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Demetori - Yumeshoushitsu ~ Lost Dream

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Keada
656 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Keada
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27. mai 2015 at 00:08:13

Artist: Demetori
Title: Yumeshoushitsu ~ Lost Dream
Source: 東方Project
Tags: le Grimoire De reve Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream Yumemi Okazaki
BPM: 182
Filesize: 9847kb
Play Time: 05:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Phantasm (5,81 stars, 2357 notes)
Download: Demetori - Yumeshoushitsu ~ Lost Dream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Prepare for strimms


Beatmap fully hitsounded, but cant upload because AIMod :<
Last edited by Keada , edited 9 times in total.
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
M4M from your queue

[General]
  1. Title is 夢消失 ～Lost Dream (yes I know, it's ugly but it's official)
  2. Romanised Title is Yumeshoushitsu ～Lost Dream (the translation isn't offical, so you'll have to use the romaji equivalent)
  3. Here's your bg image in better quality (and 1366x768 too): http://puu.sh/hVIzs/9efbb6862d.jpg
[Phantasm]
  1. 01:59:149 (4) - This would flow better like that imo:
    SPOILER
  2. 02:58:818 (1) - Could be stacked better
  3. 03:38:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream doesn't look very good
  4. 04:01:373 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
  5. 04:40:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  6. 05:15:466 (6,1) - Separate them a little more, feels better that way imo
  7. 05:48:104 (7,8,9) - I'd make it like that for a better flow:
    SPOILER
Okay, astonishing map, really good flow and all, I'm sorry I couldn't find much.

Good luck and here's a star for Demetori and Touhou (and the good work)!
Keada
656 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Keada

Alheak wrote:

M4M from your queue

[General]
  1. Title is 夢消失 ～Lost Dream (yes I know, it's ugly but it's official) Oh well :D
  2. Romanised Title is Yumeshoushitsu ～Lost Dream (the translation isn't offical, so you'll have to use the romaji equivalent) ait fixed :>
  3. Here's your bg image in better quality (and 1366x768 too): http://puu.sh/hVIzs/9efbb6862d.jpg Whoa that looks so much better, thanks!
[Phantasm]
  1. 01:59:149 (4) - This would flow better like that imo: yeah, fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 02:58:818 (1) - Could be stacked better Fixed
  3. 03:38:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream doesn't look very good Think it looks better now, cause im gonna keep the shape
  4. 04:01:373 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ hai hai .-. gonna fix the spacing that it doesnt accelerate here
  5. 04:40:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ okay gave it a curve instead
  6. 05:15:466 (6,1) - Separate them a little more, feels better that way imo done
  7. 05:48:104 (7,8,9) - I'd make it like that for a better flow: Good idea, thanks!
    SPOILER
Okay, astonishing map, really good flow and all, I'm sorry I couldn't find much.

Good luck and here's a star for Demetori and Touhou (and the good work)! Thank you man! appreciate it <3
Thanks for the mod and the star :D all fixed here :3
Taeyang
Elite Mapper
1,209 posts
Joined June 2013
Taeyang
  • Phantasm
  1. Dont NC spam it's influence HP
  2. 00:51:566 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:59:643 (6) - NC and 00:59:643 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - here use same rhythm here 00:58:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
  4. 01:10:192 - your volrume increase stream DS like to
    SPOILER
  5. 01:32:033 (8,1) - here it 0.9DS change 0.8
  6. 01:41:676 (1,1) - remove NC
  7. 01:46:621 (1,2) - try stack
  8. 01:57:665 (4,1) - try blanket
  9. 02:02:445 (1,1) - unsnap just use 1/8
    SPOILER
  10. 02:04:423 (1,2) - 02:05:742 (1,2,3) - i think here same sound use same rhythm
  11. 02:12:335 (1,1) - stack?
  12. 02:34:093 (9) - NC
  13. 02:35:741 (1) - remove NC
  14. 02:37:719 (2) - suggest
    SPOILER
  15. 03:09:367 (2) - NC?
  16. 04:02:444 (1,2,3) - NC and 04:03:104 (3) - add note circle
    SPOILER
  17. 04:27:499 (5,5) - try stack
  18. 04:27:994 (10,1) - ^
  19. 04:49:258 (1,6) - try blanket
  20. 05:16:620 (8,2) - stack?
  21. 05:40:686 (1) - add NC
  22. 05:40:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - it's make boring increase DS
  23. 05:45:549 (1) - :X
  24. 05:44:862 (1,1) - 05:45:549 (1,1) - remove NC
  25. 05:48:104 (7,3) - stack

