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Rumia-

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-07-31T16:24:03+00:00

T-Mac wrote:
[General]

好きになるその瞬間を这个是可以加进metadata的，是专辑名好

02:57:390 - 这根红线好像不是3/4的样子，如果不是的话这根红线也就没什么用了我还不知道这一点，我先扔

combo color颜色都是比较亮的那种，建议亮的和暗的搭配一下或者用哪些比较切合BG的颜色我不知道该用什么颜色Q_Q

[Regret]

00:11:086 (3,5) - overlap？

00:12:390 (1) - 这个串我觉得可以拉大间距，和00:12:227 (5) - 做一个blanket，然后在00:12:717 (5) - 加音效 done,00:12:717 (5) -这是whistle吗?

00:15:488 (1,2) - 这个间距有点太小，容易当1/4处理掉距离增加

00:51:847 (4) - NC吧，因为这里是钢琴音，和前面的音色差距挺大的，而且时间间隔也比较长好

01:45:325 (4) - 这个地方感觉上来说是不用折返的，然后在01:45:651 - 这里补上note因为这里是大白线好

01:49:564 - 到01:50:706 - 这里我觉得用1/2滑条填满比较好，这样听上去比较符合vocal 我想保留这部分，因为它是好玩了

02:57:390 (1,2,3,4) - 这个难度有点大了，就算是混combo，难度也不小，02:57:824 (3) - 没有折返，加上这一段是1/3，对读图要求一下子就提高了我没有任何更好的主意如何做到1/3 QAQ

04:01:956 (5) - 这里用一下NC吧好

这摸图效率醉了，明天补上 233 ,感谢的摸

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-08-01T02:51:55+00:00

omg rumia speak chinese OAO

EncoreW

833 posts

Joined June 2013

EncoreW 2015-08-02T05:37:20+00:00

后续，no kd

[Insana]

难度名？应该是只有最高难度的难度名可以自己取名的

00:14:836 (7) - 这滑条看上去形状有点诡异。。

01:23:477 - 补上note？这地方应该是大白线+finish吧

02:02:608 (1) - 前后间距不一样，就算是从1.0x变成0.5x，我觉得这个串的间距还是应该保持一致的，像这里的话就相当于从0.2的DS变成了0.1

02:25:760 (6) - 变间距的话用一下NC？另外02:25:678 (5,6) - 这个间距我觉得还是跟之前一样用0.6的比较好，这样的话就是4个0.6，4个1.0了

02:58:369 (1) - 这里建议ctrl+G，同样一个1/3，打完折返滑条就要马上折回去，这难度有点太大了，另外建议取消NC

02:59:999 (9) - NC？

04:02:119 (1,2,3) - 这里放几个跳？感觉很适合的样子

[Hard]

00:25:108 - 00:25:760 - 补上note吧？这样空着我感觉也不太好

00:27:553 (3,4) - 这样叠着似乎打起来并不是太合节奏的样子，还是建议都分开放，或者00:27:880 (4,5) - 叠起来会好一点的样子

00:38:803 (5,1) - 这里也是，滑条结束的时候和下一个滑条开始，居然是相反方向的，00:38:803 (5) - 同样建议ctrl+G，01:49:238 (8,1) - 这里也是

00:56:738 (1) - 这里建议拆成两个折返滑条吧？

01:04:890 (8,9) - 不知道none的话是怎么样的，HR的话头一回打真的可能会被坑到，感觉还是换成一个折返滑条比较好，两个1/4感觉有点难度

01:44:021 (6,7) - 也是跟上面一样，而且前后间距也有点问题，时间上差了1/2和1/4，但是用了同样大的间距

01:53:477 (6) - NC？另外我觉得01:54:374 (9) - 这个可以去掉，四个滑条打起来应该也是更符合音乐的，因为滑条头都是强音

03:16:303 (2,3) - 这两个怎么是5/4？

[ffstar's Normal]

OD2.5有点低，别的没什么了

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-02T16:27:27+00:00

T-Mac wrote:
后续，no kd

[Insana]

难度名？应该是只有最高难度的难度名可以自己取名的 Q.Q

00:14:836 (7) - 这滑条看上去形状有点诡异。。改

01:23:477 - 补上note？这地方应该是大白线+finish吧啥也没听见有

02:02:608 (1) - 前后间距不一样，就算是从1.0x变成0.5x，我觉得这个串的间距还是应该保持一致的，像这里的话就相当于从0.2的DS变成了0.1 对 , fix

02:25:760 (6) - 变间距的话用一下NC？另外02:25:678 (5,6) - 这个间距我觉得还是跟之前一样用0.6的比较好，这样的话就是4个0.6，4个1.0了好

02:58:369 (1) - 这里建议ctrl+G，同样一个1/3，打完折返滑条就要马上折回去，这难度有点太大了，另外建议取消NC fix

02:59:999 (9) - NC？似乎没有必要

04:02:119 (1,2,3) - 这里放几个跳？感觉很适合的样子好

[Hard]

00:25:108 - 00:25:760 - 补上note吧？这样空着我感觉也不太好我下面的vocal哦

00:27:553 (3,4) - 这样叠着似乎打起来并不是太合节奏的样子，还是建议都分开放，或者00:27:880 (4,5) - 叠起来会好一点的样子 fix

00:38:803 (5,1) - 这里也是，滑条结束的时候和下一个滑条开始，居然是相反方向的，00:38:803 (5) - 同样建议ctrl+G，但你可以留你的光标在一个地方和slider不破

01:49:238 (8,1) - 这里也是 ^

00:56:738 (1) - 这里建议拆成两个折返滑条吧？对

01:04:890 (8,9) - 不知道none的话是怎么样的，HR的话头一回打真的可能会被坑到，感觉还是换成一个折返滑条比较好，两个1/4感觉有点难度改变一些

01:44:021 (6,7) - 也是跟上面一样，而且前后间距也有点问题，时间上差了1/2和1/4，但是用了同样大的间距 fix

01:53:477 (6) - NC？另外我觉得01:54:374 (9) - 这个可以去掉，四个滑条打起来应该也是更符合音乐的，因为滑条头都是强音 fix

03:16:303 (2,3) - 这两个怎么是5/4？哈哈哈我醉了 , fix

thank you !!

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-08-03T13:48:08+00:00

Hard done
http://puu.sh/jnJHz/a2fa2c6bbc.rar

T-Mac wrote:
后续，no kd

[ffstar's Normal]

OD2.5有点低，别的没什么了

rumia help me increase my normal diff's OD and HP to 3 thanks!!!!!

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-03T22:36:12+00:00

ffstar0716 wrote:
Hard done
http://puu.sh/jnJHz/a2fa2c6bbc.rar

T-Mac wrote:
后续，no kd

[ffstar's Normal]

OD2.5有点低，别的没什么了
rumia help me increase my normal diff's OD and HP to 3 thanks!!!!!

lol u give me the update of normal instead of hard ;w; anyway updated for now

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-08-04T12:35:59+00:00

Rumia- wrote:
lol u give me the update of normal instead of hard ;w; anyway updated for now

i am baka =w=
http://puu.sh/joWvN/d9cdf29dad.rar

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2015-08-04T20:26:52+00:00

Rumiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ :3

[Regret]

00:59:347 (1,2)
Reverse and change location :3
SPOILER

[Insana]

00:11:575 (1) Remove NC
00:19:401 (1) ^
00:11:738 (1) add NC
00:12:390 (1) ^
00:19:564 (1) ^
00:27:390 (5) ^
02:59:673 (1) ^
00:59:510 (3) Cahnge Location
SPOILER
02:14:673 add Circle

Good Luck ~ <3

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-04T21:38:31+00:00

A s h e m u wrote:
Rumiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ :3

[Regret]
00:59:347 (1,2)
Reverse and change location :3 fix with other location :3
SPOILER
[Insana]
00:11:575 (1) Remove NC
00:19:401 (1) ^

00:11:738 (1) add NC
00:12:390 (1) ^
00:19:564 (1) ^
00:27:390 (5) ^
02:59:673 (1) ^
some nc fix on other part but fix mostly ~
00:59:510 (3) Cahnge Location cool :3
SPOILER
02:14:673 add Circle add
Good Luck ~ <3

mod arigatou!

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-08-05T08:36:19+00:00

[General]

You don't have SB, so .osb file can delete.（If you want Lyrics SB i can do, but very simple）

[Narcissu's Easy]

其實我想說最低難度不建議有stack的，不過看你這麼多地方都stack了，改不改就看你意願了
建議兩條大白線1NC，容易給FL玩家玩（你好像也曾經這麼說過=w=）

[ffstar's Normal]

00:44:021 (4,1) - Here spacing is 0.94x. In low difficulty, you need keep your DS in same setting and don't deviation more than +-0.05x.

03:26:738 (2,3) - 0.91x

Other things is well, nice diff.

[ffstar's Hard]

SampleSet change to Soft.
00:19:401 (1,2,3) - I think it maybe hard to read. So how about 3 stack with 00:20:869 (1) - ?

00:29:673 (4,1) - stack, the same reason

00:34:890 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:956 (6) - NC

00:17:934 (9) - change to 2 circle

00:19:075 (3) - delete

00:19:238 (1,2,3,4) - i give you screenshot
SPOILER

00:20:869 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER

00:22:173 (4) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.

00:33:586 (3) - no need 3/4, just use 1/2

01:19:564 (5,1) - spacing too far, try this
SPOILER

02:04:890 (2,3) - 1/4 slider is hard to play in hard diff, change to 1/4 reverse slider as well

[Insane]

00:29:836 (5) - NC

00:46:956 (6) - NC

01:01:303 (5) - NC

01:03:749 (5) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.

