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Zweib
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说着说着就掏出了P总
Narcissu
終於做完了……慢的讓人以為是ED

需要摸的話隨時找我 ::>_<::
Topic Starter
Pururut

Narcissu wrote:

終於做完了……慢的讓人以為是ED

需要摸的話隨時找我 ::>_<::
会的会的

你不要准备期考吗,还是学霸躺过. 我已失业
Narcissu
是學渣已經掛,心無雜念……



  • [General]

  1. 建議消音slider …… 額,在其他圖裏面應該很容易找到文件
  2. 加上自定義顏色麼……試試用我的↓↓↓
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,128,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,255
    Combo3 : 255,255,128
    Combo4 : 128,128,255

    [Hitsound]
  3. 00:55:657 (5,6) - 因為soft-hitnormal 基本打空氣所以這些位置建議加上音效 ↓↓↓ ……直接當hitnormal 也可以
    http://puu.sh/ivAhA/11fb8e8edf.wav
    http://puu.sh/ivAiE/6c6cbda189.wav
  4. 02:11:799 - 02:12:940 (10) - 這些音色和默認的drum-finish 還有 drum-clap 很相似,可以考慮使用這兩個……
  5. 00:27:451 (7) - clap ? 我看00:30:059 (10) - 也有加

    00:41:636 (6) - 02:59:896 (4) - 02:52:070 - 03:05:114 (8) - ^
  6. 00:39:353 - 這裡比00:37:886 (7) - 要適合放finish……
  7. 00:44:244 - 這片安靜的部分也可以切底音為default drum-hitnormal 代替24clap
  8. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 建議加finish 或者clap……
  9. 01:08:375 - 這邊建議把clap換在01:08:538 - 01:08:864 - 01:09:190 - ,開頭finish……也是並沒有足夠的音效可用 LOL
  10. 01:30:059 (9) - finish
  11. 04:48:320 - finish應該在這

    [Knospe]
  12. 00:03:483 - 這個位置有人聲也有鋼琴,所以這邊的節奏建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  13. 00:43:918 (8,9) - 這裡紅線有鼓點所以建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  14. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 前面是1/4……這兩個是重音finish …… 都弄成1/2擺一個DS弧線裏面不太合適,建議前面換連打或者折返,後面放跳
  15. 00:54:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 相對這邊的人聲沒有鼓點支撐放跳梗有點無力
  16. 01:18:483 (7) - NC應該在這裡
  17. 01:53:049 (5) - NC應該在這裡……所以這個圈就應該從DS 裏面切出去了……建議的排版↓↓↓

  18. 02:07:559 (6) - 這個比前面的響的多所以建議用三連而不是折返
  19. 02:21:337 (2,3) - 這個比較少見……考慮直接疊三上面麼?
  20. 02:26:799 - 02:27:125 - 節奏明顯的地方還是按照音樂來吧……這兩個應該有點擊
  21. 03:23:157 - 這個1/3多出來了,到白線就停了……
  22. 05:06:418 - 結尾這裡兩個圈有感覺一點,第一個轉盤這裡結束→05:06:092 -
Topic Starter
Pururut

Narcissu wrote:

是學渣已經掛,心無雜念……



  • [General]

  1. 建議消音slider …… 額,在其他圖裏面應該很容易找到文件 可以
  2. 加上自定義顏色麼……試試用我的↓↓↓
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,128,255
    Combo2 : 128,255,255
    Combo3 : 255,255,128
    Combo4 : 128,128,255

    [Hitsound]
  3. 00:55:657 (5,6) - 因為soft-hitnormal 基本打空氣所以這些位置建議加上音效 ↓↓↓ ……直接當hitnormal 也可以 ...没有加,不过我都用了默认音效
    http://puu.sh/ivAhA/11fb8e8edf.wav
    http://puu.sh/ivAiE/6c6cbda189.wav
  4. 02:11:799 - 02:12:940 (10) - 這些音色和默認的drum-finish 還有 drum-clap 很相似,可以考慮使用這兩個…… 用了finish
  5. 00:27:451 (7) - clap ? 我看00:30:059 (10) - 也有加