good luck :)
Easy
109 posts
Joined December 2014
Easy
Here's an irc mod

Chat Log
21:52 Lolipop: Are you free to mod a map atm?
21:52 Keada: only if its M4M
21:52 Keada: have lots to do now so dont do NM's
21:53 Lolipop: Ah, ok. I've barely modded any maps so far, but I can do a M4M if you want.
21:53 Lolipop: Send me your map, and if I do well, you can mod mine
21:54 Keada: allright
21:54 *Keada is listening to http://osu.ppy.sh/b/701749
22:00 Lolipop: 01:16:621 (3,4,5) - The notes here compared to streams of notes with a little bit more placing. You can spread them out if you think they should be. Personally, I don't have a problem with it. Just pointing it out
22:00 Lolipop: They look a little tight
22:01 Keada: you actually have a good point there
22:02 Lolipop: 01:23:214 (2,3,4) - I think the same thing happens here
22:02 Keada: there I actually am going for lower and lower
22:03 Keada: if you see 01:21:896 (2,3,4) - 01:22:555 (7,8,9) - 01:23:215 (2,3,4) - 01:23:874 (7,8,9) -
22:03 Lolipop: 01:23:874 (7,8,9) - and here. I haven't looked at an extra before so I may be fine. With the map going at full speed, it looks fine
22:03 Lolipop: oh... I see
22:06 Lolipop: 01:46:620 (1) - Odd pattern. idk if anyone pointed it out yet. If it seems too hard, try changing it
22:07 Keada: dont know whats odd with it, no change here
22:08 Lolipop: alright. Probably just me. I don't see it that often.
22:08 Keada: yeah, some maps need to have some other things than just the normal you know ;)
22:08 Keada: look at skystars maps
22:08 Lolipop: yea xD
22:08 Keada: theyre pretty unique
22:12 Lolipop: 03:37:719 (4) - A detail that doesn't really matter, but this slider releases in the opposite direction the stream is going. If you think it matters, change the angle it's placed at
22:14 Keada: I dont think that matters, when you play those sliders you usually hold your cursor still right? xD
22:14 Lolipop: yea xD
22:14 Keada: so it fits with the release from 03:37:389 (3) -
22:15 Lolipop: I see
22:18 Lolipop: 05:33:763 (1,2,3) - Did you want spread out notes like this, or would you rather do a solid stream?
22:19 Keada: huh?
22:19 Keada: what you mean?
22:20 Lolipop: I think those notes go at the same speed a normal stream does, and they're barely touching at all. Just something small I saw
22:21 Keada: theyre in 1/3
22:21 Keada: so erh
22:21 Keada: its supposed to be space to make it easier to read
22:21 Keada: and stuffz
22:21 Lolipop: ah ok.
22:21 Lolipop: Other than anything I mentioned, the map seems fine
22:21 Lolipop: gj
22:21 Keada: :D thanks :>

Other than small detail like those, it's an amazing map. Well done! :)
Keada
656 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Keada

Taeyang wrote:

  • Phantasm
  1. Dont NC spam it's influence HP
  2. 00:51:566 (1) - remove NC Done
  3. 00:59:643 (6) - NC and 00:59:643 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - here use same rhythm here 00:58:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all done
  4. 01:10:192 - your volrume increase stream DS like to Ait remapped the stream now
    SPOILER
  5. 01:32:033 (8,1) - here it 0.9DS change 0.8 oh, lol oops
  6. 01:41:676 (1,1) - remove NC done
  7. 01:46:621 (1,2) - try stack stacked on sliders tip
  8. 01:57:665 (4,1) - try blanket ait
  9. 02:02:445 (1,1) - unsnap just use 1/8 The beat is in 1/6 tho, but ill do it anyways
    SPOILER
  10. 02:04:423 (1,2) - 02:05:742 (1,2,3) - i think here same sound use same rhythm true, listened to it in 25% and 50% and it is
  11. 02:12:335 (1,1) - stack? hmm seems good
  12. 02:34:093 (9) - NC done
  13. 02:35:741 (1) - remove NC done
  14. 02:37:719 (2) - suggest that seems better yeah
    SPOILER
  15. 03:09:367 (2) - NC? done
  16. 04:02:444 (1,2,3) - NC and 04:03:104 (3) - add note circle done and done
    SPOILER
  17. 04:27:499 (5,5) - try stack oh nice find
  18. 04:27:994 (10,1) - ^ ^
  19. 04:49:258 (1,6) - try blanket Its already blanketed but :S
  20. 05:16:620 (8,2) - stack? Done
  21. 05:40:686 (1) - add NC Done
  22. 05:40:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - it's make boring increase DS I would like for this to be there, considering there's a ''boring'' sound that comes here
  23. 05:45:549 (1) - :X :X
  24. 05:44:862 (1,1) - 05:45:549 (1,1) - remove NC Changed to 1,2,3 - 1,2,3 - 1
  25. 05:48:104 (7,3) - stack done

