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Draftnell
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Satoshi Kazuki
M4M
Hi~ sorry for late M4M..took a time to install this map lol

My Column:1|2|3|4

LIGHT
01:01:044 (61044|1,61044|0) - move on column to the right...hand balance
01:06:691 (66691|2,66691|3) - ^left
01:12:338 (72338|0,72338|1) - ^right

EXTENDED
00:11:985 (11985|0) - move to 4..avoid jack
00:36:338 (36338|2) - move to 1...hand balance
01:39:338 (99338|0,99338|3) - change 1|4 to 2|3...avoid jack

CHALLENGE
00:11:544 (11544|2) - move to 2...hand balance
00:41:279 - triple? that kick was loud
01:16:926 (76926|3) - remove LN and add note(stairs is fine)

sorry for little mod :(
Good Luck!!! :D
Topic Starter
Aste-

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M
Hi~ sorry for late M4M..took a time to install this map lol

My Column:1|2|3|4

LIGHT
01:01:044 (61044|1,61044|0) - move on column to the right...hand balance
01:06:691 (66691|2,66691|3) - ^left
01:12:338 (72338|0,72338|1) - ^right

EXTENDED
00:11:985 (11985|0) - move to 4..avoid jack Re Arrange
00:36:338 (36338|2) - move to 1...hand balance
01:39:338 (99338|0,99338|3) - change 1|4 to 2|3...avoid jack

CHALLENGE
00:11:544 (11544|2) - move to 2...hand balance
00:41:279 - triple? that kick was loud Nope... 3 For Cymbal
01:16:926 (76926|3) - remove LN and add note(stairs is fine)uhh.. i dont think soo

sorry for little mod :(
Good Luck!!! :D
Thanks !!

i'll MOD your as soon as posible (DL ing atm)

Update
Ibrahim

[Baim] wrote:

haii Asep-chaawn >.<

Collumn

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Mod via IRC EXTENDED
10:49 [Baim]: sep coba cek map ai no scenario yg HD .. udah enakan belum menurut ente?
10:49 Pharos21: wait
10:49 Pharos21: ehh im..
10:49 [Baim]: hmm?
10:49 Pharos21: tolong coba DL ni map...
10:49 [Baim]: mana?? :v
10:49 [Baim]: si ta DL
10:49 Pharos21: dah bisa di DL lom.. kemaren idk ko ngga bisa
10:49 *Pharos21 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare!]
10:50 [Baim]: dl-ing sep
10:50 [Baim]: ko ga bisa ._>
10:50 Pharos21: nah kan
10:50 Pharos21: hadeh
10:50 [Baim]: wait coba lagi'
10:51 [Baim]: gimane?
10:52 [Baim]: map ente corupt ._.
10:54 Pharos21: hadeh
10:54 Pharos21: orz
10:54 Pharos21: pusing dah wa
10:54 Pharos21: hm....
10:55 [Baim]: :'V
10:56 [Baim]: pusing ._.
10:57 Pharos21: ahh.. ketemu
10:57 Pharos21: SB name ku kacau
10:58 [Baim]: :'v
11:47 *Pharos21 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [LIGHT]] <osu!mania> |4K|
11:52 *[Baim] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare!]
11:52 Pharos21: sep
11:53 *[Baim] is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [EXTENDED]] <osu!mania> +Hidden |4K|
11:53 [Baim]: :'v
11:54 Pharos21: Thanks ye...
11:54 Pharos21: dan ak tunggu MOD mu
11:54 [Baim]: :v/
11:54 [Baim]: mau di mod sama ane :'v?
11:57 Pharos21: ye
11:57 Pharos21: bayaran MOD kemaren
11:58 [Baim]: kaowkawkokaw okee deh :'v
12:12 [Baim]: sep itu di mod nya semuaa?
12:13 Pharos21: ye
12:13 [Baim]: oke :'v
12:13 Pharos21: kalo ngga yang lu bisa aja
12:13 Pharos21: tapi priority yang Extended
12:13 [Baim]: terus itu cara masukin timing yg harys diubah gimana ._.
12:13 Pharos21: emang ada?
12:14 [Baim]: kalo ada ._.
12:14 Pharos21: kalo mo ngasih timing nya.. di pojok kiri bawah kan ada timing tuh.. kau Click...
12:14 Pharos21: nanti muncul windows... kau Copy Timing nya
12:14 Pharos21: udah~
12:19 [Baim]: hmmmmmmmmm
12:57 *[Baim] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/541677 marina - Towa yori Towa ni]
12:57 [Baim]: ini gimana mainnya :'v
12:58 Pharos21: heh?
12:58 Pharos21: wait
12:58 [Baim]: susah :'v
12:58 [Baim]: but lagunya enak sep
12:59 Pharos21: ahh ini
12:59 Pharos21: buset.. marathon
12:59 [Baim]: hooh ;v
12:59 [Baim]: enak tapi aslii
12:59 Pharos21: bisa di co.. nvm.. ngga kuat
12:59 Pharos21: ak juga tau
12:59 [Baim]: bikin sep :v
13:00 Pharos21: pernah MOD lagu it ane
13:00 Pharos21: weit?? jurang nya ko ke situ
13:00 [Baim]: wah dah ada yg buat ya ._.
13:01 [Baim]: kwaowkaowkwa
13:02 Pharos21: Taiko paling
13:02 Pharos21: dan tu lagu ke Gravie.. tenang
13:02 [Baim]: jir taiko gimana bikinnya .-.
13:03 Pharos21: gampang
13:03 [Baim]: salut gua sama yg main ctb di lagu ini ._.
13:04 Pharos21: tu Korosensei semua
13:04 Pharos21: cepet banget pesti gerakan nya
13:07 [Baim]: huuh ._.
13:07 [Baim]: gimana caranya yaa :'v
13:08 Pharos21: hmmm
13:08 Pharos21: main map yang AR nya 9
13:09 [Baim]: susaj\h :'v
13:11 Pharos21: latian makanya
13:11 Pharos21: wa aja Taiko yang dulu bisanya Kantan sekarang bisa Oni
13:13 [Baim]: ini ctb masih stuck stars 2 ._.
13:17 Pharos21: hmm
13:17 Pharos21: same
13:18 Pharos21: sama lahh sama ak
13:18 *Pharos21 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/506042 CyoucyoP feat.Hatsune Miku - End of the World]
13:18 Pharos21: pengen map ini.... 9K
13:18 [Baim]: tinggal bikin :v
13:19 Pharos21: 4 min
13:19 Pharos21: susah cari MOD nya
13:21 [Baim]: iya sih ._.
13:21 [Baim]: bakal susa
13:21 Pharos21: hueee
13:21 [Baim]: atau ngga bikin aja buat latihan
13:21 [Baim]: atau buat fun aja
13:22 Pharos21: hmm
13:22 Pharos21: paling buat latian bikin STD
13:22 [Baim]: nah bisa tuh
13:43 [Baim]: sep bagus nih taiko rank
13:43 [Baim]: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/97485
13:44 Pharos21: wohh
13:44 Pharos21: jaman kecil kita ya sob
13:48 [Baim]: hooh :'v
13:48 *[Baim] is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303459 Yamano Satoko - Doraemon no Uta [Insane Collab]] <CatchTheBeat>
13:52 Pharos21: gg
13:52 [Baim]: gileee nge jump :'v
13:52 [Baim]: lagi nyari lagu jadul apa ya :'v
13:52 *Pharos21 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/303459 Yamano Satoko - Doraemon no Uta [Insane Collab]] <CatchTheBeat>
13:52 Pharos21: nyoba ahh
13:53 [Baim]: oke :v
13:53 Pharos21: sekalian nostalgila
13:53 [Baim]: takikoptaaaaahh
13:56 [Baim]: wkaowkaokw xD
13:56 Pharos21: wew.. capek
13:56 Pharos21: mayan.. 3 digit
13:57 [Baim]: brb jemput adr
13:57 [Baim]: ade
17:38 *[Baim] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [LIGHT]]
17:38 [Baim]: :'v
17:39 Pharos21: yay
17:39 Pharos21: post pa irc?
17:39 [Baim]: irc aja dah .->
17:39 [Baim]: ane masih bingung kalo post
17:39 Pharos21: wait ye...
17:39 *Pharos21 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/711071 ARM(IOSYS) feat. miko & kimu - Otaser*Revolution [Pharos' Kantan]]
17:39 [Baim]: hooh
17:40 [Baim]: bingung kalo post masukin 00:17:632 - itu nya gimana ._.
17:45 *Pharos21 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [LIGHT]]
17:46 Pharos21: masukin gimana?
17:46 [Baim]: masukin si ini nya
17:46 [Baim]: misa 00:37:220 -
17:46 Pharos21: lha gitu bisa
17:46 Pharos21: ato maksud nya gini? 00:17:632 (17632|1) - ?
17:47 [Baim]: masukin ke postnya :'v
17:47 [Baim]: 00:37:220 (37220|3,37220|0) -
17:47 [Baim]: itu ane juga bisa :'v
17:47 [Baim]: jadi di irc aja :'v
17:49 Pharos21: hmmm...
17:49 Pharos21: ye sama
17:49 Pharos21: ok deh
17:49 Pharos21: what dif??
17:49 *[Baim] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [LIGHT]]
17:49 [Baim]: ini dulu :'v
17:49 *Pharos21 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700976 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [LIGHT]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:49 Pharos21: ok
17:49 [Baim]: sip
17:49 [Baim]: first
17:50 [Baim]: 00:13:661 (13661|0) - kalo kata ane sih ini nanggung mencetnya btw
17:50 Pharos21: ye.. but ak ngikut Synth
17:51 Pharos21: jadi keep
17:51 [Baim]: ok ok
17:52 [Baim]: ke atas nya ok ko sep bagus
17:52 Pharos21: sep
17:52 Pharos21: Next diff?
17:52 [Baim]: hooh
17:52 *[Baim] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700974 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [CHALLENGE]]
17:52 *Pharos21 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [EXTENDED]]
17:53 *Pharos21 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700974 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [CHALLENGE]]
17:55 [Baim]: nicee!
17:55 Pharos21: udeh?? ngga ada?
17:55 [Baim]: ngga ada sep clear
17:55 Pharos21: ohh
17:55 *Pharos21 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [EXTENDED]]
17:56 [Baim]: wait update
17:56 Pharos21: ok
17:56 *[Baim] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [EXTENDED]]
17:58 [Baim]: 00:55:396 - ini mau di tambahin ketukan drum ga?
17:58 Pharos21: Stream only aja
17:58 Pharos21: nge jack ntar kalo wa kasi
17:59 [Baim]: only stream aja kan?
17:59 [Baim]: ok
17:59 [Baim]: stairsnya emaaa wkwk
18:00 Pharos21: ??
18:00 [Baim]: 01:16:573 - kata aku bagian sini double nya ganti sep .. soalnya sama kaya yg sebelumnya
18:01 Pharos21: kaya yang mana?
18:02 [Baim]: ini 00:52:220 -
18:02 Pharos21: OK di demperin aje
18:03 Pharos21: *dempetin
18:03 [Baim]: nah itu sip
18:03 Pharos21: done~
18:03 [Baim]: ke atasnya ok sip
18:04 Pharos21: ok
18:04 [Baim]: sippp sep sorry dikit :'v
18:04 Pharos21: gpp
18:04 Pharos21: Post
18:04 [Baim]: ok :'v
Gomen dikit :v
GL ya Asep-chawn >>< :roll: :roll:
Raediaufar
M4M

