Kobory(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4 - Hana Hana x Mekurumek · forum

Setz

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-10T20:35:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 30, 2015 at 3:19:02 PM

Artist: Kobory(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4
Title: Hana Hana x Mekurumeku
Source: Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags: 甘城ブリリアントパーク Character song A_Mystery kakeru kobori 甘ブリ A Mystery amaburi
BPM: 135
Filesize: 4015kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:

A Mystery's Hard (2.99 stars, 274 notes)
Earth Fairy (3.76 stars, 365 notes)
Normal (1.69 stars, 148 notes)

Download: Kobory(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4 - Hana Hana x Mekurumeku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Akariiin~! ...... err wrong show
..... Koboriiin~!?

Earth Fairy by me

Hard by A Mystery

Normal by me
thanks to Ringating for the background

Last edited by Setz 2015-06-06T20:55:17+00:00, edited 57 times in total.

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FIRSTTTT

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A Mystery 2015-05-12T21:25:04+00:00

Fuck you setsuna you ruined my life

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[ Setsuna ] 2015-05-13T02:34:03+00:00

A Mystery wrote:
Fuck you setsuna you ruined my life

thats inappropriate fourm conduct

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A Mystery 2015-05-13T11:01:28+00:00

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A Mystery 2015-05-17T03:09:31+00:00

Spammerino threaderino for setzerino who doesn't wanterino differino in rarerino

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hana Hana x Mekurumeku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63487
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hana Hana x Mekurumeku
TitleUnicode:花花×メクルメク
Artist:Kobori(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4
ArtistUnicode:コボリー(三上枝織) from BRILLIANT4
Creator:Setz
Version:A Mystery's Hard
Source:Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags:甘城ブリリアントパーク
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-17T03:14:21+00:00

ty sir.

we are in business now.

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2015-05-18T05:54:53+00:00

*shoots star*

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-18T09:20:06+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
*shoots star*

ty bby <3

tewbs

42 posts

Joined August 2013

tewbs 2015-05-18T22:48:47+00:00

my body is ready for the dt pp

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-05-19T22:17:10+00:00

Greeting Setz. NM from my queue.

General

Disable countdown and Letterbox.

Insane

Here are some suggestions. Your flow is solid but some pattern looks not that awesome.

00:06:375 (2,3) - 255,259 for 2, and 169,185 for 3. The current pattern looks crowded.
00:15:487 (3) - Curve too much for me. It looks not fine.
00:17:709 (8) - Recommend you replace the slider with 2 circles. Would be interesting.
00:24:820 (7) - 00:10:153 (6) - Same rhythm suggestion as below.
00:28:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This random jump looks............. Ok. I tried to move some of your stuffs. (5 is stacked on the tail of 1) Even if you don't like it, I still highly recommend you remap this part.
SPOILER
00:31:931 (5,6) - Try ctrl+g
00:46:153 (5,6) - Suggest ctrl+g
01:07:931 (1) - 370,222 for a better space with 2 and 3.
00:55:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try this:
SPOILER
01:35:931 (5,6) - Current one is fine, but imo ctrl+g this can make better sence with 1-4.
imo there are soooo much forth-and-back flow. Consider remapping some of them.
00:17:709 (8) - Remove Normal addition on the head and add it on the tail.
00:25:264 (1) - Finish on the head
00:39:487 (1) - ^
00:50:153 (1) - ^
01:08:375 (2) - Remove Normal addition
01:10:153 (2) - clap
01:17:487 (3) - Normal addition clap on the head

Hard

00:10:598 (7) - This direction would be better, due to the distance.
SPOILER
01:20:375 (1,3) - This overlap looks not that neat. Consider move it away from slider.
seems like you directly copy Setz's hitsound. Then the hitsound check for Insane would work for your diff as well.
Solid diff with massive curve flow. (curve flow is fine for me somehow)

I'll skip Normal cuz it's time to sleep. zzz...

Good luck~

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-20T01:25:24+00:00

Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:
Greeting Setz. NM from my queue.

