[General]
◾Song Folder: Soft-hitwhistle is the same as drum-hitwhistle. You are better of making the samples use the drum additions. Look at the tab on the left, it says Sampleset and Additions. Whenever you apply a hitsound, which is the soft-hitwhistle, turn the Additions to Drum, and click on whistle. This way you don't need to add this certain hitsound
◾Song Setup: The AR jump is quite large, AR 3 - 4 - 8, It's better if it's 3 - 5 - 7.5/8 so the gap will be less harsh. Also, the other gaps are also a little harsh, it's better if you highten the stats on Normal a little so the gap is smaller, like CS 3.5, AR 5, OD 4, HP 4
◾Timing: Seems fine
◾Hitsounds: Refer to above
◾AImod:Seems fine
[Easy]
00:01:703 (2) - The flow here can be improved if you change the slider's shape a little. This way the movement will feel better
00:04:164 (2) - I don't really like this slider, it's a little too curvy. Also, its flow can be improved. Try something like this
00:07:857 (1) - Slider is to linear. I personally find linear sliders kinda boring. Try making it feel more special by adding a few curves to it
00:22:626 (1,2,3) - A linear flow is, like said before, is a little boring. Move up (2) to 208:296 for example, this way it'll also approach the next slider better
00:26:318 (3,1) - I'm no fan of this. I think making this a blanket would result in a much nicer constellation. try making it this way
00:28:626 (2) - You're much better of making this 1 shorter slider with a reverse, or a slider with a circle, because it follows music, but it uses sliderticks to follow the music. It isn't bad, but it can be made better, by changing it into any of the two things I said
00:31:241 (3,4,1) - A linear flow can be improved to make it better, move (4) more to the right, it also gives a better approach ti the next slider. Move (4) to 88:244 to achieve this
00:44:780 (1,2) - This doesn't really play that nice. Move (2) more up to 208:252 for example and then change the slider for matching distance. for the finishing touch, try to blanket (3) with it as well
00:59:549 (1,2,3) - Personal preference; I don't like such sliders, cause they both have the same direction, If you ctrl HJG (1) and move it to 152:200, to me, it'll feel much nicer. It makes a much smoother approach to the next slider. No need to change, it's just my preference
01:04:472 (1,2) - ^^ move (2) to 72:212 for the nice effect
01:11:857 (1,2) - Rhtyhms as this are regularly deemed hard to easies. cause it doesn't follow the beat, but the vocals, which are off-beat. I recommend you to make it a 3/2 slider with a reverse
01:13:087 - I hear a cymbal crash in the music, which is why it's recommended to map this note as well
Both of these together will result in the following rhythm
01:14:010 (1) - This is a so-called upbeat slider. A slider which starts on a 2nd or 4th beat. Sliders like these usually end on really impactful sounds, this one does as well, a very strong cymbal crash. It feels really weird having to let go on such a strong sound in stead of clicking it.
01:17:703 (3) - The same applies for this note as well
I'd recommend the following rhythm in this part
01:21:703 (1) - The flow here isn't bad, but it can be improved, by making the slider curve a little, try making it like this
01:24:164 (1) - Minor; There should be a circle here. Why? There is a strong impactful sound, and a spinner's start doesn''t have any sound. If you start the spinner 1/4 later, with the same end time, you'll get the spinner and the emphasis for that note. The timing'll be like this
[Nacchan's Normal]
00:01:087 (2,3) - I strongly recommend you to change the rhythm here. The rhythm feels really awkward to me, because (2) end on a very strong sound; It's usually very weird if you have sliders which end on strong sounds, but start on weak ones. try to use the following rhythm
00:06:626 (4,5) - The flow here can be improved, if you follow (4)'s shape, you come nowhere close to (5). Move (5) to such a place where the circular movement feels better. I'd recommend someting like 228:172. Then move (1) so it'll have proper distance. You need to change a few other sliders as well, but in the end, it'll all get better
00:18:626 (3,4) - The rhythm here can be improved, as (4) starts on no sound, try to make it like this
00:22:626 (1,2,3) - This doesn't follow music nicely. Yes, it sounds good, but the emphasis on the strong sounds is gone, as it where the sliders end. Something like this'll be better
00:34:010 (4) - This slider is a so called upbeatslider. It starts on a 2nd or 4th beat. Sliders like this usually feel weird, this is no exception. Try to have the following rhythm
00:39:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels a little boring me. Try to make it like this, it'll feel less boring
00:44:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ (Try to make it different from the previous one to make it feel more special)
00:56:472 (5,1) - The flow here can be improved. Try to make it as in the screenshot, it'll feel better
00:58:626 (4) - Here again, is such an upbeat slider. Try to make the rhythm like this, so the sldiers will feel better, also, 00:59:087 (5) - feels even more weird as it's an offbeat slider (slider which starts at a red tick)
01:17:703 - I think it's better to add a note here, for me, it feels weird otherwise, 1/1 notes aren't hard, so they do fit
01:19:241 (4) - The tone and such switch quite heaviliy; it's better to NC this note
01:24:164 (1) - Minor; There should be a circle here. Why? There is a strong impactful sound, and a spinner's start doesn''t have any sound. If you start the spinner 1/4 later, with the same end time, you'll get the spinner and the emphasis for that note. The timing'll be like this
[-Yuzuriha's Hard]
00:12:472 (4,5,1) - The stack+jump feels awkward to me, the distance between (5,1) is a little too high, you can move (5) to 264:8 to fix this (or something else in that way)
00:14:626 (3,1) - Perhaps you can blanket these as well, it'll make slider (1) feel even more special. Also, the blanket between (4,1) can be improved a little
00:29:241 (3,4,5) - I kinda dislike circles under a sliderend, they are kinda hard to see (especially since these are dark blue) and nigh impossible with hidden. Please space them a little, even if the distance is only 0.2, this way it'll be more visible
00:50:626 (4,1) - I think it'll be and look better if you blanket these 2
00:58:933 (3) - To make the stack better (as it's not completely stacked), move this to 132:324
01:13:703 (3,4) - Please give these the drum or normal additions, drum claps (or the custom normal claps) feel much better in streams then soft/normal claps (especially when you don't have custom ones) Your pick
01:24:164 (1) - Minor; There should be a circle here. Why? There is a strong impactful sound, and a spinner's start doesn''t have any sound. If you start the spinner 1/4 later, with the same end time, you'll get the spinner and the emphasis for that note. The timing'll be like this (taken from easy diff though)
This diff is soo incredibly good :3
I love it
Good luck!!