IRC Mod16:20 J1NX1337: well it was fun
16:21 J1NX1337: though there's a few things I don't like about it
16:21 J1NX1337: one of those would be your positioning
16:21 FCL: we can discuss them
16:22 J1NX1337: 02:18:277 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) -
16:22 J1NX1337: the kind of flow you have going here is very 90°-ish
16:23 J1NX1337: in most cases I see way too many sliders and stuff pointed in either directly left, right, up or down
16:24 J1NX1337: also I think 02:40:079 (1,2,3,4) - these parts should have larger spacing
16:24 J1NX1337: like way larger
16:24 J1NX1337: I mean, quarter beat sliders are essentially circles that you just gotta hold down a little bit longer
16:26 FCL: okay
16:26 FCL: I remapped my weird part
16:26 J1NX1337: 03:13:568 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - also I know you were trying to be subtle here like the song would tell you to be
16:26 J1NX1337: but you could still make it far more exciting
16:26 J1NX1337: to paly
16:26 J1NX1337: play*
16:27 FCL: Here I give time to rest
16:27 FCL: It's fine for me
16:28 J1NX1337: it's too much time lol
16:28 J1NX1337: it becomes boring after a while
16:29 J1NX1337: your flow also breaks in certain points
16:29 FCL: Do not know well, this style perfectly matches the music
16:29 J1NX1337: stuff like this is kinda weird 01:10:603 (6,1) - dunno where you were going with it
16:29 J1NX1337: I think you could make this more interesting as well 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) -
16:30 J1NX1337: I mean that's just left, then down, with relatively small spacing
16:30 J1NX1337: these are also pretty awkward 01:21:591 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
16:31 J1NX1337: you should make this whole part harder with way more spacing
16:31 FCL: okay, i will change
16:31 J1NX1337: because you know, it's all that easy stuff and then suddenly a big stream 01:27:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
16:32 J1NX1337: you need to make your map feel more alive
16:32 J1NX1337: which is also what I'd expect from your GD
16:33 J1NX1337: more directions, exploring the whole of the playfield
16:34 J1NX1337: not stuck up box flow
16:36 FCL: Thanks for help, I'll try to fix it
16:36 J1NX1337: no problem
17:12 FCL: i make small update, you can watch in the right direction I move or not
17:13 FCL: i changed this part 02:19:149
17:13 FCL: this 03:13:568
17:14 FCL: and this 01:19:149
17:16 J1NX1337: I don't see the change at 03:13
17:17 J1NX1337: 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is much better
17:18 J1NX1337: you could create a star pattern with it, I think that would be cool
17:18 FCL: oh, this part sorry
17:18 FCL: 03:21:940
17:19 J1NX1337: so basically if you put the (5) where the (4) is and then put the (4) around x172 y48
17:19 FCL: yea, i will try
17:20 J1NX1337: also be sure to center the (5) between (2) and (3) since the (4) at the moment should be moved a bit to the right
17:21 J1NX1337: you can check and make sure the distance is the same by switching places with the circles and looking at the Prev and Next on the top right
17:22 J1NX1337: 01:21:591 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
17:22 J1NX1337: I think what you should do here is to use symmetry, since that's what the song tells me
17:22 J1NX1337: and you do use the same pattern, but the positioning is kinda random
17:23 J1NX1337: also I'd rather make the flow in those patterns diagonal than straight left / straight down
17:24 J1NX1337: so what I'd do is to select 01:21:591 (1,2,3) - and then press Ctrl+Shift+R
17:25 J1NX1337: then rotate by like, -40° clockwise
17:26 J1NX1337: then remove 01:22:986 (1,2,3) -
17:26 J1NX1337: and copy and paste 01:21:591 (1,2,3) - to 01:22:986
17:26 J1NX1337: then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J
17:27 FCL: yea I thought about it just
17:27 FCL: good idea
17:27 J1NX1337: hmm, actually I think it should rotate more, since other wise the gap between 01:22:463 (3) - and 01:22:986 (1) - is too short
17:27 J1NX1337: otherwise*
17:28 J1NX1337: rotate less*
17:29 J1NX1337: okay go with -20 instead of -40
17:29 J1NX1337: that looks cool
17:29 FCL: okay
17:29 J1NX1337: and drag them so that the (3) in 01:21:591 (1,2,3) - is right in the center
17:29 J1NX1337: lower center that is
17:30 J1NX1337: so it's horizontally centered
17:31 FCL: done
17:31 J1NX1337: and then do the same for 01:22:986 (1,2,3) - so that it stacks up with 01:24:382 (4) -
17:32 J1NX1337: or if you'd rather not have it stack, you could select 01:24:382 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - and just flip it with Ctrl+J
17:32 J1NX1337: then there would be a cool jump between 01:23:858 (3,4) -
17:33 J1NX1337: (and then adjust 01:29:440 (1,2) - accordingly)
17:33 J1NX1337: etc.
17:34 J1NX1337: this stuff might feel really small and insignificant but it actually contributes a lot to your map's fun factor
18:12 J1NX1337: a few more things
18:12 J1NX1337: 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - might wanna perfect the star pattern, otherwise someone's gonna complain about it in a mod lol
18:13 J1NX1337: and switch places between (4) and (5)
18:14 FCL: then will change the distance
18:14 FCL: it's okay?
18:14 J1NX1337: sure
18:14 J1NX1337: it'll be more fun
18:14 FCL: okay
18:15 J1NX1337: 01:19:149 (1,5) - also as you can see, (1) is higher than (5)
18:15 J1NX1337: you should put them on the same level, that's what I mean by perfecting the star pattern
18:15 J1NX1337: and then move 01:20:544 (4) - more to the right so it's centered between (2) and (3)
18:16 J1NX1337: hmm actually never mind, I might be looking at it wrong, I think it's in the center
18:17 J1NX1337: ah no, it needs to be one more grid space to the right
18:17 J1NX1337: so just move it the smallest amount to the right lol
18:18 J1NX1337: 01:21:591 (1,2,3) - this is alright, though I think it looks cooler if you flip it (Ctrl J)
18:20 FCL: okay
18:20 FCL: changed
18:24 J1NX1337: some other stuff
18:24 J1NX1337: 03:40:079 (5,6) -
18:24 J1NX1337: these are very unpredictable
18:24 J1NX1337: double reverses are rarely used in quarter beats
18:25 J1NX1337: for that reason
18:28 J1NX1337: so I'd advise changing them to single reverses or something else
18:29 J1NX1337: 03:21:940 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - this is a personal opinion but I'm not really fond of the flow pattern you do here
18:30 J1NX1337: since it kinda just runs around circles
18:31 J1NX1337: could be more interesting
18:31 J1NX1337: consider remapping it at some point maybe
18:33 FCL: I think so too