01:04:075 (6) - ctrl+G

01:08:640 (7) - put it more high, y:70

01:18:749 - add a circle here, try this, 2 and 4 stack, 1 and 3 stack.
SPOILER

02:25:515 (3,5) - delete it, simplify to 5连打

03:38:803 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:39:619 (2,3,4) - 03:40:434 (1,2) - 04:00:651 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - use more small spacing, otherwise it too close with your highest diff.

[Regret]

00:40:760 (7) - change to 1/2 slider, because 00:40:923 - has vocal

00:45:651 (7) - NC，00:46:303 (1) - No NC，00:47:445 (1) - No NC

00:47:119 (2) - no need this, because 00:47:119 - no sound, you can add a circle on 00:47:282 - and put it far, so you can try this, 1 and 2 are stack.
SPOILER

01:02:445 (4,1,2,3) - 有点乱，try this, you can see 4123 is 等边
SPOILER

01:07:662 (4,5,1) - totally ctrl+G
SPOILER

01:12:227 (5) - put to x:100 y:284, flow will better

01:13:369 (3) - try this?
SPOILER

01:16:467 (4,5) - ctrl+G
SPOILER

01:53:314 (4) - NC

01:58:532 (5) - NC

01:59:999 (9) - NC，02:00:325 (1) - No NC

02:01:140 (1) - No NC，02:01:303 (3) - NC

02:28:532 (1) - 虽然很好看，but this maybe a unrankable
SPOILER

02:37:662 (5) - put to x:26 y:266

02:53:803 (3,4) - 没blanket好

03:26:575 (6) - delete it maybe better, because here you follow vocal, this red line circle is hard to click.