General
Disable countdown and Letterbox. done

Insane
Here are some suggestions. Your flow is solid but some pattern looks not that awesome.
00:06:375 (2,3) - 255,259 for 2, and 169,185 for 3. The current pattern looks crowded. uhh , i am not sure if this was a mistake on your part, the 2 objects you linked and the locations you suggested dont make sense, specially for 2, this would make for a nearly full screen jump which I really dont want here.
00:15:487 (3) - Curve too much for me. It looks not fine. reduced the curve a little
00:17:709 (8) - Recommend you replace the slider with 2 circles. Would be interesting.
00:24:820 (7) - 00:10:153 (6) - Same rhythm suggestion as below. for these 2, I actually would use 2 circles in all of my maps normally, but I decided to try many new things with this one, this being one of those things, I will keep this in mind if its brought up again, but for now I am going to let ti stay.
00:28:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This random jump looks............. Ok. I tried to move some of your stuffs. (5 is stacked on the tail of 1) Even if you don't like it, I still highly recommend you remap this part.
SPOILER
hmm, I will see what I can do, the jumps are to place emphasis on the vocals so i want to keep them, but i see what you mean that it can look a little messy.
00:31:931 (5,6) - Try ctrl+g
00:46:153 (5,6) - Suggest ctrl+g ooh I really don't like this flow, sorry, it plays really uncomfortable to me
01:07:931 (1) - 370,222 for a better space with 2 and 3. ok, done
00:55:931 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try this:
SPOILER
01:35:931 (5,6) - Current one is fine, but imo ctrl+g this can make better sence with 1-4.
imo there are soooo much forth-and-back flow. Consider remapping some of them. I personally like how this plays, specially with AR8. I mapped this with no mod play in mind, even though the majority of play will be with DT. I think alot of your suggestions just come down to different mapping styles
00:17:709 (8) - Remove Normal addition on the head and add it on the tail. fixed
00:25:264 (1) - Finish on the head
00:39:487 (1) - ^
00:50:153 (1) - ^ I actually don't hear cymbal crash in the music for these, or a sound strong enough to warrant a finish, I think whistle is more fitting.
01:08:375 (2) - Remove Normal addition I tried this, but the sound in the music is so strong here, that it just feels too empty without it, so i am going to keep it here
01:10:153 (2) - clap added
01:17:487 (3) - Normal addition clap on the head added

Good luck~

thank you for the mod! I think that our mapping styles are just polar opposites or something >.> I tried to provide reasoning to why I didn't make some of the changes, but I will reconsider the jump part that you provided, see if I can come up with a better pattern

Changed the background to a slightly better looking one.

Gabie

32 posts

Joined January 2014

Gabie 2015-05-20T04:09:56+00:00

hi hi, from my queue

General changes:

SPOILER

01:00:375 (4,6,1,3,5) - These volume changes feel unnecessary to me, I'd just not do them at all. However, if you are looking for some kind of percussion effect at that moment, maybe just add different hitsounds instead of messing with the volume!

Insane:

SPOILER

I'd change the OD value to 7 or 7,5, seeing as though this is a fairly low difficulty insane map and would generally be played by people starting to adventure themselves with Insane diffs.

01:00:375 This stream has a very weird shape to it. Consider making it a single curve or maybe two, the current curve+straight line feels off

01:11:042 (8) - This slider could be rotated clockwise and repositioned to fit the flow and direction of the small stream before it better. Then, of course, you'd have to change the 01:11:709 (2) to avoid overlapping. Suggestion (note how I also brought the 7 up a tiny bit):

The rest of the map feels amazingly good to play, well done

A Mystery's Hard:

SPOILER

Flawless IMO.

Normal:

SPOILER

I'd consider changing the AR to 5, since AR4 makes it feel a lot like an Easy diff map. Out of all recent maps I have, around 10% have Normal difficulties with AR4. Still, your call. Not an essential change!
Again, another flawless difficulty IMO.

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-05-20T12:09:02+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
Greeting Setz. NM from my queue.

Hard
00:10:598 (7) - This direction would be better, due to the distance. - Flows better anyway, fixed
SPOILER
01:20:375 (1,3) - This overlap looks not that neat. Consider move it away from slider. - LOL setz warned me about this. I like these kind of overlaps
seems like you directly copy Setz's hitsound. Then the hitsound check for Insane would work for your diff as well
Solid diff with massive curve flow. (curve flow is fine for me somehow) - didn't have much choice, but that's how it turned out this time.

I'll skip Normal cuz it's time to sleep. zzz...

Good luck~

Thanks for modding!

nonkjfeqnkj

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Setz

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Setz 2015-05-20T22:03:57+00:00

GabrielRyuChan

GabrielRyuChan wrote:
hi hi, from my queue

General changes:
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01:00:375 (4,6,1,3,5) - These volume changes feel unnecessary to me, I'd just not do them at all. However, if you are looking for some kind of percussion effect at that moment, maybe just add different hitsounds instead of messing with the volume! volume change is is for the stream.

Insane:
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I'd change the OD value to 7 or 7,5, seeing as though this is a fairly low difficulty insane map and would generally be played by people starting to adventure themselves with Insane diffs. yeah I will probably lower the OD to 7.5, but I need to wait for more opinions

01:00:375 This stream has a very weird shape to it. Consider making it a single curve or maybe two, the current curve+straight line feels off this shape is more interesting, curves are kind of boring to play

01:11:042 (8) - This slider could be rotated clockwise and repositioned to fit the flow and direction of the small stream before it better. Then, of course, you'd have to change the 01:11:709 (2) to avoid overlapping. Suggestion (note how I also brought the 7 up a tiny bit):

same as above, did it because I think its more interesting to play.