good luck :)
Thank you~ Ill mod your map soon :>
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Placeholder. Looks like a long stream practice map..... (run >.<)
ill try to post something soon.

no kd.

i really dunno how to mod this style....... My apology....... You don't need to mod back.....

I feel this map is full of long streams. The part without long streams is full of triplet. This make the rhythm monotonous.

Phantasm

  1. 02:30:796 (1,2) - Swap the order of these 2, or change the slider into 2 circles (z z zxz.......). The current slider tail covers a beat which should be clickable.
  2. 04:07:225 (2) - Replace the slider with 2, same reason as above
  3. 03:22:554 (2,3,4) - Suggest move 2 to 282,39

Good luck anyway.
Keada
656 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Keada

Adol Christin wrote:

Placeholder. Looks like a long stream practice map..... (run >.<)
ill try to post something soon.

no kd.

i really dunno how to mod this style....... My apology....... You don't need to mod back.....

I feel this map is full of long streams. The part without long streams is full of triplet. This make the rhythm monotonous.

Phantasm

  1. 02:30:796 (1,2) - Swap the order of these 2, or change the slider into 2 circles (z z zxz.......). The current slider tail covers a beat which should be clickable. If you listen there is not beat on blue or white tick which would be a weird break (as im following the drums)
  2. 04:07:225 (2) - Replace the slider with 2, same reason as above Same with this one
  3. 03:22:554 (2,3,4) - Suggest move 2 to 282,39 It would be weird for the circular motion im going for D: , but I see what you mean its a little weird section here. I can see what I can do

Good luck anyway.
Didnt actually change anything :< but thanks anyways for trying :3
Battquif
334 posts
Joined February 2013
Battquif
Hi, M4M from my queue!!~ (sorry for the delay, and for my english '0')

Phantasm

  • 00:51:237 (1,2,3) - Move 1 to 284:192. Because you use this place a lot+try to improve the spacing (just a detail)
    00:53:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could put a jump here, interchange 1,2,3 and 4,5,6 or something like that ;)
    00:57:830 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - It's just my opinion, but a 6 notes stream is really hard to do. You could begin with a simple stream (place 2 notes rather the slider)
    00:57:171 (5,2) - You should stack it
    00:59:808 (7,8,9) - I don't think chage the spacing here is necessary. Space as the streams before.
    00:59:973 (9,1) - contrariwise, you should place a little jump here for accentuate the change of following (you follow the drum after)
    01:00:138 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's better to stack it, as I said, it's following the drum here.
    01:04:917 (4,7) - 1/4 sliders could make it easier to read imo. And I think 01:05:412 (8,9,10) - should be in the same direction as 01:04:753 (2,3,4) - .
    01:04:753 (2,6) - Try to stack it
    01:07:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't know if this is done on purpose but :/ the little gap is :/ ... Yeah, I don't know, do as you want :D I just wanted to notice it.
    01:11:676 (5,5) - stack?
    01:17:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to center it maybe??
    01:21:319 (7,5) - Try to stack it, then make a triangle with 01:22:226 (5,6) - , the flow is too broken here imo.
    01:26:511 (1,2,1) - stack it maybe? And make 01:28:160 (1) - going down
    01:32:775 (3,4,5) - Try to center it with the stream.
    01:35:248 (3) - move to 286:212 then restack it with 01:36:072 (2) -
    01:39:698 (9,1) - The jump is too big imo. DS of 2,00* is enough
    01:40:852 (1,2,3) - I would prefer 2 sliders here. Before, why not, but here it's not really necessary.
    01:49:094 (7,8) - stack something here :)
    01:56:181 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - It's hard to read, try to destack it
    02:34:093 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I don't know if it's rankable or not, but I don't like it :/ It will be impossible for HR players...
    02:42:499 (15,16,1) - Try to make this spacing with a slider, I know you want to make it hard, but I think it's better to place a slider here :D
    02:57:087 (4,1) - One slider for the transition
    03:38:296 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Try to make a more beautiful curve :D
    03:51:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    03:58:241 (6,7,8,1) - A simple stream here is enough :D You don't need to break the combo of everyone like that :D