03:49:564 (1) - nice slider, but have a bit not perfect, i give a more perfect, just find in .osu 229564 and replace it
SPOILER
```
280,160,229564,6,0,B|345:119|329:230|251:267|251:267|174:229|157:117|225:160,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

Good Luck (~^-^)~

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-08-05T10:15:09+00:00

Kencho wrote:
[General]
You don't have SB, so .osb file can delete.（If you want Lyrics SB i can do, but very simple）

[ffstar's Normal]
00:44:021 (4,1) - Here spacing is 0.94x. In low difficulty, you need keep your DS in same setting and don't deviation more than +-0.05x.

03:26:738 (2,3) - 0.91x

omg why this will happen =w=, fixed

Other things is well, nice diff. thanks!

[ffstar's Hard]
SampleSet change to Soft. i thought already soft? @@

00:19:401 (1,2,3) - I think it maybe hard to read. So how about 3 stack with 00:20:869 (1) - ?

00:29:673 (4,1) - stack, the same reason

00:34:890 (4,1) - ^
i would like to keep the stack first, sorry ><

Good Luck (~^-^)~

thanks for the mod!!!

http://puu.sh/jq6SS/168d7d6a33.rar

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-05T10:39:30+00:00

Kencho wrote:
[General]
You don't have SB, so .osb file can delete.（If you want Lyrics SB i can do, but very simple） its ok ill delete the .osb

[Hard]
00:16:956 (6) - NC

00:17:934 (9) - change to 2 circle

00:19:075 (3) - delete

00:19:238 (1,2,3,4) - i give you screenshot i am following the vocal here
SPOILER

00:20:869 (1,2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:22:173 (4) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.

00:33:586 (3) - no need 3/4, just use 1/2

01:19:564 (5,1) - spacing too far, try this
SPOILER

02:04:890 (2,3) - 1/4 slider is hard to play in hard diff, change to 1/4 reverse slider as well

[Insane]
00:29:836 (5) - NC

00:46:956 (6) - NC

01:01:303 (5) - NC

01:03:749 (5) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.

01:04:075 (6) - ctrl+G

01:08:640 (7) - put it more high, y:70

01:18:749 - add a circle here, try this, 2 and 4 stack, 1 and 3 stack. changed something in this part :3
SPOILER

02:25:515 (3,5) - delete it, simplify to 5连打

03:38:803 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:39:619 (2,3,4) - 03:40:434 (1,2) - 04:00:651 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - use more small spacing, otherwise it too close with your highest diff. i think the spacing is fine except for the last jump i reduced spacings /color]
[Regret]
00:40:760 (7) - change to 1/2 slider, because 00:40:923 - has vocal

00:45:651 (7) - NC，00:46:303 (1) - No NC，00:47:445 (1) - No NC

00:47:119 (2) - no need this, because 00:47:119 - no sound, you can add a circle on 00:47:282 - and put it far, so you can try this, 1 and 2 are stack.
SPOILER

01:02:445 (4,1,2,3) - 有点乱，try this, you can see 4123 is 等边 fix in some other way ~
SPOILER

01:07:662 (4,5,1) - totally ctrl+G
SPOILER

01:12:227 (5) - put to x:100 y:284, flow will better

01:13:369 (3) - try this?
SPOILER

01:16:467 (4,5) - ctrl+G
SPOILER

01:53:314 (4) - NC

01:58:532 (5) - NC

01:59:999 (9) - NC，02:00:325 (1) - No NC

02:01:140 (1) - No NC，02:01:303 (3) - NC

02:28:532 (1) - 虽然很好看，but this maybe a unrankable
SPOILER

02:37:662 (5) - put to x:26 y:266

02:53:803 (3,4) - 没blanket好

03:26:575 (6) - delete it maybe better, because here you follow vocal, this red line circle is hard to click.

03:49:564 (1) - nice slider, but have a bit not perfect, i give a more perfect, just find in .osu 229564 and replace it
SPOILER
280,160,229564,6,0,B|345:119|329:230|251:267|251:267|174:229|157:117|225:160,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Good Luck (~^-^)~

unreplied are fixed !
thanks ken <3

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2015-08-05T14:15:52+00:00

Noob Rumia pui

Metadata

You should add a few more tags like:

HoneyWorks kyouku utattemita 5 (Album released by HoneyWorks which includes Little Regret)
utaite (Well, sana)

Source (Unreliable):
http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/HoneyWorks_Albums
http://mikudb.moe/album/honeyworks-kyoku-utattemita-5/

[Regret]

Difficulty

Reduce HP Drain to 6. HP7 is incredibly high especially for those who plays HR when the HP drops drastically for no apparent reason.
(Optional) Reduce AR9.3 to AR9. Since this song is only 184bpm, there's no need to increase the AR over 9
(Optional) Reduce OD8.5 to OD8. OD 8 fits perfectly for this kind of map. Since this is not extremely tough or streamy map like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/186677 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/88180 so there's no need to increase OD over 8.

Some stuff

00:01:304 - 00:02:200 - Most preferable if you include some hitsound here. Default drum sample (The claps and Finish) would be nice.
00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to bracket the streams here, looks neater.
SPOILER
00:28:532 (1) - Maybe change this to 1/4 slider like 00:28:695 (2,3) ? It would fits the vocal here like what you did at 00:28:695 (2,3) .
00:38:314 (3,4,5) - Unintentional? Either stack them or like this
SPOILER
00:42:553 (1,1) - - Swap NC here. The NC on 00:42:553 (1) seems very random.
00:44:021 (1,2,3,4) - There's no need to NC for this kind of stream note. Remove NC
00:48:912 (2) - A clap here would be nice following 00:48:260 (6,7,8) .
00:52:499 (1) - Clap here too. Without clap here seems very "empty" and a sudden clap here 00:53:151 (2) seems out of place. By adding the clap it fits the song nicely.
00:53:477 (1,2,3) - Whistle here seems very fitting here
00:57:390 - Add a circle at the last part of the stream here and move the spinner 1/4 note later. Ending a stream in an even number (In this case 14) would be quite awkward for most of the player. Adding a circle here would be more fitting in my opinion.
00:59:265 - Reduce the spinner length to 00:59:184 . The spinner should be at least 1/2 apart. 1/4 would be quite sudden as the player would move towards the circle right before the spinner even finishes.
01:00:977 (5) - Missing clap I suppose?
01:02:282 - ^
01:05:543 (2) - ^
01:04:890 (10) - Similar about NC as I mentioned before. Remove it and maybe add a NC here 01:03:912 (6) .
01:10:108 (4,1) - Finish here would fit nicely following the vocal like 01:09:782 (3) .
01:15:162 (4) - Random clap here seems a little off
01:17:934 (4,5,6,7,1) - The stream pattern here is quite weird, maybe something like this?
SPOILER
01:19:890 - Sudden missing circle here kind of disrupts the flow and weird not to follow the beat at part.
01:35:706 (3,4,5) - Blanket nicer plz asd
SPOILER
02:04:564 (5,6,7) - Not snapped properly, DS plz
02:04:809 (1,2) - Swap NC here, for stream is nicer for NC every 4 notes.
02:08:151 - Missing clap at the end of the slider.
02:09:456 (8) - Same.
02:09:619 (1) - Maybe NC here? The combo from 02:07:825 (1) seems too long.
02:12:390 (3) - Clap at the end of this slider too. Quite awkward to the streams of claps without clap here
02:11:412 (5), 02:12:064 (2), 02:13:369 (2), 02:14:021 , 02:16:630 (4), 02:39:130 (1) - where claps noob
02:42:553 (1) - the slider shape and overlapping here doesn't seem that nice at all. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/jqhb6/9c65f5cc4e.jpg
02:43:043 (5) - I prefer if you change the direction of the slider to maybe here? http://puu.sh/jqhjx/d7d6cf4fc5.jpg There's a lot of notes like "cramping" at the bottom left and that slider there would make the flow feels "tight".
02:54:782 (1) - weird slider shape especially this part http://puu.sh/jqhtz/3470faf023.jpg . Move the 2nd point a little upward to make a smoother curve to make the slider look nicer http://puu.sh/jqhvs/049f801b05.jpg
02:58:369 - 02:58:695 - The part here is actually 1/4 . Including the electric guitar part.
03:03:912 (1) - I kinda disagree with this 1/1 slider here. Try this? http://puu.sh/jqhF2/095c1ad7aa.jpg . Ignoring the vocal at 03:04:238 would be weird especially at this slow part of the song.
03:16:303 (4,6) - Blanket plz http://puu.sh/jqhKg/6488b935b8.jpg
03:24:782 (7,8) - ^
03:35:461 (8) - Probably accidentally clap, remove it.
03:41:738 (5,6) - Better blanket plz, http://puu.sh/jqhQa/4797a66513.jpg try to make use of the approach circle ring as a guide to make the slider blanket better.
03:51:847 (6) - Move the slider to x:300 y:308 to keep a constant distance between 03:51:521 (4,5,6) .
03:54:782 (1) - Remove clap here, probably accidental.

That's it for now~
I'll probably mod again soon lel. The rest of the diff I'll mod sooner or later when I have time xd

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-05T20:54:43+00:00

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
Noob Rumia pui :c

Metadata

You should add a few more tags like:
HoneyWorks kyouku utattemita 5 (Album released by HoneyWorks which includes Little Regret)
utaite (Well, sana)
fixed ^
Source (Unreliable):
http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/HoneyWorks_Albums
http://mikudb.moe/album/honeyworks-kyoku-utattemita-5/

[Regret]

Difficulty

Reduce HP Drain to 6. HP7 is incredibly high especially for those who plays HR when the HP drops drastically for no apparent reason.
as a HR player , ive been testing this map with HR like almost everytime and i didnt find a part where i lose HP too hard so i think HP7 is reasonable and not exegeratingly high
(Optional) Reduce AR9.3 to AR9. Since this song is only 184bpm, there's no need to increase the AR over 9 i know ar9 are readable but as for this diff with full of jumps i think increasing it to 9.3 shouldnt be a problem
(Optional) Reduce OD8.5 to OD8. OD 8 fits perfectly for this kind of map. Since this is not extremely tough or streamy map like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/186677 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/88180 so there's no need to increase OD over 8. i dont get the idea of reducing OD because its not streamy , jumps are meant to be more accurate and i think OD8.5 isnt much a problem. it has been lowered from 9 as i felt its incredibly rediculous
Some stuff
00:01:304 - 00:02:200 - Most preferable if you include some hitsound here. Default drum sample (The claps and Finish) would be nice.
00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to bracket the streams here, looks neater.
SPOILER
