1. Hard (2.71 stars, 448 notes)
2. Normal (1.81 stars, 266 notes)

1. slider is not pretty and You have to fix the beat and Flow (My think :3)
   
2. 00:08:544 (2,4) - Distance Up
   
   
3. 00:10:888 (1,2,3) - Same shape
   
   
4. 00:15:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Beat fix
   
   
5. 00:31:747 (4) - x:248 y:144
   
   
6. 00:33:622 (2,3) - Same shape
   
   
7. 00:36:669 (1,2) - Bad flow
   This flow? http://puu.sh/i2eZ4/3acea91733.jpg
   
   
8. 00:45:575 (3) - I recommend a fix
   
9. 00:47:919 (6) - ^
   
10. 00:49:325 (1) - ^
    
11. 00:52:607 (1) - ^
    
12. 00:55:419 (1) - ^
    
13. 01:01:278 (4) - ^
    
14. 01:05:028 (4) - ^
    
    
15. 01:11:825 (5) - ctrl + g?
    
    
16. 01:20:732 (1) - Add beat It is empty.
    
17. 01:29:169 (1) - ^
    
    
18. 01:34:325 (2,4) - Same shape
    
    
19. 01:42:997 (2) - slide(1) ctrl + g > ctrl + h
    
    
20. 02:22:607 - Add Circle
    
    
21. 03:00:810 (4,5) - distance up
    
    
22. 03:07:607 (1,2,3) - Same distance
    
23. 03:09:013 (4,5,6) - ^
    
24. 03:10:419 (7,8,1) - ^
    
    
25. 03:39:482 (6,7,8) - This shape? http://puu.sh/i2fDJ/8f88dbdd30.jpg
    
    
26. 03:41:591 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/i2fFx/0bdc8134ab.jpg
    
    
27. 03:58:700 (1) - finish is 03:59:638 -

1. All notes should be the same distance. This is Normal
   It is recommended to remapping

1. Same as normal

Arooma wrote:

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Hard

1. slider is not pretty and You have to fix the beat and Flow (My think :3)
   
2. 00:08:544 (2,4) - Distance Up
   
   
3. 00:10:888 (1,2,3) - Same shape
   
   
4. 00:15:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Beat fix
   
   
5. 00:31:747 (4) - x:248 y:144
   
   
6. 00:33:622 (2,3) - Same shape
   
   
7. 00:36:669 (1,2) - Bad flow
   This flow? http://puu.sh/i2eZ4/3acea91733.jpg
   
   
8. 00:45:575 (3) - I recommend a fix
   
9. 00:47:919 (6) - ^
   
10. 00:49:325 (1) - ^
    
11. 00:52:607 (1) - ^
    
12. 00:55:419 (1) - ^
    
13. 01:01:278 (4) - ^
    
14. 01:05:028 (4) - ^
    
    
15. 01:11:825 (5) - ctrl + g?
    
    
16. 01:20:732 (1) - Add beat It is empty.
    
17. 01:29:169 (1) - ^
    
    
18. 01:34:325 (2,4) - Same shape
    
    
19. 01:42:997 (2) - slide(1) ctrl + g > ctrl + h
    
    
20. 02:22:607 - Add Circle
    
    
21. 03:00:810 (4,5) - distance up
    
    
22. 03:07:607 (1,2,3) - Same distance
    
23. 03:09:013 (4,5,6) - ^
    
24. 03:10:419 (7,8,1) - ^
    
    
25. 03:39:482 (6,7,8) - This shape? http://puu.sh/i2fDJ/8f88dbdd30.jpg
    
    
26. 03:41:591 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/i2fFx/0bdc8134ab.jpg
    
    
27. 03:58:700 (1) - finish is 03:59:638 -

Normal

1. All notes should be the same distance. This is Normal
   It is recommended to remapping

Easy

1. Same as normal

that's it
I do not speak English well
Good luck :3/

Heloo~ Modding as requested

GENERAL

HITSOUNDS

EASY

NORMAL & HARD

Well, PM o chat mo na lang ako kung may tanong ka pa Or kung gusto mo lang ng may kachat lewl.
Good Luck for ranking~ :3 Also you need mods on your SB.

