_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

안녕하세요 레바님 PM 모드 리퀘스트입니당

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[General]

BG: 1365x768 을 사용하고 계십니다. BG의 종횡비는 4:3이나 16:9 가 이루어져야합니다. 1366x768 을 사용하시는게 좋을거같습니다. 수정 하였습니다

하! 이걸 가져가시죠

호오오 감사요

MP3: 192kbps 문제없습니다
Spread: 문제없습니다
AI mod: 문제없습니다
Audio and Hitsound: soft-sliderslide.wav 의 사용 유/무 가 불확실합니다. 한번 더 체크해주시는것을 추천합니다. 폴더에서 삭제하였습니다
Timing: 00:15:350 - 에 순간 당황했지만 슬라이더틱을 맞추시는거였네요ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 문제없습니다. ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Etc: Normal 난이도에 와이드스크린 서포트 꺼주세요 수정 하였습니다

[Normal]

00:02:630 (2630|5) - 이친구만 뭔가 음이 하이톤인데 7로 옮겨보시는건 어떨가요? 약간의 자연스러움을위해 바꿨습니다

00:09:117 (9117|5) - 같은 이유로 7로 옮겨보시는게 어떨가요?? 바꿨쪄요

00:10:738 (10738|6,11144|5,11549|3,11549|1) - 이 친구들을 Ctrl + H 해보시는것도 좋을거같습니다. 이쪽 부분까지 계속 올라오는데 롱노트가 오른쪽에만 치중이 되있어서 밸런스를위해 왼쪽에 두는것도 좋을거같다고 저는 생각합니다. 시러요 흥

00:22:508 - 이쪽을 이렇게 해보시는건 어떨까요? 음 BPM이 바뀌는 타이밍 지점부터 2선에 롱노트가 꽤 오래 없다고 생각합니다. 그것 참 좋은 지적이오https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3525827

00:45:690 (45690|2) - 이것도 같은 이유로 2로 옮겨보시는건 어떨까요? 이쪽 파트에 3선에는 롱노트를 2개 쓰셧지만 2선에는 꽤 오래 비어있다고 생각합니다. 수정하였습니다

01:19:099 (79099|4,79780|5) - 이 두놈을 6.7 로 옮겨보시는것도 나쁘지않다고 생각합니다 시러요 흥

[Hard]

00:05:772 (5772|5) - 제 생각에 이것은 올바른 스냅이 아닌거같습니다. 저는 00:05:806 - 이쪽 타이밍에 확신이 스네요 아 이런 젠장할 그렇네요 25% 속도로 들어보니 ㅠㅠ 수정하였습니다

00:10:637 (10637|4) - 같은 이유로 00:10:671 - 이 맞다고 저는 생각합니다

00:16:968 (16968|5) - 마찬가지로 00:16:996 -나 00:17:011 - 이 맞다고 생각하지만 제가 애초에 피아노흐름을 잘 모르기때문에... 저는 1/16에 일단 더 확신이 스네요

00:19:695 (19695|2) - 이쪽에는 음이 없는거같습니다. 흠 00:22:508 - 랑 같은사운드같네요 지워주시는것을 추천합니다. 아닙니다, 분명히 미세한 음의 차이가 있습니다 시러요 안바꿀거에요 흥

00:23:530 (23530|2) - Normal 난이도에는 BassC 히트사운드가 존재하지만 이쪽에는 존재하지가않네요 에드 원 휫 솨운드 웁스 실수 하하하

00:27:877 (27877|5) - 00:16:968 랑 같은이유로 00:27:905 - 나 00:27:920 - 이 맞다고 생각합니다 수정 해쪄요

00:30:349 (30349|4) - 이친구 4로 옮겨보는게 어떨가요? 약간의 음...손배치..? 시러요 흥

00:30:604 (30604|4) - 은 00:30:647 - 이 맞다고 생각합니다. 수정했다

00:38:786 (38786|1) - 이쪽은 타이밍에 확신이 스지 않습니다. 거의 한 타이밍의 노트같네요. 지워주시는것을 추천합니다. 아니요 확실히 미세하게 음이 바뀌는게 들립니다. 시러요 흥 안지울꺼에요

00:49:695 (49695|4) - 이것은 00:49:738 - 이 맞다고 생각합니다. 수정하였습니다

01:19:099 (79099|3) - Normal 난이도에선은 BassC 히트사운지만 Hard 에서는 Kick 사운드가 들어가네요. 수정해주시길! 노멀 난이도에서 수정하였습니다