Column: l1l2l3l4l

Extended
00:40:220 (40220|2) – gak dijadiin LN disini?
00:40:926 (40926|3,40926|0) – dijadiin triple aja, soalnya ada suara cymbal
01:00:691 (60691|0) – jadiin double, suara cymbal
01:06:338 (66338|3) - ^
01:11:985 (71985|3) - ^
01:16:220 (76220|3,76220|2) – ini bisa dijadiin triple
01:16:926 (76926|1,76926|0) – jadiin triple, taroh not nya di 4
01:28:926 (88926|1,88926|0) - ^
Bagian ini - 01:38:808 – sama - 01:39:073 – dijadiin triple

Challenge
Udah bagus, no suggestion here

Light
00:35:279 (35279|0,35279|3) – jadiin 2 sama 4
00:53:632 (53632|3,53896|0,54338|1) – gak dijadiin double?

udah bagus juga diff ini

Btw ini map kayaknya butuh SV deh jadi ini rekomendasiku
Topic Starter
Aste-

Raediaufar wrote:

M4M

Column: l1l2l3l4l

Extended
00:40:220 (40220|2) – gak dijadiin LN disini? ngga ada tempat
00:40:926 (40926|3,40926|0) – dijadiin triple aja, soalnya ada suara cymbal
01:00:691 (60691|0) – jadiin double, suara cymbal
01:06:338 (66338|3) - ^
01:11:985 (71985|3) - ^ ^ ngga ak kasi.. buat pure Stream
01:16:220 (76220|3,76220|2) – ini bisa dijadiin triple nope
01:16:926 (76926|1,76926|0) – jadiin triple, taroh not nya di 4 ^
01:28:926 (88926|1,88926|0) - ^ ^
Bagian ini - 01:38:808 – sama - 01:39:073 – dijadiin triple nanti wa pikirin

Challenge
Udah bagus, no suggestion here

Light
00:35:279 (35279|0,35279|3) – jadiin 2 sama 4
00:53:632 (53632|3,53896|0,54338|1) – gak dijadiin double? for new player sake... no

udah bagus juga diff ini

Btw ini map kayaknya butuh SV deh jadi ini rekomendasiku
about your suggestion for SV.. Sorry.. rejected... Too Cramped and hard to read

btw.. thanks ^.^

Updated!!
Kaito-kun


Hi Pharos, long time since I modded one of your maps (I have already modded a bunch, since you are everywhere XD). Anyways, you requested a re-modding, so here I am:

1|2|3|4

[General]
Increase HP to 7.5 on CHALLENGE diff

[LIGHT]
I saw the past mod and you rejected making 00:53:632 (53632|3,53896|0,54161|2,54338|1) - into doubles "for new player sake", but then, why did you applied it at the end? (01:38:808 (98808|0,98808|1,99073|2,99073|3,99338|1,99338|0,99514|3,99514|2,100220|0) - to be exact). Even tho they sound sort of different, sound pattern is the same.

[CHALLENGE]
Move 00:02:367 (2367|3) - to col 3, I would like to avoid THIS, it looks and feels sort of unbalanced there.
Looks like you subsconciously made a K. Jokes aside, change it to THIS to add a bit more balance
I know you like K-Shoot Mania, but come one, two K's?. Why don't you move 00:11:102 (11102|3,11102|1,11279|3,11279|2) - one column to the left?
00:36:955 (36955|1,36955|2) - Make this into a 3-notes chord. I understand that you are doing this for the players on that level, but there's a space of 3/4 beat in-between each one, it's not that hard actually. Also, on 00:53:632 -, you make 3 chords, so it should be valid here too :P. If you accept, make the chord as 124 (if you understand what I mean with that)
01:39:073 (99073|2,99073|1,99338|3,99338|0,99514|2) - Why only doubles, when you mapped chords for the exact same sound? Make them easy chords

[EXTENDED]
00:36:955 (36955|3,36955|1) - Make it a 3-note chord, sound is strong enough.
00:40:220 (40220|2) - Make this into a LN, that ends on 00:40:573 - (deleting the note that's there), dunno why you ignored the fact that the sound is longer here, even tho you mapped it for the easier diffs
00:53:632 - In here, why didn't you made them chords? (I can excuse 00:53:632 (53632|0,53632|3) -, because it can be put as part of the past pattern, but the others should be chords imo)
01:00:691 - Add at least one note here (preferably on col 4), don't ignore that sound all of a sudden
01:06:338 - ^^^ (preferably on col 3)
01:11:985 - ^^^ (preferably on col 1)
01:16:220 - add a note (preferably on col 2)


That's all. Good map overall :3.

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Topic Starter
Aste-

Kaito-kun wrote:



Hi Pharos, long time since I modded one of your maps (I have already modded a bunch, since you are everywhere XD). Anyways, you requested a re-modding, so here I am:

1|2|3|4

[General]
Increase HP to 7.5 on CHALLENGE diff

[LIGHT]
I saw the past mod and you rejected making 00:53:632 (53632|3,53896|0,54161|2,54338|1) - into doubles "for new player sake", but then, why did you applied it at the end? (01:38:808 (98808|0,98808|1,99073|2,99073|3,99338|1,99338|0,99514|3,99514|2,100220|0) - to be exact). Even tho they sound sort of different, sound pattern is the same. ahh.. i forgot that... thanks

[CHALLENGE]
Move 00:02:367 (2367|3) - to col 3, I would like to avoid THIS, it looks and feels sort of unbalanced there.
Looks like you subsconciously made a K. Jokes aside, change it to THIS to add a bit more balance
I know you like K-Shoot Mania, but come one, two K's?. Why don't you move 00:11:102 (11102|3,11102|1,11279|3,11279|2) - one column to the left? re-arrange
00:36:955 (36955|1,36955|2) - Make this into a 3-notes chord. I understand that you are doing this for the players on that level, but there's a space of 3/4 beat in-between each one, it's not that hard actually. Also, on 00:53:632 -, you make 3 chords, so it should be valid here too :P. If you accept, make the chord as 124 (if you understand what I mean with that)
01:39:073 (99073|2,99073|1,99338|3,99338|0,99514|2) - Why only doubles, when you mapped chords for the exact same sound? Make them easy chords

[EXTENDED]
00:36:955 (36955|3,36955|1) - Make it a 3-note chord, sound is strong enough.
00:40:220 (40220|2) - Make this into a LN, that ends on 00:40:573 - (deleting the note that's there), dunno why you ignored the fact that the sound is longer here, even tho you mapped it for the easier diffs
00:53:632 - In here, why didn't you made them chords? (I can excuse 00:53:632 (53632|0,53632|3) -, because it can be put as part of the past pattern, but the others should be chords imo) hmm.. wanna avoiding jack here.. ok then.. added
01:00:691 - Add at least one note here (preferably on col 4), don't ignore that sound all of a sudden
01:06:338 - ^^^ (preferably on col 3) jacking if i put it there.. add to 2 instead
01:11:985 - ^^^ (preferably on col 1)
01:16:220 - add a note (preferably on col 2)


That's all. Good map overall :3.

