:05:082 - ^
- 01:06:727 - dk.d.kd
- 01:15:534 - k
* 01:21:437 - maybe add a K its nice in here owo
- 01:31:211 - add D o.o

[Oni]
- 00:10:308 - d
- 01:02:372 - add d
- 01:31:211 - add D o.o

[Inner Oni]
Nice inner owob

- 01:31:211 - add D o.o

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :)
Manimani_old_1
Topic Starter
Manimani_old_1

Alepat wrote:

Hi! from Mid&Friends Taiko Modding Queue

SPOILER
Legend
(?) = suggestion
^^ = same as above
[Muzukashii]
00:06:824 (21) - remove finish, maintain note
00:47:082 (138) - d
00:47:275 (139) - kkeep
01:08:759 (33) - remove finish, maintain note (?)keep
01:21:147 (25) - k

[Oni]
btw, nice diffthx>.<

[Inner Oni]
00:04:501 (14) - remove finish, maintain notekeep
00:06:050 (19) - ^^keep
00:06:243 (20) - k
01:06:243 (29) - dkeep
01:06:534 (32) - deletethere is a background beat here?
01:34:211 (87,88,89) - deletechange different patterns keep 87,88 but change 89 as spinner
01:34:308 - Add Spinner to 01:37:404 -
I'm not sure about those finish,keep and wait for others's advice


-FireThunder- wrote:

SPOILER
From Queue :3
kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing :3


[Timing]
Nice to follow the singer, but try following the piano too :3
I see ur maps love following the singer

[Muzukashii]
- 00:21:340 - d
- 00:57:340 - add d both keep because no vocals and background beat
- 01:02:372 - ^
- 01:05:082 - ^
- 01:06:727 - dk.d.kdthx for your advice! kiai remap base on this suggestions
- 01:15:534 - kpattern change
* 01:21:437 - maybe add a K its nice in here owokeep
- 01:31:211 - add D o.o keep

[Oni]
- 00:10:308 - d
- 01:02:372 - add d keep
- 01:31:211 - add D o.o keep

[Inner Oni]
Nice inner owob thx>.<

- 01:31:211 - add D o.o keep

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :)
thx for mod~ >.<
Manimani_old_1
Topic Starter
Manimani_old_1

Misure wrote:

[General]

Normal要全程固定DS，不然做出来没法玩
先给我一天时间改这一条(擦血
一周内回摸;w;
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