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heloo~ Modding as requested

GENERAL

1. Your current background is unrankable. It should be 1024 x 768 or if possible, use 1366 x 768 for better quality. I can't find a 1366 x 768 of your background so i made it to 1024 x 768:
   
   BG

   
2. Your difficulty right now is too high.
   Do as follows:
   
   DIFFICULTY

   EASY
   Hp-Drain Rate - 4 to 1 ~ (i choose 2)
   Circle Size - 3 to 2 (i choose 3)
   Approach Rate - 4 to 1 (i choose 3)
   Overall Difficulty - 4 to 1 (i choose 2)
   NORMAL
   Hp-Drain Rate - 6 to 4 ~ (i choose 4)
   Circle Size - 4 to 3 (i choose 3)
   Approach Rate - 6 to 4 (i choose 5)
   Overall Difficulty - 6 to 4 (i choose 4)
   HARD
   Hp-Drain Rate - 7 to 5 ~ (i choose 6)
   Circle Size - 4 (i choose 3)
   Approach Rate - 7 to 5 (i choose 7)
   Overall Difficulty - 7 to 5 (i choose 6)
3. I suggest using just 4 or 5 combo colors. Having 8 colors will have the player confused. @_@ The combo colors are not for design but for telling if the part of the vocals/beat is finished in that certain part.
4. Use only 1 tick, the beat is slow. and It doesn't match. http://puu.sh/i38Cu/8f893c827e.jpg Also, It should be the same with all diffs.
5. Kiai is too long. End kiai at 01:58:232 and start again at 02:00:107
6. Your easy and normal has the same slider velocity(1.20). It should not be the same. Make easy 1.00 instead

HITSOUNDS

1. The drum roll in sliders is too noisy =_= Download my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/308064 Open the map's song folder then copy Soft-Sliderslide and paste it in your Beatmap's folder then open your beatmap's editor and go here: http://puu.sh/i38Pi/4d81e36c54.jpg the click soft and custom 1
2. Also, I think you should copy the Soft-hitwhistle in my beatmaps folder and paste it in your song folder. It matches more to the music
3. Make your hitsounds consistent to all diffs. Use the same hitsounds. I noticed your normal has the hitsounds but in easy it doesn't have

EASY

1. Make sure all the notes are in white ticks. Even spinners :3
2. Try Ctrl+Shift+A and check the box next to refresh and you will see a lot of warnings. There SHOULD NOT be warnings/errors in Easy and Normal.
3. 00:05:732(3,4) - Avoid overlapping to make it look neat.
4. 00:15:107(1,2) - This slider is not smooth to play. Make sure that every sliders are not cramped like this.
5. 00:44:169 - Remove. It's not following anything and it gets me off when i'm playing
6. Don't use too much straight sliders. Have a variety of them
7. 01:00:107 - No stacking in easy
8. 01:15:810 - Start this at the white tick. and the hitsounds, make the volume a low. There's no beat at this part
9. Also, you have complicated sliders for an easy. It should be smooth. Avoid using redpoints as much as possible, the sliders w/ red points is too pointy(basta patusok yung corner) lol xD
10. 01:35:732 - Don't map at the blackpart or the timeline. Bring it down.
11. 01:48:388 - In easy, when using spinners, there should be a break of 1.50 seconds before you start a note.
12. 01:48:857 - No stacking. Find every note that is stacked and change it.
13. Also, your NC(New Combos) is inconsistent. Alright, now I'll try to say something about the New Combos. NCs are used to indicate notorious changes in song's tempo, patterns and other things. They are, in most cases, consistent among the song, and are commonly applied every downbeat (the way we call the big white tick), but can also be applied every two downbeats (meaning you might apply a NC on a big white tick, but you don't apply a NC on the next one; and then you just apply it on the third downbeat that comes). So, take this as a suggestion. Make your NCs constant. Since this is an Easy diff, you should NC things every two measures to avoid making very short combos. Also, using same NC colors on a row is restricted by the Ranking Criteria (RC for short) since the end of a combo and the beginning of the other isn't clear. Combos need to be clearly distinguishable between each other, and that's why this restriction exists. So, you need to check every NC on the map.
14. Fix Distance Spacing

NORMAL & HARD

1. Don't forget CTrl+SHift+A to fix distance spacing~
2. Also, the NCs should be consistent
3. TIPS
   1. Make sure you make your map patterns like a shape
   2. Make DS breaks occasionaly to make a good flow
   3. 1/1 beats anti-jumps are good and can be fun, especially for low BPM dubstep songs
   4. Make your sliders tidyly
   5. Avoid using too much useless sliders
   6. Avoid make sliderends at downbeat (White Tick) and slider starting at upbeat (Red Tick)
   7. If you're a bit annoyed at hitsounds, just set the hitsound sample to soft and use 20-30% volume, and then you can do the hitsounds after you finish your map pattern ^^
   8. Watch for the CS! Don't use odd CS such as 4.1 and 4.5
   9. Rotation is the best weapon in mapping
   10. 30 degrees angle is good to make 1/2 repeat sliders
   11. Don't make your map orientation too plain. Such as rotation use and Hit circles rotation
   12. Don't use too much angular and straight sliders
   13. Map patterns that are following each other.
   14. Don't use blue ticks in easy and normal
   15. Don't use reverse sliders in easy(It's my opinion)
   16. New Combos usually start at the big white tick