    I don't want to touch the rest of the map, not because i'm lazy, but because I have nothing else to say (other I said before).
    I hate stream, but I love this map!! <3 Gl!!
Keada
656 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Keada

Battquif wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue!!~ (sorry for the delay, and for my english '0')

Phantasm

  • 00:51:237 (1,2,3) - Move 1 to 284:192. Because you use this place a lot+try to improve the spacing (just a detail) ait
    00:53:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could put a jump here, interchange 1,2,3 and 4,5,6 or something like that ;) Moved a little further away for jump ;)
    00:57:830 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - It's just my opinion, but a 6 notes stream is really hard to do. You could begin with a simple stream (place 2 notes rather the slider) No fix here, I want it to be sliders there because the finish sound comes :>
    00:57:171 (5,2) - You should stack it changed the streams after so its stacking so
    00:59:808 (7,8,9) - I don't think chage the spacing here is necessary. Space as the streams before. Oh oops, I didnt even notice haha, thanks, changed
    00:59:973 (9,1) - contrariwise, you should place a little jump here for accentuate the change of following (you follow the drum after)Dont want to do that sorry
    01:00:138 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it's better to stack it, as I said, it's following the drum here. have to say no here as well
    01:04:917 (4,7) - 1/4 sliders could make it easier to read imo. And I think 01:05:412 (8,9,10) - should be in the same direction as 01:04:753 (2,3,4) - . That ruins flow so no
    01:04:753 (2,6) - Try to stack it It is stacked o.O
    01:07:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't know if this is done on purpose but :/ the little gap is :/ ... Yeah, I don't know, do as you want :D I just wanted to notice it. Yeah it is intentional :>
    01:11:676 (5,5) - stack? These two was intentional unstack 01:12:995 (5,6) - :>
    01:17:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to center it maybe?? Nah it would ruin my patterns etc
    01:21:319 (7,5) - Try to stack it, then make a triangle with 01:22:226 (5,6) - , the flow is too broken here imo. Not flow broken, its a jump
    01:26:511 (1,2,1) - stack it maybe? And make 01:28:160 (1) - going down Did it :>
    01:32:775 (3,4,5) - Try to center it with the stream. Moved a little bit
    01:35:248 (3) - move to 286:212 then restack it with 01:36:072 (2) - okay looks nicer, fixed
    01:39:698 (9,1) - The jump is too big imo. DS of 2,00* is enough okaay okaaay .-. fixed
    01:40:852 (1,2,3) - I would prefer 2 sliders here. Before, why not, but here it's not really necessary. Id like to keep this part too
    01:49:094 (7,8) - stack something here :) akeeey
    01:56:181 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - It's hard to read, try to destack it Keeping this too
    02:34:093 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I don't know if it's rankable or not, but I don't like it :/ It will be impossible for HR players... ait changed it
    02:42:499 (15,16,1) - Try to make this spacing with a slider, I know you want to make it hard, but I think it's better to place a slider here :D youre right, I saw many people had problems with this part so >.<
    02:57:087 (4,1) - One slider for the transition nah
    03:38:296 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Try to make a more beautiful curve :D Keeping
    03:51:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
    03:58:241 (6,7,8,1) - A simple stream here is enough :D You don't need to break the combo of everyone like that :D Ait fixed it, I think

    I don't want to touch the rest of the map, not because i'm lazy, but because I have nothing else to say (other I said before).
    I hate stream, but I love this map!! <3 Gl!!
Thank you~ <3
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