The rest of the map feels amazingly good to play, well done

Normal:
SPOILER
I'd consider changing the AR to 5, since AR4 makes it feel a lot like an Easy diff map. Out of all recent maps I have, around 10% have Normal difficulties with AR4. Still, your call. Not an essential change! will consider this, I understand your point, I am just being cautious because this will be the lowest diff of the set.
Again, another flawless difficulty IMO.

thanks for modding!

-Ldan-

41 posts

Joined November 2014

-Ldan- 2015-05-20T23:18:13+00:00

Normal

Perfecto

Hard GD

Tip Section

00:23:264 (1) - Try going with the flow like

And I'm not quite sure if Qualification of maps allows the change of the Snap Divisor, should check that.

Insane

Someone should really boop your nose for how good this one is! *boop* x3

Sorry for the EXTREMELY short mod, it's just really good!

Good Luck

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-05-20T23:58:29+00:00

hi

[normal]

00:17:264 (4) - i think if you change this to something like you did on 00:24:375 (4,5) - or this. So the transition to vocals is smoother and stuff
00:29:709 (2) - 00:43:931 (2) - 01:12:375 (2) - vocals dont end on the blue tick on these case and sound weird, others do fine i guess. So changing the rhythm to something like mention before would prob work better.
01:06:375 (3,4) - 01:20:598 (3,4) - 01:24:598 (4,5) - these patterns feel like mapping nothing in concrete, they have a weird mix.. I'd rather use this pattern 00:27:264 (3,4,5) - i guess
01:31:487 (6,7) - i'd personally use a 1/1 slider here, so the tick pass over vocals at 01:31:709 - and the pattern doesnt sound empty at all
01:11:487 (1) - it sounds weird cuz it's the only stanza/downbeat/aaaaa dunno the name/thing where you put a 1/2 reverse, but similar spots don't. I'd just change it to 1/1 for constancy mostly, k.

[mystery]

00:00:376 (1) - im almost sure that you can extend this to 00:03:487 - cuz it just needs to be 1 beat away for the next note i believe
00:14:598 (1) - try thismaybe? You change distance on similar spots, like 00:07:487 (1) -
00:35:487 (4,3) - minor but, you could stack these >w< looks cool, and also it's somewhat visible on gameplay as well ya
00:46:598 (5) - nc
01:11:042 (4,5,1,2) - i'd rather use the same distance between these notes, cuz there's no much sense to lower the spacing on a strong beat like (1) is.
01:18:598 (1) - move this more away? like 1.6x or something, so distance is kinda constant with similars rhythms. same here 01:39:931 (1) -

[insane]

00:25:709 (2,3) - ctrl g ? or something so the movement towards 00:26:153 (4) - isn't too plain><
00:31:931 (5) - add whistle too? for that bg shining sound thing
00:33:264 (3,1) - partial overlaps are ugly to see :w; wouldn't it be not overlap at all?
01:03:709 (4) - missing normal clap?
01:08:375 (2) - are u sure about normal clap instead of auto? Sound kinda anticlimatic here imo ><
01:29:709 (3) - clap on tail. here too 01:32:375 (8) -
01:37:931 (1) - 01:42:820 (4) - whistles? like you did on similar parts :3

setz is a mystery

Culedesu

50 posts

Joined August 2014

Culedesu 2015-05-20T23:58:59+00:00

WILD NON REQUESTED MOD APPEARED

Normal

01:35:264 (4) - move this a bit down, like the first "slider-hits" on the map
01:42:375 (4) - ^^
Also, please change circle size to 3, so it can be more easy for beginners

