1. Celeste's Easy (1.73 stars, 230 notes)
2. Hard (2.85 stars, 490 notes)
3. Insane (3.71 stars, 597 notes)
4. Lunatic (4.46 stars, 704 notes)
5. Normal (1.99 stars, 287 notes)

If you're interested (5/22/16):

I started getting into mapping about a year ago and this was the first set I tried to go for rank. Well needless to say, I was a very inexperienced mapper back then, and after a page of mods, I realized I just needed to improve my mapping skill in general to even have a chance to push this forward. I told myself to take a break from this set and started to map other stuff, hoping that a better mapper would eventually make a ranked version for this song so that I could enjoy it. Well, a year has passed, and a ranked version still doesn't exist. I'm still not a great mapper now, but I think I finally have enough skill and motivation to revive this and make a more enjoyable mapset, so stay tuned

Crimmi wrote:

Hello there~

[Normal]

Maybe you could raise the AR to 5, it felt a bit slow at your chosen AR rate in my honest opinion.
the OD could be raised a tad to 4 or 5, it felt a bit on the easy side for a Normal to me.

00:18:269 (5) - This blanket could be fixed up a bit.
00:36:126 (1,2,3) - Maybe try this method:

SPOILER

00:47:377 (2) - Maybe add a finish at the end?
00:49:340 (1) - It'd be cool to see a fade in transition with this slider, (Meaning, 4 green lines going from soft to normal.) also remove the new combo here and apply it to 00:51:840 (3) here, it makes a bit more sense here. Also the blanket here could also use a bit of clean up~
00:54:698 (1) - I suggest you move this to here, it felt cluttered between (4) & (5).
01:18:448 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:162 (1) - ^
01:19:876 (1) - ^
01:20:412 (2) - Add new combo here after removing the previous ones mentioned before.
01:22:377 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:269 (3) - After removing the new combo from 01:22:377 (1), add a new combo here.
01:28:626 (1) - Imo, the finish would sound better than the clap.
01:30:412 (4) - Remove clap~
01:33:269 (3) - ^
01:33:983 (1) - Remove new combo, then apply it to 01:34:698 (3), removing the clap and leaving the finish. Also remove the new combos on 01:35:769 (1), 01:36:305 (1) and 01:36:840 (1) respectively.
01:38:983 (1,2) - remove new combo on (1) and apply it to (2).
01:49:162 (1) Maybe extend this to 01:51:662.
01:58:983 (1) - Maybe add a finish here~
02:08:983 (1) - remove new combo and apply it to 02:10:412 (3) adding a finish hitsound, follow by removing the new combo on 02:11:840 (1).
02:13:269 (1) - Maybe add a finish here?
02:18:983 (1) - Remove clap.
02:21:843 (1) - ^
02:27:198 (3) - Remove finish, add it on 02:27:555 (1) in the repeat of the slider.
02:29:162 (2) - Remove finish.
02:31:662 (1,1) - remove the new combo and then a remove it at 02:32:376(1) then add it on 02:33:269 (3) (6 if you did the new combo)
02:37:376 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:40:412 (1) - ^ also remove the finish.
02:42:555 (3) - Add a finish at the slider end or remove one repeat from the slider, bring 02:43:269 (1) back a red tick and extend this to 02:44:698.
03:00:055 (1) - remove new combo
03:13:626 (1) - ^
03:18:626 (1,1) - ^ I want to keep the NCs to emphasize the ending, but I'll think about changing it

Accepted all changes except for the last one. Thanks!

