20:49 Sync: maybe replace 00:30:222 (11,12,13,14,15) - with a 1/3 slider?
20:52 Katsuri: yeah sounds right
20:52 Katsuri: 00:33:857 (1,2) - what about increasing the space between the slider and these notes?
20:53 Sync: I had no problem reading that part but spacing it out could be beneficial
20:54 Sync: so yeah I would if you had a good idea
20:55 Katsuri: that's the kind of map I have fun playing
20:55 Sync: 00:52:766 (5,6) - this part is kind of messed up, especially (6). I know she kind of sounds out her "ssss" before the red tick but she's actually singing on that note right there (on the red tick)
20:55 Katsuri: but don't know if other people will be able to read it
20:55 Sync: I would have a 1/1 sliderwhere (5) is then have a 1/2 slider starting at 00:53:311 (6)
20:56 Sync: you could make it kind of jumpy/jerky too because of your slow slider velocity
20:56 Sync: I love slow SV
20:57 Sync: http://puu.sh/hORVB/0dc8ec2ca8.jpg like this
21:00 Katsuri: ok
21:00 Katsuri: so I did that
21:00 Katsuri: then i just http://puu.sh/hOS5K/35f3279940.jpg ?
21:02 Sync: yeah, I'd add another note on the white tick before the break personally. it's a really sudden break but it's kind of cool imo
21:03 Katsuri: also, 01:39:857 (1,1) - ?
21:03 Sync: it's kind of weird
21:04 Sync: I think a 1/3 slider would be more fun than the sudden spinner
21:05 Sync: making a 1/3 repeating slider or something here 01:40:038 (7) -
21:05 Sync: splitting it so that it is two 1/3 sliders with 1 repeat each would make it very playable
21:06 Katsuri: yeah
21:06 Katsuri: i just wonder if the 1/3wouldn't come too sudden
21:06 Katsuri: but i'm gonna do this
21:07 Sync: yeah that's true
21:20 Katsuri: ok
21:20 Katsuri: thanks sync!
21:21 Sync: have fun
21:21 Katsuri: post on the map's thread to get your kudos
21:21 Katsuri: have anything i can do for you in return?

23:44 Kyshiro: well to start off i dislike the way you made 1/2 objects 100% overlap
23:45 Kyshiro: makes it unnecessarily hard to read
23:45 Kyshiro: also, you're skipping so many beats
23:45 Kyshiro: even ignoring rhythms
23:46 Katsuri: 00:11:495 (3,4) -
23:46 Kyshiro: 00:18:586 (12) - this 1/3 already starts at 00:18:586 (12) - for example
23:46 Katsuri: this overlap, for example?
23:46 Kyshiro: the way the circle is stacked on the slider start for example yeah
23:46 Kyshiro: just up the stack leniency
23:46 Kyshiro: and let osu do the stacking for you
23:48 Kyshiro: my suggestion, dont use as much spacing as you are using right now, and follow the rhythm more closely
23:49 Katsuri: at the beggining i didn't want to use 1/3 rhythms
23:50 Kyshiro: well, you either use the 1/3 rhythms or you dont
23:50 Kyshiro: dont just map half of it, thats awkward to play
23:51 Katsuri: ok, i'm gonna pay more attention with the rhythm, give the beats one more long look
23:51 Kyshiro: and less spacing
23:51 Kyshiro: cause it feels way overdone