00:28:532 (1) - Maybe change this to 1/4 slider like 00:28:695 (2,3) ? It would fits the vocal here like what you did at 00:28:695 (2,3) . those 1/4 sliders are for the hi hat to emphasize the hihats , dont feel like putting a 5plet here since its kinda soft part
00:38:314 (3,4,5) - Unintentional? Either stack them or like this
SPOILER
00:42:553 (1,1) - - Swap NC here. The NC on 00:42:553 (1) seems very random.
00:44:021 (1,2,3,4) - There's no need to NC for this kind of stream note. Remove NC
00:48:912 (2) - A clap here would be nice following 00:48:260 (6,7,8) .
00:52:499 (1) - Clap here too. Without clap here seems very "empty" and a sudden clap here 00:53:151 (2) seems out of place. By adding the clap it fits the song nicely.
00:53:477 (1,2,3) - Whistle here seems very fitting here i dont really think so ..
00:57:390 - Add a circle at the last part of the stream here and move the spinner 1/4 note later. Ending a stream in an even number (In this case 14) would be quite awkward for most of the player. Adding a circle here would be more fitting in my opinion.
00:59:265 - Reduce the spinner length to 00:59:184 . The spinner should be at least 1/2 apart. 1/4 would be quite sudden as the player would move towards the circle right before the spinner even finishes.
01:00:977 (5) - Missing clap I suppose?
01:02:282 - ^
01:05:543 (2) - ^
01:04:890 (10) - Similar about NC as I mentioned before. Remove it and maybe add a NC here 01:03:912 (6) .
01:10:108 (4,1) - Finish here would fit nicely following the vocal like 01:09:782 (3) . added on (1) , but on (4) sounds a bit lousy
01:15:162 (4) - Random clap here seems a little off
01:17:934 (4,5,6,7,1) - The stream pattern here is quite weird, maybe something like this? fix in another way but still uses the concept of yours
SPOILER
01:19:890 - Sudden missing circle here kind of disrupts the flow and weird not to follow the beat at part. there is no beat there and i dont think its weird too
01:35:706 (3,4,5) - Blanket nicer plz asd
SPOILER
02:04:564 (5,6,7) - Not snapped properly, DS plz
02:04:809 (1,2) - Swap NC here, for stream is nicer for NC every 4 notes.
02:08:151 - Missing clap at the end of the slider.
02:09:456 (8) - Same.
02:09:619 (1) - Maybe NC here? The combo from 02:07:825 (1) seems too long.
02:12:390 (3) - Clap at the end of this slider too. Quite awkward to the streams of claps without clap here
02:11:412 (5), 02:12:064 (2), 02:13:369 (2), 02:14:021 , 02:16:630 (4), 02:39:130 (1) - where claps noob
02:42:553 (1) - the slider shape and overlapping here doesn't seem that nice at all. Maybe something like this? fix in some way
http://puu.sh/jqhb6/9c65f5cc4e.jpg
02:43:043 (5) - I prefer if you change the direction of the slider to maybe here? http://puu.sh/jqhjx/d7d6cf4fc5.jpg There's a lot of notes like "cramping" at the bottom left and that slider there would make the flow feels "tight". ^
02:54:782 (1) - weird slider shape especially this part http://puu.sh/jqhtz/3470faf023.jpg . Move the 2nd point a little upward to make a smoother curve to make the slider look nicer http://puu.sh/jqhvs/049f801b05.jpg^
02:58:369 - 02:58:695 - The part here is actually 1/4 . Including the electric guitar part.
03:03:912 (1) - I kinda disagree with this 1/1 slider here. Try this? http://puu.sh/jqhF2/095c1ad7aa.jpg . Ignoring the vocal at 03:04:238 would be weird especially at this slow part of the song.
03:16:303 (4,6) - Blanket plz http://puu.sh/jqhKg/6488b935b8.jpg
03:24:782 (7,8) - ^
03:35:461 (8) - Probably accidentally clap, remove it.
03:41:738 (5,6) - Better blanket plz, http://puu.sh/jqhQa/4797a66513.jpg try to make use of the approach circle ring as a guide to make the slider blanket better.
03:51:847 (6) - Move the slider to x:300 y:308 to keep a constant distance between 03:51:521 (4,5,6) .
03:54:782 (1) - Remove clap here, probably accidental.

That's it for now~
I'll probably mod again soon lel. The rest of the diff I'll mod sooner or later when I have time xd

unreplied = agreed/fixed accordingly

thanks a lot !

Midge

475 posts

Joined December 2012

Midge 2015-08-07T00:42:11+00:00

[regret]

first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EC

00:17:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - antijumps here are kinda awkward imo
00:18:260 - this section is a bit odd. i can't tell what you're trying to map here.
00:20:869 (1,2,5,6) - follows the guitar quite well, but then 00:19:075 (4,5,6,7) - antijumps seem kinda out of place, idk, not much you can fix, but it'd good to keep in mind what part of the song you're trying to map.
00:28:695 (2,3) - kind of unnecessary kick sliders.
00:35:706 (4,1) - antijump here kinda kills the flow
00:56:249 (2) - just a suggestion, but i always find streams that start on red ticks awkward to play, so i'd put a kick slider instead, and start the stream on the white tick.
01:06:521 (1,2) - flip these, better flow imo http://hnng.moe/f/2EG
01:16:956 (1) - rotate, flows better http://hnng.moe/f/2EH
01:20:869 (1) - stack onto 2 for the antijump
01:40:271 (1,2,3) - rotate by 120 instead, looks cleaner http://hnng.moe/f/2EI
02:28:532 (1) - よ
02:41:738 (7) - ctrl+h for better flow http://hnng.moe/f/2EJ
03:01:140 (4,5) - sounds better as a slider instead of 2 notes
03:30:651 (1,2) - い
03:45:651 (1) - ctrl+g

[insane]

first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EE

00:28:369 (1) - i'd recommend shortening the slider to end on the blue tick and putting a not on the white tick. slider ends are not good at emphasizing strong beats,
00:44:347 (5,1) - stack on 1 for antijump
00:57:390 (1) - つ
00:58:532 (2) - it's で not て >:C
01:42:390 (3) - should copt+past 1 instead of redrawing the slider
01:58:369 (4) - try this pattern, puts heavier emphasis on the vocals http://hnng.moe/f/2EL
01:59:836 (10) - change to this http://hnng.moe/f/2EM
02:26:086 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nothing to change, but rhythmically, this is perfect. slider starts to heavily emphasize the strong beats, circles for transitions, and the jumps at the end that focus on the change in vocals. just sayin

[hard]

00:19:238 (1,2) - ds is off, makes it confusing to read
00:21:358 (2,3) - same as ^
00:38:477 (3,4) - jump here may be too extreme for hard
01:17:934 (8) - ctrl+g this. 2x repeaters always end on the opposite slider end
01:49:238 (8) - same ^

mainly ds inconsistencies in this diff. i'd recommend getting some 100k players to testplay this and see where they might mess up

[ffstar's hard]

00:14:021 (4) - point upwards instead? http://hnng.moe/f/2EO
00:16:956 (1,2) - antijump here might be too confusing
00:19:401 (1,2,3) - same ^
00:25:271 (2,3) - same ^ (not gonna point out all of these, but i'm not sure about them)
00:50:869 (2,3,1,2,1) - move to x:336 y:38 to compensate for the stack

lower diffs look fine and clean, imo, but i'll take a closer look if you need me to. this song is long T~T

don't hesitate to hmu on irc if you have any questions.

全部な平仮名を見つけることがやった?

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-07T03:03:33+00:00

Midge wrote:
[regret]
first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EC

00:17:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - antijumps here are kinda awkward imo kinda change something here
00:18:260 - this section is a bit odd. i can't tell what you're trying to map here.
00:20:869 (1,2,5,6) - follows the guitar quite well, but then 00:19:075 (4,5,6,7) - antijumps seem kinda out of place, idk, not much you can fix, but it'd good to keep in mind what part of the song you're trying to map. yea reworked this part
00:28:695 (2,3) - kind of unnecessary kick sliders. i think its good to emphasize those hi hats
00:35:706 (4,1) - antijump here kinda kills the flow yea right kinda change some placements here
00:56:249 (2) - just a suggestion, but i always find streams that start on red ticks awkward to play, so i'd put a kick slider instead, and start the stream on the white tick.
01:06:521 (1,2) - flip these, better flow imo http://hnng.moe/f/2EG
01:16:956 (1) - rotate, flows better http://hnng.moe/f/2EH
01:20:869 (1) - stack onto 2 for the antijump
01:40:271 (1,2,3) - rotate by 120 instead, looks cleaner http://hnng.moe/f/2EI 20*
02:28:532 (1) - よよ
02:41:738 (7) - ctrl+h for better flow http://hnng.moe/f/2EJ
03:01:140 (4,5) - sounds better as a slider instead of 2 notes
03:30:651 (1,2) - いい
03:45:651 (1) - ctrl+g

unreplied are fixed as suggested!

[insane]

first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EE

00:28:369 (1) - i'd recommend shortening the slider to end on the blue tick and putting a not on the white tick. slider ends are not good at emphasizing strong beats,
00:44:347 (5,1) - stack on 1 for antijump
00:57:390 (1) - つ
00:58:532 (2) - it's で not て >:C fixed now :c
01:42:390 (3) - should copt+past 1 instead of redrawing the slider
01:58:369 (4) - try this pattern, puts heavier emphasis on the vocals http://hnng.moe/f/2EL
01:59:836 (10) - change to this http://hnng.moe/f/2EM
02:26:086 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nothing to change, but rhythmically, this is perfect. slider starts to heavily emphasize the strong beats, circles for transitions, and the jumps at the end that focus on the change in vocals. just sayin thanks !

[hard]

00:19:238 (1,2) - ds is off, makes it confusing to read
00:21:358 (2,3) - same as ^
00:38:477 (3,4) - jump here may be too extreme for hard
01:17:934 (8) - ctrl+g this. 2x repeaters always end on the opposite slider end
01:49:238 (8) - same ^
mainly ds inconsistencies in this diff. i'd recommend getting some 100k players to testplay this and see where they might mess up

fixed all , also did a lot of consistent the ds work overall the diff huuuu

lower diffs look fine and clean, imo, but i'll take a closer look if you need me to. this song is long T~T

don't hesitate to hmu on irc if you have any questions.

全部な平仮名を見つけることがやった? プロです

thanks a lotttt

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-08T08:31:20+00:00

hit boom

General

delete .osb file

Narcissu's Easy

00:15:325 (4,1) - 不要stack把，easy还是避免这样的节奏，用01:13:695 (2,3) - 这样的会简单很多
00:47:934 (2,3) - ^
01:03:586 (2,3) - ^
01:11:412 (2,3) - ^
01:53:151 (2,3) - ^
02:08:803 (2,3) - 02:16:629 (2,3) - 03:34:890 (2,3) -
01:44:021 - 滑条停在这好一点，这里有个明显的vocal，不需要3/4滑条
03:42:717 (2,3) - 这完全没必要叠，
03:43:043 (3,4) - 搞错了
03:46:467 (4) - 提前到白线？

ffstar's Normal

00:20:869 (1) - the reverse arrow is weird in a Normal diff, try this :
SPOILER
00:23:477 (1) - ^
02:13:043 (1) - ^
00:37:825 (1) - it's really confusing
