Hi, from my modding queue
[General]
- No storyboard : Disable
Widescreen Support on
all your diffs.
- Combo colors :
http://puu.sh/ikDHl/dd68a7a6bc.png I'm not sure this flashy green fits with this background and this song. You should take another color.
- There are breaks, you may want to enable the
letterbox during breaks.
-
You should check your timing with a BN. It sounds wrong sometimes for me, but I'm not a timing pro.
- Nice hitsounding, except I don't think the normal whistles are fitting for a calm song, you should remove them (01:58:404 - and after).
You should also find more soft claps than normal claps (02:30:092 (1) - ). You can find some custom hitsounds on
LKs' userpage.
[Normal]
- 00:18:092 (1,2,3) - Be careful to your distances here
- 00:29:342 (1,2,3,4) - same here
- 00:51:092 (1,2,3,4) - here too
- 01:21:092 (1,2,3) - ^
Nice mapping, except some minor distance errors.
[Hard]
Your map really needs more distance consistency.
- 00:39:092 -> 00:46:779 - In this part for example, the distances are
1.23x -> 1.60x -> 1.97x -> 1.57x -> 2.25x -> 2.27x -> 2.16x -> 3.21x -> 2.12x -> 2.09x -> 2.24x -> 4.08x -> etc.
Green arrows are the consistent distances ; red are are inconsistent ones.
Of course, in an Hard diff, you're allowed to put jumps ; but these jumps have to be consistent across the map, and you
should keep the same jump distance for all your jumps.
But here, there are jumps with a distance of 4.08x, 1.60x, 1.97, 3.21,... This isn't consistent.
You may have to remap the distances or follow mapping tutorials on distances.
It's too bad, because the rest of the map is really good, your patterns and hitsounding are nice.
Also, here for example 02:24:092 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - your distances are consistent. You should keep this consistency in the whole map.
- 02:05:154 (4) - I'd move this circle to 02:05:342 -
[One Last Ride]
I'll not talk about distances for this diff because it's an Insane (even if you have to keep distance consistency), I'll let you check them by yourself
- 00:25:217 (3) - I suggest to move your (3) upper, to keep the flow
http://puu.sh/ikFFS/1ee793a399.jpg (around here, depending of your distances)
- 00:39:654 (2,3,4) - Here you put a triplet, 00:42:654 (2,3,4) - here too, but not 00:45:842 (2,3) - here, 01:00:654 - here, 01:09:654 (2,3) - and 01:12:467 (2) - here. Please be consistent in your patterns.
- 01:13:029 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I said I'm not gonna talk about distances, but this pattern is quite unreadable because of the distances. You should fix that to make your patterns more readable.
- 02:16:217 (1,2,3,4) - same here.
- 02:25:217 (1,2,3) - here too - I'm just pointing out the most inconsistent ones, but you'll have to find and fix the rest in order to rank this.
Great song. Your mapping have a lot of potential but you really need more distance consistency.
Good luck!