A Mystery's Hard

01:35:264 (3) - fix this slider till both parts of it look the same

Insane

00:15:931 (4,5,6) - move it like this

00:53:042 (4) - move it a bit down so it can fit with the slider

01:10:931 (7) - remove this

01:10:598 - after removing 01:10:931 (7) do something like this

Hope your map gets ranked. It's pretty cool

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-21T01:16:02+00:00

Milan

Milan- wrote:
hi

[normal]
00:17:264 (4) - i think if you change this to something like you did on 00:24:375 (4,5) - or this. So the transition to vocals is smoother and stuff good point, i didn't do this exactly, but instead I did what I did at the end of the map
00:29:709 (2) - 00:43:931 (2) - 01:12:375 (2) - vocals dont end on the blue tick on these case and sound weird, others do fine i guess. So changing the rhythm to something like mention before would prob work better. this part isnt following vocals though, 00:28:820 (1) - this sldier follows the music, and so I decided to keep that consistency for the rest of the combo
01:06:375 (3,4) - 01:20:598 (3,4) - 01:24:598 (4,5) - these patterns feel like mapping nothing in concrete, they have a weird mix.. I'd rather use this pattern 00:27:264 (3,4,5) - i guess these map the background music, well at least I hear this rhythm..... will let it stay for now, but will keep this in mind if brought up again.
01:31:487 (6,7) - i'd personally use a 1/1 slider here, so the tick pass over vocals at 01:31:709 - and the pattern doesnt sound empty at all makes sense, done
01:11:487 (1) - it sounds weird cuz it's the only stanza/downbeat/aaaaa dunno the name/thing where you put a 1/2 reverse, but similar spots don't. I'd just change it to 1/1 for constancy mostly, k. I did this mostly because I was stuck on the edge of the screen, and I ddint like what the patterns looked like, this shouldn't really be a big deal
[insane]
00:25:709 (2,3) - ctrl g ? or something so the movement towards 00:26:153 (4) - isn't too plain>< yeah I see what you mean, but ctrl g makes the jump too large, its hard to do anything else here because of the position of the previous slider being on the edge of the screen, i will try to figure something out
00:31:931 (5) - add whistle too? for that bg shining sound thing
00:33:264 (3,1) - partial overlaps are ugly to see :w; wouldn't it be not overlap at all?
01:03:709 (4) - missing normal clap?
01:08:375 (2) - are u sure about normal clap instead of auto? Sound kinda anticlimatic here imo ><
01:29:709 (3) - clap on tail. here too 01:32:375 (8) -
01:37:931 (1) - 01:42:820 (4) - whistles? like you did on similar parts :3 Fixed all of the above, thank you, very useful
setz is a mystery

awesome mod, very useful. thank you very much sir

Last edited by Setz 2015-05-21T01:35:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-21T01:26:29+00:00

Culedesu

[quote="Culedesu"]WILD NON REQUESTED MOD APPEARED

[box=Normal]01:35:264 (4) - move this a bit down, like the first "slider-hits" on the map
01:42:375 (4) - ^^ done for both
Also, please change circle size to 3, so it can be more easy for beginners Will consider. maps look really crowded with normal rhythms but with CS3.

[box=Insane]00:15:931 (4,5,6) - move it like this

the auto stacking doesn't let me do what I want here, I want this stream to be exactly like the previous one, but it messes up the final note because of auto stacking.

00:53:042 (4) - move it a bit down so it can fit with the slider ok

01:10:931 (7) - remove this why? I hear very loud sound on this beat actually

01:10:598 - after removing 01:10:931 (7) do something like this

thanks for modding!

zj0924

309 posts

Joined November 2014

zj0924 2015-05-21T04:34:16+00:00

Hi!From my queue...Amagi?Haha~Of course,I love this song and nice mapping

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]

Awesome mapping!Just consider keeping consistency on sound effect

[Normal]

00:03:487 (1) - consider removing this useless green line?
00:16:598 (3) -
00:25:264 (1) - also curve a bit for better flow
00:31:709 (5) - consider ctrl+j for better flow of 00:31:264 (4,5) -
00:32:375 (1) - is a downbeat so you might need a hard flow to emphasize this.ctrl+j is the most convenient way to solve it
00:28:820 (1) - I don't know whether it's intentional but adding normal clap on the first white long tick is a good choice,since you did here why not elsewhere？
00:35:931 (1) - normal clap?
00:37:931 (3) - ^
00:41:932 (4) - normal clap on tail?you did it on00:31:709 (5) -
00:43:043 (1) - missing clap？
00:48:598 (3) - The snare sound is kinda important imo.I know you are worrying about polarity so you didn't use slider here but I think it can improved by big angle flow
01:01:709 (2) - better flow?
01:03:709 (5) - Normal clap and clap on reverse point?
01:06:375 (3) - normal clap?
01:07:042 (4) - this reverse slider is confusing for me.Because It seems that you follow instrument and vocal by using this slider but It plays fine,so I suggest adding whistle on each point of the slider to let player know what they are hitting...
01:07:931 (1) - I know electronic kick is louder than snare butI'd rather add clap(snare)here cuz 01:07:042 (4,2) - are both snare sound if using electronic kick,it'll be kinda weird for me
01:09:931 (3) - clap?
01:12:375 (2) - ctrl+h?flow between 01:12:375 (2,3) - will be better imo or rotate-20° 283 183 that flow is more accurate
01:15:931 (3) - normal clap on arrow
01:21:264 (4) - normal clap?I think the sound is similar as the one on red tick
01:30:153 (3) - I'm pretty sure you miss clap here
01:31:487 (6) - normal clap on tail is more suitbale imo
01:34:820 (3) - normal clap?
01:35:709 (5) - whistle on tail? tone is same as 01:36:375 (1) -
01:38:375 (3) - slidertick snare?
01:42:820 (5) - whistle clap on arrow

[AM's Hard]