02:16:303 (2,3) - bad flow, try ctrl+j 02:16:303 (2) -

ffstar's Hard

00:29:347 (3,4) - this kind of 1/1 stack is difficult to read, especially for those hd players
00:30:488 (2,3) - ^
00:34:564 (3,4) - ^ thiese are examples, i'm lazy to list all of them orz.
01:17:934 (2) - ctrl+j for better flow with 01:18:260 (1) -
02:17:282 (2) - ^
too many stacks orz

Hard

00:02:526 - add a note here ww
00:17:608 (3,1) - dont stack sliders in Hard diffs ww
00:18:586 (2,1) - the spacing is confusing, too small ww
00:20:380 (4,5) - this is such a big jump then suddenly turn to 00:21:358 (2,3) - the blank, kill players wwwww
00:21:684 (3,1) - ds please, www
00:23:314 (1,2,3) - ^ ww, these are examples, lazy to list all of them. usually we use distance snap in most of the time to map a Hard.
00:39:130 (1) - this slider is supposed to overlap with 00:38:803 (4) - this slider's tail www, like 01:49:238 (8,1) - www
01:17:934 (8,1) - ^ www
01:15:651 (1) - ^ ww
02:39:130 (3) - ^
03:36:521 (1) - ^
01:17:282 (6,7) - this flow is weird here, 01:17:771 (7) - try 241,19 ww
01:20:869 (1,3) - kill me pls www
01:27:390 - this sound is not supposed to be ignored imo, try this rhythm: ww
SPOILER
01:33:260 (1,2,3,4) - this is hard to read, if you want to keep this, add NCs please www
01:38:151 (2,3) - stack or overlap, choose one ww
01:42:717 (3,4) - this overlap seems weird ww
01:44:021 (3,4) - you can use larger spacing for 1/4 sliders, even not overlap them ww
01:52:010 (7) - no need to use 1/4 slider here, change to a circle instead ww
02:00:325 (2,3) - the overlap seems weird ww 02:00:651 (3) - try 261,364 ww
02:09:619 (6) - the reverse arrow is nearly hidden, avoid that ww
02:59:021 - add a note here? ww
02:59:510 - here either www

Insane

00:48:586 (5,1,2,3,4) - bad flow, try this: www
SPOILER
02:24:945 (2,1) - confusing spacing, too small www
03:30:977 (2,1) - ^ too big spacing for 3/4 slider ww
not much to say in this diff

Regret

00:15:325 (7,7) - stack or overlap, choose one ww
00:14:673 (3,1) - ^ notice this kind of problems, they make maps in a mess ww
00:16:467 (6,7,3,4,5,6) - ^ also these objects, not a big issue but weird to me. ww
00:44:999 (3,2) - ^
00:33:423 (1,2,3) - why 1/4 sliders herem, there is no special sound on blue ticks ww
00:40:923 - feel empty here, consider to add a note www
01:02:608 (1,2) - feel bad to play. try this ww
SPOILER
01:14:347 (1) - ugly slider ww
01:21:195 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - i love this pattern ww
01:40:271 (1) - weird slider, use simple sliders like this www
SPOILER
01:51:847 (7) - move to 297,254 for 01:51:032 (2,4,7) - ww
01:53:967 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - kowai overmap ww
02:01:630 (3,4,1) - try this flow, more fun imo www
SPOILER
02:06:195 (5) - ctrl+h for better flow with 02:06:521 (6) - ww
02:06:521 (6) - a bit ungly ww
02:07:173 (3,4,5) - straight flow.. feel bad to play, i prefer this:ww
SPOILER
02:27:553 (2) - move to 297,281 due to 02:26:575 (2,4,6,2) - ww
03:18:260 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ ww
03:53:314 (6,7,8) - ^ ww
00:10:434 (1,2,3) - ^ ww
02:28:532 (1) - this slider is a bit confusing here ww
SPOILER
03:36:195 (3,4,5,6,1) - not funny ;_; ww
04:02:119 (1,1,1) - no need to add nc ww

could work more to make it neater

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-08-08T08:58:51+00:00

@Karen：我知道疊起來不好但是紅線太多了都放滑條有點受不了……其他fix

@Kencho：我是兩條大白線一次啊

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.699999

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:リトルリグレット
Artist:sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:Rumia-
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:
Tags:ffstar0716 narcissu 好きになるその瞬間を HoneyWorks kyouku utattemita 5
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:2
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236,344,220107,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,304,220434,2,0,L|56:308,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
36,216,221086,2,0,L|128:208,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,2:0|1:0,2:0:0:0:
164,128,221738,6,0,P|236:88|348:100,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,222717,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,212,223043,2,0,P|409:282|306:328,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,224021,1,0,1:0:0:0:
160,264,224347,6,8,P|96:272|40:312,2,120
212,184,225651,2,0,L|220:72,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,226303,2,0,L|304:48,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,20,226956,5,4,0:0:0:0:
468,76,227282,1,0,1:0:0:0:
428,164,227608,2,0,L|432:264,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
372,316,228260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,228586,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,352,228912,2,0,L|120:360,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,304,229564,6,0,P|20:188|72:40,1,280,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,230869,2,0,L|220:44,1,79.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,88,231521,2,0,P|324:88|380:72,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,52,232010,6,0,L|420:192,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,248,232825,2,0,L|476:356,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,233477,2,0,P|336:292|280:308,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,234130,2,0,P|180:356|124:340,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,304,234782,6,0,L|44:196,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,235434,2,0,L|128:144,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,236086,2,0,P|184:48|324:76,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,237227,6,0,L|384:148,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,184,238043,2,0,P|488:220|496:276,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,264,238695,2,0,P|404:312|396:348,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,308,239348,2,0,L|208:316,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,292,239836,6,0,P|116:288|48:320,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,240652,2,0,L|0:120,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,241303,12,0,242445,1:0:0:0:

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-08T11:04:09+00:00

Karen wrote:
hit boom

General
delete .osb file
yea thanks for remind lol

Hard
00:02:526 - add a note here ww
00:17:608 (3,1) - dont stack sliders in Hard diffs ww
00:18:586 (2,1) - the spacing is confusing, too small ww but i use ds ;w;
00:20:380 (4,5) - this is such a big jump then suddenly turn to 00:21:358 (2,3) - the blank, kill players wwwww
00:21:684 (3,1) - ds please, www
00:23:314 (1,2,3) - ^ ww, these are examples, lazy to list all of them. usually we use distance snap in most of the time to map a Hard. yes u told me before but idk how to fix this hh
00:39:130 (1) - this slider is supposed to overlap with 00:38:803 (4) - this slider's tail www, like 01:49:238 (8,1) - www
01:17:934 (8,1) - ^ www
01:15:651 (1) - ^ ww
02:39:130 (3) - ^ ;w;
03:36:521 (1) - ^
01:17:282 (6,7) - this flow is weird here, 01:17:771 (7) - try 241,19 ww
01:20:869 (1,3) - kill me pls www www swap with 5
01:27:390 - this sound is not supposed to be ignored imo, try this rhythm: ww i will catch u in game for this
SPOILER
01:33:260 (1,2,3,4) - this is hard to read, if you want to keep this, add NCs please www
01:38:151 (2,3) - stack or overlap, choose one ww
01:42:717 (3,4) - this overlap seems weird ww
01:44:021 (3,4) - you can use larger spacing for 1/4 sliders, even not overlap them ww
01:52:010 (7) - no need to use 1/4 slider here, change to a circle instead ww
02:00:325 (2,3) - the overlap seems weird ww 02:00:651 (3) - try 261,364 ww
02:09:619 (6) - the reverse arrow is nearly hidden, avoid that ww ok
02:59:021 - add a note here? ww
02:59:510 - here either www
no reply = fix!
Insane
00:48:586 (5,1,2,3,4) - bad flow, try this: www
SPOILER
02:24:945 (2,1) - confusing spacing, too small www
03:30:977 (2,1) - ^ too big spacing for 3/4 slider ww
not much to say in this diff
fix all

Regret
00:15:325 (7,7) - stack or overlap, choose one ww
00:14:673 (3,1) - ^ notice this kind of problems, they make maps in a mess ww
00:16:467 (6,7,3,4,5,6) - ^ also these objects, not a big issue but weird to me. ww
00:44:999 (3,2) - ^
00:33:423 (1,2,3) - why 1/4 sliders herem, there is no special sound on blue ticks ww there are hihats there that i would like to emphasis
00:40:923 - feel empty here, consider to add a note www
01:02:608 (1,2) - feel bad to play. try this ww
SPOILER
01:14:347 (1) - ugly slider ww ;w; use simpler slider
01:21:195 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - i love this pattern ww
01:40:271 (1) - weird slider, use simple sliders like this www
SPOILER
01:51:847 (7) - move to 297,254 for 01:51:032 (2,4,7) - ww
01:53:967 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - kowai overmap ww but its good ;w;
02:01:630 (3,4,1) - try this flow, more fun imo www
SPOILER
02:06:195 (5) - ctrl+h for better flow with 02:06:521 (6) - ww i fix something with 6 ww
02:06:521 (6) - a bit ungly ww ^
02:07:173 (3,4,5) - straight flow.. feel bad to play, i prefer this:ww 好
SPOILER
02:27:553 (2) - move to 297,281 due to 02:26:575 (2,4,6,2) - ww
03:18:260 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^ ww
03:53:314 (6,7,8) - ^ ww
00:10:434 (1,2,3) - ^ ww
wwwwww keep so this map looks more rumia www
02:28:532 (1) - this slider is a bit confusing here ww
SPOILER
03:36:195 (3,4,5,6,1) - not funny ;_; ww ;_; changed
04:02:119 (1,1,1) - no need to add nc ww ok ;w;
no reply = fix accordingly

could work more to make it neater

thank you for mod >.<

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-08-09T10:01:35+00:00

Hi @3@

General

osb file is still alive. (I re-DLed this map ww)
I recommend an Audio Lead In (700)
Disable Widescreen

Narcissu's Easy

I don't recommend 1/2 stack in Easy diff as you did 00:15:325 (4,1) - , 00:47:934 (2,3) - , etc.
00:45:814 (3) - Although this have a clap, still hard to catch the rhythm. Delete this and add a 1/1 slider at 00:45:651 - here
01:07:825 (1) - Curve this slider a bit?
01:47:608 (2) - move at 01:47:445 - here?
01:58:532 (3) - 1/1 slider + 1/2 circle is better imo
03:21:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mix some 2/1 slider into them for getting high acc
Ehh..frankly, this diff is really hard to call an 'Easy'....

ffstar's Normal

00:03:586 (2) - move at 00:03:423 -