[Insane]

Tested this out before I even got started and I think AR 9 is pushing it a bit, maybe dial it down to 8.
I think AR8 is too slow. I like AR9 but I'll consider bumping it down a little bit

00:22:006 (7) Maybe add a new combo here, and remove the one on 00:22:198 (1).
00:26:840 (11) - This slider could be better, maybe thiscould be a suggestion.
00:38:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Why not make it similar to 00:38:269 (6,7,8,9,1)? I like it the way it is now, but I'll play around with it.
00:56:126 (1) - I rather see this as a curved slider than a straight slider.
00:57:555 (1) - Add finish.
01:03:314 (1) - Remove clap.
01:08:983 (1) - Add a finish at the head of the slider.
01:14:340 (8) - Maybe couple it with 01:13:626 (4,5,6,7) to complete a star pattern instead of making it a random jump.
01:14:698 (1) - Add a finish.
01:39:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - This could've been a nice star pattern~
01:46:126 (7) - Add a new combo here.
01:48:983 (14) - ^
01:49:519 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:269 (1) - ^ I think a NC here is ok.
02:42:555 (3,4,5,6) - Make this a square pattern. Feels too stiff.
02:43:269 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:44:698.
02:53:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is a bit of inconsistency with the spacing.
03:18:269 (1,1,1) - Maybe form a triangle jump here~

Accepted all the other changes.

Overall, this map could use a bit of more work, with the placement of hit sounds and the jumps on the Lunatic diff, but nevertheless, i'll check back when the full map is out~ good luck

Thanks for all of your help (especially with the hitsounds). I really appreciate it!

SannyStar wrote:

Offset:

KuroSenpai112 wrote:

From #modreqs

[Lunatic]
00:34:835 (8) - Ctrl + J this slider and place it back in the same spot. This will provide a smoother flow to (1). fixed
00:49:478 (6,1,2,3) - Adjust a slider a bit, change the placements of (1,2,3) so that it smoothly leads to (4). It should look like this in the end: Changed it to something else.

SPOILER

01:04:657 (4) - rotate this repeater so it looks like the pic below. This is for a smoother flow. that looks kinda ugly, but I see what you mean. I changed it to something else.

SPOILER

01:17:157 (1) - For me it feels awkward to have the slider tail so close to (2). I suggest changing the shape of the slider overall and keep spacing consistent. fixed and also DSed the following jumps
01:27:871 (8) - Adjust this slider so it looks like this: fixed

SPOILER

01:29:478 (8) - Move this to x:320 y: 124. This is for better flow. fixed

That's it for lunatic.

[Hard]
The flow in this difficulty is much better! Nothing here I can find! I mapped lunatic first and hard last. Guess I'm improving!

[Normal]
00:03:943 (1) - Flip the shape of the slider horizontally. This gives a better flow to (2). I like it better as is, but I'll think about it.
02:33:407 (1) - Remove NC fixed
02:34:121 (1) - Remove NC fixed

Nothing else!

Hopefully my mod helps! Thanks a lot! All your suggestions were good!
Good luck!

PolkaMocha wrote:

Hi from my modding queue! Since I can't mod Insane or guest difficulties, I will mod normal and hard.

General:
Try REALLY hard not to land or finish things (sliders and streams) on the first and 3rd white ticks. These are important ticks in many 4/4 songs and things should start on them rather than end on them.
I've also noticed you toggle between mapping the song, the lyrics, and then a certain instrument in the song. Which, normally, is okay. But, when you toggle, your patterns change so drastically, so players could struggle adapting to the new patterns so quickly. Be careful with that.
A lot of the mistakes I found were repetitive. So I didn't point them out for the whole map. Just search for them through the rest of the map.
I'm quite new to mapping so thanks for the advice!

Normal: Accepted all mods and remapped a lot of sections.
00:26:621 Big pet peeve of mine is ending things on 1st and 3rd white ticks. Try and start things on 1st and 3rd white ticks, not end them.
00:29:657 I've noticed you toggle between mapping the lyrics and mapping the music, changing slider distances and proximities, making it difficult for players to find the rhythm
00:32:514 First white tick. Last time I'm pointing this out. Please try to be rid of this as much as possible.
00:33:050 (1) (2) Although it matches the lyrics, this pattern doesn't play well. Stick to 1/1 here. It might sound better.
00:37:514 (2) This slider repeating this much is very confusing, although it matches the lyrics. It's hard to play for Normal players and overall very confusing. Please refrain from having repeating sliders repeat more than once in Normal modes.
00:40:193 (4) (5) This is another pattern that although matches the lyrics, is very confusing to play. I suggest a white tick/white tick slider followed by a red tick/red tick slider
00:43:228 (2) ^ my god Lol, I'm sorry. Everything is fixed now though :p

