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Topic Starter
offset รู้สึกเบี้ยว = = "
บอกให้ Tsuka เช็คละ เดี๋ยวคงมา โพสให้แหละ
บอกให้ Tsuka เช็คละ เดี๋ยวคงมา โพสให้แหละ
offset : 827
Lunatic:
i suggest you remove the openning
becuz player will get long break time every play... 10s + 10s =20s omg....
the map is good
Lunatic:
i suggest you remove the openning
becuz player will get long break time every play... 10s + 10s =20s omg....
the map is good
Topic Starter
tsukamaete wrote:
offset : 827 Roger that!
Lunatic:
i suggest you remove the openning
becuz player will get long break time every play... 10s + 10s =20s omg.... eh, i wanna keep it :3
the map is good thanks for the offset =w=b
Yo 833 for offset, If you like it then don't forget to resnap all note
Funny map ^.^
I'll do a full mod when this map is finished.. [ don't forgot to let me know when it's finish ] >_<!!
Funny map ^.^
I'll do a full mod when this map is finished.. [ don't forgot to let me know when it's finish ] >_<!!
Topic Starter
orioncomet wrote:
Yo 833 for offset, If you like it then don't forget to resnap all note ><
Funny map ^.^ thanks >< u played 2 time and FCed it =O= 16.7M 97.32% =w="
I'll do a full mod when this map is finished.. [ don't forgot to let me know when it's finish ] >_<!!
nice 
fight~
fight~
Preview~
See if you like it~
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Super Cute Bunny Girl Moe Moe Kyun Nyan Cute 3].osu
Ok, I'll star it now and... OH MY GOD! MY STAR IS ALONE! I GOTTA DO SOMETHING!!! *kstar* :3
See if you like it~
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Super Cute Bunny Girl Moe Moe Kyun Nyan Cute 3].osu
Ok, I'll star it now and... OH MY GOD! MY STAR IS ALONE! I GOTTA DO SOMETHING!!! *kstar* :3
Topic Starter
Rox's Super Cute Bunny Girl Moe Moe Kyun Nyan Cute >3<=O=!!
Topic Starter
Last Spell!!?? =O= (what about those "bunny girl stuff"? lol)
Star~
Topic Starter
Finally!!, release for pending! Ready for MOD!!
Heya I know that in the mod queue you said that this map had 16 star priority, but it was recent (within 24 hours) so I'm modding this anyway. So... let's begin!
Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix
Red = you MUST fix this
[General]
* You NEED a difficulty with 3 or less stars (unless you're only going for approved).
* Add custom colors?
[Eazy+]
What the... Why isn't this as long as the other two difficulties (play length of around 3:55)?
[Rox's Last Spell]
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar?
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here?
[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Just get rid of these?
03:55:499 (1) - Split this spinner in two? (First one would start at 03:55:499 and end at 04:00:499 and second one would start at 04:00:832 and end at 04:06:166.)
I'll do a recheck later.
I know that in the mod queue you said that this map had 16 star priority, but it was recent (within 24 hours) so I'm modding this anyway. So... let's begin!Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix
Red = you MUST fix this
[General]
* You NEED a difficulty with 3 or less stars (unless you're only going for approved).
* Add custom colors?
[Eazy+]
What the... Why isn't this as long as the other two difficulties (play length of around 3:55)?
[Rox's Last Spell]
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar?
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here?
[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Just get rid of these?
03:55:499 (1) - Split this spinner in two? (First one would start at 03:55:499 and end at 04:00:499 and second one would start at 04:00:832 and end at 04:06:166.)
I'll do a recheck later.
Topic Starter
Blazevoir wrote:
Heya
Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix
Red = you MUST fix this
[General]
* You NEED a difficulty with 3 or less stars (unless you're only going for approved). I'll re-map the Eazy then = =
* Add custom colors? Like what? (I have no idea what should i put in :3)
[Eazy+]
What the... Why isn't this as long as the other two difficulties (play length of around 3:55)? Remap!
[Rox's Last Spell] I'll let he fix by himself ><
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar?
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here?
[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Just get rid of these? No thanks, I prefer more emotionally starting :3
03:55:499 (1) - Split this spinner in two? (First one would start at 03:55:499 and end at 04:00:499 and second one would start at 04:00:832 and end at 04:06:166.) Some say it is so tire to spin for a long time at the end and maybe it's too much score as the original one is 15M :3
I'll do a recheck later. Yes Sir!