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Thanks ^.^

Update~
Ginshu
beep

My Column:
1|2|3|4


CHALLENGE
• 00:36:514 - delete salah satu, di diff EXTENDED hanya pakai 1 note. atau add note di EXTENDED
• 00:36:955 - delete salah satu, disini cuman ada bass aja

EXTENDED
• 00:22:838 - add note 3, rythm thing
• 00:22:926 - add note 2, 2 note for bass, sama seperti sebelumnya
• 00:36:955 - delete salah satu, disini cuman ada bass aja

-
Topic Starter
Aste-

LNP- wrote:

beep

My Column:
1|2|3|4


CHALLENGE
• 00:36:514 - delete salah satu, di diff EXTENDED hanya pakai 1 note. atau add note di EXTENDED add note di Extended
• 00:36:955 - delete salah satu, disini cuman ada bass aja

EXTENDED
• 00:22:838 - add note 3, rythm thing
• 00:22:926 - add note 2, 2 note for bass, sama seperti sebelumnya
• 00:36:955 - delete salah satu, disini cuman ada bass aja

-
all OK!!

dah cuman itu??

Updated
RuberusuScarlet
tag: K Shoot :arrow: K-Shoot

no kudos
Topic Starter
Aste-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

tag: K Shoot :arrow: K-Shoot

no kudos
Got it. Thanks!
SpectorDG
I Love this, Here my star :)
Shinzo-

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with Pharos21


4K

[1|2|3|4]


Mod
[General]
Unsnapped Kiai ? ._.
*saran buat SBnya untuk part 01:40:403 - kalo bisa jangan langsung muncul Kshootmania ny [highlight]ny jadi kgk keliatan

[LIGHT]
00:18:338 - add note
00:23:102 (23102|1,23279|3,23279|2) - Ctrl H and move 1 to right *pitch
00:23:985 - add note
00:36:514 - should be missing note
00:52:220 - add note
00:52:926 - ^
00:53:632 - ^
00:53:896 - ^
00:54:161 - ^
00:54:338 (54338|1) - LN ?
01:16:044 - add note for consistency
01:37:396 - 01:38:102 - 01:38:808 - 01:39:073 - 01:39:338 - same as before


[CHALLENGE]
00:40:573 - add note ?
01:31:396 (91396|3) - move to 3 ?

[EXTENDED]
00:02:455 - should be 2 note ?
00:03:161 - ^
00:05:279 - ^
00:05:985 - ^
00:08:102 - ^
00:08:808 - ^
ETC
00:06:691 (6691|0) - move to 4 ? pitch
00:18:249 (18249|0,18338|2) - Ctrl G ? pitch
00:26:191 - missing note ?
00:27:426 - 00:27:602 - ^
00:29:014 - ^
00:31:838 - ^
00:33:249 - ^
00:37:485 - add note ?
00:38:455 (38455|2,38632|1) - Ctrl G ? pitch
00:40:926 - gimana kalo ngikutin suara 1/4 nya ? :D kan ini diff tersusah dan masa sama kek challenge ._.
00:52:220 - till 00:52:926 - better to just 1 note stream first, then it starts with 2 note 00:52:926 -
01:16:220 - inb4 2 note
01:16:926 - add note cymbal ?
01:16:573 (76573|0,76573|1,76661|3,76661|2,76749|1,76749|0,76838|2,76838|3,76926|1,76926|0) - Ctrl H

ini orangny nyanyi di kiai doang --"
kgk jelas juga wkwkwk
Btw, Nice map Pharos ><
keren SBnya :D
Good Luck ya~ take my star ^^
Topic Starter
Aste-

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with Pharos21


4K

[1|2|3|4]


Mod
[General]
Unsnapped Kiai ? ._. nope
*saran buat SBnya untuk part 01:40:403 - kalo bisa jangan langsung muncul Kshootmania ny [highlight]ny jadi kgk keliatan keep...

[LIGHT]
00:18:338 - add note
00:23:102 (23102|1,23279|3,23279|2) - Ctrl H and move 1 to right *pitch Flow.. no
00:23:985 - add note
00:36:514 - should be missing note
00:52:220 - add note
00:52:926 - ^ Nope
00:53:632 - ^Nope
00:53:896 - ^Nope
00:54:161 - ^Nope
00:54:338 (54338|1) - LN ?Nope
01:16:044 - add note for consistency consistency with what?
01:37:396 - 01:38:102 - 01:38:808 - 01:39:073 - 01:39:338 - same as before Nope~


[CHALLENGE]
00:40:573 - add note ?
01:31:396 (91396|3) - move to 3 ? Keep.. pattern

[EXTENDED]
00:02:455 - should be 2 note ?
00:03:161 - ^
00:05:279 - ^
00:05:985 - ^
00:08:102 - ^
00:08:808 - ^
ETC
00:06:691 (6691|0) - move to 4 ? pitch Nope
00:18:249 (18249|0,18338|2) - Ctrl G ? pitch
00:26:191 - missing note ? Nope
00:27:426 - 00:27:602 - ^ ^
00:29:014 - ^
00:31:838 - ^
00:33:249 - ^^
00:37:485 - add note ?
00:38:455 (38455|2,38632|1) - Ctrl G ? pitch Nope
00:40:926 - gimana kalo ngikutin suara 1/4 nya ? :D kan ini diff tersusah dan masa sama kek challenge ._. liat atasnya lahh... Stream
00:52:220 - till 00:52:926 - better to just 1 note stream first, then it starts with 2 note 00:52:926 -
01:16:220 - inb4 2 note
01:16:926 - add note cymbal ?
01:16:573 (76573|0,76573|1,76661|3,76661|2,76749|1,76749|0,76838|2,76838|3,76926|1,76926|0) - Ctrl H

ini orangny nyanyi di kiai doang --"
kgk jelas juga wkwkwk
Btw, Nice map Pharos ><
keren SBnya :D
Good Luck ya~ take my star ^^
Not Noted mean OK

wait for my MOD

Update!!
Feerum
Hi Pharos21

As we talked in PM we have M4M ^_^

So heres my Mod for you :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

LIGHT

00:04:044 (4044|0,4220|1) - Maybe CTRL + G for Pitch
01:23:632 (83632|3) - Move to 2 and 01:23:985 (83985|1) - to 3, the Singlenote and Chord sounds not same and should be maybe not mapped same :)
Nothing more found. Sorry :c Nice Pitch & Balance in this Diff

CHALLENGE

00:04:220 (4220|3) - Move to 2 for Pitch
00:04:926 - Little Suggestion for some pitch: 00:08:720 (8720|1,8720|0) - Move two col to right, sounds not same like previous chord
00:09:867 (9867|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch
00:15:514 (15514|2) - Suggestion for Pitch:00:21:161 (21161|0) - Maybe move to 4, again pitch :)
Little Suggestion for some Pattern Variation:
00:27:514 (27514|0) - Move to 4
00:28:044 (28044|2) - Move to 3
00:28:220 (28220|2) - Move to 2
00:28:396 (28396|1,28573|2) - CRTL + H
--Suggestion Ends--// Play's nice and add some variation to your pattern :)
00:35:455 (35455|2) - Move to 1, 00:35:632 (35632|1,35632|0) - two col to right aaaaand 00:35:808 (35808|2) - to 2 Again some variation and balance
00:37:485 - Missing Note or did you put here some space? :o
00:43:396 (43396|0) - Move to 3 for Balance
00:48:338 (48338|2) - Move to 1 and 00:48:514 (48514|0) - to 3 for balance
00:50:455 (50455|2) - Move to 2 and 00:50:632 (50632|1,50808|2) - CTRL + H for balance
01:14:102 (74102|3) - Move to 1 for Balance

