All fixedneonat wrote:
Umbrella
00:12:756 (2) - shift it a little to be more in line with the slider:
00:22:756 (1,2) - blanket nicely
00:25:256 (8) - location of this object is really weird, in terms of angle, it's too low, shifting it up to be more symmetrical would be better, but then the next slider would have to change position and possibly shape:
00:29:422 (8) - NC
00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what I find an issue with making patterns like this is the wrong emphasis with bigger spacing on the incorrect notes. Emphasis should be made on the beats at 00:29:422 and 00:30:089 - more than the rest, but the spacing would show otherwise right now, especially 00:29:422 - the spacing right now is anti-climatic right now, I feel there needs to be some re-positioning done
00:31:339 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this double curve in the same direction is rather awkward movement I feel, pretty backwards oriented
00:32:089 (3,4) - reason for the huge spacing?
00:40:089 (1,2) - second slider's end doesn't blanket with the other slider
00:41:756 (2) - x:272 y:272
00:43:089 (2) - shouldn't be extended, end at 00:43:256
00:48:422 (3) - remove, there is no music starting at the point
00:50:089 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - really too sharp cut-backs here, very angular
00:54:089 (3) - do not have it start underneath as well as on the right of 00:53:756 (2) - there is no flow to it
00:56:089 (1,2) - blanket
00:57:672 (2,3) - aligning it with the slider would be nice:
01:10:756 (1,2,3) - why did you extend the sliders, having them 1/2 beat long would fit the music on the point
01:13:422 (1,2) - slight overlaps like these, usually can't be pulled off well and look decent, they usually look unpolished most of the time
01:16:089 (1,2) - slight overlaps too
01:24:089 (1,2) - this time is the slight overlap of the former slider onto the new slider start circle - overlapping the body is fine, but that touching of the slider head...
01:25:422 (1,2) - don't let them touch each other
01:27:922 (8) - slider end on a strong beat, puts the rhythm off by having it be so weak here: 01:28:089 is crucial
01:47:089 - ignoring the vocals here halts the rhythm
01:55:589 (4,5,1) - flow movement wavering everywhere
02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - if you want it to stream the other way, flip it to curve the other way:
02:32:089 (3,4,5) - it's one pattern and section of the music, want to space it, space it evenly and nicely for more consistency
02:34:589 (1) - ending the slider on a strong on-beat again
02:44:589 (1,2,3) - I can see the curve in this line, it looks less structured well
02:41:422 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - a lot of the stacks are really badly done, and destroys flow. Don't incessantly use it so repeatedly until it is a pain
02:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see no good use of change of rhythm with circles or sliders to emphasize on the double 1/2 beats the music so strongly plays out in the song
03:19:756 (5) - shift it to lead better from the previous slider:
03:19:756 (5,1,2,3) - look at the spacing at 03:19:756 (5,1) and you can see that odd point is just sticking out sorely
03:24:922 (1,2,3,4) - changing spacing everywhere
04:00:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - the slider doesn't lead well to the stream, the stream being too low
04:09:422 (1,2) - blanket nicely
Spacing is problematic and the angle and movement is not quite there, it gets weird.
Good Luck
Thanks for mod sorry for SUPER late reply