It's basically the same stuff from there on out. Change anything like that o^o
Hard:
The sound effects in this one are a little random and could use some consistency.
Your spacing is also off a lot.
00:03:943 Again with ending on 1st and 3rd white ticks :/ I think this one is ok.
00:05:014 (2) to (3) spacing is not the same to (3) to (4). fixed
00:09:300s This stream is a bit big. Instead of ending it on the white tick, end it on the blue tick before and make a slider on the white tick instead? I like how it is now, but I might change it.
00:18:407 (2) This short slider before the long one plays weird. Maybe just a triplet will work. fine
01:02:157 I think just a repeat slider will work here. I want to keep a note on the red tick.
02:00:907 (1) (2) (3) That doesn't match anything in the song why is that there o^o; Please change that. It goes with the vocals and piano x.x I'll change it if additional people comment on it.
01:47:514 ^ fixed
02:12:514 This SV change is unnecessary in my opinion. It matches the calmer pace in this short section.
03:03:585 A repeat slider that repeats x amount of times will work here. fixed
03:08:943 (7) This slider is a bit unsightly. fixed shape

That's all. Good luck Thanks for all the feedback!

ScarletOtaku wrote:

#modreq mod4mod
Normal
00:14:657-should prob start with the vocal, add notes too close to end of slider
00:41:412-idk about this slider, should change it broke it up into shorter sliders
01:18:221-^ ^
01:42:514-^ ^
01:43:764-it's fine but should end the slider sooner, then and a shorter slider after or single notes fixed
02:01:085-not so sure about this slider, but it does sound fine I'll keep it for now
02:42:871-random spinner start, should move back closer to 02:41:800 (3) - or just remove the spinner took out spinner
03:18:228-spinner for end maybe Doesn't really match song
Hard
00:44:121- this return slider isn't really needed a 1/4 slider would just be awkward here. plus return falls on downbeat
00:48:585-i dont recommend this return slider, break or single notes or sliders for the drum instead or whatever the instrumental part is xD fixed
01:38:407-i dont think the slider should end here like that should make it end 01:38:585 instead fixed
02:24:300 (2) - note should be more behind the slider before it instead of on top of 02:24:478 (3) - I think the stack is fine
03:18:228-spinner instead of this note I prefer a note here
NOTE: to any other notes such as 02:23:943 (1,2)(this is fine 02:27:335 (2,3,4) - 02:36:621 (4,5) - not fine, should really think about putting right at the end of the slider instead of a distance stuff like this is fine for like insane but for hard i don't really recommend it, only distance if theirs like a stream right behind it) - i dont recommend the notes to have much of a distance from each other for hard mode, should be pretty much stacked with each other instead The distance is short enough that it isn't hard. Plus stacking notes in some of the parts disrupts the flow.
Lunatic
00:21:264-stack behind 00:21:264 (1) (to look nicer in edit mode, not really needed, but to look nicer tho ) That doesn't flow as well
00:24:657-maybe stack behind 00:23:764 (4) - to look nicer(readjust distance snap if u do move notes around) ^
00:30:022-stack behind 00:29:121 (4) - Already is, but I want to keep the slider directions different
00:40:193 (2,3,4,5) - I don't recommend this stack of single here, distance snap them It goes with the monotone vocals, but I'll think about it
01:18:764-i know it's that I don't like this return this long,but i would break the slider to just one return and then a slider 01:19:121 end at 01:19:478(i know its for following the vocal, but ew It's just me not liking the long return) I'll think about it
01:22:514-swap with end of this slider 01:22:693, a lot better for the vocal I'll think about it
01:38:407-make slider smaller add single note @ 01:38:764 better fit for vocal like this instead of the slider end starting the vocal It's following instrumentals till the end of slider
02:11:621- I would add a single note here theirs still vocal here le? li? I think ka na le ta shi? I originally had a note here, but I think it's better without one. The pause helps to slow down the pace here to transition to the next section. I might put it back in though.
02:28:943-stack slider end behind 02:28:943? Repositioned slightly
02:30:907 (5) - -stack slider end behind 02:29:835 (2) - ? fixed
02:52:871- i recommend a note here for vocal doesn't have to be a jump a stack is nice here stack 3 and 4 if you add the note I'll think about it
03:11:800-make slider end behind 03:10:728 (1) - ? fixed
03:16:800-fix this slider fixed
03:18:228-i would choice a spinner here instead of the note to finish laaaaaaaaaaa Spinners are fast and furious This is supposed to be a very calm vocal sustain
hope this helps, good luck with your map Thanks for all your suggestions