EXTENDED

00:52:838 - Missing Note? :D I Think you can Chord this too fit to music
01:02:896 (62896|2,62985|1,63073|2,63161|3,63249|0,63338|1,63426|2,63514|3,63602|0,63691|1,63779|2,63867|3,63955|0,64044|1,64132|2,64220|3) - Maybe CTRL + H this? Just to add some variation you already have use the stairs from 1-4.. maybe add here some variation and make these from 4-1? :D
01:23:985 (83985|3) - Move to 1 for some balance
01:28:926 - Missing note? Here you have the chordtrill + finish 01:16:926 -
Thats all. Nothing more found. Dont want to destroy your style and this diff is funny how it is :3

Aaaalright. This song is cool. Wish you good luck with this map Pharos :)
Topic Starter
Aste-

Feerum wrote:

Hi Pharos21

As we talked in PM we have M4M ^_^

So heres my Mod for you :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

LIGHT

00:04:044 (4044|0,4220|1) - Maybe CTRL + G for Pitch
01:23:632 (83632|3) - Move to 2 and 01:23:985 (83985|1) - to 3, the Singlenote and Chord sounds not same and should be maybe not mapped same :)
Nothing more found. Sorry :c Nice Pitch & Balance in this Diff

CHALLENGE

00:04:220 (4220|3) - Move to 2 for Pitch
00:04:926 - Little Suggestion for some pitch: 00:08:720 (8720|1,8720|0) - Move two col to right, sounds not same like previous chord
00:09:867 (9867|0) - Move to 3 for Pitch
00:15:514 (15514|2) - Suggestion for Pitch:00:21:161 (21161|0) - Maybe move to 4, again pitch :)
Little Suggestion for some Pattern Variation:
00:27:514 (27514|0) - Move to 4
00:28:044 (28044|2) - Move to 3
00:28:220 (28220|2) - Move to 2
00:28:396 (28396|1,28573|2) - CRTL + H
--Suggestion Ends--// Play's nice and add some variation to your pattern :)
00:35:455 (35455|2) - Move to 1, 00:35:632 (35632|1,35632|0) - two col to right aaaaand 00:35:808 (35808|2) - to 2 Again some variation and balance
00:37:485 - Missing Note or did you put here some space? :o
00:43:396 (43396|0) - Move to 3 for Balance
00:48:338 (48338|2) - Move to 1 and 00:48:514 (48514|0) - to 3 for balance
00:50:455 (50455|2) - Move to 2 and 00:50:632 (50632|1,50808|2) - CTRL + H for balance
01:14:102 (74102|3) - Move to 1 for Balance

EXTENDED

00:52:838 - Missing Note? :D I Think you can Chord this too fit to music
01:02:896 (62896|2,62985|1,63073|2,63161|3,63249|0,63338|1,63426|2,63514|3,63602|0,63691|1,63779|2,63867|3,63955|0,64044|1,64132|2,64220|3) - Maybe CTRL + H this? Just to add some variation you already have use the stairs from 1-4.. maybe add here some variation and make these from 4-1? :D
01:23:985 (83985|3) - Move to 1 for some balance
01:28:926 - Missing note? Here you have the chordtrill + finish 01:16:926 -
Thats all. Nothing more found. Dont want to destroy your style and this diff is funny how it is :3

Aaaalright. This song is cool. Wish you good luck with this map Pharos :)
accepting some..
wait for my mod, kay?

Updated!!
MEGAtive
Messy IRC
2015-06-12 18:41 MEGAtive: IRC
2015-06-12 18:42 MEGAtive: Oi
2015-06-12 18:43 MEGAtive: Allo, ada oang disini?~ :v
2015-06-12 18:43 Pharos21: ahahaha
2015-06-12 18:43 Pharos21: wait
2015-06-12 18:43 Pharos21: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700975 uma - masaka IN Nightmare! [EXTENDED]]
2015-06-12 18:43 MEGAtive: Sip
2015-06-12 18:43 MEGAtive: 00:02:455 (2455|3) - Ini dan seterusny
2015-06-12 18:43 MEGAtive: D sini hrusny 1 aja
2015-06-12 18:43 MEGAtive: Soalny 00:02:102 - 2 not karena 8-bit synth sm Lead synth
2015-06-12 18:43 Pharos21: apanya yang inconsistence?
2015-06-12 18:44 MEGAtive: Itu d atas
2015-06-12 18:44 MEGAtive: Cek lg deh
2015-06-12 18:44 Pharos21: nin...
2015-06-12 18:45 Pharos21: lu masion kan?
2015-06-12 18:45 MEGAtive: Masih
2015-06-12 18:45 MEGAtive: Allo
2015-06-12 18:45 Pharos21: ye
2015-06-12 18:45 Pharos21: weee...
2015-06-12 18:46 MEGAtive: Udh cek belom?
2015-06-12 18:46 Pharos21: di situ mah main synth sama back synth
2015-06-12 18:46 Pharos21: jadi kena dual
2015-06-12 18:46 MEGAtive: Itu echo :/
2015-06-12 18:46 Pharos21: ngga
2015-06-12 18:46 Pharos21: back synth nya pake 1/2 snap
2015-06-12 18:46 MEGAtive: 8-bit synth?
2015-06-12 18:47 Pharos21: yep
2015-06-12 18:47 MEGAtive: Iya itu 1/2....
2015-06-12 18:47 MEGAtive: Tambah Lead synth yg dri 8-bit synth kjuga
2015-06-12 18:47 Pharos21: back synth nya 1/2 beat
2015-06-12 18:47 MEGAtive: Cek lg deh
2015-06-12 18:47 Pharos21: ye
2015-06-12 18:47 Pharos21: jadinya aku kasi Dual... dah bener tuh
2015-06-12 18:47 MEGAtive: 00:02:367 - D sini yg pke Lead synth
2015-06-12 18:48 Pharos21: kecuali ini
2015-06-12 18:48 Pharos21: 00:06:691 (6691|0,6867|2) -
2015-06-12 18:48 Pharos21: karena Stream
2015-06-12 18:48 Pharos21: kalo aku dual.. annoying jadinya
2015-06-12 18:48 MEGAtive: Klo itu emg....
2015-06-12 18:48 MEGAtive: Makany inkonsisten....
2015-06-12 18:48 MEGAtive: Btw untuk stream
2015-06-12 18:48 MEGAtive: 00:06:691 (6691|0,6779|1,6867|2,6955|3,7044|1,7044|0) - Ctrl+H
2015-06-12 18:48 MEGAtive: Pitch-wise
2015-06-12 18:49 MEGAtive: brb
2015-06-12 18:49 Pharos21: ok
2015-06-12 18:53 MEGAtive: i'm back
2015-06-12 18:53 MEGAtive: Sep
2015-06-12 18:53 MEGAtive: Udh d coba?
2015-06-12 18:53 Pharos21: udah
2015-06-12 18:53 Pharos21: stream aku kasi dual...
2015-06-12 18:54 Pharos21: demi consistency
2015-06-12 18:54 MEGAtive: Bukan, yg Ctrl+H
2015-06-12 18:54 MEGAtive: 00:06:691 (6691|0,6779|1,6867|2,6955|3,7044|1,7044|0) - Ctrl+H
2015-06-12 18:55 Pharos21: udah
2015-06-12 18:56 MEGAtive: Asep?
2015-06-12 18:56 MEGAtive: Ok
2015-06-12 18:56 Pharos21: ??
2015-06-12 18:56 Pharos21: ada lagi?
2015-06-12 18:56 MEGAtive: Wait
2015-06-12 18:57 MEGAtive: Yg tdi inkonsisten biar gitu aja?
2015-06-12 18:57 Pharos21: udah aku Fix
2015-06-12 18:57 Pharos21: stream aku tambahin note
2015-06-12 18:57 Pharos21: dan yang mini stream + dual.. keep
2015-06-12 18:58 MEGAtive: 00:18:073 (18073|2) - Gk ad not? Kan Hihat
2015-06-12 18:58 Pharos21: hi hat?
2015-06-12 18:58 MEGAtive: Iy
2015-06-12 18:59 Pharos21: rusuh dong kalo di tambahin lagi
2015-06-12 18:59 MEGAtive: Terserah sih....
2015-06-12 18:59 MEGAtive: Tpi d belakang d follow
2015-06-12 18:59 MEGAtive: 00:25:573 - Ini juga, dan lebih audible
2015-06-12 19:00 Pharos21: ohh
2015-06-12 19:00 Pharos21: forgot about that
2015-06-12 19:00 MEGAtive: Jadi?
2015-06-12 19:01 Pharos21: Fixed
2015-06-12 19:01 MEGAtive: Perhatiin lg
2015-06-12 19:01 MEGAtive: D tempat u naro model gitu hihatny ketinggalan
2015-06-12 19:02 Pharos21: uhh ya..
2015-06-12 19:02 Pharos21: hi hat di Red line...
2015-06-12 19:02 MEGAtive: 00:37:926 - Tambah not? Ad lead synth senalinl string
2015-06-12 19:02 MEGAtive: *selain
2015-06-12 19:02 MEGAtive: Klo mau d tambah, tro d 4 aja
2015-06-12 19:03 Pharos21: add and re-arranged
2015-06-12 19:03 MEGAtive: Kay
2015-06-12 19:04 MEGAtive: 00:41:191 - Tambah not, kedengeran ad Lead synth
2015-06-12 19:05 MEGAtive: Atau klo 00:41:102 - niatny ngikutin hihat doang, gausah d add
2015-06-12 19:05 Pharos21: ok.. kalo itu.. saran dari zan
2015-06-12 19:05 Pharos21: emang kaya gitu
2015-06-12 19:05 MEGAtive: Oh....
2015-06-12 19:05 Pharos21: untuk preparing ke stream
2015-06-12 19:05 MEGAtive: Oh, tension build-up....
2015-06-12 19:06 Pharos21: yep
2015-06-12 19:06 MEGAtive: 00:55:044 - Up from here, dahel happened....
2015-06-12 19:06 Pharos21: dan ada full stream di atas..
2015-06-12 19:06 Pharos21: nah itu
2015-06-12 19:06 MEGAtive: Kick gk d follow?
2015-06-12 19:07 Pharos21: full stream di sini
2015-06-12 19:07 Pharos21: ngga
2015-06-12 19:07 Pharos21: only back sound
2015-06-12 19:07 MEGAtive: Kay....\
2015-06-12 19:09 MEGAtive: Mungkin segini aja....
2015-06-12 19:09 MEGAtive: IMO msih belum pitch-wise
2015-06-12 19:09 MEGAtive: Mungkin coba d cek lg pitchnya....
2015-06-12 19:10 Pharos21: ngga ngikut pitch wa
2015-06-12 19:10 Pharos21: mentingin Flow
2015-06-12 19:10 MEGAtive: Laguny ngingetin model2 Poseidon d DDR lel
2015-06-12 19:10 MEGAtive: Gk ngikut pitch?
2015-06-12 19:10 Pharos21: ye kah... wa lupa
2015-06-12 19:10 Pharos21: ngga
2015-06-12 19:10 Pharos21: focus di Flow
2015-06-12 19:10 MEGAtive: Okay then...
2015-06-12 19:11 MEGAtive: Ngemod yg lain....
2015-06-12 19:11 Pharos21: ok
2015-06-12 19:11 Pharos21: yang lain IRC pa post?
2015-06-12 19:11 MEGAtive: Btw untuk diffname....
2015-06-12 19:11 MEGAtive: Extended?
2015-06-12 19:11 Pharos21: ??
2015-06-12 19:11 Pharos21: KSM
2015-06-12 19:11 MEGAtive: Post aj dah
2015-06-12 19:11 Pharos21: KSM please
2015-06-12 19:12 MEGAtive: Oh....
2015-06-12 19:12 MEGAtive: Eh wait
2015-06-12 19:12 MEGAtive: brb check KSM
2015-06-12 19:12 MEGAtive: Ehiya diffnameny gitu....
2015-06-12 19:12 Pharos21: emang gitu...
2015-06-12 19:12 MEGAtive: Kaythen....
2015-06-12 19:13 MEGAtive: Ah sudahlah, tiba2 gk mudeng mod lg....
2015-06-12 19:13 MEGAtive: Lanjutan modny lain kali ya
2015-06-12 19:14 MEGAtive: Untuk skrg post IRC dulu
2015-06-12 19:14 Pharos21: ok
2015-06-12 19:14 MEGAtive: Lol nulis masaka d google suggestionny "masakan" awkakak