    00:41:636 (6) - 02:59:896 (4) - 02:52:070 - 03:05:114 (8) - ^ 加了
  6. 00:39:353 - 這裡比00:37:886 (7) - 要適合放finish……
  7. 00:44:244 - 這片安靜的部分也可以切底音為default drum-hitnormal 代替24clap 没看懂 不过尝试了一下..
  8. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 建議加finish 或者clap……
  9. 01:08:375 - 這邊建議把clap換在01:08:538 - 01:08:864 - 01:09:190 - ,開頭finish……也是並沒有足夠的音效可用 LOL 其实我是懒得找音效...
  10. 01:30:059 (9) - finish ok
  11. 04:48:320 - finish應該在這 ok

    [Knospe]
  12. 00:03:483 - 這個位置有人聲也有鋼琴,所以這邊的節奏建議這樣 ↓↓↓ ...还是不改了..

  13. 00:43:918 (8,9) - 這裡紅線有鼓點所以建議這樣 ↓↓↓

  14. 00:53:701 (6,7) - 前面是1/4……這兩個是重音finish …… 都弄成1/2擺一個DS弧線裏面不太合適,建議前面換連打或者折返,後面放跳
  15. 00:54:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 相對這邊的人聲沒有鼓點支撐放跳梗有點無力 ^
  16. 01:18:483 (7) - NC應該在這裡 fixed
  17. 01:53:049 (5) - NC應該在這裡……所以這個圈就應該從DS 裏面切出去了……建議的排版↓↓↓

  18. 02:07:559 (6) - 這個比前面的響的多所以建議用三連而不是折返 改成两个3连了..
  19. 02:21:337 (2,3) - 這個比較少見……考慮直接疊三上面麼? 很常见吧...
  20. 02:26:799 - 02:27:125 - 節奏明顯的地方還是按照音樂來吧……這兩個應該有點擊
  21. 03:23:157 - 這個1/3多出來了,到白線就停了……
  22. 05:06:418 - 結尾這裡兩個圈有感覺一點,第一個轉盤這裡結束→05:06:092 -
Cherry Blossom
Hentai mapper ;w;
Frey
the most hentai mapper ever !

but I love it (*・∀・)/
yf_bmp
support
Wanna collab storyboard with Narcissu. Wish you can accept. :D
Topic Starter
Pururut

yf_bmp wrote:

support
Wanna collab storyboard with Narcissu. Wish you can accept. :D
sure,thank you for your help :3 干嘛说的这么正式
Zweib
屁总你这换过MP3了?没有的话offset-50 (约224)

00:04:137 (1,2) - 不好看,把(1)旋转12°然后移到56,204?
00:07:397 (3,4) - 不好看,可以把(3)的红点去掉然后(4)移到比(2)高的位置
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:13:104 (6,1,2) - 6跟1之间不跳而1跟2分开来是为什么
00:15:223 (4) - 可以NC
00:19:300 (3) - 可以NC
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:24:028 (3) - NC吧
00:25:006 (4) - 这个不NC
00:25:821 (10) - NC吧,你摆的这些图形,如果还是老实按长白线NC是没法看的,后面的NC觉得你可以尝试参考类似规律认真整曲重新加一遍,我就不指了
00:31:365 (7,8,1) - 三连歪了点
00:30:876 (4) - NC
00:28:919 (5) - NC
00:32:180 (4) - NC
00:32:506 (6) - NC
00:49:789 (1) - snap错
00:36:664 (7) - 其实这里有个音