01:22:422 (82422|5) - 은 01:22:465 - 이 맞다고 생각합니다. ㅇㅇ바꿈

01:25:150 (85150|4) - 마찬가지 이유로 01:25:192 - 이 맞다고 생각합니다.수정하였습니다

핳핳 도움이 되셧으면 좋겠습니다 충분히 도움이 되었습니다 ㅋㅋ

Good luck :3

Column
7K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜

▽Normal

Click

00:05:874 (5874|5,6279|4) - Delete this, and in 00:05:874 - 00:06:076 - 00:06:279 - add one note for each one (recommended col 5,3,1)
△ 00:05:874 (5874|5,6279|4) - This long note is somewhat awkward. The flowing of the piano sounds are located in 00:05:874 - 00:06:076 - 00:06:279 - ,
therefore it is better to add notes there instead of the longnotes of now.
You have put long note patterns for beginners in order to skip these piano melodies; however this can bring confussion as a consequence.
The most important thing is that when a player plays the beatmap, that person should sense what kind of expressment you are showing through the beatmap.
For example, in 00:15:690 (15690|4) - 00:17:053 (17053|6) - : these long notes are certainly able to realize that they are regular low octaves.

00:10:738 (10738|6,11144|5) - Same mod as above.

00:15:520 (15520|2,15690|3) - Move one column to the left.
△Smooth pattern for beginners.

00:23:190 (23190|3,23190|5,23530|4,23871|6,23871|3,24553|4,24553|6) - Considering the other patterns, this pattern is generally biased on the right side.
If the player is a right handed space key user, the player can feel a lot of difficulties, so if you alter this pattern, it could make the progress a lot better. For example ▽
00:23:190 (23190|5,23190|3) - Move to columns 3,5 and 00:23:530 (23530|4) - move to 1.

00:34:780 (34780|0) - Change this long note to a short note.
△ 00:32:053 - From here on you were expressing the main piano and the bass, 00:34:780 - but from here on you have changed your focus to the bass,
due to this, this long note can cause confussion. You cannot sense the background music in this long note too.
Also, you can express these patterns more clearly to improve it.
To add, this part 00:32:053 - ~ 00:37:508 - and this part 00:53:871 - ~ 00:59:326 - are similar parts.
It is good to you to think about the relatedness of the similar amount of the notes for the quality.
I'd like you to arrange these two parts by comparing them. I will mention them in the next part.

00:45:008 (45008|4,45008|6,45349|3,45690|4,46030|3,46371|6,46371|4,46712|3,47053|4) - This does not show a concrete sense; thinking about the progress of the patterns, a sudden col 4,5 repeat can be a bit awkward.
Looking at the patterns around, it is better to diffuse a bit the patterns. For example ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

00:53:871 - ~ 00:59:326 - About this part ▽
00:54:553 - Needs one long note. 00:32:735 - Same goes here.
00:56:428 (56428|2) - Either delete this 00:45:519 - or think about adding a note here.
00:56:599 (56599|0,57962|2) - It is recognizable that this long note represents the piano sound. However, as said before, ignoring the piano and putting the focus on the bass is more clear, and possess some quality.
00:59:155 - Add a note (hitsound BassC)
If you considered all this, here is an example ▽


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01:02:394 (62394|2,62735|3,62735|0,63076|1,63417|2,63758|1,64099|0,64099|2,64440|1) - What do you think about this? For a better pattern shape ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:08:190 (68190|1) - Delete, and 01:07:508 (67508|2) - extend this long note 01:08:871 - until here.
01:08:190 (68190|1) - I could not sense the background music rhythm from this long note. 01:07:508 - from here 01:08:871 - to here it has a similar stream.
For example 01:14:326 (74326|5,75008|4) - it is different from this. In here you can certainly notice the multilevel background stream.

01:18:417 (78417|2,79099|1) - Same mod as above. 01:19:099 (79099|1) - Delete, and 01:18:417 (78417|2) - extend this long note 01:19:780 - until here.