[-Deemo-] wrote:

[Hard]
00:19:657 (1,2,3,1) - Keep spacing consistent on this part, awkward jump at second 1 fixed
00:48:585 (1) - It just really sounds awkward fixed

[Insane]
00:07:960 (2,3,4,5) - So like after the 1 was really loud, I found the transition from that to really quiet in the rest of the stream to be awkward I want to keep the hitsounds though. Maybe I'll play around with the volume settings.
00:50:371 (1,2) - Make these bigger jumps fixed
01:51:800 (1,2) - ^ I want these to be easy jumps
02:26:800 (1) - Make this a bigger jump to get to 2 fixed

Insane was well made imo I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the suggestions!

PurpleHawk wrote:

Normal

00:12:514 (1) - Too short spinner, this is probably unrankable Is it? I'll change it to a slider if it's a problem or other people comment on it.

I think the main point I could comment on was done through IRC and with the Rhythm example, so I hope that helps you with the mapset
I'll probably keep the rhythms I have for the hard/lunatic diffs, but I'll consider revising normal.

IRC

21:00 PurpleHawk: So, what kind of instrument have you mainly been mapping in this song?
21:02 PurpleHawk: Your current offset is different from this:
21:02 PurpleHawk: http://gyazo.com/84dfd1812bc9bdfd278cff1c62a7351f
21:02 MokouSmoke: umm...mostly vocals
21:02 MokouSmoke: yeah that was long before
21:03 MokouSmoke: i had to compress the mp3 which changed the timing
21:04 PurpleHawk: Okey, so personally I prefer mapping the drums or another very noticeable instrument (I strongly prefer drums though) and if that's what you want to map then the offset is about 1/4 off
21:07 MokouSmoke: what do you mean offset is 1/4 off?
21:07 PurpleHawk: That the downbeats are 1/4 after the current offset
21:07 PurpleHawk: so at around 1855 is the first downbeat (from the drums)
21:10 MokouSmoke: right, but I don't follow drums until around 00:14:657 (2) and by then it does fall on the downbeat
21:30 PurpleHawk: Uhmm, with an offset of 1853 I think it follow the beats of the drums throughout the song, I can't quite hear that with the current offset of 1086
21:31 MokouSmoke: ok, I'll test it at 1853 later and see if it fits
21:32 MokouSmoke: did you want me to mod your WIP insane?
21:39 PurpleHawk: Eh, all of the insanes and extras are WIP (re-mapping)
21:39 PurpleHawk: but you could comment the rhythm, that's finished
21:39 MokouSmoke: ok i'll look at it then
21:43 MokouSmoke: I feel your song is short enough that you don't need 5-10sec breaks in between
21:46 PurpleHawk: Oh, yeah, no that's just parts that aren't mapped yet
21:46 PurpleHawk: all of the slider/note placements are WIP
21:46 MokouSmoke: ah lol
21:47 MokouSmoke: gotcha
21:50 PurpleHawk: I sent you an example on the website of how I would've mapped the drums (with an offset og 1853)
21:51 PurpleHawk: I only mapped the timing of the notes until the start of the first kiai time
21:51 PurpleHawk: and ignore the note placements, It's only to show the rhythm
21:52 PurpleHawk: It's less difficult, but it still uses the 1/4 drumhits that are in the song for 1/4 tripples. So with exception of the many "fake" 1/2 notes there shouldn't be any skipped 1/1 beats or 1/4 beats in that example
21:53 PurpleHawk: it doesn't follow the vocals the same way your map does though, so I guess it depends what you prefer
21:54 MokouSmoke: I might change it for normal/hard diff but the rhythm is too simple for lunatic
22:04 PurpleHawk: I think you've got some powerful jump material if you want to make it: 00:49:352 (4,5,6,7,8,1) (in the Rhythm diff)
22:04 PurpleHawk: http://gyazo.com/892fbe4ce20a17e9a1ce6f313a8e4c0f
22:04 PurpleHawk: http://gyazo.com/bf0c7b0fcd86a6f9d524d63a8b02cf0c
22:06 PurpleHawk: the same during the spinner at 01:50
22:07 MokouSmoke: eh... at 00:49:478 (6) - all there is a guitar sound, so there isn't anything to suggest jumps
22:08 PurpleHawk: The exact timing is probably different if your not looking at the Rhythm diff
22:09 PurpleHawk: but there is definitely strong beats from the drums, 2 sec and I'll find it in the normal timing
22:13 PurpleHawk: http://gyazo.com/4f787a99247667d6f230183be926646f
22:14 PurpleHawk: 00:49:210 (3)
22:14 PurpleHawk: the (1) slider "catches" the player (and follows the sound of the guitar)
22:15 MokouSmoke: mmm...k i'll play around with it