Lanjutan menyusul....
-[ AmiShici ]-
Heiyoo!!! o/

Here my mod

Little mod from me
[CHALLENGE]00:52:926 - add note on 1 then 00:53:102 (53102|0) - move to 3

[EXTENDED]00:33:691 - add note? same as 00:29:279 (29279|3,29279|2,29455|0,29455|1,29632|2,29632|3) - 00:30:691 (30691|3,30691|0,30867|1,30867|2,31044|3,31044|2) - etc
00:35:102 - ^
00:52:220 - add note
01:38:808 (98808|3,98808|1,99073|3,99073|0,99338|1,99338|2) - ga bikin triplet kek CHALLENGE diff?

gomen ga bisa bantu bnyk

GL =w=)b
Topic Starter
Aste-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Heiyoo!!! o/

Here my mod

Little mod from me
[CHALLENGE]00:52:926 - add note on 1 then 00:53:102 (53102|0) - move to 3

[EXTENDED]00:33:691 - add note? same as 00:29:279 (29279|3,29279|2,29455|0,29455|1,29632|2,29632|3) - 00:30:691 (30691|3,30691|0,30867|1,30867|2,31044|3,31044|2) - etc
00:35:102 - ^
00:52:220 - add note
01:38:808 (98808|3,98808|1,99073|3,99073|0,99338|1,99338|2) - ga bikin triplet kek CHALLENGE diff?

gomen ga bisa bantu bnyk

GL =w=)b
All OK

Update

SB (80%)
inbee
Hello pharos. :v /

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


LIGHT
00:09:691 (9691|0) - Move to 2
00:09:867 (9867|1) - Move to 1
00:10:220 (10220|3) - Move to 3
00:10:573 (10573|2) - Move to 2
^ ini bedasarkan tinggi rendah nada menurut ane

00:42:691 (42691|3) - move to 1
00:43:044 (43044|0) - Move to 2
00:43:396 (43396|1) - move to 1
^ ini pola imajinasi ane :v

CHALLENGE
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|3) - CTRL + J


Segitu aja ros.
selebihnya mantep menurut ane. :D
btw, entah cuma perasaan ane tau gimana, MP3 nya kurang jernih. :3

btw open GD ? :D

GL~
Topic Starter
Aste-

inbee wrote:

Hello pharos. :v /

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


LIGHT
00:09:691 (9691|0) - Move to 2 // nada rendah.. no
00:09:867 (9867|1) - Move to 1 // higher than ^.. no
00:10:220 (10220|3) - Move to 3
00:10:573 (10573|2) - Move to 2
^ ini bedasarkan tinggi rendah nada menurut ane

00:42:691 (42691|3) - move to 1
00:43:044 (43044|0) - Move to 2
00:43:396 (43396|1) - move to 1
^ ini pola imajinasi ane :v

CHALLENGE
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|3) - CTRL + J // keep


Segitu aja ros.
selebihnya mantep menurut ane. :D
btw, entah cuma perasaan ane tau gimana, MP3 nya kurang jernih. :3 // from ther game.. ngga ada yang lebih bagus dari ini

btw open GD ? :D // nope.. mau nyoba soloist

GL~
Thanks
Takane6
[EXTENDED]
SPOILER
w-wait... extended!? less than 2 minute?
00:34:749 (34749|1,34926|1,35102|1,35279|1,35455|1) - waw
from 00:40:926 - until 00:52:220 - er... im fell asleep when play this part... its not only kick and snare here...(and its almost no different with Challange in a numbers of note)
01:30:691 (90691|2,90867|3,91044|2) - switch col
01:36:691 (96691|2,96867|0,97044|2) - ^
00:20:808 (20808|2,21161|1) - ^
00:52:220 - snare... add note
[CHALLANGE]
SPOILER
00:36:955 (36955|0) - col 4
00:37:220 (37220|3) - col 2
00:37:485 (37485|1) - col 1

[LIGHT]
SPOILER
from 00:38:102 - until 00:40:220 - this part seems to be the hardest in this diff... when its not the same in the other diff...
from 01:28:926 - until 01:39:514 - it just me or the placing is kinda copy-paste?

inbee wrote:

btw, entah cuma perasaan ane tau gimana, MP3 nya kurang jernih. :3

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

gomen ga bisa bantu bnyk
Topic Starter
Aste-

Takane6 wrote:

[EXTENDED]
SPOILER
w-wait... extended!? less than 2 minute?
00:34:749 (34749|1,34926|1,35102|1,35279|1,35455|1) - waw
from 00:40:926 - until 00:52:220 - er... im fell asleep when play this part... its not only kick and snare here...(and its almost no different with Challange in a numbers of note) see atasnya lah.... full stream (buat pemanasan sebelum kena stream)
01:30:691 (90691|2,90867|3,91044|2) - switch col
01:36:691 (96691|2,96867|0,97044|2) - ^
00:20:808 (20808|2,21161|1) - ^
00:52:220 - snare... add note
[CHALLANGE]
SPOILER
00:36:955 (36955|0) - col 4
00:37:220 (37220|3) - col 2 Keep
00:37:485 (37485|1) - col 1 ^

[LIGHT]
SPOILER
from 00:38:102 - until 00:40:220 - this part seems to be the hardest in this diff... when its not the same in the other diff... then what should i do?
from 01:28:926 - until 01:39:514 - it just me or the placing is kinda copy-paste? following pitch..

inbee wrote:

btw, entah cuma perasaan ane tau gimana, MP3 nya kurang jernih. :3
(ngambil langsung dari game KSM nya....