01:21:144 - The end of the song is surely at this timing, so for the flowing i recommend ending the beatmap here.
If you accept this suggestion please delete these. ▽
01:20:803 (80803|2,80974|4,81144|6,81485|2,81826|6,82167|4,82508|0,82849|2,83190|4,83530|2,83871|1,84212|3,84553|5,84894|2,85235|3,85576|4,85917|5,85917|1) -

Or if you don't want to do so,
01:21:144 - ~ 01:25:917 - Decrease the hitsound volume used in this part slowly as it goes.
As the overall sound of the song decreases over time, it keeps the relatedness of the hitsounds maintaining its good quality.
You can use the Sample import option (Ctrl+shift+i)

▽Hard

Click

00:06:684 - Add a note in col 7. There is a low octav piano sound added. You can compare this here. 00:11:549 -
00:56:940 (56940|1,57110|2,57280|5,57280|3,57451|4,57621|2,57621|1,57792|4,57962|0,57962|1) - I think this pattern can bring out a better expression. What do you think? ▽


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01:07:508 (67508|2,68190|1) - Consider the normal difficulty mod.
01:08:190 (68190|1) - The reason is that i can't sence the background music rhythm here.

01:15:690 (75690|2,77053|2) - Move to col 7.
01:15:690 (75690|0,75690|2,75690|3,76030|1,77053|0,77053|3,77053|2,77394|1) - This kind of pattern can make left handed space key users uncomfortable.
If you decide to alter this, the hand balance and the patterns can get better than before.

01:18:417 - ~ 01:21:144 - About this part ▽
01:19:099 (79099|1) - Can't feel the background music rhythm. Same as before.
01:19:099 (79099|3,79440|4,79440|3,79780|4) - There is a focus on the right side columns in general for the bass hitsound, but i felt this pattern somehow a bit complicated.
Changing this to a balanced pattern, you can deliver a clear sense to the player, and this can lead to a really smooth flowing. Try this ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:20:803 - ~ 01:25:917 - Apply the same mod as the normal difficulty for this part.
If you've chosen to change in the normal difficulty, you must try to change it in the hard difficulty too.

Thank you for mod, i literally changed everything you mentioned because your mod was perfect. This is worth 10 kudosu

KawaEE wrote:

HiHi~

▶ Timing : no problem
▶ Kiai : no problem
▶ AImod : no problem
▶ BG / Sound File : no issues

▶ Etc :
＆ Change from OD8, HP8 to 7.5, 7.5 in hard difficulty.
Considering the ample range of the slides and the difficulty of this mapset, 7.5 seems better.

＆ You can add "New age" on tag. it's genre. Some player can search from this

Column
7K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜

▽Normal

Click

00:05:874 (5874|5,6279|4) - Delete this, and in 00:05:874 - 00:06:076 - 00:06:279 - add one note for each one (recommended col 5,3,1)
△ 00:05:874 (5874|5,6279|4) - This long note is somewhat awkward. The flowing of the piano sounds are located in 00:05:874 - 00:06:076 - 00:06:279 - ,
therefore it is better to add notes there instead of the longnotes of now.
You have put long note patterns for beginners in order to skip these piano melodies; however this can bring confussion as a consequence.
The most important thing is that when a player plays the beatmap, that person should sense what kind of expressment you are showing through the beatmap.
For example, in 00:15:690 (15690|4) - 00:17:053 (17053|6) - : these long notes are certainly able to realize that they are regular low octaves.

00:10:738 (10738|6,11144|5) - Same mod as above.

00:15:520 (15520|2,15690|3) - Move one column to the left.
△Smooth pattern for beginners.

00:23:190 (23190|3,23190|5,23530|4,23871|6,23871|3,24553|4,24553|6) - Considering the other patterns, this pattern is generally biased on the right side.
If the player is a right handed space key user, the player can feel a lot of difficulties, so if you alter this pattern, it could make the progress a lot better. For example ▽
00:23:190 (23190|5,23190|3) - Move to columns 3,5 and 00:23:530 (23530|4) - move to 1.

00:34:780 (34780|0) - Change this long note to a short note.
△ 00:32:053 - From here on you were expressing the main piano and the bass, 00:34:780 - but from here on you have changed your focus to the bass,
due to this, this long note can cause confussion. You cannot sense the background music in this long note too.
Also, you can express these patterns more clearly to improve it.
To add, this part 00:32:053 - ~ 00:37:508 - and this part 00:53:871 - ~ 00:59:326 - are similar parts.
It is good to you to think about the relatedness of the similar amount of the notes for the quality.
I'd like you to arrange these two parts by comparing them. I will mention them in the next part.