01:13:593 (2) - 前面都是折角滑条,你这里也不应该用弧线的

后面还好了,我也懒了233
04:37:071 (2,3) - 这种用复制对称比较好

串摆的挺漂亮。主要就是NC问题
Vert
路过

00:07:773 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:21:306 - 这不放个东西么
00:28:969 (5,6) - 分别ctrl+g
01:15:273 (4) - 这个放折返不太舒服啊,换个滑条+单点?
01:37:937 (4) - 如果是我的话我会往远了放。。然后后面接个转盘
01:42:991 (4,5) - 前面那么远怎么突然这个这么近。。建议放远点比如包01:42:013 (1) - 的滑条尾
02:08:100 (1,2,3) - 前面00:49:839 (1,2,3) - sv是1.0x这里怎么慢了。。
02:27:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - 真是反人类
02:29:295 (2) - 换成单点+3/2滑条?
02:48:045 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个不包3么

od8 plz
顺便ar也可以高一点比如9.3
Topic Starter
Pururut

Zweib wrote:

屁总你这换过MP3了?没有的话offset-50 (约224) 好像换过.现在的offset应该是没问题的

00:04:137 (1,2) - 不好看,把(1)旋转12°然后移到56,204?
00:07:397 (3,4) - 不好看,可以把(3)的红点去掉然后(4)移到比(2)高的位置
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:13:104 (6,1,2) - 6跟1之间不跳而1跟2分开来是为什么 拉近了
00:15:223 (4) - 可以NC 可以的
00:19:300 (3) - 可以NC 可以的
00:22:234 (6) - NC
00:24:028 (3) - NC吧
00:25:006 (4) - 这个不NC
00:25:821 (10) - NC吧,你摆的这些图形,如果还是老实按长白线NC是没法看的,后面的NC觉得你可以尝试参考类似规律认真整曲重新加一遍,我就不指了 我日 我怕被说乱nc
00:31:365 (7,8,1) - 三连歪了点 jb歪了
00:30:876 (4) - NC ok
00:28:919 (5) - NC ok
00:32:180 (4) - NC ok
00:32:506 (6) - NC ok
00:49:789 (1) - snap错 加了两个note
00:36:664 (7) - 其实这里有个音keep

01:13:593 (2) - 前面都是折角滑条,你这里也不应该用弧线的

后面还好了,我也懒了233
04:37:071 (2,3) - 这种用复制对称比较好

串摆的挺漂亮。主要就是NC问题
感谢猪尾巴.

Euphoria wrote:

路过

00:07:773 (4) - Ctrl+G 我把4拉高了
00:21:306 - 这不放个东西么
00:28:969 (5,6) - 分别ctrl+g 可以
01:15:273 (4) - 这个放折返不太舒服啊,换个滑条+单点?还好吧
01:37:937 (4) - 如果是我的话我会往远了放。。然后后面接个转盘太短了不喜欢放转盘 感觉坑人
01:42:991 (4,5) - 前面那么远怎么突然这个这么近。。建议放远点比如包01:42:013 (1) - 的滑条尾
02:08:100 (1,2,3) - 前面00:49:839 (1,2,3) - sv是1.0x这里怎么慢了。。因为想让滑条短一点233
02:27:991 (2,3,4,5,6) - 真是反人类还好吧...
02:29:295 (2) - 换成单点+3/2滑条?和前面统一吧
02:48:045 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个不包3么

od8 plz 7.8
顺便ar也可以高一点比如9.3
感谢h穴妹
:cry:
Okoratu
cool
Topic Starter
Pururut

Okoratu wrote:

cool
Okorachan /hug
wmtokok
留名佔位 :D
-Nanaka-
hi Lovely Pururutchan :oops:
View lightly、Mods

