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Champion - No Heaven

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Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 8 juillet 2010 at 13:01:01

Artist: Champion
Title: No Heaven
Source: Borderlands
BPM: 120
Filesize: 3727kb
Play Time: 01:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,45 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Hard (4,72 stars, 516 notes)
  3. Normal (4,07 stars, 151 notes)
Download: Champion - No Heaven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map.

01/07/2010

- Add Slanox mod
- Add Inozuma mod

05/07/2010

- Add Midget mod

07/07/2010

- Add preview point...
- Add Impossiblexu mod
- Add Banvi mod
- Add Drafura mod

08/07/2010

- Add Roflninja mod
Last edited by Mitten_old , edited 63 times in total.
sexy-commando
142 posts
Joined April 2010
sexy-commando
yeahhhhh, je te mets une fucking star pour ta fucking map, parceque je le vaut bien ! sexy Loréal pour men ! 8-)
Inozuma
596 posts
Joined June 2008
Inozuma
As I said, I found the rhythm interesting for a first map.
It'll surely need lots of work from now on~

So, cheering star~

EDIT: IRC mod
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Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
yo Mitten,

[General]

- Place un " preview point " à toutes tes diffs.
Si tu sais pas , tu vas dans l'onglet Timing => Set current position as Preview Point.

[ Hard ]

- 00:06:500(6) : 1 grid up ?
- 00:17:750(x) : Creer un slider ( End at 00:18:000 ) and new combo.
- 00:18:250(x) : Add circle ?
- 00:18:500(1) : Remove new combo.
- 01:09:000(1) : End at 01:10:000.
- 01:10:125(1) : Start at 01:10:250 & End at 01:11:250.
- 02:06:500(4) : 1 grid down ?
- 02:28:000(2) : Remove new combo.
- 02:29:875(3) : Move a note at 02:29:750.
- 02:30:500(x) : Add note here ?
- 02:40:625(1) : Delete this note.
- 02:40:875(2) : Move a note at 02:40:750.
- 02:41:750(x) : Add note here ?
- 02:55:000(3) : Remove clap, add finish (sound better).
- 02:59:750(x) : Add note here? and new combo.
- 03:00:000(1) : Remove new combo.
- 03:04:000(1) : Add finish here.
- 03:07:750(x) : Add note here ?
- 03:15:000(1) : Add finish here.
- 03:23:750(x) : Add note here ? and new combo.

[Normal]

This is okay ( for me ).

[Easy]

- Réduit le Circle size de 1 tick.

- 00:29:000(5) : 1 grip up ?
- 00:30:000(1) : Spacing.
- 00:31:000(2) : 1 grip up ?
- 00:32:000(3) : 1 grip up ?
- 00:32:500(4) : Spacing.
- 00:33:000(5) : Spacing.


Okay that's it
Good Luck,

Star ~
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Make sure you have preivew point at all difficulties, on same position.
~Easy~
  1. 00:18:000 (5) - 1 grid right.
  2. 00:20:000 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:22:500 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 01:01:000 (1) - 1 grid left
~Normal~
  1. 01:11:250 (1) - Remove new combo.
  2. 01:18:500 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:500 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up.
  4. 01:22:250 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:23:750 (1) - ^
  6. 01:26:000 (1) - ^
~Hard~
  1. 00:13:500 (1) - Remove new combo.
  2. 00:17:500 (8) - New combo.
  3. 00:59:750 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 01:10:500 (1) - Remove this spinner.
  5. 01:56:500 (1) - Unrankable slider. Re-shape it. Or show the direction of slider by SB.
  6. 01:58:500 (4) - ^
  7. 02:04:000 (4) - ^
  8. 02:09:000 (4) - ^
  9. 02:56:000 (1) - Unrankable. Hidden reverse arrow. Make it clearly visible.
Not bad. But you must work on it.
Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
Thanks for your help.
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi!
My suggestions:

[Easy]

  • HP - 1
    00:59:000(3):Align with 2
    01:08:000(5):New combo
[Normal]

  • HP & OD - 1
    01:00:500(1):Remove new combo
[Hard]

  • 00:18:500(3):Finish
    00:40:500(3):Finish
    00:57:000(2):Whistle at the beginning of this slider
    01:28:500(3):Finish
    01:55:500:Add a circle
    02:31:500(8,9):Distance,too close
    02:48:500-End : Kiai Time?
    03:25:125(3):Remove Finish
Good map!!

