Hello from our Modding Queue!
Normal and Hard are pretty much like Easy.
Learning how to map properly is hard. But I'm pretty sure that you can be a good mapper if you try to learn it properly! However, sorry for not pointing out all NCs etc out in Normal and Hard, that would take too much time honestly.
Good luck!
General
You should try to use the same slider velocities and distance snaps in Easy and Normal (and very often in Hard) since it can irritate new players.So you should fix kinda all difficulties with moving the objects a little bit.
Pronunciation is a very important thing at mapping. The sliderhead (start of a slider) should always pronounce the start of a word. In this mapset the slidertail (end of a slider) often pronounced it. That should definitely not happen.
You should use your grid properly. Example: Your Hard - A hard from another map
Also try to use blankets (more often). They often fit very well, especially in lower difficulties. Makes them also way easier to map well.
Take care that you use your hitsounds properly. So they shouldn't just appear at random times, you should use them regularly.
You make NCs too often. You should not make a new NC after a Combo of 3. It's totally fine until 8 or something. Also they shouldn't be random. Try to hear out some sudden changes or little highlights. Or make one after one finished sentence.
Pronunciation is a very important thing at mapping. The sliderhead (start of a slider) should always pronounce the start of a word. In this mapset the slidertail (end of a slider) often pronounced it. That should definitely not happen.
You should use your grid properly. Example: Your Hard - A hard from another map
Also try to use blankets (more often). They often fit very well, especially in lower difficulties. Makes them also way easier to map well.
Take care that you use your hitsounds properly. So they shouldn't just appear at random times, you should use them regularly.
You make NCs too often. You should not make a new NC after a Combo of 3. It's totally fine until 8 or something. Also they shouldn't be random. Try to hear out some sudden changes or little highlights. Or make one after one finished sentence.
Easy
00:05:884 (1,2) - This blanket looks strange. You don't have to fix it, but you can do it better, I'm sure.
00:05:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:09:535 - Inherited Point you don't really use, you can delete it.
00:13:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:25:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:30:384 (1) - Make a reversed slider here so you put ur clap hitsound there where it's supposed to be.
00:37:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:43:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:384 (1) - Remove NC.
00:52:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:884 (2) - NC.
00:55:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:59:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:884 (1) - 2 isn't "next to" 1. By that I mean they aren't in a row. Move 2 up a little bit.
01:25:884 (1,) - Remove NC.
01:26:884 (2) - NC.
01:27:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:36:884 (4) - NC.
01:37:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:40:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:40:884 (2) - NC.
01:41:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:47:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:57:884 (1) - Remove NC.
02:12:884 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:884 (2) - I think you can put a circle on the next red tick.
02:19:884 (1) - ^
02:22:884 (2,3) - Make a blanket out of this.
02:29:134 - Do you need all these Inherited Points?
02:27:884 (1) - Remove NC
02:38:384 (1) - Remove NC
02:41:884 (1) - Remove NC
02:46:384 (1) - Remove NC
03:07:884 (1) - Remove NC
03:11:384 (1) - Remove NC.
03:15:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:18:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:20:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:21:384 (2) - Wrong pronunciation. A slider should start at the slidertail. (This occured often anyway, this is an example.)
03:24:384 (1) - Remove NC.
03:25:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:29:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:31:384 (2) - Remove NC.
03:32:884 (4) - Isn't a blanket.
03:33:884 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:39:884 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove NCs.
03:41:884 (1,2) - This isn't a blanket.
03:47:384 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove NCs.
I hope I figured out all the NCs in this diff...
00:05:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:09:535 - Inherited Point you don't really use, you can delete it.
00:13:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:25:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:30:384 (1) - Make a reversed slider here so you put ur clap hitsound there where it's supposed to be.
00:37:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:43:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:384 (1) - Remove NC.
00:52:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:54:884 (2) - NC.
00:55:884 (1) - Remove NC.
00:59:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:884 (1) - 2 isn't "next to" 1. By that I mean they aren't in a row. Move 2 up a little bit.
01:25:884 (1,) - Remove NC.
01:26:884 (2) - NC.
01:27:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:36:884 (4) - NC.
01:37:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:40:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:40:884 (2) - NC.
01:41:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:47:884 (1) - Remove NC.
01:57:884 (1) - Remove NC.
02:12:884 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:884 (2) - I think you can put a circle on the next red tick.
02:19:884 (1) - ^
02:22:884 (2,3) - Make a blanket out of this.
02:29:134 - Do you need all these Inherited Points?
02:27:884 (1) - Remove NC
02:38:384 (1) - Remove NC
02:41:884 (1) - Remove NC
02:46:384 (1) - Remove NC
03:07:884 (1) - Remove NC
03:11:384 (1) - Remove NC.
03:15:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:18:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:20:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:21:384 (2) - Wrong pronunciation. A slider should start at the slidertail. (This occured often anyway, this is an example.)
03:24:384 (1) - Remove NC.
03:25:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:29:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:31:384 (2) - Remove NC.
03:32:884 (4) - Isn't a blanket.
03:33:884 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:884 (1) - Remove NC.
03:39:884 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove NCs.
03:41:884 (1,2) - This isn't a blanket.
03:47:384 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove NCs.
I hope I figured out all the NCs in this diff...
Normal and Hard are pretty much like Easy.
Learning how to map properly is hard. But I'm pretty sure that you can be a good mapper if you try to learn it properly! However, sorry for not pointing out all NCs etc out in Normal and Hard, that would take too much time honestly.
Good luck!