00:03:487 (1) - consider removing this useless green line?
00:11:931 (2,3,1) - flow is kinda awkward for me...consider make an acute angle flow？
00:20:375 (2) - 88 216 more accurate flow？
00:22:598 (3,4) - I‘d suggest put it here to fill the blank between 00:21:487 (5,1) - in order to enhance the entirety
00:46:598 (1) - NC
00:56:709 (4) - This is unnecessary and I think it's overmapped or you can try this？
00:59:931 (3,4) - I'd recommend using slider here for fitting the vocal
01:03:931 (4) - try keeping the triplet distance between 01:03:264 (3,1) - same.Try this?
01:09:487 (5,1) - This is kinda confusing imo because You suddenly follow vocal so I suggest replace 01:09:264 (4,5) - with slider for better transition
01:16:375 (6,1) - I feel kinda far mainly because you didn't blanket 01:15:042 (1,4) - also adjust 01:16:598 (7) - the slider's anchor,It can move smoother imo
01:20:375 (1) - I suggest use red anchor here,01:20:820 (2,3) - these are straight flow so if you use 01:20:375 (1) - curve slider here It may leaves a winding impression and be kinda awkward to play straight flow（sorry for my bad expression but I hope you can understand me）
01:29:042 (1) - add whistle for vocal？
01:30:153 (4) - whistle
01:43:042 (4) - clap on head and whistle on tail

[Insane]

00:19:264 (5,6,7) - suggest stacking them current flow is awkward to play
00:25:709 (2,3,4) - current flow lack impression I suggest try sth like this？
00:37:487 (5) - rotate 12° then blanket?
01:03:709 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I feel kinda awkward when playing this.01:03:709 (4,5) - suddenly break and this 01:04:042 (6,7,8) -so I'd suggest stack them then it can emphasize 01:04:375 (1) - too.
01:13:709 (2) - 291 200?
01:15:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC for this rhythmic beat
01:18:153 (6,7,8) - This plays awkward too stack them
01:43:042 (5) - whistle?
01:44:375 (3) - ^
01:47:042 (1,2,3) - curve right a bit for better flow or I think it's kinda close
Nice Flow!

That's all I can do for you.Really nice mapset you gimme
I'll leave my star here and this deserves for ranking.
Good Luck~

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-21T20:48:18+00:00

SPOILER

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!From my queue...Amagi?Haha~Of course,I love this song and nice mapping

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
Awesome mapping!Just consider keeping consistency on sound effect

[Normal]
00:03:487 (1) - consider removing this useless green line? there is no green line here ,and the one before is for 70% volume
00:16:598 (3) -
prefer all the sliders looking the same for this combo
00:25:264 (1) - also curve a bit for better flow
curved it a little
00:31:709 (5) - consider ctrl+j for better flow of 00:31:264 (4,5) -
00:32:375 (1) - is a downbeat so you might need a hard flow to emphasize this.ctrl+j is the most convenient way to solve it this is good, done
00:28:820 (1) - I don't know whether it's intentional but adding normal clap on the first white long tick is a good choice,since you did here why not elsewhere？ its intentional, I only did it here because I could hear it in the music, while in the other places I can't
00:35:931 (1) - normal clap?
00:37:931 (3) - ^ same explanation as above for these 2
00:41:932 (4) - normal clap on tail?you did it on00:31:709 (5) - added whistle instead, since I did it for the similar part of the song before
00:43:043 (1) - missing clap？ added
00:48:598 (3) - The snare sound is kinda important imo.I know you are worrying about polarity so you didn't use slider here but I think it can improved by big angle flow
will consider this, because as you said, I am worried about polarity here mainly, and I also skipped this beat at 00:52:375 -
01:01:709 (2) - better flow?
ok, done
01:03:709 (5) - Normal clap and clap on reverse point? added
01:06:375 (3) - normal clap? added it to the tail
01:07:042 (4) - this reverse slider is confusing for me.Because It seems that you follow instrument and vocal by using this slider but It plays fine,so I suggest adding whistle on each point of the slider to let player know what they are hitting... ok
01:07:931 (1) - I know electronic kick is louder than snare butI'd rather add clap(snare)here cuz 01:07:042 (4,2) - are both snare sound if using electronic kick,it'll be kinda weird for me hmm, i personally like how this is right now, if its brought up again I will change it though
01:09:931 (3) - clap? added
01:12:375 (2) - ctrl+h?flow between 01:12:375 (2,3) - will be better imo or rotate-20° 283 183 that flow is more accurate did ctrl +h instead
01:15:931 (3) - normal clap on arrow added
01:21:264 (4) - normal clap?I think the sound is similar as the one on red tick added whistles instead as you previously suggested when this rhythm appeared
01:30:153 (3) - I'm pretty sure you miss clap here added
01:31:487 (6) - normal clap on tail is more suitbale imo i agree
01:34:820 (3) - normal clap? I dont think it fits here
01:35:709 (5) - whistle on tail? tone is same as 01:36:375 (1) - added
01:38:375 (3) - slidertick snare? fixed
01:42:820 (5) - whistle clap on arrow
[Insane]
00:19:264 (5,6,7) - suggest stacking them current flow is awkward to play I personally like how this plays
00:25:709 (2,3,4) - current flow lack impression I suggest try sth like this？
Didn't do exactly this, but tried something different here
00:37:487 (5) - rotate 12° then blanket? fixed blanket instead, I didn't like the flow after the rotation
01:03:709 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I feel kinda awkward when playing this.01:03:709 (4,5) - suddenly break and this 01:04:042 (6,7,8) -so I'd suggest stack them then it can emphasize 01:04:375 (1) - too. hmm I tried this, but I don't really like it, i think current jump fits and leads well into the kiai, but if this is brought up again i will see what I can do
01:13:709 (2) - 291 200? did something similar
01:15:042 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC for this rhythmic beat ok
01:18:153 (6,7,8) - This plays awkward too stack them same reason as before
01:43:042 (5) - whistle? added
01:44:375 (3) - ^ added
01:47:042 (1,2,3) - curve right a bit for better flow or I think it's kinda close
this image did not load for me when I looked at the mod, so not really sure what you mean
Nice Flow!
That's all I can do for you.Really nice mapset you gimme
I'll leave my star here and this deserves for ranking.
Good Luck~