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

gomen ga bisa bantu bnyk
Thanks

will update after i fix the SB (80%)
schwarzvgrune
M4M as requested who knows how many days ago (more than 1 month). sorry for the delay


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)? not checked
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)?HS added, but i won't check this


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


light
i shall take a strict measure on PR because there is not a lot of notes here.
and also based on the star rating of 1.65 i am assuming LIGHT diffs as NORMAL, and not EASY. thus my recommendation
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|2) - wrong pitch. should be 2 3 1 rearrange
00:01:749 (1749|3) - move to 3 better pitch representation

00:04:573 (4573|3) - move to 3, same reason with above.

00:06:691 (6691|3) - better use 2 x 2/4 LN here imo, put it at 4 and then 2

00:14:367 (14367|3) - move to 3 hand balance.

00:17:191 (17191|3) - mvoe to 2, hand balance

00:17:985 (17985|2) - better chnage it into 2/4 x 2 LN, at 4 and 3
challenge
00:01:397 - add a note to 3 for consistency. you use 2 note to represent this sound.
00:06:338 (6338|2) - move to 1, better pitch representation
00:11:985 (11985|1) - move to 1, better pitch representation
00:13:749 - add a note, beat of the same strength and make it easier to read 00:13:926 (13926|0,13926|3,14102|1,14102|2) - same with this <
00:12:691 - use 3 notes here, phase change. its okay to copy higher diffs, the emphasis and phase change justify it.

00:14:455 - add a note, no reason to only use 1

and so on until the phase ends.

00:46:749 (46749|2) - move to 1
00:46:926 (46926|0) - move to 3, better hand balance and flow
01:31:396 (91396|0,91573|1,91749|2) - ctrl H drag 1x to left better pitch representation
extended
at a first glance there seems to be no glaring issues with the map however....
00:02:455 (2455|3,2455|2) - this is inconsistent there shouldn't be 2 note here, there are 2 sounds you're following
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|2) - this one high pitched
and 00:01:397 (1397|3,1573|0,1749|3,1926|0,2102|3,2279|0,2455|3) - this one repeating accompaniment lower-pitched synthetic
so readjust accordingly. delete 3 or 4
00:03:161 (3161|3,3161|2) - - same issue with above, adjust accordingly
00:05:279 (5279|0,5279|1) -
00:05:985 (5985|0,5985|1) -
and so on until the end of the phase.
if you disagree with this, then why not use 2 note to express that sound? in which case you need to use 2 notes here to make it consistent
00:08:632 (8632|0) - and so on
00:11:985 (11985|2) - move to 2, balanced jack at 3 and 2
00:11:985 (11985|0) - use LN here as well, better represent the sustained sound

00:13:661 - there is audible louder beat here, better use 2 note on this phase for better flow and readability.
add a note to 3
00:14:367 - same. beat strength is indeed different with 00:14:455 (14455|2,14455|3) - however imo its still better beccause it can be used to differentiate the difference in beat compared with the usual pattern.
00:16:485 - ^and so on
00:17:191 - ^
that beat i pointed above is of the same strength with this, 00:17:455 (17455|0,17455|2) -
and you use 2 note here, so i dont see any reason not to use on the parts mentioned above
00:19:308 (19308|3,20014|0) - ^^^^

00:23:985 - why not use 1/4 stream on this part? look much more appropriate for extended. see mashiro fang's qualia for reference if you want.
there is a consistent 1/4 stream melody there on this part.
vary it a bit and do this instead. this would raise the diffs as well

00:37:926 (37926|3,37926|2) - not consistent, use only 1. if you're also following that beat, then add 1 more note as well at 00:37:749 -
00:40:573 - add a note to 4, for consistency

00:40:661 (40661|3,40749|2,40838|1) - drag this 1x to left, to 3 2 1
00:40:926 (40926|0) - move to 2. this is better and more consistent.

00:41:102 (41102|1,41279|0,41279|3,41455|2,41632|3,41632|0,41808|2,41985|3,41985|0,42161|1,42338|0,42338|3) - and then rearrange the whole section and vary it a bit without breaking the 2notes chord pattern consistency following recommendations given above.


00:40:926 - also same as above, better map the 1/4 stream. more appropriate for extended diffs.
00:52:220 - add a note to 2, consistency.

00:53:544 (53544|2,53632|2) - not really appropriate for less than 4 star diff map, consider revamping this jack


00:54:338 (54338|1,54338|2,54338|0) - feels better with all LNs imo, just suggestions

01:01:838 (61838|0,61926|1,62014|2,62102|3,62191|0,62279|1,62367|2,62455|3) - vary the pattern instead.
01:03:249 (63249|3,63338|2,63426|1,63514|0,63602|3,63691|2,63779|1,63867|0) - same reason

01:16:838 (76838|0,76926|0) - not appropriate jack for 3 star diffs, revise this

01:18:161 (78161|2) - move to 1, balanced jack at 1 and 3
01:19:926 (79926|1,80632|2) - move to 1 and 4 for better balance, atm too heavy on 2 and 3
01:24:867 (84867|2) - move to 2
01:25:573 (85573|2) - move to 1 balanced jack
01:27:691 (87691|2) - move to 4
01:27:779 (87779|3) - move to 2, better balance

01:38:808 - add a note to 1, consistency.

01:38:102 - should have 3 notes, keep it consistent, revamp your whole pattern on this part to suit them.
it seems off wit only 2. and also its extended diffs, no reason not to follow this.
Topic Starter
Aste-

schwarzvgrune wrote:

M4M as requested who knows how many days ago (more than 1 month). sorry for the delay


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)? not checked
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)?HS added, but i won't check this


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


light
i shall take a strict measure on PR because there is not a lot of notes here.
and also based on the star rating of 1.65 i am assuming LIGHT diffs as NORMAL, and not EASY. thus my recommendation
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|2) - wrong pitch. should be 2 3 1 rearrange
00:01:749 (1749|3) - move to 3 better pitch representation

00:04:573 (4573|3) - move to 3, same reason with above.

00:06:691 (6691|3) - better use 2 x 2/4 LN here imo, put it at 4 and then 2

00:14:367 (14367|3) - move to 3 hand balance. hmm.. sorry but i must keep this.. breaking my pattern

00:17:191 (17191|3) - mvoe to 2, hand balance ^

00:17:985 (17985|2) - better chnage it into 2/4 x 2 LN, at 4 and 3
challenge
00:01:397 - add a note to 3 for consistency. you use 2 note to represent this sound.
00:06:338 (6338|2) - move to 1, better pitch representation
00:11:985 (11985|1) - move to 1, better pitch representation
00:13:749 - add a note, beat of the same strength and make it easier to read 00:13:926 (13926|0,13926|3,14102|1,14102|2) - same with this < // keep
00:12:691 - use 3 notes here, phase change. its okay to copy higher diffs, the emphasis and phase change justify it.

00:14:455 - add a note, no reason to only use 1 // keep

and so on until the phase ends.

00:46:749 (46749|2) - move to 1
00:46:926 (46926|0) - move to 3, better hand balance and flow
01:31:396 (91396|0,91573|1,91749|2) - ctrl H drag 1x to left better pitch representation

extended
at a first glance there seems to be no glaring issues with the map however....
00:02:455 (2455|3,2455|2) - this is inconsistent there shouldn't be 2 note here, there are 2 sounds you're following
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|2) - this one high pitched
and 00:01:397 (1397|3,1573|0,1749|3,1926|0,2102|3,2279|0,2455|3) - this one repeating accompaniment lower-pitched synthetic
so readjust accordingly. delete 3 or 4
00:03:161 (3161|3,3161|2) - - same issue with above, adjust accordingly
00:05:279 (5279|0,5279|1) -
00:05:985 (5985|0,5985|1) -
and so on until the end of the phase.
if you disagree with this, then why not use 2 note to express that sound? in which case you need to use 2 notes here to make it consistent
00:08:632 (8632|0) - and so on
00:11:985 (11985|2) - move to 2, balanced jack at 3 and 2
00:11:985 (11985|0) - use LN here as well, better represent the sustained sound

00:13:661 - there is audible louder beat here, better use 2 note on this phase for better flow and readability.hmm.. only 1 sound here.. so keep
add a note to 3
00:14:367 - same. beat strength is indeed different with 00:14:455 (14455|2,14455|3) - however imo its still better beccause it can be used to differentiate the difference in beat compared with the usual pattern.
00:16:485 - ^and so on //keep
00:17:191 - ^ //keep
that beat i pointed above is of the same strength with this, 00:17:455 (17455|0,17455|2) -
and you use 2 note here, so i dont see any reason not to use on the parts mentioned above
00:19:308 (19308|3,20014|0) - ^^^^ // i following BG synth with main synth.. so rejected

00:23:985 - why not use 1/4 stream on this part? look much more appropriate for extended. see mashiro fang's qualia for reference if you want.
there is a consistent 1/4 stream melody there on this part.
vary it a bit and do this instead. this would raise the diffs as well // keep

00:37:926 (37926|3,37926|2) - not consistent, use only 1. if you're also following that beat, then add 1 more note as well at 00:37:749 -
00:40:573 - add a note to 4, for consistency

00:40:661 (40661|3,40749|2,40838|1) - drag this 1x to left, to 3 2 1
00:40:926 (40926|0) - move to 2. this is better and more consistent.