Rhythm example

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276,200,190781,5,0,1:0:0:0:
440,180,190960,2,0,P|400:264|336:320,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,320,191495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
44,220,191674,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,168,191852,2,8,P|252:192|292:224,1,90,8|8,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
248,88,192210,2,4,L|156:40,1,90,4|4,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
56,112,192567,6,0,P|48:176|64:240,2,120,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
200,168,193281,2,0,P|248:192|284:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
408,252,193638,1,0,0:1:0:0:
356,120,193817,1,0,0:1:0:0:
472,147,193995,6,0,P|460:88|412:24,2,135,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,280,194710,2,8,L|328:320,1,90,8|8,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
320,216,195067,2,4,L|228:172,1,90,4|4,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
156,56,195424,6,0,P|100:128|96:164,1,90,4|0,1:1|1:0,1:0:0:0:
88,260,195781,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,192,195960,1,0,1:1:0:0:
228,324,196138,2,0,P|296:300|336:276,1,90,0|0,1:1|1:0,1:0:0:0:
360,164,196495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,264,196674,1,0,1:0:0:0:
488,136,196852,2,0,P|464:64|416:24,2,120,4|0|0,1:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,308,197567,5,0,3:1:0:0:
136,211,197924,5,0,3:1:0:0:
348,37,198281,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Good luck Thanks! You too!

PS: You don't have to give me kudosu since it's such a short mod (only one specific point)

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi Mokou, from my modding queue
Felt OwO, I'll mod the whole mapset!

[General]

- Your background is 1366x753. Only 1366x768 or 1024x768 are allowed as background resolutions. fixed
- Very slight kiai inconsistence for the Hard diff, it starts on 00:51:086 and ends on 01:11:086, one millisecond more than in the other diffs fixed
- The stack leniency on the Normal diff is 0.2, you should set it between 0.3 and 0.9. It'll be changed
- No storyboard -> disable the Widescreen support in song setup for all the diffs. fixed
- Combo colors : You may use purple, since it's the main color in background. I'll think about it
- For all the breaks around 02:43:943 - I recommend you to start the break a bit later to give a nice effect during gameplay - http://puu.sh/igaXk/cb607b62be.jpg Hard and lunatic are mapped differently, but changed for normal
- The hitsounds are really inaudible and/or inconsistent in all the diffs, and an hitsound remapping may be necessary, they're ways too inconsistent. Choosing custom hitsounds would be nice too, I recommend you to pick some from custom hitsound libraries, like LKs one. (userpage)
Yeah, I know. I'm terrible at hit sound placement x.x Once I find the right custom hitsounds, I'll add them.