thank you for the awesome mod and star <3

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-05-21T22:22:41+00:00

@-Ldan- I changed the slider, I agree with it having a better flow
@Culedesu I like them like this as well

Milan- wrote:
hi

[mystery]
I changed everything except for the spinner thing, I don't want the slider to be visible through the spinner for an entire beat.
Very nice mod

setz is a mystery - You found out shit!
Inb4 ban for multi acc

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!From my queue...Amagi?Haha~Of course,I love this song and nice mapping

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[AM's Hard]
00:03:487 (1) - consider removing this useless green line? - It's not useless the volume changes
00:11:931 (2,3,1) - flow is kinda awkward for me...consider make an acute angle flow？- This is on purpose, I usually do this to emphasize a downbeat, since circular flow everywhere would be boring
00:20:375 (2) - 88 216 more accurate flow？ - Moved it myself but close to your position
00:22:598 (3,4) - I‘d suggest put it here to fill the blank between 00:21:487 (5,1) - in order to enhance the entirety - Alright makes sense
00:46:598 (1) - NC - Fixed in previous mod
00:56:709 (4) - This is unnecessary and I think it's overmapped or you can try this？- It is not overmapped. Using your example I would have to ignore a strong bass kick, which feels wrong. I might change the triple to a 1/4 slider instead though.
00:59:931 (3,4) - I'd recommend using slider here for fitting the vocal - again, bass kick
01:03:931 (4) - try keeping the triplet distance between 01:03:264 (3,1) - same.Try this? - Meh I think the triple is fine
01:09:487 (5,1) - This is kinda confusing imo because You suddenly follow vocal so I suggest replace 01:09:264 (4,5) - with slider for better transition - Then I would make a slider-end on a strong beat, which feels wrong again. I'll change it to something else if someone else says it's confusing as well
01:16:375 (6,1) - I feel kinda far mainly because you didn't blanket 01:15:042 (1,4) - also adjust 01:16:598 (7) - the slider's anchor,It can move smoother imo - Uhm I'm not sure if I understand you completely. but I can't curve the slider more because it's a blanket
01:20:375 (1) - I suggest use red anchor here,01:20:820 (2,3) - these are straight flow so if you use 01:20:375 (1) - curve slider here It may leaves a winding impression and be kinda awkward to play straight flow（sorry for my bad expression but I hope you can understand me）- Actually I don't D:
01:29:042 (1) - add whistle for vocal？
01:30:153 (4) - whistle
01:43:042 (4) - clap on head and whistle on tail
My hitsounds are the same as set's so it should be fixed if he changed that as well

Good Luck~

Sorry for not changing a lot of things, but most of them are not really necessary to me, or kinda disagree with my style
Thanks for modding

vcxv

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hana Hana x Mekurumeku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63487
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Hana Hana x Mekurumeku
TitleUnicode:花花×メクルメク
Artist:Kobori(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4
ArtistUnicode:コボリー(三上枝織) from BRILLIANT4
Creator:Setz
Version:A Mystery's Hard
Source:Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags:甘城ブリリアントパーク Character song A_Mystery
BeatmapID:699569
BeatmapSetID:311347

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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Yogurtt

Beatmap Nominator

321 posts

Joined May 2013

Yogurtt 2015-05-23T05:27:48+00:00

Insane:

01:48:598 (1) - maybe make it so that it's symmetrical

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-23T05:36:17+00:00

LOL

well at least you tried sir. I dont think I can give KDs for this though.

you should try to get one of your maps ranked!

tewbs

42 posts

Joined August 2013

tewbs 2015-05-23T06:33:05+00:00

Pretty catchy song so i i tired my hands at modding it

Normal

I am not experienced in normal diffs so the only thing i could find was that maybe you should lower the tick clap volume to about 50%

A Mystery's Hard

00:16:820 (2) - I suggest making that slider go upward slightly to the right
00:29:042 (2) - I suggest making this into something that looks like this http://puu.sh/hXgTI.jpg It feels better imo.
really couldnt spot anything else. Good diff