00:41:102 (41102|1,41279|0,41279|3,41455|2,41632|3,41632|0,41808|2,41985|3,41985|0,42161|1,42338|0,42338|3) - and then rearrange the whole section and vary it a bit without breaking the 2notes chord pattern consistency following recommendations given above.


00:40:926 - also same as above, better map the 1/4 stream. more appropriate for extended diffs. // keep
00:52:220 - add a note to 2, consistency.

00:53:544 (53544|2,53632|2) - not really appropriate for less than 4 star diff map, consider revamping this jack


00:54:338 (54338|1,54338|2,54338|0) - feels better with all LNs imo, just suggestions

01:01:838 (61838|0,61926|1,62014|2,62102|3,62191|0,62279|1,62367|2,62455|3) - vary the pattern instead.
01:03:249 (63249|3,63338|2,63426|1,63514|0,63602|3,63691|2,63779|1,63867|0) - same reason

01:16:838 (76838|0,76926|0) - not appropriate jack for 3 star diffs, revise this

01:18:161 (78161|2) - move to 1, balanced jack at 1 and 3
01:19:926 (79926|1,80632|2) - move to 1 and 4 for better balance, atm too heavy on 2 and 3
01:24:867 (84867|2) - move to 2
01:25:573 (85573|2) - move to 1 balanced jack
01:27:691 (87691|2) - move to 4
01:27:779 (87779|3) - move to 2, better balance

01:38:808 - add a note to 1, consistency.

01:38:102 - should have 3 notes, keep it consistent, revamp your whole pattern on this part to suit them.Revamped all
it seems off wit only 2. and also its extended diffs, no reason not to follow this.
No Reply mean OK

Thanks
schwarzvgrune
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/319001 this is the map.
all diffs would be appreciated.
though i cant force you really...
Shirou


Hi Modding from Voltexer's modding queue~

Hello Pharos~!

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LIGHT
00:52:220 - add note 3 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:52:926 (52926|0) - add note (Pitch problem)
00:53:632 - add note 1 or 2 col (Pitch problem)
00:53:896 - add note 2 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:54:161 - add note 1 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:54:338 - ^
01:37:396 (97396|0) - add note (Pitch problem)
01:38:102 (98102|3) - ^
01:38:808 (98808|1) - ^
01:39:073 - add note 2 or 3 col (Pitch problem)
01:39:338 - ^
01:39:514 - ^

CHALLENGE
00:40:926 (40926|2) - add note (Pitch problem)
01:22:926 (82926|0,83014|1,83102|2,83191|3,83279|2,83279|1,83279|0) - ctrl +H (piano scale)
01:38:808 (98808|2) - ^

EXTENDED
00:23:632 (23632|3,23720|2,23808|1,23896|0,23985|1,23985|3,23985|2) - ctrl +H (piano scale)

Sorry, I can not get a lot of issues. :C

Good Luck :D
And Shoot kudosu~!
Topic Starter
Aste-

Shirou wrote:



Hi Modding from Voltexer's modding queue~

Hello Pharos~!

|1|2|3|4|

LIGHT
00:52:220 - add note 3 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:52:926 (52926|0) - add note (Pitch problem)
00:53:632 - add note 1 or 2 col (Pitch problem)
00:53:896 - add note 2 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:54:161 - add note 1 or 4 col (Pitch problem)
00:54:338 - ^
01:37:396 (97396|0) - add note (Pitch problem)
01:38:102 (98102|3) - ^
01:38:808 (98808|1) - ^
01:39:073 - add note 2 or 3 col (Pitch problem)
01:39:338 - ^
01:39:514 - ^

CHALLENGE
00:40:926 (40926|2) - add note (Pitch problem)
01:22:926 (82926|0,83014|1,83102|2,83191|3,83279|2,83279|1,83279|0) - ctrl +H (piano scale)
01:38:808 (98808|2) - ^

EXTENDED
00:23:632 (23632|3,23720|2,23808|1,23896|0,23985|1,23985|3,23985|2) - ctrl +H (piano scale)

Sorry, I can not get a lot of issues. :C

Good Luck :D
And Shoot kudosu~!
Not noted mean Yes

Update

SB DONE! YEAH

BN CHECK!!!!
RuberusuScarlet
mark for bn check
schwarzvgrune

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

mark for bn check
gooooooo!!! i love this song!! map is decent enough as well! go for rank o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


SB check

[StoryBoard]
00:58:838 - わ :arrow:

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F,0,58838,58926,0,1
M,0,58838,60161,440,180,454,182
F,0,58926,60161,1
M,0,60161,60338,454,182,448,93
F,0,60161,60338,1,0

↓ change

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M,0,58838,60161,440,180,454,182
F,0,58926,60161,1
M,0,60161,60338,454,182,448,93
F,0,60161,60338,1,0

sb/wa.png :arrow: sb/wo.png"



01:08:455 - わ :arrow:

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M,0,68455,68632,693,200,672,195
F,0,68455,68632,1
M,0,68632,68808,672,195,599,108
F,0,68632,68808,1,0

↓ change
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M,0,68455,68632,693,200,672,195
F,0,68455,68632,1
M,0,68632,68808,672,195,599,108
F,0,68632,68808,1,0
sb/wa.png :arrow: sb/ha.png


01:15:867 - i :arrow: I
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/I-s-b.png",320,240
F,0,75867,,1
M,0,75867,75955,113,182,308,265
R,0,75867,76220,0,-0.2608173
M,0,76220,76308,266,270,-230,357

↓ change

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/I-b.png",320,240
F,0,75867,,1
M,0,75867,75955,113,182,308,265
R,0,75867,76220,0,-0.2608173
M,0,76220,76308,266,270,-230,357
sb/I-s-b.png :arrow: sb/I-b.png

[Hitsound]
normal-hitclap.wav is 10ms delay
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


pattern mod

|1|2|3|4|

  • [General]
    preview point is unsnapped

    [EXTENDED]
    00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1) - move to 12 :arrow: 23?
    00:31:044 (31044|2) - ^1. avoid jack column3
    00:36:955 (36955|0) - ^2? pattern CHALLENGE

    00:53:014 - to 00:53:191 - one note delete. no main sound (00:53:279 - to 00:53:544 - There is mainsound )

    [CHALLENGE]
    01:39:514 (99514|2) - move to 4

    [LIGHT]
    01:37:396 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3362285
Topic Starter
Aste-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


SB check

[StoryBoard]
00:58:838 - わ :arrow:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/wa.png",320,240
F,0,58838,58926,0,1
M,0,58838,60161,440,180,454,182
F,0,58926,60161,1
M,0,60161,60338,454,182,448,93
F,0,60161,60338,1,0

↓ change

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/wo.png",320,240
F,0,58838,58926,0,1
M,0,58838,60161,440,180,454,182
F,0,58926,60161,1
M,0,60161,60338,454,182,448,93
F,0,60161,60338,1,0

sb/wa.png :arrow: sb/wo.png"



01:08:455 - わ :arrow:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/wa.png",320,240
M,0,68455,68632,693,200,672,195
F,0,68455,68632,1
M,0,68632,68808,672,195,599,108
F,0,68632,68808,1,0

↓ change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/ha.png",320,240
M,0,68455,68632,693,200,672,195
F,0,68455,68632,1
M,0,68632,68808,672,195,599,108
F,0,68632,68808,1,0
sb/wa.png :arrow: sb/ha.png


01:15:867 - i :arrow: I
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/I-s-b.png",320,240
F,0,75867,,1
M,0,75867,75955,113,182,308,265
R,0,75867,76220,0,-0.2608173
M,0,76220,76308,266,270,-230,357

↓ change

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/I-b.png",320,240
F,0,75867,,1
M,0,75867,75955,113,182,308,265
R,0,75867,76220,0,-0.2608173
M,0,76220,76308,266,270,-230,357
sb/I-s-b.png :arrow: sb/I-b.png

[Hitsound]
normal-hitclap.wav is 10ms delay
All Fixed and Uploaded

please check it again
RuberusuScarlet
pattern mod :arrow: p/4319883

SB check again

[StoryBoard]
.osb
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"I-s-b.png",320,240
M,0,76220,76926,320,240,313,226
F,0,76220,76926,1
M,0,76926,77279,313,226,295,371
F,0,76926,77279,1,0
R,0,76926,77279,0,0.938667
change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/I-s-b.png",320,240
M,0,76220,76926,320,240,313,226
F,0,76220,76926,1
M,0,76926,77279,313,226,295,371
F,0,76926,77279,1,0
R,0,76926,77279,0,0.938667
I-s-b.png :arrow: sb/I-s-b.png

