15:33 Asphyxia: p nice job, and it feels different than the usual style you use
15:33 Kyshiro: how can you not like this song
15:33 Asphyxia: which is good
15:33 Asphyxia: ehh
15:33 Kyshiro: yeah tahts what im aiming for lol
15:33 Asphyxia: I don't like the singer
15:33 Asphyxia: I think the voice is meh
15:33 Kyshiro: oh
15:33 Kyshiro: idk i like it
15:33 Asphyxia: few things tho
15:34 Asphyxia: 00:08:988 (10,11,1,2) - consider stacking them sometimes
15:34 Asphyxia: even though you want to leave them like that, making more variation is fine as well
15:34 Asphyxia: but your call
15:34 Kyshiro: hmm
15:34 Kyshiro: i think i'll leave it for now
15:34 Kyshiro: i'll see if i add stacks later on
15:34 Kyshiro: if i do, i'll change a few of them too
15:34 Asphyxia: 00:11:421 (6,7) - Give this more spacing? I always think it's better to have more spacing on the 1/4 since they don't feel too clustered then
15:35 Asphyxia: I'd move 00:11:421 (6) - further away, and I'd 00:11:583 (7) - turn this into a straight line with the previous triplet
15:35 Asphyxia: to fit the pattern better
15:35 Asphyxia: 00:11:745 (1) - I'd also give this one a slight spacing increase, so the finish gets emphasized more
15:35 Kyshiro: yeah sure
15:35 Kyshiro: fixed a bit different
15:36 Kyshiro: 00:11:583 (7) - is between00:10:772 (2,4) - now
15:36 Kyshiro: and 00:11:745 (1) - is in the center of 00:12:232 (1) -
15:36 Asphyxia: 00:25:529 (6) - the small spacing error is noticeable, space it again with 0,8
15:36 Kyshiro: done
15:37 Asphyxia: 00:36:718 (7,8,9) - I also get that this is for the sake for the square pattern, but I was actually not sure if this was 1/2 like your current
15:37 Asphyxia: or if the repeat sliders had one extra repeat
15:37 Kyshiro: 00:41:907 (1,1,1) - this gave me so much aids, its like unsnapped as fuck
15:37 Asphyxia: the AR helps it a lot, but I'd try to space them more
15:37 Asphyxia: leaving them is fine anyway but
15:37 Kyshiro: well i could space out the pattern
15:37 Asphyxia: yeh
15:37 Asphyxia: that's better
15:38 Kyshiro: done
15:38 Asphyxia: I feel like sometimes 00:44:097 (10,1) - those kind of things are kinda unnecessary, as they would probably work nicely as stacked too
15:38 Asphyxia: but I get the style yeh
15:39 Kyshiro: i love that
15:39 Asphyxia: 00:45:313 (6,7,1) - this, however, I would stack because it kinda looks clustered and not too clean
15:39 Asphyxia: but your call
15:39 Kyshiro: idk
15:39 Asphyxia: 00:47:097 (3,4,9,10) - would try to give them more spacing so it'd feel more fun?
15:39 Kyshiro: its kinda the same idea as 01:03:069 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
15:39 Asphyxia: that way they'd kinda, reflect to your stream spacing better?
15:40 Asphyxia: 00:50:988 (3,4) - ^
15:40 Kyshiro: sure
15:40 Asphyxia: 00:52:610 (6,7,8,9) - this spacing is nice
15:40 Asphyxia: 00:57:069 (8,9) - random stack gg
15:40 Asphyxia: 00:59:259 (5) - ^ would prob move a bit more up
15:41 Kyshiro: HAD NO SPACE TO UNSTACK LOL
15:41 Kyshiro: fucking
15:41 Kyshiro: osu
15:41 Asphyxia: 01:02:988 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This plays fine, but it looks not too good to me
15:41 Kyshiro: and sure fixed
15:41 Asphyxia: I'd uhh
15:41 Asphyxia: 01:03:313 (9) - NC this, and then do a spacing increase on the stream
15:41 Asphyxia: while still having the curve
15:41 Kyshiro: fuck you and not looking good on the acute direction changes
15:41 Kyshiro: i love that LOL
15:41 Asphyxia: like 1,0x
15:41 Asphyxia: ok
15:41 Kyshiro: and not liking * wow english
15:42 Asphyxia: 01:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - again would space more
15:42 Asphyxia: gg
15:42 Asphyxia: but yeh that's all
15:42 Asphyxia: nice map
15:42 Asphyxia: I like it
15:42 Kyshiro: yeah i did that already
15:42 Kyshiro: cool
15:42 Kyshiro: thanks
15:42 Asphyxia: 00:39:961 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this was nice