~STAR~
Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
Thanks !
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello :D
General
resize BG 1024*768 or 800*600
Open file & delete .osb file.
Easy
00:19:000 (1) 1 grid right(grid lv3)
00:32:000 (3,4,5) 1 grid left
Normal
00:25:500 (1) remove new combo
00:42:500 (1) ^
00:46:500 (1) ^
00:51:500 (1) ^
00:54:000 (1) ^
01:20:500 (1) ^
01:23:750 (1) ^
Hard
00:08:000 (1) remove new combo
00:14:500 (5) new combo
00:23:000 (1) remove new combo
00:28:750 (1) ^
01:02:750 (5) 1 grid left & 1 grid up
01:27:375 (1) remove new combo
01:37:000 (5,9) oh , you use 2 more than hitsounds in one note. (whistle & clap) Everyone usually hate this because this is noisy. So you should remove whistle or clap.
01:38:750 (2) 1 grid down?
01:55:125 (1) remove new combo
02:08:000 (1,1) ^
02:15:375 (5) 1 grid up
02:45:125 (6) 1 grid right?
02:47:000 (1) start 02:46:750 (red line)?
03:10:000 (1,2,3) 1 grid right
03:24:250 add timing point of kiai time off.

Thismap is good for your 1st map.
star~ ;)
Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
Thanks for the mod~
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Tasteless. All the difficulties have the same slider speed, and to add to that, have just the default speed, telling me you haven't put much thought into it at all. Easy does not follow any perceptable pattern nor rhythm in the music. Normal is very similar, with notes on 1/2 where there is nothing to back them up, and missing from places where they would fit. Hard is equally baffling, with 1/4 streams in places where they really do not fit the music. As it is now, I won't mod it. Please, the next time you map a song, ask yourself; are you mapping the song, or just making a map?
Drafura
osu! Alumni
2,621 posts
Joined April 2010
Drafura
Here we go for a little mod.

Suggestions
You should fix it

Hmm i'm not a specialist in combos so if I am in contradiction with some mods don't take attention. Remember blues are suggestions.

[normal]
00:14:500 (2) - Try to set the direction of the final of your slider to the next object. Some skins don't use the ball as sliderball, and it's a bit ugly when it's not ball form for this element of skin.

I show you here a screenshot to understand bettre what i mean :
SPOILER
In the screenshot it seems you gonna go for the 4 before the 3 if you follow the mouvement of my sliderball.

00:14:500 (2) - Same here
00:18:500 (3,1) - Spacing error
00:14:000 (5) - Add combo
00:14:250 (1) - Remove combo
00:19:500 (4) - remove combo when spacing fixed
00:22:000 (1) - Remove combo
00:43:750 (1) - Remove combo
00:44:500 (7) - Add combo
00:45:500 (1) - Remove combo
01:01:000 (1) - Remove combo
01:01:500 (6) - Add combo
01:02:500 (1) - remove combo
01:23:750 (5,6) - Align with slider exit then don't forget to fix spacing with the next objects
01:27:500 - Add circle ?
01:27:750 - ^
01:28:000 - ^
01:28:250 - ^
01:28:500 - ^
01:29:000 - to 01:29:500 - Add slider

Those last 6 suggestions are imo a good way to finish your diff using the break we heard.

[Hard]
Decrease in song setup->Adavanced->Stack leniency by 1 so white ticks will no more stack you can see the difference here : 02:34:000 (1,3) -

However good work.
Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
Thanks for modding
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,

[easy]
fine for me~

[normal]
also fine for me
00:11:500 (5) - maybe stack with (3)?
01:11:250 (6) - new combo?

[hard]
also fine for me

nice map ;)
Mitten_old
32 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Mitten_old
Thanks for the mod : )
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