red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Knospe

  1. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - not good flow here.On the opposite slope
  2. 00:07:447 (3,4) - Consistent with patterns,looks better imo
  3. 00:08:752 - 00:09:078 - Missing sample Drum sound here, ur adding00:06:795 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  4. 00:13:072 - 00:13:235 - add note here Hard read to rhythm
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - vol50% all points add whistle? fit sound for me
  6. 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use Normar-hitwhistle versus when you use soft-hitwhistle.Plese revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern.
  7. 00:19:513 (2,3) - make a jump plz. I think fit sound, for example...00:19:513 (2) - 152/42 00:19:676 (3) - 382/208
  8. 00:30:110 (5,1) - This is probably readable, but it feels like bad spacing for the sake of bad spacing. Should probably be changed.
  9. 00:33:208 (2) - Ctrl+C to 00:32:719 (2) -
  10. 00:36:795 - Vol-20%? Strange NFinish
  11. 00:36:469 (1,3) - swap NC
  12. 00:37:937 (9) - Soft Finish here
  13. 00:37:937 (9,1) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? also 00:37:937 - 1/1slider、00:38:100 (1) - Remove 00:38:263 - add note
  14. 00:41:197 - Missing finish
  15. 00:43:317 (6) - NC ur adding 00:44:621 -
  16. 00:47:230 - I think soft finish fit
  17. 00:52:040 - add note here,fit drum sound
  18. 00:52:773 (2) - sample normal 00:52:937 - Soft Finish 00:53:426 - normal
  19. 00:54:567 (3,4) - Swap hitsound, I would 00:54:404 (2) - Remove whistle 00:54:241 (1,3,5) - add
  20. 01:08:589 - 01:09:241 (8) - add soft finish
  21. 00:55:056 - 01:30:110 - same as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - no need Normal Finish, 00:55:056 - S 01:10:708 - N 01:05:491 - N 01:21:143 - S
    I can not know the difference
  22. 01:15:926 - Misshing Finish?
  23. 01:20:409 - add note? fit to piano
  24. 01:24:730 (4) - add Clap
  25. 01:25:545 (1) - add whistle 01:25:871 (5,7,8,9) - sample Normal 01:25:952 (6) - sample Drum?
  26. 01:27:013 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Very bad flow;; plz remake
  27. 01:31:578 - asame as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - , 01:37:937 (4) - soft finish here00:19:676 (3) -
  28. 01:39:404 - Missing Finish
  29. 01:54:078 - ^
  30. 01:55:056 - ^
  31. 01:58:806 (5,3) - ^
  32. 02:11:034 - sample Nprmal
  33. 02:11:197 - soft finish
  34. 02:11:605 - 02:11:768 - add note
  35. 02:11:850 - soft finish fit imo
  36. 02:26:850 - Soft finish
  37. 02:27:176 (4) - change to 2circle. 02:27:502 - 1/1slider?
  38. 02:27:502 - finish
  39. 02:42:583 - add note here
  40. 02:47:230 (1) - remove Clap add Finish
  41. 02:48:371 (8) - add soft finish
  42. 02:52:937 (3) - same as 00:30:110 (5,1) -
  43. 02:55:871 (5,6) - ^
  44. 03:41:197 (1) - missing whistle
  45. 03:45:110 - ^
  46. 03:56:687 (3,2) - ^
  47. 03:58:969 (1) - ^
  48. 03:59:703 (3,4) - remove whistle, Silent part here
  49. 04:00:273 - add
  50. 04:00:763 - ^
  51. 04:01:007 (4,5) - remove
  52. 04:02:067 (5) - add
  53. 04:05:491 - add
  54. 04:06:795 (1) - ^
  55. 04:12:502 (2) - more distance 269/336?
  56. 04:25:708 (1,2,3) - straight?
  57. 05:06:469 (1,2) - plz Light jump

good luck :)
mod time: 1.5hour
Vert
P总快飞啊,sp早就够了(
Topic Starter
Pururut

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi Lovely Pururutchan :oops:
View lightly、Mods