Eazy+;
Rename to Normal?
00:39:499 (4) - 1/2 later, 1/2 shorter?
00:49:166 (1) - Too soon after the spinner
01:31:832 (1) - ^
YOU NEED AN EASY KTHX
Rename to Normal?
00:39:499 (4) - 1/2 later, 1/2 shorter?
00:49:166 (1) - Too soon after the spinner
01:31:832 (1) - ^
YOU NEED AN EASY KTHX
Blazevoir wrote:
[Rox's Last Spell]
01:15:999 (4) - Isn't this a bit too high/close to the healthbar? I don't really think that it's a problem :/
01:52:832 (1,1) - Get rid of these spinners and actually map here? Nah. I like long spinners.
Topic Starter
DiamondCrash wrote:
Eazy+;
Rename to Normal? Ok, as I let my friend do a easy =w=
00:39:499 (4) - 1/2 later, 1/2 shorter? No thx ><
00:49:166 (1) - Too soon after the spinner roger
01:31:832 (1) - ^ ^
YOU NEED AN EASY KTHX
Hmm... Send me a forum PM once you update Normal and post an Easy difficulty.
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [l3lueskyiiz's Easy].osu
โพสแบบนี้เหรอ (･ω･｀)
BG ไม่ตรงน่ะพี่เติม มันมีดำๆโปล่มาด้วย ลองเอานี่ไปใส่แทนดู
โพสแบบนี้เหรอ (･ω･｀)
SPOILER
แหกโค้งตอนสุดท้ายทุกที
ครั้งแรกก็ S เลย OwO
แหกโค้งตอนสุดท้ายทุกที
ครั้งแรกก็ S เลย OwO
BG ไม่ตรงน่ะพี่เติม มันมีดำๆโปล่มาด้วย ลองเอานี่ไปใส่แทนดู
แก้ตรงรายละเอียดเพลง นิดนึงเติม -.-
Rox's Last Spell ไม่ใช่ Rox's Last Speel ? =w=//
Rox's Last Spell ไม่ใช่ Rox's Last Speel ? =w=//
Okay, recheck time:
[General]
Okay... From 1.5 stars to 5 stars is just way too much of a difficulty jump... You should've kept your Normal (well... your Eazy+ that felt like a Normal).
[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
00:14:166 (1) - I don't know... Wouldn't it sound better if the slider looked like this?
It ends at 00:15:499; you'll have to fix the spacing of the notes after this slider if you do decide to change it.
---
00:35:499 (3) - Move this one grid space; it's so that it spaces out the same as (1).
02:06:166 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
Err... Yeah... That's it for my recheck. I hope you still have that difficulty you removed.
[General]
Okay... From 1.5 stars to 5 stars is just way too much of a difficulty jump... You should've kept your Normal (well... your Eazy+ that felt like a Normal).
[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
00:14:166 (1) - I don't know... Wouldn't it sound better if the slider looked like this?
It ends at 00:15:499; you'll have to fix the spacing of the notes after this slider if you do decide to change it.
---
00:35:499 (3) - Move this one grid space; it's so that it spaces out the same as (1).
02:06:166 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
Err... Yeah... That's it for my recheck. I hope you still have that difficulty you removed.
Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [l3lueskyiiz's Easy].osu
แก้อย่างรวดเร็ว
แก้อย่างรวดเร็ว
Blazevoir wrote:
Okay, recheck time:
[General]
Okay... From 1.5 stars to 5 stars is just way too much of a difficulty jump... You should've kept your Normal (well... your Eazy+ that felt like a Normal).
[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
00:14:166 (1) - I don't know... Wouldn't it sound better if the slider looked like this?
It ends at 00:15:499; you'll have to fix the spacing of the notes after this slider if you do decide to change it. << fix
---
00:35:499 (3) - Move this one grid space; it's so that it spaces out the same as (1). << fix
02:06:166 (1) - Make this symmetrical? << fix
Err... Yeah... That's it for my recheck. I hope you still have that difficulty you removed.
Orange = my suggestion.
Purple = you should fixed it or addded.
[General]
• ควรเพิ่มเสียง slider tick เสียงเดียวกับ SC clap.