[Normal]

Two normal diffs? oh well, why not
- 00:48:585 (6) - overusing of finish here I agree, but it's too soft w/o finish. Once I find custom hitsounds I'll probably add some here.
- 02:05:014 (4) - why isn't there claps like in the first part of the kiai ? because I can't hitsound lol (fixed)
The mapping is nice, except some old-shaped sliders (00:36:085 (3) - for example) but this is a personal opinion. Lol truth. I'm still tweaking the slider shapes

[Hard]

- 00:22:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it may fit better if you mirror this slider with the other one http://puu.sh/igdUD/8d63301efa.jpg fixed
- 01:13:943 (1,2,3) - you failed your stack here fixed
- 02:12:514 (1,2,3,4) - Be careful to your spacing here. These are anti-jumps, but it isn't very intuitive. I think it matches well with the song though

[Lunatic]

- 00:07:871 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmapping imo I'll think about changing it, but I like the build-up in difficulty until 00:12:514
- 00:10:193 (4,5,6,7,8) - same here ^
- 00:46:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't feel this pattern very intuitive or even fitting with the song. What's wrong with it?
- 00:52:335 (7,8,1) - try to stack them ? I like the spacing
- 01:07:514 (6,7,8,9,10) - overmapping I think it fits with the previous triplets. I'll change it if other people comment on it.
- 01:11:085 (1,2,3) - the distances are almost the same, but the timing is different. Check your spacing. fixed
- 01:18:050 (6) - please avoid so much reverses on a big slider, try to make another pattern to replace it Changed to something else
- 01:41:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - the distances are a bit inconsistent here (between the antijumps and the slider) fixed
- 01:47:335 (5,6,7) - did you failed your stack ? lol yes
- 02:03:585 (1,2,3,4) - try a stream instead of a stack ? changed
- 02:41:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow, check your distances fixed
- 02:54:121 (1,2,3) - stacking fail fixed

Nice map, good luck for ranking! You too and thanks for all of the suggestions!

Neil Watts wrote:

[trammiexo's Normal]

- 00:09:657 (1,2) - mm, not sure if using 1/2 here is a good thing, I'd suggest you to make a 3/2 slider. I changed the pattern here
- 00:15:371 (1) - (the whole part) you may avoid to use normal hitwhistles, a bit loud for this calm part in the song. Can't tell the difference because my personal skin has a different sound for whistle ;w; but will improvise
I'd rather remove the normal hitwhistles until this part 00:26:800 (1) - .
- 00:35:371 (1) - why this whistle, it's so loud as I said above, no idea because it sounds normal in my skin ;o;, will change the hitsound though
- 01:52:514 (1) - I'm not sure if a clap and a finish are a good idea here, I think it fits bad with the song there's no clap here xD, it just sounds like it
- 02:23:943 (1) - there are strong notes in the song but no hitsounding at all fixed!
- 02:27:335 (4) - this slider doesn't fit with the rhythm of the song maybe not with the rhythm, but definitely the instruments that are following, will consider though
- 03:38:228 (1) - This is a calm end, why a finish here ;__; - also, try to finish the spinner on a big white tick here 03:45:371 - would be more appropriate ended on the white tick, and finish sounds soft on my skin LOL but I'll fix it
Except the messy hitsounding, the map itself is nice. thanks! and my hitsounding needs improvement ;w;

Kaivu wrote:

From my queue!

General

1. Hitsounds seem inconsistent... I'm not great at hitsounds myself (I tend to stick to a simple, steady beat) but your hitsounds don't seem to match even in the same difficulty between choruses or verses.