00:06:195 (2) - same as above, 00:06:032 - here is right place imo
00:07:173 (2,3) - move at 00:07:010 - here
00:49:890 - 00:51:195 - 00:52:499 - Consider to add a note there plz.
01:00:651 (2) - Try this
SPOILER
01:06:521 (3,4) - the rhythm is changed suddenly. Is there an special reason..? Two 1/1 sliders are better imo @3@
01:59:836 (5) - How about moving this at 01:59:673 - here with clap?
02:48:912 (1) - change to 1/2 slider
02:58:042 (2) - try this
SPOILER
03:16:955 (1) - delete NC and add NC on 03:18:586 (2) -
03:30:977 (3) - vol 15% is too low. Plz increase it

ffstar's Hard

01:04:238 (2,3) - try this for vocal
SPOILER
01:33:749 (1) - Delete? It's better in light Hard imo
01:57:880 (2) - Delete reverse and add a note at 01:58:532 - here
02:08:477 (3,4) - swap the rhythm
02:28:369 (5) - Unstack is better cuz vocal is still strong
02:39:130 (1,2) - Try this for 02:39:619 - this strong finish beat
SPOILER
02:41:738 (1,2) - change to 1/1 slider
03:17:934 (2) - Unstcak for pattern consistency
03:29:510 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add a reverse to (2)
03:30:977 - Same as Normal
03:56:412 (2,3) - This is better with music imo
SPOILER
04:01:303 (1,2,3) - The tempo is still high. Consider to change them to 1/2 slider

Hard

00:02:608 (1) - 1/1 slider is better with music
00:08:477 (2) - A bit confuse to read imo. How about stack on prev (1)?
00:16:140 - Add a note
00:21:684 (3) - Maybe Ctrl G is better to read?
00:23:314 (1) - Try this rhythm cuz 00:23:477 - here also strong beat
SPOILER
00:40:108 (4,5) - swap the rhythm. Current rhythm is a bit weird to play ww
00:43:532 (6) - Stack on (4)? It's more clear in-game!
00:56:249 (5,6,7) - (305,177)
01:07:744 - add a note
01:16:140 (2,3) - swap the rhythm
01:33:423 (1,1,1) - remove the NCs?
01:55:923 (4) - NC
02:03:586 (1) - stack on (2)
02:24:782 (1) - Consider to add a reverse. It's better to reading and music~
02:25:923 - add a note
03:30:651 (1) - Consider to decrease the sv. This part has only vocal, so this feels a bit fast sv ;w;
03:31:303 (2) - Try to stack on (1)
03:50:868 (1,2) - I got a miss at here Q_Q This looks almost 1/4 slider. Plz increase the sv. asdfasdf

Insane

00:28:369 (1) - Ehh,, no impact 3/4 slider imo (cuz main beats are all in 00:28:532 - here. 1/2 is better =3=
00:59:347 (4) - NC for emphasis
01:14:184 (5,6) - give them more DS
01:22:825 (1,2,3,4) - You can make them more funny!
01:34:401 (3,4) - swap them
01:52:173 (1) - Try Ctrl G for making jump! It fit with finish imo
02:21:195 (2,3) - Decrease the DS? 02:21:195 (2,3,4) - They seems to have almost same DS
02:49:564 (3) - NC
03:30:651 (1,2) - Same as Hard!
03:44:347 (5) - NC
The End!

Uuh,, I'm not good at modding orz
GL!

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2015-08-09T21:29:02+00:00

Nice Map rumi !! can't mod it im so lame >> sry

Test Play

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-10T18:07:46+00:00

rumiabcdefg---------------------------

Narcissu's Easy

totally seems quite hard for easy difficulty. i really recommend to reduce stacked objects and stuffs start from red line

00:02:608 (1,2) - this pattern is easier for new player like this 00:05:217 (1,2) -
SPOILER
00:12:064 (2) - considering flow, rotet it about 90°
SPOILER
00:45:325 (2,3) - hard rhythm, how about this one?
SPOILER
01:40:271 (3) - how about change to add whistle on head and tail?
01:47:608 (2,3,4) - hard rhythm, how about this one?
SPOILER
03:21:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hell for easy..... change some notes to slider

ffstar's Normal

i think NC pattern like 12,12,12,12,,,,, is too spamming and not consistent with some patterns, so consider to make like 1234,1234 for some stuffs
some sliders are very sharply, so recommend to adjust angle for safe 00:20:869 (1) - 02:13:043 (1) -
03:35:868 (4,5) - suddenly appeared 1/2 sliders combination at last, if you wanna put like these, should put them on first and second kiai i guess
00:23:477 (1) - whistle on tail
00:37:825 (1) - remove nc
00:59:999 (1) - to be more easy to click note after spinner, how about put this one close to center?
SPOILER
[img]00:59:999%20(1)%20-[/img]

ffstar's Hard

00:12:390 (3,1) - flow is not good, move 00:12:880 (1) - closer to 00:12:390 (3) - is better
SPOILER
00:54:130 (2,1) - insistent that stacks, how about move down them a bit?
SPOILER
01:20:869 (1) - moving 4th grid to 48/91 helps you to make clear wave
02:44:836 (3,4,5,1,2) - too dense there imo

Hard

00:19:238 - should add not w/e you following vocal imo
00:32:282 (7) - change it to slider or put a circle at 00:32:445 - is better to follow vocal
00:34:727 (4) - stack on 3 and stack on 00:35:053 (1) - is better?
00:56:249 (5,6,7) - how about place like here?
SPOILER
01:15:325 (3) - move arrow to next head is better
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/jwt7y/b1d25d6c00.jpg
01:42:880 (4) - ctrl+g is better
02:51:195 - add note?
02:52:499 - ^
02:58:694 (1,2) - more spacing helps players to read easier
02:59:184 (3,4) - ^
03:31:303 (2) - add nc

Insane

00:24:619 (1,2) - i think change to 1/2 slider is more fit to music
01:38:314 (1) - add nc and remove 01:38:477 (2) - s one
01:47:445 (2,3) - how about 1/2?

Regret

02:28:532 (1) - im not sure this slider is rankable xdd

that's all, good luck!!

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2015-08-11T11:57:58+00:00

Hard

You MUST fix these problems except of Mapset
03:56:575 (6) - nc?
00:49:564 ~ 00:54:456 - feel so empty here ;w;
01:16:140 (2,4) - overlap
01:20:217 (3) - make a perfect blanket pleasu :3
02:02:608 (4) - nc?
03:15:651 (1) - set 0.75 velocity? song's speed get faster
03:31:303 (2) - nc?
03:38:966 (4) - two circles are more better

Insane

00:04:564 (3) - avoid overlap
00:14:347 (6) - nc
00:46:467 (3) - avoid overlap
01:10:108 (6) - ctrl +g?
01:15:162 (3) - overlap
01:22:825 (1,2,3,4) - make a big star pattern? :3
02:15:651 (1) - blanket on circle 10?
02:45:651 (1) - overlap

Regret

00:02:608 (1) - del whistle in reverse
00:05:380 (2) - del clap and add it on 00:05:543 (3) -
00:05:706 (4) - del whislte on head?
00:12:880 (1,2) - two suggestion
i)follow piano -> make 00:12:880 (1) - 1/1 slider and 1/2 slider

Make a blanket of 2 slider

ii) one circle and 1/2 slider after 6/4

00:28:695 (2,3) - decrease distance, cuz we cant think that is a 1/4 on first play
00:46:303 (3) - blanket on 00:46:140 (2) - ?
01:11:086 (3) - pleasu avoid overlap
01:11:412 (1,2) - nc swap
01:12:390 (1,2) - ^
01:41:249 (4) - SO LONG :W: not fit on volume(?)
01:52:173 (1) - make a jumpy?
02:18:260 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc spam ;w; 02:19:238 (1,1) - del nc please \o/
02:28:532 (1) - Kawaii >3<
03:52:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - wrong rhythms

you feel more better i think.............

GL~~~ wwwwwwwwww

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-11T14:15:21+00:00

Karia wrote:
Hi @3@

General
osb file is still alive. (I re-DLed this map ww) deleted again orz
I recommend an Audio Lead In (700) ok!
Disable Widescreen ok

Hard
00:02:608 (1) - 1/1 slider is better with music fix!
00:08:477 (2) - A bit confuse to read imo. How about stack on prev (1)? fix!
00:16:140 - Add a notei think its also good to have a pause here
00:21:684 (3) - Maybe Ctrl G is better to read? good!
00:23:314 (1) - Try this rhythm cuz 00:23:477 - here also strong beat good!
SPOILER
00:40:108 (4,5) - swap the rhythm. Current rhythm is a bit weird to play ww
00:43:532 (6) - Stack on (4)? It's more clear in-game!
00:56:249 (5,6,7) - (305,177) i put at 310,110
01:07:744 - add a note
01:16:140 (2,3) - swap the rhythm
01:33:423 (1,1,1) - remove the NCs? its quite like anti jump , i decide to put nc for now unless its really unnecessary!
01:55:923 (4) - NC
02:03:586 (1) - stack on (2)
02:24:782 (1) - Consider to add a reverse. It's better to reading and music~
02:25:923 - add a note
03:30:651 (1) - Consider to decrease the sv. This part has only vocal, so this feels a bit fast sv ;w;
03:31:303 (2) - Try to stack on (1)
03:50:868 (1,2) - I got a miss at here Q_Q This looks almost 1/4 slider. Plz increase the sv. asdfasdf asdsaf sorry for trolling ww ;w; fixed

Insane
00:28:369 (1) - Ehh,, no impact 3/4 slider imo (cuz main beats are all in 00:28:532 - here. 1/2 is better =3= =3= ok
00:59:347 (4) - NC for emphasis
01:14:184 (5,6) - give them more DS i ctrl g 6
01:22:825 (1,2,3,4) - You can make them more funny! added a little jump here!
01:34:401 (3,4) - swap them ok but reduced a little distance
01:52:173 (1) - Try Ctrl G for making jump! It fit with finish imo nice
02:21:195 (2,3) - Decrease the DS? 02:21:195 (2,3,4) - They seems to have almost same DS ow the 2 actually 1/2 my bad ;w;
02:49:564 (3) - NC
03:30:651 (1,2) - Same as Hard!
03:44:347 (5) - NC
The End!
some not replied are fix accordingly!

Uuh,, I'm not good at modding orz
GL!

SoGa wrote:
Nice Map rumi !! can't mod it im so lame >> sry

Test Play

thanks for playing !

Asahina Momoko wrote:
rumiabcdefg--------------------------- (∩・▽・∩) mokori senpai

Hard
00:19:238 - should add not w/e you following vocal imo
00:32:282 (7) - change it to slider or put a circle at 00:32:445 - is better to follow vocal
00:34:727 (4) - stack on 3 and stack on 00:35:053 (1) - is better?
00:56:249 (5,6,7) - how about place like here?
SPOILER
01:15:325 (3) - move arrow to next head is better
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/jwt7y/b1d25d6c00.jpg
01:42:880 (4) - ctrl+g is better rip ds ok www
02:51:195 - add note? i am following the guitar
02:52:499 - ^ ^
02:58:694 (1,2) - more spacing helps players to read easier
02:59:184 (3,4) - ^ i add nc for better reading
03:31:303 (2) - add nc

Insane
00:24:619 (1,2) - i think change to 1/2 slider is more fit to music
01:38:314 (1) - add nc and remove 01:38:477 (2) - s one
01:47:445 (2,3) - how about 1/2?

Regret
02:28:532 (1) - im not sure this slider is rankable xdd but ;w; its cool www i will ask qats about this if its rankable ;w;

that's all, good luck!!

not replied are fixed!

Tenseki wrote:

sad face
Hard

You MUST fix these problems except of Mapset
03:56:575 (6) - nc?
00:49:564 ~ 00:54:456 - feel so empty here ;w; ;w; added and remove breaks ;w;
01:16:140 (2,4) - overlap
01:20:217 (3) - make a perfect blanket pleasu :3
02:02:608 (4) - nc? i think not necessary
03:15:651 (1) - set 0.75 velocity? song's speed is faster good
03:31:303 (2) - nc?
03:38:966 (4) - two circles are more better