red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Knospe

  1. 00:06:795 (1,2,3) - not good flow here.On the opposite slope hmmm,maybe fine
  2. 00:07:447 (3,4) - Consistent with patterns,looks better imo ok
  3. 00:08:752 - 00:09:078 - Missing sample Drum sound here, ur adding00:06:795 (1,2,3,4,1) - fixed
  4. 00:13:072 - 00:13:235 - add note here Hard read to rhythm 00:13:072 added
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - vol50% all points add whistle? fit sound for me ok
  6. 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - In this section your hitsound use is very inconsistent. There seems to be no pattern as to where you use Normar-hitwhistle versus when you use soft-hitwhistle.Plese revise this to have more consistent hitsound pattern. ok change all normal-hitwhistle to soft
  7. 00:19:513 (2,3) - make a jump plz. I think fit sound, for example...00:19:513 (2) - 152/42 00:19:676 (3) - 382/208 nice
  8. 00:30:110 (5,1) - This is probably readable, but it feels like bad spacing for the sake of bad spacing. Should probably be changed. hmm ok i made some changed
  9. 00:33:208 (2) - Ctrl+C to 00:32:719 (2) - ?
  10. 00:36:795 - Vol-20%? Strange NFinish ok
  11. 00:36:469 (1,3) - swap NC ok
  12. 00:37:937 (9) - Soft Finish here ok
  13. 00:37:937 (9,1) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? also 00:37:937 - 1/1slider、00:38:100 (1) - Remove 00:38:263 - add note hmmm
  14. 00:41:197 - Missing finish added
  15. 00:43:317 (6) - NC ur adding 00:44:621 - added
  16. 00:47:230 - I think soft finish fit added
  17. 00:52:040 - add note here,fit drum sound maybe 00:52:203 ?
  18. 00:52:773 (2) - sample normal 00:52:937 - Soft Finish 00:53:426 - normal ok
  19. 00:54:567 (3,4) - Swap hitsound, I would 00:54:404 (2) - Remove whistle 00:54:241 (1,3,5) - add ok,1,3,5 now
  20. 01:08:589 - 01:09:241 (8) - add soft finish added
  21. 00:55:056 - 01:30:110 - same as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - no need Normal Finish, 00:55:056 - S 01:10:708 - N 01:05:491 - N 01:21:143 - S
    I can not know the difference[/color]
  22. 01:15:926 - Misshing Finish? yea
  23. 01:20:409 - add note? fit to piano noo i think is fine
  24. 01:24:730 (4) - add Clap added
  25. 01:25:545 (1) - add whistle 01:25:871 (5,7,8,9) - sample Normal 01:25:952 (6) - sample Drum? awesome
  26. 01:27:013 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Very bad flow;; plz remake ok
  27. 01:31:578 - asame as 00:13:317 - 00:19:676 - , 01:37:937 (4) - soft finish here00:19:676 (3) - ok
  28. 01:39:404 - Missing Finish added
  29. 01:54:078 - ^ ^
  30. 01:55:056 - ^ ^
  31. 01:58:806 (5,3) - ^ ^
  32. 02:11:034 - sample Nprmal added
  33. 02:11:197 - soft finish added
  34. 02:11:605 - 02:11:768 - add note added
  35. 02:11:850 - soft finish fit imo ok
  36. 02:26:850 - Soft finish ok
  37. 02:27:176 (4) - change to 2circle. 02:27:502 - 1/1slider? ok
  38. 02:27:502 - finish ok
  39. 02:42:583 - add note here ok
  40. 02:47:230 (1) - remove Clap add Finish ok
  41. 02:48:371 (8) - add soft finish ok
  42. 02:52:937 (3) - same as 00:30:110 (5,1) - ok
  43. 02:55:871 (5,6) - ^ ^
  44. 03:41:197 (1) - missing whistle added
  45. 03:45:110 - ^ ^
  46. 03:56:687 (3,2) - ^ ^
  47. 03:58:969 (1) - ^ ^
  48. 03:59:703 (3,4) - remove whistle, Silent part here removed
  49. 04:00:273 - add ok
  50. 04:00:763 - ^ ^
  51. 04:01:007 (4,5) - remove removed
  52. 04:02:067 (5) - add ok
  53. 04:05:491 - add ok
  54. 04:06:795 (1) - ^ ok
  55. 04:12:502 (2) - more distance 269/336? hmm ok
  56. 04:25:708 (1,2,3) - straight? yea for pander to Stack Leninency
  57. 05:06:469 (1,2) - plz Light jump ok


good luck :)
mod time: 1.5hour


thank you nanakasan :3
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