Yeah, I have problems with hitsounding :/

Celeste's Easy

00:01:800 (2,3) - Blanket is off.
00:08:585 (5,6) - Avoid overlap like this in Easy diffs.
00:28:228 (2,3) - Blanket is off. Move the second slider two squares up. Then move 00:29:657 (1)
00:35:371 (1,2) - ^
00:38:943 (3,4) - ^
00:43:943 (1,2) - Remove overlap.
00:45:014 (3,1) - ^
00:46:443 (3,4) - Blanket is a little off...
01:09:478 (3) - Personally I feel like this slider doesn't fit here, especially since it ends on a big white tick. Replace with a hitcircle on the white tick.
01:19:657 (3) - Move the end control point one square to the right.
01:23:585 (4,1) - Blanket is off.
01:39:657 (1,2) - Remove overlap.
01:46:085 (2,3) - ^
02:06:443 (3,4) - ^
02:09:657 (1,2) - ^
02:11:800 (4,5) - ^
02:12:157 (5) - Instead of this slider, I think it would be better if you put a hitcircle on the white tick (like you did in the previous chorus). That way, it emphasizes the ending of the chorus more.
02:57:871 (3,4) - Remove overlap.
03:02:157 (2,3) - ^
03:23:585 (7,1) - ^
03:25:014 (3,4) - ^

Normal

00:01:086 (1,2,3) - The rest of the intro uses clap hitsounds, so why not use them here too? Trying to build up intensity but I guess it didn't work
00:40:371 (4,5,6,7) - This feels very awkward to me. I think it would be better if you mapped the sliders to match the vocals, like what you did during this part in the next verse: 01:42:335 (3,4,5,6) fixed
00:57:514 (2,3) - Move these two so the tail of the second slider is under the tail of 00:56:800 (1) fixed
01:19:478 (1,2) - Blanket is off. fixed
02:08:228 (4) - I think you should rotate this -10 degrees so the previous slider flows better into it. fixed
02:32:157 (7,8) - The overlap here doesn't look too good to me... fixed
02:35:371 (5,1) - Blanket is off. fixed

Hard

00:01:086 (1,3,5) - Same as what I said in Normal about the hitsounds. Is there a reason why you didn't put claps in the first combo?
00:27:693 (3,4) - I think it would look nice if you blanketed this! fixed
00:35:371 (1) - The overlap here doesn't look good. Consider moving the slider head underneath the head or tail of 00:34:478 (5) fixed
01:16:443 (8) - Move the slider tail a little to the right so it flows better into the next slider. fixed
03:04:478 (5,6,7) - Try moving the third slider so that the gap between it and the previous one matches the gap between the first and second slider. Like this: fixed
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Insane

01:03:943 (6,7) - Blanket? fixed
01:38:943 (5,6,7,8) - 01:40:193 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:41:621 (1,2,3,4) - In the previous verse, you had this section at 0.7x and 0.8x distance snap. Here you have them at 0.5x and 0.3x. I'm not sure why you made this change since the music between both verses seems the same, so maybe change them back to 0.7x and 0.8x? (This really isn't an issue, but I like consistency between verses, sorry ^_^;) good point, will change soon
02:58:585 (2) - Move slider head completely under head of 02:57:871 (10) fixed

Lunatic

00:07:871 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream here doesn't seem to fit with this part... I think it's ok...
00:10:193 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:21:800 (4) - I would put underneath 00:21:264 (1) completely. fixed
02:13:943 (1,2,3) - The spacing here seems really strange. They seem too close to each other, especially considering how the other objects in this part of the song are placed at least 1.25x away from each other. fixed
02:20:728 (6,1) - Stack completely. fixed

Overall, nice mapset! Good luck on getting ranked! Thanks for all of your suggestions!

Mackenzie wrote:

General

1. This map doesnt have a nice hitsound that fits the music, the default hitsond really ruined the music and its not nice at all,my suggestion is to use some custom hitsound. There is alot of nice hitsounds you can found online, or even in your songs library, i usually search for hitsounds at findsounds.com , it has alot of hitsound and its really easy to use. Anyways, please find a sample set of hitsounds that fits the song better. I'll look for some
2. Please mute the sliderslide, it sounds better for the song
3. Please disable widescreen support,you can keep letterbox, but i dont think is a good option since you dont have a sb for this song
4. idk, but i think this bg fits the song better http://konachan.net/post/show/186634/ni ... nki-touhou
5. Change source to 東方Project and add tag "Touhou" , "赤蛮奇"(the Japanese letters of sekibanki) , "舞花"