00:45:008 (45008|4,45008|6,45349|3,45690|4,46030|3,46371|6,46371|4,46712|3,47053|4) - This does not show a concrete sense; thinking about the progress of the patterns, a sudden col 4,5 repeat can be a bit awkward.
Looking at the patterns around, it is better to diffuse a bit the patterns. For example ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

00:53:871 - ~ 00:59:326 - About this part ▽
00:54:553 - Needs one long note. 00:32:735 - Same goes here.
00:56:428 (56428|2) - Either delete this 00:45:519 - or think about adding a note here.
00:56:599 (56599|0,57962|2) - It is recognizable that this long note represents the piano sound. However, as said before, ignoring the piano and putting the focus on the bass is more clear, and possess some quality.
00:59:155 - Add a note (hitsound BassC)
If you considered all this, here is an example ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:02:394 (62394|2,62735|3,62735|0,63076|1,63417|2,63758|1,64099|0,64099|2,64440|1) - What do you think about this? For a better pattern shape ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:08:190 (68190|1) - Delete, and 01:07:508 (67508|2) - extend this long note 01:08:871 - until here.
01:08:190 (68190|1) - I could not sense the background music rhythm from this long note. 01:07:508 - from here 01:08:871 - to here it has a similar stream.
For example 01:14:326 (74326|5,75008|4) - it is different from this. In here you can certainly notice the multilevel background stream.

01:18:417 (78417|2,79099|1) - Same mod as above. 01:19:099 (79099|1) - Delete, and 01:18:417 (78417|2) - extend this long note 01:19:780 - until here.

01:21:144 - The end of the song is surely at this timing, so for the flowing i recommend ending the beatmap here.
If you accept this suggestion please delete these. ▽
01:20:803 (80803|2,80974|4,81144|6,81485|2,81826|6,82167|4,82508|0,82849|2,83190|4,83530|2,83871|1,84212|3,84553|5,84894|2,85235|3,85576|4,85917|5,85917|1) -

Or if you don't want to do so,
01:21:144 - ~ 01:25:917 - Decrease the hitsound volume used in this part slowly as it goes.
As the overall sound of the song decreases over time, it keeps the relatedness of the hitsounds maintaining its good quality.
You can use the Sample import option (Ctrl+shift+i)

▽Hard

Click

00:06:684 - Add a note in col 7. There is a low octav piano sound added. You can compare this here. 00:11:549 -
00:56:940 (56940|1,57110|2,57280|5,57280|3,57451|4,57621|2,57621|1,57792|4,57962|0,57962|1) - I think this pattern can bring out a better expression. What do you think? ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:07:508 (67508|2,68190|1) - Consider the normal difficulty mod.
01:08:190 (68190|1) - The reason is that i can't sence the background music rhythm here.

01:15:690 (75690|2,77053|2) - Move to col 7.
01:15:690 (75690|0,75690|2,75690|3,76030|1,77053|0,77053|3,77053|2,77394|1) - This kind of pattern can make left handed space key users uncomfortable.
If you decide to alter this, the hand balance and the patterns can get better than before.

01:18:417 - ~ 01:21:144 - About this part ▽
01:19:099 (79099|1) - Can't feel the background music rhythm. Same as before.
01:19:099 (79099|3,79440|4,79440|3,79780|4) - There is a focus on the right side columns in general for the bass hitsound, but i felt this pattern somehow a bit complicated.
Changing this to a balanced pattern, you can deliver a clear sense to the player, and this can lead to a really smooth flowing. Try this ▽


〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓〓

01:20:803 - ~ 01:25:917 - Apply the same mod as the normal difficulty for this part.
If you've chosen to change in the normal difficulty, you must try to change it in the hard difficulty too.

Good luck !

Janko wrote:

hi

mod

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[General]
Incompatible tags (add "new age" in hard) Done

[Normal]
00:30:690 (30690|1) - move to this line (1/12) 00:30:690 (30690|1) - Keep
00:52:508 (52508|0) - ^ 00:52:508 (52508|0) - Keep

[Hard]
1. 00:29:667 (29667|4) - move to column 3 Keep
2. 00:30:008 (30008|2) - move to column 5 Keep
3. 00:30:349 (30349|4) - move to column 4 Done

1. 00:31:201 (31201|2) - move to column 1 Keep
2. 00:31:712 (31712|0) - move to column 6 Keep
3. 00:32:053 (32053|5,32053|1) - move to first column (1;5) Keep