[Normal]
Purple = you should fixed it or addded.
[General]
• ควรเพิ่มเสียง slider tick เสียงเดียวกับ SC clap.
[Normal]
SPOILER
Suggestion.
00:15:499 (3) Back of slider add finish.
00:27:499 (1,2) back of slider SC clap.
00:29:499 (4) ^
00:31:832 (3,4,5) SC clap.
00:32:832 (6) Finish.
00:33:832 (3) SC clap.
00:34:166 (5) middle slider SC clap.
00:35:166 (6) SC clap. (ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทำเป็นรีเทิร์นสไลด์ถึง 00:35:499)
00:35:832 (1,2,3) start slider add SC clap.
00:37:832 (4) back of slider add SC clap.
00:45:999 (2) finish
00:46:499 (4,5) SC clap.
00:47:166 (7) ^
00:47:332 (8) finish
00:49:166 (1) start slider add clap.
ขี้เกียจ mod เต็มเพลงง่ะ
ปล. ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทุกดิฟตั้งแต่ 00:49:166 มันจะอยู่ตรงเส้นขาวพอดีใช่มะ ?
นับเส้นขาวไปข้างหน้า 2 เส้นจะอยู่ตรง 00:49:832 ให้ใส่ SC clap แล้วนับไป 2 เส้นเรื่อยๆแล้วใส่ SC clap.
00:15:499 (3) Back of slider add finish.
00:27:499 (1,2) back of slider SC clap.
00:29:499 (4) ^
00:31:832 (3,4,5) SC clap.
00:32:832 (6) Finish.
00:33:832 (3) SC clap.
00:34:166 (5) middle slider SC clap.
00:35:166 (6) SC clap. (ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทำเป็นรีเทิร์นสไลด์ถึง 00:35:499)
00:35:832 (1,2,3) start slider add SC clap.
00:37:832 (4) back of slider add SC clap.
00:45:999 (2) finish
00:46:499 (4,5) SC clap.
00:47:166 (7) ^
00:47:332 (8) finish
00:49:166 (1) start slider add clap.
ขี้เกียจ mod เต็มเพลงง่ะ
ปล. ถ้าเป็นไปได้ทุกดิฟตั้งแต่ 00:49:166 มันจะอยู่ตรงเส้นขาวพอดีใช่มะ ?
นับเส้นขาวไปข้างหน้า 2 เส้นจะอยู่ตรง 00:49:832 ให้ใส่ SC clap แล้วนับไป 2 เส้นเรื่อยๆแล้วใส่ SC clap.
Remove .osb from song folder and full submit!
[Lunatic]
03:27:499 (1,2,3) - Make some space between these sliders so you can clearly see when to hit them.
Easy
01:36:832 (1,2) - Spacing?
That's it!
[Lunatic]
03:27:499 (1,2,3) - Make some space between these sliders so you can clearly see when to hit them.
Easy
01:36:832 (1,2) - Spacing?
That's it!
Topic Starter
Lesjuh wrote:
Remove .osb from song folder and full submit! Rogerthat
[Lunatic]
03:27:499 (1,2,3) - Make some space between these sliders so you can clearly see when to hit them. Done
Easy
01:36:832 (1,2) - Spacing? fixed
That's it!
AMSP
[Lunatic]____★★★★
It so Lunatic.
[Rox's Last Spell]
- Spacing
00:24:832 (1,2) - And 00:25:832 (3,4) - Was not the same spacing.
01:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - Not the same spacing
01:27:166 (1,2) - Too far.
01:32:498 (1,2) - ^
01:37:832 (1,2) - ^
- Other.
Too boring
[All]
Great map.
You got your name in the Al2e KD Star list
STAR!
[Lunatic]____★★★★
It so Lunatic.
[Rox's Last Spell]
- Spacing
00:24:832 (1,2) - And 00:25:832 (3,4) - Was not the same spacing.
01:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - Not the same spacing
01:27:166 (1,2) - Too far.
01:32:498 (1,2) - ^
01:37:832 (1,2) - ^
- Other.
Too boring
[All]
Great map.
You got your name in the Al2e KD Star list
STAR!