Insane

00:15:931 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Just a little something here but, this part is a bit confusing. I suggest that you put (1) and (3) a bit on the right side of (6). I made an quick example of what i mean http://puu.sh/hXfFS.jpg , altough this is just personal preference. I tought it was less confusing and played better with dt that way.
00:19:264 (5,6,7) - I suggest making this triple a bit curved for better flow into the next slider.
01:07:042 (4,5,6) - I understand why you made that like that, but imo this plays a bit weird( i suck at mini sliders it might be why ) hehe. Again this is just suggestion but to me, something like this plays better http://puu.sh/hXgdd.jpg . It makes the spacing between the slider and triple a little bit shorter while still maintaining the flow.
01:21:264 (4,5,6) - ^same with here^
01:26:820 (6,7,8) - I would move these upward a little bit closer to (3) for better flow into the next slider 01:27:264 (1) -
01:45:487 (1,3) - same thing here as the 15.931 seconds suggestion.
01:47:042 (1,2,3,1) - Those notes feels a bit lackluster imo.

Good Luck with the map! I hope something was useful in there

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-23T07:04:39+00:00

tewbs wrote:
Pretty catchy song so i i tired my hands at modding it

Normal
I am not experienced in normal diffs so the only thing i could find was that maybe you should lower the tick clap volume to about 50% yeah good point, done.

Insane
00:15:931 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Just a little something here but, this part is a bit confusing. I suggest that you put (1) and (3) a bit on the right side of (6). I made an quick example of what i mean http://puu.sh/hXfFS.jpg , altough this is just personal preference. I tought it was less confusing and played better with dt that way. I think this is fine, people say my maps are too easy to read anyway, I think this stack is not bad at all.
00:19:264 (5,6,7) - I suggest making this triple a bit curved for better flow into the next slider. adjust this some, I really hate how curved triples look though, so probably not gonna do that.
01:07:042 (4,5,6) - I understand why you made that like that, but imo this plays a bit weird( i suck at mini sliders it might be why ) hehe. Again this is just suggestion but to me, something like this plays better http://puu.sh/hXgdd.jpg . It makes the spacing between the slider and triple a little bit shorter while still maintaining the flow. lol, this plays fine, even to me and i suck >.> will keep it in mind if it comes up again, though.
01:21:264 (4,5,6) - ^same with here^
01:26:820 (6,7,8) - I would move these upward a little bit closer to (3) for better flow into the next slider 01:27:264 (1) - ok, done
01:45:487 (1,3) - same thing here as the 15.931 seconds suggestion.
01:47:042 (1,2,3,1) - Those notes feels a bit lackluster imo. yeah I know, I just don't know how to make them more exciting since there's a gap in the music, I am open to suggestions >.>

Good Luck with the map! I hope something was useful in there

thank you for the mod sir

@Nystery update your diff before the mod, or just disable the stupid countdown and wide screen support and letterbox yourself

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-05-23T12:35:41+00:00

tewbs wrote:
Pretty catchy song so i i tired my hands at modding it

A Mystery's Hard
00:16:820 (2) - I suggest making that slider go upward slightly to the right - That kinda ruins the pattern I wanted though
00:29:042 (2) - I suggest making this into something that looks like this http://puu.sh/hXgTI.jpg It feels better imo. - I agree (did something similar to the example but better flow)
really couldnt spot anything else. Good diff - Thanks!

Good Luck with the map! I hope something was useful in there

Thank you for the mod!

Setz pls

"omgosh I can't find any moar modz" *a few hours later 2 mods appear*

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Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-25T20:57:26+00:00

more metadata stuff after asking KSHR. just going to leave this here

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2015-05-27T01:39:05+00:00

Just to note. Source is wrong.

It should be "Yamagi Brilliant Park"

KD please.

You just activated my trap card!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-27T02:32:24+00:00

lanturn pls

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-05-28T09:20:12+00:00

After some internal discussion (talking to myself), we have decided this map should be qualified upon fixing the following issues:

[General]

We highly encourage you to remove the first inherited point from each difficulty, for it conflicts with the ranking criteria:

Ranking Criteria wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

We Question Why You Choose To Capitalize The "N" In Normal-hitclap4.wav. This Is Painful
Ringating has obtained a higher quality background. Please use it!