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M,0,4573,6691,282,150,277,158
M,0,6691,7044,277,158,213,64
F,0,6691,7044,1,0
change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/u.png",320,240
M,0,4573,6691,282,150,277,158
M,0,6691,7044,277,158,213,64
F,0,6691,7044,1,0
u.png :arrow: sb/u.png

LIGHT.osu
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"L-G.png",320,240
M,0,9867,,382,161
F,0,11632,11985,1
F,0,11985,12338,1,0
change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/L-G.png",320,240
M,0,9867,,382,161
F,0,11632,11985,1
F,0,11985,12338,1,0
L-G.png :arrow: sb/L-G.png

[File check]

unused file (in the sb folder) delete please
F.png
f-s.png
j.png
M.png
n-s.png
n-s-b.png
O.png
Petal.psd ← lol
p-s.png

unused file (outside of the sb folder)
I-s-b.png
L-G.png
u.png
Topic Starter
Aste-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

pattern mod :arrow: p/4319883

SB check again

[StoryBoard]
.osb
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"I-s-b.png",320,240
M,0,76220,76926,320,240,313,226
F,0,76220,76926,1
M,0,76926,77279,313,226,295,371
F,0,76926,77279,1,0
R,0,76926,77279,0,0.938667
change
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M,0,76220,76926,320,240,313,226
F,0,76220,76926,1
M,0,76926,77279,313,226,295,371
F,0,76926,77279,1,0
R,0,76926,77279,0,0.938667
I-s-b.png :arrow: sb/I-s-b.png

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M,0,4573,6691,282,150,277,158
M,0,6691,7044,277,158,213,64
F,0,6691,7044,1,0
change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/u.png",320,240
M,0,4573,6691,282,150,277,158
M,0,6691,7044,277,158,213,64
F,0,6691,7044,1,0
u.png :arrow: sb/u.png

LIGHT.osu
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"L-G.png",320,240
M,0,9867,,382,161
F,0,11632,11985,1
F,0,11985,12338,1,0
change
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/L-G.png",320,240
M,0,9867,,382,161
F,0,11632,11985,1
F,0,11985,12338,1,0
L-G.png :arrow: sb/L-G.png

[File check]

unused file (in the sb folder) delete please
F.png
f-s.png
j.png
M.png
n-s.png
n-s-b.png
O.png
Petal.psd ← lol eyyy.. why this file moved here orz
p-s.png

unused file (outside of the sb folder)
I-s-b.png
L-G.png
u.png
Fixed all

Updated
RuberusuScarlet
pattern mod all no change ?

anyway…please do not bother this. This is my mistake

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

[LIGHT]
01:37:396 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3362285
Hitsound mod

W :arrow: whistle
C :arrow: clap
F :arrow: finish

  • [EXTENDED]

    00:52:308 (52308|2,52396|1,52485|0,52573|1,52661|2,52749|3,52838|1) - add C and Audio 20%
    00:52:926 (52926|0,53014|1,53102|0,53191|1,53279|0,53367|1,53455|0,53544|1) - add C

    01:34:220 (94220|0,94308|1,94396|2,94485|3) - delete C

    01:37:396 (97396|1,97485|3,97573|2,97661|1,97749|3,97749|0,97838|2,97926|1,98014|2) - add Audio 20%


    [CHALLENGE]
    00:52:220 (52220|3,52308|1,52396|2,52485|3,52573|0,52661|1,52749|2,52838|3) - add C and Audio 20%
    00:52:926 (52926|0,53014|2,53102|3,53191|2,53279|1,53367|0,53455|1,53544|2) - add C

    01:37:396 (97396|0) - C move to 01:37:396 (97396|2) -
    01:37:396 (97396|2,97485|1,97573|2,97661|3,97749|2,97838|1,97926|0,98014|1) - add Audio 20%

    [LIGHT]
    delete C. I think do not match the music
    [list:1337]00:13:661 (13661|0,13926|2) -
    00:14:808 (14808|2) -
    00:16:485 (16485|0,16749|1) -
    00:17:632 (17632|0) -
    00:19:308 (19308|2,19573|1) -
    00:20:455 (20455|3) -
    00:22:132 (22132|3,22396|2) -
    00:23:102 (23102|1) -
    01:18:602 (78602|3,78867|1) -
    01:19:749 (79749|3) -
    01:21:426 (81426|3,81691|1) -
    01:22:573 (82573|3) -
    01:24:249 (84249|3,84514|1) -
    01:25:396 (85396|3) -
    01:27:073 (87073|3,87338|1) -
    01:28:220 (88220|3) -
    01:29:896 (89896|3,90161|1) -
    01:31:044 (91044|3) -
    01:32:720 (92720|3,92985|1) -
    01:33:867 (93867|3) -
    01:35:544 (95544|3,95808|1) -
    01:36:691 (96691|3) -
00:36:955 (36955|2) - delete F

00:52:220 (52220|3) - add C and Audio 20%
00:52:396 (52396|1,52573|2,52749|1) - add Audio 20%
00:52:926 (52926|0) - add C

01:37:396 (97396|0,97573|2) - add C and Audio 20%
01:37:749 (97749|1,97926|0) - add Audio20%
01:38:102 (98102|3,98279|0) - add Cthat's all
Topic Starter
Aste-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


pattern mod

|1|2|3|4|

  • [General]
    preview point is unsnapped

    [EXTENDED]
    00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1) - move to 12 :arrow: 23?
    00:31:044 (31044|2) - ^1. avoid jack column3
    00:36:955 (36955|0) - ^2? pattern CHALLENGE

    00:53:014 - to 00:53:191 - one note delete. no main sound (00:53:279 - to 00:53:544 - There is mainsound )

    [CHALLENGE]
    01:39:514 (99514|2) - move to 4

    [LIGHT]
    01:37:396 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3362285
All OK

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

pattern mod all no change ?

anyway…please do not bother this. This is my mistake

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

[LIGHT]
01:37:396 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3362285
Hitsound mod

W :arrow: whistle
C :arrow: clap
F :arrow: finish

  • [EXTENDED]

    00:52:308 (52308|2,52396|1,52485|0,52573|1,52661|2,52749|3,52838|1) - add W and Audio 20%
    00:52:926 (52926|0,53014|1,53102|0,53191|1,53279|0,53367|1,53455|0,53544|1) - add W

    01:34:220 (94220|0,94308|1,94396|2,94485|3) - delete W

    01:37:396 (97396|1,97485|3,97573|2,97661|1,97749|3,97749|0,97838|2,97926|1,98014|2) - add Audio 20%


    [CHALLENGE]
    00:52:220 (52220|3,52308|1,52396|2,52485|3,52573|0,52661|1,52749|2,52838|3) - add W and Audio 20%
    00:52:926 (52926|0,53014|2,53102|3,53191|2,53279|1,53367|0,53455|1,53544|2) - add W

    01:37:396 (97396|0) - C move to 01:37:396 (97396|2) -
    01:37:396 (97396|2,97485|1,97573|2,97661|3,97749|2,97838|1,97926|0,98014|1) - add Audio 20%

    [LIGHT]
    delete W. I think do not match the music
    [list:1337]00:13:661 (13661|0,13926|2) -
    00:14:808 (14808|2) -
    00:16:485 (16485|0,16749|1) -
    00:17:632 (17632|0) -
    00:19:308 (19308|2,19573|1) -
    00:20:455 (20455|3) -
    00:22:132 (22132|3,22396|2) -
    00:23:102 (23102|1) -
    01:18:602 (78602|3,78867|1) -
    01:19:749 (79749|3) -
    01:21:426 (81426|3,81691|1) -
    01:22:573 (82573|3) -
    01:24:249 (84249|3,84514|1) -
    01:25:396 (85396|3) -
    01:27:073 (87073|3,87338|1) -
    01:28:220 (88220|3) -
    01:29:896 (89896|3,90161|1) -
    01:31:044 (91044|3) -
    01:32:720 (92720|3,92985|1) -
    01:33:867 (93867|3) -
    01:35:544 (95544|3,95808|1) -
    01:36:691 (96691|3) -
00:36:955 (36955|2) - delete F

00:52:220 (52220|3) - add W and Audio 20%
00:52:396 (52396|1,52573|2,52749|1) - add Audio 20%
00:52:926 (52926|0) - add W

01:37:396 (97396|0,97573|2) - add W and Audio 20%
01:37:749 (97749|1,97926|0) - add Audio20%
01:38:102 (98102|3,98279|0) - add Wthat's all
OK.. All OK

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