Well, PM o chat mo na lang ako kung may tanong ka pa Or kung gusto mo lang ng may kachat lewl.
Good Luck for ranking~ :3 Also you need mods on your SB.

Akali wrote:

[General]

Files are fine I guess.
You should have a harder diff that uses 1/4s, current hard doesn't represent the song good enough

[Normal]

In general the way you curve sliders is pretty inconsistent, it's not much of a playability issue on diff like that but still make the design disappointing a bit, you also miss a lot of easy blanket opportunities which would make reception better. It also seems that you use gridsnap on that gridsize, which makes spacing and stacking slightly off, I would consider remapping. I will point out some stuff so you can avoid it

Combos: Remake them, don't want to point every single one out, make new combo every 2nd downbeat, right now it's inconsistent
Rhythm: Too many sections with sliders ending on downbeat (00:46:513 (4,5,6) - like here), should be avoided, mix it up with return sliders from time to time as well. 00:54:482 (1,2,3,4) - this section has good slider placement f.e.

00:16:982 (5,6) - I would avoid these on normal diff, it's completely unnecessary + you don't stack it properly but rather do ugly overlap (this applies to all patterns like these
00:26:357 (1) - don't know exact values for after spinner rest time, but this seems to short recovery time, end on 00:29:169 (1) - at least
00:44:169 (1) - remove, don't think mapping speech like that is ok
00:45:575 (3) - no reason for 0,5x, keep it 1,0x through entire diff
00:49:325 (1,2) - these look terrible
00:52:607 (4) - again SV change + ending of this slider is overlapping slider path too much
01:00:107 (1,2) - again gridsnap/design issue, it's sort of symmetrical but turned out ugly
01:01:513 (2) - and you have good return slider opportunity here
01:05:263 (2) - ^
01:17:919 (2) - breaking 0,9~ ds you used so far for no reason
01:27:294 (4,5,6) - - terrible overlap
01:31:982 (3,4) - ^
01:57:763 (4,5,6) - random stack, introducing 1/2s suddenly, keep it 1/1 or use 1/2 return slider
02:07:138 (3) - make this a circle and start with sliders on downbeat in next measure, next section has wrong slider placement on timeline again
02:15:107 (1,2) - bad curve, randomly using red anchor on slider end
02:16:982 (3) - this is good curve
02:20:263 (4,5) - again bad overlap + weird shape
02:29:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/2 section when ignoring 1/2s in previous part of the map, too inconsistent
03:23:544 (1,2,3) - don't do that, no matter difficulty level
03:24:950 (4,5) - on vocal sections avoid circle rhythms, make this return slider
03:27:294 (6,7,8) -
03:39:482 (4) - again, random red anchor on slider end, make it simple

Didn't point out every single design/rhythm issue, you need to improve your mapping overall

[Hard]

It's basically same issues all over again, with design, rhythm and combos, the fact you use only 1/2s messes with the rhythm (slowdown the song and listen to this for example 00:16:278 (8) - )

00:03:857 (1,2,3) - this was ok on normal, but if you have strong drum note on harder diffs you really want players to click it, not use slider end for it
00:10:419 (7) - random pause, there is a strong beat after this note
00:30:810 (2,3) - again red tick slider start issue all over the place (applies throughout whole map)
00:44:286 (1,2) - mapping speech with sudden shift to 1/4s, totally unrankable
00:44:872 (1) - 0,5 sv is too much

I'm finishing here, sorry to say but map is probably too low quality to get ranked in current state. Summing up my suggestions

-Don't use gridsnap on that gridsize, messes up your design and distance snap
-Learn how to make blankets and structured patterns, avoid objects overlapping with each other in inconsistent way
-Avoid weird sliders if you don't have feel for them yet, keep it simple.
-Learn how to emphasize strong notes in the rhythm (they should be clicked by player), 1/2 sliders starting on red ticks should be avoided in general, they fit specific rhythms which aren't present here.
-Take a look at some recent ranked maps in that difficulty range and see solutions people use