Changing nothing. The "Too far" is a jump and I've seen a lot of these "not the same spacing" on tieff and other people's map. >_>al2e10 wrote:
[Rox's Last Spell]
- Spacing
00:24:832 (1,2) - And 00:25:832 (3,4) - Was not the same spacing.
01:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - Not the same spacing
01:27:166 (1,2) - Too far.
01:32:498 (1,2) - ^
01:37:832 (1,2) - ^
- Other.
Too boring
[General]
Keep your kiai times on the start of the combo's. And same with the ends but well.... at the end
Also I don't know why but I found your mapping a bit hard to follow. Ex: I couldn't tell what you were mapping like the beat or vocals or...what. That's just a personal thing so don't fret over it.
Your maps are good but all those straight lines kinda get dull after awhile. Maybe run through with your creative hand and change the shape of some sliders?
[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
01:05:499 (1,2) - Shorten by 1/2 tick
02:10:166 (4) - Move back 1/2 tick
02:48:666 (3) - Move back 1/2 tick
[Normal]
00:56:999 (4,5) - Maybe make this into a repeater?
02:44:832 - End here OR continue onto next Kiai since its such a short pause.
03:43:832 - End Kiai time and keep combo or keep it going
[Rox's Last Spell]
Just fine!
[Lunatic]
Just fine!
Good song. Good map. Good job!
You get one of those five pointed thingies!
Keep your kiai times on the start of the combo's. And same with the ends but well.... at the end
Also I don't know why but I found your mapping a bit hard to follow. Ex: I couldn't tell what you were mapping like the beat or vocals or...what. That's just a personal thing so don't fret over it.
Your maps are good but all those straight lines kinda get dull after awhile. Maybe run through with your creative hand and change the shape of some sliders?
[l3lueskyiiz's Easy]
01:05:499 (1,2) - Shorten by 1/2 tick
02:10:166 (4) - Move back 1/2 tick
02:48:666 (3) - Move back 1/2 tick
[Normal]
00:56:999 (4,5) - Maybe make this into a repeater?
02:44:832 - End here OR continue onto next Kiai since its such a short pause.
03:43:832 - End Kiai time and keep combo or keep it going
[Rox's Last Spell]
Just fine!
[Lunatic]
Just fine!
Good song. Good map. Good job!
You get one of those five pointed thingies!
Topic Starter
ok, now it's workroxkyuubiforever wrote:
[attachment=0:72ec8]Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Last Idea].osu[/attachment:72ec8]
Please, go ;__________;
Please, tell me that you didn't upload the new diff...termerys wrote:
ok, now it's workroxkyuubiforever wrote:
[attachment=0:9727f]Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes (termerys) [Rox's Last Idea].osu[/attachment:9727f]
Please, go ;__________;
Topic Starter
I changed into the original name, because I think u won't be seriously use the "last idea" lolroxkyuubiforever wrote:
Please, tell me that you didn't upload the new diff...
remove .osb file
[Easy]
nothing to wrong ;;
[Normal]
nothing;;
[Hard]
01:01:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:01:499 (3) - add newcombo
01:02:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:03:332 (4) - add newcombo
[Lunctic]
02:36:666 (5) - add newcombo
03:30:166 (3) - add newcombo
03:30:499 (1) - remove newcombo
[Easy]
nothing to wrong ;;
[Normal]
nothing;;
[Hard]
01:01:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:01:499 (3) - add newcombo
01:02:166 (1) - remove newcombo
01:03:332 (4) - add newcombo
[Lunctic]
02:36:666 (5) - add newcombo
03:30:166 (3) - add newcombo
03:30:499 (1) - remove newcombo
Song is kinda soft for its speed. Also, it seems to go softer at 1min 35sec, for some reason...
[Normal]
Is it just me or are all the beats starting on a white tick, even though there are parts that are sung on red ticks?
[Rox 666 bullshit crap]
This is a stupid name and you know it
[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - What the hell? Make this playing time longer, or remove it entirely. Its unnecessary and makes the player feel bored, having to hit 7 beats then break more.
Starred, I guess
[Normal]
Is it just me or are all the beats starting on a white tick, even though there are parts that are sung on red ticks?
[Rox 666 bullshit crap]
This is a stupid name and you know it
[Lunatic]
00:26:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - What the hell? Make this playing time longer, or remove it entirely. Its unnecessary and makes the player feel bored, having to hit 7 beats then break more.
Starred, I guess