[Hard]

There are instances where the spacing could and should be more consistent. The music does not change, so neither should the spacing. Here’s few examples of the said issue:

00:24:820 (7,1) -
00:39:264 (5,1) -
00:42:598 (4,1) -
00:49:709 (5,1) -
01:05:042 (2,3) - vs 01:19:264 (2,3) -
etc

We presume you are emphasizing each downbeat, therefore having higher spacing on each downbeat is essential to create a sense of consistent spacing! One of my previous disqualifications further proves this: p/4169396

[]

Please keep in mind issues mentioned above are just examples. These should be applied throughout the difficulties as to avoid further dumb posts

For further assistance, please contact me. Good luck!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2015-05-28T10:23:19+00:00

pishifat wins the osu!net

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-05-28T12:15:48+00:00

pishifat wrote:
Ringating has obtained a higher quality background. Please use it!

despite saying I probably couldn't do much for this image, I got the ep # of the bg screencap from quoted guy and just recapped the frame. adjusted the colors a bit and attempted some slight cleaning.

image

about as good as it's gonna get, methinks

no kds

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-05-28T16:49:43+00:00

pishifat wrote:
After some internal discussion (talking to myself), we have decided this map should be qualified upon fixing the following issues:

[Hard]

There are instances where the spacing could and should be more consistent. The music does not change, so neither should the spacing. Here’s few examples of the said issue:
00:24:820 (7,1) -
00:39:264 (5,1) -
00:42:598 (4,1) -
00:49:709 (5,1) -
01:05:042 (2,3) - vs 01:19:264 (2,3) -
etc
We presume you are emphasizing each downbeat, therefore having higher spacing on each downbeat is essential to create a sense of consistent spacing! One of my previous disqualifications further proves this: p/4169396

In my opinion that would be a ridiculous reason for a DQ on itself, but I get your point. Your mods always make me think you are nitpicky af, but then I realize you're actually right and change it anyway. I'll increase the spacing on the suggested places and more, but exactly measuring the spacing I'm using for such a "jump" is a little bit too much for me (if that's what you wanted me to do as well)

[]

Please keep in mind issues mentioned above are just examples. These should be applied throughout the difficulties as to avoid further dumb posts

For further assistance, please contact me. Good luck!

Why does this mod look like a QAT's DQ

hgf

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hana Hana x Mekurumeku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63487
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hana Hana x Mekurumeku
TitleUnicode:花花×メクルメク
Artist:Kobory(Mikami Shiori)from BRILLIANT4
ArtistUnicode:コボリー(三上枝織) from BRILLIANT4
Creator:Setz
Version:A Mystery's Hard
Source:Amagi Brilliant Park
Tags:甘城ブリリアントパーク Character song A_Mystery kakeru kobori
BeatmapID:699569
BeatmapSetID:311347

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"ABG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Setz

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-28T18:02:07+00:00

fixed everything (yes, even lower cased the hitsound name) and added the new BG, thank you so much pishi and ringating!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-05-28T22:45:09+00:00

Setz

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Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2015-05-28T22:45:36+00:00

thank you sir

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-05-28T22:52:33+00:00

woah look at that bubble

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

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Lanturn 2015-05-29T16:09:19+00:00

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[General]
It isn't much of a problem but maybe swap colors 3 and 4? Just so the green-like colors alternate.

Add lead-in. 1500-2000 or exactly 1624.

Would adding "A Mystery" to the tags make a difference? I realize it's searchable and everything, but I'd recommend adding it just in-case something bugs with the underscore tag you already have. Won't hurt anyways.

Add "amaburi" to the tags. It's the nickname to the show. "甘ブリ" as well.

Because Normal is your easiest diff, (and yes, I've done CS4 normals, so I really shouldn't be saying this) how about using CS3? it honestly does look better (the 1/2 overlaps are easier to recognize), but I'll leave that option up to you. Either works really.

[Normal]
Nothing here. Just a nice Normal.

00:54:598 (2) - lower this a little please? It doesn't necessarily touch the HP bar, but you could make it blanket with 00:56:375 (4) - for example.

[Hard]
You really seem to love this pattern XD

00:42:598 (4) - Try stacking this on the head of 00:41:042 (1) - and blanket it around 00:41:931 (3) - s tail. http://puu.sh/i4PaX.jpg | It adds a little more flow, and also (imo) improves the aesthetics by making the gaps of 00:42:598 (4,1,2) - feel like they aren't the same pattern.
01:00:153 (4,1) - This could be improved on aesthetically as well. Try moving (3,4) to the left a little more. http://puu.sh/i4Ppw.jpg Rework some blankets and such as well. The picture keeps your current 1.4 DS and 1.8 jumps.
01:15:709 (2,3,4,5,6) - move all of these to (obviously this will be where the (2) will be) x308 y48 | This is so 01:16:153 (4,5,6) - get's more of a blanket. After, slightly rework as needed for DS.
01:22:820 (2) - to be honest, I think even DS would be the best here. Try lowering the (1) slider's tail a little and move the (2) as needed to achieve this.

[Insane]
Some of the jumps feel a bit too big for me, but they should be fine (I hope)

00:16:042 (5) - There honestly is nothing playing here.. I highly recommend you delete this.. The 1/4 feels a bit forced as well. Same with 01:44:931 (5) - I guess.
00:25:931 (3) - x252 y292 | I think the gap to the next note is a bit much.
01:08:820 (4,1) - A little lazy on the aesthetics? ;_; I know you can do better. This actually overlaps during gameplay so... yeah... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3186173

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