unreplied are fix accordingly!

Insane
00:04:564 (3) - avoid overlap
00:14:347 (6) - nc
00:46:467 (3) - avoid overlap
01:10:108 (6) - ctrl +g? i think its fine !
01:15:162 (3) - overlap
01:22:825 (1,2,3,4) - make a big star pattern? :3 i did another pattern w
02:15:651 (1) - blanket on circle 10?
02:45:651 (1) - overlap

no reply = fix

Regret
00:02:608 (1) - del whistle in reverse
00:05:380 (2) - del clap and add it on 00:05:543 (3) - my bad =w=
00:05:706 (4) - del whislte on head? i think the whistle there sounds nice >.<
00:12:880 (1,2) - two suggestion suggestion 1 is awesome
i)follow piano -> make 00:12:880 (1) - 1/1 slider and 1/2 slider

Make a blanket of 2 slider
ii) one circle and 1/2 slider after 6/4
00:28:695 (2,3) - decrease distance, cuz we cant think that is a 1/4 on first play
00:46:303 (3) - blanket on 00:46:140 (2) - ?
01:11:086 (3) - pleasu avoid overlap
01:11:412 (1,2) - nc swap
01:12:390 (1,2) - ^
01:41:249 (4) - SO LONG :W: not fit on volume(?) ;w; decreased distance ;w;i think the volume is fine o.o
01:52:173 (1) - make a jumpy?
02:18:260 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc spam ;w; 02:19:238 (1,1) - del nc please \o/ removed wwww
02:28:532 (1) - Kawaii >3< >3<
03:52:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - wrong rhythms

you feel more better i think.............

GL~~~ wwwwwwwwww

not replied are fix!

thanks all for modding !

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-08-15T11:18:17+00:00

Midge wrote:
[ffstar's hard]

00:14:021 (4) - point upwards instead? http://hnng.moe/f/2EO would like to keep it and LOL cookiezi HAHA
00:16:956 (1,2) - antijump here might be too confusing
00:19:401 (1,2,3) - same ^
00:25:271 (2,3) - same ^ (not gonna point out all of these, but i'm not sure about them)
00:50:869 (2,3,1,2,1) - move to x:336 y:38 to compensate for the stack already stack here ;w;

Karen wrote:
hit boom

ffstar's Normal
00:20:869 (1) - the reverse arrow is weird in a Normal diff, try this :
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00:23:477 (1) - ^
02:13:043 (1) - ^
00:37:825 (1) - it's really confusing all keep until further mention
02:16:303 (2,3) - bad flow, try ctrl+j 02:16:303 (2) - i am ok with the O flow ;w;
ffstar's Hard
00:29:347 (3,4) - this kind of 1/1 stack is difficult to read, especially for those hd players
00:30:488 (2,3) - ^
00:34:564 (3,4) - ^ thiese are examples, i'm lazy to list all of them orz. this is not map for specific mod imo ;w;
01:17:934 (2) - ctrl+j for better flow with 01:18:260 (1) - nope
02:17:282 (2) - ^
too many stacks orz
about the flow, it looks something like this
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Karia wrote:
Hi @3@

ffstar's Normal
00:03:586 (2) - move at 00:03:423 - i am not following the drum sound
00:06:195 (2) - same as above, 00:06:032 - here is right place imo ^
00:07:173 (2,3) - move at 00:07:010 - here ^
00:49:890 - 00:51:195 - 00:52:499 - Consider to add a note there plz. trying to create a break for player to rest, so wont add too much of notes here
01:00:651 (2) - Try this too mainstream imo ;w;
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01:06:521 (3,4) - the rhythm is changed suddenly. Is there an special reason..? Two 1/1 sliders are better imo @3@ yea, i have no idea how to map this part, will try to change later
01:59:836 (5) - How about moving this at 01:59:673 - here with clap? not following drum
02:48:912 (1) - change to 1/2 slider it's not a big deal hahaha xd
02:58:042 (2) - try this changed in a different way
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03:16:955 (1) - delete NC and add NC on 03:18:586 (2) - okay
03:30:977 (3) - vol 15% is too low. Plz increase it increased to 30%

ffstar's Hard
01:04:238 (2,3) - try this for vocal nope
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01:33:749 (1) - Delete? It's better in light Hard imo keep first
01:57:880 (2) - Delete reverse and add a note at 01:58:532 - here no
02:08:477 (3,4) - swap the rhythm no
02:28:369 (5) - Unstack is better cuz vocal is still strong yea, but i dunno where i should put ><
02:39:130 (1,2) - Try this for 02:39:619 - this strong finish beat keep
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02:41:738 (1,2) - change to 1/1 slider nope
03:17:934 (2) - Unstcak for pattern consistency not a big deal ;w;
03:29:510 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add a reverse to (2) no
03:30:977 - Same as Normal 30%
03:56:412 (2,3) - This is better with music imo i am okay with that ;w;
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04:01:303 (1,2,3) - The tempo is still high. Consider to change them to 1/2 slider errr, you got the point, but let me keep this first

Asahina Momoko wrote:
rumiabcdefg---------------------------

ffstar's Normal
i think NC pattern like 12,12,12,12,,,,, is too spamming and not consistent with some patterns, so consider to make like 1234,1234 for some stuffs okay ;w;
some sliders are very sharply, so recommend to adjust angle for safe 00:20:869 (1) - 02:13:043 (1) - k since there are modder mentioned before
03:35:868 (4,5) - suddenly appeared 1/2 sliders combination at last, if you wanna put like these, should put them on first and second kiai i guess i purposely did that
00:23:477 (1) - whistle on tail ok
00:37:825 (1) - remove nc nope
00:59:999 (1) - to be more easy to click note after spinner, how about put this one close to center? the image is broken but the break is kinda long so no changes
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[img]00:59:999%20(1)%20-[/img]

ffstar's Hard
00:12:390 (3,1) - flow is not good, move 00:12:880 (1) - closer to 00:12:390 (3) - is better intended
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00:54:130 (2,1) - insistent that stacks, how about move down them a bit? nice idea! but i would like to keep first
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01:20:869 (1) - moving 4th grid to 48/91 helps you to make clear wave thank you
02:44:836 (3,4,5,1,2) - too dense there imo ><

thanks everyone!!! ><
sorry for the delay

updated
http://puu.sh/jCncO/2fb9eb14c6.rar

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-08-16T03:41:00+00:00

Karia wrote:
Hi @3@

Narcissu's Easy
I don't recommend 1/2 stack in Easy diff as you did 00:15:325 (4,1) - , 00:47:934 (2,3) - , etc. …… i know other Easy without 1/2 stack , but i don't want ignore the the rhythm …… stack is the simplest way i think 。-。
00:45:814 (3) - Although this have a clap, still hard to catch the rhythm. Delete this and add a 1/1 slider at 00:45:651 - here …… i think the 1/2 rhythm better follow the song …… maybe , i don't have much experience for Easy diff ;w;
01:07:825 (1) - Curve this slider a bit?……ok
01:47:608 (2) - move at 01:47:445 - here?……ok
01:58:532 (3) - 1/1 slider + 1/2 circle is better imo……ok
03:21:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mix some 2/1 slider into them for getting high acc……add note to get pp lol
Ehh..frankly, this diff is really hard to call an 'Easy'...…… e , i know the diff hard than other Easy diff , but if i more simplified the rhythm , it's too weird to hear …… maybe it's should be rename to Normal …… or remap 233

Asahina Momoko wrote:
rumiabcdefg---------------------------

Narcissu's Easy

totally seems quite hard for easy difficulty. i really recommend to reduce stacked objects and stuffs start from red line
00:02:608 (1,2) - this pattern is easier for new player like this 00:05:217 (1,2) -
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00:12:064 (2) - considering flow, rotet it about 90°……ok
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00:45:325 (2,3) - hard rhythm, how about this one?
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01:40:271 (3) - how about change to add whistle on head and tail?……it's mistake, fix ;w;
01:47:608 (2,3,4) - hard rhythm, how about this one?……ok
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03:21:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hell for easy..... change some notes to slider …… 1/1 note easy than 1/2 slider i think ;w;

my network bad …… puu boom , so i just consider text Orz

@rumia ：sounds like my diff having a lot of problems …… what should i do

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Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-08-16T13:34:24+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
@rumia ：sounds like my diff having a lot of problems …… what should i do

just cry
updated

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-09-03T06:48:35+00:00

[General]

i think that u need blank soft-sliderslide2&3

[Regret]

00:22:499 (1) - maybe pull it away a bit to make it easier to read
01:15:651 (1) - move it a grid left to make the stream go in a straight line?
01:19:727 (5,1) - i'd prefer change them to a mini slider to emphasize the special sound here
02:58:369 (4) - miss a sound in the middle of slider, maybe shorten it by 1/3 and add a note or make it reverse or anything you like to point it out
03:16:140 (3,4,5,6) - not in symmetry? (whatever

[Insane]

00:39:619 - the voice should end here right? i think pull the next note here will be nice
also this rhythm pattern follows the vocal here better imo:http://puu.sh/jYdXl/f50d595d05.jpg just suggestion
02:25:434 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - why not make their distance go up/down gradually or just stay constant?
02:25:271 (1) - and i suggest moving this note lower since there's 1/1 between 6-1 while 1/2 between 1-2
02:49:564 (1,2) - could blanket better by changing the curve of 1
04:02:119 (1,2,3) - straight ones may cause a final miss XD but whatever

[Hard]

01:37:336 (3,1) - the overlap looks not that good and seems a little crowded
03:20:706 (6,7,8) - maybe pull them away a bit, at least not touch the slider
04:00:488 (3,4) - can do a blanket if you want

[ffstar's Hard]

00:19:401 (1,2,3) - maybe a little confusing to play the stacks here with rhythm changes
(oh seems that you did these stuff intentionally but that would be really hard for a light hard diff imo, whether for a player who are just accustomed to this kind of difficulty or a player who wants to HDDT this to get on the scoreboard)
00:54:130 (2) - vocal and instrument are both coming 1/2 earlier, what are you following here? pull it 1/2 earlier is more reasonable
00:54:456 - and add a note here to follow the finish background sound as well as avoid the embarrassing empty here caused by the change of the above mod