fixed rest

Celeste's Easy

1. 00:10:193 (2) - kinda dangerous pattern though, most bns wont accept 1/2 in normal except some(im the one who are not accepting any creative stuff in ez stuff =w=),and the bpm is 168, is too fast to have 1/2 in normal,please consider about deleting all the 1/2s you have in easy
2. 00:38:228 - I personaly dont think to put a section change point on a reverse is a nice idea. Following vocal is fine, but all the musics is based on the rhythm and beats. Make sure you let the players feel that. rhythm i suggest: http://puu.sh/iMtbX/d979c0ff78.jpg
3. 00:47:693 (5,6) - this is definitely too hard, none of the bn would accept this
4. 01:42:157 (5,6) - ^ 03:18:585 (5,1) -
5. 01:08:943 (2,3) - same as the first point 03:22:514 (5,6) - 03:23:943 (1,2) -
6. 01:51:085 - spinner have to stop a here due to the rc
7. 02:43:943 - drag the break to here
8. 03:38:228 (1) - mute the spinner plz

Normal

1. 00:36:085 (3) - kinda ugly
2. 00:51:085 (2) - plz dont use the old type slider
3. 01:48:585 (1) - the spinner here is too long imo, you can still map at 01:48:585 - 01:49:657 which has alot of rhythms. This is kinda too spacey for now
4. 01:52:514 (1,1) - plz notice that mapping is different from 3 years ago, see this for more information
5. I think the diff is a bit conservative(or too easy imo),my suggestion is to use more 1/2 rhythm, this is definitely too easy for a normal

I will probably remap sections to increase diff

Hard

1. plz nc every 8 or 4 beat,your ncs are a mess
2. 00:15:371 (4) - same as normal,see the youtube link for more information
3. 00:27:514 (2,3,5) - this is a huge mess, 2 objects is overlapping a object in a same time,not only ugly, but also hard to read. in hard you dont have to follow the ds rules, so be creative and avoild overlaps like this if possible
4. 02:14:121 - add a beat here?
5. 03:16:800 (2) - its actually 3/4 snapped here
   fixed everything
6. i think yea...this diff is definitely needs more jumps and interesting patterns,dont pay too much attention to the ds, sometimes changing the ds to fit the music is necessary

Insane

1. this is what a Hard diff should look like mann.... learn from yourself
2. nc problem same as hard diff
3. 00:33:675 (4) - i dont think the 1/4 is needed here, i dont hear any 1/4 at the background at all, overmapping arent nice, and should be avoided if possible
4. 00:35:014 (9,10) - ^,is not nice to over map a 1/1 to a stream
5. 00:56:443 (1,2) - tick sliders though... they are actually harder than streams and not that fine to play. streams also provide higher sp than things like this. should add more streams and avoid tick sliders if possible(well i saw alot of tick sliders in this diff, please consider about changing them into triples)
6. 00:59:478 (1,2) - make these into 1/2 sliders is better i think, rhythm here is actually different from 01:00:193 (3,4,5) - , 01:00:193 (3,4,5) - showed 3 separate beats and they are very clear and noticeable, compare to rhythm here. change the rhythm here will perform the music more.
7. 02:00:907 (1,2,3,4) - man....
8. 02:14:121 - should add a note here
9. 02:52:335 (1,2) - suggest to delete it, since these dose not have the same type of rhythm as 02:53:050 (3,4,5) -

fixed everything

Lunatic

1. ar9 is definitely too fast, suggest ar 8.5 or even 8
2. od too, 7.5 is the best imo
3. 01:09:657 (7) - its 3/4
4. 01:13:764 - why missing 1/4 here
5. 02:11:085 (3) - you were following the vocal before, why not here

fixed everything

well, i dont think the map looks really nice,and also i dont like distance snap and polygon jumps style,but thats not the problem
good luck,since i dont really have any special ideas on this map Thanks for your mod and honesty. Looking back at the mapset, I'm also not very satisfied with the quality and will probably remap large sections when I have become a better mapper.