03:47:445 (2) - just a grid up to get it well stacked

[ffstar's Normal]

00:53:477 (1,2) - same as hard, but i think it's okay not to follow something that cause rhythm change in normal.

[Narcissu's Easy]

00:15:325 (4,1) - 听说easy里这样stack不好啊，你更有经验自己把握吧;w;（一样的就不提了
00:42:717 (2) - 听着怪怪的，不如往前加长1/2跟vocal？
00:45:325 (2,3) - 前面那个不好说..但我觉得这里肯定把2加长1/2再把3往后拖1/2更合适吧，就是要重新照顾间距了..
01:58:532 (3,4) - 听vocal的话是3缩短1/2, 4提前1/2吧，再在下一个1前1/2加个note？
02:27:390 - 加个note？按你前面的难度加一个也没什么不妥

Good luck on the map! leave a star and hope my short mod will help

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2015-09-04T18:31:55+00:00

Garden wrote:
[General]

i think that u need blank soft-sliderslide2&3
[Regret]

00:22:499 (1) - maybe pull it away a bit to make it easier to read
01:15:651 (1) - move it a grid left to make the stream go in a straight line?
01:19:727 (5,1) - i'd prefer change them to a mini slider to emphasize the special sound here i think there is no need to
02:58:369 (4) - miss a sound in the middle of slider, maybe shorten it by 1/3 and add a note or make it reverse or anything you like to point it out
03:16:140 (3,4,5,6) - not in symmetry? (whatever
[Insane]

00:39:619 - the voice should end here right? i think pull the next note here will be nice
also this rhythm pattern follows the vocal here better imo:http://puu.sh/jYdXl/f50d595d05.jpg just suggestion
not following the vocal , but the instrument instead
02:25:434 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - why not make their distance go up/down gradually or just stay constant? want to give a little movement here but dont want to cause a difficulty spike
02:25:271 (1) - and i suggest moving this note lower since there's 1/1 between 6-1 while 1/2 between 1-2
02:49:564 (1,2) - could blanket better by changing the curve of 1
04:02:119 (1,2,3) - straight ones may cause a final miss XD but whatever
[Hard]

01:37:336 (3,1) - the overlap looks not that good and seems a little crowded
03:20:706 (6,7,8) - maybe pull them away a bit, at least not touch the slider
04:00:488 (3,4) - can do a blanket if you want
Good luck on the map! leave a star and hope my short mod will help

unreplied is fixed!
thanks for modding !

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-09-11T17:33:00+00:00

Garden wrote:
[ffstar's Hard]

00:19:401 (1,2,3) - maybe a little confusing to play the stacks here with rhythm changes
(oh seems that you did these stuff intentionally but that would be really hard for a light hard diff imo, whether for a player who are just accustomed to this kind of difficulty or a player who wants to HDDT this to get on the scoreboard) i purposely map in that way because the song is kinda "slow" there
00:54:130 (2) - vocal and instrument are both coming 1/2 earlier, what are you following here? pull it 1/2 earlier is more reasonable listen carefully to the bass
00:54:456 - and add a note here to follow the finish background sound as well as avoid the embarrassing empty here caused by the change of the above mod nope
03:47:445 (2) - just a grid up to get it well stacked i think this is editor problem, it never stack
[ffstar's Normal]

00:53:477 (1,2) - same as hard, but i think it's okay not to follow something that cause rhythm change in normal.
Good luck on the map! leave a star and hope my short mod will help

thanks for the mod!!!
orz stack

Baskest

11 posts

Joined February 2014

Baskest 2015-10-13T01:07:35+00:00

This map is a masterpiece. <3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-12-31T01:39:56+00:00

osu! needs more sana❤︎

TequilaWolf

279 posts

Joined November 2013

TequilaWolf 2016-01-05T04:08:21+00:00

short irc o:

2016-01-05 11:46 Rumia-: tjen
2016-01-05 11:46 Rumia-: are u interested to mod my map ? xD
2016-01-05 11:46 TequilaWolf: wha tmap
2016-01-05 11:46 Rumia-: ACTION is away: im doubting my life.
2016-01-05 11:46 TequilaWolf: http://puu.sh/mk2RN/77a92ff02f.jpg
2016-01-05 11:46 TequilaWolf: my favourite
2016-01-05 11:46 Rumia-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/866655 sana - Little Regret]
2016-01-05 11:47 Rumia-: lol
2016-01-05 11:47 TequilaWolf: wew like heavily modded oredi
2016-01-05 11:48 Rumia-: wew i didnt feel satisfied
2016-01-05 11:48 Rumia-: on the higher diffs ;w;
2016-01-05 11:49 TequilaWolf: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/866530 sana - Little Regret [Extra]]
2016-01-05 11:54 TequilaWolf: oo
2016-01-05 11:55 Rumia-: gg
2016-01-05 11:55 Rumia-: is ther any part felt awkward or sth
2016-01-05 11:55 TequilaWolf: neh
2016-01-05 11:55 TequilaWolf: that one I miss
2016-01-05 11:55 TequilaWolf: bad
2016-01-05 11:55 TequilaWolf: LOL jk
2016-01-05 11:55 Rumia-: LOL
2016-01-05 11:56 TequilaWolf: lima bulan
2016-01-05 11:56 Rumia-: nvm thx to ur testplay i notice some inconsistent blanket xD
2016-01-05 11:56 TequilaWolf: 02:28:542 (1) -
2016-01-05 11:56 TequilaWolf: japanese word?
2016-01-05 11:56 Rumia-: yo
2016-01-05 11:56 TequilaWolf: ic
2016-01-05 11:57 Rumia-: she is screaming yoooooooooooooooooooo
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: a little hard read 02:40:199 (4,5,6,1) -
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: o scream
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: ohh ya.
2016-01-05 11:57 Rumia-: o ic ic
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: 02:42:237 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: then this
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: same
2016-01-05 11:57 TequilaWolf: but diff? or
2016-01-05 11:58 TequilaWolf: 02:45:498 (5,6,1) -
2016-01-05 11:58 Rumia-: ya others got 1/4 gap
2016-01-05 11:58 Rumia-: mislooked this 1
2016-01-05 11:59 Rumia-: kk fixed xd
2016-01-05 11:59 TequilaWolf: maybe ctrl g? 02:50:879 (1) -
2016-01-05 12:00 Rumia-: o its actually a pattern along with 02:49:574 (1,1) -
2016-01-05 12:00 Rumia-: nvm ctrl g mcm nicer
2016-01-05 12:00 Rumia-: ctrl g'd both rofl
2016-01-05 12:01 TequilaWolf: oic
2016-01-05 12:01 TequilaWolf: thinking something
2016-01-05 12:01 TequilaWolf: dunno la
2016-01-05 12:01 TequilaWolf: but 04:01:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe ctrlshiftS bigger? o:
2016-01-05 12:01 Rumia-: its ok i already ctrl g
2016-01-05 12:01 Rumia-: c:
2016-01-05 12:02 TequilaWolf: no idea.
2016-01-05 12:02 TequilaWolf: k nothing dy xD
2016-01-05 12:02 TequilaWolf: nice
2016-01-05 12:02 TequilaWolf: map
2016-01-05 12:02 Rumia-: o that circle
2016-01-05 12:05 Rumia-: ok make bigger dy
2016-01-05 12:05 Rumia-: thx for mod c:
2016-01-05 12:05 TequilaWolf: WElcome
2016-01-05 12:05 TequilaWolf: wan post?
2016-01-05 12:05 Rumia-: post post
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2016-01-05 12:40 TequilaWolf: 02:45:498 (5,6,1) -
2016-01-05 12:40 TequilaWolf: this one intentional?
2016-01-05 12:40 Rumia-: ya its intentional
2016-01-05 12:40 Rumia-: pattern

2016-01-05 12:40 TequilaWolf: kk.
2016-01-05 12:41 Rumia-: the circle is eye
2016-01-05 12:41 Rumia-: the slider is triangle
2016-01-05 12:41 Rumia-: illuminati

2016-01-05 12:41 TequilaWolf: 02:45:498 (5,6,1) - this wor
2016-01-05 12:41 TequilaWolf: the stack not even or something @@
2016-01-05 12:41 TequilaWolf: nvm nvm LOL
2016-01-05 12:42 Rumia-: @@
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: the triplet
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: how to say
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: the stack doesn't stack directly on top of each nother
2016-01-05 12:43 Rumia-: o
2016-01-05 12:43 Rumia-: not perfectly stack u mean ? @@
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: yes
2016-01-05 12:43 Rumia-: oh
2016-01-05 12:43 Rumia-: HAHA
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: LOL
2016-01-05 12:43 TequilaWolf: dude
2016-01-05 12:44 Rumia-: fixed my bad HAHAHA
2016-01-05 12:44 Rumia-: i was trying to understand what u r saying @ @
2016-01-05 12:45 TequilaWolf: 'is pattern o:' illuminati
2016-01-05 12:45 TequilaWolf: me: ?_?
2016-01-05 12:45 TequilaWolf: HAA
2016-01-05 12:46 Rumia-: ?_?
2016-01-05 12:46 Rumia-: stack not even or something @@
2016-01-05 12:46 TequilaWolf: stack not even or something @@
2016-01-05 12:46 Rumia-: like this u only call them bad stack
2016-01-05 12:46 TequilaWolf: oo

Last edited by TequilaWolf 2016-01-05T04:51:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2016-01-05T04:37:41+00:00

thanks tequilawolf c:

Lavender

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Lavender 2016-01-17T08:36:40+00:00

[Narcissu's Easy]

00:15:335 (4,1) - 184bpm Easy里的1/2太容易死啦，而且Easy里面不推荐stack
00:41:748 (1,2,3) - 这样的节奏是不是不太友好

其实easy还是保险比较好吧，老老实实1/2就肯定没事
[ffstar's Normal]

00:15:498 (1,2) - blanket nazi

Fine.
[ffstar's Hard]

00:27:237 (3,4,5) - I don't recommend stack here because of the rhythm. Stack will lead to misunderstanding. 00:28:542 (5,1) - stack these will be better.
00:29:357 (3,4) - same.
01:04:248 (2) - please don't place a vocal sound at a slider tail, it doens't play good.
02:20:553 (3,1) - blanket nazi
03:55:444 (3,4) - rhythm here asks for two sliders

Totally fine.
[Hard]

01:38:813 (5,1) - place these two further pls, current one may mislead players.
02:14:031 (4,1) - don't know why you put them together(music isn't special here)
03:20:879 (8) - maybe NC?
03:30:661 (1) - replace it with two 1/2 sliders?
03:40:444 (5,6,7) - 03:41:096 (7,8,1) - why 1.3x and 1.1x? different ds makes it ugly, and 03:41:096 (7) - do you even want a blanket?(and this "blanket" is really bad-looking) You'd better use straight slider here orz.

[Insane]

Mapper told me that he would remap the Insane so I wouldn't mod that.

[Extra]

00:14:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ahh I don't know the reason putting this, music doesn't increase here.
00:32:781 (2,6,7,8) - intention?
01:03:759 (4,1) - bad flow here, maybe Ctrl+G and place 01:04:085 (2,3,4) - to
here
02:28:542 (1) - nice sliderart
02:39:629 (2,3) - combine these two into a slider, because there isn't any drumbeat at 02:39:792 (3) - , however, if you decide to follow the bass, then you'd better replace 02:39:140 (1) - with 3 circles.
03:56:422 (3,4,5,6) - I think here would just be two circles ahh

[Senya's Extra]

02:26:096 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe too lazy?
02:44:357 (1,3,4) - ahh these whistles just don't fit this kawaii song, try to change one.

hi pro mapper

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